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- lightningspark6545
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Help Needed! Shop.
Can someone help me improve my shop? Lightning Studios. Link in my signature. if you first to help you can be vice-president
Last edited by lightningspark6545 (May 29, 2020 02:17:11)
- DancingNekoGirl
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Help Needed! Shop.
Hi! I'm the owner of The Nougat Shoppe, here are some tips:
1. You might want to enlarge your links with
2. You can center your links with
3. In your “Staff” section (and all sections) you should quote them to give them a more professional look, and also center them if needed. You can also space your sections out to seperate them from others.
With these corrections (and a little more), your post would look like this:
Your forms look good, here are my edits:
I spaced out the titles from the forms and made the titles bigger and underlined.
Here's the workers section, also the customer doesn't really need to follow the discussion as they can be notified on their profiles when their order is done.
On your “Partnerships” form, you can add the banner of the shop if they have one.
On “Services”, here are my edits:
I hope this helped you with your shop! I will also be filling out a partnership request after I post the BBCode for all of this.
1. You might want to enlarge your links with
[big](links here)[[/big]
2. You can center your links with
[center](links here)[/center]
3. In your “Staff” section (and all sections) you should quote them to give them a more professional look, and also center them if needed. You can also space your sections out to seperate them from others.
With these corrections (and a little more), your post would look like this:
By anishram from The Oreo Shop
Staff
Key: * Strike | ^ on leaveBoD
President/Founder: lightningspark6545. Control over everything
Vice - President: VACANT. Almost complete control, cannot close down the shop or edit the posts. Takes over President in absence.
Chairman: VACANT Almost complete control, cannot fire. Takes over Vice - President in absence
Advisor: VACANT Gives bits of advice to the company. Takes over Chairman in absence. Cannot fire
Secretary: VACANT edits the unclaimed orders board
Trainer: VACANT Trains the trainees. Cannot hire or fire.
Class S (Storm)
Manager: VACANT Complete control overall DEPARTMENTS. He/She has lots of experience.
2nd Manager: VACANT same as 1st manager. The more the merrier.Class L ( Lightning)
Head Of Coding Department
Head of Art Department
Head Of Animation Department
Class B (Bolt)
Bolt: Experienced workers that have stayed for a long time
Class T (Thunder)
Workers who are not able to produce lightning ( products ) yet. They are also called trainees. Trained by the trainer.
Class V (Vapour)
Vapour: Workers who have left us. May their efforts benefit them.
Your forms look good, here are my edits:
I spaced out the titles from the forms and made the titles bigger and underlined.
Made by CraftGirl-HAS from The Craft ShopApplication Form
Username:
Activity 1-10:
What can you do? -
Why should we hire you? -
What position are you applying for?-
Have you read the terms and followed the studio? -
Other:Order Form
Username:
What do you need:
Who do you want to do it
Timeframe
Description:
Timezone:
Other Details:Leave Form
Username:
Why do you want to take leave? -
When are you going to start:
When you are going to end?Customer Review Form
Who did your work?
Your satisfaction 1-10:
Any Suggestions:
Will you come here again?
Quote:Partnership Form
Username:
Position in shop:
Shop name:
Why do you want to partner with us?
BUNDLES
COMING SOON
Here's the workers section, also the customer doesn't really need to follow the discussion as they can be notified on their profiles when their order is done.
TermsFor workers
Be kind and patient
Do your work within the Timeframe that the customer gave
You must include the word cloud in your application form
Respond to activity check
Follow this discussion
Follow the official studioFor customers
Be patient. Our Clouds are working as hard as they can
Include the word bolt in your order
Be kind
You must follow this discussion so you will get notified
If you want, please fill a review form
On your “Partnerships” form, you can add the banner of the shop if they have one.
On “Services”, here are my edits:
"We light up your projects in a flash''
This is Lightning Studios. Banner made by Buzzy Bee Banners. Go and check them out!Services we offer:
- Debugging
- Scripting
- Coding
Future Services:
- Animation
- Art
- Banners
- PFPs
I hope this helped you with your shop! I will also be filling out a partnership request after I post the BBCode for all of this.
Last edited by DancingNekoGirl (May 29, 2020 03:19:40)
- DancingNekoGirl
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Help Needed! Shop.
BBCode for Staff section:
BBCode for forms:
BBCode for workers section:
BBCode for services:
[quote][img]http://cubeupload.com/im/anishram/LighteningStudios3.png[/img]
By [url=https://scratch.mit.edu/users/anishram]anishram[/url] from [url=https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/403964/?page=15#post-4068340]The Oreo Shop[/url]
[quote][center][url=https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/4068393]Services[/url]|Staff|[url=https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/408914/?page=1#post-4068492]Forms[/url]|[url=https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/4068518]Portfolio[/url][/center][/quote]
[b]Staff[/b]
Key: * Strike | ^ on leave
[center][big]BoD[/big]
[u]President/Founder: lightningspark6545. Control over everything
Vice - President: VACANT. Almost complete control, cannot close down the shop or edit the posts. Takes over President in absence.
Chairman: VACANT Almost complete control, cannot fire. Takes over Vice - President in absence
Advisor: VACANT Gives bits of advice to the company. Takes over Chairman in absence. Cannot fire
Secretary: VACANT edits the unclaimed orders board
Trainer: VACANT Trains the trainees. Cannot hire or fire.[/u]
[big]Class S (Storm)[/big]
[u]Manager: VACANT Complete control overall DEPARTMENTS. He/She has lots of experience.
2nd Manager: VACANT same as 1st manager. The more the merrier.Class L ( Lightning)
Head Of Coding Department
Head of Art Department
Head Of Animation Department[/u]
[big]Class B (Bolt)[/big]
[u]Bolt: Experienced workers that have stayed for a long time[/u]
[big]Class T (Thunder)[/big]
[u]Workers who are not able to produce lightning ( products ) yet. They are also called trainees. Trained by the trainer.[/u]
[big]Class V (Vapour)[/big]
[u]Vapour: Workers who have left us. May their efforts benefit them.[/u]
[/quote]
[/center]
BBCode for forms:
[quote][img]http://u.cubeupload.com/olliehazel9/d85ScreenShot20200528at.png[/img]
Made by [url=https://scratch.mit.edu/users/CraftGirl-HAS]CraftGirl-HAS[/url] from [url=https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/392569/?page=1]The Craft Shop[/url]
[center][quote][url=https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/4068393]Services[/url]|[url=https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/408914/?page=1#post-4068439]Staff[/url]|Forms|[url=https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/4068518]Portfolio[/url][/quote]
[quote][big][u]Application Form[/u][/big]
Username:
Activity 1-10:
What can you do? -
Why should we hire you? -
What position are you applying for?-
Have you read the terms and followed the studio? -
Other:
[/quote]
[quote][big][u]Order Form[/u][/big]
Username:
What do you need:
Who do you want to do it [optional]
Timeframe [optional]
Description:
Timezone:
Other Details:
[/quote]
[quote][big][u]Leave Form[/u][/big]
Username:
Why do you want to take leave? -
When are you going to start:
When you are going to end?
[/quote]
[quote][big][u]Customer Review Form[/u][/big]
Who did your work?
Your satisfaction 1-10:
Any Suggestions:
Will you come here again?
Quote:
[/quote]
[quote][big][u]Partnership Form[/u][/big]
Username:
Position in shop:
Shop name:
Why do you want to partner with us?
[/quote]
[b]BUNDLES[/b]
COMING SOON
[/quote][/quote]
BBCode for workers section:
[quote][big][center][u][b]Terms[/b][/u][/center][/big]
[quote][big]For workers[/big]
Be kind and patient
Do your work within the Timeframe that the customer gave
You must include the word cloud in your application form
Respond to activity check
Follow this discussion
[url=https://scratch.mit.edu/studios/26774975/]Follow the official studio[/url][/quote]
[quote][big]For customers[/big]
Be patient. Our Clouds are working as hard as they can
Include the word bolt in your order
Be kind
You must follow this discussion so you will get notified
If you want, please fill a review form[/quote][/quote]
BBCode for services:
[quote][img]http://u.cubeupload.com/lightningspark6545/LightningStudios.jpeg[/img]
[center][big] [b][u][quote][color=goldenrod]"We light up your projects in a flash''[/color][/quote][/u][/b]
This is Lightning Studios. Banner made by [url=https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/377800/]Buzzy Bee Banners[/url]. Go and check them out![/big]
[quote]Services|[url=https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/408914/?page=1#post-4068439]Staff[/url]|[url=https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/408914/?page=1#post-4068492]Forms[/url]|[url=https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/4068518]Portfolio[/url][/quote]
[quote]Services we offer:[/center][/center]
[list]
[*]Debugging
[*]Scripting
[*]Coding[/quote]
[/list]
[quote][center]Future Services:[/center]
[list]
[*]Animation
[*]Art
[*]Banners
[*]PFPs
[/list][/quote]
[/quote]
- lightningspark6545
-
Scratcher
1000+ posts
Help Needed! Shop.
I hope this helped you with your shop! I will also be filling out a partnership request after I post the BBCode for all of this.
Thanks

- DancingNekoGirl
-
Scratcher
1000+ posts
Help Needed! Shop.
No problem!I hope this helped you with your shop! I will also be filling out a partnership request after I post the BBCode for all of this.Thanks
Last edited by DancingNekoGirl (May 29, 2020 03:26:38)
- lightningspark6545
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Help Needed! Shop.
No problem!I hope this helped you with your shop! I will also be filling out a partnership request after I post the BBCode for all of this.Thanks
How do you type a BBCode
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