(Just tell me how my story is so far. Just saying....I don't know what the title should be....So I just made a temporary title)
(THIS IS A STORY THAT I AM WRITING! I WANT TO HAVE IT PUBLISHED, SO PLEASE DON'T CHANGE ANYTHING!!!)
"Lola! Come on!" I had to get out of there, but I just couldn't leave her behind. I stopped for a moment. I looked down to see blood was all over my paws. I started to pant. That's when I realized how long I was catching my breath for. I knew that I was far ahead from Ava and her abyss wolves, but I still had no time for resting. That's when I heard Lola. "RUN, DANIEL! PLEASE DON'T LET THEM CATCH YOU!"
"BUT WHAT ABOUT YOU, LOLA? I CAN'T JUST LEAVE YOU!"
"JUST RUN!" I listened to her, and was soon running again. I continued to run, until I passed the border line from the dark forest, to the howler village, home of the ground wolves. I climbed up the back of Howler Mountain and jumped onto a ledge. I could see Lola, struggling and trying to run, but she was too weak. There was blood all over her, so I'm assuming that some of Ava's wolves have attacked her. She looked behind her, to see Ava and the abyss wolves hot on her trail. Not paying attention to what's in front of her, she trips on a log and falls to the ground. Ava laughs. She howl, as all of the abyss wolves howl back and form a circle around Lola. I could JUST see Avas' mouth move. She grinned, happy about what she was about to do. She pounced on Lola, who screams in pain. Blood and fur fly everywhere. I tried not to make a sound, for they would know that I was close by. I felt a tear burn into my bloody fur, as I continued making my way up the mountain. I make it near the top of the mountain. I suddenly see a cave. I ran into it. I hear the path up the mountain crumble down....Gone. I knew I wouldn't be seeing Lola ever again...