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creator's username: Builder_53_Studios
your username: Builder_53_Studios (lol)
title: Eternal
genre: Glitch-hop
other (optional): Link is here: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1073573924/ this is an older release, I'm preparing to release 2 songs soon but I'd love to hear feedback on this! I know the compression is way too high, a lack of low end, and also terrible sound design for the plucks, but I'd love to see if I'm missing anything else!

Builder_53_Studios wrote:

creator's username: Builder_53_Studios
your username: Builder_53_Studios (lol)
title: Eternal
genre: Glitch-hop
other (optional): Link is here: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1073573924/ this is an older release, I'm preparing to release 2 songs soon but I'd love to hear feedback on this! I know the compression is way too high, a lack of low end, and also terrible sound design for the plucks, but I'd love to see if I'm missing anything else!

Hello!
Some stuff regarding your song.
Overall Score: 6.5/10
Notes:
Around the 1 minute mark, note development started getting sloppy and instantly changing between (kind of) low notes and high notes. I recommend adding; at the very least; a grace note to help bring the pitch more steadily up.
The transition was handled very well, however the few seconds of silence and the way you ended it made it sound like the end and an abrupt re-beginning. I’d recommend a full stop of music, followed by growing notes.
The auto tuning was decent; however for some moments, the violin was louder than the voice, which hid some lyrics.
The part after the lyrics was decent, however it stretched a bit longer than necessary and a bit repetitive.
Recommendations:
I’d recommend; instead of repeating the main tune at around 4:00, you can repeat it but if possible add a key change. This will help to not make the song heavily repetitive.

boxerry wrote:

Hello!
Some stuff regarding your song.
Overall Score: 6.5/10
Notes:
Around the 1 minute mark, note development started getting sloppy and instantly changing between (kind of) low notes and high notes. I recommend adding; at the very least; a grace note to help bring the pitch more steadily up.
The transition was handled very well, however the few seconds of silence and the way you ended it made it sound like the end and an abrupt re-beginning. I’d recommend a full stop of music, followed by growing notes.
The auto tuning was decent; however for some moments, the violin was louder than the voice, which hid some lyrics.
The part after the lyrics was decent, however it stretched a bit longer than necessary and a bit repetitive.
Recommendations:
I’d recommend; instead of repeating the main tune at around 4:00, you can repeat it but if possible add a key change. This will help to not make the song heavily repetitive.

Hi, thanks for the feedback! Complete agreement on the autotune, violin, and orchestral singing break. Glad to know I'm on the right page.

The “note development” was fun cause it was an experimental thing I wanted to try. Basically I took a slap-bass styled melody and put it on the lead! You don't have to, but if you ever want you should check out slap bass, I really love it lol.

Thanks again!

This is a requested review to anyone who got time on their hands.

Name:IAMMAARCUS

TITLE: GETALONG

GENRE: HIPHOP, EDM (Multiple genres tell me what you think they are)

Other: Has a slow start.

Link:
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1082605048

IAMMAARCUS wrote:

This is a requested review to anyone who got time on their hands.

Name:IAMMAARCUS

TITLE: GETALONG

GENRE: HIPHOP, EDM (Multiple genres tell me what you think they are)

Other: Has a slow start.

Link:
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1082605048

Review
Overall Score: 6/10
Nice song, but these were the things that popped out at me.
The switch to lyrics is bugging me because of the thumping noises there. It’s not a good fit for the song and it disrupts the vibe you had going.
The ending was overly anticlimactic; the song was too good to just have a fade into silence.
The music was louder than the voices which disrupted the plot of the song.

boxerry wrote:

IAMMAARCUS wrote:

This is a requested review to anyone who got time on their hands.

Name:IAMMAARCUS

TITLE: GETALONG

GENRE: HIPHOP, EDM (Multiple genres tell me what you think they are)

Other: Has a slow start.

Link:
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1082605048

Review
Overall Score: 6/10
Nice song, but these were the things that popped out at me.
The switch to lyrics is bugging me because of the thumping noises there. It’s not a good fit for the song and it disrupts the vibe you had going.
The ending was overly anticlimactic; the song was too good to just have a fade into silence.
The music was louder than the voices which disrupted the plot of the song.

Cool thanks!

creator username: anyone
username: ilikerats4
title: blaber
genra: gibberish
other: i need a man like mumbling like the news guy from bloxburg or something

ilikerats4 wrote:

creator username: anyone
username: ilikerats4
title: blaber
genra: gibberish
other: i need a man like mumbling like the news guy from bloxburg or something

also when i mean bye anyone i just need someone to make it so anyone can do one i just need 1 and also make it a project and comment on my profile when its done

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Create-Scratch101 wrote:

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ilikerats4 wrote:

ilikerats4 wrote:

creator username: anyone
username: ilikerats4
title: blaber
genra: gibberish
other: i need a man like mumbling like the news guy from bloxburg or something

also when i mean bye anyone i just need someone to make it so anyone can do one i just need 1 and also make it a project and comment on my profile when its done

also when can i get my music i need it done today i dont work on winter break

What is The Spirites 2024? And can anyone participate and put a song in? Or is there more strict rules

IAMMAARCUS wrote:

What is The Spirites 2024? And can anyone participate and put a song in? Or is there more strict rules

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