Excitement after the link which is for lazy people … I am diverse SORRY!

Link: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/19124025/
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IMPORTANT
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Hello Scratch,
Today, I, MasterCard786 am presenting something amazing to you all.
Yep, It is… APEX NEWS!
Apex news is a news company that publishes its issues on a weekly or two weekly basis.
We explain the following topics.
1) About us
2) NSFP
3) The voice
4) Riddles
5) Jokes
6) Slogans/ Quotes
7) Art
8) Comments
9) Advertise
10) Math zone
11) English zone
12) Credit

We also include a 10 second pre-show and cool music!
This weeks music is..
You must see the project actually…
Link: Click me for the link

GOAL:
-100 Views in a week or 2 weeks
-25+ loves in a week or 2 weeks
-Patricipation

HIRING:
We are currently Hiring for the selected jobs.
-Editor
-Artist
-Advertiser

Questions:
-How active are you
-Username
-Age zone e.g.
-Rank
-What you want this rank
-Do you agree to the terms [Dedicate your self to the Apex team, never miss out a week , Job done on time

Thank you. Please comment below for your ideas, thoughts.
Reported MasterCard786 is checking out.

This topic will be used for comments and hiring.

I can be an artist, examples of my work can be found here: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/19250476/ http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/18856656/
These are the newest ones I could find that I'm happiest with.

You can indeed be an artist! Nice drawing, make a project and comment the link. Comment any project that you made and is great, welcome to the team.
Btw, Cute puppy!

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Hi Bump!

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May I join?

1 - I'm on scratch almost every day.
2 - My username is Music-Maker
3 - Unknown.
4 - I would like to be an editor.
5 - Sorry, I do not understand.
6 - Definetly

Although I am applying for editor, I am also interested in writing articles.

Music-Maker wrote:

May I join?

1 - I'm on scratch almost every day.
2 - My username is Music-Maker
3 - Unknown.
4 - I would like to be an editor.
5 - Sorry, I do not understand.
6 - Definetly

Although I am applying for editor, I am also interested in writing articles.

Welcome to the team!

You can start by… giving ideas that you edited for some of our pages?

I'll think about joining…

Here are some little details you might want to change:


Introduction:

In my opinion, it takes too long.


Page 1 (about us):

Currently: “welcome to my first issue.”
Change to: “welcome to our first issue.”
You're introducing the newspaper, not yourself.

I'd get rid of “Well, let us get on topic,”

Currently: “every week or two weeks”
Change to: “every few weeks”
Sounds more natural.


Page 2 (about us):

Currently: “founded on…”
Change to: “founded on”
More professional.


Page 3 (NSFP):

Currently: “Stands for…”
Change to “stands for”

I'd add a description about the project and a link in the “Instructions”.

I would change the second one. It doesn't describe the scratcher's first project - insteads it just tell the reader that Whatahooda has shared 3 projects.


Page 5 (riddles):

I'd put the answers on the next page.


Page 11 (art):

The art is hidden behind the words.


Page 13 (advertise):

Currently: “to you buy”
Change to: “to you by”


Page 15 (english):

"" is partly off the screen.


Everthing:

Change text to vector. That will make it a lot cleaner and look a lot more professional.



Thanks for reading this. I know I'm picky, but I'm trying to do my best.

whos on the team?

oh also anyone on the team can edit our official website!

V thats my signature not the website V

Ok thank you for advice!
It was my first issue so expect errors.
Also what is vector?
Isn't it a editor on scratch..?