I'm writing a story and I need help! Feedback would be appreciated! Please say what you think of everything in the comments! Thanks! :)
It's about a girl. She was stuck in the snow and at the start, is having a nightmare. She has a brother, but I don't know what to call him either. She has nightmares that act as a curse. She sticks with her sister Nicola and her best friend Filli. Some strangers join them in the journey to find the source of her nightmares. She and her near-family must act together to find what is going on inside her head and why it's happening. I haven't written the end yet though and I'm going to add to the plot.
Give me suggestions for:
- Names of the strangers. There are three. One male and two female. Pearl is one.
- A name for the main character and her looks. (Nara)
- A name for the main character's brother.
I also need your opinion on the plot as well. The story is written in the main character's perspective.
Title: My Nightmares
Main character's name: Nara
Main character's looks: I dunno except she got magic ring
Main character's brother: MORE I DUNNO