Cowriting The Jenkins

AceBolt92

How 'bout this:

Panel 1
Barney- “Well, seems like my friend wants me to go somewhere.”

Panel 2
Junior- “Where?”
Barney- "Pennsylvania.“

Panel 3
Junior- ”That doesn't sound quite ‘write’ to me."

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UndertaleDipps

Hobson-TV wrote:
The comic cannot contain Monkey Cola.

move (30) steps

say [bye!]

move (100) steps

Last edited by UndertaleDipps (Dec. 29, 2016 03:31:02)

Did You Expect A Clever Signature? No.

peep6611

Butch is reading a brocure about caves.
Junior says, “That's very dull, isn't it?”
Junoir gets out his drum kit and goes, ba dum- crash

GLHgaming

UndertaleDipps wrote:
Hobson-TV wrote:
The comic cannot contain Monkey Cola.

Hobson-TV wrote:
Thanks! @ephamph's idea, @gilmy's idea, and @oceanatic's 2nd and 4th ideas will be used in the future. And, for @TheOccultist and others who are wondering, it's perfectly okay to reference Monkey Cola as long as the punchline isn't “Some of that fine monkey cola yes sir”.

Last edited by GLHgaming (Dec. 29, 2016 18:16:15)

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captainretroblitzer

HISTORY

TV: today we will be talking about the revolutionary war

TV: george washington made america free with………

TV: some of that fine monkey cola yes sir!!!!!

i know you said no monkey cola but this sounds really good

plz make this

Penwork

goldrank wrote:
Here is mine:
#1 Junior watches TV
#2 Butch switches it to a new channel and Junior says hey!
#3 Monkey Cola gets caught on camera
#4 Junior jumps for it
#5 Monkey Cola ad breaks and Junior gets busted

There can be only three slides.

Penwork

Mine Mine Mine Mine Mine!
Slide 1: Barney is in a grocery store. He says “I should probably get Junior…”
Slide 2: ( Barney continuing saying) He goes in the Monkey Cola pose. “Some of that fine-”
Slide 3: Barney is still in the pose but is interrupted by a shopper. “,Sir, I thought Hobson-TV said ‘No Monkey Cola catchphrases’ for his cartoons.”

M kay bai

Penwork

-CinemaSins- wrote:
Penwork wrote:
Mine Mine Mine Mine Mine!
Slide 1: Barney is in a grocery store. He says “I should probably get Junior…”
Slide 2: ( Barney continuing saying) He goes in the Monkey Cola pose. “Some of that fine-”
Slide 3: Barney is still in the pose but is interrupted by a shopper. “,Sir, I thought Hobson-TV said ‘No Monkey Cola catchphrases’ for his cartoons.”

M kay bai
People don't know him as Hobson-TV in the comic.

Exactly

Hobson-TV

I will do Penwork's idea (though I might just replace ‘Hobson-TV’ as ‘The Cartoonist’) and peep6611's idea. Also I'll revise AceBolt92's comic because I think the joke is a bit too subtle… Again, thanks to everyone for suggesting jokes!

I'm Batman!

iamafanofleo

Frame 1: Barney: I don't see why you like Monkey Cola so much, Coffee is better
Frame 2: Junior: You shouldn't have said that.
Frame 3:*Barney is reading a news paper with the headline “Coffee Trees Mysteriously Burned”

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SGB64

here's mine:

panel 1:
barney says “micheal bay movies suck!”

panel 2:
junior says “isn't he directing this com-”

panel 3 is a picture of an explosion

any good?

-MegaUmbreon-

SGB64 wrote:
here's mine:

panel 1:
barney says “micheal bay movies suck!”

panel 2:
junior says “isn't he directing this com-”

panel 3 is a picture of an explosion

any good?

THAT IS BEAUTIFUL

From,
Some furry with too much free time.

weirdpurr

Maybe this would work? (feel free to edit this)

( Setting: Butch and Barney are sitting by a window )

Butch: I bought a candy bar with nuts (shows candy bar)
Barney: What kind of nuts?
Butch: Actually, I used acorns to buy the bar from those squirrels. ( Points at squirrels outside window )

Last edited by weirdpurr (Jan. 6, 2017 21:43:32)

Penwork

Hobson-TV wrote:
I will do Penwork's idea (though I might just replace ‘Hobson-TV’ as ‘The Cartoonist’) and peep6611's idea. Also I'll revise AceBolt92's comic because I think the joke is a bit too subtle… Again, thanks to everyone for suggesting jokes!

Aw thanks!

Penwork

ANOTHER idea.

Slide 1: Barney is drinking coffee while reading the news. He finds a riddle and says it “What flies without wings?”

Slide 2: He thinks with that blank cloud bubble you use when the characters think.

Slide 3: He says “Illuminati.”

It's sorta bad, but I hope you'll think about using it.

buddergolem321

iamafanofleo wrote:
Frame 1: Barney: I don't see why you like Monkey Cola so much, Coffee is better
Frame 2: Junior: You shouldn't have said that.
Frame 3:*Barney is reading a news paper with the headline “Coffee Trees Mysteriously Burned”

GENIOUS!!

If You Think Something You Made Is Stupid… Then You're Probably Right, BUT That's Not Always A Bad Thing.

Wahsp

1. Barney is calling for junior.
2. Barney is looking around the basement.
3. Junior is shown with a cat in his mouth and Barney says: A cat's got his tongue.

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iamafanofleo

buddergolem321 wrote:
iamafanofleo wrote:
Frame 1: Barney: I don't see why you like Monkey Cola so much, Coffee is better
Frame 2: Junior: You shouldn't have said that.
Frame 3:*Barney is reading a news paper with the headline “Coffee Trees Mysteriously Burned”
GENIOUS!!

Thank you!

"hi"-pretty much every English speaking person

Mathician

My idea:
Setting: Car
Panel 1: *Three people in car, sign ahead. Sign says “TURN BACK”. * Junior: Butch, I think we should turn back. Butch (driver): Nah, the road ahead looks fine.
Panel 2: Car at dead end. Barney: Well, I guess we turn back.
Panel 3: Back of sign says: “WELCOME BACK, STUPID”.
I hope you consider! (Fell free to modify dialogue to your liking.)

Penwork

Mathician wrote:
My idea:
Setting: Car
Panel 1: *Three people in car, sign ahead. Sign says “TURN BACK”. * Junior: Butch, I think we should turn back. Butch (driver): Nah, the road ahead looks fine.
Panel 2: Car at dead end. Barney: Well, I guess we turn back.
Panel 3: Back of sign says: “WELCOME BACK, STUPID”.
I hope you consider! (Fell free to modify dialogue to your liking.)

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