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aleynesansonnet
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My second character:

Name: Favian Ayers
Age: 42
Gender: Male
Appearance: Grey hair, tall
Personality: Stern, no-nonsense, empathetic but hides it, Intelligent and quick-minded

Title: *Former* General
Land Owned (Optional): None

Talents: Historical analysis; Military strategy, Charisma, Persuasion
Place of Residence: Lynnes
Backstory: Favian was the younger son of the Duke of Basburg two generations before. He joined the army at 13 to escape royal titles and worked his way to General over the next 20 years. Her retired to allow fresh leadership after spending time planning an ambush on what ended up being a nonexistent Deneran army. He now teaches History at and oversees the University of Andelyn in Lynnes.
Relatives: Born to the Duke of Basburg (2 generations prior to this one) in later years; Much younger cousin of previous monarch





Thunderlily
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aleynesansonnet wrote:

Thunderlily wrote:

Hi! I've decided we should look at the points or alter the backstory a little bit if it gets to complicated.Looking at the main problem, (if the previous monarch would have passed away yet) we could be able to he/she did, if we decided she could have died younger of illness. Also, the second point of her never having a higher role, I don't mind too much, because like you said it gives more of a chance for the university.
Another thing is, this whole ordeal could be very complicated later on, so we could alter most of the backstory altogether? Maybe Viridi could have been the Monarch's niece, and was taken in as a princess after the disappearance of said sibling of the Monarch. Either way, Virdi is very complicated character that I bet will be very interesting in the RPs, thanks for accepting her.

Well I think it's perfectly reasonable that the current monarch could have had Viridi previous to her role as a Monarch. It would probably be more believable than not because there would be little time for fooling around after ascending to the throne. The time of birth would not affect legitimacy as at least a child of the Monarch, not matter who it was with.

Alright, then I guess it's decided! Viridi is a long lost princess of the Monarch. You are also correct that time of birth wouldn't affect anything too much, so I guess that's most of the plotholes filled Do you want to maybe roleplay?

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aleynesansonnet
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Thunderlily wrote:

Alright, then I guess it's decided! Viridi is a long lost princess of the Monarch. You are also correct that time of birth wouldn't affect anything too much, so I guess that's most of the plotholes filled Do you want to maybe roleplay?

With Favian, sure. I'd say with Ala, but she's in Rykesborough





Firewhale
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Is it possible to become a personal servant of a nobility?

Offtropical Island. Check it out. \/

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aleynesansonnet
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Firewhale wrote:

Is it possible to become a personal servant of a nobility?
Yep





aleynesansonnet
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Bump





aleynesansonnet
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aleynesansonnet wrote:

Bump
Who wants to RP with Favian?





XCat
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Character Application:


Nobility
Name: (Queen?) Althea
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Appearance: She has long golden hair going down to her hips, and stunning blue eyes. She is quite slim, and commonly dresses in long gowns, especially indigo-coloured gowns, and usually wears the crown when in public.
Personality: Independent, intelligent, has very little emotional understanding of others, doubtful of other's thoughts, sometimes disrespectful of other's opinions.

Title: Monarch
Land Owned (Optional):

Talents: Attracting men (lol I want her to have a few suitors), creating laws, writing novels and rather fit.
Place of Residence: Reylin, I assume. Probably in some grand palace.
Backstory: As the eldest of her siblings, she was often too busy gossiping with the young ladies of the court, and often neglected her siblings. When she was fifteen, she visited a town in need. She fell in love with a commoner, and gave birth to the royal illegitimate (surrounded by her most trusted servants.) She then secretly tried to pass off her baby, and failed. She secretly hired a nurse, and saw her baby whenever possible. At age seventeen, she was married to the handsome but stupid Duke Messa. He then died in a non-suspicious riding accident. (If anyone wants, they can be a legitimate child of her and Duke Messa.) When she became Monarch, she vowed to stay single forever, and is to this day.
Relatives: Ala, Alf, Viridi + other yet to be RPed as relations + distant relations



aleynesansonnet
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XCat wrote:

Character Application:


Nobility
Name: (Queen?) Althea
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Appearance: She has long golden hair going down to her hips, and stunning blue eyes. She is quite slim, and commonly dresses in long gowns, especially indigo-coloured gowns, and usually wears the crown when in public.
Personality: Independent, intelligent, has very little emotional understanding of others, doubtful of other's thoughts, sometimes disrespectful of other's opinions.

Title: Monarch
Land Owned (Optional):

Talents: Attracting men (lol I want her to have a few suitors), creating laws, writing novels and rather fit.
Place of Residence: Reylin, I assume. Probably in some grand palace.
Backstory: As the eldest of her siblings, she was often too busy gossiping with the young ladies of the court, and often neglected her siblings. When she was fifteen, she visited a town in need. She fell in love with a commoner, and gave birth to the royal illegitimate (surrounded by her most trusted servants.) She then secretly tried to pass off her baby, and failed. She secretly hired a nurse, and saw her baby whenever possible. At age seventeen, she was married to the handsome but stupid Duke Messa. He then died in a non-suspicious riding accident. (If anyone wants, they can be a legitimate child of her and Duke Messa.) When she became Monarch, she vowed to stay single forever, and is to this day.
Relatives: Ala, Alf, Viridi + other yet to be RPed as relations + distant relations


Everything is fine but the appearance, she would have red or brown hair and green or brown eyes to fit with genetics





XCat
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aleynesansonnet wrote:

XCat wrote:

Character Application:


Nobility
Name: (Queen?) Althea
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Appearance: She has long golden hair going down to her hips, and stunning blue eyes. She is quite slim, and commonly dresses in long gowns, especially indigo-coloured gowns, and usually wears the crown when in public.
Personality: Independent, intelligent, has very little emotional understanding of others, doubtful of other's thoughts, sometimes disrespectful of other's opinions.

Title: Monarch
Land Owned (Optional):

Talents: Attracting men (lol I want her to have a few suitors), creating laws, writing novels and rather fit.
Place of Residence: Reylin, I assume. Probably in some grand palace.
Backstory: As the eldest of her siblings, she was often too busy gossiping with the young ladies of the court, and often neglected her siblings. When she was fifteen, she visited a town in need. She fell in love with a commoner, and gave birth to the royal illegitimate (surrounded by her most trusted servants.) She then secretly tried to pass off her baby, and failed. She secretly hired a nurse, and saw her baby whenever possible. At age seventeen, she was married to the handsome but stupid Duke Messa. He then died in a non-suspicious riding accident. (If anyone wants, they can be a legitimate child of her and Duke Messa.) When she became Monarch, she vowed to stay single forever, and is to this day.
Relatives: Ala, Alf, Viridi + other yet to be RPed as relations + distant relations


Everything is fine but the appearance, she would have red or brown hair and green or brown eyes to fit with genetics
Okay, she hereby has brown hair and brown eyes!

Mist2006
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Name: Mallow Eira Anwen Pryce of Redding
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Appearance: Large green eyes and high cheekbones, curly tangled black hair to her shoulders and a humored and crafty face. Laugh lines. Pale skin.
Personality: Not one for living the high life, Mallow is a loud, opinionated speaker who has a trick or two up her sleeve in case anyone tries to cross her. She has quite the crafty personality and stirs up trouble constantly.

Title: Marquess (yes, I meant to write that) of Redding. In Full: Mallow of the Wit, Marquess of Redding (Preferred: the Marquess)
Land Owned (Optional): A small stretch of land along a lake in Redding. Also, she owns most of the lake.

Talents: Social speaking, stirring up trouble, combat (though she may not look it), and, as her title implies, thinking herself out of situations, strategy, and craftiness.
Place of Residence: She lives in a temple, down off Fenroot, that had been abandoned before she took up residence there. Now she keeps the place polished and shining with stained-glass windows.
Backstory: Mallow was born the middle child of four, having one older sister, and two younger twin siblings, one boy, one girl. Mallow was always a feisty child, getting in trouble with the boys in her village. One she grew older, some of that feistiness appeared in extreme cleverness. She could tell you which were mouse tracks and which were vole and lemming tracks just by looking at them. Because of her status as a distant cousin of the line, she was treated with sometimes a little disdain by other nobles because she did not represent how a noble was supposed to act. But Mallow, like many of her siblings, didn't feel much connection with the royal family, and instead saw herself as an ordinary, if a little above average in wealth, commoner. She was appointed Marchioness, but after a private talk with the Monarch, her title suddenly changed to Marquess. Rumor has it that she got the Monarch to change her title because she didn't want to be underestimated.
Relatives: Mallow is the Monarch's 3rd cousin. Which means she's the Monarch's father's father's mother's sister's son's daughter's daughter.
(Does anyone get my stunningly obvious reference to a book series?)

Last edited by Mist2006 (Feb. 17, 2018 13:09:18)


Meow!
Mist



Everybody wants to change the world but nobody wants to changeThere is a madness to my methodThey said I couldn't, so I didI didn't lie, I circumnavigated the truthDefy monotonyKnowledge is a weapon, and I intend to be formidably armedWisdom begins in wonderWe are born to be real, not perfectBeautiful faces are everywhere, but beautiful minds are hard to findI'm not crazy, my reality is just different than yoursTrust your own madness


“Chief's been outta the army / Fifteen years or more / He's still marchin' up an' down that street / Just like ‘e was a-walkin’ to war.” —Patty Griffin, Chief
“The soldier came knocking upon the queen's door / He said ‘I am not fighting for you anymore.’ / And the queen knew she'd seen his face someplace before / So slowly she let him inside.” —Suzanne Vega, The Queen and the Soldier
“Sticks and stones, they may break these bones, but then / I'll be ready, are you ready? / It's the start of us waking up, come on / I'll be ready, are you ready? / I don't want control, I want to let go / I'll be ready, are you ready? / Now it's time to let them know / What about us?” —P!nk, What About Us?
“Have some tea, my Lord / Some chrysanthemum tea / It's an herb that's superb / For disturbances at sea.” —Steven Sondheim, Chrysanthemum Tea
“I am a stranger / In a strange place, where everything is so familiar / It’s been so long since I’ve seen these faces / That look like mine, but I don’t belong.” —Sharon Goldman, Land of Milk and Honey
aleynesansonnet
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XCat wrote:

aleynesansonnet wrote:

XCat wrote:

Character Application:


Nobility
Name: (Queen?) Althea
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Appearance: She has long golden hair going down to her hips, and stunning blue eyes. She is quite slim, and commonly dresses in long gowns, especially indigo-coloured gowns, and usually wears the crown when in public.
Personality: Independent, intelligent, has very little emotional understanding of others, doubtful of other's thoughts, sometimes disrespectful of other's opinions.

Title: Monarch
Land Owned (Optional):

Talents: Attracting men (lol I want her to have a few suitors), creating laws, writing novels and rather fit.
Place of Residence: Reylin, I assume. Probably in some grand palace.
Backstory: As the eldest of her siblings, she was often too busy gossiping with the young ladies of the court, and often neglected her siblings. When she was fifteen, she visited a town in need. She fell in love with a commoner, and gave birth to the royal illegitimate (surrounded by her most trusted servants.) She then secretly tried to pass off her baby, and failed. She secretly hired a nurse, and saw her baby whenever possible. At age seventeen, she was married to the handsome but stupid Duke Messa. He then died in a non-suspicious riding accident. (If anyone wants, they can be a legitimate child of her and Duke Messa.) When she became Monarch, she vowed to stay single forever, and is to this day.
Relatives: Ala, Alf, Viridi + other yet to be RPed as relations + distant relations

Everything is fine but the appearance, she would have red or brown hair and green or brown eyes to fit with genetics
Okay, she hereby has brown hair and brown eyes!
Okay! Accepted

Last edited by aleynesansonnet (Feb. 17, 2018 18:16:36)






aleynesansonnet
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Mist2006 wrote:

Name: Mallow Eira Anwen Pryce of Redding
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Appearance: Large green eyes and high cheekbones, curly tangled black hair to her shoulders and a humored and crafty face. Laugh lines. Pale skin.
Personality: Not one for living the high life, Mallow is a loud, opinionated speaker who has a trick or two up her sleeve in case anyone tries to cross her. She has quite the crafty personality and stirs up trouble constantly.

Title: Marquess (yes, I meant to write that) of Redding. In Full: Mallow of the Wit, Marquess of Redding (Preferred: the Marquess)
Land Owned (Optional): A small stretch of land along a lake in Redding. Also, she owns most of the lake.

Talents: Social speaking, stirring up trouble, combat (though she may not look it), and, as her title implies, thinking herself out of situations, strategy, and craftiness.
Place of Residence: She lives in a temple, down off Fenroot, that had been abandoned before she took up residence there. Now she keeps the place polished and shining with stained-glass windows.
Backstory: Mallow was born the middle child of four, having one older sister, and two younger twin siblings, one boy, one girl. Mallow was always a feisty child, getting in trouble with the boys in her village. One she grew older, some of that feistiness appeared in extreme cleverness. She could tell you which were mouse tracks and which were vole and lemming tracks just by looking at them. Because of her status as a distant cousin of the line, she was treated with sometimes a little disdain by other nobles because she did not represent how a noble was supposed to act. But Mallow, like many of her siblings, didn't feel much connection with the royal family, and instead saw herself as an ordinary, if a little above average in wealth, commoner. She was appointed Marchioness, but after a private talk with the Monarch, her title suddenly changed to Marquess. Rumor has it that she got the Monarch to change her title because she didn't want to be underestimated.
Relatives: Mallow is the Monarch's 3rd cousin. Which means she's the Monarch's father's father's mother's sister's son's daughter's daughter.
(Does anyone get my stunningly obvious reference to a book series?)
I do not, but you're accepted





Mist2006
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aleynesansonnet wrote:

Mist2006 wrote:

Name: Mallow Eira Anwen Pryce of Redding
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Appearance: Large green eyes and high cheekbones, curly tangled black hair to her shoulders and a humored and crafty face. Laugh lines. Pale skin.
Personality: Not one for living the high life, Mallow is a loud, opinionated speaker who has a trick or two up her sleeve in case anyone tries to cross her. She has quite the crafty personality and stirs up trouble constantly.

Title: Marquess (yes, I meant to write that) of Redding. In Full: Mallow of the Wit, Marquess of Redding (Preferred: the Marquess)
Land Owned (Optional): A small stretch of land along a lake in Redding. Also, she owns most of the lake.

Talents: Social speaking, stirring up trouble, combat (though she may not look it), and, as her title implies, thinking herself out of situations, strategy, and craftiness.
Place of Residence: She lives in a temple, down off Fenroot, that had been abandoned before she took up residence there. Now she keeps the place polished and shining with stained-glass windows.
Backstory: Mallow was born the middle child of four, having one older sister, and two younger twin siblings, one boy, one girl. Mallow was always a feisty child, getting in trouble with the boys in her village. One she grew older, some of that feistiness appeared in extreme cleverness. She could tell you which were mouse tracks and which were vole and lemming tracks just by looking at them. Because of her status as a distant cousin of the line, she was treated with sometimes a little disdain by other nobles because she did not represent how a noble was supposed to act. But Mallow, like many of her siblings, didn't feel much connection with the royal family, and instead saw herself as an ordinary, if a little above average in wealth, commoner. She was appointed Marchioness, but after a private talk with the Monarch, her title suddenly changed to Marquess. Rumor has it that she got the Monarch to change her title because she didn't want to be underestimated.
Relatives: Mallow is the Monarch's 3rd cousin. Which means she's the Monarch's father's father's mother's sister's son's daughter's daughter.
(Does anyone get my stunningly obvious reference to a book series?)
I do not, but you're accepted
Thanks, I didn't think anyone would get it.

Meow!
Mist



Everybody wants to change the world but nobody wants to changeThere is a madness to my methodThey said I couldn't, so I didI didn't lie, I circumnavigated the truthDefy monotonyKnowledge is a weapon, and I intend to be formidably armedWisdom begins in wonderWe are born to be real, not perfectBeautiful faces are everywhere, but beautiful minds are hard to findI'm not crazy, my reality is just different than yoursTrust your own madness


“Chief's been outta the army / Fifteen years or more / He's still marchin' up an' down that street / Just like ‘e was a-walkin’ to war.” —Patty Griffin, Chief
“The soldier came knocking upon the queen's door / He said ‘I am not fighting for you anymore.’ / And the queen knew she'd seen his face someplace before / So slowly she let him inside.” —Suzanne Vega, The Queen and the Soldier
“Sticks and stones, they may break these bones, but then / I'll be ready, are you ready? / It's the start of us waking up, come on / I'll be ready, are you ready? / I don't want control, I want to let go / I'll be ready, are you ready? / Now it's time to let them know / What about us?” —P!nk, What About Us?
“Have some tea, my Lord / Some chrysanthemum tea / It's an herb that's superb / For disturbances at sea.” —Steven Sondheim, Chrysanthemum Tea
“I am a stranger / In a strange place, where everything is so familiar / It’s been so long since I’ve seen these faces / That look like mine, but I don’t belong.” —Sharon Goldman, Land of Milk and Honey
aleynesansonnet
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Mist2006 wrote:

aleynesansonnet wrote:

Mist2006 wrote:

-snip
I do not, but you're accepted
Thanks, I didn't think anyone would get it.
what's the reference?





MegaByteCorporations
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hey guys

Trust, but verify ⅼ There is a madness to my method ⅼ Always outnumbered, never outclassed ⅼ They said I couldn't, so I did ⅼ I didn't lie, I circumnavigated the truth ⅼ Determination is the wake up call to the human will ⅼ I don't want to hurt you. And you know that I can ⅼ People can change - there is reason for hope ⅼ True friends stab you in the front ⅼ No I'm not ‘giving up’ I'm just too classy to fight an idiot like you
aleynesansonnet
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MegaByteCorporations wrote:

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awsome_guy_360
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Seems quite interesting. Count me in!

Name: Marlson Fraiyer
Age: 19
Gender: ♂
Appearance: Brown eyes and short cut hair, scruffy, 5' ½“. Constantly wears a frown on his face, and has a stern focused look in his eyes. His usual clothing consists of a beige blouse and a pair of brown cotton pants.

Personality: On job he's a serious loyal individual, usually taking orders to the finest detail if necessary or instructed without question depending on his mood and authority of such person.

However, in stressed situations or any other circumstances where he'd feel decently upset, he will tend to be more sarcastic and ill tempered.


Title: Navy Captain
Land Owned (Optional): -

Talents: Has an impressive amount of intelligence in arithmetic, as well as very stable footing. Other than that, he is experienced in fist to fist combat and able to defend himself with a shortsword.
Place of Residence: Lorcan

Backstory: At the age of 11, he and his father lived in the capital of Basburg; Rykesborough. As a captain of the army, it wasn't uncommon that his father would be away to lead a platoon during times of war, or to organize a minor operation. During these times, Marlson usually spent these moments with his uncle, who was a fisherman. His uncle lived by a lakeside away from any signs of other present habitation. This is where he would reel in his catch, then travel off back into the city to be sold to a merchant: An old friend of his. Marlson would spend this time either staying inside the hut, teaching himself when he himself wasn't in his classes, or sit silently with his uncle watching him reel in the fish, or stare out into the waters before him. He would sometimes put a twig, leaf, or a previously carved small bowl or platform on the water, and watch it float away.

A couple years later, they both moved to Lorcan. While Marlson constantly ask his father, he never got a straight answer. Yesterday it was ”there has been many reports saying that this is the head of a forming rebellion“ today it was ”I thought it would be nice to live closer to the ocean". Eventually Marlson gave up. He never minded the city anyways.

At the age of 16, Marlson became a sailor. At the age of 19, through performance, leading to promotion, he eventually became a commander.

Relatives: Only known child. No important ancestry.


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aleynesansonnet
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awsome_guy_360 wrote:

Seems quite interesting. Count me in!

Name: Marlson Fraiyer
Age: 19
Gender: ♂
Appearance: Brown eyes and short cut hair, scruffy, 5' ½“. Constantly wears a frown on his face, and has a stern focused look in his eyes. His usual clothing consists of a beige blouse and a pair of brown cotton pants.

Personality: On job he's a serious loyal individual, usually taking orders to the finest detail if necessary or instructed without question depending on his mood and authority of such person.

However, in stressed situations or any other circumstances where he'd feel decently upset, he will tend to be more sarcastic and ill tempered.


Title: Navy Captain
Land Owned (Optional): -

Talents: Has an impressive amount of intelligence in arithmetic, as well as very stable footing. Other than that, he is experienced in fist to fist combat and able to defend himself with a shortsword.
Place of Residence: Lorcan

Backstory: At the age of 11, he and his father lived in the capital of Basburg; Rykesborough. As a captain of the army, it wasn't uncommon that his father would be away to lead a platoon during times of war, or to organize a minor operation. During these times, Marlson usually spent these moments with his uncle, who was a fisherman. His uncle lived by a lakeside away from any signs of other present habitation. This is where he would reel in his catch, then travel off back into the city to be sold to a merchant: An old friend of his. Marlson would spend this time either staying inside the hut, teaching himself when he himself wasn't in his classes, or sit silently with his uncle watching him reel in the fish, or stare out into the waters before him. He would sometimes put a twig, leaf, or a previously carved small bowl or platform on the water, and watch it float away.

A couple years later, they both moved to Lorcan. While Marlson constantly ask his father, he never got a straight answer. Yesterday it was ”there has been many reports saying that this is the head of a forming rebellion“ today it was ”I thought it would be nice to live closer to the ocean". Eventually Marlson gave up. He never minded the city anyways.

At the age of 16, Marlson became a sailor. At the age of 19, through performance, leading to promotion, he eventually became a commander.

Relatives: Only known child. No important ancestry.
Accepted





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aleynesansonnet wrote:

Accepted
Ty :P


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