Beginning:
Lina and Ash, who are both skilled at survival skills and magic, save Alexis from her city that is being attacked. The two of them vow to keep her safe and bring her to safety.

Middle:
While on there journey, they encounter many challenges and new people. Meanwhile, Alexis starts to learn magic from Lina and Ash. One night, Lina dreams of a man who tells her where she can find help. Lina believes the dream and tries to to journey to the place. When they arrive, they realize that it's a trick. Lina and Ash are both captured, but Alexis is able to escape. After spying on the man one night, she learns that he is draining magic from Lina and Ash to build something important. Desperate to save them from their fate, Alexis tries to rescue them. On her way, she meets the son of the man. He hopes to save her and tells her what she must do. Alexis tries too, but then fails. She realizes she must use all of her training in magic and survival to stay alive and save her friends.

Ending:
When the an realized that they escaped, he sends all his soldiers to find them. On there way to escape, they encounter a training camp for magicians, etc… There, they are protected and learn many new things.

-Suggest a new idea!!
-Suggest a character!!
-Suggest a twist or new thing in the story!

If I make this an RPG (Role Play Group), what will it be like?

Here's my idea:
At the camp, who learn magic and you choose what you will specialize in! You can also choose your companion and how it will look! You can also participate in missions, etc…!

This is a definite, I will definitely make this into an animated series!

Here are my steps to doing it:
-Draw storyboards and the dialogue (This includes point of view, and what the music or sound effect will be)
-Find voice actors, musicians, and sound effects
-Make the trailer
-Make the episodes

Brainstorm/Research It:
In this stage, I jot down any ideas that I have. If I don't have any ideas, I research ideas and read books to get inspired!

Choose It:
In this stage, I take my ideas and choose which will work best or will be the most interesting. I then update these into the plot that is written on the post above. (beginning, middle, ending)

Write It:
In this stage, I take the ideas that I choose and write it in book form. I think of the dialogue and try to picture, what the characters will think. This may be the hardest stage.

Revise It:
In this stage, I look at my writing and read it. Here if I feel like something doesn't make sense or doesn't fit in the story, I change it.

Edit It:
In this stage, I look for grammar, etc… I might also try to use better words or dialogue!

-Suggest a new idea!!
-Suggest a character!!
-Suggest a twist or new thing in the story!

If I make this an RPG (Role Play Group), what will it be like?

Here's my idea:
At the camp, who learn magic and you choose what you will specialize in! You can also choose your companion and how it will look! You can also participate in missions, etc…!

This is a definite, I will definitely make this into an animated series!

Here are my steps to doing it:
-Draw storyboards and the dialogue (This includes point of view, and what the music or sound effect will be)
-Find voice actors, musicians, and sound effects
-Make the trailer
-Make the episodes

Hi! This will be the changes! For example: If I were updating the plot, I would write the old plot and the updated plot! It would contain comments so that you understand what I changed!

Here, you can usually find links and extra info! For example: You might find the link to the studio if I made a studio! This might also contain some other updates that I have been working on but I can't show! I might have note like, “Working on the scripts, please give ideas!” or any other extra activities!

eh6239qr wrote:

Are you looking for people to actually help with scripting an RPG or just to suggest ideas?

eh6239qr wrote:

Understood

Once you get to the point where you are working on an RPG and need, say, a crafting system just keep me in mind.

Best of luck!

cutupuss wrote:

I can help voice act if you want! Good luck with this it sounds cool!

My Ideas:
-Alexis is having a dream and the story begins with her waking up
-She is having a nightmare about the attack on her city
-Lina is away on guard duty, but Ash is sleeping
-Lina hears something that she fears is dangerous and tells them they should move soon

What the character's act like:
-Lina: Brave, alert, calm - Age:12
Good at: archery, survival, magic, running

-Ash: Brave, Ready - Age: 13
Good at: Sword fighting, fighting in general, magic

-Alexis: Scared, Sometimes Brave, Loyal
Good at: Hiding, magic (this is after she learns it), finding her way in the night

Beginning:
Alexis woke up with a start. She sat bolt upright. With a small tremble, she looked around. No fire. No attack. In the corner, Lina stood with her bow at ready. “You okay?” Lina asked turning towards her. Alexis shuddered trying to calm herself down, “Yeah, just nightmares about… the attack…” She watched as a raindrop dropped from the tree onto the ground next to her. A small worried expression appeared on Lina's face, “It's okay, you're with us now, we'll take care of you.”

How Do You Help?
-comment what should happen next!
-comment other abilities the character should have!
-make a revision of the current beginning!

scratchtwins-691 wrote:

This sounds really interesting.

ForeverArtist wrote:

Plot Update:
Hi there! This is my first officially plot update! This is beginning for my new story! So, I have this written in book form! Here I have my brainstorming and write up!
Brainstorming:

My Ideas:
-Alexis is having a dream and the story begins with her waking up
-She is having a nightmare about the attack on her city
-Lina is away on guard duty, but Ash is sleeping
-Lina hears something that she fears is dangerous and tells them they should move soon

What the character's act like:
-Lina: Brave, alert, calm - Age:12
Good at: archery, survival, magic, running

-Ash: Brave, Ready - Age: 13
Good at: Sword fighting, fighting in general, magic

-Alexis: Scared, Sometimes Brave, Loyal
Good at: Hiding, magic (this is after she learns it), finding her way in the night

Plot:

Beginning:
Alexis woke up with a start. She sat bolt upright. With a small tremble, she looked around. No fire. No attack. In the corner, Lina stood with her bow at ready. “You okay?” Lina asked turning towards her. Alexis shuddered trying to calm herself down, “Yeah, just nightmares about… the attack…” She watched as a raindrop dropped from the tree onto the ground next to her. A small worried expression appeared on Lina's face, “It's okay, you're with us now, we'll take care of you.”

Extra Info:

How Do You Help?
-comment what should happen next!
-comment other abilities the character should have!
-make a revision of the current beginning!

say [Scratch On!]

My Ideas & Questions:
1. Developing Plot:
After the beginning, Lina tells them that they should move now that it is night, she guides them to a safe house that she knows. After getting there, they are soaking and wet. After changing into new clothes, Lina and Ash go out looking for berries and danger. Meanwhile, Alexis goes out exploring on her own. She meets and the boy teaches her…(comment ideas please)
2. Basic Plot:
What should some of the challenges be and why? (comment ideas please)

Beginning:
Alexis woke up with a start. She sat bolt upright. With a small tremble, she looked around. No fire. No attack. In the corner, Lina stood with her bow at ready. “You okay?” Lina asked turning towards her. Alexis shuddered trying to calm herself down, “Yeah, just nightmares about… the attack…” She watched as a raindrop dropped from the tree onto the ground next to her. A small worried expression appeared on Lina's face, “It's okay, you're with us now, we'll take care of you.” Alexis looked up at the sky for a moment, watching as the sky turned darker and darker. Again, she watched as a raindrop fell, but this time it feel on her face. She climbed under the shelter and slowly, fell asleep.
The next time she woke up, it was night time. She looked around to see nothing but the dark shadows and the sky filled with stars. “You're awake,” she heard Lina say. She turned to see Lina tending a fire. “Where's Ash?” Alexis asked. “He's gathering berries,” replied Lina, “We're moving now that it's night time. ”Why do we always move during the night?" asked Alexis. (need help!)

Beginning:
Lina and Ash, who are both skilled at survival skills and magic, save Alexis from her city that is being attacked. The two of them vow to keep her safe and bring her to safety. Lina's Powers: Talk to animals, sense danger Ash's Powers: fighting magically, create circle of magic that keep out enemies (only for 10-60 seconds at a time) Alexis: Camouflage, Cast spells, breathe underwater for up to 1 minute

Middle:
While on there journey, they encounter many challenges and new people. Meanwhile, Alexis starts to learn magic from Lina and Ash. One night, Lina dreams of a man who tells her where she can find help. Lina believes the dream and tries to to journey to the place. When they arrive, they realize that it's a trick. Lina and Ash are both captured, but Alexis is able to escape. After spying on the man one night, she learns that he is draining magic from Lina and Ash to build something important. Desperate to save them from their fate, Alexis tries to rescue them. On her way, she meets the son of the man. He hopes to save her and tells her what she must do. Alexis tries too, but then fails. She realizes she must use all of her training in magic and survival to stay alive and save her friends. (what should some of the challenges be?)

Ending:
When the an realized that they escaped, he sends all his soldiers to find them. On there way to escape, they encounter a training camp for magicians, etc… There, they are protected and learn many new things.

How Do You Help?
-comment what should happen next!
-comment other abilities the character should have!
-make a revision of the current beginning!
-in different parts of this post, there are specific ideas I need help with! They are highlighted in red!
About the RPG:
-comment magic abilities you could have
-comment different groups their should be (example: wizards (they use wands), fighters (they fight with magic and swords), etc…)
-comment companions you can have (example: bird)
About the Animated Series:
-comment what the character's should look like
-comment any ideas of what the scene should look like

Alexis woke up with a start. She sat bolt upright. With a small tremble, she looked around. No fire. No attack. In the corner, Lina stood with her bow at ready. “You okay?” Lina asked turning towards her. Alexis shuddered trying to calm herself down, “Yeah, just nightmares about… the attack…” She watched as a raindrop dropped from the tree onto the ground next to her. A small worried expression appeared on Lina's face, “It's okay, you're with us now, we'll take care of you.” Alexis looked up at the sky for a moment, watching as the sky turned darker and darker. Again, she watched as a raindrop fell, but this time it feel on her face. She climbed under the shelter and slowly, fell asleep.
The next time she woke up, it was night time. She looked around to see nothing but the dark shadows and the sky filled with stars. “You're awake,” she heard Lina say from above her. Alexis turned to see Lina tending a fire. “Where's Ash?” Alexis asked. “He's out gathering berries,” replied Lina, “We're moving tomorrow. I'm going to go check on Ash, okay?“ ”Okay…“ Alexis replied slowly, ”um… Are you sure it's safe?“ Lina looked at her ”Yes, but if you're in any danger, scream for help and I'll come, okay?“ ”Okay,“ Alexis said looking a little relieved. She gathered herself back under her shelter.
Knowing that she was by herself made Alexis feel scared. The only place she new by heart was her home, her city. Slowly, she crept out of the shelter. She looked around for Lina's bow, but apparently Lina had taken it with her. Suddenly, a voice whispered ”Hello?“ Frightened, Alexis suddenly jerked around in horror. A young pale boy walked from under a bush. He looked at her, his eyes staring at her. In his hands, on his back her carried a large knife for defense. ”Who are you?“ he asked. In his hand he held a small stone. ”Um… Alexis.“ Alexis stuttered. Seeing how scared she was, the boy raised hands. ”I won't do any harm, I was looking for a girl named Lyra.“ He said. ”Okay,“ Alexis said, thinking, ”Do you want to stay with us?“ ”Okay.“ the boy said, nodding his head fast.
They both walked to the camp. ”Why are you alone?“ asked Alexis when they had gotten there. ”I was in a search party for Lyra,“ he said, ”but they were killed.“ ”Here,“ he said, ”I found this stone in their supplies and realized it was a tracking device, I've been using it for days.“ For a moment, Alexis stared at him, he looked so familiar.
”Who's this?“ asked Lina when she came back. ”He's a boy I found, he's staying with us.“ replied Alexis. ”What's this?“ Ash said picking up the small stone. ”A tracking device,“ said the boy, ”We were looking for Lyra.“ ”Lyra.“ Lina repeated, holding the stone.
Holding, she went still, she stared until a reflection appeared, but it wasn't her… Lina snapped out of her trans and looked at them urgently ”Okay, we're moving tomorrow, I know of a safe house nearby that were going to, “ she paused, ”I think that we can use this device to guide us to it, With it, my powers seem stronger.“ ”Okay,“ the boy said, ”I can only stay a few nights though.“
As Alexis settled down to sleep, the boy whispered to her, ”Is she always like this?". Immediately, Alexis knew who he was talking about. Lina seemed so different after seeing the stone. She wasn't able to keep her calm personality, she seemed to stuck in her memories. Alexis spent the whole night thinking about Lina. Lina had never told Alexis about her past, or her family. She thought herself to sleep.

Hints: The boy and Lyra turn out to be Lina's long lost brother and sister.