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smileycreations15

bump

bye

Kneebones

Bump? We need more projects to review and check out ;~;

GoldenAldo

Kneebones wrote:
Bump? We need more projects to review and check out ;~;

I know, it's real sad that this is so empty.

smileycreations15

GoldenAldo wrote:
Kneebones wrote:
Bump? We need more projects to review and check out ;~;
I know, it's real sad that this is so empty.

Yes, really empty.

Last edited by smileycreations15 (Dec. 5, 2018 21:01:26)

bye

Kneebones

Maybe we need to subtly advertise.

KDT123

Username: KDT123
Project name: Wall Tennis and Maze Escape
Project link: Wall Tennis, Maze Escape.
Type of project (Runner, dress up, race, etc.): Wall Tennis is like single player Pong, Maze Escape is a maze
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Yes, so long they tell me why and how to improve.

Hello, I’m KDT123. I make a few games which you can find in here. I have worked at TIPS in the past. My favourite colour is red. My alternate account is 321TDK.

smileycreations15

KDT123 wrote:
Username: KDT123
Project name: Wall Tennis and Maze Escape
Project link: Wall Tennis, Maze Escape.
Type of project (Runner, dress up, race, etc.): Wall Tennis is like single player Pong, Maze Escape is a maze
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Yes, so long they tell me why and how to improve.

You wanted an order. Here it is (not from me or my alts)

bye

JudahPendleton

here's my order down below

Last edited by JudahPendleton (Dec. 5, 2018 22:04:44)

check out my new game

JudahPendleton

Username: judahpendleton
Project name: Halo 2: Capture the flag
Project link - https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/255618160/
Type of project: Game, version = Capture the flag, theme Halo
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Yes
Can you respond under Reviews?

Last edited by JudahPendleton (Dec. 5, 2018 22:09:40)

check out my new game

JudahPendleton

JudahPendleton wrote:
Username: judahpendleton
Project name: Halo 2: Capture the flag
Project link - https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/255618160/
Type of project: Game, version = Capture the flag, theme Halo
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Yes
Can you respond under Reviews?

has my order been done?

check out my new game

PrincessFlowerTV

Nice shop! Would you be interested in partnering with my shop, PFTV Review Shop?
We would both advertise each other and help each other when needed.

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Nothing's down here, sorry to disappoint you.

JK. there may be something down there…

Maybe not, tho.

You're determined, aren't you?

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Just stop it, will ya?

Fine, you win.

Take a rice cake. *yeets you a rice cake*
Say “Thanks for that rice cake, Kewpie!” if you made it this far.

Lolmander

PrincessFlowerTV wrote:
Nice shop! Would you be interested in partnering with my shop, PFTV Review Shop?
We would both advertise each other and help each other when needed.

Thanks and sure!

Dragonlord767

Position wanted: reviewer
Username: Dragonlord767
Can you create honest reviews?: yup
Do you have experience writing reviews?: not really but I do like making art if that helps
Short resume/Why should we hire you: Because I'm kind and friendly and like to help out. Also I am: Cub of the Year 2016, and I'm Scout of the Year 2018 (Scout and Cub of the year is out of a group of 20 or so other Scouts/Cubs) I have the Grey Wolf award, (best award in Cubs in Australia) (all scouting awards- look up Scouts Australia) Oh that makes another, I'm in Australia so I can be on “overnight”.

Thanks

no signature plz

Lolmander

Dragonlord767 wrote:
Position wanted: reviewer
Username: Dragonlord767
Can you create honest reviews?: yup
Do you have experience writing reviews?: not really but I do like making art if that helps
Short resume/Why should we hire you: Because I'm kind and friendly and like to help out. Also I am: Cub of the Year 2016, and I'm Scout of the Year 2018 (Scout and Cub of the year is out of a group of 20 or so other Scouts/Cubs) I have the Grey Wolf award, (best award in Cubs in Australia) (all scouting awards- look up Scouts Australia) Oh that makes another, I'm in Australia so I can be on “overnight”.

Thanks

Accepted! I'll add you tomorrow.

vulcan_spectre

Position wanted:reviewer
Username: vulcan_spectre (you can call me vulcan)
Can you create honest reviews?: yes
Do you have experience writing reviews?: no but i know how
Short resume/Why should we hire you: honestly this part is hard, (EDIT:without giving out personal information which i am not comfortable doing) i really don't have an answer right now,

Last edited by vulcan_spectre (Dec. 13, 2018 15:23:15)

my projects:
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/285946514/
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/286573021/
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/288500529/
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/288500529/
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/284845497/

Lolmander

vulcan_spectre wrote:
Position wanted:reviewer
Username: vulcan_spectre (you can call me vulcan)
Can you create honest reviews?: yes
Do you have experience writing reviews?: no but i know how
Short resume/Why should we hire you: honestly this part is hard, (EDIT:without giving out personal information which i am not comfortable doing) i really don't have an answer right now,

Accepted.

Dragonlord767

I'm not down as reviewer on the first post. And bumpy bump

Last edited by Dragonlord767 (Dec. 16, 2018 10:24:50)

no signature plz

LegendOfMaple

I hope this is not out of form, but I wish to both present a project for review and apply for a position as a reviewer.

Username: LegendOfMaple
Project name: Chimera
Project link CHIMERA beta 1.1
Type of project (Runner, dress up, race, etc.):Point and click exploration
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Certainly, If my project is substandard I
would want that voiced.

Position wanted: Reviewer
Username: LegendOfMaple
Can you create honest reviews?: I believe I can.
Do you have experience writing reviews?:Some, however not in a formal setting
Short resume/Why should we hire you:I believe you should hire me if you feel I would do a good job.
I play a great number of games and have taken multiple courses in both writing and game design.

Apologies for the edit, I made a minor grammatical error.

Last edited by LegendOfMaple (Dec. 16, 2018 14:51:44)

Dragonlord767

LegendOfMaple wrote:
I hope this is not out of form, but I wish to both present a project for review and apply for a position as a reviewer.

Username: LegendOfMaple
Project name: Chimera
Project link CHIMERA beta 1.1
Type of project (Runner, dress up, race, etc.):Point and click exploration
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Certainly, If my project is substandard I
would want that voiced.

Position wanted: Reviewer
Username: LegendOfMaple
Can you create honest reviews?: I believe I can.
Do you have experience writing reviews?:Some, however not in a formal setting
Short resume/Why should we hire you:I believe you should hire me if you feel I would do a good job.
I play a great number of games and have taken multiple courses in both writing and game design.

Apologies for the edit, I made a minor grammatical error.

Review taken. Can't accept the application though, I'm not a high rank.

no signature plz

Lolmander

Dragonlord767 wrote:
I'm not down as reviewer on the first post. And bumpy bump

Sorry, I'll add you right now!

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