MistickMage wrote:

Full username: MistickMage
Link to what you want reviewed: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/105728172/
Type of thing you want reviewed: Game/Project
Comments: (anything else?): Nope!

Taken!

Review for The Dragon and the Kitten by MistickMage
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Coding (50/100) The coding looked a little lazy. There was no ceiling detection, slope detection, wall detection, y velocity or x velocity, basically meaning it wasn't a platformer script.
Graphics (90/100) Very nice background and character graphics! The level graphics leave a little to be desired, but it is very nice!
Bugs (75/100) Most bugs were with the coding, no ceiling detection, wall detection, and no slope detection, which meant you could walk through platforms
Grammar (80/100) 3 typos, 3 grammatical errors.
Creativity (95/100) This was very creative! I liked the idea of a dragon delivering a cat home! One thing was, it seemed like the typical platformer story, except with a spin (e.g. (character) has to get home).
78/100

Comments: The storyline was nice, the art was pretty good, and the character was awesome too! Unfortunately, the platformer script needs a lot of work. You can probably locate a really nice one if you search around.

Improvements that could be made: Better platformer script, and a grammar check.
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Review by jromagnoli from Bigpuppy's Shop

Art
Full username: starleaf204
What you want it to be: a purple star with the text 'Certified By Stary"
Do you have a preferred employee? no, anyone is fine
Bitmap or Vector? Vector please
Comments: (anything else?) Can this be an image?

starleaf204 wrote:

Art
Full username: starleaf204
What you want it to be: a purple star with the text 'Certified By Stary"
Do you have a preferred employee? no, anyone is fine
Bitmap or Vector? Vector please
Comments: (anything else?) Can this be an image?

I'll desighn it anything like banners i can't make sorry

doggiecake wrote:

starleaf204 wrote:

Art
Full username: starleaf204
What you want it to be: a purple star with the text 'Certified By Stary"
Do you have a preferred employee? no, anyone is fine
Bitmap or Vector? Vector please
Comments: (anything else?) Can this be an image?

I'll desighn it anything like banners i can't make sorry

?

jromagnoli wrote:

Review for The Dragon and the Kitten by MistickMage
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Coding (50/100) The coding looked a little lazy. There was no ceiling detection, slope detection, wall detection, y velocity or x velocity, basically meaning it wasn't a platformer script.
Graphics (90/100) Very nice background and character graphics! The level graphics leave a little to be desired, but it is very nice!
Bugs (75/100) Most bugs were with the coding, no ceiling detection, wall detection, and no slope detection, which meant you could walk through platforms
Grammar (80/100) 3 typos, 3 grammatical errors.
Creativity (95/100) This was very creative! I liked the idea of a dragon delivering a cat home! One thing was, it seemed like the typical platformer story, except with a spin (e.g. (character) has to get home).
78/100

Comments: The storyline was nice, the art was pretty good, and the character was awesome too! Unfortunately, the platformer script needs a lot of work. You can probably locate a really nice one if you search around.

Improvements that could be made: Better platformer script, and a grammar check.
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Review by jromagnoli from Bigpuppy's Shop

Actually, part of the game is that you go through objects but yes, I am trying to fix that, And I will try to fix the grammar soon. Thanks!

starleaf204 wrote:

doggiecake wrote:

starleaf204 wrote:

Art
Full username: starleaf204
What you want it to be: a purple star with the text 'Certified By Stary"
Do you have a preferred employee? no, anyone is fine
Bitmap or Vector? Vector please
Comments: (anything else?) Can this be an image?

I'll desighn it anything like banners i can't make sorry

?

i'll do it

MistickMage wrote:

jromagnoli wrote:

Review for The Dragon and the Kitten by MistickMage
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Coding (50/100) The coding looked a little lazy. There was no ceiling detection, slope detection, wall detection, y velocity or x velocity, basically meaning it wasn't a platformer script.
Graphics (90/100) Very nice background and character graphics! The level graphics leave a little to be desired, but it is very nice!
Bugs (75/100) Most bugs were with the coding, no ceiling detection, wall detection, and no slope detection, which meant you could walk through platforms
Grammar (80/100) 3 typos, 3 grammatical errors.
Creativity (95/100) This was very creative! I liked the idea of a dragon delivering a cat home! One thing was, it seemed like the typical platformer story, except with a spin (e.g. (character) has to get home).
78/100

Comments: The storyline was nice, the art was pretty good, and the character was awesome too! Unfortunately, the platformer script needs a lot of work. You can probably locate a really nice one if you search around.

Improvements that could be made: Better platformer script, and a grammar check.
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Review by jromagnoli from Bigpuppy's Shop

Actually, part of the game is that you go through objects but yes, I am trying to fix that, And I will try to fix the grammar soon. Thanks!

O.K. But the jumping through objects was a little annoying

kikimc wrote:

starleaf204 wrote:

doggiecake wrote:

starleaf204 wrote:

Art
Full username: starleaf204
What you want it to be: a purple star with the text 'Certified By Stary"
Do you have a preferred employee? no, anyone is fine
Bitmap or Vector? Vector please
Comments: (anything else?) Can this be an image?

I'll desighn it anything like banners i can't make sorry

?

i'll do it

Okay thank you

Please join The New Shop Federation!

MistickMage wrote:

Full username: MistickMage
Link to what you want reviewed: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/105728172/
Type of thing you want reviewed: Game/Project
Comments: (anything else?): Nope!

Taken!

GeeTransit wrote:

MistickMage wrote:

Full username: MistickMage
Link to what you want reviewed: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/105728172/
Type of thing you want reviewed: Game/Project
Comments: (anything else?): Nope!

Taken!

I already completed that.

Hey big! I'm completing an order for the ray of light shop, but they want the banner in an image form, in this project I have the banner, click see inside and in sprite three, there is a costume called redglitter!. Can you (or someone else) upload it to an image host and give me the link so I can present the order? Thanks!

jromagnoli wrote:

GeeTransit wrote:

MistickMage wrote:

Full username: MistickMage
Link to what you want reviewed: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/105728172/
Type of thing you want reviewed: Game/Project
Comments: (anything else?): Nope!

Taken!

I already completed that.

oh nvm. so is she gonna reorder it?

jromagnoli wrote:

MistickMage wrote:

jromagnoli wrote:

Review for The Dragon and the Kitten by MistickMage
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Coding (50/100) The coding looked a little lazy. There was no ceiling detection, slope detection, wall detection, y velocity or x velocity, basically meaning it wasn't a platformer script.
Graphics (90/100) Very nice background and character graphics! The level graphics leave a little to be desired, but it is very nice!
Bugs (75/100) Most bugs were with the coding, no ceiling detection, wall detection, and no slope detection, which meant you could walk through platforms
Grammar (80/100) 3 typos, 3 grammatical errors.
Creativity (95/100) This was very creative! I liked the idea of a dragon delivering a cat home! One thing was, it seemed like the typical platformer story, except with a spin (e.g. (character) has to get home).
78/100

Comments: The storyline was nice, the art was pretty good, and the character was awesome too! Unfortunately, the platformer script needs a lot of work. You can probably locate a really nice one if you search around.

Improvements that could be made: Better platformer script, and a grammar check.
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Review by jromagnoli from Bigpuppy's Shop

Actually, part of the game is that you go through objects but yes, I am trying to fix that, And I will try to fix the grammar soon. Thanks!

O.K. But the jumping through objects was a little annoying

(Hopefully) Fixed that!

Review for The Dragon and the Kitten by MistickMage (Redone)
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Coding (60/100) The coding was a little glitchy. There was no ceiling detection, slope detection, wall detection, y velocity or x velocity, basically meaning it wasn't a platformer script.
Graphics (90/100) Very nice background and character graphics! The level graphics leave a little to be desired, but it is very nice!
Bugs (60/100) Most bugs were with the coding, no ceiling detection, wall detection, and no slope detection, which meant you could walk through platforms. The walk through platforms is claimed to be fixed, yet I still can walk through them if I jump up through them
Grammar (85/100) 2 typos, 2 grammatical errors.
Creativity (95/100) This was very creative! I liked the idea of a dragon delivering a cat home! One thing was, it seemed like the typical platformer story, except with a spin (e.g. (character) has to get home).
78/100 (still)

Comments: The storyline was nice, the art was pretty good, and the character was awesome too! Unfortunately, the platformer script needs a lot of work. You can probably locate a really nice one if you search around.

Improvements that could be made: Better platformer script, and a grammar check.
________________________________________________________

Review by jromagnoli from Bigpuppy's Shop

jromagnoli wrote:

Review for The Dragon and the Kitten by MistickMage (Redone)
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Coding (60/100) The coding was a little glitchy. There was no ceiling detection, slope detection, wall detection, y velocity or x velocity, basically meaning it wasn't a platformer script.
Graphics (90/100) Very nice background and character graphics! The level graphics leave a little to be desired, but it is very nice!
Bugs (60/100) Most bugs were with the coding, no ceiling detection, wall detection, and no slope detection, which meant you could walk through platforms. The walk through platforms is claimed to be fixed, yet I still can walk through them if I jump up through them
Grammar (85/100) 2 typos, 2 grammatical errors.
Creativity (95/100) This was very creative! I liked the idea of a dragon delivering a cat home! One thing was, it seemed like the typical platformer story, except with a spin (e.g. (character) has to get home).
78/100 (still)

Comments: The storyline was nice, the art was pretty good, and the character was awesome too! Unfortunately, the platformer script needs a lot of work. You can probably locate a really nice one if you search around.

Improvements that could be made: Better platformer script, and a grammar check.
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Review by jromagnoli from Bigpuppy's Shop

That;s the same…

GeeTransit wrote:

jromagnoli wrote:

Review for The Dragon and the Kitten by MistickMage (Redone)
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Coding (60/100) The coding was a little glitchy. There was no ceiling detection, slope detection, wall detection, y velocity or x velocity, basically meaning it wasn't a platformer script.
Graphics (90/100) Very nice background and character graphics! The level graphics leave a little to be desired, but it is very nice!
Bugs (60/100) Most bugs were with the coding, no ceiling detection, wall detection, and no slope detection, which meant you could walk through platforms. The walk through platforms is claimed to be fixed, yet I still can walk through them if I jump up through them
Grammar (85/100) 2 typos, 2 grammatical errors.
Creativity (95/100) This was very creative! I liked the idea of a dragon delivering a cat home! One thing was, it seemed like the typical platformer story, except with a spin (e.g. (character) has to get home).
78/100 (still)

Comments: The storyline was nice, the art was pretty good, and the character was awesome too! Unfortunately, the platformer script needs a lot of work. You can probably locate a really nice one if you search around.

Improvements that could be made: Better platformer script, and a grammar check.
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Review by jromagnoli from Bigpuppy's Shop

That's the same…

No it's not, I changed a few things, changed a few values.

jromagnoli wrote:

GeeTransit wrote:

jromagnoli wrote:

Review for The Dragon and the Kitten by MistickMage (Redone)
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Coding (60/100) The coding was a little glitchy. There was no ceiling detection, slope detection, wall detection, y velocity or x velocity, basically meaning it wasn't a platformer script.
Graphics (90/100) Very nice background and character graphics! The level graphics leave a little to be desired, but it is very nice!
Bugs (60/100) Most bugs were with the coding, no ceiling detection, wall detection, and no slope detection, which meant you could walk through platforms. The walk through platforms is claimed to be fixed, yet I still can walk through them if I jump up through them
Grammar (85/100) 2 typos, 2 grammatical errors.
Creativity (95/100) This was very creative! I liked the idea of a dragon delivering a cat home! One thing was, it seemed like the typical platformer story, except with a spin (e.g. (character) has to get home).
78/100 (still)

Comments: The storyline was nice, the art was pretty good, and the character was awesome too! Unfortunately, the platformer script needs a lot of work. You can probably locate a really nice one if you search around.

Improvements that could be made: Better platformer script, and a grammar check.
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Review by jromagnoli from Bigpuppy's Shop

That's the same…

No it's not, I changed a few things, changed a few values.

Fine… Mostly same! (lel)

Sorry I couldn't do that order, it's just I haven't had access to a computer for a while so I couldn't check out the project

ML