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hello my fellow scratchers, sorry if you didn't wan the invite, if so, just ignore it plz. I had a friend of mine ask for writing tips and I thought, "You know what, okay." And so here I am. kakajkskskhsk\
lets a go!
You gotta make the words interesting! Replace boring, common words with better ones.
I smiled. I poured milk on Jayla's head. She looked angry. It was very messy. "I hate you Bobina!" said Jayla.
See? thats strait up boring. And what kind of a name is Bobina? like c'mon. Heres a better example;
While jade wasn't looking, I hauled up a gleaming bottle of thick milk, the glass shining in the afternoon light. I smirked as I undid the cap, Vengance would be mine.. As I tilted the bottle, Pearl white droplets splattered Jade's neatly combed golden hair. I tipped it with increasing speed, pouring out all of the creamy white milk. It ran through her Ruined locks of hair, Down her Porcilin white face and around her mouth as she screamed; "I hate you Kira!"
Make the characters interesting! Make sure they have an equal or close amount of flaws and strengths, So your character isn't boring, but isnt a gary/mary sue either.
Mia ~ female ~ Clumsy, a pushover, quiet shy ~ Short, Long brown hair. Hazel eyes ~ Likes no one ~ human
she is kinda boring, Doesnt have a strong personality.
Sparkleshine ~ female ~ Brave, Awesome, quiet, Nice ~ Rainbow hair, red eyes, demon horns, unicorn wings, cat tail ~ Likes no one, but all the guys love her ~ Half cat, neko, demon, angel, unicorn, werewolf, vampire Princess
And thats a mary sue for ya. Its better than boring, but no one will like her.
Willow ~ female ~ loyal, calm, Has trust issues, doesnt talk that much, but can be fun around friends ~ Dirty blonde hair, Blueish green eyes, rather skinny ~ likes her best friend ~ human
Be origanal! Stop using overused topics such as a person with cool powers, but no one knows, or "the chosen one" kinda thing. It gets boring after the 983393900th time!
Make sure the plotline is strong, And that your not doing drastic timeskips either
Dont skip any detail! describe the characters feelings, What they're doing, Whats going on around them, the noise in the room, The setting, Otherwise you cant really visulise whats going on and it gets seriously boring to read
No going OP, Thats a baseline rule for everyone. No one likes the god mode character
And make sure YOU have fun writing it! It's gonna suck if you force yourself to write something you dont want to, and people like it, But you still eternaly hate it
Im not a very good teacher, so sorry for my Cruddy tips