-Catapult- wrote:

(#20)
Taken. It's both, you could get a one time review, like you are getting right now, or you could subscribe and get monthly reviews every last week of the month.

cool-shop-dude wrote:

-Catapult- wrote:

(#20)
Taken. It's both, you could get a one time review, like you are getting right now, or you could subscribe and get monthly reviews every last week of the month.

How do I subscribe?

cool-shop-dude wrote:

cool-shop-dude wrote:

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Ha im an idiot for not noticing the subscription form LOL

Username: cool-shop-dude
Shop link: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/789679/
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Are you the owner of this shop? yes
Other: Lol im an idiot sorry for wasting your time

Review for: kahoot_player21

First glance NA/10
Title /5
Thumbnail /5
Advice:

Gameplay NA/30
Enjoyment /20
Addictiveness /10
Advice:

Graphics 12/25
Graphics 7/20
Consistency 5/5
Advice: I would recommend that you change the fonts of the text, one way to do this is a text engine like this one. You could also write the text in google drawings, save it to your files (as .svg) then import it into your scratch project. For the buttons, this tutorial by Holmesanator is really informative. If you want to keep the colors of your buttons, I would turn down the saturation of each one to around 70-80%. It makes it look better. For the banners, a “smooth glide” block would also be good when the “correct” and “incorrect” banners, I put the scratch blocks down below. The timer sets to zero whenever I answer and I think it shouldn’t, in case the player wants to see how long they took to answer.

Sounds 15/15
Sounds 5/5
Background music 10/10
Advice: Can’t really say anything about the SFX because it’s Kahoot’s

Originality NA/10
Originality /10
Advice:

Controls 10/10
Easy to learn 5/5
Controlling is easy 5/5
Advice:

TOTAL 22/35

Star rating:
N/A, as project is incomplete.

Scratchblocks section for smooth glide

repeat (100)
Smooth glide (insert target x here) (insert target y here) (insert speed here)
end
define Smooth glide (x) (y) (speed)
change x by (((x) - (x position)) / (speed))
change y by (((y) - (y position)) / (speed))

Keep in mind that the higher the speed, the SLOWER it goes! Speed can range from 2 (minimum) to infinite (maximum)

-Catapult- wrote:

(#23)

cool-shop-dude wrote:

cool-shop-dude wrote:

-snip-

Ha im an idiot for not noticing the subscription form LOL

Username: cool-shop-dude
Shop link: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/789679/
Where do you want me to post the review?: Please do it in the shop
Have you read the rules?: yes
Are you the owner of this shop? yes
Other: Lol im an idiot sorry for wasting your time

Wait, just to confirm, when do you want your review? Are you sending an order now, then subscribing at the same time? Reviews for people who subscribed come at the last week of the month. Would you be ok if I sent you 1 review now, and it also doubles as a review for this month's subscription? Are you subscribing, but then cancelling your last order at the same time?

Sorry for so many questions I'm kinda confused

cool-shop-dude wrote:

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Oh also, you should totally look into joining The Shopping Emporium

kahoot_player21 wrote:

I made a different one (It has Points, Answers, Answer Time, and a different look) so heres a new order to add to the current to :d
Username: kahoot_player21
Shop/project you want reviewed: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1128647190/ (its still pretty basic but theres more stuff added)
Where do you want me to post the review?: (recommended: this post) This post (I am following it)
Have you read the rules?: yeh
Other: yes

Review for: kahoot_player21

First glance 8/10
Title 3/5
Thumbnail 5/5
Advice:

Gameplay NA/30
Enjoyment /20
Addictiveness /10
Advice:

Graphics 17/25
Graphics 12/20
Consistency 5/5
Advice: Just a few last things to do. The 1st one, of course, is to replace those ugly looking variable counters.This scratch project (which happens to be mine, but this is totally not an ad), contains a number counter inside which is powered by clones. Just backpack it, delete most of the code except for the custom blocks and “delete this clone” blocks, and give credit. It can create numbers at any X and Y positions for you, and it will all be in the Lexend font. You can also use the “set color effect to” block to change the color of the numbers, if you don’t like the default red. Again, this is totally not an ad. You could also duplicate the number counter sprite and use it as the timer, if you wish. After this, you could decrease the speed the “correct” and “incorrect” bars zoom into the screw (3 should be enough) then make the “incorrect” bar display how long you took as well, then it should also display how many points were deducted. The next thing, the score counter on the top right should have its little own space by itself. You could put it in a small box with rounded corners, like a button, or you could just put a line which divides it from the question. Make sure to label it with some text, so people know what they’re looking at.The same should go for the question number, it should have it’s own space and label, so that people know what it is. For some additional thinking time, you could make it so that the question first appears in the middle of the screen with a short countdown, then it moves to the top of the screen, then the buttons appear after the countdown. You could just make the buttons appear normally, but then you could also make them smooth glide in along with the timer for some extra pop. After you’re done doing all this (whew that’s a lot) all that’s needed is to change the fonts of the text, like I said in my earlier review, and you should be good to go, ready to keep those graphics in as a final product!

Sounds 15/15
Sounds 5/5
Background music 10/10
Advice:

Originality NA/10
Originality /10
Advice:

Controls 10/10
Easy to learn 5/5
Controlling is easy 5/5
Advice:

TOTAL 50/60

Star rating:
N/A, project not finished

BUG DETECTED! AHHHHH!
A bug has been found in your code!
What it is: Pressing stop sign grants infinite time
How to reproduce: Press the stop sign and make sure project is stopped. Then, press on a button and realize that the project continues! And no time has passed in the timer!
Solution!
In the backdrop, or any other sprite, place this code:

when green flag clicked
forever
set [stop sign tracker v] to ((timer) + (0.01))
end

Then, place this code into every button:

when this sprite clicked
if <not <(timer) > (stop tracker)>> then
do the stuff the button does:: grey
…
end

This works because when the stop sign is clicked, the timer keeps going, but not the variable. So, if the timer > stop tracker, the stop sign must be clicked.

kahoot_player21 wrote:

what kind of score is this (this is a bug for help)

(grrygyh forgot to quote)

-Catapult- wrote:

kahoot_player21 wrote:

what kind of score is this (this is a bug for help)

(grrygyh forgot to quote)

Hi, i looked at the game at it looks like the bug is fixed, and the game looks better than ever (except that the backdrop doesn't change from the title, and the timer at the bottom of the screen doesn't hide itsef) I'm excited to watch the progress!

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RetroGamz wrote:

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JCH_Scratcher wrote:

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-Catapult- wrote:

RetroGamz wrote:

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Taken. Please note that this is subject to rule 2.7. of the rules.

JCH_Scratcher wrote:

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Added to wait list

RetroGamz wrote:

-Catapult- wrote:

RetroGamz wrote:

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Taken. Please note that this is subject to rule 2.7. of the rules.

JCH_Scratcher wrote:

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Added to wait list

But why do you not fully rate it if it’s a non mobile friendly game??