what do you guys think of my story here
The heat surrounds her she runs but can't escape it she turns there is an opening she reaches and fire spurts from her hand and her way to get out sets on fire…
The ocean a beautiful place of cities and forests of coral that are full of life always changing shifting and flowing. full of beauty and danger. A danger that plans on taking the ocean from us
Mernia woke up shaking in a cold sweat to find no fire any where. Sighing she got out of bed and shuffled around her room to get ready. She pattered down the stairs to the wooden kitchen that was strangely black and smoke filled.
“Pop you there?” she called
“Yes i'm right here” a voice floated out of the smog
“Did you blow up the tea again” she said reaching out to her dad hugging him.
“Yeah i did” he stated ruffling her hair
She swatted him away straightening her already messy bun.
“Would you like me to make it?”
“Yes that would be better then me blowing up the kitchen” he proclaimed smiling
“mkay what type?”
“Umm you choose”
She reaches up and grabs her concoction she calls tea. It smells of honey lemon and lavender. The other tea kettle comes down with it.
“Thanks” she says turning to her dad as the air around him vibrates with an electromagnetic frequency as the kettle lands on the counter firmly
She turns on the stove and turns to the sink filling the kettle with water. She plops one of the bags in and puts the tea on the stove.
She turns to her dad “so how's it coming” she asks
“Umm i'm doing better then when i first found out” he replies
The kettle starts hissing. She turns to it moving the tea and turning the burner off .
“Would you like any”
“Sure i'll have small mug of it”
“Mkay is it okay if i go to the docks with Timei?””
“”sure be home for lunch unless you plan on bringing some with you Nia.”
“I'll bring some grilled cheese and this tea with me i'll see you tonight”
She said after pouring most of the tea into the thermos and grabbing the leftover sandwiches
“Oh yeah here” she said pouring the rest of the tea in his mug “and here” puts the last of the toast on a plate for him
“See you Nia”
The door slammed behind her. Cool air blasted on Nia’s face. She walked down the steps of her house. And got on her motorized bike and started her ride to the docks she sees Timei sitting on the dock looking out to the ocean
“Hi” she murmurs as Nia rides up behind her
“Hi” Nia replies as her bike comes to a stop she gets off and pulls the key out of the ignition and kicks down the kickstand
“So do you want to hike to highpoint rock”
“Oh yeah i forgot” she said wincing
“It's okay i'll wait down here and mady take a swim”
“Is Carm coming”
“Yeah probably in an hour or so”
“So i'm just gonna take the hike up and then jump”
“Okay see you in like ten or so minutes”
She starts on the trail the bird song swings through the trees a shadow flickers from between the trees
“Hello” Nia calls.
A scream echos “Carm you there” an antagonised scream answers
“They talk to me they say ‘don't be scared’ but what if they are like that dog” he whimpers.
Nia walks towards him and puts her hand on his shoulder
“Get away” he said slapping her hand “Oh it's you”
“Do you want to talk about it”
“The animals tell me to trust them but I can't believe them it started this morning”
She frowns he must have come of age but why talking to animals? Isn't he terrified of animals?