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- -WhyHyphens-
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Lolmander's criticism shop! Get great reviews QUICK!!! [NOW HIRING]
Username: -WhyHyphens-
Project name: —More Dashes— (Dash 2) v0.1
Project link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/260471765/
Type of project (Runner, dress up, race, etc.): Runner (I guess)
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Yes
Project name: —More Dashes— (Dash 2) v0.1
Project link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/260471765/
Type of project (Runner, dress up, race, etc.): Runner (I guess)
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Yes
- smileycreations15
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Lolmander's criticism shop! Get great reviews QUICK!!! [NOW HIRING]
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REASON: SHOP IS IN THE SECOND PAGE OF THE REQUESTS FORUM.
REASON: SHOP IS IN THE SECOND PAGE OF THE REQUESTS FORUM.
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- Lolmander
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Lolmander's criticism shop! Get great reviews QUICK!!! [NOW HIRING]
when green flag clicked
forever
if <(distance to [mcburger v]) < [3 feet]> then
eat mcburger
else
point towards [mcdonalds v]
repeat until <touching [mcdonalds v] ?>
move (1) steps
end
go into mcdonalds
wait until <my turn to order>
order (mcburger)
repeat until <touching [seat v] ?>
go to [(join [seat] [(pick random (1) to (100)])) v]
end
sit down
open bag
take out mcburger
eat mcburger
end
end
end
Last edited by Lolmander (Nov. 19, 2018 18:17:13)
- smileycreations15
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Do you want me to make a better one?OKeat a mcburgerwhen green flag clicked
forever
if <> then
<(distance to [mcburger v]) < [3 feet]>
eat mcburger
else
repeat until <>
<touching [mcburger v] ?>
go to [mcdonalds v]
end
end
end
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- smileycreations15
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when green flag clickedEdited your own blocks
forever
if <(distance to [mcburger v]) < [3 [feet v]::operator boolean> then
eat mcburger:: custom
else
point towards [mcdonalds v]
repeat until <touching [mcdonalds v] ?>
move (1) steps
End
go into [mcdonalds v]:: motion
wait until <my turn to order:: custom>
order [mcburger v]:: custom
repeat until <touching [seat v] ?>
go to (join [seat ] (pick random (1) to (100)))
end
sit down:: custom
open bag:: custom
take out mcburger:: custom
eat mcburger:: custom
stop [all v]
define eat mcburger
Open Mouth:: sensing stack
Eat [McBurger v]:: sensing cap
Last edited by smileycreations15 (Nov. 20, 2018 16:47:57)
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- kritav
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Lolmander's criticism shop! Get great reviews QUICK!!! [NOW HIRING]
How to request a review:
Username: @kritav
Project name: |Protect| Beta
Project link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/257105038/
Type of project (Runner, dress up, race, etc.): Mouse Chase Game
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: YES! It helps me improve.
- tailsco11
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18 posts
Lolmander's criticism shop! Get great reviews QUICK!!! [NOW HIRING]
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/259279913/
for me to rate oc
for me to rate oc
when green flag clicked
say [awesome rate thing here] for (1111111111111111111111111) secs
Last edited by tailsco11 (Nov. 21, 2018 06:14:31)
- smileycreations15
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Lolmander's criticism shop! Get great reviews QUICK!!! [NOW HIRING]
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- Lolmander
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Lolmander's criticism shop! Get great reviews QUICK!!! [NOW HIRING]
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/259279913/Please fill out the ordering forum.
for me to rate ocwhen green flag clickedsay [awesome rate thing here] for (1111111111111111111111111) secs
- smileycreations15
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Lolmander's criticism shop! Get great reviews QUICK!!! [NOW HIRING]
Images of my shop banner (WARNING:THESE IMAGES HAVE LINKS. IF YOU CLICK ON IT, YOU WILL BE DIRECTED TO ANOTHER SHOP)
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Last edited by smileycreations15 (Nov. 21, 2018 16:15:21)
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- smileycreations15
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Last edited by smileycreations15 (Nov. 22, 2018 05:11:05)
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- akinyemi08
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Lolmander's criticism shop! Get great reviews QUICK!!! [NOW HIRING]
Username: akinyemi08
Project name: Minigame Madness
Project link: Minigame Madness
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Yes!
Project name: Minigame Madness
Project link: Minigame Madness
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Yes!
- smileycreations15
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Lolmander's criticism shop! Get great reviews QUICK!!! [NOW HIRING]
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- Smurphy13AWESOME
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500+ posts
Lolmander's criticism shop! Get great reviews QUICK!!! [NOW HIRING]
Username: Smurphy13AWESOME
Project name: Falling Sky
Project link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/172534409/
Type of project (Runner, dress up, race, etc.): Runner, sort of
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Yes.
Project name: Falling Sky
Project link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/172534409/
Type of project (Runner, dress up, race, etc.): Runner, sort of
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Yes.
- CatGuyAnimates
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Username: CatGuyAnimates
Project name: The UnderScratch Project Shop
Project link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/264534906/
Type of project (Runner, dress up, race, etc.): Shop from a game collab
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Yes. Also its a snippet and incomplete, so take it with a grain of salt.
Project name: The UnderScratch Project Shop
Project link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/264534906/
Type of project (Runner, dress up, race, etc.): Shop from a game collab
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Yes. Also its a snippet and incomplete, so take it with a grain of salt.
(she/her) Mostly inactive nowadays. stand with ukraine.
- smileycreations15
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- AndrewCat29
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100+ posts
Lolmander's criticism shop! Get great reviews QUICK!!! [NOW HIRING]
Username: AndrewCat29
Project name: Arrow It!
Project link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/204594471/
Type of project (Runner, dress up, race, etc.): typer, I guess…
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Yes!
Project name: Arrow It!
Project link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/204594471/
Type of project (Runner, dress up, race, etc.): typer, I guess…
Are you able to take criticism even if it tells you that your project isn't good?: Yes!
- Kneebones
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87 posts
Lolmander's criticism shop! Get great reviews QUICK!!! [NOW HIRING]
I'd like to leave an application, in hopes you're still hiring.
Position wanted: Reviewer.
Username: Kneebones.
Can you create honest reviews?: I'll be honest and unbiased in my reviews, but I obviously want to be polite considering the guidelines. You can expect good ones from me.
Do you have experience writing reviews?: No experience, but I'm a quick learner. I'm confident I can catch up just by watching the others. I hope that by being hired, this would be a learning experience for me.
Short resume/Why should we hire you: I have lots of time to spare, I always like to view new community projects, I want my account to be more active and have more things to do. I'd like to help this shop become the best shop there is, any way I can. I'm also an artist and designer, so if you need that sort of expertise, I can surely be of use.
Last edited by Kneebones (Nov. 25, 2018 22:51:05)
- Lolmander
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Lolmander's criticism shop! Get great reviews QUICK!!! [NOW HIRING]
HIRED! I'd like to leave an application, in hopes you're still hiring.Position wanted: Reviewer.
Username: Kneebones.
Can you create honest reviews?: I'll be honest and unbiased in my reviews, but I obviously want to be polite considering the guidelines. You can expect good ones from me.
Do you have experience writing reviews?: No experience, but I'm a quick learner. I'm confident I can catch up just by watching the others. I hope that by being hired, this would be a learning experience for me.
Short resume/Why should we hire you: I have lots of time to spare, I always like to view new community projects, I want my account to be more active and have more things to do. I'd like to help this shop become the best shop there is, any way I can. I'm also an artist and designer, so if you need that sort of expertise, I can surely be of use.
That is a REALLY good application!