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- rollercoasterfan
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
OH god, what happened in the last 2 pages?Don't post here. Go to the administration thread NOW
when [chromometer altimeter v] = [5th length v] and [7th length v] with a [gap v] of (17) ::events hat
forge [chromometer v] altimeter until < (speed) = (velocity)> ::control cstart
switch places with (759 v) altimeters with value of (speed) ::looks
control [altimeter 1 v] at time (10):(17):(58) ::control
end
initialize sequence (24) so [object 3 v] moves to x (156) y (231) ::control
reveal [final answer v] and stop running this script ::events cap
- Flint-L
- Scratcher
500+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Review of a game for koalagirl2477. This is my first review, so bear with me.
Graphics(1-10):6/10 I really loved the colour palate and the colors in general, but the style and design could be a bit better.
Coding(1-10): 10/10 This is really good, especially for a 5/10 skill level!
Glitches(1-10): 10/10 None, that I could find!
Creativity(1-10): 8/10 Only because platformers are rather common, and I would have liked to see some cool features (e.g. powerups etc.)
Grammar(1-10): 10/10 Perfect!
What you think about their project(Your Professional opinion):
I think this game was fairly good, with a few exceptions (next question).
What could be improved upon(The stuff the needs to be tweaked or worked on a bit): I think more levels would be great, as well as some cool powerups or something. With the graphics, it'd be neat if you could add some smooth animations, with a little vector, maybe.
In general: 7/10 Really great job!
Graphics(1-10):6/10 I really loved the colour palate and the colors in general, but the style and design could be a bit better.
Coding(1-10): 10/10 This is really good, especially for a 5/10 skill level!
Glitches(1-10): 10/10 None, that I could find!
Creativity(1-10): 8/10 Only because platformers are rather common, and I would have liked to see some cool features (e.g. powerups etc.)
Grammar(1-10): 10/10 Perfect!
What you think about their project(Your Professional opinion):
I think this game was fairly good, with a few exceptions (next question).
What could be improved upon(The stuff the needs to be tweaked or worked on a bit): I think more levels would be great, as well as some cool powerups or something. With the graphics, it'd be neat if you could add some smooth animations, with a little vector, maybe.
In general: 7/10 Really great job!
Secretary and Manager of Tropical Waves.
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“True wisdom comes to each of us when we realize how little we understand about life, ourselves, and the world around us.”
-Socrates
- meowmoo
- Scratcher
500+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
How is my order coming?
- Flint-L
- Scratcher
500+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
I don't think anyone's taken it yet, but I could be wrong. If they have, I'd suggest messaging them personally. Either way, I'll bump it up here. How is my order coming?
Type of Art(Banner, logo etc): sprite
Date(When you want it done):asap
Style(Vector or Bitmap):bitmap
Miscellaneous; A walk cycle and jump animation of a generic black-and-white minimalistic person.
Secretary and Manager of Tropical Waves.
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“True wisdom comes to each of us when we realize how little we understand about life, ourselves, and the world around us.”
-Socrates
- MegaByteCorporations
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
I am grounded so I can't share it…I don't think anyone's taken it yet, but I could be wrong. If they have, I'd suggest messaging them personally. Either way, I'll bump it up here. How is my order coming?Type of Art(Banner, logo etc): sprite
Date(When you want it done):asap
Style(Vector or Bitmap):bitmap
Miscellaneous; A walk cycle and jump animation of a generic black-and-white minimalistic person.
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- Flint-L
- Scratcher
500+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Review of a project by TheHockeyist.
Graphics(1-10): 10/10 Not much in the way of design here, but I've always liked your logo, so I guess that counts.
Coding(1-10): 9/10 The slide timing was impeccable, but I'd like to see some transition animation, possibly.
Glitches(1-10): 10/10 None
Creativity(1-10): 6/10 The spinning-insane-Hoxkeyist was a nice touch, but maybe there could be some more fancy effects? I dunno.
Grammar(1-10): 10/10 Perfect!
What you think about their project(Your Professional opinion):
It is very good for the incredible catchiest/annoyance of the song.
What could be improved upon(The stuff the needs to be tweaked or worked on a bit):
Other than animations and possible other effects, none.
Overall (this includes things not taken into account above): 8/10
Graphics(1-10): 10/10 Not much in the way of design here, but I've always liked your logo, so I guess that counts.
Coding(1-10): 9/10 The slide timing was impeccable, but I'd like to see some transition animation, possibly.
Glitches(1-10): 10/10 None
Creativity(1-10): 6/10 The spinning-insane-Hoxkeyist was a nice touch, but maybe there could be some more fancy effects? I dunno.
Grammar(1-10): 10/10 Perfect!
What you think about their project(Your Professional opinion):
It is very good for the incredible catchiest/annoyance of the song.
What could be improved upon(The stuff the needs to be tweaked or worked on a bit):
Other than animations and possible other effects, none.
Overall (this includes things not taken into account above): 8/10
Secretary and Manager of Tropical Waves.
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“True wisdom comes to each of us when we realize how little we understand about life, ourselves, and the world around us.”
-Socrates
- TheHockeyist
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
a project by TheHockeyist.Review of
Graphics(1-10): 10/10 Not much in the way of design here, but I've always liked your logo, so I guess that counts.
Coding(1-10): 9/10 The slide timing was impeccable, but I'd like to see some transition animation, possibly.
Glitches(1-10): 10/10 None
Creativity(1-10): 6/10 The spinning-insane-Hoxkeyist was a nice touch, but maybe there could be some more fancy effects? I dunno.
Grammar(1-10): 10/10 Perfect!
What you think about their project(Your Professional opinion):
It is very good for the incredible catchiest/annoyance of the song.
What could be improved upon(The stuff the needs to be tweaked or worked on a bit):
Other than animations and possible other effects, none.
Overall (this includes things not taken into account above): 8/10
Graphics: Thanks. I guess my avatar has passed the test of time.
Coding: Yeah, not the best transitions. Graphic effects caused a few problems. I had to remake this project three times!
Glitches: Good to know.
Creativity: Yeah, I'm not very creative.
Grammar: Well, I am a native English speaker translating a Russian song, so… yeah!
And thanks! If it's stuck in your head, I apologize.
- kittykat_005
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Project(A link to the project you want reviewed): Out of Screen
Date(When you want it done): Doesn't matter…
Skill(Your level of skill):This is a remix off a platforming engine so… 6
Miscellaneous: It is based off of Animator vs. Animation
Date(When you want it done): Doesn't matter…
Skill(Your level of skill):This is a remix off a platforming engine so… 6
Miscellaneous: It is based off of Animator vs. Animation
- Tyman187
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Out of ScreenTaken! ;-D Project(A link to the project you want reviewed):
Date(When you want it done): Doesn't matter…
Skill(Your level of skill):This is a remix off a platforming engine so… 6
Miscellaneous: It is based off of Animator vs. Animation
- dolphin_24
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
I though you said you left….ARGH!!!! Don't look at Tyhia or you'll ruin it!Out of ScreenTaken! ;-D Project(A link to the project you want reviewed):
Date(When you want it done): Doesn't matter…
Skill(Your level of skill):This is a remix off a platforming engine so… 6
Miscellaneous: It is based off of Animator vs. Animation
- kittykat_005
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
YayOut of ScreenTaken! ;-D Project(A link to the project you want reviewed):
Date(When you want it done): Doesn't matter…
Skill(Your level of skill):This is a remix off a platforming engine so… 6
Miscellaneous: It is based off of Animator vs. Animation
- meowmoo
- Scratcher
500+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Can someone else take it?I am grounded so I can't share it…I don't think anyone's taken it yet, but I could be wrong. If they have, I'd suggest messaging them personally. Either way, I'll bump it up here. How is my order coming?Type of Art(Banner, logo etc): sprite
Date(When you want it done):asap
Style(Vector or Bitmap):bitmap
Miscellaneous; A walk cycle and jump animation of a generic black-and-white minimalistic person.
- Flint-L
- Scratcher
500+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Yes - I have compiled all of the orders one page back. We are also trying to become more consistent with our usage of threads (i.e. no chatting on Administration, only order-related stuff here). What did I miss? I have been very sick since a few days…. any orders?
Hope you get better (or already are!)
Secretary and Manager of Tropical Waves.
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“True wisdom comes to each of us when we realize how little we understand about life, ourselves, and the world around us.”
-Socrates
- gcenac
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
I will give it a try.Can someone else take it?I am grounded so I can't share it…I don't think anyone's taken it yet, but I could be wrong. If they have, I'd suggest messaging them personally. Either way, I'll bump it up here. How is my order coming?Type of Art(Banner, logo etc): sprite
Date(When you want it done):asap
Style(Vector or Bitmap):bitmap
Miscellaneous; A walk cycle and jump animation of a generic black-and-white minimalistic person.
- meowmoo
- Scratcher
500+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Thank you!I will give it a try.Can someone else take it?I am grounded so I can't share it…I don't think anyone's taken it yet, but I could be wrong. If they have, I'd suggest messaging them personally. Either way, I'll bump it up here. How is my order coming?Type of Art(Banner, logo etc): sprite
Date(When you want it done):asap
Style(Vector or Bitmap):bitmap
Miscellaneous; A walk cycle and jump animation of a generic black-and-white minimalistic person.
- rollercoasterfan
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Are there any art orders I can take?
when [chromometer altimeter v] = [5th length v] and [7th length v] with a [gap v] of (17) ::events hat
forge [chromometer v] altimeter until < (speed) = (velocity)> ::control cstart
switch places with (759 v) altimeters with value of (speed) ::looks
control [altimeter 1 v] at time (10):(17):(58) ::control
end
initialize sequence (24) so [object 3 v] moves to x (156) y (231) ::control
reveal [final answer v] and stop running this script ::events cap
- dolphin_24
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Ty is currently busy. I always know where he is. XD How's my order Ty?