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Cr38or wrote:

Alright!
So: {Setting} *actions* Blah: talking


{Kingdom, buildings everywhere, most buildings destroyed}
*Confusion, loud noises, fire, explosions, people shouting*
*Character 1 running, he seems to know where he is going yet at the same time is a bit lost, dodging flames and rubble*
*People shout after him*
*Some people follow him*
*Approaches high wall and large iron gate*
*More people gather behind him*
*People fighting in the distance*
Char1: “This way!”
*Char1 hand motions to crowd*
*Crowd scrambles around the gate. Some try to climb the high walls, some try to squeeze under the gate*
*In all the confusion, someone manages to get a hole in the iron bars of the gate, and people stream through, trying to get out*
*Char1 scrambles through. He is not the last one through, but he is far back in the pack*
*Loud popping noises, explosion just inside of the gate as Char1 finishes scrambling through, some people don't make it through*
*Char1 runs to front of group*
Char1: “We have to go! Quick!”
*Char1 makes another hand motion towards the woods which surround the kingdom*
*More yelling from behind the gate, explosions*
*People are uncertain and scared, but finally follow Char1 as other, dangerous figures begin approaching the gates*
Dangerous Figures: “Hey! Stop!”
*People run faster, disappear into woods*

So this is what I was thinking for an intro. That way, it would interest the viewers by throwing them into the action, but we could have backstory scenes and explore the king's death and his sons, and we can have scenes about the characters continuing on their quest

Spencealot wrote:

Cr38or wrote:

Alright!
So: {Setting} *actions* Blah: talking


{Kingdom, buildings everywhere, most buildings destroyed}
*Confusion, loud noises, fire, explosions, people shouting*
*Character 1 running, he seems to know where he is going yet at the same time is a bit lost, dodging flames and rubble*
*People shout after him*
*Some people follow him*
*Approaches high wall and large iron gate*
*More people gather behind him*
*People fighting in the distance*
Char1: “This way!”
*Char1 hand motions to crowd*
*Crowd scrambles around the gate. Some try to climb the high walls, some try to squeeze under the gate*
*In all the confusion, someone manages to get a hole in the iron bars of the gate, and people stream through, trying to get out*
*Char1 scrambles through. He is not the last one through, but he is far back in the pack*
*Loud popping noises, explosion just inside of the gate as Char1 finishes scrambling through, some people don't make it through*
*Char1 runs to front of group*
Char1: “We have to go! Quick!”
*Char1 makes another hand motion towards the woods which surround the kingdom*
*More yelling from behind the gate, explosions*
*People are uncertain and scared, but finally follow Char1 as other, dangerous figures begin approaching the gates*
Dangerous Figures: “Hey! Stop!”
*People run faster, disappear into woods*

So this is what I was thinking for an intro. That way, it would interest the viewers by throwing them into the action, but we could have backstory scenes and explore the king's death and his sons, and we can have scenes about the characters continuing on their quest

I really like it good job!

Cr38or wrote:

Spencealot wrote:

Cr38or wrote:

Alright!
So: {Setting} *actions* Blah: talking


{Kingdom, buildings everywhere, most buildings destroyed}
*Confusion, loud noises, fire, explosions, people shouting*
*Character 1 running, he seems to know where he is going yet at the same time is a bit lost, dodging flames and rubble*
*People shout after him*
*Some people follow him*
*Approaches high wall and large iron gate*
*More people gather behind him*
*People fighting in the distance*
Char1: “This way!”
*Char1 hand motions to crowd*
*Crowd scrambles around the gate. Some try to climb the high walls, some try to squeeze under the gate*
*In all the confusion, someone manages to get a hole in the iron bars of the gate, and people stream through, trying to get out*
*Char1 scrambles through. He is not the last one through, but he is far back in the pack*
*Loud popping noises, explosion just inside of the gate as Char1 finishes scrambling through, some people don't make it through*
*Char1 runs to front of group*
Char1: “We have to go! Quick!”
*Char1 makes another hand motion towards the woods which surround the kingdom*
*More yelling from behind the gate, explosions*
*People are uncertain and scared, but finally follow Char1 as other, dangerous figures begin approaching the gates*
Dangerous Figures: “Hey! Stop!”
*People run faster, disappear into woods*

So this is what I was thinking for an intro. That way, it would interest the viewers by throwing them into the action, but we could have backstory scenes and explore the king's death and his sons, and we can have scenes about the characters continuing on their quest

I really like it good job!

Okay cool!

Spencealot wrote:

Cr38or wrote:

Spencealot wrote:

Cr38or wrote:

Alright!
So: {Setting} *actions* Blah: talking


{Kingdom, buildings everywhere, most buildings destroyed}
*Confusion, loud noises, fire, explosions, people shouting*
*Character 1 running, he seems to know where he is going yet at the same time is a bit lost, dodging flames and rubble*
*People shout after him*
*Some people follow him*
*Approaches high wall and large iron gate*
*More people gather behind him*
*People fighting in the distance*
Char1: “This way!”
*Char1 hand motions to crowd*
*Crowd scrambles around the gate. Some try to climb the high walls, some try to squeeze under the gate*
*In all the confusion, someone manages to get a hole in the iron bars of the gate, and people stream through, trying to get out*
*Char1 scrambles through. He is not the last one through, but he is far back in the pack*
*Loud popping noises, explosion just inside of the gate as Char1 finishes scrambling through, some people don't make it through*
*Char1 runs to front of group*
Char1: “We have to go! Quick!”
*Char1 makes another hand motion towards the woods which surround the kingdom*
*More yelling from behind the gate, explosions*
*People are uncertain and scared, but finally follow Char1 as other, dangerous figures begin approaching the gates*
Dangerous Figures: “Hey! Stop!”
*People run faster, disappear into woods*

So this is what I was thinking for an intro. That way, it would interest the viewers by throwing them into the action, but we could have backstory scenes and explore the king's death and his sons, and we can have scenes about the characters continuing on their quest

I really like it good job!

Okay cool!

I will try to hire an artist to convey this

amy482004 wrote:

So I looked at your idea for the start @cr38or and I have another idea for the beginning if it's not already set in stone.

Beginning Script for WAWO-Prolouge
*Shots of destruction, fires blazing out of control, rubble etc*
Narration: It wasn't always like this. There wasn't always war. There wasn't always fighting, death and destruction.
Move to shots of peace, happy villagers, buildings before destruction.
Narration: Once there was peace. Once all four sons of our King lived in harmony, side by side.
Shots of the four princes, living together. Working together.
Narration: But then our King died. Everything descended into chaos.
Move back to shots of destruction.
Narration: But the people still hope for a time of peace again. Peace and prosperity like back

When All Was One
*Shot of the title enlarging in the center of the screen as the Narrator says the 4 words.*


So…let me know what you think of that. We could do some shots that you described @cr38or to comprimise. Some of those shots would work during the chaos scenes. But I'm new to this so it's all up to you guys. What do you think? Also, we need to come up with a name for the village, the King and the Princes. We can't keep calling them the King, the Princes, the village whenever we refer to them, it's impractical. Even if we refer to the names only briefly, we should still have names for them.

Cr38or wrote:

amy482004 wrote:

So I looked at your idea for the start @cr38or and I have another idea for the beginning if it's not already set in stone.

Beginning Script for WAWO-Prolouge
*Shots of destruction, fires blazing out of control, rubble etc*
Narration: It wasn't always like this. There wasn't always war. There wasn't always fighting, death and destruction.
Move to shots of peace, happy villagers, buildings before destruction.
Narration: Once there was peace. Once all four sons of our King lived in harmony, side by side.
Shots of the four princes, living together. Working together.
Narration: But then our King died. Everything descended into chaos.
Move back to shots of destruction.
Narration: But the people still hope for a time of peace again. Peace and prosperity like back

When All Was One
*Shot of the title enlarging in the center of the screen as the Narrator says the 4 words.*


So…let me know what you think of that. We could do some shots that you described @cr38or to comprimise. Some of those shots would work during the chaos scenes. But I'm new to this so it's all up to you guys. What do you think? Also, we need to come up with a name for the village, the King and the Princes. We can't keep calling them the King, the Princes, the village whenever we refer to them, it's impractical. Even if we refer to the names only briefly, we should still have names for them.

I really like the narrator. Why didn't I think of that XD
What if we did a combo of my scenes as what we're watching, and your ideas of the narrator for what we're hearing! (Or something like that)

amy482004 wrote:

Cr38or wrote:

amy482004 wrote:

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I really like the narrator. Why didn't I think of that XD
What if we did a combo of my scenes as what we're watching, and your ideas of the narrator for what we're hearing! (Or something like that)

Coolio! And what do you think of my idea for Act 1, Scene 1?

Cr38or wrote:

amy482004 wrote:

Cr38or wrote:

amy482004 wrote:

So I looked at your idea for the start @cr38or and I have another idea for the beginning if it's not already set in stone.

Beginning Script for WAWO-Prolouge
*Shots of destruction, fires blazing out of control, rubble etc*
Narration: It wasn't always like this. There wasn't always war. There wasn't always fighting, death and destruction.
Move to shots of peace, happy villagers, buildings before destruction.
Narration: Once there was peace. Once all four sons of our King lived in harmony, side by side.
Shots of the four princes, living together. Working together.
Narration: But then our King died. Everything descended into chaos.
Move back to shots of destruction.
Narration: But the people still hope for a time of peace again. Peace and prosperity like back

When All Was One
*Shot of the title enlarging in the center of the screen as the Narrator says the 4 words.*


So…let me know what you think of that. We could do some shots that you described @cr38or to comprimise. Some of those shots would work during the chaos scenes. But I'm new to this so it's all up to you guys. What do you think? Also, we need to come up with a name for the village, the King and the Princes. We can't keep calling them the King, the Princes, the village whenever we refer to them, it's impractical. Even if we refer to the names only briefly, we should still have names for them.

I really like the narrator. Why didn't I think of that XD
What if we did a combo of my scenes as what we're watching, and your ideas of the narrator for what we're hearing! (Or something like that)

Coolio! And what do you think of my idea for Act 1, Scene 1?

When I was originally thinking about the story, I didn't think the characters would stay inside the city at all after the first part. However, I think you did a good job of using it as an “intro” to the characters themselves. I don't know exactly how I feel about it.

amy482004 wrote:

Cr38or wrote:

amy482004 wrote:

Cr38or wrote:

amy482004 wrote:

So I looked at your idea for the start @cr38or and I have another idea for the beginning if it's not already set in stone.

Beginning Script for WAWO-Prolouge
*Shots of destruction, fires blazing out of control, rubble etc*
Narration: It wasn't always like this. There wasn't always war. There wasn't always fighting, death and destruction.
Move to shots of peace, happy villagers, buildings before destruction.
Narration: Once there was peace. Once all four sons of our King lived in harmony, side by side.
Shots of the four princes, living together. Working together.
Narration: But then our King died. Everything descended into chaos.
Move back to shots of destruction.
Narration: But the people still hope for a time of peace again. Peace and prosperity like back

When All Was One
*Shot of the title enlarging in the center of the screen as the Narrator says the 4 words.*


So…let me know what you think of that. We could do some shots that you described @cr38or to comprimise. Some of those shots would work during the chaos scenes. But I'm new to this so it's all up to you guys. What do you think? Also, we need to come up with a name for the village, the King and the Princes. We can't keep calling them the King, the Princes, the village whenever we refer to them, it's impractical. Even if we refer to the names only briefly, we should still have names for them.

I really like the narrator. Why didn't I think of that XD
What if we did a combo of my scenes as what we're watching, and your ideas of the narrator for what we're hearing! (Or something like that)

Coolio! And what do you think of my idea for Act 1, Scene 1?

When I was originally thinking about the story, I didn't think the characters would stay inside the city at all after the first part. However, I think you did a good job of using it as an “intro” to the characters themselves. I don't know exactly how I feel about it.

O.K. So…do you have another idea we can use or mash up with mine to make it better?

amy482004 wrote:

Cr38or wrote:

amy482004 wrote:

Cr38or wrote:

amy482004 wrote:

So I looked at your idea for the start @cr38or and I have another idea for the beginning if it's not already set in stone.

Beginning Script for WAWO-Prolouge
*Shots of destruction, fires blazing out of control, rubble etc*
Narration: It wasn't always like this. There wasn't always war. There wasn't always fighting, death and destruction.
Move to shots of peace, happy villagers, buildings before destruction.
Narration: Once there was peace. Once all four sons of our King lived in harmony, side by side.
Shots of the four princes, living together. Working together.
Narration: But then our King died. Everything descended into chaos.
Move back to shots of destruction.
Narration: But the people still hope for a time of peace again. Peace and prosperity like back

When All Was One
*Shot of the title enlarging in the center of the screen as the Narrator says the 4 words.*


So…let me know what you think of that. We could do some shots that you described @cr38or to comprimise. Some of those shots would work during the chaos scenes. But I'm new to this so it's all up to you guys. What do you think? Also, we need to come up with a name for the village, the King and the Princes. We can't keep calling them the King, the Princes, the village whenever we refer to them, it's impractical. Even if we refer to the names only briefly, we should still have names for them.

I really like the narrator. Why didn't I think of that XD
What if we did a combo of my scenes as what we're watching, and your ideas of the narrator for what we're hearing! (Or something like that)

Coolio! And what do you think of my idea for Act 1, Scene 1?

When I was originally thinking about the story, I didn't think the characters would stay inside the city at all after the first part. However, I think you did a good job of using it as an “intro” to the characters themselves. I don't know exactly how I feel about it.

O.K. So…do you have another idea we can use or mash up with mine to make it better?

Spencealot wrote:

amy482004 wrote:

Cr38or wrote:

amy482004 wrote:

Cr38or wrote:

amy482004 wrote:

So I looked at your idea for the start @cr38or and I have another idea for the beginning if it's not already set in stone.

Beginning Script for WAWO-Prolouge
*Shots of destruction, fires blazing out of control, rubble etc*
Narration: It wasn't always like this. There wasn't always war. There wasn't always fighting, death and destruction.
Move to shots of peace, happy villagers, buildings before destruction.
Narration: Once there was peace. Once all four sons of our King lived in harmony, side by side.
Shots of the four princes, living together. Working together.
Narration: But then our King died. Everything descended into chaos.
Move back to shots of destruction.
Narration: But the people still hope for a time of peace again. Peace and prosperity like back

When All Was One
*Shot of the title enlarging in the center of the screen as the Narrator says the 4 words.*


So…let me know what you think of that. We could do some shots that you described @cr38or to comprimise. Some of those shots would work during the chaos scenes. But I'm new to this so it's all up to you guys. What do you think? Also, we need to come up with a name for the village, the King and the Princes. We can't keep calling them the King, the Princes, the village whenever we refer to them, it's impractical. Even if we refer to the names only briefly, we should still have names for them.

I really like the narrator. Why didn't I think of that XD
What if we did a combo of my scenes as what we're watching, and your ideas of the narrator for what we're hearing! (Or something like that)

Coolio! And what do you think of my idea for Act 1, Scene 1?

When I was originally thinking about the story, I didn't think the characters would stay inside the city at all after the first part. However, I think you did a good job of using it as an “intro” to the characters themselves. I don't know exactly how I feel about it.

O.K. So…do you have another idea we can use or mash up with mine to make it better?

Hey are you still active? because I love your idea for the intro

amy482004 wrote:

Yah, I'm here. I've just been busy. But I try to visit once a week, if not more.