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Linen! A not very hard platformer! you're a little bunny and you need to escape from the grey world! find all the diamonds and go home! Beat all 15 levels. all the levels are 100% possible

                   Here's the storyline for my new game called Linen
                Please tell me if there is any grammatical error in this story

                           Storyline:
It all started when Bunny, who lived in a very happy and colorful world, returned from playing with his friends in the park. On the road, he found a very bright light that glowed down a bridge, he decided to go down to see what it was and when he reached it he discovered that it was a floating diamond (nothing strange, right?). He wanted to know why it shone like that, so he touched it and the diamond shone as never before and bunny, stunned by all those lights, fell into a deep dream. Upon awakening, Bunny discovered that he wasn't in his colorful world that he knew and loved so much. He was in a gray and opaque world where everything was sad, he felt terrible, he just wanted to go home. So he got up and started his journey home, obviously not easy, but he knew he could get home. When he ventured into the woods of that gray world, Bunny found another brilliant diamond and obviously, he touched it again, but this time the diamond did not shine much, again, it took it to another place, but in the same gray world. After this happened about 15 times, bunny found a diamond (again) but this was not the same as the others, this was in the form of a house and touched it (thinking that it would be the same as with the others ) And you know what happened? Well, actually the answer is a total mystery, only the destiny could say what really happened. Was it all a dream? it wasn't? why? Where is this bunny? Tell me, what do you think happened?



  Tell me what do you think about this storyline and suggestions. Should i make Linen 2? As usual, follow for more amazing projects!

Very well-developed story! Love it very much

kevin_eleven_1234 wrote:

Very well-developed story! Love it very much

Thank you! ^-^

Why did you choose a rabbit Linen?

And I want to know Linen's profile!　Please?

519KAKe30 wrote:

Why did you choose a rabbit Linen?

And I want to know Linen's profile!　Please?

i don't understand what do you mean =P

P.S What is the rabbit's name? is it Limen?

519KAKe30 wrote:

P.S What is the rabbit's name? is it Limen?

the actual name it's just Bunny xD

You game was amazing!

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@Linen<<< Know way its a real profile!

I think that you must do Linen 2! You could make it about Buny how came out of the grey world however there is a portal that sucks him in to somewhere else and he/she must find the key or something to come out.

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Like the story, in fact you should make Linen 2 - A Platformer because it has amazing graphics the music is great, and the storyline is just fantastic!

Nice storyline!

watersprite1 wrote:

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say [how do you create gravity?]

A most basic gravity script is basicly just a script that uses move y an if to change the y of the player unless touching the ground. However, you can make it more complicated with wall jumping, in-game physics, special areas that affect gravity (like the water in Linen), or acceleration.

What I think happens next is:

After touching the last diamond It sends bunny home, but also creates a portal to the gray world, which starts to return color to it. Curious to see the new world in color, Bunny adventures threw the portal, finds the people of the new world, and helps them to restore their home to the wonderful world of color it was, Before the incident…

feel free to tell me what you think,or share your idea of how the color was lost in the new world.

I really like your game!

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Cannot wait

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@Linen

He joined 4 and a half years ago from Taiwan

After touching the last diamond, Bunny notice that he was in the starting location. He was suprised and curious. So, he decide to go on that adventure once again.
Oops, he slip and has a broken leg. Wow!

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