hey guys so this is my two stories that are terrible and are set in the war, so sorry about that...
- Red / Flossy
I hear men screaming down the hill, the commander kept shouting out ‘ Fire men like we have no tomorrow! ‘ I sighed with my best mate at my side. He smiled, so I smiled back but before I knew it he was shot. As he fell to the ground I could see what the bullet caused him, the blood, I could smell it from where I was. “ Dan! “ I shouted out, I checked his pulse. It stopped.
Tears ran down from my cheeks, “ N-no… “ I stammered. I couldn’t think about anything now, the medic came. He saw my dried and wet tears and patted my back, ‘ sorry for your loss ‘ . I looked up without the Australians noticing and I see the man that shot Dan. My raven black hair followed the wind and a bit in front on my face, I wiped It away and aimed my gun at the man.
It could nearly destroy my hearing that gun-fires, I looked up again to see the man injured on the floor, one of the bullets aimed at his leg and the other one was at his heart Score! I thought in my head. I looked at Dan who’s now on the floor, dead. “How’s your little sister going to react or now? “ , I thought out loud ‘ Men fire! come on Men fire your guns! ‘ I heard the commander shout out loud in his leather megaphone. My best friend, gone, his brown hair was shining from the sun.
I saw a piece of paper that I decided to take from his lifeless body, It’s a letter I told myself, I oped the letter carefully and read it. I ran with my head down and took it to the commander “ this letter should be sent when our survivors come back home. “ I told him ‘ alright then Phil. “ he took the letter ‘ are you sure? ‘ He asked,
“ I’m sure “ I replied. He placed the letter in his pocket ‘ Now, Get back to firing your weapon! ‘ he shouted at me, I scurried to my place and saw that Dan wasn’t there anymore. They’ve taken him, I sighed and carried on with shooting.
( part one )
I was running for a while, with soldiers all in their brown beige uniform. I don’t know why he was gone. I searched far and wide to find him, I even asked soldiers where he was, they all had the same answer ‘ sorry kid… ‘ . I found the captain and asked him where he was, the captain looked at me with a saddened look and replied with “ sorry for your loss kid I really am. “. I stood there frozen in my bright red coat, I could feel the colour draining from my face as tears began to swell in my eyes “ what. “ I sad in a quiet voice.
That’s it, my brother is gone, Dan left me in this world by myself “ oh and he wanted to give you this letter. “ the captain replied with as he handed the envelope to me. I grabbed the envelope from him and said thanks and walked to our I mean my home. It was a small house with wrecked wood walls, no door just a beaten up curtain for the entrance and had wooded up windows so people don’t know him and I lived in. As I walked inside I went straight to my side of the home and let all the tears leave my eyes I didn’t control them I just let them slide down my face. After a few sobs I decided to open the letter.
Hello there, it’s me your brother Dan. I can’t write that much but, I made a best mate called Phil, he’s really nice and I told him all about you. He’s a raven haired male only a couple years older than me. Anyway Turkey will win this war I’ll bet you. Time to protect our land from the Australians I suppose. If I die tell mother and father at their graves that I’ll be coming back to see them.
Your only family member that loves you,
Daniel ( Dan )
I folded the letter carefully and placed my head in my hands with tears still streaming from my face…
“ Goodbye brother…”
( part two aka the final one )