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JonathanSchaffer

I'd like to order some art.

Full username: JonathanSchaffer
Type of art (logo, sprite, etc.): sprite
What you want it to be: camera
Do you have a preferred employee? no
Bitmap or Vector? vector
Comments: (anything else?) make it blue with no outline, about twice as large as

this

Last edited by JonathanSchaffer (Jan. 16, 2017 19:12:41)

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Birdmusic

JonathanSchaffer wrote:
I'd like to order some art.
Full username: JonathanSchaffer
Type of art (logo, sprite, etc.): sprite
What you want it to be: camera
Do you have a preferred employee? no
Bitmap or Vector? vector
Comments: (anything else?) make it blue with no outline, about twice as large as this

Taken!

~Birdmusic~

JonathanSchaffer

Birdmusic wrote:
JonathanSchaffer wrote:
I'd like to order some art.
Full username: JonathanSchaffer
Type of art (logo, sprite, etc.): sprite
What you want it to be: camera
Do you have a preferred employee? no
Bitmap or Vector? vector
Comments: (anything else?) make it blue with no outline, about twice as large as this
Taken!

yay

club penguin is kil

muellly

Can I order a review please
Full username:Muellly
Link to what you want reviewed:https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/
Type of thing you want reviewed:Game
Comments: (anything else?) I know it is long and has two parts but I would appreciate it if you were to give a detailed review of the game I made.

I would greatly appreciate if you were to check of this game I spent months that includes plot and bosses here https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/ ………………………………………Want a detailed review or idea?

I'm a major fan of Pokemon, Undertale and the Pija and Toast series.
I am doing a shiny scramble of pokemon Pearl. I'm 7 chapters in and on my way to the 2nd gym.

Birdmusic

JonathanSchaffer wrote:
Birdmusic wrote:
JonathanSchaffer wrote:
I'd like to order some art.
Full username: JonathanSchaffer
Type of art (logo, sprite, etc.): sprite
What you want it to be: camera
Do you have a preferred employee? no
Bitmap or Vector? vector
Comments: (anything else?) make it blue with no outline, about twice as large as this
Taken!
yay

Done! You can find it here: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/114753551/#player (the last costume) Feel free to ask for any changes!

~Birdmusic~

JonathanSchaffer

Birdmusic wrote:
JonathanSchaffer wrote:
Birdmusic wrote:
JonathanSchaffer wrote:
I'd like to order some art.
Full username: JonathanSchaffer
Type of art (logo, sprite, etc.): sprite
What you want it to be: camera
Do you have a preferred employee? no
Bitmap or Vector? vector
Comments: (anything else?) make it blue with no outline, about twice as large as this
Taken!
yay

Done! You can find it here: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/114753551/#player (the last costume) Feel free to ask for any changes!

that's fast, next time I order here

club penguin is kil

banana439monkey

Full username: banana439monkey
Link to project containing image: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/140286725/ there are three. see inside
Do you have a preferred employee: Nope
Comments: (anything else?): Not cubeupload, wikipedia, wikimedia, the german wiki, tinypic or scratch please

Banana

Very inactive user who has now become a maker.
If you reply to this post it would be greatly appreciated if you could comment the link to your post on my profile!!!

jromagnoli

muellly wrote:
Can I order a review please
Full username:Muellly
Link to what you want reviewed:https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/
Type of thing you want reviewed:Game
Comments: (anything else?) I know it is long and has two parts but I would appreciate it if you were to give a detailed review of the game I made.

Taken.

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bigpuppy

ORDER WATCHLIST

Username: SonicMasterSystem
What you want it to be: All the of the BTTF (back to the future) posters
Do you have a preferred employee? Nope.
Bitmap or Vector? Bitmap.
Comments: (anything else?) Make it chibi!
Taken by kikimc

Is what you want not listed here? Use this form!
Full username: TimeLordPlanet
Description: I need that noise X-wings make when they fire their guns
I agree that Bigpuppy's Shop may not be able to do this order (type “I agree”) I agree:
Comments: (anything else?)

Art
Full username: Monkey_Legend
Type of art (logo, sprite, etc.):logo
What you want it to be:could it say ‘ml’ in white and in connect writing with a pair if white headphones ontop (so it looks like the text is wearing them) and a darkish background
Do you have a preferred employee?nope
Bitmap or Vector?any
Comments: (anything else?) thanks
Taken by jromagnoli

Full username: tycool1
Link to what you want reviewed: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/111587360/
Type of thing you want reviewed: game
Comments: (anything else?) Can you post it here please and done ASAP
Thank you so much!!(you are one of the only shops that seem active still).
Taken by FireHeart03

Can I order a review please
Full username:Muellly
Link to what you want reviewed:https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/
Type of thing you want reviewed:Game
Comments: (anything else?) I know it is long and has two parts but I would appreciate it if you were to give a detailed review of the game I made.
Taken by jromangoli

Full username: banana439monkey
Link to project containing image: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/140286725/ there are three. see inside
Do you have a preferred employee: Nope
Comments: (anything else?): Not cubeupload, wikipedia, wikimedia, the german wiki, tiny pic or scratch please

Last edited by bigpuppy (Jan. 17, 2017 16:00:29)

“Change happens by listening and then starting a dialogue with the people who are doing something you don't believe is right.” -Jane Goodall

TacoCatProuductions

bigpuppy wrote:
ORDER WATCHLIST

Username: SonicMasterSystem
What you want it to be: All the of the BTTF (back to the future) posters
Do you have a preferred employee? Nope.
Bitmap or Vector? Bitmap.
Comments: (anything else?) Make it chibi!
Taken by kikimc

Is what you want not listed here? Use this form!
Full username: TimeLordPlanet
Description: I need that noise X-wings make when they fire their guns
I agree that Bigpuppy's Shop may not be able to do this order (type “I agree”) I agree:
Comments: (anything else?)

Art
Full username: Monkey_Legend
Type of art (logo, sprite, etc.):logo
What you want it to be:could it say ‘ml’ in white and in connect writing with a pair if white headphones ontop (so it looks like the text is wearing them) and a darkish background
Do you have a preferred employee?nope
Bitmap or Vector?any
Comments: (anything else?) thanks
Taken by jromagnoli

Full username: tycool1
Link to what you want reviewed: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/111587360/
Type of thing you want reviewed: game
Comments: (anything else?) Can you post it here please and done ASAP
Thank you so much!!(you are one of the only shops that seem active still).
Taken by FireHeart03

Can I order a review please
Full username:Muellly
Link to what you want reviewed:https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/
Type of thing you want reviewed:Game
Comments: (anything else?) I know it is long and has two parts but I would appreciate it if you were to give a detailed review of the game I made.
Taken by jromangoli

Full username: banana439monkey
Link to project containing image: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/140286725/ there are three. see inside
Do you have a preferred employee: Nope
Comments: (anything else?): Not cubeupload, wikipedia, wikimedia, the german wiki, tiny pic or scratch please

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jromagnoli

I completed ML's order.

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bigpuppy

jromagnoli wrote:
I completed ML's order.

Oh yes I must have forgotten to take it off the list sorry!

“Change happens by listening and then starting a dialogue with the people who are doing something you don't believe is right.” -Jane Goodall

jromagnoli

Review for Slimeith's quest 1 and 2 by muelly
(Just so you know, I'm a harsh but honest! critic)
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Coding (50/100) There was a lot of code involved which must've taken a lot of work, however the code was not hard, and the game glitched A LOT. The code was not clean and there were about 100 sprites that could've been eliminated, had the creator known how to use clones.
Graphics (60/100) The graphics were pretty poor. Everything was jagged and looked like it didn't take much time or effort.
Bugs (67/100) There were bugs all over the place, I had to restart several times to get passages to work, and there were glitches caused by coding things the lazy way.
Grammar (60/100) There were many places where the creator forgot simple rules such as punctuation at the end of a sentence, capitalizing certain nouns, pronouns and the beginning of sentences as well as a few spelling errors. The Q & A wasn't very helpful and the instructions only included a description of the game.
Creativity (81/100) Very creative! I didn't exactly see the storyline in the first, but the second was pretty good, and had great humor. The fact that I have seen quite a few games about slimes and the poor storyline in the first part led me to give this section a B- rating. I literally had no idea what the bosses and the volcano had to do with the story in the first part

Comments: Code seemed cluttered, certain parts were not needed and some of the code seemed lazy. Nice storyline in the second installment though.

Overall: Creative game leaps for tall heights but falls short of the goal due to the code, graphics and other details. 64/100

Improvements that could be made: Clean up the code, review the scripting and try using clones for the portal.
________________________________________________________

Review by jromagnoli from Bigpuppy's Shop

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bigpuppy

^

That was the 75th completed order! Good job, jromagnoli!

“Change happens by listening and then starting a dialogue with the people who are doing something you don't believe is right.” -Jane Goodall

jromagnoli

bigpuppy wrote:
^

That was the 75th completed order! Good job, jromagnoli!

Thanks!

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muellly

jromagnoli wrote:
Review for Slimeith's quest 1 and 2 by muelly
(Just so you know, I'm a harsh but honest! critic)

Thank you Jromagnoli for reviewing my game. I appreciate your honesty. I'll work on play testing the game and trying to fix glitches, and fixing my spelling and Grammar errors even though I am terrible at this. I've also added the basic controls into the project's instructions. I am impressed with the speed of your review.

I'm also just wondering which ending you got. True (not hurting anyone you can spare), or ruined(hurting someone you could have spared. I would also ask you if you got Nightnere but I now realize how bad some of the glitches are)? I'm also wondering if you picked up any of the secrets I put in the backdrops? (such as what I put behind every sun in the game)

I would greatly appreciate if you were to check of this game I spent months that includes plot and bosses here https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/ ………………………………………Want a detailed review or idea?

I'm a major fan of Pokemon, Undertale and the Pija and Toast series.
I am doing a shiny scramble of pokemon Pearl. I'm 7 chapters in and on my way to the 2nd gym.

jromagnoli

muellly wrote:
jromagnoli wrote:
Review for Slimeith's quest 1 and 2 by muelly
(Just so you know, I'm a harsh but honest! critic)

Thank you Jromagnoli for reviewing my game. I appreciate your honesty. I'll work on play testing the game and trying to fix glitches, and fixing my spelling and Grammar errors even though I am terrible at this. I've also added the basic controls into the project's instructions. I am impressed with the speed of your review.

I'm also just wondering which ending you got. True (not hurting anyone you can spare), or ruined(hurting someone you could have spared. I would also ask you if you got Nightnere but I now realize how bad some of the glitches are)? I'm also wondering if you picked up any of the secrets I put in the backdrops? (such as what I put behind every sun in the game)

Thanks for not getting angry with me! I didn't finish because the game glitched me over and over and I couldn't pass some levels, but I went inside and saw the various places and endings.

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MistickMage

I've decided to join
Username?: MistickMage
What things are you good at (art, scripts, etc.)? I'm good at writing, and decent at art. (I am willing to do reviews!)
What is your favorite animal?: Barn Owl
Example(s) of work?: Art & Writing
Are you following this topic?: Yep
How many shops are you an employee at?: Hmm… That depends. 1-3? I don't know

Last edited by MistickMage (Jan. 18, 2017 01:46:28)

Gender: Genderfluild-ish. Female most of the time, though occasionally Agender.

Sexuality: Bisexual

Spirit Animal: American Kestrel

Favorite Color: Blue/grey

bigpuppy

MistickMage wrote:
I've decided to join
Username?: MistickMage
What things are you good at (art, scripts, etc.)? I'm good at writing, and decent at art. (I am willing to do reviews!)
What is your favorite animal?: Barn Owl
Example(s) of work?: Art & Writing
Are you following this topic?: Yep
How many shops are you an employee at?: Hmm… That depends. 1-3? I don't know

Wow, those are very good! Hired.

“Change happens by listening and then starting a dialogue with the people who are doing something you don't believe is right.” -Jane Goodall

bigpuppy

Let's have another roll call. I know I am doing a lot of these but I feel like a lot of people are not active.

Purple = Responded

bigpuppy
SimplyKomplex
Birdmusic
TacoCatProuductions
Remix-the-Dragon (formerly Teamactivecatz)
FireHeart03
doggy230 - exclude from roll call
banana439monkey
Saiid
makethebrainhappy
GeeTransit
doggiecake
jromagnoli
Monkey_Legend
kikimc
microbiologist123
MistickMage

This roll call ends on January 22nd, 2017.

Last edited by bigpuppy (Jan. 20, 2017 23:02:51)

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