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- XCat
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
Nothing I'm back too! What do you need right now?
Except orders
- XCat
- Scratcher
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
Cool I'll check it out A little question - do any of you use World Anvil? It's really good for organizing stories with alternate universes… I mean, really good
- XCat
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
- Jenju
- Scratcher
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
Please change my status.
- XCat
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
Okay Please change my status.
- XCat
- Scratcher
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
- annahil
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
- coding4life22
- Scratcher
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
We understand! Good luck on everything you do in the future! I'm going to have to quit, sorry guys. I have a lot of pressure in other places, and I don't want to get super stressed out. hopefully you understand.
- Jenju
- Scratcher
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
It’s okay! I'm going to have to quit, sorry guys. I have a lot of pressure in other places, and I don't want to get super stressed out. hopefully you understand.
- coding4life22
- Scratcher
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
- warml
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
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- RPP-Exploration
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
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On last Monday, me and ali goes Shopping in The kingTown. We bought: foods; two toy; an dog toy; and nothing else;! It was really boring, Ali got a cat toy aswell and I didn’t (it wasn’t fair)
- XCat
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
Okay I'm going to have to quit, sorry guys. I have a lot of pressure in other places, and I don't want to get super stressed out. hopefully you understand.
- warml
- Scratcher
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
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Other: ~On last Monday, me and ali goes Shopping in The kingTown. We bought: foods; two toy; an dog toy; and nothing else;! It was really boring, Ali got a cat toy aswell and I didn’t (it wasn’t fair)@warml's edit
Last Monday {no unnecessary preposition}, my friend Ali and I went shopping in The Kingstown. We bought cookies {more specific than food}, two plastic fidget spinners {again, more specific}, and a dog toy. I yawned repeatedly as he continued his errands {show, not tell; vocabulary}. Ali got a cat toy as well, but I didn’t. At the end, I complained about the unfairness of this, especially since I'm the one who has the well-behaved cat.
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Last edited by warml (Aug. 21, 2018 00:22:18)
~ warml
- XCat
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
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Last Monday {no unnecessary preposition}, my friend Ali and I went shopping in The Kingstown. We bought cookies {more specific than food}, two plastic fidget spinners {again, more specific}, and a dog toy. I yawned repeatedly as he continued his errands {show, not tell; vocabulary}. Ali got a cat toy as well, but I didn’t. At the end, I complained about the unfairness of this, especially since I'm the one who has the well-behaved cat.
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- RPP-Exploration
- Scratcher
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
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Last Monday {no unnecessary preposition}, my friend Ali and I went shopping in The Kingstown. We bought cookies {more specific than food}, two plastic fidget spinners {again, more specific}, and a dog toy. I yawned repeatedly as he continued his errands {show, not tell; vocabulary}. Ali got a cat toy as well, but I didn’t. At the end, I complained about the unfairness of this, especially since I'm the one who has the well-behaved cat.
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- Raspberryy
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
Here's my join application! Sorry if I didn't do it right. I've never made one before.
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Which Section? Fiction Writing
Examples: Here's an example:She rummaged through the drawer desperately. She didn't have much time. Just as she caught sight of her book, she heard footsteps coming from outside. Somebody was coming. She tried to grab the book, but the shiny cover slipped out of her sweaty hands and hit the floor with a loud thump. Panic gripped her like an icy claw and her head spun. She managed to grab the book and pushed it deep into her bag just as the door opened. She took a deep breath to steady herself and turned to face the doorway…I hope it's good enough. I can give a longer example if you want me to.
Are you following this topic? Yup! ^w^
Other: I can write very descriptive writing if you want me to.
I've moved back to my old account, @Hahgoot . Read this to see why.
- blossombreeze
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
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Which Section? I can do Fiction, Non-fiction and Critiquing. I can edit for style, but I'm not all that great at editing for grammar.
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Other: I can also do poetry and lyrics if you'd ever need someone in that capacity.
Which Section? I can do Fiction, Non-fiction and Critiquing. I can edit for style, but I'm not all that great at editing for grammar.
Examples: This is a fan-fiction I've been working on
Are you following this topic? I am now.
Other: I can also do poetry and lyrics if you'd ever need someone in that capacity.
“If your work still isn't done, blame the computer”- Fortune cookie “When in doubt blow it up” -Hawkeye
I followed both of these pieces of great advice and blew up my computer
define Goodness
forever
move (In Jesus's) steps
end
- XCat
- Scratcher
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
Accepted! Here's my join application! Sorry if I didn't do it right. I've never made one before.Username(/s): RaspberryyIf I didn't do this right, please tell me what I did wrong and I'll fix it.
Which Section? Fiction Writing
Examples: Here's an example:She rummaged through the drawer desperately. She didn't have much time. Just as she caught sight of her book, she heard footsteps coming from outside. Somebody was coming. She tried to grab the book, but the shiny cover slipped out of her sweaty hands and hit the floor with a loud thump. Panic gripped her like an icy claw and her head spun. She managed to grab the book and pushed it deep into her bag just as the door opened. She took a deep breath to steady herself and turned to face the doorway…I hope it's good enough. I can give a longer example if you want me to.
Are you following this topic? Yup! ^w^
Other: I can write very descriptive writing if you want me to.
- XCat
- Scratcher
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•
Accepted for Fiction, Nonfiction and Critique! Username(/s): blssombreeze
Which Section? I can do Fiction, Non-fiction and Critiquing. I can edit for style, but I'm not all that great at editing for grammar.
Examples: This is a fan-fiction I've been working on
Are you following this topic? I am now.
Other: I can also do poetry and lyrics if you'd ever need someone in that capacity.