Hey, guys, I'll get back to reviewing soon! Tonight I was busy, but tomorrow or Thursday I'll get back!

lhaspel wrote:

Can I help review?

Yeah, just fill out the application, and I will add you.

Could you Rate and Review this project please? https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/102369539/

Tildo wrote:

Can you rate and review this? Thanks!

https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/100183888/

Super fun game! Congrats on the 1st anniversary as well. I loved it so much!
Compliments/Complaints: Nice job. The art is pixelly enough but vector so it's a really clean look. I didn't have any glitches, so nice job there… The overall coding was fantastic! So much better than anything I could do. It took me a while to understand the game, but that was because I didn't thoroughly read the instructions. Oops. The sound was 8-bit, which added to the pixelly, square-based game, so it was appropriate, which usually doesn't happen. Overall, I was hooked. I forgot I was reviewing it, which is the highest compliment.

Suggestions: Maybe, for the first few blocks, have words come up onto the screen explaining what to do. You've seen platformers before, kind of like that. Otherwise, I don't have any suggestions. Just keep advertising it in the discussion forums and link it to your signature and you'll be featured before you know it! Maybe you can have a high score feature? I didn't win or lose, I just stopped the game, so I don't know if there is one.

Rate: Hm… I'm contemplating whether this game was a perfect 10 or not. I don't really think anything is a perfect 10, so I'm giving you a 9/10. Really solid job! The only thing that would make it better is a helping hand at the beginning, like a mini-tutorial. I'm thinking almost anything else instruction-y would mess up the timing of the game, though. Also a high score feature. But fantastic game!

Spencealot wrote:

Can I get a Review on my game “The Adventures Of Decimus” https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/99457387/

I was pretty confused the whole time.
Compliments/Complaints: The game seemed fun until I opened the chest. When the Super Powerful Red Ball came, the arrows were pointing the wrong direction and I couldn't figure out how to make them go the right direction. I couldn't buy anything because I didn't know where or how to make money. The art was meh. It was in bitmap, so it was pretty pixelly, but you definitely have some drawing skills because you made the castle and backpack. Speaking of which, what was inside the castle besides the shops? Nothing happened when I ran out of thirst and hunger.

Suggestions: Fix all of the glitches. Make the instructions clearer. Maybe add separate shops instead of a giant castle with everything in it. Make something happen when you starve or get dehydrated.

Rate: 4/10. Confusing game, but has the potential to become really good! Try harder, fix the glitches, and it'll be great!

nprasad wrote:

Hey, guys, I'll get back to reviewing soon! Tonight I was busy, but tomorrow or Thursday I'll get back!

wow reviewing other people before me, what a fraud
…but seriously, would be nice to get that review eventually. Thanks in advance!

JABrules wrote:

nprasad wrote:

Hey, guys, I'll get back to reviewing soon! Tonight I was busy, but tomorrow or Thursday I'll get back!

wow reviewing other people before me, what a fraud
…but seriously, would be nice to get that review eventually. Thanks in advance!

Um, sorry. I told you, I might do it, but, well, I can't do a very good review because I can't beat the first level. So, if you'll be patient, I'll get it done with all of the other reviews tomorrow, the day after, or luckily, today. Sorry, but I didn't know you still wanted me to review that game, so I didn't.

can you please view this
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/100986579/

kieranblackley wrote:

can you please view this
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/100986579/

please rate and review it
any number will do as long as it is not under 5

Cr38or wrote:

Could you Rate and Review this project please? https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/102369539/

bringing up my post

sharkblue wrote:

Rate and Review:
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/102501215/

Hello! Sorry, I was planning on reviewing yours a few days ago, but I got caught up in other things.
Compliments/Complaints: You've got a nice game there! I love the idea! However, the art could be a little bit better. Also, I think the fact that only a few results can be made (Eggs/Rice, Toast, and Apples) is a little bit boring. I have a few ideas for you that will be in the Suggestions section. But I think it's a really cute game, with great coding (no glitches) and pretty okay graphics.
Suggestions: Like I said, the results need to be a little more various and silly. Maybe have every single combination make something. For example:
Rice+Bread=Rice Sandwich
Rice+Bread+Apple= Fried apples eaten with rice
Bread+Eggs= French toast
Apple+Bread=Fried Apple
Etc. Other than that, I would suggest completely taking out the freezer portion of the fridge if you aren't going to put anything there. Also, the graphics need to be improved a lot. Maybe make them in vector?
Rate: Hm. I think, because of the bitmap graphics and overall game, I'll rate this a 5/10.

Plz review and rate this game: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/103262736/

nprasad wrote:

Tildo wrote:

Can you rate and review this? Thanks!

https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/100183888/

Super fun game! Congrats on the 1st anniversary as well. I loved it so much!
Compliments/Complaints: Nice job. The art is pixelly enough but vector so it's a really clean look. I didn't have any glitches, so nice job there… The overall coding was fantastic! So much better than anything I could do. It took me a while to understand the game, but that was because I didn't thoroughly read the instructions. Oops. The sound was 8-bit, which added to the pixelly, square-based game, so it was appropriate, which usually doesn't happen. Overall, I was hooked. I forgot I was reviewing it, which is the highest compliment.

Suggestions: Maybe, for the first few blocks, have words come up onto the screen explaining what to do. You've seen platformers before, kind of like that. Otherwise, I don't have any suggestions. Just keep advertising it in the discussion forums and link it to your signature and you'll be featured before you know it! Maybe you can have a high score feature? I didn't win or lose, I just stopped the game, so I don't know if there is one.

Rate: Hm… I'm contemplating whether this game was a perfect 10 or not. I don't really think anything is a perfect 10, so I'm giving you a 9/10. Really solid job! The only thing that would make it better is a helping hand at the beginning, like a mini-tutorial. I'm thinking almost anything else instruction-y would mess up the timing of the game, though. Also a high score feature. But fantastic game!

Yeah there is a high score feature. Can you explain your other idea more? (I'm aka Tildo)

when green flag clicked
 eat a [potato v]:: motion stack
stop [wasting time v]

Cub56 wrote:

Rate and review please

https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/102043406/

Would be nice to get this one, thanks.

JBGT wrote:

nprasad wrote:

Tildo wrote:

Can you rate and review this? Thanks!

https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/100183888/

Super fun game! Congrats on the 1st anniversary as well. I loved it so much!
Compliments/Complaints: Nice job. The art is pixelly enough but vector so it's a really clean look. I didn't have any glitches, so nice job there… The overall coding was fantastic! So much better than anything I could do. It took me a while to understand the game, but that was because I didn't thoroughly read the instructions. Oops. The sound was 8-bit, which added to the pixelly, square-based game, so it was appropriate, which usually doesn't happen. Overall, I was hooked. I forgot I was reviewing it, which is the highest compliment.

Suggestions: Maybe, for the first few blocks, have words come up onto the screen explaining what to do. You've seen platformers before, kind of like that. Otherwise, I don't have any suggestions. Just keep advertising it in the discussion forums and link it to your signature and you'll be featured before you know it! Maybe you can have a high score feature? I didn't win or lose, I just stopped the game, so I don't know if there is one.

Rate: Hm… I'm contemplating whether this game was a perfect 10 or not. I don't really think anything is a perfect 10, so I'm giving you a 9/10. Really solid job! The only thing that would make it better is a helping hand at the beginning, like a mini-tutorial. I'm thinking almost anything else instruction-y would mess up the timing of the game, though. Also a high score feature. But fantastic game!

Yeah there is a high score feature. Can you explain your other idea more? (I'm aka Tildo)

Of course, sorry about that. My other idea, about the instructions, is pretty common along games, but I wasn't very clear while explaining. I mean like have a main page with Tetris on it, and two buttons with Play and Instructions/Help/Tutorial. If you make it an Instructions button, have it be a sprite that goes through how to play (First, click > and < keys to move the blocks. The point of the game is to clear a row. you lose when you get a full column). If it's a Tutorial button, have the person begin playing, but have a sprite at the top of the screen be like “click > and < to move the blocks around.” The tutorial waits for the player to do that. “Then, click ^ to rotate it.” I think that's how the game works, right? So a tutorial or instructions thing built into the game would be really helpful.

kieranblackley wrote:

can you please view this
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/100986579/

Nice game! I wasn't expecting too much because of the bitmap-ness of it all, but it blew me away!

Compliments/Complaints: Good job. The idea is a bit used up, we've gotten at least 2 Simon games on this review shop so far. However, I really liked your sounds. The graphics were okay, but they could have been better. I'll give some suggestions in the Suggestions section. The coding was nice/no glitches, I liked how the game was random, so no two players would have the same experience playing the game. Lastly, I wasn't sure what the extra 4 dots on the bottom half were, but then I realized they were the reflection. Still not sure why that was there, but it didn't really take away from the whole game.

Suggestions: So, about the graphics, your main problem were the words (e.g. 3-2-1-Go!!!, GAME OVER, Start, etc). A good way to solve this problem but have exclusive fonts is to find Scratchers like @-fontify- and @FontGod. These Scratchers, and many more, create fonts for other Scratchers to use! If you want to have different fonts than the regular default ones, these Scratchers have vector fonts which are very cool. You can use these for your fonts instead of pictures, and it will look a lot cleaner! I would suggest taking out the reflection of the dots. I understand that you were maybe trying to make them look 3D, but it didn't really work. If you want 3-D objects, I would suggest using 4 ball sprites from the Scratch library, and recolor them to be one color or a gradient of color so it looks 3-D. If you don't understand, comment and I'll explain further.

Rate: In the future, please do not request to get a 5+, because we are trying to help you grow, and just giving a score won't help. But I'll rate this 6/10. Good job!

nprasad wrote:

kieranblackley wrote:

can you please view this
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/100986579/

Nice game! I wasn't expecting too much because of the bitmap-ness of it all, but it blew me away!

Compliments/Complaints: Good job. The idea is a bit used up, we've gotten at least 2 Simon games on this review shop so far. However, I really liked your sounds. The graphics were okay, but they could have been better. I'll give some suggestions in the Suggestions section. The coding was nice/no glitches, I liked how the game was random, so no two players would have the same experience playing the game. Lastly, I wasn't sure what the extra 4 dots on the bottom half were, but then I realized they were the reflection. Still not sure why that was there, but it didn't really take away from the whole game.

Suggestions: So, about the graphics, your main problem were the words (e.g. 3-2-1-Go!!!, GAME OVER, Start, etc). A good way to solve this problem but have exclusive fonts is to find Scratchers like @-fontify- and @FontGod. These Scratchers, and many more, create fonts for other Scratchers to use! If you want to have different fonts than the regular default ones, these Scratchers have vector fonts which are very cool. You can use these for your fonts instead of pictures, and it will look a lot cleaner! I would suggest taking out the reflection of the dots. I understand that you were maybe trying to make them look 3D, but it didn't really work. If you want 3-D objects, I would suggest using 4 ball sprites from the Scratch library, and recolor them to be one color or a gradient of color so it looks 3-D. If you don't understand, comment and I'll explain further.

Rate: In the future, please do not request to get a 5+, because we are trying to help you grow, and just giving a score won't help. But I'll rate this 6/10. Good job!

thats a good rating i will do what you tell me and will that mean i will get a 10/10

I wrote a poem based off of applepiesleth's “train”. I guess it would be considered rate and review graphics. I would really appreciate it. thanks! https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/98626147/

Username: Pyrefox
How interested are you: I would love to be hired
How committed are you: I love scratch. I teach a class every month
How active are you: Im on almost every day
Example of a review you would do (Link too please): Jump Fever by Infinite5 https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/92716079/