(The grammar is bad going to check it later)
Stream kneeled by the fire; its flames licked at the wood and seemed to comfort her son. The boy was clutching her. Stream looked down at him, her eyes were rimmed with tears.
The boy had bright blue eyes speckled with golden dust. He blinked up at her,"where has Kite gone ,mummy?"
Stream smiled sadly,"she has flown away to find adventure and joy"
The boy tilted his head,"but she said if she left she would take us with us! Does she not love us anymore?"
Steam pulled him closer,"she loves us very much. She loved you the most,Moon."
Moon curled up and fell into a blissful sleep.
Stream whispered into his hair,"soon I'll tell you everything"
Moon's father stood at the doorway an unpleasant expression filled his his face. He turned and left muttering to himself as he walked.
This an intro to my story the end is near.. Please tell me if there are any spelling mistakes or other things.tell me what you think Thank you