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Ryasis
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The Synchronize Trilogy: rants, excerpts, and anything that belongs in a pigpen

cheese-duck wrote:

Ryasis wrote:

owlannaelsa wrote:

cheese-duck wrote:

owlannaelsa wrote:

cheese-duck wrote:

cheese-duck a year ago wrote:

I don't think i can be obsessed with two things at the same time.
Look how far I have come
Obsessed with cheese, Synchro, and Pokemon at the same
Look at me loving Jet and Ada and Evlon and Kayor
And N and Zinnia and Steven and Volkner and Bugsy
ALL AT THE SAME TIME

also remember when i ranted about geoplex?
yeah i wrote this post listening to StarDrive and wound up trying to make it sound like a song
I can be: Slushii, Alan Walker and Zedd
ah slushii
that's a name i haven't heard since monstercat rocket league vol. 1
are you still into clean bandit and taiko?
yes
(I was constantly listening to Brain Freeze)
I personally can be obsessed with more than one thing at once since I'm currently obsessed with Vento Aureo, Diamond is Unbreakable, Queen, Imagine Dragons, Daft Punk, and rock in general at the same time

speaking of that cheese duck do you use music as inspiration for this trilogy?
Yeah, I guess, I've written themes for a few characters actually
And I usually listen to music while writing

I totally didn't read “Diamond is Unbreakable” as “Diamond and Pearl”
Totally

Pearl is unbreakable

Smug scottish ego
cheese-duck
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The Synchronize Trilogy: rants, excerpts, and anything that belongs in a pigpen

Ryasis wrote:

cheese-duck wrote:

Ryasis wrote:

owlannaelsa wrote:

cheese-duck wrote:

owlannaelsa wrote:

cheese-duck wrote:

cheese-duck a year ago wrote:

I don't think i can be obsessed with two things at the same time.
Look how far I have come
Obsessed with cheese, Synchro, and Pokemon at the same
Look at me loving Jet and Ada and Evlon and Kayor
And N and Zinnia and Steven and Volkner and Bugsy
ALL AT THE SAME TIME

also remember when i ranted about geoplex?
yeah i wrote this post listening to StarDrive and wound up trying to make it sound like a song
I can be: Slushii, Alan Walker and Zedd
ah slushii
that's a name i haven't heard since monstercat rocket league vol. 1
are you still into clean bandit and taiko?
yes
(I was constantly listening to Brain Freeze)
I personally can be obsessed with more than one thing at once since I'm currently obsessed with Vento Aureo, Diamond is Unbreakable, Queen, Imagine Dragons, Daft Punk, and rock in general at the same time

speaking of that cheese duck do you use music as inspiration for this trilogy?
Yeah, I guess, I've written themes for a few characters actually
And I usually listen to music while writing

I totally didn't read “Diamond is Unbreakable” as “Diamond and Pearl”
Totally

Pearl is unbreakable
Unremakable

alexa play unwavering emotions
Ryasis
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1000+ posts

The Synchronize Trilogy: rants, excerpts, and anything that belongs in a pigpen

cheese-duck wrote:

Ryasis wrote:

cheese-duck wrote:

Ryasis wrote:

owlannaelsa wrote:

cheese-duck wrote:

owlannaelsa wrote:

cheese-duck wrote:

cheese-duck a year ago wrote:

I don't think i can be obsessed with two things at the same time.
Look how far I have come
Obsessed with cheese, Synchro, and Pokemon at the same
Look at me loving Jet and Ada and Evlon and Kayor
And N and Zinnia and Steven and Volkner and Bugsy
ALL AT THE SAME TIME

also remember when i ranted about geoplex?
yeah i wrote this post listening to StarDrive and wound up trying to make it sound like a song
I can be: Slushii, Alan Walker and Zedd
ah slushii
that's a name i haven't heard since monstercat rocket league vol. 1
are you still into clean bandit and taiko?
yes
(I was constantly listening to Brain Freeze)
I personally can be obsessed with more than one thing at once since I'm currently obsessed with Vento Aureo, Diamond is Unbreakable, Queen, Imagine Dragons, Daft Punk, and rock in general at the same time

speaking of that cheese duck do you use music as inspiration for this trilogy?
Yeah, I guess, I've written themes for a few characters actually
And I usually listen to music while writing

I totally didn't read “Diamond is Unbreakable” as “Diamond and Pearl”
Totally

Pearl is unbreakable
Unremakable

alexa play unwavering emotions
This is sadder than the thing with Okuysaku's father

Smug scottish ego
cheese-duck
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THIS IS A MIRACLE YALLS THIS IS A FREAKING, CABBAGING MIRACLE
I'm motivated to write
YESSSSSSSSSS THANK THE SYNCHRO EQUIVALENT OF ARCEUS, IDK IF THAT'S SYANO OR ME EEEEEEEEEEEE THANK MY CONSCIENCE MY SPOOKY MYSTERIOUS INSPIRATION ENTITY

I swear I've seen a few miracles
And the time will surely come when you can see my point of view, I believe in second chances and that's why I believe in youuuu!

Idk that song is motivation converted to sound waves, that + Ash-Greninja theme + Sunyshore City + Azalea Town + writing playlist + Waterflame throwback time + other throwback time is probably what fueled this miracle
Ryasis
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The Synchronize Trilogy: rants, excerpts, and anything that belongs in a pigpen

cheese-duck wrote:

THIS IS A MIRACLE YALLS THIS IS A FREAKING, CABBAGING MIRACLE
I'm motivated to write
YESSSSSSSSSS THANK THE SYNCHRO EQUIVALENT OF ARCEUS, IDK IF THAT'S SYANO OR ME EEEEEEEEEEEE THANK MY CONSCIENCE MY SPOOKY MYSTERIOUS INSPIRATION ENTITY

I swear I've seen a few miracles
And the time will surely come when you can see my point of view, I believe in second chances and that's why I believe in youuuu!

Idk that song is motivation converted to sound waves, that + Ash-Greninja theme + Sunyshore City + Azalea Town + writing playlist + Waterflame throwback time + other throwback time is probably what fueled this miracle
CHEESEDUCK HAS A NEW MUSE! Who's the lucky boy/girl/cabbage

Smug scottish ego
cheese-duck
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The Synchronize Trilogy: rants, excerpts, and anything that belongs in a pigpen

Ryasis wrote:

cheese-duck wrote:

THIS IS A MIRACLE YALLS THIS IS A FREAKING, CABBAGING MIRACLE
I'm motivated to write
YESSSSSSSSSS THANK THE SYNCHRO EQUIVALENT OF ARCEUS, IDK IF THAT'S SYANO OR ME EEEEEEEEEEEE THANK MY CONSCIENCE MY SPOOKY MYSTERIOUS INSPIRATION ENTITY

I swear I've seen a few miracles
And the time will surely come when you can see my point of view, I believe in second chances and that's why I believe in youuuu!

Idk that song is motivation converted to sound waves, that + Ash-Greninja theme + Sunyshore City + Azalea Town + writing playlist + Waterflame throwback time + other throwback time is probably what fueled this miracle
CHEESEDUCK HAS A NEW MUSE! Who's the lucky boy/girl/cabbage
/cactus
Ryasis
Scratcher
1000+ posts

The Synchronize Trilogy: rants, excerpts, and anything that belongs in a pigpen

cheese-duck wrote:

Ryasis wrote:

cheese-duck wrote:

THIS IS A MIRACLE YALLS THIS IS A FREAKING, CABBAGING MIRACLE
I'm motivated to write
YESSSSSSSSSS THANK THE SYNCHRO EQUIVALENT OF ARCEUS, IDK IF THAT'S SYANO OR ME EEEEEEEEEEEE THANK MY CONSCIENCE MY SPOOKY MYSTERIOUS INSPIRATION ENTITY

I swear I've seen a few miracles
And the time will surely come when you can see my point of view, I believe in second chances and that's why I believe in youuuu!

Idk that song is motivation converted to sound waves, that + Ash-Greninja theme + Sunyshore City + Azalea Town + writing playlist + Waterflame throwback time + other throwback time is probably what fueled this miracle
CHEESEDUCK HAS A NEW MUSE! Who's the lucky boy/girl/cabbage
/cactus
Yeah I forgot. You seem like the type who would fall in love with a caucus

Smug scottish ego
cheese-duck
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tfw you screw up the worldbuilding and dead guys are op
CrimsonCrusade
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when you have an amazing idea but never want to write it or draw it and can't even code it

Domo arigato.
--_Nova_--
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cheese-duck wrote:

tfw you screw up the worldbuilding and dead guys are op
i'm interested in the origins of that post

cheese-duck
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CrimsonCrusade wrote:

when you have an amazing idea but never want to write it or draw it and can't even code it
do you have social skills?
yes: get someone else to do it
no: get social skills and ask someone else to do it
thank you for coming to my ted talk i hope you have a nice day

--_Nova_-- wrote:

cheese-duck wrote:

tfw you screw up the worldbuilding and dead guys are op
i'm interested in the origins of that post

me sometime ago, can't remember when and where though wrote:

vyrolian is a plot hole
CrimsonCrusade
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The Synchronize Trilogy: rants, excerpts, and anything that belongs in a pigpen

cheese-duck wrote:

CrimsonCrusade wrote:

when you have an amazing idea but never want to write it or draw it and can't even code it
do you have social skills?
yes: get someone else to do it
no: get social skills and ask someone else to do it
thank you for coming to my ted talk i hope you have a nice day
]

hold it! i can never get anyone to work with me… aaa… ok i've gotten some motivation to write it but… i can't do the best art… and don't get me started onn actually making it a game. (rip)

Domo arigato.
cheese-duck
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So I've re-started writing Scorpio for the third time.
Well, I haven't started re-writing it because this time, I'm planning it out. Making it make sense. I was going to write an outline for it– but just a sketch, not an in-depth thing, just a general idea of what form the plot will take. But then it turned into full blown summaries of every scene.
I don't know if this will be helpful, or if it'll drive me crazy. But I'll try it.
Yeah I turned from a complete “pantster” to a complete planner. That's weird. I never thought i'd be a complete planner.

Anyway this also made me realize I write stories like how I write music; I just jump in with no idea of structure and then I clean it up painfully later.

Oh also I realized there's not really a plot
Pretty much 50% of the whole thing is just introspection
So I inadvertently wrote 3 books about kids realizing that they're terrible people
cheese-duck
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i'm crying

I made a list of characters who I need to fix because they're underdeveloped or plot-holey or whatever and it's like almost every major-ish character (and some minor characters)
Yeah pretty much all of them except for Eric, Ada, and Renx
there's so much to fix aisekfjnjwa,msndfczl
i hate revising
cheese-duck
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so yeah a few days ago i realized that pascal is basically a litten
he has fire powers, is grouchy, likes cats, and gets progressively more incineroar over the series

okay and so eric is rowlet, because he's described as looking like an owl, and he's green

and i guess scorpio gets to be popplio, she seems pretty popplio-y i guess
though if i had to pick one pokemon to be scorpio, i'd probably say ariados… hmm, not protagonisty enough. pikachu now what's a protagonisty bug or poison type? the protagonistiest bug type i can think of is heracross, which does not fit her at all. and poison types are associated with villainous teams. well, drapion could work. maybe she could be lurantis. gardevoir, maybe… no, she's not pretty enough. maybe a ghost type… mismagius? mismagius seems pretty scorpy.

eric could be goodra, actually, because acid, dargons, and protagonistiness
cheese-duck
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I rebooted Scorpio again… this is the third time now…
I think it's going a little bit better. I've planned things out more. But there are some big holes I'll have to work on, probably before I hit the third chapter. Because then I'll get stuck. And when I get stuck, bad stuff goes down.

It's changed a lot. The beginning went from “Scorpio doesn't want to go to her sister's dance recital, some spiders bully her into going through a magical tunnel. She meets a giant scorpion and Melania Marlegrausse, who is friendly” to “Now she's in the toolshed because she's bored, and Melania is an angel” to “Now she's eating chicken on the deck and a giant wolf spider lures her to Melania, who got a personality reboot and is now an absolute buttface” to “Now she's taking a walk in the woods and the giant spider is now an orb weaver with anger management issues named Weaver and Melania's not just a buttface, she's insane”

Anyway, this new version has a lot more bugs. And it's in third person.
CrimsonCrusade
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“My favorite book is Magical Rainbow Pony Girl and the Curse of the Fairy Princess,” I'll give you a cookiee (yes a cookiee. Not a cookie. Because i'm a wookiee, i give people cookiees.)

And now, without further ado, I present to you a world of complete nonsense!



I probably won't post anything here for a month tbh
Last edited by cheese-duck (Jan. 6, 2018 19:43:00)


I did it


Gimme my cookie

And your soul


Domo arigato.
cheese-duck
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The Synchronize Trilogy: rants, excerpts, and anything that belongs in a pigpen

CrimsonCrusade wrote:

“My favorite book is Magical Rainbow Pony Girl and the Curse of the Fairy Princess,” I'll give you a cookiee (yes a cookiee. Not a cookie. Because i'm a wookiee, i give people cookiees.)

And now, without further ado, I present to you a world of complete nonsense!



I probably won't post anything here for a month tbh
Last edited by cheese-duck (Jan. 6, 2018 19:43:00)


I did it


Gimme my cookie

And your soul

1) here is your cookiee, enjoy
2) don't have a soul
cheese-duck
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my ideal brain: motivated to get stuff done, likes pokemon to a healthy extent and takes inspiration from it; jet and bugsy coexist peacefully, and i act like my favorite parts of both of them.
my true brain: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/292633458/
cheese-duck
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dead topic but it's jet's birthday today
no, proto, i'm not writing a flashback montage for you this year. you know what i am writing? you saying a very you-y quote about cathartically beating up fantasy creatures.
also math homework

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