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- AestheticKitty24
- Scratcher
6 posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
Helloooo (Just making sure i don't get a strike. emx3ti vmlf3u;fwrmfxgo4th)
- Lightning_Bolt77
- Scratcher
500+ posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
ok… Helloooo (Just making sure i don't get a strike. emx3ti vmlf3u;fwrmfxgo4th)
- lightningspark6545
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
I will be using your colors for this, yellow and black
The Electric Shop Review #1First of all - your title. You seem to be using a fancy font as well as symbols. Great, as it helps your shop stand out in the Requests Forums among the many other shops! Now, to your front page: your shop isn't multiposted and only consists of 2 posts, and they are kind of messy. The second banner and the OC image is not necessary though. I can see some grammatical and spelling errors too. It also bothers me that some things are in quotes and some are not. Also, the “Lightning_Bolt77 wrote” part in the quotes is not necessary.. It would also be better if you could highlight some of the important words such as “Partners”, “FORMS”, etc. You should also try making your text bold, italic, underlined orFirst Look (5.5/10)centeredto make the text stand out. I see that you have a 3rd banner as well. It kind of separates the Leave Form from the other forms, and that disturbs me quite a bit. Your motto is “we will do your order at electric speeds”. It has a grammatical error, “electric speeds” maybe change it to: “we will do your order at the speed of electric” You do have some good things on the front page, such as a reviews section or awards section. You may want to improve on your front page.I cannot rate this section as your shop doesn't really have any original ideas besides the packages no offence . You should try and brainstorm more ideas such as official colors, special offers, benefits for partners, etc.Originality (N/A/10)You have quite a sustainable amount of staff. I do see some off-topic posts or spam such as (“hi”, “I'm bored”, and “500 POSTS AHHHH”), and none of your staff has any strikes, well done! Although, you may want to create some terms & conditions in the shop. I do see, however that you organised a shop meeting and nobody actually responded in the studio.Staff (6/10)You may want to tune up your BBCode skills. I've mentioned some of the flaws in the “First Look” section.Bulletin Board Code Formatting (6/10)The product was great! In fact, it was so good I may use it for a while (or a long time), although I had to deduct half a mark. You see - I stated that I wanted my favourite colors on it. Although, the employee did not ask what my favorite colors were and put yellow. Ask to be sure, don't always assume!Product Quality (9.5/10)My order was taken on the next day - and completed in about an hour. Well done!Speed (9/10)Even with good speed and product quality, the third factor to satisfy a customer is Customer Service. I was notified on my profile one day after the order was done - and I didn't get a link to the completed order. Maybe improve on that.Customer Service (6.5/10)
When done on the forums,When it probably should be: -snip Done!
-pfp here-
to get it right click and save image asHi there -username-, your order is now done! If you need any changes don't hesitate to ask and please leave a review if possible! Here it is:When done on profile:
-completed order-
To use it, right-click the image and click save image as. Then set it as your profile picture!I finished your test order at t.e.sTry to avoid acronyms - use the full shop name or it may cause confusion. In fact, I know another shop with the acronym T.E.S, the emerald shop.
It should be:Hi! I finished your order at The Electric Shop. Find it here: -insert link- Have a great day!Anyways, that's all for this section.You don't have a link directory, which I suppose is okay since you only have 2 posts for the shop info. It may be hard to find specific stuff like forms since you don't highlight some of the important text.Accessibility (6/10)You have A LOT of partners. Maybe try coming up with ideas to help each other?Partnerships (8/10)I've rated the quality of a few of your past orders. Keep it up with the AMAZING product quality.Other Order Quality (OOQ) (94/100)Final Marks: 65.9/90 - 73% - Good.I calculated this out of 90 since one section was N/A.
Take this as constructive criticism, but don't take it too seriously :)
Improve BBCode formatting, and correct the spelling and grammatical errors. Come up with original ideas Improve Customer Service Ask the customer when needed, don't just assume. Avoid Acronyms when notifying Come up with benefits for your partners Highlight some text Try to avoid spam/off-topic posts Get your employees active and productive in the shop.
please leave a review (with the form) at Lightning Studios 3.0 about how this review helped you :D
- Lightning_Bolt77
- Scratcher
500+ posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
-SNip-
no offense it didnt really help me at all i know im good at making stuff and i know my staff are active. and the off-topic posts idc about tbh and the front page idc about either thanks anyways
no offense it didnt really help me at all i know im good at making stuff and i know my staff are active. and the off-topic posts idc about tbh and the front page idc about either thanks anyways
- lightningspark6545
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
I see. Thanks for letting me know! -SNip-
no offense it didnt really help me at all i know im good at making stuff and i know my staff are active. and the off-topic posts idc about tbh and the front page idc about either thanks anyways
- Lightning_Bolt77
- Scratcher
500+ posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
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- 1Oaktree2
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
Username:scratchgaming2newacc (Pablo for oc name)Done
Hair and skin:medium light skin tone and black hair
Clothes:brown t shirt with short sleeves and on the t shirt it has a image of the scratch logo and green shorts
Other:none
Where would you like us to contact you:profile
- Lightning_Bolt77
- Scratcher
500+ posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
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- Lightning_Bolt77
- Scratcher
500+ posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
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- AestheticKitty24
- Scratcher
6 posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
Leave/Break Form
Username: @AestheticKitty24
How long you will be gone: maybe about the rest of the month?
Reason(you dont have to tell us if you dont want to): Not enough requests to keep me interested
Other: none
Username: @AestheticKitty24
How long you will be gone: maybe about the rest of the month?
Reason(you dont have to tell us if you dont want to): Not enough requests to keep me interested
Other: none
- 1Oaktree2
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
What you would like: Animated Profile Picture
Description: Autumn Version of my OC; in the background a (real life) image of an autumn forest. Something like this but with an LED type glow to it, and the red should be black, and the green, white. Over the top, please add animated autumn leaves
Due date: 19/09/2021
Where would you like us to contact you: Profile
Other: Thank you
Description: Autumn Version of my OC; in the background a (real life) image of an autumn forest. Something like this but with an LED type glow to it, and the red should be black, and the green, white. Over the top, please add animated autumn leaves
Due date: 19/09/2021
Where would you like us to contact you: Profile
Other: Thank you
- 1Oaktree2
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
Bump What you would like: Animated Profile Picture
Description: Autumn Version of my OC; in the background a (real life) image of an autumn forest. Something like this but with an LED type glow to it, and the red should be black, and the green, white. Over the top, please add animated autumn leaves
Due date: 19/09/2021
Where would you like us to contact you: Profile
Other: Thank you
- Lightning_Bolt77
- Scratcher
500+ posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
taken! not sure when it wil be done but it will be done before the due dateBump What you would like: Animated Profile Picture
Description: Autumn Version of my OC; in the background a (real life) image of an autumn forest. Something like this but with an LED type glow to it, and the red should be black, and the green, white. Over the top, please add animated autumn leaves
Due date: 19/09/2021
Where would you like us to contact you: Profile
Other: Thank you
- Lightning_Bolt77
- Scratcher
500+ posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
actually i cant do this order unless you dont mind if its not animatedtaken! not sure when it wil be done but it will be done before the due dateBump What you would like: Animated Profile Picture
Description: Autumn Version of my OC; in the background a (real life) image of an autumn forest. Something like this but with an LED type glow to it, and the red should be black, and the green, white. Over the top, please add animated autumn leaves
Due date: 19/09/2021
Where would you like us to contact you: Profile
Other: Thank you
- yeetboi_321
- Scratcher
11 posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
Username:yeetboi_321
What Job Do you want: BOD
Experience:3
Examples Of work: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/566280000/
Other:
What Job Do you want: BOD
Experience:3
Examples Of work: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/566280000/
Other:
Last edited by yeetboi_321 (Sept. 17, 2021 08:38:46)
- Lightning_Bolt77
- Scratcher
500+ posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
what does the 3 mean? Username:yeetboi_321
What Job Do you want: BOD
Experience:3
Examples Of work: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/566280000/
Other:
- reeceypie
- Scratcher
75 posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
I have an enquiry to make…
What Jobs are avaliable?
What Jobs are avaliable?
- Lightning_Bolt77
- Scratcher
500+ posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
every job except head oc maker I have an enquiry to make…
What Jobs are avaliable?
- reeceypie
- Scratcher
75 posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
Ok.
- reeceypie
- Scratcher
75 posts
⚡ᴛʜᴇ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ Sꜱʜᴏᴘ™ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴅᴏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛ ᴇʟᴇᴄᴛʀɪᴄ ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅꜱ ⚡ ᴡᴇ ꜱᴇʟʟ -ʙᴀɴɴᴇʀꜱ -ᴘꜰᴘ'ꜱ -ᴏᴄ'ꜱ -ᴛʜᴜᴍʙɴᴀɪʟꜱ⚡
I know this is kind of a stupid question, but do you need experience for being manager?