Hi, guys, I am working on a fighting/story game in which you are a scientist. You find out news that a meteor has hit a part of the jungle. You make a machine that allows you to turn into an animal and help the ones who were hurt since you need to be able to talk to them. You then are in the jungle, the first animal you meet is a stork named complementary. He seems very nice at first, but then you start to see that the changes sometimes during the battle. If you click act and ask what's wrong he will tell you he has split personality. After the battle, you go out to continue your journey. I have drawn more characters you encounter and fight and I will be working on the game almost every day! If you would like me to add something, give suggestions for the storyline or help me with coding than just comment below! Please reply to this comment if you have ideas or would like to help! Thanks if you do! (I will give credit to anyone's ideas!)

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Hi, guys, I am working on a fighting/story game in which you are a scientist. You find out news that a meteor has hit a part of the jungle. You make a machine that allows you to turn into an animal and help the ones who were hurt since you need to be able to talk to them. You then are in the jungle, the first animal you meet is a stork named complementary. He seems very nice at first, but then you start to see that the changes sometimes during the battle. If you click act and ask what's wrong he will tell you he has split personality. After the battle, you go out to continue your journey. I have drawn more characters you encounter and fight and I will be working on the game almost every day! If you would like me to add something, give suggestions for the storyline or help me with coding than just comment below! Please reply to this comment if you have ideas or would like to help! Thanks if you do! (I will give credit to anyone's ideas!)

Nice first 6 parts of the story line, but there's something what's concerns me about it. Your grammar makes it a bit confusing, but no offense. Perhaps, a little bit of a enhancement/improvement to your grammar will make your presentation of your story understandable (able to understand) for any helpers that may come by.

Second of all, If you need help, you need to tell a part (which you're working on) that seems confusing for you. Thanks!