Review for:

8435 wrote:
Username: 8435
Subject of ReviewThe link to the project that you want reviewed): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/166439076/
Date of Completion: (when do you want it done): ASAP
Other: None.

Graphics: 10/10
Comments on Graphics: Wow!! I have never seen a animation like this!! The pen graphics don't even look like they are pen!!

Bugs: 10/10
What bugs were found: NA

Creativity: 10/10
Comments on Creativity: It was a very neat animation that I haven't really seen before.

Grammar in/out of project: 9/10
What you spelling/grammar mistakes found: In the instructions it should say “The flower of patterns.”

What could be improved: The one grammar mistake.
What you like: It was a very smooth and good looking animation.
Other comments: I think you have a good shot at that contest

Final wrap-up: Great animation!!
Overall score: 39/40 98%

tycool1 wrote:

Just got back 5 minutes ago!! Doing that first order now and the next one ASAP.

Thanks!

Hello, partner of BGMead's Shop!

Recently, we were given an order in which is currently uncompleted. Our shop came to the conclusion that no one was able to take it. Please review the order below and complete it if possible. Thank you!

Evan2963 wrote:

Animation
Username: Evan2963
What will happen: A walk cycle for a Buzzy Beetle from Mario drawn in the vector editor.
Sprites: It should look like a sketched version of this:
with as many costumes as you would like
Completion Date: ASAP
Miscellaneous: Thanks for the help!

Evan2963 wrote:

Username: Evan2963
Subject of ReviewThe link to the project that you want reviewed) https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/166245166/
Date of Completion: (when do you want it done) ASAP
Other: Please let me know what I should add!

I'm sorry, but you must have typed the url wrong, because the server can't find it. Please make sure that your url is correct.

Username: jump102
Description: Sprite with some frames for king boo with all his LMDM powers (3 costumes max
Deadline: July 10, 2017
Type: 8-32 bit (It's gonna be hard i know) in Bitmap(So it's easier)(Sprite)
Color: Pretty straightforward
Text: No
Other: 1: I want his purple jewel 8-32 bit too 2: Any power doesn't have to be 8-bit
Even more: I may make future orders for the same topic

tycool1 wrote:

Evan2963 wrote:

Username: Evan2963
Subject of ReviewThe link to the project that you want reviewed) https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/166245166/
Date of Completion: (when do you want it done) ASAP
Other: Please let me know what I should add!

I'm sorry, but you must have typed the url wrong, because the server can't find it. Please make sure that your url is correct.

Nvm, I don't need this order anymore

jump102 wrote:

Username: jump102
Description: Sprite with some frames for king boo with all his LMDM powers (3 costumes max
Deadline: July 10, 2017
Type: 8-32 bit (It's gonna be hard i know) in Bitmap(So it's easier)(Sprite)
Color: Pretty straightforward
Text: No
Other: 1: I want his purple jewel 8-32 bit too 2: Any power doesn't have to be 8-bit
Even more: I may make future orders for the same topic

I will need to make sure i get it in within the deadline, so i'll try a partner store

Username:Funnycoder
Type of Art: YT banner
Description:just a banner for my Youtube channle
Colours:black background purple letters
Text?Endermangamig
Date of Completion:
Other:Has to be 2560 x 1440 pixels

DEAR HUMBLE CHILDREN OF THE LAND,

GET YOUR DAILY DOSE OF SMOOTH JAZZ QUICK FOR THE CHICKENS ARE RESTLESS. HURRY BECAUSE CHARMANDER IS BEING DEFEATED BY THE SWAG OF THIS LETTER. KOOL AID MAN, ARE YOU INSANE?

SINSERALY, FOOT. (SANTA'S NON-EXSISTANT RAINDEER.)

TRANSLATION:

DEAR READER,

PLEASE EXCUSE ME FROM ABOUT 10 MINUTES FROM NOW TO THIS SUNDAY. I WILL BE ON VACATION. IN TERMS OF MY SHOP AND SSRP, BOTH WILL BE CLOSED MEANING NO ONE WILL BE ABLE TO SIGN UP, PARTNER, ORDER, ETC. THANK YOU.

- BGMead

Recap since page 15

Art:
Username: WhatDoYouThinks
Type of Art: Sprite
Description:A stick figure movement chain with a running, jumping, punching, and crouching costume.
Colours: Black
No text
Date of Completion: ASAP
Other: Alert me on my profile when done. (Colors is spelled wrong.)

Lotosprincess wrote:

Recap since page 15

We closed, then reopened, and had a bunch of orders.

Also, are you a member of this shop?? I don't see you on the members post.

tycool1 wrote:

Lotosprincess wrote:

Recap since page 15

We closed, then reopened, and had a bunch of orders.

Also, are you a member of this shop?? I don't see you on the members post.

I pretty sure I am

Reviews:
Username: makethebrainhappy
Subject of Review: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/99254785/
Date of Completion: Soon
Other: Please notify me on my profile when this order is complete.

makethebrainhappy wrote:

Reviews:
Username: makethebrainhappy
Subject of Review: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/99254785/
Date of Completion: Soon
Other: Please notify me on my profile when this order is complete.

Taken!! Will be done by the end of the day!!

Lotosprincess wrote:

tycool1 wrote:

Lotosprincess wrote:

Recap since page 15

We closed, then reopened, and had a bunch of orders.

Also, are you a member of this shop?? I don't see you on the members post.

I pretty sure I am

Do you think you were fired? I don't see a post that you made in this topic. Maybe you were part of the old shop on the old topic that is now closed. If that is the case you can use the form to apply:
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makethebrainhappy wrote:

Reviews:
Username: makethebrainhappy
Subject of Review: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/99254785/
Date of Completion: Soon
Other: Please notify me on my profile when this order is complete.

I already reviewed this in April, making it a duplicate order. However I redid my old review for this new one:

Graphics: 5/10
Comments on Graphics: Enough to get the job done. Very generic. A background would help improve that score.

Bugs: 8/10
What bugs were found: I died on level 4 yet it sent me back to re spawn on level 3. Same thing happens with other levels as well. I checked the instructions and credits to see if this was supposed to happen, yet didn't find anything. I also hit two red gobos, at the same time, causing the game to crash and go back in levels with nothing you can do.

Creativity: 6/10
Comments on Creativity: I've seem many platformers with moving platforms in them.

Fun: 8/10
What you found boring and how to improve: The platform moves so slow. It just gets boring after a while because it moves so slow. Maybe you could make a shop so it could go faster?
What you found fun: The game itself is very fun, especially with the music fitting in just right.

Grammar in/out of project: 10/10
What you spelling/grammar mistakes found: None.

What could be improved: The background, bugs listed above, and the replayability.
What you like: It was fun to play, and the music choice was excellent!
Other comments: Great game!!

Final wrap-up: The game is very fun and also unique in the platformer genre. It does start to feel repetitive after a while however, and the graphics could be improved.
Overall score: 37/50
74%

Bump!!

Username: 78ch3
Alt. Accounts (Please List): none
How Active Are You? Very active
Preferable Position: moderator
Example of Work:
Scrolling script

when gf clicked
set [scrollX v] to (0)
forever
set x to ((scrollX)+((480)*(1)))
end

I agree that I have read and understood all the rules, and any disagreements I have with them I have expressed to the owner(Yes or No): yes
Are you following the thread? Yes
Other:

Username: JustOscarJ2
Type of Art: (e.g. background, sprite, logo etc.) :Backround
Description:Make a cartoon 2D Pixel City
Colours: Any
Text?
Date of Completion: As soon * possible!
Other:

Programming//Debugging:
Username: channanlawson
Please Select: Programming or Debugging: Programming
Link to Project: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/158868335/
Which Sprite(s):
What you want it to do: Can it have sections and make it cleaner
Date of Completion: (When you want it done) As soon as possible
Other:
Thank you