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blackoutspur

Ok here you go!
Link
The game is an RPG adventure game where you play as a character who found a magic orb which gave him powers. To learn the powers he must find the Shadow Priest. To learn more of the story play the first game Link
Try and complete it in 48 hours
Thank you

mr_scientific

Link to project*:https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/197753705/
Any parts to review especially: nope
Details about the game (please, no spoilers)*: A platformer with unique set of traps, I can't give good descriptions without spoilers, but I think you will like it.
When you would like it to be completed by (must be at least 48 hours): As soon as possible
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I made a game called "The True Ninja". It may sound like a rip-off to @Will_Wams the ninja series but I made it quite a bit different. The second game is out is now out and in my opinion, is much better than the first. Click here to see some other games I made!

I am willing to help, as long as it is in my capability to do so. (I think I am a decent programmer but not the best artist).

When asking help (to me or anyone else), attempt first, if you encounter trouble, that's when you ask help. If I created your scripts, then it would be hard for you to understand what they do. If you attempted but it did not work out, you will at least have an idea of what each script does and it will be easy to identify the modifications that made your script work. TLDR; Try, and ask help if if it does not work out

“It is the job that never started that takes the longest time to finish”- Samwise from Lord of the Rings

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mr_scientific wrote:
Link to project*:https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/197753705/
Any parts to review especially: nope
Details about the game (please, no spoilers)*: A platformer with unique set of traps, I can't give good descriptions without spoilers, but I think you will like it.
When you would like it to be completed by (must be at least 48 hours): As soon as possible
Other/miscellaneous: Please notify on profile once done

blackoutspur wrote:
Ok here you go!
Link
The game is an RPG adventure game where you play as a character who found a magic orb which gave him powers. To learn the powers he must find the Shadow Priest. To learn more of the story play the first game Link
Try and complete it in 48 hours
Thank you

Both taken due to Holly_The_Cat not checking up. They may take longer than expected, sorry.

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hellounicorns2 wrote:
mr_scientific wrote:
Link to project*:https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/197753705/
Any parts to review especially: nope
Details about the game (please, no spoilers)*: A platformer with unique set of traps, I can't give good descriptions without spoilers, but I think you will like it.
When you would like it to be completed by (must be at least 48 hours): As soon as possible
Other/miscellaneous: Please notify on profile once done
blackoutspur wrote:
Ok here you go!
Link
The game is an RPG adventure game where you play as a character who found a magic orb which gave him powers. To learn the powers he must find the Shadow Priest. To learn more of the story play the first game Link
Try and complete it in 48 hours
Thank you
Both taken due to Holly_The_Cat not checking up. They may take longer than expected, sorry.

Sorry for inactivity, my computer was not letting scratch show up. I can take them now. Apologies for any delays.

Holly_The_Cat

Review for blackoutspur. by Holly_The_Cat

Pros (good things)
This Project contains very original ideas for the characters especially:

The Minotaur
The vampire bat (who I assume is your nemesis)
The pixel art player.

I really enjoyed the range of types of art. There was good pixel art and also good realistic art.

Cons (things that need to be improved)
This project is quite challenging (though you may think of this as good)
Some levels are quite hard to know what to do.

Bugs and Glitches
In the level where you meet the minotaur I got stuck on the wall.
Sometimes the sword doesn't work.

Thanks for shopping with Coastal Reviews!

hellounicorns2

mr_scientific wrote:
Link to project*:https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/197753705/
Any parts to review especially: nope
Details about the game (please, no spoilers)*: A platformer with unique set of traps, I can't give good descriptions without spoilers, but I think you will like it.
When you would like it to be completed by (must be at least 48 hours): As soon as possible
Other/miscellaneous: Please notify on profile once done

This order still needs to be completed

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Review for mr_scientific. by Holly_The_Cat

Pros (good things)
This project is very original with it being about shapes.
It uses WASD and the arrow keys.
The platform code is quite fluid.
Cons (things that need to be improved)
The intro is very long
The wall jumping is a bit blocky
Bugs and Glitches
None found

Thanks for shopping with Coastal Reviews!

hellounicorns2

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