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- Crystollo
- Scratcher
86 posts
Team Yellow Poetry Lines
Hey! Here are the poetry lines!
Yellow is the colour of the scorching sun, bringing life to all things big and small - Konu
The gold sits, reflecting light into the sky - Cypher56
Golden stars, the crown jewel of the sky - Japanblossom
The stars shine against the dark sky, giving light and hope. - Teknity
People come and brush their hands against the soft, hot, gentle sand as it shimmers in the sunlight - Leafino
The sun, the glowing golden orb of the sky brings comfort to the world - Santasfavoriteguy
he waves, golden from sunlight, crashed into the soft, hot sand - Captain_Falcon
The sunlight drifts along a peaceful valley and reflects upon a river, releasing hope -Geoking
Gold is the long coveted element, extracted at great cost, guarded at great cost, fought for at great cost, and won by great cost. - LimeTime
Because stars can only shine so brightly if there is darkness around them. - Anveena (last line)
In the Deep, Dark Mine, Gold is such a Find, It is Sold for Much, and just one ounce could make you rich -Razzula
Golden flowers shine like shimmering stars, their petals reflecting the glimmering moonlight. - -Toxic-
They dance upon the fields always reaching for the distant sun. -The3dMaker
The sand dances in the golden sunset behind. - Fishlacetwo (first line of sand)
The sun shines bright, it's soothing rays dancing upon the golden sand -tiny288
The colour of the dazzling stars surrounding us, shining light upon the world - Crystollo
Gold has adorned us for many thousand years, but still through all these years gold is still highly revered. -Aquaflame (To be edited)
The golden sun rays warm, soothe, and enlighten the ages - The24th
As the waves climb up the beach a thousand amber particles are lifted up and carried away- Venomous-Squirrel
Here are how many topics we've covered (the aim is 4 per topic)
Thank you!
Yellow is the colour of the scorching sun, bringing life to all things big and small - Konu
The gold sits, reflecting light into the sky - Cypher56
Golden stars, the crown jewel of the sky - Japanblossom
The stars shine against the dark sky, giving light and hope. - Teknity
People come and brush their hands against the soft, hot, gentle sand as it shimmers in the sunlight - Leafino
The sun, the glowing golden orb of the sky brings comfort to the world - Santasfavoriteguy
he waves, golden from sunlight, crashed into the soft, hot sand - Captain_Falcon
The sunlight drifts along a peaceful valley and reflects upon a river, releasing hope -Geoking
Gold is the long coveted element, extracted at great cost, guarded at great cost, fought for at great cost, and won by great cost. - LimeTime
Because stars can only shine so brightly if there is darkness around them. - Anveena (last line)
In the Deep, Dark Mine, Gold is such a Find, It is Sold for Much, and just one ounce could make you rich -Razzula
Golden flowers shine like shimmering stars, their petals reflecting the glimmering moonlight. - -Toxic-
They dance upon the fields always reaching for the distant sun. -The3dMaker
The sand dances in the golden sunset behind. - Fishlacetwo (first line of sand)
The sun shines bright, it's soothing rays dancing upon the golden sand -tiny288
The colour of the dazzling stars surrounding us, shining light upon the world - Crystollo
Gold has adorned us for many thousand years, but still through all these years gold is still highly revered. -Aquaflame (To be edited)
The golden sun rays warm, soothe, and enlighten the ages - The24th
As the waves climb up the beach a thousand amber particles are lifted up and carried away- Venomous-Squirrel
Here are how many topics we've covered (the aim is 4 per topic)
Yellow Flowers: 2
The Sun: 4
Stars: 4
Gold: 4
Beach/Sand: 3
Thank you!
Last edited by Crystollo (July 23, 2014 00:18:41)
- fishlacetwo
- Scratcher
11 posts
Team Yellow Poetry Lines
Can u use some of my stuff still for the main big project thing! Who are u on google+
- LimeTime
- Scratcher
3 posts
Team Yellow Poetry Lines
We still don't have Invincible_Inc, iAmity, Flippedgaming, Gamedesigner2055, Captain_Falcon, Kavz
Last edited by LimeTime (July 22, 2014 12:45:42)
- Crystollo
- Scratcher
86 posts
Team Yellow Poetry Lines
Can you please not quote the main post, as it makes your post massive, in fact, can you edit your post and remove the quote?Large quote here
We still don't have Invincible_Inc, iAmity, Flippedgaming, Gamedesigner2055, Captain_Falcon, Kavz
iAmity is on holiday, we don't need hers, we have Captain_Falcon's and I'm pretty sure we have Kavz's
- Aquaflame
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Team Yellow Poetry Lines
We might have to split some of these lines into two lines, because some of them are very large, and maybe combine some. And we might need to edit them a tiny bit to fit the poem structure.
Last edited by Aquaflame (July 22, 2014 13:58:11)
- The3dMaker
- Scratcher
3 posts
Team Yellow Poetry Lines
Looks like we are almost done
I checked on the other colors to see how they were doing, this is what I found:
Blue- http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/24943767/
Red- ???
Green- http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/24904942/
I checked on the other colors to see how they were doing, this is what I found:
Blue- http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/24943767/
Red- ???
Green- http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/24904942/
Last edited by The3dMaker (July 22, 2014 18:44:07)
- venomous-squirrel
- Scratcher
31 posts
Team Yellow Poetry Lines
We're doing very well!
Hopefully we can get the remaining lines tomorrow, then find a poetic way to organise them. After that, me and Crystollo will make the project on our team's account.
By the way, thanks to everyone in Team Yellow for being so great with this first event!
Hopefully we can get the remaining lines tomorrow, then find a poetic way to organise them. After that, me and Crystollo will make the project on our team's account.
By the way, thanks to everyone in Team Yellow for being so great with this first event!
- Teknity
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Team Yellow Poetry Lines
Can you please not quote the main post, as it makes your post massive, in fact, can you edit your post and remove the quote?Large quote here
We still don't have Invincible_Inc, iAmity, Flippedgaming, Gamedesigner2055, Captain_Falcon, Kavz
iAmity is on holiday, we don't need hers, we have Captain_Falcon's and I'm pretty sure we have Kavz's
Dunno if this sounds mean, but you should bug the other people who should have turned a line in but did not turn in a line to get some lines in. The contest ends…. soon!
- LimeTime
- Scratcher
3 posts
Team Yellow Poetry Lines
LimeTimeCould this line be change to: Gold is the long coveted element, extracted at great cost, guarded at great cost, fought for at great cost, and won by Gold is the long coveted element, extracted at great cost, guarded at great cost, fought for at great cost, and won by great cost. - at great cost? I think I made a typo and I just noticed it…
- Aquaflame
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Team Yellow Poetry Lines
Gold, beloved far and wide. But also to ponder is the value inside. For is gold only but a pretty facade? Or a gateway to power on which to trod? (New edited line)
- kavz
- Scratcher
9 posts
Team Yellow Poetry Lines
Here's my line (Beach):
Walking down the beach's yellow sand; We should stay here for the day.
Walking down the beach's yellow sand; We should stay here for the day.
- CWTeamYellow
- Scratcher
1 post
Team Yellow Poetry Lines
Your line seems to stray away from the current style of poem we have going. I'm probably going to have to heavily edit it, I hope you don't mind. Gold, beloved far and wide. But also to ponder is the value inside. For is gold only but a pretty facade? Or a gateway to power on which to trod? (New edited line)
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