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-Curve-

Scratch Football!!!!!! by Caleb101

Functionality: 5/25
I'm unsure on if I'm the red or the white and I had to reread the instructions and I still don't understand it. But, it doesn't lag.

Graphics: 3/25
It has graphics, but they are simply X's and O's and lines.

Audio: 0/10
It doesn't have sound.

Gameplay: 3/25
When you don't understand what you're supposed to do, how can it be fun?

Creativity: 15/15
I have never seen any other project like this.

Overall: 26/100
To fix the issues with the game, make the instructions easier to understand, add music, and make better graphics, (possibly ask someone who's good at graphics to do it for you.) If you do that, you should get a much better grade!

bjskistad

-Curve- wrote:
bjskistad wrote:
-Curve- wrote:
IllusionShadow wrote:
Excuse me, I keep getting random messages saying that there is a new post in this forum, however there is not.

Really? That's not good…I'm sorry about that
It's because you keep bumping it up Curve.

But she said there wasn't another post. I bump it so people see it. Sorry if that's bothering you

It's not bothering me.

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bjskistad

-Curve- wrote:
Scratch Football!!!!!! by Caleb101

Functionality: 5/25
I'm unsure on if I'm the red or the white and I had to reread the instructions and I still don't understand it. But, it doesn't lag.

Graphics: 3/25
It has graphics, but they are simply X's and O's and lines.

Audio: 0/10
It doesn't have sound.

Gameplay: 3/25
When you don't understand what you're supposed to do, how can it be fun?

Creativity: 15/15
I have never seen any other project like this.

Overall: 26/100
To fix the issues with the game, make the instructions easier to understand, add music, and make better graphics, (possibly ask someone who's good at graphics to do it for you.) If you do that, you should get a much better grade!

Hey Caleb! This is an ok game, but the audio is the bug dealio, if you want, I can give you some good tracks.

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Caleb101

Hey Caleb! This is an ok game, but the audio is the bug dealio, if you want, I can give you some good tracks.

It would great if you could give me some good sound tracks! I'm going how to play.

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bjskistad

Caleb101 wrote:
Hey Caleb! This is an ok game, but the audio is the bug dealio, if you want, I can give you some good tracks.
It would great if you could give me some good sound tracks! I'm going how to play.

Ok cool!

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IllusionShadow

-Curve- wrote:
bjskistad wrote:
-Curve- wrote:
IllusionShadow wrote:
Excuse me, I keep getting random messages saying that there is a new post in this forum, however there is not.

Really? That's not good…I'm sorry about that
It's because you keep bumping it up Curve.

But she said there wasn't another post. I bump it so people see it. Sorry if that's bothering you

I don't mind you saying bump.

Last edited by IllusionShadow (Nov. 29, 2015 15:22:25)

-Curve-

IllusionShadow wrote:
-Curve- wrote:
bjskistad wrote:
-Curve- wrote:
IllusionShadow wrote:
Excuse me, I keep getting random messages saying that there is a new post in this forum, however there is not.

Really? That's not good…I'm sorry about that
It's because you keep bumping it up Curve.

But she said there wasn't another post. I bump it so people see it. Sorry if that's bothering you
I don't mind you saying bump.

Ok! Cool!

bjskistad

Could I request a Profile Project?
I would like for it to be blue and green and look like your looking at the Earth. I want the land to be shaped like my username and for it to be green. I would then like for everything surrounding it to be blue. I would also like for it to look like you're looking at it from space. Thanks!

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JackFletcher23

If you can help review on my two games Swodge and V O I D, that would be good! Thanks! (Just to know where I am now)

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IllusionShadow

bjskistad wrote:
Could I request a Profile Project?
I would like for it to be blue and green and look like your looking at the Earth. I want the land to be shaped like my username and for it to be green. I would then like for everything surrounding it to be blue. I would also like for it to look like you're looking at it from space. Thanks!

Oooo! I am allowed to do that for him?

Last edited by IllusionShadow (Nov. 30, 2015 17:09:45)

JACsterandOlibob

can i have a christmas E-Card?

This is for the art innovations tab in the Best Shops 2015/16 competition.

IllusionShadow

bjskistad wrote:
Could I request a Profile Project?
I would like for it to be blue and green and look like your looking at the Earth. I want the land to be shaped like my username and for it to be green. I would then like for everything surrounding it to be blue. I would also like for it to look like you're looking at it from space. Thanks!

Will do that.

-Curve-

JackFletcher23 wrote:
If you can help review on my two games Swodge and V O I D, that would be good! Thanks! (Just to know where I am now)

I'll take it

JackFletcher23

-Curve- wrote:
JackFletcher23 wrote:
If you can help review on my two games Swodge and V O I D, that would be good! Thanks! (Just to know where I am now)

I'll take it

Thanks! (Know you will)

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-Curve-

JackFletcher23 wrote:
-Curve- wrote:
JackFletcher23 wrote:
If you can help review on my two games Swodge and V O I D, that would be good! Thanks! (Just to know where I am now)

I'll take it

Thanks! (Know you will)

-Curve-

JACsterandOlibob wrote:
can i have a christmas E-Card?

This is for the art innovations tab in the Best Shops 2015/16 competition.

I'll take it

-Curve-

VOID by JackFletcher23

Functionality: 25/25
Easy to understand. Lag-free.

Graphics: 25/25
The graphics are quite great. It's part of what makes the project so great. They also fit the project quite well.

Audio: 10/10
Nice music!

Gameplay: 20/25
It's fun, but it's incredibly hard and so many times I can't even get one because the game goes too fast. Originally, the gameplay would have been 25/25, but now, it's just not as good. Personally, I think you should change it back to how it was when you first made it.

Creativity: 15/15
This is quite creative.

Overall: 95/100
Nice game, except you would get 100/100 if you were to change it back to how it used to be. It's nowhere near as good of a game now after you changed it to your mouse movement and the bullets move differently.

-Curve-

Swodge by JackFletcher23

Functionality: 25/25
Easy to understand. Lag-free.

Graphics: 25/25
The graphics are quite great. It's part of what makes the project so great. They also fit the project quite well.

Audio: 10/10
Nice music!

Gameplay: 15/25
I see at some point you added the “Reverse All” feature. Personally, in my opinion, that just ruins the entire game. I feel like for your games, they're great games when you first release them and then you add features and it's just not as good anymore.

Creativity: 15/15
This is quite creative.

Overall: 90/100
Nice game, except you would get 100/100 if you were to change it back to how it used to be when you didn't have the “Reverse All” feature.

-Curve-

-Curve- wrote:
JACsterandOlibob wrote:
can i have a christmas E-Card?

This is for the art innovations tab in the Best Shops 2015/16 competition.

I'll take it

Here's your ecard ——————-> https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/89678759/

bjskistad

JackFletcher23 wrote:
If you can help review on my two games Swodge and V O I D, that would be good! Thanks! (Just to know where I am now)

I can help with one if Curve wants to do the other.

Last edited by bjskistad (Dec. 1, 2015 13:06:12)

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