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- Novanuhea123
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
secrets opened, scars by sunset.
she had the amber eyes of a glamor mage. she had the amber eyes of one who could see things no one else could. they said she was a miracle child, even before she’d been born. but none of them expected the scars that danced around her eyes, the scars that decorated half her face. miracle child. the whispers blew away in the wind. the girl with the scars.
the girl with the scars was three years old, the same age where people would coo “what a cute baby!” but none of them did. “turn back, elsie,” her father told her, pulling her back from the sparkly butterflies he’d conjured up. “hide your scars.” that’s what they all said instead.
the girl with the scars was five years old. her magic surfaced like they had all expected; they all exhaled, a sigh of relief. they prayed her scars wouldn’t ruin anything. they prayed there wouldn’t be something else faulty about her. she just played by the creek, oblivious to all of it.
the girl with the scars was ten years old. she noticed the way people skittered around her. it was her now that pulled her hood up to hide her face, not her mother. it was her now with the voices in her head: hide your scars, elsie.
the girl with the scars was thirteen. it was nightmarish, she thought. the voices in her head only got louder, the thoughts of others echoing past her. she weaved stories out of magic in her free time. they kept her sane.
the girl with the scars was fourteen. she was not sane.
and then he came.
him, the boy made of shadows. he took her one day when she was out by the fields. “come with me,” he said gently. he never grimaced at her scars. only embraced her with his shadowy arms. “you can have all you want, elsie. i can make those scars disappear.”
he took her into his void. he taught her magic, how to use it for her own good. little by little, she weaved herself lies. and one day, when she looked down, she realized she had whipped herself a new person.
short hair, freckles that sat by their eyes; their perfect eyes on their scarless face. perfect, perfect, perfect. elsie was long gone. “hello, raven,” the shadow boy said to them, and they realized who they were now. “i’ve done so much for you. can you do a little favor for me?keep raven. spy for me. don’t say your name, or you won’t come back.” he smiled at them comfortingly.
and so raven became the mask. they were raven, and now everything molded together. and soon, they forgot elsie. it was never meant to be, they thought. raven was the prettiest person in the whole grade, the one who everyone wanted to be with.
they noticed as time passed; shadows laced up their arms, their eyes, the gaps between their fingers like cobwebs. their eyes turned pitch dark, taking everything remaining of elsie with the wind. keeping up the facade destroyed them, from the inside out. hide your scars.
they met amina when the shadow boy wanted them to spy on her. they hated her, at first. it felt nice to go behind her back and tell him everything. but they started to like her. amina, the girl who genuinely cared. amina, who wouldn’t kill a bug. amina, who wouldn’t tell lies. oh, how messed up the truth really was.
———
raven turned twenty. they had finished college, somehow. everyone had been pushed out by the shadow boy, keeping them comfortably in the void, until one day raven came back.
“raven?” said a voice. amina. it had been years; she looked so much older. “oh, raven, i missed -“
“elsie,” they corrected. then everything stopped. everything froze. elsie. it had been so, so long since they’d slipped up like that. elsie. so long since they’d said that name, felt it on their lips. don’t say your name, or you won’t come back. memories flashed past them.
hide your scars. raven’s body shimmered into elsie’s. the glamor vanished with a single word.
“who are you?” said amina, stumbling back. then recognition spread to her eyes. “so raven is fake. you’re a spy.” she trembled. “you’re one of them.” she laughed grimly.
the girl with the scars saw her hands. they were not raven’s anymore. they were blackened. “amina, i’m sorry,” she said. “they set me up, but i really do care about y -“
“it was fake!” amina shrieked. a glass bottle fell at her feet, sending broken glass showering everywhere. “do you think a sorry can fix this?”
the girl closed her eyes and tears ran down her face in streams.
“get out, elsie,” amina sneered, shaking. the girl flinched, and then, taking a look back, ran. ran away from everything, like she had done before.
the girl with the scars was back again, twenty. she had lost all of her friends, and her mask had burned to the ground. she was friendless, homeless, an idiot.
————
the girl with the scars was twenty-nine. she was healing now, from the inside. her eyes were bright amber again; scars by sunset. her hands soft and blushed, held by her loved ones. she still heard the evil voices in her head sometimes, but she embraced her scars now. she was happy. she was loved.
and one day, as she ran through the poppy fields, she saw her old friend, the shadow boy, reaching for a small boy with scars on his face like hers.
“come with me,” he said, like he’d done all those years ago. “you can have all you want. i can make those scars disappear.”
she had the amber eyes of a glamor mage. she had the amber eyes of one who could see things no one else could. they said she was a miracle child, even before she’d been born. but none of them expected the scars that danced around her eyes, the scars that decorated half her face. miracle child. the whispers blew away in the wind. the girl with the scars.
the girl with the scars was three years old, the same age where people would coo “what a cute baby!” but none of them did. “turn back, elsie,” her father told her, pulling her back from the sparkly butterflies he’d conjured up. “hide your scars.” that’s what they all said instead.
the girl with the scars was five years old. her magic surfaced like they had all expected; they all exhaled, a sigh of relief. they prayed her scars wouldn’t ruin anything. they prayed there wouldn’t be something else faulty about her. she just played by the creek, oblivious to all of it.
the girl with the scars was ten years old. she noticed the way people skittered around her. it was her now that pulled her hood up to hide her face, not her mother. it was her now with the voices in her head: hide your scars, elsie.
the girl with the scars was thirteen. it was nightmarish, she thought. the voices in her head only got louder, the thoughts of others echoing past her. she weaved stories out of magic in her free time. they kept her sane.
the girl with the scars was fourteen. she was not sane.
and then he came.
him, the boy made of shadows. he took her one day when she was out by the fields. “come with me,” he said gently. he never grimaced at her scars. only embraced her with his shadowy arms. “you can have all you want, elsie. i can make those scars disappear.”
he took her into his void. he taught her magic, how to use it for her own good. little by little, she weaved herself lies. and one day, when she looked down, she realized she had whipped herself a new person.
short hair, freckles that sat by their eyes; their perfect eyes on their scarless face. perfect, perfect, perfect. elsie was long gone. “hello, raven,” the shadow boy said to them, and they realized who they were now. “i’ve done so much for you. can you do a little favor for me?keep raven. spy for me. don’t say your name, or you won’t come back.” he smiled at them comfortingly.
and so raven became the mask. they were raven, and now everything molded together. and soon, they forgot elsie. it was never meant to be, they thought. raven was the prettiest person in the whole grade, the one who everyone wanted to be with.
they noticed as time passed; shadows laced up their arms, their eyes, the gaps between their fingers like cobwebs. their eyes turned pitch dark, taking everything remaining of elsie with the wind. keeping up the facade destroyed them, from the inside out. hide your scars.
they met amina when the shadow boy wanted them to spy on her. they hated her, at first. it felt nice to go behind her back and tell him everything. but they started to like her. amina, the girl who genuinely cared. amina, who wouldn’t kill a bug. amina, who wouldn’t tell lies. oh, how messed up the truth really was.
———
raven turned twenty. they had finished college, somehow. everyone had been pushed out by the shadow boy, keeping them comfortably in the void, until one day raven came back.
“raven?” said a voice. amina. it had been years; she looked so much older. “oh, raven, i missed -“
“elsie,” they corrected. then everything stopped. everything froze. elsie. it had been so, so long since they’d slipped up like that. elsie. so long since they’d said that name, felt it on their lips. don’t say your name, or you won’t come back. memories flashed past them.
hide your scars. raven’s body shimmered into elsie’s. the glamor vanished with a single word.
“who are you?” said amina, stumbling back. then recognition spread to her eyes. “so raven is fake. you’re a spy.” she trembled. “you’re one of them.” she laughed grimly.
the girl with the scars saw her hands. they were not raven’s anymore. they were blackened. “amina, i’m sorry,” she said. “they set me up, but i really do care about y -“
“it was fake!” amina shrieked. a glass bottle fell at her feet, sending broken glass showering everywhere. “do you think a sorry can fix this?”
the girl closed her eyes and tears ran down her face in streams.
“get out, elsie,” amina sneered, shaking. the girl flinched, and then, taking a look back, ran. ran away from everything, like she had done before.
the girl with the scars was back again, twenty. she had lost all of her friends, and her mask had burned to the ground. she was friendless, homeless, an idiot.
————
the girl with the scars was twenty-nine. she was healing now, from the inside. her eyes were bright amber again; scars by sunset. her hands soft and blushed, held by her loved ones. she still heard the evil voices in her head sometimes, but she embraced her scars now. she was happy. she was loved.
and one day, as she ran through the poppy fields, she saw her old friend, the shadow boy, reaching for a small boy with scars on his face like hers.
“come with me,” he said, like he’d done all those years ago. “you can have all you want. i can make those scars disappear.”
- - authors note - -
hello! i’m nova. this piece is drawn a lot from my own feelings and experiences, and of course my imagination. and a post or two that provided some inspiration
this story is a lot about one person and her feelings, but it’s also a lot about what people and ideas can do to a person. it’s about the idea of perfection. maybe even society as a whole.
and this story is, in some ways, a little bit of my story. maybe it’s also someone else’s story. i wrote it because i think people need to see it and listen. thank you for reading, and thank you for listening <3
Last edited by Novanuhea123 (Dec. 1, 2024 00:38:23)
- -WildClan-
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
last-minute writing comp entry because eh why not ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
slightly revised constellation daily
371 words
“Farewell Letter”
You looked up at those lights in the sky and saw them as no one had ever seen them before. Whereas I had only ever noticed a background, you believed in each one as its own little ball of fire, dancing through the midnight darkness in patterns yet unwritten. Your beautiful eyes, open wide to the night, dreamed up visions beyond my wildest reckoning. You drew maps of everything I knew and then sought what lay beyond. The world sang to you as if you were the only one who could hear its harmonies.
You’re always reaching for the next great mystery; you’re always reaching for the stars. I know you need to venture over the horizon and chase them down. It’s who you are.
It isn’t up to me to pin your wings, no, there isn’t a force in the world that can stop you if you choose to open them wide to the sky and follow the only trail your heart knows to take. It took me a while, but I understand it now, that sometimes a goodbye is the only way to set someone free.
You won’t be here tomorrow, but your dreams will linger in every mind you’ve touched. They will still be here when I’m long gone.
I just wanted to let you know, before you leave on the journey of your lifetime, that you brought the stars to existence with your wondering gaze. Even when wide awake, you’re dreaming, seeing a world that no one else can witness. But I’ve learned to see the reflection in your eyes. I never thought anything could change me so much again, but there you are, and here I am, looking up to the sky in awe as if none of what happened before even matters now.
When you go, I’ll still look for you in the night, in the patterns of the stars. Maybe I’ll even name one after you. That way, you’ll be in my sight no matter how far away you fly. I need only to look up and I will see your brilliant dreams painted across the heavens.
Safe travels, my son. I hope you find what you're looking for.
And thank you for everything.
slightly revised constellation daily

371 words
“Farewell Letter”
You looked up at those lights in the sky and saw them as no one had ever seen them before. Whereas I had only ever noticed a background, you believed in each one as its own little ball of fire, dancing through the midnight darkness in patterns yet unwritten. Your beautiful eyes, open wide to the night, dreamed up visions beyond my wildest reckoning. You drew maps of everything I knew and then sought what lay beyond. The world sang to you as if you were the only one who could hear its harmonies.
You’re always reaching for the next great mystery; you’re always reaching for the stars. I know you need to venture over the horizon and chase them down. It’s who you are.
It isn’t up to me to pin your wings, no, there isn’t a force in the world that can stop you if you choose to open them wide to the sky and follow the only trail your heart knows to take. It took me a while, but I understand it now, that sometimes a goodbye is the only way to set someone free.
You won’t be here tomorrow, but your dreams will linger in every mind you’ve touched. They will still be here when I’m long gone.
I just wanted to let you know, before you leave on the journey of your lifetime, that you brought the stars to existence with your wondering gaze. Even when wide awake, you’re dreaming, seeing a world that no one else can witness. But I’ve learned to see the reflection in your eyes. I never thought anything could change me so much again, but there you are, and here I am, looking up to the sky in awe as if none of what happened before even matters now.
When you go, I’ll still look for you in the night, in the patterns of the stars. Maybe I’ll even name one after you. That way, you’ll be in my sight no matter how far away you fly. I need only to look up and I will see your brilliant dreams painted across the heavens.
Safe travels, my son. I hope you find what you're looking for.
And thank you for everything.
Last edited by -WildClan- (Nov. 30, 2024 23:56:22)
- booklover883322
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Here’s how I will be cataloging the roleplays!
Any important quotes will hopefully be kept the same. I’ll lightly highlight them so you know they’re directly quoted from one of us or something to that effect.
Direct dialogue quotes from me
Direct dialogue quotes from you
I will be cutting out the fluff, so don’t expect to see a bunch of “indeeds” everywhere haha-
No conversations will be included, so anything we said to each other during the roleplays will not be included unless I find them funny enough to add as a screenshot in the “Extra Stuff” tab.
Largely, I will be keeping the plots the same (with minor changes), although I may exercise some creative liberty regarding parts like the Zyran Arc (which I want to improve/largely rewrite while still keeping the same outcomes).
This will not be just copying and pasting! I’ll be livening them up as much as possible to make them engaging and sound stories by putting my own interpretation on events as well as how the prose would’ve been written if we were, y’know, more long-winded and wordy. I’ll be actually writing, so some things may be changed to fit what I have in mind. While I will be making changes, many of them will not be substantial and hopefully not out of character or place. It’s mainly just to improve things.
I will be making a lot of creative choices, so I may skip over some things that we dwelt on for too long, such as that part in the Thief AU.
I may add in some extra scenes, though that’s up to my discretion. If I do, I’ll do something to distinguish them from the rest of what’s canon. (This’ll often be interactions between characters that are played by the same person, like Rose and Riley, who were both played by me and didn’t get a lot of one-on-one interaction)
TL;DR: I will be trying to keep the creative essence the same while still sprucing up the rps as much as possible. This won’t be copying and pasting, and I will be taking a bit of creative liberty. They’ll be written like legitimate stories (which they already were, but you get the vibe-) They’ll hopefully be more coherent
Any important quotes will hopefully be kept the same. I’ll lightly highlight them so you know they’re directly quoted from one of us or something to that effect.
Direct dialogue quotes from me
Direct dialogue quotes from you
I will be cutting out the fluff, so don’t expect to see a bunch of “indeeds” everywhere haha-
No conversations will be included, so anything we said to each other during the roleplays will not be included unless I find them funny enough to add as a screenshot in the “Extra Stuff” tab.
Largely, I will be keeping the plots the same (with minor changes), although I may exercise some creative liberty regarding parts like the Zyran Arc (which I want to improve/largely rewrite while still keeping the same outcomes).
This will not be just copying and pasting! I’ll be livening them up as much as possible to make them engaging and sound stories by putting my own interpretation on events as well as how the prose would’ve been written if we were, y’know, more long-winded and wordy. I’ll be actually writing, so some things may be changed to fit what I have in mind. While I will be making changes, many of them will not be substantial and hopefully not out of character or place. It’s mainly just to improve things.
I will be making a lot of creative choices, so I may skip over some things that we dwelt on for too long, such as that part in the Thief AU.
I may add in some extra scenes, though that’s up to my discretion. If I do, I’ll do something to distinguish them from the rest of what’s canon. (This’ll often be interactions between characters that are played by the same person, like Rose and Riley, who were both played by me and didn’t get a lot of one-on-one interaction)
TL;DR: I will be trying to keep the creative essence the same while still sprucing up the rps as much as possible. This won’t be copying and pasting, and I will be taking a bit of creative liberty. They’ll be written like legitimate stories (which they already were, but you get the vibe-) They’ll hopefully be more coherent

Last edited by booklover883322 (Dec. 21, 2024 00:04:00)
- TheDisney_Writer
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Scratcher
14 posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
November 30th Daily- Thank you notes
Words: 437 total
An author of books can write as many books as possible, but I can’t write enough words to express my gratitude towards everyone in this camp. This was my very first session, but I am already excited for the next. I joined this camp to improve my writing, and I believe that this is exactly what happened. I want to thank each and every one of you all but that might be too many words. I will however give thanks yo some people specifically. Firstly, I must say thanks to @mossflower29 for hosting this year’s session. I don’t know if it has always been you but I do want to say that you have done an amazing job. I had so much fun and even made some friends along the way. I want you to know that you are beloved by many and never let anyone dim your light. Shine throughout all darkness and keep going. Secondly, I want to thank every camp leader for helping the camp grow and encouraging others to write work. This camp couldn’t work without leaders and all who stepped up to help are amazing and wonderful writers. Never stop doing what you love and stay true to yourselves. You all are amazing people, and I am proud to call you my friends (even though I may not know some of you.) You have my respect and support! Thank you for being wonderful people to me and I am so happy to have had the session with all of you. Lastly, I want to thank all of the campers, for making this camp be possible. With all of these amazing writers, it has encouraged me to take my writing journey further. Every camper that I have met or talked to has been kind and generous to me. Thank you for that for many people can’t have that. I’m super grateful to meet all of you. I also just want to mention that everyone has their own type of writing and everyone’s writing was amazing to read. Being here in this camp allows me to be with people to understand and enjoy my writing. Thank you all for allowing me to be here and share my writing pieces with you. I wish this camp could be longer (even though there is a next session) unfortunately it can’t. Thank you all for being there and making this camp to be a wonderful experience. Thank you all again! I hope you have a great rest of your break! (Holiday…. unless you don’t celebrate…then I’m sorry) Keep writing and stay in the light. Love you all!!
Words: 437 total
An author of books can write as many books as possible, but I can’t write enough words to express my gratitude towards everyone in this camp. This was my very first session, but I am already excited for the next. I joined this camp to improve my writing, and I believe that this is exactly what happened. I want to thank each and every one of you all but that might be too many words. I will however give thanks yo some people specifically. Firstly, I must say thanks to @mossflower29 for hosting this year’s session. I don’t know if it has always been you but I do want to say that you have done an amazing job. I had so much fun and even made some friends along the way. I want you to know that you are beloved by many and never let anyone dim your light. Shine throughout all darkness and keep going. Secondly, I want to thank every camp leader for helping the camp grow and encouraging others to write work. This camp couldn’t work without leaders and all who stepped up to help are amazing and wonderful writers. Never stop doing what you love and stay true to yourselves. You all are amazing people, and I am proud to call you my friends (even though I may not know some of you.) You have my respect and support! Thank you for being wonderful people to me and I am so happy to have had the session with all of you. Lastly, I want to thank all of the campers, for making this camp be possible. With all of these amazing writers, it has encouraged me to take my writing journey further. Every camper that I have met or talked to has been kind and generous to me. Thank you for that for many people can’t have that. I’m super grateful to meet all of you. I also just want to mention that everyone has their own type of writing and everyone’s writing was amazing to read. Being here in this camp allows me to be with people to understand and enjoy my writing. Thank you all for allowing me to be here and share my writing pieces with you. I wish this camp could be longer (even though there is a next session) unfortunately it can’t. Thank you all for being there and making this camp to be a wonderful experience. Thank you all again! I hope you have a great rest of your break! (Holiday…. unless you don’t celebrate…then I’m sorry) Keep writing and stay in the light. Love you all!!
- ChueyTheCat
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Scratcher
500+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
chuey's thank you notes <3 im not doing a word count lol
the hosts
thanks to all of you for another amazing session of swc!! you did an awesome job and I really appreciate all the work you do to keep swc running <3 here's to many more chaos-filled sessions of writing
also, alana and rockie, congrats on your first session as hosts! you guys both did great and I hope to see you around for many session to come
the polar bears and polar bear cubs
being a first-time coleader can be daunting, especially when, like me, you decide to do all the things, but I'll never regret joining you guys, and I hope to participate again next time! writing activities was really fun and now I can appreciate first-hand everything y'all do to ensure the session runs smoothly. going on strike with you was part of the most fun chaos I've ever been in, which is saying a lot. so thanks for making my first session as a co extra special <3
fantasy cabin
first off, I just wanna say y'all rocked. we shot up the leaderboard, turned in activities, and made memories along the way - and, of course, we tamed our dragons and defeated the evil tyrants! (no, not the hosts…although, considering what alana did to the mascots, maybe we should have.) it was an absolute blast co-ing with and for you guys, and I would 100% do it again <3 thanks for being awesome, and I hope to see everyone again in march
amethyst
okay, first off, leading with you was SO. MUCH. FUN. I remember how excited I got when I saw I had an offer from you - I knew fantasy was the one. I was nervous about co-ing for the first time, but being part of your team was really awesome, and it always made me smile when you'd stumble across one of my unhinged comments in the main cabin and go CHUEY WHAT. also you are tasty fishy fishy because you commented above me in the main cabin. (note: this was written late at night can you tell - a more sane chuey a few days later)
anyways the polar bear chuey appreciation moment had me almost crying and I couldn't have asked for a better leader to share the session with <33 every moment was a sheer joy.
also I got to boot you off a mountain because you are short and alana said so
willow
ahh where to start?? coleading with you was fantastic <3 I wished so hard that you would accept amethyst's offer when I saw she'd offered on your app, and lo and behold! it was amazing getting to collaborate with you for fantasy's art - your art is so gorgeous and you matched my style PERFECTLY :0 coleading the dragon tamer zoo (courtesy of bangsian's descriptions) with you was super fun, and I hope to see you around swc again!!
sage
sage <33 having you in my cabin was so much fun, and I'm really glad that your first session was with fantasy! you're one of the most enthusiastic first-timers I've ever met and it was awesome getting to know you. your help during cabin wars was invaluable, and you wrote a LOT of words this session - fantasy couldn't have done it without you <3 I hope to see you around in future sessions, and I'd treasure the opportunity to be in a cabin with you again some day
alana
ALANABANANA
magreal looked so cool this session and I wanted a boba pal so bad they were adorable <33 my deepest apologies for attacking your cabin twice, in my defense they were screaming for wars even louder than bi-fi was last session. your cabins are made of swcers warriors ahaha-
anyways it was great eating mascots with you this session and stealing your toes because ris said I could
they are delicious just so you know
as you can probably tell by now I'm bad at writing long, not-silly thank you notes but you're so cool <3 keep being awesome
mouse
MOUSEEEEE chueysoulcorps is dead but the toes live on <3 thank you for helping me find my true calling in life and I wish you luck stealing borrowing souls. you still can't have mine though.
also thanks for helping make polar bear cubs a reality because POLAR BEAR CUBS <33 working for the polar bears this session was a lot of fun and I'll totally be back
and thank you for sending me the eevee walrus because I needed that in my life.
swc ended and took my motivation and writing skills with it but you're amazing thanks for being my friend <3
ris
teaming up with you to try and add points before mouse could at the start of the session was a great way to kick off the session chaos, so thanks for that XD and you gave me alana's toes hooray!! I love toes <3
dystopian looked awesome, you did a great job leading! I can't wait to see where you go next, and what chaos you make because we're both very good at making mayhem
finally PINK PONY CLUB was an absolute masterpiece I felt such deep emotions while reading it you and recca wrote something unmatched in swc fanfic history it was so beautiful
zy
I HAVE THE TOES HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA
thanks for helping spread mayhem over swc's shiny new cabin on only the third (?) day of camp and creating something that might just go down in swc history. stealing toes and holding you in debt brought me joy that was only rivalled by my joy over the strike later. the toes you gave me were scrumptious and I forgive you for trying to take over and become the toe snatcher because we all know I'm the one and only toe stealer B)
bookie
i am running out of time and motivation but i look forward to getting to know you better, thanks for helping me add points at the end of the session and i can't wait to see you around
vi
tysm for the critique you're awesome and also thanks for donating your teeth <33 they were very nice teeth and im slowly getting sillier and sillier i shouldnt have tried to write again so soon after swc imma die
i hope to see you around in swc next year
yume
these are the last words i will write before my hands die /j anyways thanks for helping with the strike chaos it was fun and yeah um my thoughts are no longer functioning but you're cool <3
swc
love yall you guys are one of the best things that's ever happened to me <3
briar
school bus (iykyk) /JJJ /dontkillmeplease
the hosts
thanks to all of you for another amazing session of swc!! you did an awesome job and I really appreciate all the work you do to keep swc running <3 here's to many more chaos-filled sessions of writing

also, alana and rockie, congrats on your first session as hosts! you guys both did great and I hope to see you around for many session to come

the polar bears and polar bear cubs
being a first-time coleader can be daunting, especially when, like me, you decide to do all the things, but I'll never regret joining you guys, and I hope to participate again next time! writing activities was really fun and now I can appreciate first-hand everything y'all do to ensure the session runs smoothly. going on strike with you was part of the most fun chaos I've ever been in, which is saying a lot. so thanks for making my first session as a co extra special <3
fantasy cabin
first off, I just wanna say y'all rocked. we shot up the leaderboard, turned in activities, and made memories along the way - and, of course, we tamed our dragons and defeated the evil tyrants! (no, not the hosts…although, considering what alana did to the mascots, maybe we should have.) it was an absolute blast co-ing with and for you guys, and I would 100% do it again <3 thanks for being awesome, and I hope to see everyone again in march

amethyst
okay, first off, leading with you was SO. MUCH. FUN. I remember how excited I got when I saw I had an offer from you - I knew fantasy was the one. I was nervous about co-ing for the first time, but being part of your team was really awesome, and it always made me smile when you'd stumble across one of my unhinged comments in the main cabin and go CHUEY WHAT. also you are tasty fishy fishy because you commented above me in the main cabin. (note: this was written late at night can you tell - a more sane chuey a few days later)
anyways the polar bear chuey appreciation moment had me almost crying and I couldn't have asked for a better leader to share the session with <33 every moment was a sheer joy.
also I got to boot you off a mountain because you are short and alana said so

willow
ahh where to start?? coleading with you was fantastic <3 I wished so hard that you would accept amethyst's offer when I saw she'd offered on your app, and lo and behold! it was amazing getting to collaborate with you for fantasy's art - your art is so gorgeous and you matched my style PERFECTLY :0 coleading the dragon tamer zoo (courtesy of bangsian's descriptions) with you was super fun, and I hope to see you around swc again!!
sage
sage <33 having you in my cabin was so much fun, and I'm really glad that your first session was with fantasy! you're one of the most enthusiastic first-timers I've ever met and it was awesome getting to know you. your help during cabin wars was invaluable, and you wrote a LOT of words this session - fantasy couldn't have done it without you <3 I hope to see you around in future sessions, and I'd treasure the opportunity to be in a cabin with you again some day

alana
ALANABANANA
magreal looked so cool this session and I wanted a boba pal so bad they were adorable <33 my deepest apologies for attacking your cabin twice, in my defense they were screaming for wars even louder than bi-fi was last session. your cabins are made of swcers warriors ahaha-anyways it was great eating mascots with you this session and stealing your toes because ris said I could
they are delicious just so you knowas you can probably tell by now I'm bad at writing long, not-silly thank you notes but you're so cool <3 keep being awesome
mouse
MOUSEEEEE chueysoulcorps is dead but the toes live on <3 thank you for helping me find my true calling in life and I wish you luck stealing borrowing souls. you still can't have mine though.
also thanks for helping make polar bear cubs a reality because POLAR BEAR CUBS <33 working for the polar bears this session was a lot of fun and I'll totally be back
and thank you for sending me the eevee walrus because I needed that in my life.swc ended and took my motivation and writing skills with it but you're amazing thanks for being my friend <3
ris
teaming up with you to try and add points before mouse could at the start of the session was a great way to kick off the session chaos, so thanks for that XD and you gave me alana's toes hooray!! I love toes <3
dystopian looked awesome, you did a great job leading! I can't wait to see where you go next, and what chaos you make because we're both very good at making mayhem

finally PINK PONY CLUB was an absolute masterpiece I felt such deep emotions while reading it you and recca wrote something unmatched in swc fanfic history it was so beautiful
zy
I HAVE THE TOES HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA
thanks for helping spread mayhem over swc's shiny new cabin on only the third (?) day of camp and creating something that might just go down in swc history. stealing toes and holding you in debt brought me joy that was only rivalled by my joy over the strike later. the toes you gave me were scrumptious and I forgive you for trying to take over and become the toe snatcher because we all know I'm the one and only toe stealer B)
bookie
i am running out of time and motivation but i look forward to getting to know you better, thanks for helping me add points at the end of the session and i can't wait to see you around

vi
tysm for the critique you're awesome and also thanks for donating your teeth <33 they were very nice teeth and im slowly getting sillier and sillier i shouldnt have tried to write again so soon after swc imma die
i hope to see you around in swc next year

yume
these are the last words i will write before my hands die /j anyways thanks for helping with the strike chaos it was fun and yeah um my thoughts are no longer functioning but you're cool <3
swc
love yall you guys are one of the best things that's ever happened to me <3
briar
school bus (iykyk) /JJJ /dontkillmeplease
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- Runaway--
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Scratcher
37 posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Critique for Tiny!!
First things first, I think it could benefit you to separate this more. Put a space after your text, and try and split your work into paragraphs just to make it more readable.
I think it would flow better if you changed ‘It was definitely a party you could call magnificent’ to 'It was definitely an event you could call magnificent.' This is just because you've used the word party five words earlier so changing this could avoid repetition. Same thing in the last sentence, maybe replace '-the party would break into chaos' with ‘it would break into chaos.’ Using words like ‘celebration’ or ‘social event.’ could also help break it up a bit.
'happened around or happened with works better in this sentence.
“Is not very” would flow a little better here, just in terms of making sense + readibility.
Useing semicolons could work here, because you're listing. "The food consisted of marvelous cakes, such as a 7-tier red velvet cake that was clearly the queen’s favorite; wonderful appetizers, like the fruit salad consisting of cherries, strawberries, raspberries, apples, and many more delightful fruits and, of course, the main course; a beef Wellington thought to have been made by the queen’s very own private chef." your call, though, it makes sense either way, only the examples make the sentence last a long, long time.
Sorry for slightly useless critique, but overall this is a really good story! Just improve your paragraphs/spacing, and check for repetition, and you're good!! I love the final reveal
First things first, I think it could benefit you to separate this more. Put a space after your text, and try and split your work into paragraphs just to make it more readable.
“The queen is dead! The queen is dead!”
These were the words that rang out throughout the party. It was definitely a party you could call magnificent—after all, the queen had invited most anyone who was anyone—so it seemed suiting that such an event would happen. Rather ironic, isn’t it? The very reason the party was together would also be the reason the party would break out into chaos.
I think it would flow better if you changed ‘It was definitely a party you could call magnificent’ to 'It was definitely an event you could call magnificent.' This is just because you've used the word party five words earlier so changing this could avoid repetition. Same thing in the last sentence, maybe replace '-the party would break into chaos' with ‘it would break into chaos.’ Using words like ‘celebration’ or ‘social event.’ could also help break it up a bit.
Well, technically, the Queen of Hearts was not the one who caused herself to die, so in a way, she was not fully the reason the party’s atmosphere shifted into chaos. Wait. No. Chaos was not a strong enough word for what was happening. Extreme destruction and an irreversible mess, perhaps? Still feels like a bit of an understatement, but it’s impossible to describe just how much of a mess it was. If you were there, you could have easily understood what had been happening, but you, however, were not there, so you cannot understand it so easily. A shame, really, because the party was a truly wonderful event, minus everything that happened about the queen’s death.
'happened around or happened with works better in this sentence.
Ah, that reminds me—I suppose I should tell you a few more details about the tragedy, should I not? The party started out beautifully, just a modest and simple celebration to honor the banishment of the monster Alice—well, as modest and simple a celebration hosted by the Queen of Hearts could be. Which, as you would know if you had ever attended one, is not much.
“Is not very” would flow a little better here, just in terms of making sense + readibility.
The queen had decorated the castle with balloons, streamers, and tapestries as far as the mortal eye could see, and with one of the most amazing selections of colors and creations that one could choose. The food consisted of marvelous cakes, such as a 7-tier red velvet cake that was clearly the queen’s favorite, wonderful appetizers, like the fruit salad consisting of cherries, strawberries, raspberries, apples, and many more delightful fruits, and, of course, the main course, a beef Wellington thought to have been made by the queen’s very own private chef.
Useing semicolons could work here, because you're listing. "The food consisted of marvelous cakes, such as a 7-tier red velvet cake that was clearly the queen’s favorite; wonderful appetizers, like the fruit salad consisting of cherries, strawberries, raspberries, apples, and many more delightful fruits and, of course, the main course; a beef Wellington thought to have been made by the queen’s very own private chef." your call, though, it makes sense either way, only the examples make the sentence last a long, long time.
Now, onto the events of the night. There were a few games, a couple of riddles (oh, you know how much Wonderlandians love riddles!), and then some time for guests to socialize and eat. It was during this time, however, that the panic began. It started with the queen’s guards not being able to find her before a big speech she was supposed to announce to the party’s guests. Everyone simply assumed she had been taking a walk, but you, dear reader, know that this is not the case, and soon enough everyone realized this as well.
All living creatures (and a few not-so-living ones, mind you!) began to look for the queen, but she could not be found. After a while of searching, the truth started to sink into the Wonderlandians—the Queen of Hearts was missing, and at her very own party! It was truly a traumatic moment for all of her poor guests.
At first, it seemed simple enough—find the queen, restore the peace, and then we wouldn't speak of this ever again. But it was most definitely not as simple as it seemed. It seems that, in fact, it took them long to realize she had, in fact, died, but when they did, their reactions were similar to the words I told you—which, in case you forgot, are four simple little words that are not simple or little to the people of Wonderland in the slightest: the queen is dead.
And, of course, I suppose it’s rather rude of me to tell you all of this without even telling you what I intend to do! It’s dreadfully inconsiderate of me, truly. But I will fix this mistake by telling you something that really is simple (though maybe not so little!): I will find out who did this, and they will be sorry.
So, let’s start our investigation with a cup of tea and the maddest guest at the party, shall we?
Sorry for slightly useless critique, but overall this is a really good story! Just improve your paragraphs/spacing, and check for repetition, and you're good!! I love the final reveal

Last edited by Runaway-- (Dec. 1, 2024 05:27:39)
- booklover883322
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Weekly Four
Intro: 129/100
Greece: 432/200
Inuit: 545/200
Navajo: 416/200
Aztecs/Egypt: 469/400
Mayans: 200/200
Swahili States: 206/200
Aksum/Minoan/APA: 692/600
China/Rome: 650/400
Mesopotamia: 265/200
Total Word Count: 3875/2600
Completed: 11/30/24 at 10:54 MST (my timezone, so you know that all these words count <3)
Selected: Blahaj
Intro
A glowing man runs in front of you. He beamed, “Hi there, hi there! Are you the new god here?” You nod your head, making a face. He giggles, “Oh, perfect! I have a questionnn-” You tilt your head, gesturing for him to go on. “Well, first of all, my name is Elio! I'm the god of Light and Language, and I just wanted to show you something that my wife wrote, sort of as an autobiography!” You cringe, shaking your head. He pleads with you, “Aw, please! It would mean so much to her if you could read it!” He holds out a small scroll, and you sigh, grabbing the scroll. He grinned, “Thank you so much! Have fun reading it!” He shifted into a dove, flying away.
Ancient Greece: Incorporate the supernatural/spiritual into your writing
Some wonder why I decided being a mercenary for the gods was a good idea. For me, it could not be more obvious. Power, fame, and even money. For every task I do, I receive a prize, and these prizes are all of my drive in this life. I dream of joining their ranks one day, even if it is just through power alone. I was made for the divine.
I yawned, sitting up in bed and rubbing my eyes. I groaned as I felt the little ridges in them, worn down by nights spent scratching at them. I slid my legs over to the side, standing up. I sluggishly made my way over to the mirror and rubbed my face as I tried to wake myself up. It was an unholy hour of the day and still dark out. My tattoos glowed a dark blue as I started to brush my hair, my eyes just barely cracked open. The tattoos were like waves on my arms, swirling in and out of each other, signifying my command over the waters. My legs were covered in jagged crystal tattoos, etched in sharply. I had direct control over my own fate, although it was a bit confusing at times. My stomach was lined with vines, signifying my abilities to control and converse with the plant life all over the earth. They even looked like they were growing out of the dirt, what with my darker skin tone. I scrutinized my face, glad to see the face tattoos still looked good. They weren’t too symbolic at first glance, but my linguistic abilities were centered around my mouth. These tattoos showed that my mouth could bring understanding or turmoil, and I relished in that fact.
Well, it was time to get dressed.
I reached into my closet and picked a cropped tank top to wear, as well as some tighter pants that would allow for better mobility. After dressing myself, I did some minimal makeup, lining my striking blue eyes to make them more dramatic. I huffed, rubbing out the eyeliner a moment later. I didn’t need to draw attention to my eyes, what was I thinking? I pulled my hair into a ponytail, and even then, it reached below my hips. It was incredibly curly, which made it annoying to take care of. I smiled, looking at myself. I was a thing of beauty. My body was a machine, my mind a bastion of information. I was near invincible. I couldn’t help but self-indulgently flex my arms a bit before moving on to feed myself.
Inuit: Your character shows empathy and helps an animal
I walked outside and smiled to see that my garden was thriving. The sun beat down on my face and neck, although I had no worries about burns since he and I went way back. I bent down and picked a few strawberries from a large and unruly bush. It waved a limb, and I waved back at it, thanking it for its sustenance with a bow.
I heard a noise from behind me and turned. I tilted my head, surprised by the sight in front of me. How curious… I approached a small dove that was stuck in the brush that towered around my abode.
“Excuse me, are you in need of assistance?”
The dove nodded its head, struggling to pick its wing out of the thorny bush.
I pursed my lips and waved my hand to part the thorns. “I am very sorry, my friend. Are you alright?”
It nodded once again, shaking its wings. I smiled, glad that it was alright. I made a face, “Are you here to deliver a message?”
The dove glanced around before it began to morph into a man.
The dove grew taller and more humanoid, glowing and shining as it finally transformed into a god whom I had worked with many times before.
Once the transformation was over, he spread his arms, giving me a huge smile, “Lilith! It is SO good to see you!”
I crossed my arms, “What do you want?”
Elio stopped, coughing a bit. His almost pure-white skin reddened. “Why, Lilith, how forward- Wouldn’t you like to at least say hello to me first?”
I shook my head, “Just get to the point, please.”
He sighed, “I don’t know why I expected more, you were never one for pleasantries-” He tugged at his long, curly blond hair and bit his lip. “Well, I… need your help. Yet again.”
“Ah, not surprising in the slightest.”
He reddened even further, “Just so you’re aware, I can do things for myself, but- but- I just… sometimes require assistance, that’s all!”
“You enjoy getting help from me, I understand. Nothing to be ashamed of.” I smirked, watching him cough more as he attempted to hide how flustered he was getting. How… endearing.
He rubbed his neck, “Well, um, yes, I suppose that is correct. I do… I do like having your help.” He paused, “But! Remember! I was the man who gave you your immortality in the first place, so, really, you are just returning the favor!”
“Really? Huh, I’ve never registered that hundreds of quests and favors would count as returning a single one. Honestly, Elio, you’ve made my eternal life more miserable than enjoyable.”
He sighed, “I suppose… But, I really, truly need your help this time. I could strengthen your healing magic!”
I raised an eyebrow, “Really, that’s all you’re offering?”
“I’m desperate!”
“Then give me enough to actually care.”
“How, how about I give you shapeshifting?”
“I got that ability from Alina a few decades ago, this is old news, my friend.”
Elio sighed, “How… how about I give you something else?”
“I want some of your feathers.” I stated.
He reddened even FURTHER. “Oh- oh- really? That’s… different-”
“Feathers, Elio. That’s what I want. Three of them.”
He grimaced, “Ughhhh, fine-”
Navajo Nation: Your character is forced to make a decision they don’t want to do
I smiled, “Pleasure doing business with you.”
He sighed, plucking a few feathers from his back and handing them to me. I took them delicately and set them to the side. “Alright, now what’s making you so desperate?”
Elio plopped himself on the ground and groaned, “My father is waging warrrrr- againnnn-”
“What does that have to do with you?” I sat opposite him, crossing my legs delicately.
“He wants me to help him, and I can’t say noooo-”
“How devastating,” I said dully.
He shot me a glare. I chuckled, gesturing for him to go on.
He sighed, “I just… don’t want to do it!”
“Again, how devastating.”
“I KNOW!” His eyes burst with light, and I couldn’t help but snicker.
“I’m very sorry my friend, please, continue.”
He huffed. “I really don’t want to be involved, because he’s warring the other Pantheons, and I really want to be on good terms with them!”
“Why is he warring them?”
“I honestly have NO idea!” He groaned, flopping onto the ground.
I scooted a little closer, so I could hear him better.
Elio sighed, “I just need help. Please, can you try to fight on my behalf and end the war quickly? It’ll make it SO much easier if you just wipe everything out quickly so I don’t have to deal with anything.”
I raised an eyebrow, “You know that I don’t enjoy working for your father’s benefit. Remember the last time I worked for him?”
“But you won’t be working for him, you’ll be working for me!”
I made a face, “Still.”
“Pleaseeeeeeee-”
I sighed, finding the face that he made while pleading to be utterly pathetic. “I will try to find some other way first, but if I cannot find a solution that doesn’t benefit your father entirely, I will do as you ask.”
Elio threw up his hands in the air, “WOO!” He shot up and grabbed me in a huge hug, which caught me off-guard. I pushed him back, “ExCUSE me- Don’t touch me without asking first!”
He shot back, “Oh- Oh- Sorry!”
I crossed my arms, “You should know this by now.”
He chuckled nervously, “You’re right, I should know better-” He got up and stretched, “Welll, have fun! You know how to keep in touch!” He gave me a wink before transforming back into a dove and flying away. I shook my head. Wow, that man. I sighed and got up, walking back inside to gather my weapons and supplies.
Aztecs: Incorporate an image/symbol that unearths a memory in the main character/Ancient Egypt: Your main character has a “dark day”
I rummaged through my drawers, finding various artifacts that I’ve hoarded over the years. I lifted up a necklace, the chain lined with thorns. I wrinkled my nose. Ugh, this one was uncomfortable. I set that to the side, picking up a pendant that sucked all the shadows into it the moment I put it on. I made a face, no, this one wouldn’t do.
I didn’t know why I was being so picky this time around, but, for some reason, I was. I scurried everywhere around my house, trying to find something that would suit the occasion. Eventually, I had to resort to digging through my storage. I descended the stairs to my basement and began to pick through what boxes I had. I heard something roll around in one of the boxes. Ah, that must be the crystals that I would occasionally use for divination. I had forgotten about those.
I reached over and opened the small box, and two dull, brown eyeballs stared back at me. I cringed, shying away from the box. Bile rose in my throat as my mind forcefully dragged me back through the depths of my memory.
“It will benefit you, Lilith. Trust me.”
“I don’t want this!”
“You will want this, I assure you.”
My shrieks rang through my head. They echoed and slammed into my skull. My tattoos glowed red. My eye sockets burned and squealed in agony, almost as if the deed was being done right then instead of thousands of years ago. I scratched at my face, fingers scraping at the cold ceramic that now composed my eyes. I wanted them out! I wanted them out! I wanted them to leave me! Just end the pain, end the misery. I hissed, my fingernails screeching and squealing as they attacked my eyes. I knew it was destructive, I knew that it wouldn’t do anything. But, I couldn’t stop. My eyes burned and throbbed. They weren’t the culprits, so why did I punish them? I had no idea, but I didn’t care. OUT! OUT! I wanted them OUT! I was blind before and I could be blind again! I needed none of Alaric’s rewards. None of them, NONE! I shuddered, hugging my arms. I writhed on the ground, sobs begging to escape from my throat as I attempted to hold it together. No tears formed, nothing to soothe the scraping. My eyes itched and burned, and I couldn’t help but resent them. Sight wasn’t worth it if it was forced. I never wanted it. I never needed it.
I closed my eyes, darkening my vision. That gave me a bit of solace, a reminder of my life before. I couldn’t help but smile as the darkness comforted me. It wasn’t a perfect reminder of my blindness, but it would do.
Mayans: Include a ‘creation’/origin about your character and Swahili City States: Part of the story in script format
Eventually, I calmed. My chest rose and fell slowly as I let my heaving breaths gently release into the air. I sat up and swallowed whatever bile there was before anxiously peeking into the box yet again. The eyes were still there, still as… eye-like as ever. I cringed, memories still resurfacing like waves, beating against the walls of my mental fortitude.
Alaric: “Wonderful job, Lilith.”
Lilith: “Thank you, Almighty. Your praise brings me great joy.”
Alaric: “As it should. Now, what would you like as your reward.”
Lilith: “Power, that is simple. I made that clear to you from the moment I agreed to do your bidding.”
Alaric: “I have power that you have never known, and I’m sure that it will be beneficial to you. Of course, many other beings have this ability, but I’m sure that you would be glad to join their ranks.”
Lilith: “That would be wonderful, Almighty. I shall accept whatever you have to offer.”
Alaric: “Ah, perfect. Sight shall suit you well.”
Lilith: “Excuse me?”
Alaric: “It will benefit you, Lilith, trust me.”
Lilith: “I don’t want this! You promised me power!”
Alaric: “You will want this, I assure you.”
Lilith: “Where- where am I?”
Selene: “You’re still at my father’s palace.”
Lilith: “Oh gods, you are beautiful-”
Selene: “I’m glad that you’ve finally noticed. Well, it’s not like you’ve had a choice, but all the same.”
Selene: “How are you feeling?”
Lilith: “Horrid.”
Selene: “You don’t look like it.”
Lilith: “I am in shock.”
Selene: “Well, now might be the time to give you these then.”
Lilith: “Give me… what?”
My memory faded there. Ah, my mind was blocking the trauma. How noble of it. I huffed and closed the box, shoving it out of sight as I attempted to reign in my emotional response to it. I was better than this. In a way, didn’t he actually benefit me in the long run? Because of him, I ended up having so much more renown than I could’ve ever dreamed of. Of course, I always wanted more, but his so-called reward helped me get where I am today…
I stood and began searching for more weapons. I was determined to earn my reward, as well as to laugh in Alaric’s face as I find a way to stop his frankly stupid war. I dug through my storage, eventually finding a few artifacts that were… well-suited for the job.
Aksum: Your character must trade or barter to receive something they want/Minoan: Your character comes across writing that no one can decipher, they must find a way to decipher this writing/Aboriginal Peoples of Australia: Include a dreamtime character
I shuddered. Eating magical frog eggs was not pleasant in the slightest. Still, they were the best mode of transportation I had. I opened my box and couldn’t help but cringe. Oh joy, they had rotted. That meant…
I swallowed my pride and reached for my bottomless satchel. I made sure that I loaded all my armor and weapons in, just in case, as well as all the supplies I had chosen. I took a flying staff and set it up below my feet. I took off into the sky, hoping to make this interaction quick.
The air was warm, and I smiled, feeling the wind caress my face. Birds flew around me but scattered fast enough that they didn’t bother me.
I landed by a small little cottage and grimaced when I realized just how annoying this entire interaction would be. I knocked on the beaten door, “Tiddalik, I require your assistance.”
I heard a croak, indicating that I could come in. I stepped inside and looked at the gigantic frog that sat in front of me. He croaked, and I cringed, “Yes, my eggs have rotted yet again.”
He narrowed his beady eyes, and I sighed, “I’m sorry. I will make good use out of them, I assure you.”
Tiddalik croaked, pushing a tablet toward me. I made a face, and he croaked insistently. I sighed. “Alright, I shall run this errand for you, Great One.” He appeared annoyed, bellowing again.
“My apologies. Tiddalik it is. I am sorry, I forget that constantly.”
“I do have a condition.” I said, trying to quell my fear. “Please, let me have double for this errand. It is one for the great Elio, god of light and language. Please, allow me to please him more adequately.”
He let out a large, humid sigh. He gave me a nod.
He was clearly judging me, so I quickly made my way out with the tablet. I looked down at it and sighed. I supposed that I might need to talk to my current employer. Joyful, he was always fun to deal with. I boarded my staff once again and set out, ready to get this errand done.
“Lilith! It is quite good to see you!”
I nodded.
“Come in, come in!” Elio opened the door to his opulent palace in the clouds, and I strolled in cautiously.
“So, dear Lilith, what brings you here? Do you need guidance? Some extra help? What could it be?”
I sighed, “Well, since you know all languages ever, I Thought that I could get some help deciphering this text.”
Elio clapped, “Oh, how wonderful!” He giggled, “Let me see it!”
I handed it over to him.
He beamed, “Wonderful, thank you! Shoo, get yourself some refreshments while I translate this lovely little thing!”
I tilted my head. “Despite all the times I’ve worked for you, I’ve never been anywhere else in your home except for this room. Mind telling me where these ‘refreshments’ are?”
Elio perked up, “Oh, just follow that hall until you get there. You’ll know it when you see it!”
I made a face, doing as he said.
I came back, holding a few pastries, which tasted absolutely divine. I came in to see Elio holding up another tablet proudly. “There we are! How’d you enjoy my baking?”
I made a face, “You made these?”
He nodded giddily. “Did you like them??”
I shrugged, “They’re quite good. I must say that I’m impressed.” I came over to him and sat next to him on the couch he was reclining on.
He giggled, “Oh, lovely! I’m glad!” He handed over the tablet, “Here you are!”
I read over it, and it made no sense to me. However, Tiddalik would probably understand the script. I took the last bite of my pastry and stood up, “Thank you. I appreciate your aid.”
He beamed, “Not a problem!”
I waited for him to ask for payment, but that request never came. I made a face, “What shall I pay you?”
Elio shrugged, “Your presence and compliments were plenty enough.”
I rolled my eyes, leaving before he could change his mind.
Ancient China: Your character has a morally grey moment/Ancient Rome: Character development that changes them from a “character” to a “hero”
I returned to Tiddalik and acquired my eggs. I thanked him for his time and left his cottage. Alright, now it was time to truly carry out my task.
I popped an egg into my mouth and tried not to retch as I thought of my destination. Alaric’s palace. A hub between worlds. I knew that I needed to make my presence known, and I know that I needed to make my demands met. However, I wasn’t entirely sure on how to do that. I decided to screw it and just go up to Alaric himself, but first, I needed to find him.
Ah, of course. He was in his throne room. My mind flashed to the event that had occurred in this very room. I steeled my nerves. I did not need to have another panic attack right now.
Alaric waved his hand, “I suppose that that would do. We shall ride at dawn.”
I approached, steeling my nerves. I would show respect, but I would not show restraint.
“Almighty, I come with a request!”
He turned to look at me with his striking blue eyes. They looked similar to my own. His neck creaked as his statuesque body moved slowly and methodically to face me. “Ah, little warrior. It is a surprise to see you. I thought that you never wanted to have anything to do with me again. Why the sudden change?”
I swallowed the bile that rose in my throat. “I would like to resort to diplomacy before beating your forces in battle.”
“Did my son put you up to this?”
I shrugged, “So what if he did? It is for my own self-interest as well. Your planned war against the other pantheons is not something that I would advise you to do. For what purpose would you even want to do that?”
Alaric shrugged, his joints clicking as his mouth slowly upturned into a smile. “It is advantageous for me, little warrior. I’m sure that you would do the same.”
My mind flashed back to the times I had done reprehensible things to get what I wanted. I simply shrugged, “Oh, for sure.”
I reached into my satchel and brought out a sword. “However, I find peace to be much better for myself. You wage war, you reap the consequences.”
Alaric laughed, “I suppose that’s how it works. However, I think it will do ME more good than bad.”
I raised an eyebrow, “How so?”
He chuckled, “Why do you have to know? Gods, you are nosey.” He stretched out a hand, “Why don’t you help me? I’m sure that your many talents would make you quite the asset on the front lines.”
I stopped, biting my lip, “What would you give me for it?”
“A lavish lifestyle, simple. I would provide for your every need for the rest of eternity. My son gave you immortality, didn’t he? You should be just fine.”
I put down my sword, “Elaborate.”
He stroked his beard, “Money, more power, things of the sort. If you have any specific requests, they shall be granted.”
I blinked, and I was reminded of the gouges that were present in my eyes. I glanced around, and I saw… Elio? Ugh, that man was everywhere. He pressed his hands together as if he were praying to me. It was clearly a plea for me to stop him. I rolled my eyes, cringing as they scraped in my sockets. What wonderful reminders.
I threw up my head and sneered at the god in front of me. “I don’t think I’m willing to do that.”
Alaric blinked, and his head rotated as he registered, “Well, I don’t know what I was expecting. So, I suppose that you’ll attempt to stop me now. How do you think you’ll do that?”
I cracked my knuckles, “What brings more destruction? Battle between two immortals or battle between thousands?”
Mesopotamia: Incorporate a poem or poetry into your writing*sob* the quality dropped off like halfway through- It's a really intriguing concept, and I really want to revitalize it one day!
I reclined back on the couch and closed my eyes. I finally got a bit of time to relax. That was short-lived. Elio tapped my shoulder, and I groaned, looking up at him, “What?”
He grinned, “Sooo, you know how I’ve been dabbling in poetry?”
I blinked, “Oh, yes dear, that… new hobby of yours?”
“It isn’t that new! It’s been, what- a hundred years!”
I tilted my head, “And that /isn’t/ considered new?”
He shook his head, “Nope! I just actually got serious about it now!”
I made a face, “Elio, I don’t think you realize that I get to see you every day, and thus, I know exactly how much of a lie that is.”
“Just hear me out! I wrote this in honor of-”
“What? Your legacy?” I snickered. He was self-absorbed enough.
He shook his head, “Nope! Yours!” He cleared his throat, summoning a scroll. I cringed, oh, how lovely. I adored this man, but by no means did I think that he was a master of poetry.
“You are as strong as an ox, as sly as a fox-” I rolled my eyes.
“As spry as a rabbit and as lovely as a…” He squinted, trying to read his handwriting. I snickered.
“As- as lovely as a dove, isn’t it,” he made it clear there was a line break, “beautiful that you can be just so well-rounded?”
I coughed, and Elio continued. I tried to give him as much attention as I could, but, alas, he eventually lost it. I couldn’t help but smile as I zoned out though. How… endearing.
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Scratcher
37 posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Weekly 4!
One by one edited to avoid censoring :sob:
One by one edited to avoid censoring :sob:
INUIT
I stood up from my seat, stretching my arms. Final exams were tomorrow, the last ones i’d ever take before I was out of school for good. It would be nice to get them out of the way, but I had been studying for biology since the sun had started to creep above the horizon. Passing that class meant guaranteed entry into a world-class science program- one I had been hoping to get into since I learnt what it was, 6 long years ago.
But studying for so long is only useful until you get stuck in a loop of repeating the same, simple sentence again, and again, with no clue what the person who wrote it actually meant. So I stood up, deciding to step outside and escape the burnout. Sliding open the door, I looked up the street and saw a small cat, huddled close to the side of my building. She was pressed tight against the brick, trying to escape the sun. Without a word, I walked back into the house and grabbed a bowl, filling it with water and placing it on my doorstep. After a moment I slid a spare shoe under the door too, stopping it from swinging open. The cat watched, wary- so I stepped back inside and settled down on the sofa.
NAVAJO
The cat blinked once, and then again, before slinking onto the step and lapping at the water. I forced myself to stay in my seat, glancing at the cat out of the corner of my eye. She was small- i’d be surprised if she was more than a kitten. She was limping, and it was beyond clear that she wasn’t in good shape. I took a deep breath, worried. I didn’t want to scare her, but what would happen if I let her back into the street? That surely would be a death sentence. If the wound didn’t get infected and kill her, starvation would- or . I looked through my fridge, pulling out a small tray of mince and placing it on the floor. Bait. Almost immediately the cat stepped inside, eying me warily while he ate. I let out a sigh of relief- and closed the door quietly behind her.
The cat panicked. She slunk into the corner, leaving the food almost completely untouched. Her fear broke my heart, but I couldn’t open the door. I had to get her to the vet, if I could, or at least clean her up. I took a deep breath and moved over the the corner, opening up a cupboard.
AZTECS
A bowl clatters to the floor, muffled quickly by the sound of a small cat bed landing on top of it. I take a deep breath, stepping back.
I remember. I remember the rumbles of a warm body, dark colored fur pressed against my side. I yawned, rolling over and stroking the cat with my free hand. “Nyx,” I whisper, attempting to nudge her off of me. “I need to get up, kitty cat.”
She glares at me with tired, half hooded eyes, and I sigh, taking a moment to blink the sleep from my eyes. “Alright, get up and i’ll get you breakfast.”
As if she understands, the cat hauls herself up and trots happily into the kitchen. I suppose she might understand, by now. Every single morning went like this, careful and calm and safe. Just the two of us.
I open the window above the sink, poking my finger out to feel the drop of rain bead against my skin. Nyx looks at me as if i’ve committed some sort of horrible crime, by not getting her food immediately. I stifle a laugh, grabbing her food and putting on the jug to boil. “You’ve got to let me have my breakfast too, hm kitty cat?” I laugh, and I eat, and all is well.
MAYAN
Nyx was my first cat. I had never planned to get her, and I never planned on picking up a new cat afterwards- I needed to stop getting ahead of myself. This little cat might be chipped, or missing.
Nyx was a big cat- but at first I mistook her for a small dog. She was tattered and worn, but that never stopped her from scratching at my door every morning, demanding slivers of my attention. I guess it eventually worked because I convinced my parents to let her stay, and went out to spend my leftover pet sitting money on a shiny blue bowl and a fluffy gray bed that would never get used because she’d always settle on my lap to sleep.
I lost nyx a year after my parents moved out, and it hit me hard. It’s been… two years since then. I didn’t want another pet- another cat who would break my heart. But I guess they just come to you, don’t they? That was when I got winston. He was just a little old cat, taken in by my friend because the shelter was too full to keep him. Unlucky for them, a series of unfortunate events meant they couldn’t keep him anymore. So I watched Winnie, helping him through his final year.
I didn’t want another cat. I didn’t. I didn’t want to feel that heartbreak all over again.
ROME
A pitiful mew jolted me back to the present, and I pushed the memories away. There was a cat who needed me now. They had needed me then- in a time that was now long gone. I filled up the bowl with a new serving of water, and carefully walked into the room, bed held tightly in my othe-
The cat was lying on the carpet.
Nononono.
I ran over, heart breaking when she looked up at me, obviously scared but not sure what to do. I checked her over, and it only took me a moment to realise what was. The cat had overheated- probably a result of the lack of shade in my neibourhood. I scooped her up and put her on the table, using a cloth to wet her fur and moving the water to be easy for her to reach. Then I left to the freezer to grab some ice, and finally called the vet.
I nodded along to the instructions coming through the speaker phone for a bit, after I explained what had happened. The vet on the line told me to only be worried if she started panting, but advised I brought the kitten in anyway. Heatstroke wasn’t the only killer out there for a street cat.
GREEK
I had named my first cat nyx because when i found her in the dark of the forest, all I could see were two eyes. The rest of her seemed to blend in, like the inky depths of the night. Maybe I was jumping ahead with this kitten, but I wanted something to match. They were almost like opposites- Nyx inky black and this kitten a brilliant shade of white. Hecate, maybe. Artemis… I ran through the names in my head, before finally settling on Phoebe. Like the greek moon goddess- or one of her names, anyway. When the kitten made it out of her appointment with the vet nurse and I was called to pick her up, she would be phoebe.
Ring
Ring
Ring
I grab at my pockets trying to locate my phone, before spotting it on the table next to me.
“Hello?”
“Alright. Yup. I’ll be in in just a few minutes.”
I check everything in the house is in order for my new furry roommate, and then sprint to the car. I turn the keys, not even pausing to listen to the rumbling of the engine. Time to meet phoebe, time to bring home the moon-cat.
MINOAN
I clutched the carrier that contained the kitten carefully, as if one wrong movement could cause it to shatter. The woman behind the desk scribbled something on the receipt, and I took it without a word, waving her goodbye and going to sit in the car. I needed to pick some medication up for her, so I grabbed the receipt to see what was diagnosed and couldn’t help but raise an eyebrow at the writing. Who could read that messy handwriting? I looked closer at the note, before flipping over the receipt and realising the inky paper was around the wrong way. “Arn’t I silly, hm phoebs?” I hummed, smiling at the cat through the crate. “I think we’ll get along just fine. The cat mewed softly, almost as if in disagreement. “What, do you object, your grace?” “Meow.” I laughed, pulling the car out of park. “One more stop, missie, and then we can finally go home. Does that sound good?
EGYPT
Phoebe wasn’t getting any closer to me. I wasn’t used to having a cat like this- one who wasn’t begging for every inch of the attention you can give, so it felt weird. I wanted the cat to jump up on her lap or claw at the door, but she was content sleeping in the sun most days. Even when it rained she didn’t find me for warmth, just slid under blankets or by the heater.
I started to wonder if I was doing something wrong. Sure, it had only been a week- but what if I was missing something? Had it been too long since I had had cats last, so this cat suddenly hatted me? I try and silence the thoughts, but they persist.
Phoebe is sleeping in the corner, away from the sofa again. She’s been eating and drinking well but a part of me is worried about her lack of interest in playing, or games. I wondered what happened to her when she was small, to make her like this. I sigh. Nothing I can do, but keep pushing on. One day, she will volunteer to spend time near me- she’ll take her food without checking for threats- and it will all be worth it.
MESOPOTAMIA
A quiet rumble
In, out.
In, out.
Just minutes ago she slunk into the room, eyes like daggers
But she surrendered before I could say a thing
Curling up in my lap with a final glance shot my way
As if she was telling me
Not to try anything.
I glanced at
The sun by the door
The bed in the dark
And the door sitting ajar,
Welcoming her into the outside world
Whenever she pleases.
Purring. The first time i’ve heard that from her.
“You remind me of them,” I whisper,
Keeping my eys on her shape.
“Though, they were less anxious.”
The cat grumbles in complaint at my noise,
Stretching her arms towards me and
Hooking tiny claws into my shirt.
I grinn, pulling them carefully out.
“Be careful, there,”
I laugh
“You don’t ‘gotta pay for these.”
She grumbles in complaint, and falls
Back into a
Deep
Deep
Sleep
I laugh, attempting to minimise the
Movement of my own body for hers.
Isn’t it funny, how much we’re willing to morph
In order to please an animal?
So now I sit here, trapped under the weight of a creature far less heavy than me.
But I don’t want to move
So I don’t move
Because to get here,
To trust again
And love again?
That was enough.
AKSUM
“Paul! I’ve told you this before! That dish I gave you was to borrow, not to keep. You’ve been storing /what/ in it?! My friend, how long have we known each other…. That’s right, ten years! So by now you should know one key thing about me… I don’t lie. Wait, you really haven’t picked that up? Alright, silly. I’ll be popping by to grab the dish in a bit, make sure it isn’t radioactive or anything. Wait, you want me to do your dishes? Get lost- Ok fine, I’ll do one half for the bowl. Is that a deal? Always nice talking to ‘ya, paul.”
I smile, putting down the answering phone and stroking phoebe’s back. “You here that? I’m gonna get you the nice fancy bowl I brought for winnie to have his water in.
I leaned forward, smiling. “It has a fountain! How cool is that!”
The cat stared up at me blankly.
“Alright, alright. He said he’d bring it over now, hang on just a sec.” with a yawn I walked into the kitchen, pulling open the kitchen blinds and letting the sun settle over my face for just a moment. A knock on my door. Ah, that must be paul, with the bowl I lent him.
SWAHILI CITY STATES
“Phoebe!”
[The cat looked up, but didn’t make any move to approach the newcomer. Instead she stretched out, seeming to greatly enjoy the sun slipping through the window.
“Hey feebs? Where are you at?”
“Oh, there you are, kitty cat! You’ll never guess what happened at work today. I was helping out caycee, right, and then her computer just exploded! Right there and then!”
“So all of the smoke set off the alarms, so we had a fire drill! Luckily nothing caught, but we had to sit outside in the baking sun for what felt like a lifetime. You would have loved it”
CHIN(AHHHH)A
The phone was ringing. I rubbed my eyes and sat up, forcing phoebe to begrudgingly crawl off the bed. With aching feet I walked across the room, grabbing the phone off it’s hook.
“ ‘ello Vivian here, what can I do for you?”
The voice on the line started talking, and I felt myself freeze.
“Hi viv-” I shuttered at the name, “- The adoption records at the vet show you picked up a cat about a year ago. We’ve got a couple ‘guys here claiming that that’s there cat. Of course, technically it is now legally yours, seeing as you’ve done all the paperwork and owned her for over a year, but they’re requesting a visit to convince you they’re worthy of getting their cat back.
I looked down at Phoebe, and then back up, making a decision. I had seen the way her flesh clung to her bones, her scared look when approaching any human. I wouldn’t give her back.
“Tell them i’m sorry, but that won’t be happening. She is safe and happy, and I wish them all the best,” I responded bluntly, hanging up the phone.
Sure, maybe it was cruel. Maybe they did nothing wrong, and were nice. But all the same, what if they wearn’t? It was a risk I wasn’t willing to take.
“Hear that, kitty cat?” I called, watching her ears prihhhck up to attention. “You’re mine, all safe, forever.”
”
AUSTRALIA:
I look out the window and see a huge snake, with scales that shimmer in a million different shades and tones. I suppose it should scare me, but I know he means no harm.
Phoebe jumps up on the window sill, meowing loudly at me. I glance out the window once more, and the serpent is gone.
“What was that, huh kit kat?” I ask, as if the cat will answer me. Instead i’m met with silence, not even a quiet meow.
“Alright, if you’re gonna be like that.” I laugh, rubbing her ear affectionately. “You’re such a stange little creature, you know that?”
She looks at me with a deadpan expression, and I laugh. “Don’t judge me, you know i’m right!”
I’m met with more unimpressed looks.
“All right, i’ll get to your breakfast if that’s what you’re so fussed about.
She mews her aprovel and trots over to her bowl, eyes on me the whole time. She meows once, quietly, and then again, louder.
“I swear, who taught you to be so noisy? Winnie and nyx were always dead silent.”
I turn from the window and for a moment I can almost swear I see a flash of rainbow Sales- before everything vanishes again and it’s just like a normal day outside.
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- surfdudewave
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
I usually forget to write thank you notes–this time I just forgot to post them. Well, here I go!
Everyone:
This was such an amazing SWC session! Even though I’ve been on scratch for apparently 7 years and 5 months (?!!?!) I only first discovered SWC last November, making this my fourth session. This is such a friendly space with such a great community, thanks to everyone who participates. For everyone having their first session, I hope that you had a great time and will come back in March! Keep on writing, everyone
Hosts:
Thanks for such an amazing session! Everything ran really smoothly and you guys always make SWC such an amazing place
POLAR bears:
All of the dailies and weeklies were amazing–I loved the workshops and all of the activities, thank you guys for putting in so much effort!
Mystery Campers:
You guys were amazing <3, I think my favorite part of this session was all the crazy cabin wars, we really demolished them! It was so fun to be part of this cabin!!!
Zy:
Thank you for leading this session, you had the coolest ideas for the cabin and it was really fun to be a part of mystery!
Mabel:
Thank you for co-leading with me, and I hope you’re doing alright!
Moss:
Even though I can’t remember if I spoke to you this session, we have literally been so close this whole session on trackbear and it was really fun to watch
Luna:
I have no idea how you managed to write so much :0 you have incredible dedication and I’m glad all those words are going to mystery lol
Steampunk:
Thank you guys so much for inspiring me to watch Arcane, even though my one week binge of the series distracted me from writing and my nano! It was so good aaaah (totally worth it)
Everyone:
This was such an amazing SWC session! Even though I’ve been on scratch for apparently 7 years and 5 months (?!!?!) I only first discovered SWC last November, making this my fourth session. This is such a friendly space with such a great community, thanks to everyone who participates. For everyone having their first session, I hope that you had a great time and will come back in March! Keep on writing, everyone
Hosts:
Thanks for such an amazing session! Everything ran really smoothly and you guys always make SWC such an amazing place

POLAR bears:
All of the dailies and weeklies were amazing–I loved the workshops and all of the activities, thank you guys for putting in so much effort!
Mystery Campers:
You guys were amazing <3, I think my favorite part of this session was all the crazy cabin wars, we really demolished them! It was so fun to be part of this cabin!!!
Zy:
Thank you for leading this session, you had the coolest ideas for the cabin and it was really fun to be a part of mystery!
Mabel:
Thank you for co-leading with me, and I hope you’re doing alright!

Moss:
Even though I can’t remember if I spoke to you this session, we have literally been so close this whole session on trackbear and it was really fun to watch

Luna:
I have no idea how you managed to write so much :0 you have incredible dedication and I’m glad all those words are going to mystery lol
Steampunk:
Thank you guys so much for inspiring me to watch Arcane, even though my one week binge of the series distracted me from writing and my nano! It was so good aaaah (totally worth it)
- silverlynx-
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Weekly 4 <3
3595 words
Mentions of death
This is terrible and really rushed so don’t judge lol <3
Mazasa crept through the dazzling white snow, the stars glimmering in the inky black sky. The Northern Lights flickered, a bright shining emerald and a muted ruby. A small mew could be heard from within a small clump of trees. It was heartbreaking to listen to, a pitiful desperate cry. Mazasa’s lip wobbled, and she clambered through the bushes, the sharp pointed spikes on her wings catching on the leaves and twigs. An icy breeze cut through her sapphire scales, making her shiver violently.
“Come on, kitty! You’re all safe!” She whispered.
A bedraggled creature stumbled out from the undergrowth, sodden and drenched.
“Hey, come here!” She exclaimed, holding out a claw.
The kitten mewed in terror, and stepped backwards tentatively.
“It’s OK, little guy.”
It gazed up at her with unopened eyes and crawled blindly towards her, its tail flicking to and fro. Mazasa smiled gently and scooped the kitten up. It had deep black fur and shining amber eyes. She placed them inside a small crochet scarf that she had made originally for the snowmen to fight over, but now it was the kitten’s new home. It snuggled in deeper to the rose pink soft wool and licked her hand shyly.
“I’m going to name you Hazel. After my favourite book character!” She told him - or her - gently. “Come on, let’s get you warmed up.”
***
She tucked the kitten inside her wing and started the journey back to her fireproof igloo. Mazasa grinned at the thought of her home. The densely packed walls were covered in pictures of her previously rescued animals, the most common among them cats, and little crochet scarves and cushions littered all over the floor. Her beautiful hearth, radiating warmth and a pulsing glow. Her bed with its multicoloured crochet quilt and its knitted pillow. Her desk, covered in splashes of paint and pencil marks, strewn with small sketches.
She shook her head. Now was not the time to start daydreaming. Now was the time to focus on the kitten, and not herself.
She ambled contentedly through the fairytale-like forests of the Arctic, snow coating the branches, which were dipping underneath the weight. The silvery moonlight washing over her and the world. The stunning lake in a lush glade, like a pocket of sunlight in the midst of the endless winter. And for the whole time she stroked the kitten and fed it her own branded pet treats called ‘Pet Treats for Animals in Need - Suitable for cats, dogs, rabbits, hamsters, guinea pigs, snakes, mice, rats and foxes!’
“Stop right there, young lady!” A gravelly voice ordered.
Mazasa turned around and gazed at a puny red dragon wearing a high-vis jacket.
“And who do you think you’re talking to?” She implied coldly.
The dragon shrugged. “Dunno. Don’t really care. But I know you’re holding a kitten right there. A kitten! I mean, how could you. Only a heart of stone would steal council property.”
She gaped in shock. “I was saving this poor soul - rescuing it! You would have just left it to die, wouldn’t you?”
She spied a badge on the dragon’s jacket. ‘Scar, Council Apprentice.’
“Well, I’m afraid that all stray animals have to be put down for now due to the overpopulation of our world. Sorry.”
Mazasa snarled fiercely. “Oh, you sound well sorry, don’t you? I’m taking this kitten home, and you can’t stop me!”
She stalked off into the trees. Then she heard a muffled laugh.
“Oh, yes I can.”
She heard a click and swivelled around to find Scar pointing a gun at her.
“What?” She gasped in horror. “Y-You can’t!”
“Oh, I will if you don’t hand over that kitten right now! I’ve been trained! And even if you do escape, we will destroy your igloo and your existence might become… non-existent shall we say?”
A tear rolled down her cheek, and she cradled Hazel to her chest.
“I’ll come back for you, little one.” She murmured solemnly.
She held out the kitten. “There you go. I hope you’re happy,” she spat at Scar.
(Silvi: *bursts into ‘defying gravity’ from wicked lol*)
***
She trudged back to her igloo, her face creased in anger.
“I’ll get you back. I promise.”
She flung the door open and flopped onto her enormous bed, scraping one of her long curved claws against the wall. It made a satisfyingly horrible squeaking noise that hopefully destroyed the red dragon’s eardrums. She bit her lip, blood blossoming and trickling down her chin in a crimson stream.
“I’ll save you, Hazel.”
She inhaled deeply, and tried to slow her breathing.
“Get a grip, Mazasa.” She told herself sternly. “It’s just a stupid dragon with a non-existent brain and a terrifying idiotic high-vis jacket. The only reason they wear them is to make themselves look important. Stupid.”
She gasped, an idea revealing itself in her mind. Her cheek scales, which were usually a deep clear indigo transformed into a lustrous gold at her idea. She would crochet a neon jacket, put a badge on, sack Scar and demand Hazel back! Simple!
Mazasa got to work, snatching her prized golden crochet hook off her desk, a sickly yellow wool and some white, and started crocheting furiously. Her hands moved at double the speed to normal, blurring with the ferocity and aggression she was forcing into the hooks. She double-stitched onto her next row, scales already starting to grow a dangerous ruby red and the stress inside of her. It was slowly building up, a heavy monstrous burden crushing her shoulders. She had to save the kitten.
“No!” She screamed in frustration, “I need a wool needle! And I lost it in the snow!”
She rummaged around in her bedside drawer, sweat dripping down her forehead, her eyes glinting. And just before she found it, a photograph fluttered towards the ground. It was of her, when she was just 3 years old, carefully cupping her hands around a rich brown kitten with ginger splotches. Flower. Her very first rescue. She had completely forgotten about him. Her father had told her to hand him into the local Animal Rescue centre, saying it would be for the best. The words had stung her deeply, but, reluctantly, she had given Flower away. Since then she had crocheted blankets and jumpers for all their rescues, along with some toys.
Mazasa shook her head.
“Focus!” She hissed.
She stitched the last piece of wool together and slipped the jacket on. A bit snug, but it would have to do. She scribbled ‘Mazasa, Chief Officer’ on a piece of paper and hurried outside of the door into the biting cold. It was time to go on her most risky animal rescue mission yet.
***
She leapt through the snow-capped trees and the light dusted ground with agile grace and ease. Her energy was high and her mind buzzing, whirling with confused jumbled thoughts. She jumped over the wide rushing river without hesitation, froth spiralling into the air, currents wildly meeting each other, colliding in a great rolling wave. Bats flew through the air, their wings flapping quickly, little shadows flitting to and fro, from tree to tree. A jay sped past her face, its wing feathers a blinding blue, its beady eyes searching for prey.
Mazasa remembered her father teaching her the creation.
“Mazasa, I want you to remember this. Some creatures from the Arctic are born from the snow. They say that at night, the moon and the stars force their magic together and fling great balls of snow into the air, meeting with the star’s heat to create the life in their bodies, and loved by the moon, who created emotions. Happiness, sadness, excitement, anger. You, however, and other dragons, were born from the stars. Born from fire. The stars doused you in their boiling bubbling heat to make you strong and mighty and the moon made you brave and powerful. I want you to remember this. Forever. It’s important. We are important. Don’t forget that."
Now that she was fully-grown, it seemed quite childish. Despite this, she still felt some sort of tug in her heart every time she glanced at the night sky, the moon smiling down at her kindly, the stars a light to lead the way in the darkness. She loved it. When she felt enveloped in darkness, and could only see those burning pinpricks of light, she felt a glimmer of hope grow inside her, no matter how sorrowful she felt.
“Ugh. You’re so cringe sometimes, Mazasa.” She murmured.
***
She heard a crack of a twig. Her ears perked up.
“W-Who’s there?” She stammered nervously.
A sharp inhale. Shaky. A flaming eye through the undergrowth.
“Who’s there?” She repeated, more boldly this time.
A monstrous emerald dragon strutted out from behind the bushes.
“I’m looking for a kitten.” They growled, their voice gravelly. “Very cute, fluffy, dark fur. Called Rose.”
Mazasa gasped, putting a clawed hand to her mouth.
“A-A council dragon took Hazel… I mean Rose. To be put down. They thought she was a stray. I’m so sorry.” She said sorrowfully.
Tears sprung to the dragon’s eyes. “I must save her.”
“What’s your name?” She asked.
“Gurtle. But I prefer to go as Gurtle the Great. If I do say so myself!” He told me smugly.
“Um… OK, Gurtle the Great. Let’s go save the kitten!”
Gurtle furrowed his brow. “We’re doing it together?”
I nodded enthusiastically. “That’s what I was doing originally before you came along. Just asking, why was she in such bad shape?”
Gurtle shook his head sadly. “She went missing about a week and a half ago. She probably hasn’t had much to eat or drink, or any shelter.
That was when Mazasa heard the sickening crack. The thunderous splintering of wood.
“Watch out!” She screamed at Gurtle, as a tree came crashing down. But Gurtle just stood there, oblivious to the events, staring wistfully into the distance.
She snarled softly. “Here goes.”
Mazasa launched herself between Gurtle and the tree, shoving him roughly out of the way. She braced herself for the impact, the crushing impact, of the tree but it never came. She felt a tail curl around her and lift her away from the tree.
Gurtle sat down, tapping his claws on the ground.
“Huh?” He asked.
“I never said anything.”
He sniggered. “Ok, then. I guess we both saved the day there. Thanks, maybe.”
Maybe? Ha.
***
She and Gurtle stumbled on through the rough coarse trunks, their spindly branches reaching for the inky black sky.
“Gurtle the Great?” She asked hesitantly.
“Yes?” he replied wearily.
“I-I… What if we get arrested? What if they put Hazel - Rose down anyway? What if this is worth nothing?”
He rolled his eyes. “How are we supposed to get anywhere if we’ve got an attitude like that/ Come on!” He exclaimed.
She grinned at him and ploughed on through the snow. The wind whipped at her body, caressing her in an icy grip. Suddenly, she heard a shrill whistle in the midst of the blizzard. Mazasa’s ears perked up.
“What was that?”
“Huh? Probably nothing.”
A floaty figure glided out in front of her.
“Father!” She yelled excitedly. “What are you doing here?”
Mazasa’s father gazed at the ground and paused. When he looked up again, his eyes were duller.
“I died, Mazasa. A few months back. A council dragon called Scar arrested me for taking in a stray rabbit and my prison collapsed.”
Her shoulders slumped. She fell back on the ground with a thud.
“So you’re a ghost?”
He nodded mutely. She started to notice the pulsing aura around him, his form wavering slightly at every breath of the wind. Father’s eyes grew wide.
“I must go!” He shouted worriedly. “The other ghosts have noticed my absence. Goodbye, Mazasa! I love you!”
“Love you too…” She whispered, her hand closing on thin air as she tried to somehow keep her father there.
***
(change to first person cos I prefer it)
I brushed past cold stone walls and looming cave mouths. We had reached the edge of the vast forests, and were approaching the stalagmites and trilobites of the Arctic caves. Or the ‘North Pole’ as the rest of the world liked to call them. Where Santa and their elves rushed around to deliver presents to the rest of the world. Hate to be a party pooper, but I knew that the elves were cruel devilish creatures and Santa Claus was a mean selfish little dude.
“Mazasa!”
I jumped out of my thoughts filled with evil Santas’ taking over the world and returned to reality.
“Huh?” I mumbled.
“What the skibi- what is that?”
I glanced at a jumble of letters scattered across the wall in front of us. Blocking our path to the council.
“Probably some sus secret code from the council because they want us to not rescue stray animals.”
He nodded slowly. “It looks like my Dad’s telepath translations.”
I frowned. “Telepath?”
“Yeah, my Dad could do telepathy and he would translate it onto paper for his colleagues to put into another secret code and send across the world. Don’t ask.”
“Do you know what it means?” I asked hopefully.
Gurtle squinted at the letters. “Oh, yes. I know one word.”
“What?”
“Death.”
***
“Oh, god that’s deep.”
“I know.”
Gurtle’s face was etched with lines. “There’s another word. That I can recognise.”
“Yeah?”
I felt my insides spark with desperation.
“Go.”
I stamped my foot.
“That’s useless.” I muttered.
“Yeah. Sorry.”
I gave Gurtle a withering look. Anger bubbled up inside me. Couldn’t he be serious for once? I immediately regretted my thoughts as I saw tears welling up inside his eyes. He was just as sad as I was. I didn’t have a right to judge. I gritted my teeth.
“What if this is for nothing?” I asked quietly.
Gurtle’s eyes turned furious. “Are you saying that we shouldn’t rescue a poor defenseless animal? You’re just as bad as the council.”
I scratched my head. “But what if we’re caught and Rose dies anyway? WHat if we’re going the wrong way? What if I made the wrong choice?”
My voice became more and more agitated. Gurtle tried to shush me.
“It’s OK.”
He patted me on the back awkwardly.
“I’m sorry.” I told him.
“For what?”
“Snapping at you.”
He smiled softly. “You were stressed. It’s OK.”
I silently thanked God for letting him come with me. I would have given up without him ages ago.
***
Howling winds,
Battering me,
Swinging me from left to right.
Dizziness gripping me,
Washing over me.
Images flashing through my mind.
Rose.
Mother.
Father.
Shrouded in a dark storm,
Swept up by a tornado,
A blizzard of thoughts.
“Mazasa?”
I collapsed forwards, my heart racing. Beads of sweat coated my forehead. It felt like hammers were hacking at my skull. The pain was excruciating.
Spirits gliding past me,
Ghosts of who they were.
My slender hand reaching out to join them,
My raw scream,
Piercing the air.
A pair of worried eyes,
Gazing into mine.
A kitten curled up,
All alone,
Shivering,
Blanketed in snow.
Myself.
Stumbling towards them.
My movements slow and juddering,
My back hunched in,
Falling to the ground.
My eyes flickering,
Enveloped in sleep.
Or death.
“Gurtle!” I shrieked.
He was right next to me.
“Keep going. You’re having a panic attack. It should pass in a moment.”
My lip wobbled. My eyes stung.
“Find Rose.”
“I will. So will you.”
“I can’t make it.”
“Yes, you can.”
I shook my head. All I wanted to do was fall asleep. And never wake up.
Then I heard the pitiful mewing.
“Rose!” I cried.
“Well, you did find her.”
***
A small hiss echoed from behind me.
“Er - hello?”
A dragon bounced out at me. Scar.
“Yeah, hi. You stealing a kitten? You know, I happen to be a very important council member and I will not tolerate disobedience!”
I stepped back tentatively. “W-Woah. Well I am stealing a kitten. Bye!”
I scooped up Rose and rushed towards the speck of light ahead of me. Scar materialised in front of me.
“Stop. Right. There.”
“How did you do that?” I exclaimed in fascinated horror.
He smiled smugly. “Oh, it’s just one of those basics that you learn in council training. I was doing that when I was on my potty training!”
I blinked at him. “Too much information, dude. Anyways, I’ve got to go! Very busy schedule.”
“Doing what?”
I grinned. “The usual. Eating, sleeping, crocheting, murdering council dragons. Just stuff like that.”
He flared his nostrils. “Don’t you dare say that.”
I sighed heavily. “Dragons these days. So rude.”
He dragged Gurtle over with invisible force. It was like there was a rope tangling around him, wrapping him up.
“You take the kitten, I’ll take your friend! Deal?” He said in a sickly sweet voice.
“Definitely not!” I squealed. My voice sounded just a bit higher than usual.
“Aw, come on!”
Gurtle writhed in his cage. “Just go! I’ll escape! Go!”
I reeled back in shock. “Of course I won’t do that!”
“Go!” He screamed. “They’ll just kill us both!”
My breathing became fast and shallow. “I’ll come back for you!”
I raced off, trying not to look back. What had I done?
***
I built up the strength to fly over the trees. The humans all believed that we flew everywhere, but flying was a rare thing. To have the power to lift our whole bodies into the sky.
“I’ll come back for you.” I whispered, the wind rushing past my ears.
“I’ll come back for you.” Echoed another voice.
I glanced to my side and saw a kangaroo floating beside me, its body silvery and glowing.
“Who are you?”
“You.”
I furrowed my brow.
“Well, you’re obviously not me.”
They smiled gently. “Ah, but I am a whisper of your past. The oldest remnant of your family. I am from what you would know as the Dreamtime tales.”
A flicker of recognition tingled through me. “Bohra.”
“Yes, that’s me.”
I laughed.
“Your father sent me. He said that you needed some help. Some support.”
A tear rolled down my cheek.
“Yeah, that might be useful, I guess.”
“I just wanted to say, if you need us, then all you need to do is call. Also, you shouldn’t go back to Gurtle and Scar.”
“Why?” I snapped. “He’s my friend. I have to go back.”
Bohra bit their lip. “He won’t make it. And the council will come for you after that.”
I sailed to the ground. I swivelled around and started racing back to the caves. I felt a cold hand on my tail. I tried to shake it off, but it was immensely strong.
“Get off!” I screeched.
“Do you want to get killed as well? It’s no use, Mazasa!”
I fell to the hard ground and Bohra disappeared.
“Come back.” I sobbed.
***
Scar runs in, a lifeless Gurtle clutched in his arms.
Mazasa: (agitated) Gurtle!
Scar: (smugly) Did you really think that we’d let you go?
Mazasa reaches out for Gurtle, her eyes widening.
Mazasa: (sadly) Of course not. Why would you ever leave us alone?
Scar: Well, this will be the end of you and your cat-rescuing evil schemes!
Scar pulls out a laser gun and aims and aims at Mazasa.
Mazasa: Wait!
Scar: I don’t think so!
Mazasa looks around wildly and waves a stick at Scar.
Mazasa: Leave us alone!
Scar scoffs.
Scar: Oh, really?
Mazasa pulls a packet of wool with ‘Bombproof, fireproof, bulletproof, pretty-much-anything-proof’ written on it, and begins to crochet a sphere around her at 356 miles per hour.
Scar: What are you-
Mazasa: (muffled) You think you can catch me now?
Scar: (shakes his head) Probably not.
Mazasa: Ha! The mighty Scar finally admits that Mazasa is too great for him.
Scar: I said I couldn’t catch you. I didn’t say that I couldn’t kill you.
Mazasa: Lay off, dude!
Scar: I don’t think so!
He pulls out a pair of giant scissors with ‘bombproof-wool-cutting, fireproof-wool-cutting, bulletproof-wool-cutting, pretty-much-anything-proof-wool-cutting scissors’ written on it and begins to snip at Mazasa’s cage.
Mazasa: Oi! What are you doing?
Scar: Beating you. Doing my job.
***
I tried to wriggle out through a gap in my homemade cage, but the strands of wool kept on tightening around me.
“You’ll never get me!” I choked out.
Scar’s eyes glinted through a hole in the wool.
“I certainly will, actually!” He cackled.
My throat clogged up with fear and I clawed at the wool. It was no use.
A few minutes later.
Scar burst through the wool and aimed his gun at me.
“Please!” I wailed.
I brandished a gun from my pocket.
“L-look!”
My voice wavered with terror. I couldn’t shoot. I knew I couldn’t.
“Ok.”
I watched as his finger tightened on the trigger. The temperature increased inside the cramped ‘room.’ Time seemed to slow down as the bullet plummeted towards me. I dodged just in time.
For a moment we both paused.
Then I pushed down on the trigger. I looked away covering my eyes. I heard a desperate gurgle. When I finally looked back, the ‘room’ collapsed and I was left just by myself. Scar’s eyes were distant and glazed.
A glow surrounded Gurtle. Bohra. His eyelids fluttered open and he clutched his throat, his body shaking. Then his body relaxed. He saw Scar.
“What have you done?”
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Mentions of death
This is terrible and really rushed so don’t judge lol <3
Mazasa crept through the dazzling white snow, the stars glimmering in the inky black sky. The Northern Lights flickered, a bright shining emerald and a muted ruby. A small mew could be heard from within a small clump of trees. It was heartbreaking to listen to, a pitiful desperate cry. Mazasa’s lip wobbled, and she clambered through the bushes, the sharp pointed spikes on her wings catching on the leaves and twigs. An icy breeze cut through her sapphire scales, making her shiver violently.
“Come on, kitty! You’re all safe!” She whispered.
A bedraggled creature stumbled out from the undergrowth, sodden and drenched.
“Hey, come here!” She exclaimed, holding out a claw.
The kitten mewed in terror, and stepped backwards tentatively.
“It’s OK, little guy.”
It gazed up at her with unopened eyes and crawled blindly towards her, its tail flicking to and fro. Mazasa smiled gently and scooped the kitten up. It had deep black fur and shining amber eyes. She placed them inside a small crochet scarf that she had made originally for the snowmen to fight over, but now it was the kitten’s new home. It snuggled in deeper to the rose pink soft wool and licked her hand shyly.
“I’m going to name you Hazel. After my favourite book character!” She told him - or her - gently. “Come on, let’s get you warmed up.”
***
She tucked the kitten inside her wing and started the journey back to her fireproof igloo. Mazasa grinned at the thought of her home. The densely packed walls were covered in pictures of her previously rescued animals, the most common among them cats, and little crochet scarves and cushions littered all over the floor. Her beautiful hearth, radiating warmth and a pulsing glow. Her bed with its multicoloured crochet quilt and its knitted pillow. Her desk, covered in splashes of paint and pencil marks, strewn with small sketches.
She shook her head. Now was not the time to start daydreaming. Now was the time to focus on the kitten, and not herself.
She ambled contentedly through the fairytale-like forests of the Arctic, snow coating the branches, which were dipping underneath the weight. The silvery moonlight washing over her and the world. The stunning lake in a lush glade, like a pocket of sunlight in the midst of the endless winter. And for the whole time she stroked the kitten and fed it her own branded pet treats called ‘Pet Treats for Animals in Need - Suitable for cats, dogs, rabbits, hamsters, guinea pigs, snakes, mice, rats and foxes!’
“Stop right there, young lady!” A gravelly voice ordered.
Mazasa turned around and gazed at a puny red dragon wearing a high-vis jacket.
“And who do you think you’re talking to?” She implied coldly.
The dragon shrugged. “Dunno. Don’t really care. But I know you’re holding a kitten right there. A kitten! I mean, how could you. Only a heart of stone would steal council property.”
She gaped in shock. “I was saving this poor soul - rescuing it! You would have just left it to die, wouldn’t you?”
She spied a badge on the dragon’s jacket. ‘Scar, Council Apprentice.’
“Well, I’m afraid that all stray animals have to be put down for now due to the overpopulation of our world. Sorry.”
Mazasa snarled fiercely. “Oh, you sound well sorry, don’t you? I’m taking this kitten home, and you can’t stop me!”
She stalked off into the trees. Then she heard a muffled laugh.
“Oh, yes I can.”
She heard a click and swivelled around to find Scar pointing a gun at her.
“What?” She gasped in horror. “Y-You can’t!”
“Oh, I will if you don’t hand over that kitten right now! I’ve been trained! And even if you do escape, we will destroy your igloo and your existence might become… non-existent shall we say?”
A tear rolled down her cheek, and she cradled Hazel to her chest.
“I’ll come back for you, little one.” She murmured solemnly.
She held out the kitten. “There you go. I hope you’re happy,” she spat at Scar.
(Silvi: *bursts into ‘defying gravity’ from wicked lol*)
***
She trudged back to her igloo, her face creased in anger.
“I’ll get you back. I promise.”
She flung the door open and flopped onto her enormous bed, scraping one of her long curved claws against the wall. It made a satisfyingly horrible squeaking noise that hopefully destroyed the red dragon’s eardrums. She bit her lip, blood blossoming and trickling down her chin in a crimson stream.
“I’ll save you, Hazel.”
She inhaled deeply, and tried to slow her breathing.
“Get a grip, Mazasa.” She told herself sternly. “It’s just a stupid dragon with a non-existent brain and a terrifying idiotic high-vis jacket. The only reason they wear them is to make themselves look important. Stupid.”
She gasped, an idea revealing itself in her mind. Her cheek scales, which were usually a deep clear indigo transformed into a lustrous gold at her idea. She would crochet a neon jacket, put a badge on, sack Scar and demand Hazel back! Simple!
Mazasa got to work, snatching her prized golden crochet hook off her desk, a sickly yellow wool and some white, and started crocheting furiously. Her hands moved at double the speed to normal, blurring with the ferocity and aggression she was forcing into the hooks. She double-stitched onto her next row, scales already starting to grow a dangerous ruby red and the stress inside of her. It was slowly building up, a heavy monstrous burden crushing her shoulders. She had to save the kitten.
“No!” She screamed in frustration, “I need a wool needle! And I lost it in the snow!”
She rummaged around in her bedside drawer, sweat dripping down her forehead, her eyes glinting. And just before she found it, a photograph fluttered towards the ground. It was of her, when she was just 3 years old, carefully cupping her hands around a rich brown kitten with ginger splotches. Flower. Her very first rescue. She had completely forgotten about him. Her father had told her to hand him into the local Animal Rescue centre, saying it would be for the best. The words had stung her deeply, but, reluctantly, she had given Flower away. Since then she had crocheted blankets and jumpers for all their rescues, along with some toys.
Mazasa shook her head.
“Focus!” She hissed.
She stitched the last piece of wool together and slipped the jacket on. A bit snug, but it would have to do. She scribbled ‘Mazasa, Chief Officer’ on a piece of paper and hurried outside of the door into the biting cold. It was time to go on her most risky animal rescue mission yet.
***
She leapt through the snow-capped trees and the light dusted ground with agile grace and ease. Her energy was high and her mind buzzing, whirling with confused jumbled thoughts. She jumped over the wide rushing river without hesitation, froth spiralling into the air, currents wildly meeting each other, colliding in a great rolling wave. Bats flew through the air, their wings flapping quickly, little shadows flitting to and fro, from tree to tree. A jay sped past her face, its wing feathers a blinding blue, its beady eyes searching for prey.
Mazasa remembered her father teaching her the creation.
“Mazasa, I want you to remember this. Some creatures from the Arctic are born from the snow. They say that at night, the moon and the stars force their magic together and fling great balls of snow into the air, meeting with the star’s heat to create the life in their bodies, and loved by the moon, who created emotions. Happiness, sadness, excitement, anger. You, however, and other dragons, were born from the stars. Born from fire. The stars doused you in their boiling bubbling heat to make you strong and mighty and the moon made you brave and powerful. I want you to remember this. Forever. It’s important. We are important. Don’t forget that."
Now that she was fully-grown, it seemed quite childish. Despite this, she still felt some sort of tug in her heart every time she glanced at the night sky, the moon smiling down at her kindly, the stars a light to lead the way in the darkness. She loved it. When she felt enveloped in darkness, and could only see those burning pinpricks of light, she felt a glimmer of hope grow inside her, no matter how sorrowful she felt.
“Ugh. You’re so cringe sometimes, Mazasa.” She murmured.
***
She heard a crack of a twig. Her ears perked up.
“W-Who’s there?” She stammered nervously.
A sharp inhale. Shaky. A flaming eye through the undergrowth.
“Who’s there?” She repeated, more boldly this time.
A monstrous emerald dragon strutted out from behind the bushes.
“I’m looking for a kitten.” They growled, their voice gravelly. “Very cute, fluffy, dark fur. Called Rose.”
Mazasa gasped, putting a clawed hand to her mouth.
“A-A council dragon took Hazel… I mean Rose. To be put down. They thought she was a stray. I’m so sorry.” She said sorrowfully.
Tears sprung to the dragon’s eyes. “I must save her.”
“What’s your name?” She asked.
“Gurtle. But I prefer to go as Gurtle the Great. If I do say so myself!” He told me smugly.
“Um… OK, Gurtle the Great. Let’s go save the kitten!”
Gurtle furrowed his brow. “We’re doing it together?”
I nodded enthusiastically. “That’s what I was doing originally before you came along. Just asking, why was she in such bad shape?”
Gurtle shook his head sadly. “She went missing about a week and a half ago. She probably hasn’t had much to eat or drink, or any shelter.
That was when Mazasa heard the sickening crack. The thunderous splintering of wood.
“Watch out!” She screamed at Gurtle, as a tree came crashing down. But Gurtle just stood there, oblivious to the events, staring wistfully into the distance.
She snarled softly. “Here goes.”
Mazasa launched herself between Gurtle and the tree, shoving him roughly out of the way. She braced herself for the impact, the crushing impact, of the tree but it never came. She felt a tail curl around her and lift her away from the tree.
Gurtle sat down, tapping his claws on the ground.
“Huh?” He asked.
“I never said anything.”
He sniggered. “Ok, then. I guess we both saved the day there. Thanks, maybe.”
Maybe? Ha.
***
She and Gurtle stumbled on through the rough coarse trunks, their spindly branches reaching for the inky black sky.
“Gurtle the Great?” She asked hesitantly.
“Yes?” he replied wearily.
“I-I… What if we get arrested? What if they put Hazel - Rose down anyway? What if this is worth nothing?”
He rolled his eyes. “How are we supposed to get anywhere if we’ve got an attitude like that/ Come on!” He exclaimed.
She grinned at him and ploughed on through the snow. The wind whipped at her body, caressing her in an icy grip. Suddenly, she heard a shrill whistle in the midst of the blizzard. Mazasa’s ears perked up.
“What was that?”
“Huh? Probably nothing.”
A floaty figure glided out in front of her.
“Father!” She yelled excitedly. “What are you doing here?”
Mazasa’s father gazed at the ground and paused. When he looked up again, his eyes were duller.
“I died, Mazasa. A few months back. A council dragon called Scar arrested me for taking in a stray rabbit and my prison collapsed.”
Her shoulders slumped. She fell back on the ground with a thud.
“So you’re a ghost?”
He nodded mutely. She started to notice the pulsing aura around him, his form wavering slightly at every breath of the wind. Father’s eyes grew wide.
“I must go!” He shouted worriedly. “The other ghosts have noticed my absence. Goodbye, Mazasa! I love you!”
“Love you too…” She whispered, her hand closing on thin air as she tried to somehow keep her father there.
***
(change to first person cos I prefer it)
I brushed past cold stone walls and looming cave mouths. We had reached the edge of the vast forests, and were approaching the stalagmites and trilobites of the Arctic caves. Or the ‘North Pole’ as the rest of the world liked to call them. Where Santa and their elves rushed around to deliver presents to the rest of the world. Hate to be a party pooper, but I knew that the elves were cruel devilish creatures and Santa Claus was a mean selfish little dude.
“Mazasa!”
I jumped out of my thoughts filled with evil Santas’ taking over the world and returned to reality.
“Huh?” I mumbled.
“What the skibi- what is that?”
I glanced at a jumble of letters scattered across the wall in front of us. Blocking our path to the council.
“Probably some sus secret code from the council because they want us to not rescue stray animals.”
He nodded slowly. “It looks like my Dad’s telepath translations.”
I frowned. “Telepath?”
“Yeah, my Dad could do telepathy and he would translate it onto paper for his colleagues to put into another secret code and send across the world. Don’t ask.”
“Do you know what it means?” I asked hopefully.
Gurtle squinted at the letters. “Oh, yes. I know one word.”
“What?”
“Death.”
***
“Oh, god that’s deep.”
“I know.”
Gurtle’s face was etched with lines. “There’s another word. That I can recognise.”
“Yeah?”
I felt my insides spark with desperation.
“Go.”
I stamped my foot.
“That’s useless.” I muttered.
“Yeah. Sorry.”
I gave Gurtle a withering look. Anger bubbled up inside me. Couldn’t he be serious for once? I immediately regretted my thoughts as I saw tears welling up inside his eyes. He was just as sad as I was. I didn’t have a right to judge. I gritted my teeth.
“What if this is for nothing?” I asked quietly.
Gurtle’s eyes turned furious. “Are you saying that we shouldn’t rescue a poor defenseless animal? You’re just as bad as the council.”
I scratched my head. “But what if we’re caught and Rose dies anyway? WHat if we’re going the wrong way? What if I made the wrong choice?”
My voice became more and more agitated. Gurtle tried to shush me.
“It’s OK.”
He patted me on the back awkwardly.
“I’m sorry.” I told him.
“For what?”
“Snapping at you.”
He smiled softly. “You were stressed. It’s OK.”
I silently thanked God for letting him come with me. I would have given up without him ages ago.
***
Howling winds,
Battering me,
Swinging me from left to right.
Dizziness gripping me,
Washing over me.
Images flashing through my mind.
Rose.
Mother.
Father.
Shrouded in a dark storm,
Swept up by a tornado,
A blizzard of thoughts.
“Mazasa?”
I collapsed forwards, my heart racing. Beads of sweat coated my forehead. It felt like hammers were hacking at my skull. The pain was excruciating.
Spirits gliding past me,
Ghosts of who they were.
My slender hand reaching out to join them,
My raw scream,
Piercing the air.
A pair of worried eyes,
Gazing into mine.
A kitten curled up,
All alone,
Shivering,
Blanketed in snow.
Myself.
Stumbling towards them.
My movements slow and juddering,
My back hunched in,
Falling to the ground.
My eyes flickering,
Enveloped in sleep.
Or death.
“Gurtle!” I shrieked.
He was right next to me.
“Keep going. You’re having a panic attack. It should pass in a moment.”
My lip wobbled. My eyes stung.
“Find Rose.”
“I will. So will you.”
“I can’t make it.”
“Yes, you can.”
I shook my head. All I wanted to do was fall asleep. And never wake up.
Then I heard the pitiful mewing.
“Rose!” I cried.
“Well, you did find her.”
***
A small hiss echoed from behind me.
“Er - hello?”
A dragon bounced out at me. Scar.
“Yeah, hi. You stealing a kitten? You know, I happen to be a very important council member and I will not tolerate disobedience!”
I stepped back tentatively. “W-Woah. Well I am stealing a kitten. Bye!”
I scooped up Rose and rushed towards the speck of light ahead of me. Scar materialised in front of me.
“Stop. Right. There.”
“How did you do that?” I exclaimed in fascinated horror.
He smiled smugly. “Oh, it’s just one of those basics that you learn in council training. I was doing that when I was on my potty training!”
I blinked at him. “Too much information, dude. Anyways, I’ve got to go! Very busy schedule.”
“Doing what?”
I grinned. “The usual. Eating, sleeping, crocheting, murdering council dragons. Just stuff like that.”
He flared his nostrils. “Don’t you dare say that.”
I sighed heavily. “Dragons these days. So rude.”
He dragged Gurtle over with invisible force. It was like there was a rope tangling around him, wrapping him up.
“You take the kitten, I’ll take your friend! Deal?” He said in a sickly sweet voice.
“Definitely not!” I squealed. My voice sounded just a bit higher than usual.
“Aw, come on!”
Gurtle writhed in his cage. “Just go! I’ll escape! Go!”
I reeled back in shock. “Of course I won’t do that!”
“Go!” He screamed. “They’ll just kill us both!”
My breathing became fast and shallow. “I’ll come back for you!”
I raced off, trying not to look back. What had I done?
***
I built up the strength to fly over the trees. The humans all believed that we flew everywhere, but flying was a rare thing. To have the power to lift our whole bodies into the sky.
“I’ll come back for you.” I whispered, the wind rushing past my ears.
“I’ll come back for you.” Echoed another voice.
I glanced to my side and saw a kangaroo floating beside me, its body silvery and glowing.
“Who are you?”
“You.”
I furrowed my brow.
“Well, you’re obviously not me.”
They smiled gently. “Ah, but I am a whisper of your past. The oldest remnant of your family. I am from what you would know as the Dreamtime tales.”
A flicker of recognition tingled through me. “Bohra.”
“Yes, that’s me.”
I laughed.
“Your father sent me. He said that you needed some help. Some support.”
A tear rolled down my cheek.
“Yeah, that might be useful, I guess.”
“I just wanted to say, if you need us, then all you need to do is call. Also, you shouldn’t go back to Gurtle and Scar.”
“Why?” I snapped. “He’s my friend. I have to go back.”
Bohra bit their lip. “He won’t make it. And the council will come for you after that.”
I sailed to the ground. I swivelled around and started racing back to the caves. I felt a cold hand on my tail. I tried to shake it off, but it was immensely strong.
“Get off!” I screeched.
“Do you want to get killed as well? It’s no use, Mazasa!”
I fell to the hard ground and Bohra disappeared.
“Come back.” I sobbed.
***
Scar runs in, a lifeless Gurtle clutched in his arms.
Mazasa: (agitated) Gurtle!
Scar: (smugly) Did you really think that we’d let you go?
Mazasa reaches out for Gurtle, her eyes widening.
Mazasa: (sadly) Of course not. Why would you ever leave us alone?
Scar: Well, this will be the end of you and your cat-rescuing evil schemes!
Scar pulls out a laser gun and aims and aims at Mazasa.
Mazasa: Wait!
Scar: I don’t think so!
Mazasa looks around wildly and waves a stick at Scar.
Mazasa: Leave us alone!
Scar scoffs.
Scar: Oh, really?
Mazasa pulls a packet of wool with ‘Bombproof, fireproof, bulletproof, pretty-much-anything-proof’ written on it, and begins to crochet a sphere around her at 356 miles per hour.
Scar: What are you-
Mazasa: (muffled) You think you can catch me now?
Scar: (shakes his head) Probably not.
Mazasa: Ha! The mighty Scar finally admits that Mazasa is too great for him.
Scar: I said I couldn’t catch you. I didn’t say that I couldn’t kill you.
Mazasa: Lay off, dude!
Scar: I don’t think so!
He pulls out a pair of giant scissors with ‘bombproof-wool-cutting, fireproof-wool-cutting, bulletproof-wool-cutting, pretty-much-anything-proof-wool-cutting scissors’ written on it and begins to snip at Mazasa’s cage.
Mazasa: Oi! What are you doing?
Scar: Beating you. Doing my job.
***
I tried to wriggle out through a gap in my homemade cage, but the strands of wool kept on tightening around me.
“You’ll never get me!” I choked out.
Scar’s eyes glinted through a hole in the wool.
“I certainly will, actually!” He cackled.
My throat clogged up with fear and I clawed at the wool. It was no use.
A few minutes later.
Scar burst through the wool and aimed his gun at me.
“Please!” I wailed.
I brandished a gun from my pocket.
“L-look!”
My voice wavered with terror. I couldn’t shoot. I knew I couldn’t.
“Ok.”
I watched as his finger tightened on the trigger. The temperature increased inside the cramped ‘room.’ Time seemed to slow down as the bullet plummeted towards me. I dodged just in time.
For a moment we both paused.
Then I pushed down on the trigger. I looked away covering my eyes. I heard a desperate gurgle. When I finally looked back, the ‘room’ collapsed and I was left just by myself. Scar’s eyes were distant and glazed.
A glow surrounded Gurtle. Bohra. His eyelids fluttered open and he clutched his throat, his body shaking. Then his body relaxed. He saw Scar.
“What have you done?”
- KitVMH
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Thank-you notes
I probably forgot some people; apologies in advance
Bangsian: This session was amazing, and a lot of that is because of this cabin and everyone in it <33 I had a blast working for the CSLE alongside everyone else. Thank you so much to the leaders for putting together such a great cabin (ghost corporation! it’s honestly hilarious), and to all my cabinmates for making the experience even greater.
Em, Recca, and Bookie: Thank you for all your hard work as (co-)leaders, as well as for just being fun to be around <3 I loved having you all as my evil corporate managers.
Em: Once again, Bangsian is an amazing cabin; thank you so much for creating it, and for all the work you put into it. You were also such an active and fun presence around the cabin. Thank you.
Bookie: You can write a mercenary description like you’re Double Trouble themself <33 You also wrote so much for cabin wars. It’s been really fun seeing you around and being your camper this session.
Recca: Your writing is hilarious. I’ve really enjoyed everything I’ve read by you. You’re also so fun to be around — I loved the dad jokes xD Thank you!
Skylar: It’s been great getting to know you this session. I loved chatting with you (and Taylor Swift is great). Also, we stan our union leader <33
Oly: It was great meeting you this session! You have excellent taste in podcasts, and a Magnus Archives cabin would be amazing.
Hosts: As always, thank you so much for all your hard work running the camp. We love our tyrants.
Moss: Nimona!! <3
I probably forgot some people; apologies in advance
Bangsian: This session was amazing, and a lot of that is because of this cabin and everyone in it <33 I had a blast working for the CSLE alongside everyone else. Thank you so much to the leaders for putting together such a great cabin (ghost corporation! it’s honestly hilarious), and to all my cabinmates for making the experience even greater.
Em, Recca, and Bookie: Thank you for all your hard work as (co-)leaders, as well as for just being fun to be around <3 I loved having you all as my evil corporate managers.
Em: Once again, Bangsian is an amazing cabin; thank you so much for creating it, and for all the work you put into it. You were also such an active and fun presence around the cabin. Thank you.
Bookie: You can write a mercenary description like you’re Double Trouble themself <33 You also wrote so much for cabin wars. It’s been really fun seeing you around and being your camper this session.
Recca: Your writing is hilarious. I’ve really enjoyed everything I’ve read by you. You’re also so fun to be around — I loved the dad jokes xD Thank you!
Skylar: It’s been great getting to know you this session. I loved chatting with you (and Taylor Swift is great). Also, we stan our union leader <33
Oly: It was great meeting you this session! You have excellent taste in podcasts, and a Magnus Archives cabin would be amazing.
Hosts: As always, thank you so much for all your hard work running the camp. We love our tyrants.
Moss: Nimona!! <3
- Natt519
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Scratcher
79 posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
WEEKLY 4
Paranormal
3073 words
—–Backstory (Maya Civilization) // (220 words)
The baby cried in her crib, but she was payed no attention. The gods were busy.
“I do not see why she should be punished,” said her mother, Demeter. “It was not her fault she was born. Punish me, but leave her alone.”
The other gods glared at her. She had broken the Treaty. They did not wish to let her off with an easy punishment.
“That will not be enough,” rumbled Zeus. “She must bear some of the burden.” The other gods nodded their consent. Still, they did not notice the crying child. “She must not know her mother.”
“But where will she go?” cried Demeter. “Her father will not take her, nor would I want him to. He would not care for her.”
“There are human places called orphanages, where children without parents can go. She will go there. They will care for her there, and she will not know of her past. It is for the best.”
Demeter nodded slowly. There was nothing more she could do. It was a miracle they were not doing more. She got up and went over to the girl's crib.
“I bestow upon you a gift,” she whispered. “The gift of water. It will obey you. May it guide you back to us, Mallory.”
And finally, the girl–Mallory–quieted.
—–Supernatural (Greece) // Poem (Mesopotamia) // Animal (Inuit) // Code (Minoan) (816 words)
The rain spattered the ground around her, never quite hitting Mallory's green jacket. She wasn't quite tall or short, and had black hair that reached her shoulders. She wore a T-shirt that she had gotten at the thrift store last Thursday, black leggings, and gray boots. Her green eyes darted around, just as they always did, and her hands figeted with droplets of water. It obeyed her, just as it always had done. If she could avoid it, why should she force herself to get wet in the rain?
As she walked through the forest with it's dripping leaves and mossy ground, she recited a poem to herself.
“The rain is raining all around,
it falls on field and tree,
it rains on the umbrellas here
and on the ships at sea.”
It fit well with today, she thought to herself. Her hydrokenisis was her umbrella. Then, she noticed a small nest sitting, soaked, on a tree branch. The tiny birds inside it chirped weakly as they shivered. Mallory willed the rain to part above them, and the water that had soaked their tiny feathers began to rise away from their bodies. They chirped happily.
Mallory continued through the forest, mud and moss squishing beneath her boots. She made her way through the branches, weaving beneath them and between vines and hanging leaves to reach the cave she always came to. It wasn't far into the forest, but just far enough that she was the only one who knew about it. It was the best place to go whenever she wanted to do some exploring. She'd found it almost by accident when she was ten years old, when she had been exploring the forest. It would be small for an adult, but for her, since she was only fourteen, it was the perfect size. There were small ridges in the walls that served as shelves where she kept snacks and other things, and the vines that hung over the entrance gave it what Mallory thought was an almost homey feel. Better yet, it never got wet in the rain. Even if it did, of course, it wouldn't have been a problem for Mallory, but it was still an added bonus.
When she got to the cave, she lit the small lamp that sat by the doorway so that she wouldn't need to use her flashlight. It lit up the cave, bathing it in soft, warm light. She glanced around the room, checking for all of her belongings that she had left there from last time. Water bottle, candy stash, The Westing Game, her Chest of Precious Items, check, check, check, check. Everything was in its place.
Wait. What was that?
Sitting in the corner of the cave was a bound scroll. It was yellowed and crinkly along the edges, and Mallory knew that it hadn't been there the last time she was there. She picked it up and opened it. Inside, it was just a jumble of letters.
“Kixph, qp gegkaxvu. Mf ltw shiz wh pfqk emggv L lmzx zzvmfiw cfx. Exel, cfx ha rhx ihqqquii wlmx, ws pry? Aj vsluwq rhx. Pry iiki fqpk e uesb.
”M eyitfvi ksn eih aarwiilrs aas Z dq, optmdlrs xh fv bsgv fskkid. M tq Uhqqxxv, xrhpilw fi xti aeiyiex. Rsl dvq qr hrxktxxv.
“Z nraa mlzv me e esk ws grwiivxmrw eco ef sggv. Spqeli, dhif qx se Dxtigw Ylpx em jfxv a'gestn sz Xnijgek. M pmco ijteezq ihikckkmzk mlvui.
”Mrw cvv, hqek. Xyh Kdixo xrhe egh xrhpilwvv edi bruhip vxec.
“Dkmmg, jfxv a'gestn sz Xnijgek em Ekkizw Amco. Xti hxyhv ssww tdrzsm oera aj mlzv, sd xaip zmxp iyelwt chy rqh U fhxy. Niqt bx r viovxx.”
What was that supposed to mean? There was nothing she could make out from that. It was literally just some random strings of letters. Was it some kind of code? And who put it there? As far as she knew, she was the only one who knew about the cave, and she was certainly the only one who would actually come into it. If someone else did, after coming here every day for nearly four years, she would've seen them at some point.
If she told her parents, then they would make her get rid of it without solving it. What if it was something important? Maybe it was a test, and the people conducting it gave one of these to every person to solve. Sure, that was a bit far-fetched, and that idea probably wasn't true, but she had an active imagination and it was nice to be able to use it for once. She couldn't just throw it out without a second thought. If she could just solve it…
Wait. Carson. He loved puzzles and ciphers. If anyone could solve it, it's him. She could take it to him tomorrow at lunch. There was no way he'd refuse.
—–Symbol (Aztecs) // Descision (Navajo) // Trade (Aksum) // Gray Moment (China) (1,037 words)
“No can do, Mallory.”
“But–why not? It's just a code,” Mallory said. She had been sure he would want to help; she had *hoped* he would help, too, because she was rubbish at codes.
“Homework. Don't have time. And from the looks of it, this is a Vigenère Cipher. I'd need the key word before I could solve it.”
“But it's really important.”
“How so?”
This was the part she hadn't thought of. Saying she just wanted to solve it wouldn't convince him, but she didn't want to lie. But she also really needed it solved…
It wouldn't hurt to just tell one tiny lie, right? It was still lying, but at least she had a reason?
“I found it in my cave, okay? Don't tell anybody. It was just sitting there and I picked it up and it was that jumble of letters the Vig-whatever-you-said cipher. I think it could help me find my real parents.” It was a half truth.
Carson looked at her for a moment. Any moment, she thought, he's going to call me out on my bluff. There's no way I can get away with this.
“Fine. I'll help…if you do my homework for me. Science. Two pages. Deal?”
“Deal. Come to my house tonight.”
“I'll be there.”
*
Later, after Mallory had gotten home from school, she looked at the scroll again. Nothing new had been added–she had kept it with her the entire day, she told herself, how could it have changed?–but still, she felt like something was missing from it, or like there was something she hadn't noticed. She brushed her hand over the paper.
There was something there that hadn't been there before.
She snatched her hand away and looked at it closer. It was an outlined circle with a crossed torch and wheat ear. Where had she seen that before? It was like it was stuck in the back of her mind, almost close enough to grasp, but still just a little farther away. She brushed her hand over it again, and then it came to her.
It was when she was very young, she could tell that much. She couldn't see much of anything of the surroundings, but from the little glimpses in the memory that she could, it was a quite fancy room, and everything was white and gold. There was a woman standing over her. She was smiling and had the same green eyes and black hair that Mallory did. On her head was a crown of wheat ears, and she wore a sandy tan stola that had green accents. This must be my mother, Mallory thought almost giddily. She had never remembered anything about her before. Then, a name came to mind. Demeter.
Her mother was named Demeter? Like the goddess? And why was she wearing a stola?
Oh. OH.
Mallory snapped out of the memory, taking in deep gasping breaths. There was no way that was true. Her mother wasn't a goddess. Her mother had left her. Her mother couldn't take care of her. A goddess would keep her. A goddess would care for her.
No. No way. No. It wasn't true. She was not a demigod.
But what about your hydrokenesis? whispered a nagging voice in the back of her head. Where did that come from, then, if you aren't?
She threw the scroll under her bed and raced out of the house, heading towards her cave.
*
An hour or two later, Carson came over to her house. By then she had forced herself not to think of the memory, to act like everything was normal. She knew Carson would catch on, but he wouldn't say anything unless she seemed open to talk about it.
She was currently the least open to talk about anything than she ever had been in her life.
“So…do you have that scroll?” he asked cautiously. Mallory handed it to him wordlessly.
He looked overt carefully, then frowned. “What's this symbol here? I didn't notice it at lunch.”
“Oh! It's, um, nothing. Just a symbol. I don't know,” she said a little too quickly. Carson raised an eyebrow, but still said nothing.
“It looks like the symbol of Demeter–you know, the Greek goddess? And if this is a Vignere Cipher, then…”
“That could be the key.”
“Spot on,” Carson grinned. He pulled out his phone and typed a website into the search bar. “This is a cipher decoder,” he said. “I just need to type in the message and key, and it'll solve it for us.” After a moment, he pressed decode, and the message popped up on the screen.
“Hello, my daughter. It has been so long since I have visited you. Alas, you do not remember that, do you? Of course not. You were only a baby.
”I suppose you are wondering who I am, claiming to be your mother. I am Demeter, goddess of the harvest. You are my daughter.
“I know this is a lot to understand all at once. Please, meet me on Athens Hill at four o'clock on Tuesday. I will explain everything there.
”And yes, dear. The Greek gods and goddesses are indeed real.
“Again, four o'clock on Tuesday at Athens Hill. The other gods cannot know of this, or they will punish you and I both. Keep it a secret.”
Carson looked at her, his eyes wide. “No. No. Nowayyouarenotgoingabsolutelynot. Literally anyone could've sent this. Greek gods aren't real, okay? Mallory? Are you even paying attention?”
She hadn't been. She looked back at him sheepishly. “Um. No. Sorry.”
“Well, I was just saying how bad of an idea this is, and how you are absolutely–”
“I'm going.”
“Mallory Reina Cook. If you go, you're probably going to be met by an axe mvrd3rer or something.”
“Carson, I have to–what if it really is my real mom? I know you don't understand, not really. But I've never met her. If there's a chance I can change that, then I have to take it.”
“I'm coming, too.”
“No, you are not.”
“If we get there and it turns out to not be anyone dangerous, I'll leave. But I'm coming with you.”
Mallory sighed. “You really can be annoying, you know that?”
—–Script (Swahili) // Dark Day (Egypt) // Dreamtime (Australia) // Hero (Rome) (864 words)
MALLORY and CARSON are walking up Athens Hill. It's 4 o'clock on Tuesday.
CARSON: So…if she going to show up soon? It's 4 o'clock.
MALLORY, fidgeting nervously: Give it a minute. She could be late or something.
A woman in a tan stola appears in front of them and smiles at Mallory, then looks over at Carson and frowns.
DEMETER: Who is…this? Is he your…boyfriend, Mallory?
M and C: No!
M: This is Carson. (whispering to Carson) You can go now. It's not an axe mvrd3rer.
Carson walks quickly down the hill and waits there.
D: You got my message, I assume? I knew you'd be smart enough to solve it.
M: You'e Demeter. You're my mother.
D: Yes, I am. I suppose you want the whole tale?
M: That would be…appreciated? Yes? I want to know why you left me?
D: Well, it was when you were only a baby, as you know. You were seven months old. I was called to a meeting, and I went, unknowing about what they would tell me. The other gods said I had to get rid of you. You see, long ago, a treaty was made. No gods could ever have children. They were feared, for Zeus thought they would become too powerful. And so the Treaty was made.
D: I left you at the human orphanage. If I didn't, you and I both would have been punished. But before I left, I gave you a gift–the gift of water–and I promised that one day I would return for you. The only way you will be safe, though, is if Zeus is unseated from the throne.
*
“What? And you'd want to be the all-powerful Queen Demeter? No thanks. I don't have any sympathy for you,” scoffed Mallory.
Demeter narrowed her eyes ever so slightly. “I was hoping I wouldn't have to tell you this, but I suppose that now I must. You told the boy. The gods now know. They will come for you by the orders of Zeus. You will not. Be. Safe. Until Zeus is powerless. Using your hydrokenesis will draw their attention even more. I must take the gift away until the time comes when you are no longer in danger.”
Mallory felt it before Demeter even said anything. It was like she had taken a part of her away, like there was a gaping hole in her chest. She suddenly felt cold, like the gift had been the only thing keeping her warm.
Demeter looked genuinely regretful, but Mallory didn't care. “I know how you feel and you must understand that I didn't want to do that, but it's for your own safety. I understand that you probably hate me now, but I must remind you that you are still not safe. Some back here when you are ready for your quest.” And with that, Demeter, the woman Mallory had searched for her entire life, disappeared, leaving only a single yellow flower where she had stood.
*
Mallory sat on her bed that night. She knew she had homework, but she couldn't bring herself to do it. What was she without her gift? Nobody else knew about it, but it made her feel like she was something special, something unique.
Something more than the girl her parents didn't want. Something more than just Mallory. She was unlucky, like her name.
Carson came over that evening with cookies. “I just baked them,” he said proudly. They were slightly burnt and a bit hard, but Mallory ate one anyway so she didn't make him feel bad.
“I think you should do it,” Carson said as they were eating. “I mean–you heard what she said. You're still in danger. You need to do something.”
“Carson, I don't even have the gift she gave me anymore. I'm not even good enough to have that. What good would I do on a quest? I'd be pathetic.”
“Might I remind you of that time you of that time you climbed the super tall tree to get Lucy's kitten down? You were seven. You didn't need it for that.” Mallory didn't say anything.
Finally, Carson got up. As he was walking away, he paused in the doorway. “I'm just saying. See what she wants. You don't have to agree to it.”
*
Mallory stood on Athens Hill, but there was nobody else there. The wind blew ferociously, whipping her hair around and making her shiver. It was eight o'clock at night on Wednesday “Hello?” she called.
Still nothing.
Then, she noticed the small yellow flower that was still blooming where Demeter had stood. She bent down and picked it up.
It melted away in her hand, then vanished into dust, and suddenly Demeter appeared on the hill, the exact spot where she had stood before. She smiled, then said, “Have you decided to take my quest?”
“Yes. I have.”
*
Demeter nodded approvingly. “I see you've made the wise choice. To complete the quest, you must gain the trust of other mythological figures from different cultures. To answer your question that I know you have, yes, they all exist simultaneously. Your first task is to gain the trust of the Rainbow Serpent.”
*
—–Finishing (ish) the story // (136 words)
“Where can I find him?” Mallory asked. “And who else will I need to find?”
“You can find him near the water, but that's all I can tell you. This is your quest, not mine. After that, you must find Diana, the Roman goddess. She will help you, and will tell you who to find next.”
Mallory nodded slowly. Near the water? What water? There were several lakes and ponds and rivers nearby.
“Oh–one more thing,” Demeter said, interrupting Mallory from her thoughts. “Take this. It isn't infused with the powers of the gods, and it will not draw their attention to you.” She held out her arm, and a gleaming gold sword appeared there. Its hilt was highly decorated, with carvings of wheat ears, scrolls, and Greek heroes. It was quite beautiful. Mallory took it.
“May your quest be bountiful,” Demeter said, and vanished once again.
Paranormal
3073 words
—–Backstory (Maya Civilization) // (220 words)
The baby cried in her crib, but she was payed no attention. The gods were busy.
“I do not see why she should be punished,” said her mother, Demeter. “It was not her fault she was born. Punish me, but leave her alone.”
The other gods glared at her. She had broken the Treaty. They did not wish to let her off with an easy punishment.
“That will not be enough,” rumbled Zeus. “She must bear some of the burden.” The other gods nodded their consent. Still, they did not notice the crying child. “She must not know her mother.”
“But where will she go?” cried Demeter. “Her father will not take her, nor would I want him to. He would not care for her.”
“There are human places called orphanages, where children without parents can go. She will go there. They will care for her there, and she will not know of her past. It is for the best.”
Demeter nodded slowly. There was nothing more she could do. It was a miracle they were not doing more. She got up and went over to the girl's crib.
“I bestow upon you a gift,” she whispered. “The gift of water. It will obey you. May it guide you back to us, Mallory.”
And finally, the girl–Mallory–quieted.
—–Supernatural (Greece) // Poem (Mesopotamia) // Animal (Inuit) // Code (Minoan) (816 words)
The rain spattered the ground around her, never quite hitting Mallory's green jacket. She wasn't quite tall or short, and had black hair that reached her shoulders. She wore a T-shirt that she had gotten at the thrift store last Thursday, black leggings, and gray boots. Her green eyes darted around, just as they always did, and her hands figeted with droplets of water. It obeyed her, just as it always had done. If she could avoid it, why should she force herself to get wet in the rain?
As she walked through the forest with it's dripping leaves and mossy ground, she recited a poem to herself.
“The rain is raining all around,
it falls on field and tree,
it rains on the umbrellas here
and on the ships at sea.”
It fit well with today, she thought to herself. Her hydrokenisis was her umbrella. Then, she noticed a small nest sitting, soaked, on a tree branch. The tiny birds inside it chirped weakly as they shivered. Mallory willed the rain to part above them, and the water that had soaked their tiny feathers began to rise away from their bodies. They chirped happily.
Mallory continued through the forest, mud and moss squishing beneath her boots. She made her way through the branches, weaving beneath them and between vines and hanging leaves to reach the cave she always came to. It wasn't far into the forest, but just far enough that she was the only one who knew about it. It was the best place to go whenever she wanted to do some exploring. She'd found it almost by accident when she was ten years old, when she had been exploring the forest. It would be small for an adult, but for her, since she was only fourteen, it was the perfect size. There were small ridges in the walls that served as shelves where she kept snacks and other things, and the vines that hung over the entrance gave it what Mallory thought was an almost homey feel. Better yet, it never got wet in the rain. Even if it did, of course, it wouldn't have been a problem for Mallory, but it was still an added bonus.
When she got to the cave, she lit the small lamp that sat by the doorway so that she wouldn't need to use her flashlight. It lit up the cave, bathing it in soft, warm light. She glanced around the room, checking for all of her belongings that she had left there from last time. Water bottle, candy stash, The Westing Game, her Chest of Precious Items, check, check, check, check. Everything was in its place.
Wait. What was that?
Sitting in the corner of the cave was a bound scroll. It was yellowed and crinkly along the edges, and Mallory knew that it hadn't been there the last time she was there. She picked it up and opened it. Inside, it was just a jumble of letters.
“Kixph, qp gegkaxvu. Mf ltw shiz wh pfqk emggv L lmzx zzvmfiw cfx. Exel, cfx ha rhx ihqqquii wlmx, ws pry? Aj vsluwq rhx. Pry iiki fqpk e uesb.
”M eyitfvi ksn eih aarwiilrs aas Z dq, optmdlrs xh fv bsgv fskkid. M tq Uhqqxxv, xrhpilw fi xti aeiyiex. Rsl dvq qr hrxktxxv.
“Z nraa mlzv me e esk ws grwiivxmrw eco ef sggv. Spqeli, dhif qx se Dxtigw Ylpx em jfxv a'gestn sz Xnijgek. M pmco ijteezq ihikckkmzk mlvui.
”Mrw cvv, hqek. Xyh Kdixo xrhe egh xrhpilwvv edi bruhip vxec.
“Dkmmg, jfxv a'gestn sz Xnijgek em Ekkizw Amco. Xti hxyhv ssww tdrzsm oera aj mlzv, sd xaip zmxp iyelwt chy rqh U fhxy. Niqt bx r viovxx.”
What was that supposed to mean? There was nothing she could make out from that. It was literally just some random strings of letters. Was it some kind of code? And who put it there? As far as she knew, she was the only one who knew about the cave, and she was certainly the only one who would actually come into it. If someone else did, after coming here every day for nearly four years, she would've seen them at some point.
If she told her parents, then they would make her get rid of it without solving it. What if it was something important? Maybe it was a test, and the people conducting it gave one of these to every person to solve. Sure, that was a bit far-fetched, and that idea probably wasn't true, but she had an active imagination and it was nice to be able to use it for once. She couldn't just throw it out without a second thought. If she could just solve it…
Wait. Carson. He loved puzzles and ciphers. If anyone could solve it, it's him. She could take it to him tomorrow at lunch. There was no way he'd refuse.
—–Symbol (Aztecs) // Descision (Navajo) // Trade (Aksum) // Gray Moment (China) (1,037 words)
“No can do, Mallory.”
“But–why not? It's just a code,” Mallory said. She had been sure he would want to help; she had *hoped* he would help, too, because she was rubbish at codes.
“Homework. Don't have time. And from the looks of it, this is a Vigenère Cipher. I'd need the key word before I could solve it.”
“But it's really important.”
“How so?”
This was the part she hadn't thought of. Saying she just wanted to solve it wouldn't convince him, but she didn't want to lie. But she also really needed it solved…
It wouldn't hurt to just tell one tiny lie, right? It was still lying, but at least she had a reason?
“I found it in my cave, okay? Don't tell anybody. It was just sitting there and I picked it up and it was that jumble of letters the Vig-whatever-you-said cipher. I think it could help me find my real parents.” It was a half truth.
Carson looked at her for a moment. Any moment, she thought, he's going to call me out on my bluff. There's no way I can get away with this.
“Fine. I'll help…if you do my homework for me. Science. Two pages. Deal?”
“Deal. Come to my house tonight.”
“I'll be there.”
*
Later, after Mallory had gotten home from school, she looked at the scroll again. Nothing new had been added–she had kept it with her the entire day, she told herself, how could it have changed?–but still, she felt like something was missing from it, or like there was something she hadn't noticed. She brushed her hand over the paper.
There was something there that hadn't been there before.
She snatched her hand away and looked at it closer. It was an outlined circle with a crossed torch and wheat ear. Where had she seen that before? It was like it was stuck in the back of her mind, almost close enough to grasp, but still just a little farther away. She brushed her hand over it again, and then it came to her.
It was when she was very young, she could tell that much. She couldn't see much of anything of the surroundings, but from the little glimpses in the memory that she could, it was a quite fancy room, and everything was white and gold. There was a woman standing over her. She was smiling and had the same green eyes and black hair that Mallory did. On her head was a crown of wheat ears, and she wore a sandy tan stola that had green accents. This must be my mother, Mallory thought almost giddily. She had never remembered anything about her before. Then, a name came to mind. Demeter.
Her mother was named Demeter? Like the goddess? And why was she wearing a stola?
Oh. OH.
Mallory snapped out of the memory, taking in deep gasping breaths. There was no way that was true. Her mother wasn't a goddess. Her mother had left her. Her mother couldn't take care of her. A goddess would keep her. A goddess would care for her.
No. No way. No. It wasn't true. She was not a demigod.
But what about your hydrokenesis? whispered a nagging voice in the back of her head. Where did that come from, then, if you aren't?
She threw the scroll under her bed and raced out of the house, heading towards her cave.
*
An hour or two later, Carson came over to her house. By then she had forced herself not to think of the memory, to act like everything was normal. She knew Carson would catch on, but he wouldn't say anything unless she seemed open to talk about it.
She was currently the least open to talk about anything than she ever had been in her life.
“So…do you have that scroll?” he asked cautiously. Mallory handed it to him wordlessly.
He looked overt carefully, then frowned. “What's this symbol here? I didn't notice it at lunch.”
“Oh! It's, um, nothing. Just a symbol. I don't know,” she said a little too quickly. Carson raised an eyebrow, but still said nothing.
“It looks like the symbol of Demeter–you know, the Greek goddess? And if this is a Vignere Cipher, then…”
“That could be the key.”
“Spot on,” Carson grinned. He pulled out his phone and typed a website into the search bar. “This is a cipher decoder,” he said. “I just need to type in the message and key, and it'll solve it for us.” After a moment, he pressed decode, and the message popped up on the screen.
“Hello, my daughter. It has been so long since I have visited you. Alas, you do not remember that, do you? Of course not. You were only a baby.
”I suppose you are wondering who I am, claiming to be your mother. I am Demeter, goddess of the harvest. You are my daughter.
“I know this is a lot to understand all at once. Please, meet me on Athens Hill at four o'clock on Tuesday. I will explain everything there.
”And yes, dear. The Greek gods and goddesses are indeed real.
“Again, four o'clock on Tuesday at Athens Hill. The other gods cannot know of this, or they will punish you and I both. Keep it a secret.”
Carson looked at her, his eyes wide. “No. No. Nowayyouarenotgoingabsolutelynot. Literally anyone could've sent this. Greek gods aren't real, okay? Mallory? Are you even paying attention?”
She hadn't been. She looked back at him sheepishly. “Um. No. Sorry.”
“Well, I was just saying how bad of an idea this is, and how you are absolutely–”
“I'm going.”
“Mallory Reina Cook. If you go, you're probably going to be met by an axe mvrd3rer or something.”
“Carson, I have to–what if it really is my real mom? I know you don't understand, not really. But I've never met her. If there's a chance I can change that, then I have to take it.”
“I'm coming, too.”
“No, you are not.”
“If we get there and it turns out to not be anyone dangerous, I'll leave. But I'm coming with you.”
Mallory sighed. “You really can be annoying, you know that?”
—–Script (Swahili) // Dark Day (Egypt) // Dreamtime (Australia) // Hero (Rome) (864 words)
MALLORY and CARSON are walking up Athens Hill. It's 4 o'clock on Tuesday.
CARSON: So…if she going to show up soon? It's 4 o'clock.
MALLORY, fidgeting nervously: Give it a minute. She could be late or something.
A woman in a tan stola appears in front of them and smiles at Mallory, then looks over at Carson and frowns.
DEMETER: Who is…this? Is he your…boyfriend, Mallory?
M and C: No!
M: This is Carson. (whispering to Carson) You can go now. It's not an axe mvrd3rer.
Carson walks quickly down the hill and waits there.
D: You got my message, I assume? I knew you'd be smart enough to solve it.
M: You'e Demeter. You're my mother.
D: Yes, I am. I suppose you want the whole tale?
M: That would be…appreciated? Yes? I want to know why you left me?
D: Well, it was when you were only a baby, as you know. You were seven months old. I was called to a meeting, and I went, unknowing about what they would tell me. The other gods said I had to get rid of you. You see, long ago, a treaty was made. No gods could ever have children. They were feared, for Zeus thought they would become too powerful. And so the Treaty was made.
D: I left you at the human orphanage. If I didn't, you and I both would have been punished. But before I left, I gave you a gift–the gift of water–and I promised that one day I would return for you. The only way you will be safe, though, is if Zeus is unseated from the throne.
*
“What? And you'd want to be the all-powerful Queen Demeter? No thanks. I don't have any sympathy for you,” scoffed Mallory.
Demeter narrowed her eyes ever so slightly. “I was hoping I wouldn't have to tell you this, but I suppose that now I must. You told the boy. The gods now know. They will come for you by the orders of Zeus. You will not. Be. Safe. Until Zeus is powerless. Using your hydrokenesis will draw their attention even more. I must take the gift away until the time comes when you are no longer in danger.”
Mallory felt it before Demeter even said anything. It was like she had taken a part of her away, like there was a gaping hole in her chest. She suddenly felt cold, like the gift had been the only thing keeping her warm.
Demeter looked genuinely regretful, but Mallory didn't care. “I know how you feel and you must understand that I didn't want to do that, but it's for your own safety. I understand that you probably hate me now, but I must remind you that you are still not safe. Some back here when you are ready for your quest.” And with that, Demeter, the woman Mallory had searched for her entire life, disappeared, leaving only a single yellow flower where she had stood.
*
Mallory sat on her bed that night. She knew she had homework, but she couldn't bring herself to do it. What was she without her gift? Nobody else knew about it, but it made her feel like she was something special, something unique.
Something more than the girl her parents didn't want. Something more than just Mallory. She was unlucky, like her name.
Carson came over that evening with cookies. “I just baked them,” he said proudly. They were slightly burnt and a bit hard, but Mallory ate one anyway so she didn't make him feel bad.
“I think you should do it,” Carson said as they were eating. “I mean–you heard what she said. You're still in danger. You need to do something.”
“Carson, I don't even have the gift she gave me anymore. I'm not even good enough to have that. What good would I do on a quest? I'd be pathetic.”
“Might I remind you of that time you of that time you climbed the super tall tree to get Lucy's kitten down? You were seven. You didn't need it for that.” Mallory didn't say anything.
Finally, Carson got up. As he was walking away, he paused in the doorway. “I'm just saying. See what she wants. You don't have to agree to it.”
*
Mallory stood on Athens Hill, but there was nobody else there. The wind blew ferociously, whipping her hair around and making her shiver. It was eight o'clock at night on Wednesday “Hello?” she called.
Still nothing.
Then, she noticed the small yellow flower that was still blooming where Demeter had stood. She bent down and picked it up.
It melted away in her hand, then vanished into dust, and suddenly Demeter appeared on the hill, the exact spot where she had stood before. She smiled, then said, “Have you decided to take my quest?”
“Yes. I have.”
*
Demeter nodded approvingly. “I see you've made the wise choice. To complete the quest, you must gain the trust of other mythological figures from different cultures. To answer your question that I know you have, yes, they all exist simultaneously. Your first task is to gain the trust of the Rainbow Serpent.”
*
—–Finishing (ish) the story // (136 words)
“Where can I find him?” Mallory asked. “And who else will I need to find?”
“You can find him near the water, but that's all I can tell you. This is your quest, not mine. After that, you must find Diana, the Roman goddess. She will help you, and will tell you who to find next.”
Mallory nodded slowly. Near the water? What water? There were several lakes and ponds and rivers nearby.
“Oh–one more thing,” Demeter said, interrupting Mallory from her thoughts. “Take this. It isn't infused with the powers of the gods, and it will not draw their attention to you.” She held out her arm, and a gleaming gold sword appeared there. Its hilt was highly decorated, with carvings of wheat ears, scrolls, and Greek heroes. It was quite beautiful. Mallory took it.
“May your quest be bountiful,” Demeter said, and vanished once again.
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Scratcher
500+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Daily #30
11/30/2024
1167 words
This session has pushed me to the limits of writing and forced me to figure out how to balance between schoolwork, writing, and health, and I’ve learned a lot from it! I’ve also unlocked this little safe in my brain that contains the ability to write fanfiction, which was incredibly cool and I gained a lot of confidence from it. I loved everything about this session. I love to help out with the daily team and see that all come together and being on the MBC and being part of the best cabin ever, as we all know is Magical Realism with Alana, Clev, and CJ <3 And all the Magreal campers who helped with getting 17 completed wars in a day omw- It was just another amazing session. I don’t think that early November Eevee would have thought or planned to have written as much as she actually ended up doing, but I think she would have been proud of what I have been able to accomplish. This month brought a whirlwind to many aspects of my life, but this was definitely a highlight throughout it <3 I am so grateful for every one of you seriously. The hosts, leaders, cos, POLAR BEARS, MBC, and all of the campers who decided to join this lovely camp. This is concluding my fourth year since I joined SWC back in March 2021 and was my eighth session. I am very much looking forward to starting my ninth. Thank you all and I can’t wait to see you guys later. I just love this camp so much and everyone who is part of it. And without further ado, here’s some more specific thank yous <3
Hosties, thanks for an amazing session <3 There were some major changes to the lineup, but brought some interesting activities nonetheless!! The clue theme was really fun and I enjoyed participating in the giant cabin wars Clue game too. You guys do so so much and thanks for all the hard work you guys put into this ^^
MBC, it’s great to be part of the committee again this session and I know we’ve got some interesting pages planned bwahaha!! It’ll be fun to see it all come together <3
POLAR BEARS, you guys are amazinggg <3 Thank you guys for all of the things you do behind the scenes to plan out all of the activities for this session <3 It has been so much fun to complete the dailies and weeklies this session!
Fellow Polar Bear cubs, I had an amazing session with the Daily Team and you guys just came up with some amazing wordings for the dailies and weeklies. It's a lot of fun to be able to see what others come up with and partake in something bigger <3 Thanks for all of the fun dailies and weeklies throughout the session!!
Magical Realism leaders, thanks for everything you guys have prepared for us!! It was a fun concept and I enjoyed helping out with solving puzzles and collab stories. Plus the boba pals and weekly goals were a nice addition that I had a lot of fun with. You guys are all just so amazing and I loved being in Magreal this session <3
Magreal campers, I’m so happy to be in a cabin with you all and I'm so proud of you guys!! WE totally killed it during cabin wars and it was so much fun to be writing and knowing that there were so many others contributing to the wars so we could get them done quickly. It Was a lot of chaos and fun bundled up tougher. Thanks for being amazing cabinmates <3
Alansyyyy!! Alana cabin round #2 seemed to go well, maybe I should continue to stick with you ;0 This session in Magreal was so much fun and I'm glad I got in a cabin with you again <3 Let's see if we can continue this streak ;D Thanks for being your awesome self and an amazing host as well!! You are wearing so many hats in SWC from host, leader, POLAR BEAR, MBC host, oh my word?? (I still think you're Maestro Maroon, though I haven't confronted you directly yet… So are you? ',:0)
Clev!! You've been amazing this session with dealing with my too many added words and impatience to get the shield back down during cabin wars xD You've also just been really fun to talk to and hang around with. Thanks for all of the wonderful moments throughout the session we've had together! You have been an amazing co <3
Crim Crim Crimmmm thanks for being my friend <3 I'm grateful for the moments I get away from my life everyday. Thanks for dealing with my vents and rambles and everything that our conversations entail from shared fandoms to prayer requests ^^ You've literally changed how I go about my day and I don't know what my year would have looked like without you. I love you so much <33
Alex!! Hi!! We've known each other for almost 3 years oh my goshhhhhhh- And you're still a smol child U-U You've been someone I can trust and rely on. I'm grateful that you've been a friend to me and always teaching me more about the world (read: Argentina) Thanks for checking up on me and keeping me accountable when I need it ajkdfhas- Get good sleep!!! >:P Love you, Camila <33
Hi Vi! We didn’t get to talk as much as I would have liked this month, but talking to you is always fun and it was nice to be in a cabin with you!! You’re always so uplifting and motivating. Ily <33
Kit!! I can rely on you for reminiscing on the ‘good old days’ as you called it xD I know that you remember things from years back that I also treasure and it's nice to be able to talk about that with someone <3 You've seen me in my chaos for over 3 years now aksjdfshad- Thanks for being a constant SWC presence, you're such an icon <33
Luna :> You have been a worthy Trackbear rival U-U Fighting for first has been fun and seeing how I can push myself without getting burnt out has been an interesting challenge. You're also a lot of fun to banter with and you were an amazing Team Nano tribute!! At the end of the day, I hope I can get to talk to you more because you're amazing <33 Thanks for being amazing :D
Claya!! Thanks for getting Trackbear set up for SWCers, it’s been a joy <3 Watching you and Luna outdo the other to gain first motivated me to join in and it’s taken me on a real journey this session xD You’re just so much tun and thanks for the book rec as well!! I hope I can get to know you more and hey, we could totally bond over the Ithaca Saga when it comes out, right? ;0
the number of hearts in this is insane omg
11/30/2024
1167 words
This session has pushed me to the limits of writing and forced me to figure out how to balance between schoolwork, writing, and health, and I’ve learned a lot from it! I’ve also unlocked this little safe in my brain that contains the ability to write fanfiction, which was incredibly cool and I gained a lot of confidence from it. I loved everything about this session. I love to help out with the daily team and see that all come together and being on the MBC and being part of the best cabin ever, as we all know is Magical Realism with Alana, Clev, and CJ <3 And all the Magreal campers who helped with getting 17 completed wars in a day omw- It was just another amazing session. I don’t think that early November Eevee would have thought or planned to have written as much as she actually ended up doing, but I think she would have been proud of what I have been able to accomplish. This month brought a whirlwind to many aspects of my life, but this was definitely a highlight throughout it <3 I am so grateful for every one of you seriously. The hosts, leaders, cos, POLAR BEARS, MBC, and all of the campers who decided to join this lovely camp. This is concluding my fourth year since I joined SWC back in March 2021 and was my eighth session. I am very much looking forward to starting my ninth. Thank you all and I can’t wait to see you guys later. I just love this camp so much and everyone who is part of it. And without further ado, here’s some more specific thank yous <3
Hosties, thanks for an amazing session <3 There were some major changes to the lineup, but brought some interesting activities nonetheless!! The clue theme was really fun and I enjoyed participating in the giant cabin wars Clue game too. You guys do so so much and thanks for all the hard work you guys put into this ^^
MBC, it’s great to be part of the committee again this session and I know we’ve got some interesting pages planned bwahaha!! It’ll be fun to see it all come together <3
POLAR BEARS, you guys are amazinggg <3 Thank you guys for all of the things you do behind the scenes to plan out all of the activities for this session <3 It has been so much fun to complete the dailies and weeklies this session!
Fellow Polar Bear cubs, I had an amazing session with the Daily Team and you guys just came up with some amazing wordings for the dailies and weeklies. It's a lot of fun to be able to see what others come up with and partake in something bigger <3 Thanks for all of the fun dailies and weeklies throughout the session!!
Magical Realism leaders, thanks for everything you guys have prepared for us!! It was a fun concept and I enjoyed helping out with solving puzzles and collab stories. Plus the boba pals and weekly goals were a nice addition that I had a lot of fun with. You guys are all just so amazing and I loved being in Magreal this session <3
Magreal campers, I’m so happy to be in a cabin with you all and I'm so proud of you guys!! WE totally killed it during cabin wars and it was so much fun to be writing and knowing that there were so many others contributing to the wars so we could get them done quickly. It Was a lot of chaos and fun bundled up tougher. Thanks for being amazing cabinmates <3
Alansyyyy!! Alana cabin round #2 seemed to go well, maybe I should continue to stick with you ;0 This session in Magreal was so much fun and I'm glad I got in a cabin with you again <3 Let's see if we can continue this streak ;D Thanks for being your awesome self and an amazing host as well!! You are wearing so many hats in SWC from host, leader, POLAR BEAR, MBC host, oh my word?? (I still think you're Maestro Maroon, though I haven't confronted you directly yet… So are you? ',:0)
Clev!! You've been amazing this session with dealing with my too many added words and impatience to get the shield back down during cabin wars xD You've also just been really fun to talk to and hang around with. Thanks for all of the wonderful moments throughout the session we've had together! You have been an amazing co <3
Crim Crim Crimmmm thanks for being my friend <3 I'm grateful for the moments I get away from my life everyday. Thanks for dealing with my vents and rambles and everything that our conversations entail from shared fandoms to prayer requests ^^ You've literally changed how I go about my day and I don't know what my year would have looked like without you. I love you so much <33
Alex!! Hi!! We've known each other for almost 3 years oh my goshhhhhhh- And you're still a smol child U-U You've been someone I can trust and rely on. I'm grateful that you've been a friend to me and always teaching me more about the world (read: Argentina) Thanks for checking up on me and keeping me accountable when I need it ajkdfhas- Get good sleep!!! >:P Love you, Camila <33
Hi Vi! We didn’t get to talk as much as I would have liked this month, but talking to you is always fun and it was nice to be in a cabin with you!! You’re always so uplifting and motivating. Ily <33
Kit!! I can rely on you for reminiscing on the ‘good old days’ as you called it xD I know that you remember things from years back that I also treasure and it's nice to be able to talk about that with someone <3 You've seen me in my chaos for over 3 years now aksjdfshad- Thanks for being a constant SWC presence, you're such an icon <33
Luna :> You have been a worthy Trackbear rival U-U Fighting for first has been fun and seeing how I can push myself without getting burnt out has been an interesting challenge. You're also a lot of fun to banter with and you were an amazing Team Nano tribute!! At the end of the day, I hope I can get to talk to you more because you're amazing <33 Thanks for being amazing :D
Claya!! Thanks for getting Trackbear set up for SWCers, it’s been a joy <3 Watching you and Luna outdo the other to gain first motivated me to join in and it’s taken me on a real journey this session xD You’re just so much tun and thanks for the book rec as well!! I hope I can get to know you more and hey, we could totally bond over the Ithaca Saga when it comes out, right? ;0
the number of hearts in this is insane omg
Last edited by AmazaEevee (Dec. 1, 2024 21:36:11)
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Scratcher
79 posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
anything in bold is a change i made, and italics is notes 
(also sorry this took longer than it’d usually take me—I made the mistake of writing half of it in the forums but not posting, and I accidentally closed out of the tab and deleted everything (plus weekly/writing comp/ect))
alright first some good things!
* I liked how you opened and ended with the same line, only changing the tense to represent what happens to her. It gives it a lot of impact, especially at the end.
* Overall, it’s a very good story and there aren’t any plot holes that I noticed
* I loved the part where it says, “ I’m an honor. I’m an honor. I am supposed to be an honor. I was supposed to be an honor. I was an honor.” The repetition and how it changes each time she says it really shows her situation well!
* The changes I’d recommend are really just some small grammar tweaks because I genuinely couldn’t find anything in the actual plot that I thing you should change or improve on.
a few tweaks—
In this line - “Of course Mother, I’ve been doing well.”
Since Ada is referring to her mom as ‘Mother’, like a name, it would be capitalized. If she was saying “my mother”, it wouldn’t be, because she isn’t referring to her by “name”
There are a few places where I think you could separate the sentence into multiple sentences, either with an em dash, semicolon, or a complete new sentence:
Also, in the next dialogue line there, there’s no ending quotation marks :)
Also, I’d change could to can so that the verb tenses match.
(approach-present tense - - could-past tense || approach-present tense - - can-present tense)

(also sorry this took longer than it’d usually take me—I made the mistake of writing half of it in the forums but not posting, and I accidentally closed out of the tab and deleted everything (plus weekly/writing comp/ect))
alright first some good things!
* I liked how you opened and ended with the same line, only changing the tense to represent what happens to her. It gives it a lot of impact, especially at the end.
* Overall, it’s a very good story and there aren’t any plot holes that I noticed
* I loved the part where it says, “ I’m an honor. I’m an honor. I am supposed to be an honor. I was supposed to be an honor. I was an honor.” The repetition and how it changes each time she says it really shows her situation well!
* The changes I’d recommend are really just some small grammar tweaks because I genuinely couldn’t find anything in the actual plot that I thing you should change or improve on.
a few tweaks—
In this line - “Of course Mother, I’ve been doing well.”
Since Ada is referring to her mom as ‘Mother’, like a name, it would be capitalized. If she was saying “my mother”, it wouldn’t be, because she isn’t referring to her by “name”
There are a few places where I think you could separate the sentence into multiple sentences, either with an em dash, semicolon, or a complete new sentence:
Alex pulled back his hand, I saw it start to swell up and turn red, my eyes widened before standing up and running over to him.Alex pulled back his hand. I saw it start to swell up and turn red; my eyes widened before standing up and running over to him.
I nodded, I looked over at the piano and my eyes lit up, it wasn’t a complete waste to come here.I nodded and looked over at the piano. My eyes lit up—it wasn’t a complete waste to come here after all.
It felt as if there were weights on my fingers pushing them down on the keys, it felt like it was pulling at my skin.It felt as if there were weight on my finger pushing them down on the keys. It felt like it was pulling at my skin.
It didn’t matter, I couldn’t like a mistake like that happen againIt didn’t matter—I couldn’t make a mistake like that again…
My brothers and parents weren’t home today, they were away on a trip overseas, they entrusted me with myself for the next week or two.My brothers and parents weren’t home today. They were away on a trip overseas; they entrusted me with myself for the next week or two.
I grinned, it was the day of her big recital, we decided to come home early in order to not miss her big day, I went to her roomI grinned. It was the day of her big recital, so we had decided to come home early in order to not miss her big day. I went into her room…
Also, in the next dialogue line there, there’s no ending quotation marks :)
Ada Koch has been dead for years now, rumors say that if you approach the manor at 12am at night, the soft notes of Fur Elise could be heard echoing from the house.Ada Koch has been dead for years now. Rumors say that if you approach the manor at 12 AM at night…
Also, I’d change could to can so that the verb tenses match.
(approach-present tense - - could-past tense || approach-present tense - - can-present tense)
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Introduction (All you have to do is write 100 words to begin…)
“I have no idea where we’re going with this,” Wild laughs, feeling the current of thought lift up around them. Imagination could be a finicky thing to catch, but they were ready to ride this thing wherever its whims took it. No peeking ahead this time. No trying to script in advance. They would just write whatever their muses gave them.
Their muses, of course, being Half-Canon.
“Thank you for the introduction,” Chaos drawls. “Still calling us Half-Canon, I see.”
“Thoughtscape is cool, but just never caught on,” Wild shrugs, somewhat apologetic. “Old habits die hard.”
River emerges, Parsnip and Eclipse in tow. “Hey hey, let’s stop quibbling over labels. We’re supposed to be writing!”
“Is everyone showing up for the journey?” Wild asks her.
“Dunno where Chervil’s at. In subconscious with Silence, probably. Rain might show up, but only if they feel like it. You know how they are.”
Wild nods. “Yeah. Okay then. Yup.”
“So…” River looks at Wild and Chaos expectantly. “Begin?”
Navajo Nation (Your character is forced to make a decision they didn’t want to do.)
“Oh no. Instant roadblock.” Eclipse frets upon seeing the first prompt.
River groans. Wild sighs.
Parsnip and Chaos, however, exchange a knowing glance. “Would you say there’s a road, then, Eclipse?”
“Well, we were keeping things abstrac-”
“You said roadblock.”
“I mean, yes, but that was a metapho- Hey, why are you focusing on me, anyway? This is Wild’s writing activity!”
Wild blinks. “Don’t look at me. I already said that I was leaving it up to you guys to guide the arc of… whatever this is.”
“Well, I say there must be a road, then,” declares Chaos. “Go on and add it for us, Eclipse.”
“Hey wait, no!” argues Eclipse. “I didn’t decide that! Chaos, I know you know what a metaphor is.”
“I do,” Chaos agrees. “I also know that you’re the one in charge of the implementation of things around here. You can control the layout of this thoughtscape. So add a road.”
“I didn- Hhh. Fine. I don’t want to argue with you.”
A road materializes in the group’s mind’s eye. Minds’ eyes?
“Eyeballs?” chirps Parsnip.
“Hush,” whispers Wild. “I’m just setting up the narrative.”
A road materializes, a worn dirt road leading through a forest. Deciduous forest. The leaves are beginning to shed their green, revealing the glorious yellows and oranges and reds beneath.
“And just like that, we have a setting for our story now,” Chaos announces. “No need to thank me or anything.”
Wild rolls their eyes.
The group continues onward down the road.
Aztecs (Incorporate an image/symbol of some sort that unearths a memory in the main character.)
“Wait, have we decided who the main character is yet?” River asks.
“One of us, right?” Parsnip chimes in.
“I mean… this is a Half-Canon writing exercise. You guys always star in these,” Wild says. “That being said, you can do what you want. I’m just the facilitator here.”
“I vote Eclipse as the main character,” Chaos states, drawing up her pointed snout into a smug grin. “He was the one who made the decision for the last prompt.”
“Ughhhh,” says Eclipse.
“You have a point, Chaos…” River considers.
“I’m not getting out of this, am I,” Eclipse states. He twitches his tail in exasperation, resigning himself to the role.
“Come on, it’ll be fun!” River cheers.
Eclipse gives her a small smile. “Depends. You better be my sidekick, then.”
“Oh, you bet! Now we gotta find a symbol that trawls the depths of your memory!”
Eclipse’s smile falls. “Oh. Right.”
River grins mischiveously. “I am going to draw things until you remember something.”
She uses her claw to carve grooves in the dirt of the road. A star. A turtle. A fire. A feather.
“Come on, isn’t anything triggering your brain juices?” River complains once the entire area around the group is covered in doodles.
Parsnip bounces with impatience as Eclipse examines River’s art.
Eclipse blinks, twitching his ear tufts self-consciously. “Well the stars remind me of… uh. Space? Looking at space?”
“Very helpful,” River snorts.
“No, like, you can look at the sky to figure out where you’re going.” Eclipse looks up. It happens to be nighttime above the road, the stars visible over the tops of the trees. “I’d say we’re going south right now. A little to the east, maybe.”
“Okay. Okay, we can use that!” River whoops in combined excitement and relief. “Let’s go; next prompt!”
The group traverses southward, Eclipse in the lead.
Mayans (Include a “creation”/origin story about your character.)
The presence of Chervil is always acutely perceived whenever the topic of creation comes up. She alone has firsthand experience of how each of their species came to be, and she tells the stories often.
However, this time, she does not show up when the topic is mentioned.
Her absence is noticed by everyone.
“Well, because she isn’t here right now, let me do the storytelling,” Wild speaks, stepping forward from where they had been trailing at the back of the group. “I ought to know these tales well enough by this point.”
Everyone nods, not interrupting for once.
“A long time ago,” Wild begins, slipping easily into the familiar words, “birds flew the skies and walked the earth. They were the descendants of even greater minds who had made it their goal to create the perfect organism. Though these minds had failed in the past, the birds carried this mission as their inheritance.”
River beams. She loves this part.
“So the birds learned the language of life. They wrote out several new life forms, all unthought of by nature until then. Sometimes they started with existing creatures-” Wild nods to Chaos. “-and sometimes they combined pieces of others.”
Wild takes a deep breath. “The birds disappeared once they made their greatest creation.”
A high-quality dramatic pause fills the air.
“Me!”
Parsnip applauds enthusiastically. The others join in after a moment of figuring out how Parsnip acquired hands able to clap.
As their noise dies down, Wild continues. “And this led to the rest of the shazarxi, the start of a new species, unlike anything seen before. River, Eclipse, Parsnip- You carry the feathers of your forebears, and their mission too. For, you see, we are not yet a perfect organism. We are simply the next generation. Now, the quest falls to us!”
Wild had never ended the tale that way before, though the thought had been passed around previously. They weren’t actually certain if this was their purpose, or if the shazarxi had been created with a purpose at all, but it seemed like as good a reason as any to do cool stuff. Might as well accept the idea.
“Wait, so is this road still a metaphor, then?” River asks after a moment of surprised silence. “Is it a road through time?”
Wild steps back, relinquishing the storyteller’s posture. “That’s up to you,” they say, a faint smile on their face.
“I say it is!” River spreads her wings. “Let’s go, Eclipse! Let’s go to the future!”
The group bounds ahead, chasing down the reawoken dream.
Ancient Rome (Character development in a protagonist that changes them from a “character” to “hero.”)
“It has come to my attention that this will be one heck of a boring story if there are no obstacles to overcome,” Parsnip announces after the group makes it about ten steps, nonchalant as ever. “Permission to, you know, spice things up?”
“Uh. Define ‘spice,’ please.” Eclipse swallows hard.
Parsnip grins mischievously, focusing his mental energy. Suddenly, a massive tree root bursts through the road ahead, splitting the path in two. It reaches up to the overhanging tree branches, too thick to fly through. The group skids to a halt, gawking at the obstacle.
“Oh good,” Chaos says. “Conflict at last. Alright, Eclipse, what’s the plan?”
Eclipse groans. “Why me?”
“You’re the hero,” River says, giving him an encouraging nudge. “This is your character development arc! Seize the moment!”
“Seize the moment,” Eclipse mutters. “Sure, easy for you to say.” But he steps forward anyway, examining the twisted root. “Okay, so… what? Climb over it? Go around?”
“Or blast through it?” Parsnip suggests cheerily.
“Do NOT blast through it,” Eclipse says, pinching the bridge of their nose in a very un-shazarxa-like gesture because some emotions require a stretch of the imagination to express. “Okay. Here’s what we do. These trees on the sides of the road look easy enough to climb. The tangled branches that prevent us from flying just mean more clawholds.”
Chaos clears her throat.
“Chaos, you’re a shapeshifter. If you can’t climb in your wolf form, just go shazarxa for a little bit.”
“There are consequences to that, you know.”
“No there isn’t. Not here. We can literally summon reality to do what we want; real life rules don’t need to apply.”
“Then why don’t you just command the road to reroute around the root? Or, for that matter, de-exist the root altogether?”
“That would completely defeat the point of this prompt. I have to solve a problem through genuine effort to be a hero, right?” Eclipse sighs.
“I don’t believe in heroes,” Chaos sniffs.
Eclipse lashes his tail. “Then how do you want to complete this prompt?!”
“Calm down, Eclipse,” River purrs, rubbing up against him. “You’re already a hero to me.”
“Awww.” Parsnip smiles. “Gross.”
Wild snorts. “Shall we move on, then?”
Parsnip nods. “I stopped focusing on the root, so it disappeared. It’s been gone for a while. I was wondering if anyone would notice.”
The group glares at him, but one by one, they begin to carry on with their journey.
Ancient Greece (Incorporate the supernatural/spiritual into your writing.)
“You want us to incorporate the supernatural into a story where half of the characters have experienced being a ghost already,” Wild complains. “How are we supposed to work with that? This isn’t a plot point, it’s a given.”
“Ah, on the contrary, Wild!” Chaos responds. “Ghosts are natural to us. Thus, they aren’t supernatural, at least not in this world.”
“Okay,” says Wild. “Not sure I follow.”
“So we need something new.”
“Something beyond the physics of our usual universe?”
“Yes. You get what I’m saying?” Chaos smirks expectantly.
“I… think so.” Wild nods. Then they space out and stop writing for a minute to send a message to some people in a different universe.
Time stops passing while they wait for responses.
“Can we unpause time now?” Parsnip flashes his toothy grin, but it falls a little faster than usual.
Wild recognizes that this is due to a previous story’s time-pausing-related trauma. But they do not go into this now because it is not important.
Instead, they allow the voices to come through. This is easy because there was already no 4th wall present to keep them out.
The first voice echoes through the trees: “I should feed these mangoes to the goats. I'm sure they're hungry after that arson mission they went on last night…”
“Arson?” Parsnip and River gasp simultaneously, eyes sparkling. “Great idea!” Between the two of them, they quickly set a bunch of the surrounding forest on fire. Eclipse looks on in semi-amused resignation.
“Cats are cool. That’s all.” another alternate-universe voice rings out, briefly forming a translucent shape of someone sipping tea before dissipating back into the air.
“So true,” Chaos murmurs, twining a wreath of fire around herself in a way that wouldn’t be possible if any semblance of normal physics was being obeyed. “See, Wild? You can trust my ideas.”
Wild shies away from a flaming tree branch as it falls. “Hey, I already said I’d let you write this.”
“WHEEEEEEE,” Parsnip screeches.
“OM NOM BREAD,” a third voice screeches.
Wild resists the urge to summon some tasty imagianry bread into existence. This would also not be important to the current storyline. They could eat bread later. For now, they must continue writing. They make this resolution with perfect timing, as River and Parsnip now begin to tire, causing the fires to die down.
Having reduced a significant portion of the nearby trees to ash, the group takes the opportunity to look around.
Minoan Civilisation (Your character comes across writing that no one can decipher. They must figure out a way to decipher this writing!)
An odd stone structure is visible among the smoldering remains of the arson session.
Obviously, everyone goes over to check it out. They find a crumbling stone pillar covered in intricate carvings.
“Ooooh,” Parsnip breathes. “Ancient ruins. Nice touch, Chaos.”
“Wasn’t me,” Chaos says, inspecting her claws. “Blame the birds.”
“Birds?” Eclipse asks. “Our creators built this?”
“Yep. Among the wolves, the birds’ creations are a religion,” Chaos replies. “So I would know, believe me. It’s a whole thing.”
Eclipse and River examine the carvings. “Some of this looks familiar,” River says. “Chervil’s shown us visions of this stuff before. It’s definitely from the birds.”
“I can’t read it,” Eclipse admits. “But maybe… it doesn't need to be translated to reveal its message?” He traces the symbols, thinking hard.
“Whoa, puzzle-solving protagonist vibes,” Parsnip voices his support, his reddish eyes wide open.
Wild steps closer. “Those lines… they form a map. Look.”
The ancient lines conveniently reveal a new path. Chaos smirks. “Well, aren’t we clever. Let’s follow it.”
Eclipse leading the way, the new path stretches out in front of them as if it had been there the whole time. It leads to the mouth of a cavern.
Wild’s fur bristles. “Silence. Xey’re here.”
River pauses to listen. “I only hear dripping water. And I only smell… rock. Dirt, too, I guess.”
Wild shakes their head. “This is my brain; I can sense these things. But it’s fine. Let’s just go in.”
The walls are scrawled with more carvings, most similar to the ones on the pillar, some different.
“I wonder what they say,” River breathes, squinting to see them in the last few rays of light coming from the cavern entrance.
An alternate-universe voice seems to come up echoing from the depths: “Life is eternal darkness…”
“Okay, that was probably totally unrelated to what the carvings say,” Eclipse laughs nervously. “Still, spooky.”
The group disappears into the darkness.
Mesopotamia (Incorporate a poem or poetry into your writing.)
“Hey, is it okay if we sing to pass the time while we walk through this pitch black cave?” River asks. “I can make it into a poem for the sake of the prompt, I guess.”
“Go for it,” Eclipse shrugs. “I like your singing.”
River clears her throat.
“The road we tread is made of dreams,
A path that’s not as it may seem.
With twists and turns, and skies of gold,
The journey’s worth its weight untold.”
“Ugh,” says Rain, appearing from the darkness. “That’s terrible.”
Eclipse jumps at the grumpy shazarxa’s sudden arrival. “Where did you come from?”
“Followed you here because I just couldn’t miss out on the fun,” Rain says, their classic note of sarcasm flooding the tunnel. “Also, you do dumb things when there’s no voice of reason around. I saw the arson aftermath back there.”
River grins. “Maybe I should sing about that!”
“Please no,” Rain groans.
“Oh? Think you can do better?”
Rain raises an eyebrow and recites their own poem.
“A traveler bold, with steps unclear,
The future looms both far and near.
Yet shadows fall, and whispers stay,
The hero’s heart will find the way.”
Parsnip starts applauding. “Encore!”
“Parsnip!” River acts mock-offended. “I thought you were on my side! Arson buddies, remember?”
“Your singing is not bad enough to set things on fire,” Parsnip retorts, grinning even though it was too dark to see facial expressions.
“River’s singing voice is great,” Rain admits. “It’s just her poem-writing ability that is hot dung.”
“Hmph.” River whacks Rain with one wing. “How about I sing something else then?”
“What did you have in mind?”
Another alternate-universe voice seems to take this as an opportunity to interrupt. It starts singing: “Alexander Hamilton, my name is Alexander Hamilton, and there’s a million things I haven’t done, but just you wait, just you wait!”
River perks up in excitement and begins to sing along. Before long, Eclipse joins in, followed by Parsnip, Chaos, and even Rain.
Somewhere in the back of the group, Wild feels very proud for teaching Half-Canon all the lyrics to Hamilton songs so that situations like this could be possible. They begin to sing, too.
Somehow, the cavern didn’t feel so dark when it was filled with song.
The group lets the music carry them down, deeper into the earth.
Ancient Egypt (Your main character has a “dark day,” a time where they doubt everything they’ve gone through, and question their choices, decisions, and capability.)
Unfortunately, the songs peter out after a little while. Even River falls silent eventually.
“You know, I missed most of it, but is this plot actually going somewhere?” Rain huffs. “So far, it’s been just… walking and goofing around. With like, no stakes. Or goals. What are we doing here?”
Eclipse opens his mouth to respond.
“I just sent thirty-two souls to the underworld; this sandwich tastes good!” an alternate-universe voice responds before he can speak.
“Okay, can we turn off the voice thing now?” Chaos whispers to Wild. “That was for, like, four prompts ago. And we really need to hurry up if we want to get this weekly turned in on time.”
“Fineeee,” Wild answers, reluctantly resigning themself to not include any more of the voices in their writing. Probably. You know, unless they got another really good one and there was a convenient moment for it.
When they tune back in to the conversation, Eclipse has almost finished catching Rain up on all the action. Eclipse’s voice is weary, a bit raw from singing too much earlier. He concludes, “…and now we’re here in this cavern.”
“Yeah,” Rain continues when he’s finished. “If this road is still meant to symbolize a journey through time, I don’t see us making any progress that actually supports that. What does that mean, anyway? What are we trying to accomplish, exactly?”
Eclipse slumps down, wings drooping. “I… don’t know.”
The silence in the cavern is deafening.
“I guess I’m a bad protagonist.”
River crouches beside him. “Hey, you’re doing amazing. Don’t let Rain get to you. They’re always like this.”
“No, they’re right. I’ve led us all into a cave with no idea what we’re even doing. I’m not cut out for this hero stuff.” Eclipse thumps his tail on the cold, rocky floor.
Chaos sniffs. “You’re the protagonist. You’re literally designed for this.”
“Maybe I don’t want to be the protagonist,” Eclipse snaps. “You were the one who told me to be the protagonist and do this whole thing with the road.”
“Hmm. Perhaps I have been too hard on you,” Chaos admits after a moment. “But I have an idea…”
The whole group listens as she begins to speak.
“Wild, I renounce your writership. I take ownership of this story. And I want to use different characters entirely! A different writing style, a different world! Watch this!”
“This is stupid,” Wild sighs, but lets her do her thing.
Kingdom of Aksum (Your character must trade or barter in order to receive something they want.)
Blood’s claws tapped anxiously against the stone as she approached the wandering merchant. A cart laden with shimmering fabrics and intricate trinkets stood before her, but her gaze fixed on a small vial of shimmering purple liquid. The merchant, a fox-like creature with calculating eyes, followed her stare and grinned.
“Rare potion of clarity, yes? Pricey.”
Blood’s ears flattened. She had no coin, no valuables. Only… she reached into the satchel slung over her shoulder and pulled out a small carved pendant, a keepsake from her mother. The merchant raised an eyebrow.
“Interesting, but hardly sufficient.”
“It’s enchanted,” Blood countered, her voice steady despite her racing pulse. “Wards off illness.”
The merchant’s eyes gleamed. “Enchantments are tricky business. Show me.”
She hesitated but closed her eyes, whispering a prayer to the gods she no longer trusted. The pendant glowed faintly, and the merchant’s grin widened.
“Deal.”
The vial was hers, and she turned away quickly, clutching it tightly. Guilt settled in her chest as she walked. The pendant had been her last tie to her mother, but the promise of clarity—of understanding her fractured mind—was worth the trade.
Her mother hadn't helped her when she learned of Blood's curse, anyway. She had done nothing to help Blood when the Pack turned on her. If there was one thing that Blood's mother could do, it was this.
Swahili City States (Write a part of a story in a play script format.)
Scene: A dark forest clearing. Blood and Summit stand facing each other, tension crackling in the air.
Blood: (clenching her fists) Why did you bring me here, Summit? This place… it’s cursed.
Summit: (calmly) It’s only cursed if you believe in curses. I brought you here because you need to see the truth.
Blood: (snarling) Truth? What truth? That you’re willing to risk everything for power?
Summit: (stepping closer) No. The truth that you’re not as different as you think. That this “curse” of yours is a gift.
Blood: (backing away) A gift? It’s destroyed everything I care about. Cloud is dead. My parents… they think I’m a monster.
Summit: (grabbing her arm) Then make them see. Use it. Shape it into something they can’t deny. You have the power to change everything.
Blood: (yanking her arm free) And what would you have me do? Become like you?
Summit: (softly) No. Become better.
Blood: (staring at him, voice trembling) I don’t know if I can.
Summit: (smirking) You already have.
(They stand in silence, the wind rustling through the trees.)
Summit calmly) In any case, you will be provided with a private tutor. Someone whom I trust greatly.
Blood: (worried) Who?
Summit: (grinning) Rust.
Blood: (terrified) No! That wolf is a- he's a monster! I've seen how violent he is…
Summit: (unmoved) You're a monster, too. Everyone says so.
Blood: (getting angry) But you know I'm not! You say I'm not cursed! You say I could be a savior!
Summit: (serious) And that's what you'll be if you go through with this. Really, I'm only trying to do what's best for you.
Ancient China (Your character has a morally grey moment- a time where they do something that may not align with their regular morals.)
Blood had run.
Run from Summit. Run from her mother. Run from the Pack that reviled her.
It had been days since she left Pack territories, and she still had no idea where she was going. The environment here was harsh. A wolf had to fight to survive.
Had to do whatever it took to keep going.
Blood stood over an unconscious figure, her breath ragged. The stranger’s satchel lay open, spilling herbs and vials across the dirt. The pungent scent of healing salves stung her nose, but her gaze locked on the small pouch of dried meat.
She hadn’t eaten in days. Hunger gnawed at her insides, twisting her resolve. Her claws trembled as she reached for the pouch, her mind a cacophony of guilt and desperation.
“They’ll understand,” she whispered to herself. “They’re a healer. They’ll… they’ll forgive me.”
But the voice in her head, the one that sounded like her mother, was less kind. *You’re better than this, Blood. You don’t steal.*
“I’ll pay them back,” she murmured, clutching the pouch. “Somehow.”
The stranger stirred, and Blood froze. She stuffed the pouch into her satchel and bolted into the shadows, shame burning in her chest. She’d justify it later, she told herself. Survival came first.
Aboriginal Peoples of Australia (Incorporate a Dreamtime character into writing.)
The night was still, the air thick with anticipation. Blood crouched by the riverbank, her reflection rippling as she stared into the depths. She whispered a name—one forbidden by her Pack.
“Mirram the Hunter, I seek your guidance.”
The water shimmered, and a figure emerged, half-man, half-kangaroo, his form wreathed in starlight. Mirram’s eyes, sharp and knowing, met hers.
“You dare call upon me, cursed one?” his voice rumbled, ancient and vast.
Blood bowed her head. “I need your strength. Your cunning. I can’t control what I am.”
Mirram circled her, his tail swishing through the grass. “Control? That is not my gift. I grant the will to survive, to outwit, to endure. But you must embrace the wild within you.”
“It’s killing me,” she admitted, tears streaming down her face. “I don’t know how to live like this.”
Mirram knelt, his paw resting on her shoulder. “Then die and be reborn, Blood. Only then will you understand.”
When she blinked, he was gone, and the river’s surface was still once more. But his words lingered, a challenge she could not ignore.
SHe would do what she had to do to make it through this. Even if it cost her soul.
It wasn't as if anyone believed she had a soul, anyway.
Right?
Inuit (Your character shows empathy and helps an animal.)
The bird lay crumpled at the base of the tree, one wing bent at an unnatural angle. Blood’s sharp eyes caught the faint rise and fall of its chest, a flicker of life that refused to give in.
She knelt, her claws gentle as she scooped the creature into her hands. It squawked weakly, fear flashing in its black eyes.
“Shh,” she murmured. “I won’t hurt you.”
The bird’s feathers were warm, its heartbeat rapid against her palm. Blood scanned the forest, her mind racing. She knew little of healing, but there was a patch of medicinal herbs nearby. She’d seen the healer use them once to mend a fox’s leg.
Working quickly, she crushed the leaves into a paste and smeared it over the bird’s wing. It flinched but didn’t fight her. Blood fashioned a splint from twigs and bound the wing with strips of her cloak.
“There,” she said softly. “You’ll heal.”
She stayed with the bird until night fell, her body shielding it from the cold. When it finally drifted into a peaceful sleep, so did she, knowing she’d done something right for once.
“Hey so that wasn't too bad of a story, now was it?” Chaos smirked.
“That was…” WIld blinked in confusion. “I didn't like giving up control like that.”
“But I wrote it better than you could.”
The rest of Half-Canon falls silent, not weighing in an opinion. “The first half was more fun, though…”
“Not for Eclipse.”
“You told him to be the protagonist!”
“You didn't intervene.”
“I… didn't want to get too involved. I wanted this to be your story. But I still wanted to be the one writing it!”
Chaos shook her head. “You can be quite the hypocrite, Wild.”
Wild huffs. “You think I don't know that? Anyhow, it's over now. I guess it's fine…”
“It's not over because you're still writing this,” Chaos points out.
“Then- uh- THE END!”
wheeeeeee this was stupiddddd
sorry I had to rushhh
“I have no idea where we’re going with this,” Wild laughs, feeling the current of thought lift up around them. Imagination could be a finicky thing to catch, but they were ready to ride this thing wherever its whims took it. No peeking ahead this time. No trying to script in advance. They would just write whatever their muses gave them.
Their muses, of course, being Half-Canon.
“Thank you for the introduction,” Chaos drawls. “Still calling us Half-Canon, I see.”
“Thoughtscape is cool, but just never caught on,” Wild shrugs, somewhat apologetic. “Old habits die hard.”
River emerges, Parsnip and Eclipse in tow. “Hey hey, let’s stop quibbling over labels. We’re supposed to be writing!”
“Is everyone showing up for the journey?” Wild asks her.
“Dunno where Chervil’s at. In subconscious with Silence, probably. Rain might show up, but only if they feel like it. You know how they are.”
Wild nods. “Yeah. Okay then. Yup.”
“So…” River looks at Wild and Chaos expectantly. “Begin?”
Navajo Nation (Your character is forced to make a decision they didn’t want to do.)
“Oh no. Instant roadblock.” Eclipse frets upon seeing the first prompt.
River groans. Wild sighs.
Parsnip and Chaos, however, exchange a knowing glance. “Would you say there’s a road, then, Eclipse?”
“Well, we were keeping things abstrac-”
“You said roadblock.”
“I mean, yes, but that was a metapho- Hey, why are you focusing on me, anyway? This is Wild’s writing activity!”
Wild blinks. “Don’t look at me. I already said that I was leaving it up to you guys to guide the arc of… whatever this is.”
“Well, I say there must be a road, then,” declares Chaos. “Go on and add it for us, Eclipse.”
“Hey wait, no!” argues Eclipse. “I didn’t decide that! Chaos, I know you know what a metaphor is.”
“I do,” Chaos agrees. “I also know that you’re the one in charge of the implementation of things around here. You can control the layout of this thoughtscape. So add a road.”
“I didn- Hhh. Fine. I don’t want to argue with you.”
A road materializes in the group’s mind’s eye. Minds’ eyes?
“Eyeballs?” chirps Parsnip.
“Hush,” whispers Wild. “I’m just setting up the narrative.”
A road materializes, a worn dirt road leading through a forest. Deciduous forest. The leaves are beginning to shed their green, revealing the glorious yellows and oranges and reds beneath.
“And just like that, we have a setting for our story now,” Chaos announces. “No need to thank me or anything.”
Wild rolls their eyes.
The group continues onward down the road.
Aztecs (Incorporate an image/symbol of some sort that unearths a memory in the main character.)
“Wait, have we decided who the main character is yet?” River asks.
“One of us, right?” Parsnip chimes in.
“I mean… this is a Half-Canon writing exercise. You guys always star in these,” Wild says. “That being said, you can do what you want. I’m just the facilitator here.”
“I vote Eclipse as the main character,” Chaos states, drawing up her pointed snout into a smug grin. “He was the one who made the decision for the last prompt.”
“Ughhhh,” says Eclipse.
“You have a point, Chaos…” River considers.
“I’m not getting out of this, am I,” Eclipse states. He twitches his tail in exasperation, resigning himself to the role.
“Come on, it’ll be fun!” River cheers.
Eclipse gives her a small smile. “Depends. You better be my sidekick, then.”
“Oh, you bet! Now we gotta find a symbol that trawls the depths of your memory!”
Eclipse’s smile falls. “Oh. Right.”
River grins mischiveously. “I am going to draw things until you remember something.”
She uses her claw to carve grooves in the dirt of the road. A star. A turtle. A fire. A feather.
“Come on, isn’t anything triggering your brain juices?” River complains once the entire area around the group is covered in doodles.
Parsnip bounces with impatience as Eclipse examines River’s art.
Eclipse blinks, twitching his ear tufts self-consciously. “Well the stars remind me of… uh. Space? Looking at space?”
“Very helpful,” River snorts.
“No, like, you can look at the sky to figure out where you’re going.” Eclipse looks up. It happens to be nighttime above the road, the stars visible over the tops of the trees. “I’d say we’re going south right now. A little to the east, maybe.”
“Okay. Okay, we can use that!” River whoops in combined excitement and relief. “Let’s go; next prompt!”
The group traverses southward, Eclipse in the lead.
Mayans (Include a “creation”/origin story about your character.)
The presence of Chervil is always acutely perceived whenever the topic of creation comes up. She alone has firsthand experience of how each of their species came to be, and she tells the stories often.
However, this time, she does not show up when the topic is mentioned.
Her absence is noticed by everyone.
“Well, because she isn’t here right now, let me do the storytelling,” Wild speaks, stepping forward from where they had been trailing at the back of the group. “I ought to know these tales well enough by this point.”
Everyone nods, not interrupting for once.
“A long time ago,” Wild begins, slipping easily into the familiar words, “birds flew the skies and walked the earth. They were the descendants of even greater minds who had made it their goal to create the perfect organism. Though these minds had failed in the past, the birds carried this mission as their inheritance.”
River beams. She loves this part.
“So the birds learned the language of life. They wrote out several new life forms, all unthought of by nature until then. Sometimes they started with existing creatures-” Wild nods to Chaos. “-and sometimes they combined pieces of others.”
Wild takes a deep breath. “The birds disappeared once they made their greatest creation.”
A high-quality dramatic pause fills the air.
“Me!”
Parsnip applauds enthusiastically. The others join in after a moment of figuring out how Parsnip acquired hands able to clap.
As their noise dies down, Wild continues. “And this led to the rest of the shazarxi, the start of a new species, unlike anything seen before. River, Eclipse, Parsnip- You carry the feathers of your forebears, and their mission too. For, you see, we are not yet a perfect organism. We are simply the next generation. Now, the quest falls to us!”
Wild had never ended the tale that way before, though the thought had been passed around previously. They weren’t actually certain if this was their purpose, or if the shazarxi had been created with a purpose at all, but it seemed like as good a reason as any to do cool stuff. Might as well accept the idea.
“Wait, so is this road still a metaphor, then?” River asks after a moment of surprised silence. “Is it a road through time?”
Wild steps back, relinquishing the storyteller’s posture. “That’s up to you,” they say, a faint smile on their face.
“I say it is!” River spreads her wings. “Let’s go, Eclipse! Let’s go to the future!”
The group bounds ahead, chasing down the reawoken dream.
Ancient Rome (Character development in a protagonist that changes them from a “character” to “hero.”)
“It has come to my attention that this will be one heck of a boring story if there are no obstacles to overcome,” Parsnip announces after the group makes it about ten steps, nonchalant as ever. “Permission to, you know, spice things up?”
“Uh. Define ‘spice,’ please.” Eclipse swallows hard.
Parsnip grins mischievously, focusing his mental energy. Suddenly, a massive tree root bursts through the road ahead, splitting the path in two. It reaches up to the overhanging tree branches, too thick to fly through. The group skids to a halt, gawking at the obstacle.
“Oh good,” Chaos says. “Conflict at last. Alright, Eclipse, what’s the plan?”
Eclipse groans. “Why me?”
“You’re the hero,” River says, giving him an encouraging nudge. “This is your character development arc! Seize the moment!”
“Seize the moment,” Eclipse mutters. “Sure, easy for you to say.” But he steps forward anyway, examining the twisted root. “Okay, so… what? Climb over it? Go around?”
“Or blast through it?” Parsnip suggests cheerily.
“Do NOT blast through it,” Eclipse says, pinching the bridge of their nose in a very un-shazarxa-like gesture because some emotions require a stretch of the imagination to express. “Okay. Here’s what we do. These trees on the sides of the road look easy enough to climb. The tangled branches that prevent us from flying just mean more clawholds.”
Chaos clears her throat.
“Chaos, you’re a shapeshifter. If you can’t climb in your wolf form, just go shazarxa for a little bit.”
“There are consequences to that, you know.”
“No there isn’t. Not here. We can literally summon reality to do what we want; real life rules don’t need to apply.”
“Then why don’t you just command the road to reroute around the root? Or, for that matter, de-exist the root altogether?”
“That would completely defeat the point of this prompt. I have to solve a problem through genuine effort to be a hero, right?” Eclipse sighs.
“I don’t believe in heroes,” Chaos sniffs.
Eclipse lashes his tail. “Then how do you want to complete this prompt?!”
“Calm down, Eclipse,” River purrs, rubbing up against him. “You’re already a hero to me.”
“Awww.” Parsnip smiles. “Gross.”
Wild snorts. “Shall we move on, then?”
Parsnip nods. “I stopped focusing on the root, so it disappeared. It’s been gone for a while. I was wondering if anyone would notice.”
The group glares at him, but one by one, they begin to carry on with their journey.
Ancient Greece (Incorporate the supernatural/spiritual into your writing.)
“You want us to incorporate the supernatural into a story where half of the characters have experienced being a ghost already,” Wild complains. “How are we supposed to work with that? This isn’t a plot point, it’s a given.”
“Ah, on the contrary, Wild!” Chaos responds. “Ghosts are natural to us. Thus, they aren’t supernatural, at least not in this world.”
“Okay,” says Wild. “Not sure I follow.”
“So we need something new.”
“Something beyond the physics of our usual universe?”
“Yes. You get what I’m saying?” Chaos smirks expectantly.
“I… think so.” Wild nods. Then they space out and stop writing for a minute to send a message to some people in a different universe.
Time stops passing while they wait for responses.
“Can we unpause time now?” Parsnip flashes his toothy grin, but it falls a little faster than usual.
Wild recognizes that this is due to a previous story’s time-pausing-related trauma. But they do not go into this now because it is not important.
Instead, they allow the voices to come through. This is easy because there was already no 4th wall present to keep them out.
The first voice echoes through the trees: “I should feed these mangoes to the goats. I'm sure they're hungry after that arson mission they went on last night…”
“Arson?” Parsnip and River gasp simultaneously, eyes sparkling. “Great idea!” Between the two of them, they quickly set a bunch of the surrounding forest on fire. Eclipse looks on in semi-amused resignation.
“Cats are cool. That’s all.” another alternate-universe voice rings out, briefly forming a translucent shape of someone sipping tea before dissipating back into the air.
“So true,” Chaos murmurs, twining a wreath of fire around herself in a way that wouldn’t be possible if any semblance of normal physics was being obeyed. “See, Wild? You can trust my ideas.”
Wild shies away from a flaming tree branch as it falls. “Hey, I already said I’d let you write this.”
“WHEEEEEEE,” Parsnip screeches.
“OM NOM BREAD,” a third voice screeches.
Wild resists the urge to summon some tasty imagianry bread into existence. This would also not be important to the current storyline. They could eat bread later. For now, they must continue writing. They make this resolution with perfect timing, as River and Parsnip now begin to tire, causing the fires to die down.
Having reduced a significant portion of the nearby trees to ash, the group takes the opportunity to look around.
Minoan Civilisation (Your character comes across writing that no one can decipher. They must figure out a way to decipher this writing!)
An odd stone structure is visible among the smoldering remains of the arson session.
Obviously, everyone goes over to check it out. They find a crumbling stone pillar covered in intricate carvings.
“Ooooh,” Parsnip breathes. “Ancient ruins. Nice touch, Chaos.”
“Wasn’t me,” Chaos says, inspecting her claws. “Blame the birds.”
“Birds?” Eclipse asks. “Our creators built this?”
“Yep. Among the wolves, the birds’ creations are a religion,” Chaos replies. “So I would know, believe me. It’s a whole thing.”
Eclipse and River examine the carvings. “Some of this looks familiar,” River says. “Chervil’s shown us visions of this stuff before. It’s definitely from the birds.”
“I can’t read it,” Eclipse admits. “But maybe… it doesn't need to be translated to reveal its message?” He traces the symbols, thinking hard.
“Whoa, puzzle-solving protagonist vibes,” Parsnip voices his support, his reddish eyes wide open.
Wild steps closer. “Those lines… they form a map. Look.”
The ancient lines conveniently reveal a new path. Chaos smirks. “Well, aren’t we clever. Let’s follow it.”
Eclipse leading the way, the new path stretches out in front of them as if it had been there the whole time. It leads to the mouth of a cavern.
Wild’s fur bristles. “Silence. Xey’re here.”
River pauses to listen. “I only hear dripping water. And I only smell… rock. Dirt, too, I guess.”
Wild shakes their head. “This is my brain; I can sense these things. But it’s fine. Let’s just go in.”
The walls are scrawled with more carvings, most similar to the ones on the pillar, some different.
“I wonder what they say,” River breathes, squinting to see them in the last few rays of light coming from the cavern entrance.
An alternate-universe voice seems to come up echoing from the depths: “Life is eternal darkness…”
“Okay, that was probably totally unrelated to what the carvings say,” Eclipse laughs nervously. “Still, spooky.”
The group disappears into the darkness.
Mesopotamia (Incorporate a poem or poetry into your writing.)
“Hey, is it okay if we sing to pass the time while we walk through this pitch black cave?” River asks. “I can make it into a poem for the sake of the prompt, I guess.”
“Go for it,” Eclipse shrugs. “I like your singing.”
River clears her throat.
“The road we tread is made of dreams,
A path that’s not as it may seem.
With twists and turns, and skies of gold,
The journey’s worth its weight untold.”
“Ugh,” says Rain, appearing from the darkness. “That’s terrible.”
Eclipse jumps at the grumpy shazarxa’s sudden arrival. “Where did you come from?”
“Followed you here because I just couldn’t miss out on the fun,” Rain says, their classic note of sarcasm flooding the tunnel. “Also, you do dumb things when there’s no voice of reason around. I saw the arson aftermath back there.”
River grins. “Maybe I should sing about that!”
“Please no,” Rain groans.
“Oh? Think you can do better?”
Rain raises an eyebrow and recites their own poem.
“A traveler bold, with steps unclear,
The future looms both far and near.
Yet shadows fall, and whispers stay,
The hero’s heart will find the way.”
Parsnip starts applauding. “Encore!”
“Parsnip!” River acts mock-offended. “I thought you were on my side! Arson buddies, remember?”
“Your singing is not bad enough to set things on fire,” Parsnip retorts, grinning even though it was too dark to see facial expressions.
“River’s singing voice is great,” Rain admits. “It’s just her poem-writing ability that is hot dung.”
“Hmph.” River whacks Rain with one wing. “How about I sing something else then?”
“What did you have in mind?”
Another alternate-universe voice seems to take this as an opportunity to interrupt. It starts singing: “Alexander Hamilton, my name is Alexander Hamilton, and there’s a million things I haven’t done, but just you wait, just you wait!”
River perks up in excitement and begins to sing along. Before long, Eclipse joins in, followed by Parsnip, Chaos, and even Rain.
Somewhere in the back of the group, Wild feels very proud for teaching Half-Canon all the lyrics to Hamilton songs so that situations like this could be possible. They begin to sing, too.
Somehow, the cavern didn’t feel so dark when it was filled with song.
The group lets the music carry them down, deeper into the earth.
Ancient Egypt (Your main character has a “dark day,” a time where they doubt everything they’ve gone through, and question their choices, decisions, and capability.)
Unfortunately, the songs peter out after a little while. Even River falls silent eventually.
“You know, I missed most of it, but is this plot actually going somewhere?” Rain huffs. “So far, it’s been just… walking and goofing around. With like, no stakes. Or goals. What are we doing here?”
Eclipse opens his mouth to respond.
“I just sent thirty-two souls to the underworld; this sandwich tastes good!” an alternate-universe voice responds before he can speak.
“Okay, can we turn off the voice thing now?” Chaos whispers to Wild. “That was for, like, four prompts ago. And we really need to hurry up if we want to get this weekly turned in on time.”
“Fineeee,” Wild answers, reluctantly resigning themself to not include any more of the voices in their writing. Probably. You know, unless they got another really good one and there was a convenient moment for it.
When they tune back in to the conversation, Eclipse has almost finished catching Rain up on all the action. Eclipse’s voice is weary, a bit raw from singing too much earlier. He concludes, “…and now we’re here in this cavern.”
“Yeah,” Rain continues when he’s finished. “If this road is still meant to symbolize a journey through time, I don’t see us making any progress that actually supports that. What does that mean, anyway? What are we trying to accomplish, exactly?”
Eclipse slumps down, wings drooping. “I… don’t know.”
The silence in the cavern is deafening.
“I guess I’m a bad protagonist.”
River crouches beside him. “Hey, you’re doing amazing. Don’t let Rain get to you. They’re always like this.”
“No, they’re right. I’ve led us all into a cave with no idea what we’re even doing. I’m not cut out for this hero stuff.” Eclipse thumps his tail on the cold, rocky floor.
Chaos sniffs. “You’re the protagonist. You’re literally designed for this.”
“Maybe I don’t want to be the protagonist,” Eclipse snaps. “You were the one who told me to be the protagonist and do this whole thing with the road.”
“Hmm. Perhaps I have been too hard on you,” Chaos admits after a moment. “But I have an idea…”
The whole group listens as she begins to speak.
“Wild, I renounce your writership. I take ownership of this story. And I want to use different characters entirely! A different writing style, a different world! Watch this!”
“This is stupid,” Wild sighs, but lets her do her thing.
Kingdom of Aksum (Your character must trade or barter in order to receive something they want.)
Blood’s claws tapped anxiously against the stone as she approached the wandering merchant. A cart laden with shimmering fabrics and intricate trinkets stood before her, but her gaze fixed on a small vial of shimmering purple liquid. The merchant, a fox-like creature with calculating eyes, followed her stare and grinned.
“Rare potion of clarity, yes? Pricey.”
Blood’s ears flattened. She had no coin, no valuables. Only… she reached into the satchel slung over her shoulder and pulled out a small carved pendant, a keepsake from her mother. The merchant raised an eyebrow.
“Interesting, but hardly sufficient.”
“It’s enchanted,” Blood countered, her voice steady despite her racing pulse. “Wards off illness.”
The merchant’s eyes gleamed. “Enchantments are tricky business. Show me.”
She hesitated but closed her eyes, whispering a prayer to the gods she no longer trusted. The pendant glowed faintly, and the merchant’s grin widened.
“Deal.”
The vial was hers, and she turned away quickly, clutching it tightly. Guilt settled in her chest as she walked. The pendant had been her last tie to her mother, but the promise of clarity—of understanding her fractured mind—was worth the trade.
Her mother hadn't helped her when she learned of Blood's curse, anyway. She had done nothing to help Blood when the Pack turned on her. If there was one thing that Blood's mother could do, it was this.
Swahili City States (Write a part of a story in a play script format.)
Scene: A dark forest clearing. Blood and Summit stand facing each other, tension crackling in the air.
Blood: (clenching her fists) Why did you bring me here, Summit? This place… it’s cursed.
Summit: (calmly) It’s only cursed if you believe in curses. I brought you here because you need to see the truth.
Blood: (snarling) Truth? What truth? That you’re willing to risk everything for power?
Summit: (stepping closer) No. The truth that you’re not as different as you think. That this “curse” of yours is a gift.
Blood: (backing away) A gift? It’s destroyed everything I care about. Cloud is dead. My parents… they think I’m a monster.
Summit: (grabbing her arm) Then make them see. Use it. Shape it into something they can’t deny. You have the power to change everything.
Blood: (yanking her arm free) And what would you have me do? Become like you?
Summit: (softly) No. Become better.
Blood: (staring at him, voice trembling) I don’t know if I can.
Summit: (smirking) You already have.
(They stand in silence, the wind rustling through the trees.)
Summit calmly) In any case, you will be provided with a private tutor. Someone whom I trust greatly.
Blood: (worried) Who?
Summit: (grinning) Rust.
Blood: (terrified) No! That wolf is a- he's a monster! I've seen how violent he is…
Summit: (unmoved) You're a monster, too. Everyone says so.
Blood: (getting angry) But you know I'm not! You say I'm not cursed! You say I could be a savior!
Summit: (serious) And that's what you'll be if you go through with this. Really, I'm only trying to do what's best for you.
Ancient China (Your character has a morally grey moment- a time where they do something that may not align with their regular morals.)
Blood had run.
Run from Summit. Run from her mother. Run from the Pack that reviled her.
It had been days since she left Pack territories, and she still had no idea where she was going. The environment here was harsh. A wolf had to fight to survive.
Had to do whatever it took to keep going.
Blood stood over an unconscious figure, her breath ragged. The stranger’s satchel lay open, spilling herbs and vials across the dirt. The pungent scent of healing salves stung her nose, but her gaze locked on the small pouch of dried meat.
She hadn’t eaten in days. Hunger gnawed at her insides, twisting her resolve. Her claws trembled as she reached for the pouch, her mind a cacophony of guilt and desperation.
“They’ll understand,” she whispered to herself. “They’re a healer. They’ll… they’ll forgive me.”
But the voice in her head, the one that sounded like her mother, was less kind. *You’re better than this, Blood. You don’t steal.*
“I’ll pay them back,” she murmured, clutching the pouch. “Somehow.”
The stranger stirred, and Blood froze. She stuffed the pouch into her satchel and bolted into the shadows, shame burning in her chest. She’d justify it later, she told herself. Survival came first.
Aboriginal Peoples of Australia (Incorporate a Dreamtime character into writing.)
The night was still, the air thick with anticipation. Blood crouched by the riverbank, her reflection rippling as she stared into the depths. She whispered a name—one forbidden by her Pack.
“Mirram the Hunter, I seek your guidance.”
The water shimmered, and a figure emerged, half-man, half-kangaroo, his form wreathed in starlight. Mirram’s eyes, sharp and knowing, met hers.
“You dare call upon me, cursed one?” his voice rumbled, ancient and vast.
Blood bowed her head. “I need your strength. Your cunning. I can’t control what I am.”
Mirram circled her, his tail swishing through the grass. “Control? That is not my gift. I grant the will to survive, to outwit, to endure. But you must embrace the wild within you.”
“It’s killing me,” she admitted, tears streaming down her face. “I don’t know how to live like this.”
Mirram knelt, his paw resting on her shoulder. “Then die and be reborn, Blood. Only then will you understand.”
When she blinked, he was gone, and the river’s surface was still once more. But his words lingered, a challenge she could not ignore.
SHe would do what she had to do to make it through this. Even if it cost her soul.
It wasn't as if anyone believed she had a soul, anyway.
Right?
Inuit (Your character shows empathy and helps an animal.)
The bird lay crumpled at the base of the tree, one wing bent at an unnatural angle. Blood’s sharp eyes caught the faint rise and fall of its chest, a flicker of life that refused to give in.
She knelt, her claws gentle as she scooped the creature into her hands. It squawked weakly, fear flashing in its black eyes.
“Shh,” she murmured. “I won’t hurt you.”
The bird’s feathers were warm, its heartbeat rapid against her palm. Blood scanned the forest, her mind racing. She knew little of healing, but there was a patch of medicinal herbs nearby. She’d seen the healer use them once to mend a fox’s leg.
Working quickly, she crushed the leaves into a paste and smeared it over the bird’s wing. It flinched but didn’t fight her. Blood fashioned a splint from twigs and bound the wing with strips of her cloak.
“There,” she said softly. “You’ll heal.”
She stayed with the bird until night fell, her body shielding it from the cold. When it finally drifted into a peaceful sleep, so did she, knowing she’d done something right for once.
“Hey so that wasn't too bad of a story, now was it?” Chaos smirked.
“That was…” WIld blinked in confusion. “I didn't like giving up control like that.”
“But I wrote it better than you could.”
The rest of Half-Canon falls silent, not weighing in an opinion. “The first half was more fun, though…”
“Not for Eclipse.”
“You told him to be the protagonist!”
“You didn't intervene.”
“I… didn't want to get too involved. I wanted this to be your story. But I still wanted to be the one writing it!”
Chaos shook her head. “You can be quite the hypocrite, Wild.”
Wild huffs. “You think I don't know that? Anyhow, it's over now. I guess it's fine…”
“It's not over because you're still writing this,” Chaos points out.
“Then- uh- THE END!”
wheeeeeee this was stupiddddd
sorry I had to rushhh
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Scratcher
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swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
OKAYOKAYOKAY- UGH this is hardddddd- I have no idea how many words this will be, but it’ll probably be a lot. There’s a note for everyone (not literally, but all the groups of people are there) here, so, idk, ctrl-F your group or something-
Hosts
MASSIVE thank you to you guys! This session was one of my favorites, and your invaluable work towards this session should not go unnoticed. Y’all are so wonderful and amazing and I’m in awe of all of the work that you have put in into making this camp go round once again. SWC is such a huge part of my online life, and I’m so utterly grateful that it’s in such good hands. You guys are the best, and I will be forever grateful! You should be incredibly proud of yourselves for all of the crazy amazing things you were able to help pull off this session!
Leadership Roles
This is just kinda more in general, but everybody who has fulfilled a leadership position in some capacity did such an amazing job at it, I just know it! Cabin leaders, you guys slayed!! Like, I loved getting to see the various concepts that you guys came up with for your cabins! Daily team, we did a great job on the dailies and weeklies! MBC, we’re going to do awesome on designing the memory book! Everyone, you guys did awesome!
Bangsian Cabin
Speaking on behalf of upper management, you all did a satisfactory job this session. You all were very nice cogs in our capitalist machine, and we ran quite smoothly. Also, what union? Huh? I’m a ghost, I don’t have ears.
XD In all seriousness, I am SO grateful for you guys! Without you, this awesome cabin would not CURRENTLY BE IN FIRST PLACE! *confetti* You all slayed so hard, and I loved getting to see just how committed you were! Thank you for your participation, this has probably been my favorite session to date, and a lot of this is thanks to you guys! Much love from one of your corporate overlords <3
Chris
Hi, yeah, you get a thank-you note! First of all, I’m so proud of you for doing what you were able to do this session! You should be proud of yourself, you’re awesome, and I’m so happy to see how you’ve grown this session. Even if not everything was your favorite, I still think that you should look back on this session and see just how far you’ve come. You’re wonderful, and I am SO glad that we were in the same cabin this session! You were a joy to have as a camper, and gosh, I really hope that your last(? Who knows, maybe March will work out-) SWC session was as special as possible. Keep checking in with the community, it doesn’t die in between sessions! You are a light to have, and you brighten every conversation we have. Thank you for being my friend, and thank you for putting in the effort. You really seemed into it, and I’m so glad! I hope that you made some new friends and that you got to have good conversations with some people. Putting yourself out there was worth it, I’m sure! Much love my friend, thank for being amazing <3
Aurora
Alkdhflasjfkajshdfkjashfkjashfkf I feel so bad for not talking to you more this session! Gosh, we really need to chat more, sorryI love being able to talk with you. You’re wonderful, and amazing, and you’re absolutely great to talk to! You are so creative and cool and I loved getting to read some of your writing. I hope that our rp goes well in the future <3 You’re the best, and I hope that you enjoyed this session! I hope that we’re able to get a few more sessions together!
Em
I loved your cabin concept, it was so amazing and lovely! I could not be more proud to be a fellow corporate overlord with you! You are such a light, and I loved getting to chat with you when I could. We should totally keep in touch as the session goes on. I would love to get to know you more! Also, I may give JWC a look, so, there’s that ;D You are incredibly funny, as well as capable and smart. You did a great job managing our cabin, and I’m very proud of you!
Recca
Heyyyy Recca! Gosh, you’re awesome, and so funny! I loved getting to be a co with you, it was amazing experience! I definitely think that we should keep in touch, because I feel like I REALLY didn’t talk with you much this session, which makes me very sad.I wish you the best! <3
Chuey
Eyyy, Chuey! You were SO iconic this session, I absolutely loved getting to see you float around everywhere! Your chaos is quite appreciated, it often put a smile on my face. I think this is your first time co-leading, right? That’s literally SO cool, and I think that you did such a wonderful job! Fantasy was so iconic this session, and I loved getting to see how you got involved. You’re such a cool person, and I really appreciate just how much intentionality and purpose you had with participating. Very proud of you <3 We should really chat more aha-
Sage
Hey Sage!! Was this your first session, because, gosh, it doesn’t seem like it- You were SO iconic, and you were so, so involved. I loved getting to see how you thrived in this environment, and I’m really grateful for all the times that I was able to interact with you. I loved getting to see just how exuberant you were, and I really look forward to seeing you participate in more sessions if you’re able. You were an ICON, and you should be really proud of yourself for stepping up so much! We should totally talk more! Much love, my friend, I’ll see you around <3
Zy
Gosh, you are so cool- I love getting to read your writing, and whatever interaction we had this session was so fun- I’d love to get to know you more, you seem like such a cool person! You did a brilliant job leading Mystery! Sending loves from Bangsian to our amazing siblings!
Campers
SLAY. ALL OF YOU. SLAY. YUP, EVERY ONE OF YOU. SLAY!! I didn’t get to talk to y’all as much as I wanted to (stupid college classes-), but everyone who I DID talk to was absolutely so wonderful, amazing, and funny. I don’t know exactly how much you wrote or how much you participated, but I think that you should be so, so proud of yourself regardless. You stepped out into a different environment, and whether or not you’re very experienced, each session presents unique challenges every single time.
All the other cabins
Slay. Big slay.
Anyone I missed (because I’m certain that I did)
You’re definitely amazing, and I’m sorry for having a horrid memory. Like, literally, a goldfish would beat me in a memory contest. Anyways, uh, you’re really cool, and you slayed this session <3
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Scratcher
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swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Ok here we go we are doing the thing where we type really fast and hope against hope that we make it um i am already nervous and out of ideas so i can only pray that the turtles will come to save me by putting thoughts into my head and making me creative for one more time and i think it is working because like turtles haha ah am i right that is so weird for me to say aokay actually no maybe it is not because i do talk about turrtles all the time but it is better to spam about than other topics with longer words like technoblade because i know i did that before for a hydra challenge and did not win because short words are easy when you are trying to go fast fast fast and I am making so many typos right now but see if i care, no one will ever read this other than me and I judge myself enough on other factors, besides all is worth it if I can just win the hydra, I don’t know if I’m going to make it based on how things are going but eh it is a valiant attempt, no? I paused to sit up just then and wasted a few seconds but I kind of had to because it was really not comfortable the way I was sitting before, propped up on a pillow and a stuffed dinosaur named big reddy who is a t rex that is very worn and still cute though. Raven my cat is in the window and he is a good boi except he keeps trying to scratch my mom and only my mom, he is very sweet for everyone else and none of us can figure out why. some people just taste like cat treats I guess. anyhow I am getting really close to my goal actually and I can’t see the timer from where I am currently sitting so hopefully it is loud when it goes off because I am so loud with my keyboard mashing that I don’t know if I could hear if it was not like super loud. and that may be a little bit of hyperbole but hey it gave me something to write about, this is getting so incoherent but my consciousness is still supplying me with random * to say so I have not yet given up hope i have merely abandoned all limits of good grammar. oh no the timer is up and I fall short aa what do I do I will fix all my typos after but it will not be enough if my words are not enough of them oh no no no nooooo
Yellow eyes fly open. Whose? Mine? My scent is wrong. My shape is wrong. Who am I?
Shaking my head, my pelt. Unfamiliar fragments of light and sound whirl around me. I don’t remember how I got here. Claws dig into the earth. Try to recall.
I was running… dancing? Escaping. Fear and fascination. Pulling away, drawing closer. Dizziness.
No moon in the darkness. It should’ve been full. Where did the time go? Shattered and died and buried where no one will ever find—
Wait.
Her scent. She’s nearby. Who? She brought me here. She’s dangerous! She’s the only one who’ll save me. I have to run away.
Limbs feel strange, but my fleeting heart pumps through them and I stagger forward. Movement. Someone else? Or just myself again?
No, it’s—
A burrow nestled amidst roots. A rabbit. Do I know them? I couldn’t possibly. Their whiskers twitch. Mine are too small.
They flee.
So do I.
“People-Watching”
The restaurant was busy, just as I liked it. So many lives swirling around, each with a story to tell. I pulled out my notebook and cast my attention out into the room, scanning for anything of interest to add to my collection.
My gaze landed upon the two people at the table across from mine. Their forms were silhouetted against the window, the darkness outside causing their reflections to appear bold and clear in the glass.
The older one bore some resemblance to the younger one, and I thought they must have been related—the elder could have been the father or uncle, maybe. He wore a stiff brown jacket over a white buttoned shirt. His hair was dark gray, starting to thin in the back. The younger person wore a purple-and-gray T-shirt. Their hair was black with dyed pink and blue highlights.
They moved stiffly, and though they sat across from each other, they seemed to look everywhere else but at the person in front of them as if it would’ve brought physical discomfort to do so.
I made a quick sketch in my notebook, paying extra attention to their scowling faces. I couldn’t help but wonder what they were so upset about. The older man opened his mouth to say something, and I strained to hear over the low roar of all the voices in the room.
“You know, back in my day—” the older person begins.
“OH, DON’T YOU START WITH THAT!” the younger person erupts, pounding a fist on the table. “We’re not going over this AGAIN.”
I guess I didn’t need to worry about being able to eavesdrop. A good half of the restaurant glanced at them when they heard the shout.
“Keep your voice down, Rowan,” the older man growled.
“Why? You embarrassed?”
“This is a private conversation.”
“Oh, like my emails were private? Like my texts were private?” The younger person—Rowan—pointed accusingly at their companion.
“That’s different, and you know it. I—”
A waitress arrived, bringing them their drinks and temporarily halting their argument. Rowan snatched up their glass of water, taking a small sip and then holding it just below their face.
The older man glanced sideways at the younger person, his face briefly contorting into a sneer. Once the waitress was safely out of earshot, he continued. “The truth is, you’re letting your emotions get the best of you, boy.”
“Don’t call me ‘boy.’”
“Oh, I’ll call it like it is. And all I see is a deluded boy about to throw away his one chance at being successful like his old man.”
“I am NOT you; I will NEVER be you.” Rowan slammed their glass of water down on the table, gesturing dramatically.
By now, I was so intrigued that my baked potato had begun to grow cold with neglect. Still, I watched them from the corner of my eye.
“Then you’re not getting any assistance from me.”
“I don’t need your assistance! I just need your permission, your name on the stupid paper. Then you never have to hear from me again.”
“No. This is madness. I’m not letting you do this. You’re getting a decent job, and that’s FINAL.”
“NO. I’M DONE LETTING YOU CONTROL MY LIFE.”
“Oh yeah? What are you gonna do about it?”
Rowan stood up, seething with anger. They grabbed their water glass and hurled it into the older man’s face. He shouted, quickly grabbing a napkin to sop up the mess.
Rowan stormed out of the restaurant, leaving the man behind with only a crumpled, dripping napkin.
A few moments later, I slipped out the door, unseen.
The idea that “every scene should have a death” made an impression on me. It made me realize something that I’d always been subconsciously aware of but never thought about in so many words: that change is just a continuum of death and life repeating over and over. It might not always be obvious when something ends or begins, but these little alterations add up until something has changed significantly, whether it’s a person, a situation, a relationship, etc. Everyone and everything is constantly going through little deaths and being born anew.
I want to remember that there can be both outer and inner conflict at the same time. I struggle with making my conflicts emphasize each other rather than compete for attention, so keeping in mind that I can portray multiple conflicts happening at once would be helpful for me. Another thing I should remember is to think about which character has the most to lose or gain from a situation when writing a scene from a certain POV. I often write the same scene from different POVs and this will help me better write each POV character’s unique reaction.
I now better understand how to make a scene more exciting. I used to think that scenes should usually have a slower buildup and only get into the action at the end, but the article suggests starting in the middle of the action and cutting out the boring exposition part. Sensory details and backstory should be integrated into the action, not handled separately.
It’s encouraging that the first step is considering the scene’s purpose. I find that I can easily manipulate or frame details to fit a given purpose and support a thesis statement. I’m not always good at coming up with those details, but I’m great at grasping what the big-picture view ought to be. On the other hand, though, not everything happens for a purpose and I hate throwing out the little things because they don’t fit into the larger narrative. Sometimes stuff just happens.
I don’t get how to fully communicate the feeling of high stakes or how to build up those stakes to increase tension. Everyone says that it’s important to have high stakes to make conflict interesting for the reader, but no one explains any techniques for doing so. I know that some of this is done through the characters’ thoughts and actions, but I don’t think that alone covers it.
The author’s style of writing should fit the purpose of the scene. If the scene is trying to evoke a certain mood, then the tone should match that. The structure of a scene that is meant to reveal character and introduce the setting will probably be longer and more descriptive than a short, fast-paced action scene that is meant to depict the high point of a conflict. If the style of a scene doesn’t support the purpose, then it hinders the reader’s understanding of the idea being conveyed.
“In the Empty”
Snow falls upon the cabin. Each silent flake ever so slowly rewrites the landscape beneath a layer of white, softly reflecting the glow of the setting sun. It piles up against the windows and buries the roof. It blankets the walkway and catches on every corner. A thin tendril of smoke emerges from the chimney, rising to meet the gray clouds above.
Inside the cabin, the warm light of the smoldering fireplace illuminates vintage furniture and old photos. A layer of dust covers everything as if the place hadn’t been touched in years. Only small signs reveal that the place isn’t abandoned. A cup of water, still full, on the little bedside table. A calendar showing the current year. A pair of new slippers resting beside a chair, waiting for their owner to return.
In front of the fireplace, an old woman sits alone on a faded couch, her weathered form perfectly still except for her hands, which swoop and bend like diving birds as they weave a nest of yarn. The sound of her knitting needles clicking together is the only disturbance in the room’s empty hush.
A small pink-and-white baby-sized sock rests on her lap. Its partner, almost completed, hangs from the woman’s nimble needles. As she finishes up the final touches, she cuts the sock free and ties off the end of the yarn. Returning the remainder of the yarn ball to the basket by her feet, she grabs the pair of socks in one hand and pushes herself off the couch with the other.
Unsteadily, she shuffles over to her wooden kitchen table. A single white envelope sits in the table’s center, the only object upon its textured wooden surface.
In the dim room, the pure white of the envelope shines unnaturally. It is as white as the snow outside and appears just as cold.
The old woman looks at the envelope in confusion. Had that been there before?
She sets down the pair of socks and lifts the envelope to her cloudy eyes.
The sun sets below the horizon, and the darkness creeps in. The old, familiar shapes of the room stretch and shift in the deepening shadows.
Still, the envelope remains bright enough to read. It was addressed to her, the handwriting a spidery scrawl much like her own. Her daughter’s name is scrawled across the top-left corner, in the return address.
She looks down at the baby socks on the table. But… these were for her daughter. She was still an infant.
Wasn’t she?
The old woman looks up at the room, seeing the dust as if for the first time.
It had been 30 years.
Outside, the snow falls, light as memories, burying the little cabin ever deeper.
Yellow eyes fly open. Whose? Mine? My scent is wrong. My shape is wrong. Who am I?
Shaking my head, my pelt. Unfamiliar fragments of light and sound whirl around me. I don’t remember how I got here. Claws dig into the earth. Try to recall.
I was running… dancing? Escaping. Fear and fascination. Pulling away, drawing closer. Dizziness.
No moon in the darkness. It should’ve been full. Where did the time go? Shattered and died and buried where no one will ever find—
Wait.
Her scent. She’s nearby. Who? She brought me here. She’s dangerous! She’s the only one who’ll save me. I have to run away.
Limbs feel strange, but my fleeting heart pumps through them and I stagger forward. Movement. Someone else? Or just myself again?
No, it’s—
A burrow nestled amidst roots. A rabbit. Do I know them? I couldn’t possibly. Their whiskers twitch. Mine are too small.
They flee.
So do I.
“People-Watching”
The restaurant was busy, just as I liked it. So many lives swirling around, each with a story to tell. I pulled out my notebook and cast my attention out into the room, scanning for anything of interest to add to my collection.
My gaze landed upon the two people at the table across from mine. Their forms were silhouetted against the window, the darkness outside causing their reflections to appear bold and clear in the glass.
The older one bore some resemblance to the younger one, and I thought they must have been related—the elder could have been the father or uncle, maybe. He wore a stiff brown jacket over a white buttoned shirt. His hair was dark gray, starting to thin in the back. The younger person wore a purple-and-gray T-shirt. Their hair was black with dyed pink and blue highlights.
They moved stiffly, and though they sat across from each other, they seemed to look everywhere else but at the person in front of them as if it would’ve brought physical discomfort to do so.
I made a quick sketch in my notebook, paying extra attention to their scowling faces. I couldn’t help but wonder what they were so upset about. The older man opened his mouth to say something, and I strained to hear over the low roar of all the voices in the room.
“You know, back in my day—” the older person begins.
“OH, DON’T YOU START WITH THAT!” the younger person erupts, pounding a fist on the table. “We’re not going over this AGAIN.”
I guess I didn’t need to worry about being able to eavesdrop. A good half of the restaurant glanced at them when they heard the shout.
“Keep your voice down, Rowan,” the older man growled.
“Why? You embarrassed?”
“This is a private conversation.”
“Oh, like my emails were private? Like my texts were private?” The younger person—Rowan—pointed accusingly at their companion.
“That’s different, and you know it. I—”
A waitress arrived, bringing them their drinks and temporarily halting their argument. Rowan snatched up their glass of water, taking a small sip and then holding it just below their face.
The older man glanced sideways at the younger person, his face briefly contorting into a sneer. Once the waitress was safely out of earshot, he continued. “The truth is, you’re letting your emotions get the best of you, boy.”
“Don’t call me ‘boy.’”
“Oh, I’ll call it like it is. And all I see is a deluded boy about to throw away his one chance at being successful like his old man.”
“I am NOT you; I will NEVER be you.” Rowan slammed their glass of water down on the table, gesturing dramatically.
By now, I was so intrigued that my baked potato had begun to grow cold with neglect. Still, I watched them from the corner of my eye.
“Then you’re not getting any assistance from me.”
“I don’t need your assistance! I just need your permission, your name on the stupid paper. Then you never have to hear from me again.”
“No. This is madness. I’m not letting you do this. You’re getting a decent job, and that’s FINAL.”
“NO. I’M DONE LETTING YOU CONTROL MY LIFE.”
“Oh yeah? What are you gonna do about it?”
Rowan stood up, seething with anger. They grabbed their water glass and hurled it into the older man’s face. He shouted, quickly grabbing a napkin to sop up the mess.
Rowan stormed out of the restaurant, leaving the man behind with only a crumpled, dripping napkin.
A few moments later, I slipped out the door, unseen.
The idea that “every scene should have a death” made an impression on me. It made me realize something that I’d always been subconsciously aware of but never thought about in so many words: that change is just a continuum of death and life repeating over and over. It might not always be obvious when something ends or begins, but these little alterations add up until something has changed significantly, whether it’s a person, a situation, a relationship, etc. Everyone and everything is constantly going through little deaths and being born anew.
I want to remember that there can be both outer and inner conflict at the same time. I struggle with making my conflicts emphasize each other rather than compete for attention, so keeping in mind that I can portray multiple conflicts happening at once would be helpful for me. Another thing I should remember is to think about which character has the most to lose or gain from a situation when writing a scene from a certain POV. I often write the same scene from different POVs and this will help me better write each POV character’s unique reaction.
I now better understand how to make a scene more exciting. I used to think that scenes should usually have a slower buildup and only get into the action at the end, but the article suggests starting in the middle of the action and cutting out the boring exposition part. Sensory details and backstory should be integrated into the action, not handled separately.
It’s encouraging that the first step is considering the scene’s purpose. I find that I can easily manipulate or frame details to fit a given purpose and support a thesis statement. I’m not always good at coming up with those details, but I’m great at grasping what the big-picture view ought to be. On the other hand, though, not everything happens for a purpose and I hate throwing out the little things because they don’t fit into the larger narrative. Sometimes stuff just happens.
I don’t get how to fully communicate the feeling of high stakes or how to build up those stakes to increase tension. Everyone says that it’s important to have high stakes to make conflict interesting for the reader, but no one explains any techniques for doing so. I know that some of this is done through the characters’ thoughts and actions, but I don’t think that alone covers it.
The author’s style of writing should fit the purpose of the scene. If the scene is trying to evoke a certain mood, then the tone should match that. The structure of a scene that is meant to reveal character and introduce the setting will probably be longer and more descriptive than a short, fast-paced action scene that is meant to depict the high point of a conflict. If the style of a scene doesn’t support the purpose, then it hinders the reader’s understanding of the idea being conveyed.
“In the Empty”
Snow falls upon the cabin. Each silent flake ever so slowly rewrites the landscape beneath a layer of white, softly reflecting the glow of the setting sun. It piles up against the windows and buries the roof. It blankets the walkway and catches on every corner. A thin tendril of smoke emerges from the chimney, rising to meet the gray clouds above.
Inside the cabin, the warm light of the smoldering fireplace illuminates vintage furniture and old photos. A layer of dust covers everything as if the place hadn’t been touched in years. Only small signs reveal that the place isn’t abandoned. A cup of water, still full, on the little bedside table. A calendar showing the current year. A pair of new slippers resting beside a chair, waiting for their owner to return.
In front of the fireplace, an old woman sits alone on a faded couch, her weathered form perfectly still except for her hands, which swoop and bend like diving birds as they weave a nest of yarn. The sound of her knitting needles clicking together is the only disturbance in the room’s empty hush.
A small pink-and-white baby-sized sock rests on her lap. Its partner, almost completed, hangs from the woman’s nimble needles. As she finishes up the final touches, she cuts the sock free and ties off the end of the yarn. Returning the remainder of the yarn ball to the basket by her feet, she grabs the pair of socks in one hand and pushes herself off the couch with the other.
Unsteadily, she shuffles over to her wooden kitchen table. A single white envelope sits in the table’s center, the only object upon its textured wooden surface.
In the dim room, the pure white of the envelope shines unnaturally. It is as white as the snow outside and appears just as cold.
The old woman looks at the envelope in confusion. Had that been there before?
She sets down the pair of socks and lifts the envelope to her cloudy eyes.
The sun sets below the horizon, and the darkness creeps in. The old, familiar shapes of the room stretch and shift in the deepening shadows.
Still, the envelope remains bright enough to read. It was addressed to her, the handwriting a spidery scrawl much like her own. Her daughter’s name is scrawled across the top-left corner, in the return address.
She looks down at the baby socks on the table. But… these were for her daughter. She was still an infant.
Wasn’t she?
The old woman looks up at the room, seeing the dust as if for the first time.
It had been 30 years.
Outside, the snow falls, light as memories, burying the little cabin ever deeper.
- -WildClan-
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Not for SWC but this is the most convenient place to put it~
For @Strawberry-Lemon
As a current senior in high school, I've definitely been in that conundrum- My school doesn't force students to pick one track or the other, so I've taken a mix of AP classes and College Prep (CP; I assume it's the same as the Early College Program for you) classes. I'm also categorized as “academically gifted,” having been through GATE in elementary school, and I have achieved all A's throughout high school, except for one B in an art class. However, I also struggle a lot with burnout, procrastination, and general dissatisfaction/frustration with the school system. So I was pretty much in the same boat as you when I started high school.
AP is certainly a lot harder but way more interesting, rewarding, and engaging than CP. AP classes are more fast-paced, go more in-depth, and sometimes cover more topics than their CP counterparts. In my experience, most AP students, and often the teachers, too, are all far more enthusiastic about the class's subject than the CP students/teachers, so you'll be more likely to have thoughtful, passionate discussions in an AP class. The homework load varies a ton by subject and teacher, so I can't really say how AP and CP compare in that respect, but the classwork for CP classes usually has more worksheets, while AP has more note-taking and extension problems. There's an element of memorization in both, but AP goes beyond by wanting you to apply the things you've memorized to novel situations.
I don't know what AP subjects are offered at your school, but I'd recommend that if they're mostly subjects you're not passionate about, then don't take the AP classes. I took Honors English during my freshman and sophomore years in preparation for junior-year AP English, but having gotten a taste of it, I decided English just wasn't a subject I cared about that much, at least not the novel analysis stuff, which was a significant portion of the course. So, I dropped down to CP English. It was way easier, with less work and simpler tests, and I don't regret it, but there was a definite lack of challenge, my classmates weren't enthusiastic about writing like I was, and I didn't feel that I learned much. But I had SWC to provide a passionate writers' community and help me improve my writing, so I didn't mind too much.
I also have never taken any AP History classes, since that's another subject I'm not that into. However, I've heard from others that they're a lot of work, including a lot of projects, and you have to memorize a lot of information for the tests.
The AP classes I have taken are AP Calculus, AP Physics, and AP Biology, since math and science are my favorite subjects. I took AP Calc and Phys last year, my junior year, and they were probably the hardest classes I've ever taken. I had a love/hate relationship with Calculus. I really liked learning the math and did very well on the tests, but I simply couldn't keep up with the pace of the class. There was SO. MUCH. HOMEWORK. I even had to come back after school to finish the tests sometimes because I worked more slowly than everyone else somehow. I was always falling behind, and I felt out of place there. It was a high-stress, high-reward class- I can't deny that while it felt great every time I worked out a really challenging problem, it was also a major factor in the severe burnout I had developed by the end of my junior year. Looking back now, I don't know if it was worth it. I do plan on giving Calculus another chance in college, though; I really do love math. Maybe by then, I'll be better prepared for it. Physics, on the other hand, might be the best class I've ever taken. It had all the awesome equations, which I didn't even have to memorize since we got a notecard on tests, and though it was super difficult, it was less frustrating-difficult and more fun-difficult. I was good at it, too- possibly the best in the class, since I broke the curve on tests multiple times. There were a lot of hands-on activities and demonstrations: firing projectiles across the room, going outside and spinning in circles to simulate rotational movement, constructing pendulums… It was engaging and challenging without feeling overwhelming.
AP Bio is a class I'm currently taking. After the near-breakdown I had at the end of my junior year, I decided to limit myself to just one AP class. I took CP Bio my freshman year and wanted to learn more in-depth about the subject. So far, I've been pleasantly surprised with the more moderate difficulty of the class compared to my previous AP classes. I'm learning a lot and enjoying doing so. There is homework almost every night, but it actually isn't too bad, and often it can even be finished in class.
As for the AP test, it isn't as bad as everyone seems to want you to believe. It's set up in a terrifying way, but if you did fine on the in-class tests that year and don't have trouble working under pressure or finishing problems quickly, you'll pass. AP classes spend a bunch of time reviewing and studying before the test date to make sure you're prepared. I got a 4 on both my Calc and Phys AP tests last year, and I probably would've gotten a 5 on the Physics one if I hadn't run out of time to do all the problems. Unfortunately, the test does cost money because you can get college credit if you pass, though it's less money than you'd have to spend if you took the college course, so it's still worth it if you plan on going to college.
In summary, it really comes down to your priorities. If you have the energy, time, and desire to put the necessary amount of effort into AP classes, you should take them. The challenge is truly rewarding if you love learning and conquering difficult subjects, and the potential to earn college credit is valuable. However, if you get overwhelmed easily, prefer to put your full focus on extracurricular activities, and/or simply aren't passionate about the AP subjects your school offers, then don't do it. You should look into exactly how the two pathways work, since it might be possible to do a little of both instead of all-or-nothing. Taking ALL AP classes seems like it would be way too much to handle, so I can't imagine they'd structure their school system like that. Besides, you have to make room for electives, which aren't typically AP. If possible, try to take only the AP classes that you are personally interested in and take Early College classes for the rest. The important thing is to know your limits and strengths/weaknesses, choose what's important to you, and plan to balance your efforts accordingly.
Good luck with high school :'DD
For @Strawberry-Lemon
As a current senior in high school, I've definitely been in that conundrum- My school doesn't force students to pick one track or the other, so I've taken a mix of AP classes and College Prep (CP; I assume it's the same as the Early College Program for you) classes. I'm also categorized as “academically gifted,” having been through GATE in elementary school, and I have achieved all A's throughout high school, except for one B in an art class. However, I also struggle a lot with burnout, procrastination, and general dissatisfaction/frustration with the school system. So I was pretty much in the same boat as you when I started high school.
AP is certainly a lot harder but way more interesting, rewarding, and engaging than CP. AP classes are more fast-paced, go more in-depth, and sometimes cover more topics than their CP counterparts. In my experience, most AP students, and often the teachers, too, are all far more enthusiastic about the class's subject than the CP students/teachers, so you'll be more likely to have thoughtful, passionate discussions in an AP class. The homework load varies a ton by subject and teacher, so I can't really say how AP and CP compare in that respect, but the classwork for CP classes usually has more worksheets, while AP has more note-taking and extension problems. There's an element of memorization in both, but AP goes beyond by wanting you to apply the things you've memorized to novel situations.
I don't know what AP subjects are offered at your school, but I'd recommend that if they're mostly subjects you're not passionate about, then don't take the AP classes. I took Honors English during my freshman and sophomore years in preparation for junior-year AP English, but having gotten a taste of it, I decided English just wasn't a subject I cared about that much, at least not the novel analysis stuff, which was a significant portion of the course. So, I dropped down to CP English. It was way easier, with less work and simpler tests, and I don't regret it, but there was a definite lack of challenge, my classmates weren't enthusiastic about writing like I was, and I didn't feel that I learned much. But I had SWC to provide a passionate writers' community and help me improve my writing, so I didn't mind too much.
I also have never taken any AP History classes, since that's another subject I'm not that into. However, I've heard from others that they're a lot of work, including a lot of projects, and you have to memorize a lot of information for the tests.
The AP classes I have taken are AP Calculus, AP Physics, and AP Biology, since math and science are my favorite subjects. I took AP Calc and Phys last year, my junior year, and they were probably the hardest classes I've ever taken. I had a love/hate relationship with Calculus. I really liked learning the math and did very well on the tests, but I simply couldn't keep up with the pace of the class. There was SO. MUCH. HOMEWORK. I even had to come back after school to finish the tests sometimes because I worked more slowly than everyone else somehow. I was always falling behind, and I felt out of place there. It was a high-stress, high-reward class- I can't deny that while it felt great every time I worked out a really challenging problem, it was also a major factor in the severe burnout I had developed by the end of my junior year. Looking back now, I don't know if it was worth it. I do plan on giving Calculus another chance in college, though; I really do love math. Maybe by then, I'll be better prepared for it. Physics, on the other hand, might be the best class I've ever taken. It had all the awesome equations, which I didn't even have to memorize since we got a notecard on tests, and though it was super difficult, it was less frustrating-difficult and more fun-difficult. I was good at it, too- possibly the best in the class, since I broke the curve on tests multiple times. There were a lot of hands-on activities and demonstrations: firing projectiles across the room, going outside and spinning in circles to simulate rotational movement, constructing pendulums… It was engaging and challenging without feeling overwhelming.
AP Bio is a class I'm currently taking. After the near-breakdown I had at the end of my junior year, I decided to limit myself to just one AP class. I took CP Bio my freshman year and wanted to learn more in-depth about the subject. So far, I've been pleasantly surprised with the more moderate difficulty of the class compared to my previous AP classes. I'm learning a lot and enjoying doing so. There is homework almost every night, but it actually isn't too bad, and often it can even be finished in class.
As for the AP test, it isn't as bad as everyone seems to want you to believe. It's set up in a terrifying way, but if you did fine on the in-class tests that year and don't have trouble working under pressure or finishing problems quickly, you'll pass. AP classes spend a bunch of time reviewing and studying before the test date to make sure you're prepared. I got a 4 on both my Calc and Phys AP tests last year, and I probably would've gotten a 5 on the Physics one if I hadn't run out of time to do all the problems. Unfortunately, the test does cost money because you can get college credit if you pass, though it's less money than you'd have to spend if you took the college course, so it's still worth it if you plan on going to college.
In summary, it really comes down to your priorities. If you have the energy, time, and desire to put the necessary amount of effort into AP classes, you should take them. The challenge is truly rewarding if you love learning and conquering difficult subjects, and the potential to earn college credit is valuable. However, if you get overwhelmed easily, prefer to put your full focus on extracurricular activities, and/or simply aren't passionate about the AP subjects your school offers, then don't do it. You should look into exactly how the two pathways work, since it might be possible to do a little of both instead of all-or-nothing. Taking ALL AP classes seems like it would be way too much to handle, so I can't imagine they'd structure their school system like that. Besides, you have to make room for electives, which aren't typically AP. If possible, try to take only the AP classes that you are personally interested in and take Early College classes for the rest. The important thing is to know your limits and strengths/weaknesses, choose what's important to you, and plan to balance your efforts accordingly.
Good luck with high school :'DD
- -Choi-Sooeun-
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Scratcher
83 posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
PROPERTY OF SPOST HECULATION >:DD
(Credits are due, of course, to the SWC records <3)
SWC March 2023
Adventure: theleapingleopard || lvnarlys, ForestPanther
Bizarro Fiction (Bi-Fi): gooseful || cocomelon45, -vanillamochabear-
Dystopian Dynasty: MoonlitSeas || TheBibliophile7 || SoC cabin || Moonlit, Reese
Fanfiction: strange_skies || dsjlin, Violet–
Fantasy: opheliio || Rey_venclaw, starr-light
Folklore: –tranquility || Sandy-Dunes, Piper_Camps
Historical Fiction (Hi-Fi): zparkly || cb2jkl, -waveii
Horror Rebellion: Eeveedonut || Spire-, Lesixiq-, MouseLoverr || ‘Rebellion’ || Ris, Mouse
Mystery: Willow_wonderful || xc-egg, iinspirqtion
Nonfiction (Non-Fi) Fossil Dig: -NightGlow- || 129waterfall, essayist || Alana (Current host)
Poetry Coffeehouse: Whirlygig || -limeade, IvyCreations
Realistic Fiction (Real-Fi, The Cabin that Will Not Win): Bellevue91 || fluffyjujunicorn, -Raye-, bloofs
Science Fiction (Sci-Fi): RLove10 || Xx_Hermione_xX, Flowerelf371
Hadescript: Luna-Lovegood-LOL || -redredrobin-, Stariqe || Luna (Leaving host), Robin (Current host), Starr (gHost)
Thriller Escape Rooms: Polarbear_17 || mossflower29, pages-of-ink || Zai (gHonorary), Moss (Current host)
(Credits are due, of course, to the SWC records <3)
SWC March 2023
Adventure: theleapingleopard || lvnarlys, ForestPanther
Bizarro Fiction (Bi-Fi): gooseful || cocomelon45, -vanillamochabear-
Dystopian Dynasty: MoonlitSeas || TheBibliophile7 || SoC cabin || Moonlit, Reese
Fanfiction: strange_skies || dsjlin, Violet–
Fantasy: opheliio || Rey_venclaw, starr-light
Folklore: –tranquility || Sandy-Dunes, Piper_Camps
Historical Fiction (Hi-Fi): zparkly || cb2jkl, -waveii
Horror Rebellion: Eeveedonut || Spire-, Lesixiq-, MouseLoverr || ‘Rebellion’ || Ris, Mouse
Mystery: Willow_wonderful || xc-egg, iinspirqtion
Nonfiction (Non-Fi) Fossil Dig: -NightGlow- || 129waterfall, essayist || Alana (Current host)
Poetry Coffeehouse: Whirlygig || -limeade, IvyCreations
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Science Fiction (Sci-Fi): RLove10 || Xx_Hermione_xX, Flowerelf371
Hadescript: Luna-Lovegood-LOL || -redredrobin-, Stariqe || Luna (Leaving host), Robin (Current host), Starr (gHost)
Thriller Escape Rooms: Polarbear_17 || mossflower29, pages-of-ink || Zai (gHonorary), Moss (Current host)
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swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
❄Sarah's March 2025 SWC app .. text ver. .. 1577 words (including excerpt)❄
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☕︎︎ About me:
Hello, I’m Sarah and my pronouns are she/her. I live in the great lands of PST! I’m your average teen that enjoys various hobbies like drawing, reading, writing, baking, and sports (soccer and volleyball!). My favorite books/series are HP, KOTLC, Six of Crows, Shadow & bone, and The Cruel Prince. I love writing so much, as you could probably tellI write mostly Fantasy, dystopian or mystery, though I have yet to actually complete a story of mine haha. I listen to music a lot, and my playlist is pretty much all Enhypen. Some of my favourite songs are Fatal Trouble, Shout out, Moonstruck and Bite me. I happen to be a bit (more like a lot)of a couch potato on weekends, and I spend that time watching and re watching shows. I’m a big Avatar the Last Airbender and How to train your dragon fan. I’ve watched both a /ton/ and know every episode by heart. But when I do manage to get outside for some fresh air, I like to go on walks around my neighborhood. My favourite season to go on walks in is Autumn, because the falling leaves makes everything look so pretty. I go on hikes a lot, and even when it’s chilly, the colorful leaves make it all better. (and hot cocoa)
☕︎︎ Previous Participation:
I’ve participated in SWC for five sessions now. I was a first a camper in Dystopian, then a co-leader in non-fi (tctwnw), fairy tales, horror, and poetry. I’ve also co-led in other camps on Scratch, JWC, SRC, and SNC. I’ve been writing since I was little, starting with short silly stories and drawings to go along with them in my Hilroy notebooks. I still write a ton, and often get up in the middle of the night to jot down ideas for a story so I don’t forget it the next day. Off of Scratch, I was president of my student council, and I also volunteered at my local temple.
☕︎︎ Cabin Preferences:
My top cabin preferences would be Fantasy, Sci-fi, or Mystery, in no particular order. I would prefer not to lead Poetry, non-fi, fairy tales or horror, because I’ve already been apart of them before. As for tctwnw, I’d rather not (co)lead it, since the I really enjoy the competitive aspect of SWC
Here are my theme ideas for these three genres!
Starting with Fantasy, I’m a huge Harry Potter fan, and I’m currently re reading the series (again..)! I would love to have a Hogwarts themed cabin, where campers would be students at hogwarts, apart of a quidditch tournament against another magic school, Durmstrang. Campers will have a shot at winning the school quidditch tournament cup.
For Sci-fi, my theme idea is where the world gets taken over by artificial intelligence. Created to once make the world a better place, the machines have gone rogue with a mind of their own. Campers are apart of a team of agents that are on a mission to shut them all down.
For Mystery, the cabin would be a game of clue. Campers would achieve clues every few days by writing, and must find out the details about who the culprit is, and which room it happened in, before it’s too late. It would be an adaptation of the game, with it’s elements, but with different kinds of clues.
☕︎︎ Time dedication:
I plan to dedicate 1-2 hours a day to SWC, usually around 7-9pm. Unless something unexpected appears, this will be the case for the start of planning to the end of the session. I don’t have any extra curricular activities during during March, so I’ll have a good amount of time on my hands. There will be two days during the session that I won’t be active, since it’ll be my birthday!
☕︎︎ Time management:
Starting off strong with my skills when it comes to time management:
I’m a multitasker! I’ve always worked this way, and I find it easier. I’m able to finish things faster when I work on several at once. I’m still able to switch between tasks well that I can pay enough attention to each one, and complete it the best I can, without putting half and half of my energy into two different things. I don’t procrastinate. I’ve certainly struggled with this in the past, but this is one of the things I’ve managed to turn into a skill, rather than a shortcoming. I always start on things as soon as I’m able to, and don’t leave it to the last minute. This gives me more than enough time to complete anything before given deadlines, and time to revise and reread.
For my shortcomings:
I’m a very big perfectionist when doing anything at all. I pour a ton of time into fixing little bits that I often forget about completing the actual project first.
I also have some trouble accounting for the amount of time I’ll need for each thing, and sometimes accidentally take on more than I have the time for.
☕︎︎ Collaboration:
Collaboration is one of my strong suits, and I love to work with others. I always prefer to do group projects rather than individual ones. I have good communication skills, and I can easily ask questions to make sure we’re all on the same page. I’m good at listening and considering other peoples ideas, as well as adding onto it with some of my own. I’m very flexible when it comes to collaboration, and I’m easily able to fix my plans to go along with changes, along with being open minded. As for weaknesses, I’m a bit of a micro manager when working with others, because I always try to make everything perfect. Perfectionism is one problem that regularly shows up for me, but I’m learning to trust whoever I’m working with.
☕︎︎ One quality:
The quality I think is important and I embody is activity. It’s something I’ve said in every other application of mine. Activity creates a lively environment with an interactive experience. Interactive story lines in cabins are always my favorite, and it takes a lot of activity to be able to keep a story moving, and to motivate campers to participate. Active cabins are always fun and memorable. Leaders that are active are also able to quickly adapt to problems along the way, such as slow progress with the story lines. I’ve had a session where we missed a whole event because of inactivity among leaders and campers, which led to the last event getting dragged on too long. So it’s important for leaders to be active enough.
☕︎︎ Cabin Atmosphere:
An interactive cabin with an outgoing atmosphere where campers can work together to reach personal writing goals as well as contributing to the story line
154 characters
☕︎︎ Excerpt:
Taryn draws in a sharp gasp, and before she’s able to say anything, Helen pins her back with a dagger.
“Finally,” Helen half laughs. “Enough of these games! Someone needs to stand up to you.”
Gasping for air when Helen loosened the grip on her throat, Taryn tried to release herself from the bonds. “I haven’t done anything!” She shouted, desperately.
“There you go again! Always with the lies, and the fake personality. Let it out Taryn, we know what you are.” Helen brandished her dagger around in the air.
“You don’t understand! I didn’t mean to!” Taryn begged, thrashing at the ground.
“Oh no, YOU don’t understand!” Helen shouted back, bringing her dagger back near Taryn’s throat. “I have the witch in ropes, with a dagger in my hand. What will the world think of you?”
Taryn let out a sob, and tried to pull herself away from the blade. “Please, don’t do this! You’re not-” her voice softened. A smile spread across her face. “You’re not as foolish as you seem.” It was Taryn’s turn to laugh. “The world will think nothing of me because after today I will return back and they will never remember Taryn. They will also mourn Helen for she will have ended her own life in a cave.”
Helen was taken aback, shock clear on her pale face. She whipped the end of her dagger quickly towards Taryn, her eyes wide.
Taryn rolled her eyes. “No use keeping up this act. No one’s here to witness it anyways.” She scoffed, ripping apart the bonds on her wrist with one gentle flick of her hand. “Witches cannot be tied in ropes.” She whispered to Helen, who seemed to have lost her words. “Goodbye, Helen. Very sorry.” With one clean slash, Helen’s shouts were cut short. “Not,” Taryn finished.
☕︎︎ Checkboxes:
Yes, I will be available to add points in the main cabin throughout camp.
No, I’m unable to share a promotional project for SWC.
B. I fully understand and will be able to complete all the responsibilities of a (co)leader!
C. In the event that a (co)leader in my cabin goes inactive, I would ask the hosts what we could do, which could be offering another co, continuing on with the session, or waiting to make sure if they’ll come back. I would then work with my (co)leaders to split the stuff the inactive leader left, to make sure the cabin still goes by smoothly. If I were to go inactive, I would notify hosts and (co)leaders before leaving, and let them know how long I would be gone for. I don’t think I’ll be going inactive for a long period of time , but if something unexpected happens to pop up, I’m sure we’ll be able to work through it.
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Last edited by Froggola (Jan. 16, 2025 04:51:42)

I wish you the best! <3
I write mostly Fantasy, dystopian or mystery, though I have yet to actually complete a story of mine haha. I listen to music a lot, and my playlist is pretty much all Enhypen. Some of my favourite songs are Fatal Trouble, Shout out, Moonstruck and Bite me. I happen to be a bit (more like a lot)of a couch potato on weekends, and I spend that time watching and re watching shows. I’m a big Avatar the Last Airbender and How to train your dragon fan. I’ve watched both a /ton/ and know every episode by heart. But when I do manage to get outside for some fresh air, I like to go on walks around my neighborhood. My favourite season to go on walks in is Autumn, because the falling leaves makes everything look so pretty. I go on hikes a lot, and even when it’s chilly, the colorful leaves make it all better. (and hot cocoa)