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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
“You wake up in a museum, but it's dusty and the doors are locked, and you realise you've been shut in. The museum has been considered a bit of a haunted house by the citizens of your town. You look through all the displays, hoping to find a key or something to get out of here.”
something.
there had to be something here.
at least a bobby pin someone's left, hidden in the shadows between display cases. i scanned the glass boxes of the jurassic era, artifacts from world war two, even the gift shop. the window's light was dying. it was surely after five o-clock, when the museum closed.
and what happened after that? the owners were an aging couple who didn't know a terribly convincing amount about the things that rusted here.
nobody really knew.
and i was stuck.
truth be told, i didn't even know how i'd gotten here. i had simply slept in that afternoon; the clock had read half-past two when its ticking had lulled me to sleep. somehow, i'd ended up in this place, right when the great annoying bells rang to tell the visitors to get out. apparently, i'd found out what happened if you didn't. they didn't do anything to you, just made you stay here without a way to leave. it was somehow worse than the alternative.
i scan the display cases again. i pass the brachiosaurus, the stegosaurus, the few velociraptor bones they happen to have.
i scan the medals again, looking for something between the silver and gold. a key, maybe? i glanced around the floor, the corners of the room where lost things usually ended up, the worn lost property bucket.
nothing.
literally nothing.
there was a rickety old staircase at the back, and supposedly the door wasn't locked, but i did not want to face any more than i needed to in here. the place was creepy enough without the creak of stairs that may not have been trodden on in years. besides, the sun was dipping under the window, and i didn't want to be here at night.
it seemed i had no choice, though.
i watched with dread as my last hope slid beneath the horizon. i wanted to scream, no matter how stupid it was.
night's inky depths overcame the sky.
the monsters stirred.
336 words
something.
there had to be something here.
at least a bobby pin someone's left, hidden in the shadows between display cases. i scanned the glass boxes of the jurassic era, artifacts from world war two, even the gift shop. the window's light was dying. it was surely after five o-clock, when the museum closed.
and what happened after that? the owners were an aging couple who didn't know a terribly convincing amount about the things that rusted here.
nobody really knew.
and i was stuck.
truth be told, i didn't even know how i'd gotten here. i had simply slept in that afternoon; the clock had read half-past two when its ticking had lulled me to sleep. somehow, i'd ended up in this place, right when the great annoying bells rang to tell the visitors to get out. apparently, i'd found out what happened if you didn't. they didn't do anything to you, just made you stay here without a way to leave. it was somehow worse than the alternative.
i scan the display cases again. i pass the brachiosaurus, the stegosaurus, the few velociraptor bones they happen to have.
i scan the medals again, looking for something between the silver and gold. a key, maybe? i glanced around the floor, the corners of the room where lost things usually ended up, the worn lost property bucket.
nothing.
literally nothing.
there was a rickety old staircase at the back, and supposedly the door wasn't locked, but i did not want to face any more than i needed to in here. the place was creepy enough without the creak of stairs that may not have been trodden on in years. besides, the sun was dipping under the window, and i didn't want to be here at night.
it seemed i had no choice, though.
i watched with dread as my last hope slid beneath the horizon. i wanted to scream, no matter how stupid it was.
night's inky depths overcame the sky.
the monsters stirred.
336 words
- pugusialove
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Please, let me know,
If you wanna eat ice cream
While hiding from snow.
Please, let me know,
If you'd like to make puppets
And put on a weird show
Tell me when
You want to make a top hat
For your pen
Tell me when
You want to sing “happy birthday”
As many times as you can
Tell me if you want to pretend we're hello kitty
Or take a photo with every statue in our city
Or finger paint a copy of Mona Lisa
Or try to put hot chocolate in the freezer
Please, tell me if you'd like
To throw all our pillows together
And “pretend” we're on a hike
Please, tell me if you'd like
To find the ghost that lurks in the shadows
And name him Mike
Find me if you want
To try every single
Type of croissant
Find me if you want
To grab our trail mix
And go on a squirrel hunt
Tell me if you want to jump in puddles
Or spend the day making fanart of Waddles
Or make a kingdom out of lego bricks
Or learn some very powerful magic tricks
But if you want to be boring
If you want to be basic
If you want to be “not childish”
Then don't tell me anything.
I have places to be and toys to buy
If you wanna eat ice cream
While hiding from snow.
Please, let me know,
If you'd like to make puppets
And put on a weird show
Tell me when
You want to make a top hat
For your pen
Tell me when
You want to sing “happy birthday”
As many times as you can
Tell me if you want to pretend we're hello kitty
Or take a photo with every statue in our city
Or finger paint a copy of Mona Lisa
Or try to put hot chocolate in the freezer
Please, tell me if you'd like
To throw all our pillows together
And “pretend” we're on a hike
Please, tell me if you'd like
To find the ghost that lurks in the shadows
And name him Mike
Find me if you want
To try every single
Type of croissant
Find me if you want
To grab our trail mix
And go on a squirrel hunt
Tell me if you want to jump in puddles
Or spend the day making fanart of Waddles
Or make a kingdom out of lego bricks
Or learn some very powerful magic tricks
But if you want to be boring
If you want to be basic
If you want to be “not childish”
Then don't tell me anything.
I have places to be and toys to buy
Last edited by pugusialove (Nov. 20, 2024 17:56:12)
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
TRIGGER WARNING: THIS PIECE INCLUDES A PLANE CRASH AND MENTIONS OF DEATH AND IS GENERALLY DEPRESSING.Daily 20 ~ Choose Your Own Adventure Prompt ~ 1639 Words
I used SongBirdCat_’s prompt and chose option 3.
You were walking home from after a long day of work. As you were walking down the bustling streets, there was a loud boom sound. When you looked into the direction of the sound, you see a giant smoke cloud that was likely from a bomb. Even if it is not a bomb, it still hit the city. People were screaming, running in the opposite direction of the sound.
You suddenly stop, watching more and more people run. I guess you may not be able to go home. Someone screamed, telling you to run. What do you do? 1) Listen to the person and run off. 2) Stand still, still watching more. 3) Walk towards the affected area, curious of what happened.
Alaina shook her head. She’d just worked her usual twelve hour shift, and was heading towards the train station, hoping to start heading home. It had been a long day, but a fulfilling day.
As she began pulling out her card, she heard a loud boom! noise that sent people running. Taking a moment to calm herself, she put her card back in her wallet, and looked towards the sound.
Above her, a giant smoke cloud filled the air, covering the area with smoke. It was too large to be a house fire - Alaina had seen her fair share of those to know it wasn’t the simple variety - and it couldn’t be an industrial explosion either; the smoke cloud was again, too small.
Could it be a plane? Alaina wondered. Could it possibly be a bomb? Even if it wasn’t, it had still hit the city and people still needed her help.
A plane was the more likely option. She’d seen the footage of the devastation wrought on September 11, and from her limited knowledge of aviation fires, she knew it burnt quickly, and was hard to put out. It could still be a bomb, but as far as she knew, there was no ongoing war here.
“Run!” Alaina heard someone scream as they ran past her.
Ohhhh, no. Alaina was not going to run. Adelaide had a habit of worrying far, far, far too much and so did Kallie, to a certain extent. They’d both rambled on to Alaina about their frustration with emergency response in disaster situations, and well, she’d heard more about the failures of disaster response than she’d like. Also, she had a legal “duty to help” as a trained medical professional, and while yes, she could technically not help, Adelaide would verbally eviscerate her next time she saw Alaina. So much for going home and sleeping after the night shift, she guessed.
Running towards the sound, Alaina arrived on scene to find exactly what she expected. She was expecting death and destruction either way, but she was glad to see no sign of a bomb.
Instead, there were aircraft parts, strewn all over the scene. A building - thankfully not a tall one - was in flames, as well as burning bits of wreckage. She’d never seen destruction of this scale before.
Alaina’s eyes searched the scene for any emergency workers with medical equipment. Surely she couldn’t be the first person on scene? She could hear sirens in the distance, sure, but there was no-one here to help her.
Finally, she saw a police car turn up. Walking up, she greeted the two officers.
“Hey,” Alaina said. “My name’s Alaina, I’m a paramedic, and I’m currently off-duty. But I am in uniform. Shift ended maybe half an hour ago? I don’t know what the protocol is for me as someone who’s not currently on duty, and uh-“
One of the police officers stopped her. “Alright, you can stop there.” He said. “You should probably wait for an ambulance to turn up and talk to those guys.”
“But can you get a message through to dispatch?” Alaina asked. “It could take ages,”
Just then, another set of sirens sharply cut out. It was just what she was looking for - another ambulance.
“Oh- uh, thank you for your help,” Alaina said awkwardly, before approaching the ambulance.
Recognising Michaela and Samantha from her recent mornings sitting and waiting for Kallie to turn up (because of the train strikes), she waited for them to get out.
“Alaina, don’t you work nights?” Michaela asked.
“Yeah, I did. I just finished my shift. But then this happened, and… well.” Alaina laughed lightly, hoping to humour the situation. “Can I ride along?”
“Sure,” Samantha said. “As long as you’re not pulling a double.”
“I would never pull a double shift,” Alaina snipped back. “Renée has a problem with pulling doubles, though.”
Samantha laughed. “Okay. Sure. Well, we’re waiting for others to turn up, so we should probably start triaging now.”
“Do you have ETA of the next crew?” Alaina asked, opening the back doors and finding a place to put her bag so she wasn’t constricted by it. She also took off her light waterproof coat, revealing her uniform shirt hidden underneath.
“Probably a few minutes, with this situation,” Samantha replied. “It shouldn’t take long.”
“Alright,” Alaina replied, grabbing some packs from the back of the ambulance. It was a marginally different layout, because Michaela and Samantha worked intensive care, and Alaina had only had one roster where she was partnered with Renée, and actually worked in an intensive care ambulance.
Jumping out, she looked at Michaela and Samantha. “I think I have the right bags,” she said.
Michaela looked at it. “Yep.”
“The question now is what isn’t on fire,” Samantha said, offhandedly.
“That’s why we have the fire department,” Michaela replied.
“Well, we can’t help them if they’re dead, right?” Alaina commented. “But also we can’t help them if we’re going to get burned anyways.”
As the three of them stood, pacing and searching for bits of wreckage they could safely reach, Alaina heard a call for help.
“Did you hear that?” Alaina asked.
Samantha and Michaela both nodded in acknowledgement.
“Any idea where it’s coming from?” Samantha asked.
“There!” Michaela shouted, spotting the front fuselage of the plane that seemed to have extinguished itself of flames. The outside was clearly scorched and burnt, but it seemed safe enough to approach.
The three of them made their way through the rubble and into the shattered piece of fuselage, finding a few rows of people still conscious and in agony.
“Alaina, work your way front to back, Michaela work your way back to front, and leave anyone who isn’t breathing.” Samantha said. “Mass casualty protocol. Prioritise those who can be saved.”
Alaina nodded, working her way up to the front of the fuselage, and forced the cockpit door open. She saw the three pilots still strapped into their seats. Alaina checked each of their pulses and tried hearing for breathing. The first two, sitting in the captain’s and first officer’s seats, were gone. The third pilot, sitting in the jump seat next to the circuit breaker panel, was still alive, but only just.
“Hey,” Alaina said, trying to shake him awake. “Hey!”
The pilot blearily opened his eyes, clearly acting very out of it.
“Are you okay?” Alaina asked. “Can you hear me?”
The pilot nodded.
“My name’s Alaina. Do you have any pain anywhere?” Alaina asked, before she signalled to Samantha to come and help.
“In… in my neck,” he said.
“Try not to move your neck, okay?” Alaina said. “We’ll put a collar around you as soon as we can, and that will help prevent any further damage during transport.” Alaina had seen many car crashes over her roughly five year career as a paramedic, and figured the impact forces would be similar enough. Albeit, a lot worse. She was never one to have paid attention in physics class at school.
“No…” he rasped.
“You’re refusing medical help?” Alaina asked.
“No…” the pilot replied. Checking his pulse again, Alaina could feel he was fading. Slowly, but surely.
Samantha or Michaela had to get here soon.
“I… we…” the pilot began.
“Save your breath, please,” Alaina advised. She wanted to keep him alive until they reached hospital, but that seemed less and less likely with each passing moment. “I need you to stay with me until we get to hospital, okay?”
The pilot nodded.
“Don’t nod, I need you to keep your head still- Michaela!” Alaina’s eyes flooded with relief as soon as she saw Michaela come through the door. “The two pilots up front are dead; he’s alive but only just. We need to get him to hospital as soon was we can, so if you could grab the spinal board and neck collar-“
“Alaina; there’s someone who’s injured worse in what’s left of the cabin,” Michaela said. “But I need you to stay with him.”
“What?” Alaina glared at Michaela. “You can’t just ask me to-“
Michaela pulled Alaina in close and whispered in her ear. “During an investigation, they’re bound to ask you what happened as you’re treating him. As first ambulance on scene, we have to try and prioritise, but if he says anything that may be pertinent to the investigation, we need it.”
Alaina shook her head. “You’re the lawyer,” she whispered back, clearly annoyed.
As she turned back to the pilot, she could see he was fading fast. His breaths were raspy and shallow.
“Michaela!” Alaina yelled. “Grab me an ambu bag; please!”
“Samantha’s got it on someone else,” Michaela said. “We only have one.”
Alaina was starting to lose composure. “It’s okay,” the pilot said. “You can let me go.”
Alaina looked at him. “What’s your name?” She asked.
“Rowan,” he said. “Please… tell my family… I love them… and please… tell the investigators… it… wasn’t… the flight crew’s fault… and it… no… hijacking… I…”
Alaina was starting to cry now. She knew all he had left was her, holding his hand, offering some semblance of comfort in his final moments.
“Melanie…” he whispered. “Please… my favourite child… stay…”
Alaina felt his pulse stop, and his breathing stop completely.
Alaina let out a quiet sob of pain, pushing herself off the floor and into the cabin.
“Hey, Alaina, do you need a break?” Michaela asked.
Alaina nodded. “He’s gone.”
“Hey, Sam, can you spare a minute to walk Alaina back to the ambulance?” Michaela asked.
“Sure,” Samantha said, walking over to Alaina, pulling her out of the wreckage.
“I know it’s hard, Alaina, and I’d understand if you never came back into this job again.” Samantha consoled her. “Take as much time as you need. Your help was invaluable.”
Alaina shed a single tear.
- TheDisney_Writer
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Scratcher
14 posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
November 20 Daily: Pick-a-Plot
Words: 305 words total
Prompt I used (by @LilianKay): Simon is looking into her big brown eyes as they sit on the roof top together. “Bella.” He says. “Yes?” She answers in her sweet high pitch voice. They can, 1. KIs$ 2. Have a horrible fight. Or 3. Find out they are siblings.
Option I chose: Option 1 or They kIs$
Simon and Bella were up on the rooftops together, looking at the beautiful night sky. It was a very starry night with comets gliding every 5 minutes. Simon was enjoying Bella’s presence as he did every time. He already knows he has feelings but has never known the right to tell her. Bella, on the other hand, was blushing with every glance at Simon. It was a cute scene, two l0v3rs sitting together on the rooftops, unsure of what to say. That is until Simon started. “Bella” he says. “Yes?” She answers in her sweet high pitch voice. Simon took a deep breath. Bella looked at him full of concern. “Okay. I have been meaning to tell you something but I was too scared to. I think I’m ready now.” “Ok. What is wrong?” “Okay. I like you. A lot. Don’t freak out. I didn’t want to ruin our friendship with me say- “Simon was cut off when Bella pulled him closer to a small kIs$. Simon was startled but eventually melted. Bella pulled away first. “I like you too. A lot. It’s fine.” Bella said, with a small smile on her face. Simon looked at her, half shock and half relieved. Simon put her hand over hers and looked at the stars. Bella did the same and soon, they were looking at the stars, holding hands. Simon stood up and grabbed something in his pocket. He pulled out his phone and put on Spotify. The first song that started playing was “Perfect” by Ed Sheeran. He held out a hand to Bella and Bella understood. Bella and Simon started dancing like an old couple on the rooftops, laughing and grinning like crazy. After the song ended, both Simon and Bella went inside to continue enjoying each other’s promise, ignoring everything else except for them.
Words: 305 words total
Prompt I used (by @LilianKay): Simon is looking into her big brown eyes as they sit on the roof top together. “Bella.” He says. “Yes?” She answers in her sweet high pitch voice. They can, 1. KIs$ 2. Have a horrible fight. Or 3. Find out they are siblings.
Option I chose: Option 1 or They kIs$
Simon and Bella were up on the rooftops together, looking at the beautiful night sky. It was a very starry night with comets gliding every 5 minutes. Simon was enjoying Bella’s presence as he did every time. He already knows he has feelings but has never known the right to tell her. Bella, on the other hand, was blushing with every glance at Simon. It was a cute scene, two l0v3rs sitting together on the rooftops, unsure of what to say. That is until Simon started. “Bella” he says. “Yes?” She answers in her sweet high pitch voice. Simon took a deep breath. Bella looked at him full of concern. “Okay. I have been meaning to tell you something but I was too scared to. I think I’m ready now.” “Ok. What is wrong?” “Okay. I like you. A lot. Don’t freak out. I didn’t want to ruin our friendship with me say- “Simon was cut off when Bella pulled him closer to a small kIs$. Simon was startled but eventually melted. Bella pulled away first. “I like you too. A lot. It’s fine.” Bella said, with a small smile on her face. Simon looked at her, half shock and half relieved. Simon put her hand over hers and looked at the stars. Bella did the same and soon, they were looking at the stars, holding hands. Simon stood up and grabbed something in his pocket. He pulled out his phone and put on Spotify. The first song that started playing was “Perfect” by Ed Sheeran. He held out a hand to Bella and Bella understood. Bella and Simon started dancing like an old couple on the rooftops, laughing and grinning like crazy. After the song ended, both Simon and Bella went inside to continue enjoying each other’s promise, ignoring everything else except for them.
- silverlynx-
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Daily 20
295 words
A deep boom rang through the city, shuddering and cold. Screams pierced the air as a huge plume of smoke spiralled into the gloomy sky.
“Run!” Someone shrieked at me, their voice taught with fear. But I stood frozen to the spot, gripped in terror’s icy hand. A sudden curiosity empowered me, and I raced towards the confusion. Distraught voices mingled together, and a low hum of energy seemed to be buzzing, the ground vibrating slightly. In the middle was a glowing ember, pulsing with amber light. A wide ring of flame encircled it, flaring up if someone went less than a few metres away.
Soon the crowd swept me up, pulling me back. I strained further and further away from them, trying to reach the flames. I had to find out what was going on.
Crack.
I jumped back, startled, as a wide splinter ran through the huge ember. A shadowed foot poked out. There was a creature inside that thing. I shivered, my legs trembling, Why was I still here? My mind was itching at me to run. I squeezed my eyes shut, willing myself to stay. Just for a moment or two more. Then I could stop whatever beast was in there. I would be a hero. After years of being ignored and hated by all my old classmates and fellow workers. I would be known all throughout the country for my valiant deed.
A smile curved on my lips. I stepped forwards tentatively. The beast revealed itself. A hound A giant hound. A silent scream emerged from my lips. I was too scared to even make the slightest of sounds.
And that was when I saw the wave. Looming over me, an ominous black.
I was in serious trouble.
295 words
A deep boom rang through the city, shuddering and cold. Screams pierced the air as a huge plume of smoke spiralled into the gloomy sky.
“Run!” Someone shrieked at me, their voice taught with fear. But I stood frozen to the spot, gripped in terror’s icy hand. A sudden curiosity empowered me, and I raced towards the confusion. Distraught voices mingled together, and a low hum of energy seemed to be buzzing, the ground vibrating slightly. In the middle was a glowing ember, pulsing with amber light. A wide ring of flame encircled it, flaring up if someone went less than a few metres away.
Soon the crowd swept me up, pulling me back. I strained further and further away from them, trying to reach the flames. I had to find out what was going on.
Crack.
I jumped back, startled, as a wide splinter ran through the huge ember. A shadowed foot poked out. There was a creature inside that thing. I shivered, my legs trembling, Why was I still here? My mind was itching at me to run. I squeezed my eyes shut, willing myself to stay. Just for a moment or two more. Then I could stop whatever beast was in there. I would be a hero. After years of being ignored and hated by all my old classmates and fellow workers. I would be known all throughout the country for my valiant deed.
A smile curved on my lips. I stepped forwards tentatively. The beast revealed itself. A hound A giant hound. A silent scream emerged from my lips. I was too scared to even make the slightest of sounds.
And that was when I saw the wave. Looming over me, an ominous black.
I was in serious trouble.
- silverlynx-
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Weekly 3
Part 1
Content Warning: Mentions of d3ath, gore etc
“Yana!”
Gunshots echoed through the air. Bombs shattered on the ground. Shrill screams pierced the air.
“Yana!”
I glanced up at Ma, who was just metres away from me. Yet it seemed like a mile. I started to scramble over to her, my muscles screaming at me, burning. It felt like poison was running through my veins, boiling and toxic. And then I heard that fatal gunshot. The one marking Ma’s death. Time seemed to slow down, and I watched the bullet hurtle towards her.
“Ma!” I shrieked desperately, my heart pulsing loudly in my chest. “Get away!”
My voice, raw and gravelly, was barely a whisper. I watched in horror as she let out a harrowing scream, the bullet making contact. I closed my eyes tightly, hearing the gentle thud as she hit the ground. I couldn’t watch. It was too painful. There had been so much death for the past year. Now Ma. Why Ma?
War had definitely begun. And I didn’t know how Ukraine could even dare to hope to get through it.
I trudged away from Ma’s body, tears streaming down my mud-streaked face. A deep gash ran down my leg, a crimson stream trickling down my shin. I gasped for air, the smell of blood filling my nostrils. I looked at a blinding neon screen. ‘Watch the brand-new Silver Shadow series in less than two days! Viewing in cinemas starts on 17th November, 2023!’
I sighed heavily. It would be useful to have some information on how to escape this nightmare.
I wish I knew why this was happening to us. Why it would happen to anyone. Why this whole stupid war started in the first place. Why?
“Run!” Someone yelled at me, running past, fleeing for their lives. Good for them. I decided it was time to accept my death. There was no way I could escape now. With no one I knew and no chance or food or water, death was the best option for me. I didn’t have a choice anyway. It was death or eternal torture in a prison camp. And I knew which I preferred.
As planes whizzed through the air, dropping bombs and missiles, I just stood there. Motionless. Emotionless. This war had drained all the life out of me, leaving me an empty shell of darkness, sadness and hatred. Soldiers in a tight starchy uniform marched around the city. Some of their faces were taught with sorrow as they shot woman after man after child down, some of their faces hard and cruel, and some cold as stone. Some had tears streaming down their faces, some were carefully aiming their guns at people.
Then I saw someone aiming their gun at me. For a moment, I just stayed there, choosing death. But as the bullet raced towards me, a yearning for life surged through me. I would live. For Ukraine.
I leapt to the left, missing the bullet by inches. Beads of sweat coated my forehead.
“Yan!”
An immediate smile glowed on my face. “Matviy!” I called back. My friend since I was 4 years old. I enveloped him in a hug, relief flooding through me.
Maybe Ukraine and I would survive after all.
Part 1
Content Warning: Mentions of d3ath, gore etc
“Yana!”
Gunshots echoed through the air. Bombs shattered on the ground. Shrill screams pierced the air.
“Yana!”
I glanced up at Ma, who was just metres away from me. Yet it seemed like a mile. I started to scramble over to her, my muscles screaming at me, burning. It felt like poison was running through my veins, boiling and toxic. And then I heard that fatal gunshot. The one marking Ma’s death. Time seemed to slow down, and I watched the bullet hurtle towards her.
“Ma!” I shrieked desperately, my heart pulsing loudly in my chest. “Get away!”
My voice, raw and gravelly, was barely a whisper. I watched in horror as she let out a harrowing scream, the bullet making contact. I closed my eyes tightly, hearing the gentle thud as she hit the ground. I couldn’t watch. It was too painful. There had been so much death for the past year. Now Ma. Why Ma?
War had definitely begun. And I didn’t know how Ukraine could even dare to hope to get through it.
I trudged away from Ma’s body, tears streaming down my mud-streaked face. A deep gash ran down my leg, a crimson stream trickling down my shin. I gasped for air, the smell of blood filling my nostrils. I looked at a blinding neon screen. ‘Watch the brand-new Silver Shadow series in less than two days! Viewing in cinemas starts on 17th November, 2023!’
I sighed heavily. It would be useful to have some information on how to escape this nightmare.
I wish I knew why this was happening to us. Why it would happen to anyone. Why this whole stupid war started in the first place. Why?
“Run!” Someone yelled at me, running past, fleeing for their lives. Good for them. I decided it was time to accept my death. There was no way I could escape now. With no one I knew and no chance or food or water, death was the best option for me. I didn’t have a choice anyway. It was death or eternal torture in a prison camp. And I knew which I preferred.
As planes whizzed through the air, dropping bombs and missiles, I just stood there. Motionless. Emotionless. This war had drained all the life out of me, leaving me an empty shell of darkness, sadness and hatred. Soldiers in a tight starchy uniform marched around the city. Some of their faces were taught with sorrow as they shot woman after man after child down, some of their faces hard and cruel, and some cold as stone. Some had tears streaming down their faces, some were carefully aiming their guns at people.
Then I saw someone aiming their gun at me. For a moment, I just stayed there, choosing death. But as the bullet raced towards me, a yearning for life surged through me. I would live. For Ukraine.
I leapt to the left, missing the bullet by inches. Beads of sweat coated my forehead.
“Yan!”
An immediate smile glowed on my face. “Matviy!” I called back. My friend since I was 4 years old. I enveloped him in a hug, relief flooding through me.
Maybe Ukraine and I would survive after all.
- sakurakitty0212
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Scratcher
77 posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Daily for 11/20
“Thank goodness you're alive!” I shouted and ran towards Willow and scooped her up into a big hug. When we finally break the hug she looks at me and says “Can you get us off this horrible island. I've been trapped here for weeks!” I nod and grab her hand to lead her through the forest back towards the beach. Suddenly I hear the crashing of branches behind us and I can see heavily geared up men running after us and shouting. “Um, I forgot to tell you about these guys. But we need to run. Now.” Willow says and she sprints through the forest. I take off after here. She hops on the boat and I follow suit. The men rush onto the beach and aim their gear at the boat. “Start the boat and get us out of here!” Willow tells me and I scramble to start the engines and get away from here. The men aim their gear at us and a loud shot goes off and we speed away from the island. The island becomes a tiny dot in the distance. Willow slumps down into a nearby chair and says. “We don't have long till they try to catch up with us.” She mumbles. “What in the world was that about?” I ask her in an incredulous voice and glance back over my shoulder. “Ill explain to you in time.” Willow says and then promptly blacks out.
“Thank goodness you're alive!” I shouted and ran towards Willow and scooped her up into a big hug. When we finally break the hug she looks at me and says “Can you get us off this horrible island. I've been trapped here for weeks!” I nod and grab her hand to lead her through the forest back towards the beach. Suddenly I hear the crashing of branches behind us and I can see heavily geared up men running after us and shouting. “Um, I forgot to tell you about these guys. But we need to run. Now.” Willow says and she sprints through the forest. I take off after here. She hops on the boat and I follow suit. The men rush onto the beach and aim their gear at the boat. “Start the boat and get us out of here!” Willow tells me and I scramble to start the engines and get away from here. The men aim their gear at us and a loud shot goes off and we speed away from the island. The island becomes a tiny dot in the distance. Willow slumps down into a nearby chair and says. “We don't have long till they try to catch up with us.” She mumbles. “What in the world was that about?” I ask her in an incredulous voice and glance back over my shoulder. “Ill explain to you in time.” Willow says and then promptly blacks out.
Last edited by sakurakitty0212 (Nov. 20, 2024 20:59:53)
- Runaway--
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Scratcher
37 posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Pick-a-path Daily
273 words
273 words
Prompt by @strange_skies
You and your friends are hanging out when you come across a warehouse. you hear a chilling scream from inside the warehouse, and you all look at each other, frightened. do you? a) go inside and see what produced the scream, b) run the opposite direction, or c) yell out and see if you get a response from someone (or something) inside
“Hello?” I call, grabbing onto my friend's arm when she tries to shrink away.
All I can hear is the wind rustling through the leaves and the echo of my own voice spinning back at me.
Hello
Hello
Hello
Hello.
I freeze. That last greeting wasn't my voice. It was very distinct- different. Higher, and with a slight accent from somewhere I couldn't quite pinpoint. I let go of my friend's sleeve, and I hear her footsteps and she shrinks back into the forest to join the rest of the group, whispering my name under her breath. I could join her- but I've always been told I was too curious for my own good. I figure just once in my life I should do something really worthwhile- really thrilling. So I wave them away, keeping everything but my hand dead still and calling out again.
“Hello?”
This time, there is no echo. A shadow falls on me, and it's as if the dark figure is muffling all noise but the beating of blood in my ears. “Hello.” she repeats, stepping forward. All at once it becomes apparent that she is not casting the shadow, but is the shadow herself. I try to move, but all I can do is blink. The rustle of my friends in the forest behind be as completely stopped- I don't know if they're still there, or trapped in place like me.
“What brings you here, little explorer? This is my home, not yours. In a single rush she races towards me, spinning upwards at the last moment and letting out a rough laugh. ”Though, I do love visitors…
- euphoriafall
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Scratcher
500+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
20.11.2024 293 words, option b
You are tired.
Best to admit it now, instead of banishing the thought to the dusty recesses of your memory, just for it to resurface soon later. Your breaths come in staggered pants, chest heaving in shakes and judders as your lungs scream inside your chest. Behind you, the dark jaws of your mind only seem to widen.
You must keep running, this you know. If you are to escape the confines of your mind, there is not a second to be wasted. But you are so, so tired, and just a few seconds couldn’t hurt, could it?
You feel your heart’s hammering slowly calm as you kneel on the damp ground, yet the darkness behind you envelops bare trees and fallen logs. It is a dead forest here, in the area between your mind and freedom, but you know there is the promise of verdant greenery just ahead, if only you could outrun yourself.
The thought injects you with new resolve, and you push up from your kneeling position into a slower run, muscles instantly tense again. You push on.
A leaf, waxy green, spirals around you, dropping softly on the packed peat ground, a reminder of the life in sight and so close. As long as you follow this direction, you might have a chance of escaping the thin grey tendrils threatening to drag you back to your mind.
You run.
You ignore the grey smoke at the corners of your vision, ignore the rustling sounds it makes when it drags over the leaves in pursuit of you. You clamp down on the gibbering wave of panic which crests its wave when you feel a cold flick on your ankle, clinging on to the hope of a brighter, more alive forest.
the fog is dark and gloomy. it looms overhead like a thick, floating curtain. as you run, it becomes harder and harder to breathe. you become more aware of the aches in your legs, the sound of your feet thumping on the cracked pavement in your worn out sneakers. you pant, taking deep, gasping breaths through the frigid, weighty air. you need to stop. you need a break. but if you stop… it'll catch you. you dont know how long you have been running all you know is the direction youre going is a w a y. you can feel your body becoming unable to keep up. do you a) keep going, despite the signs of wear on your body. b) stop to take a break, though the danger is lurking closer and closer, or do you c) stop and fight whatever creeps behind you, though the only thing you have is a steakn1fe and your bare hands. - lunhwa
You are tired.
Best to admit it now, instead of banishing the thought to the dusty recesses of your memory, just for it to resurface soon later. Your breaths come in staggered pants, chest heaving in shakes and judders as your lungs scream inside your chest. Behind you, the dark jaws of your mind only seem to widen.
You must keep running, this you know. If you are to escape the confines of your mind, there is not a second to be wasted. But you are so, so tired, and just a few seconds couldn’t hurt, could it?
You feel your heart’s hammering slowly calm as you kneel on the damp ground, yet the darkness behind you envelops bare trees and fallen logs. It is a dead forest here, in the area between your mind and freedom, but you know there is the promise of verdant greenery just ahead, if only you could outrun yourself.
The thought injects you with new resolve, and you push up from your kneeling position into a slower run, muscles instantly tense again. You push on.
A leaf, waxy green, spirals around you, dropping softly on the packed peat ground, a reminder of the life in sight and so close. As long as you follow this direction, you might have a chance of escaping the thin grey tendrils threatening to drag you back to your mind.
You run.
You ignore the grey smoke at the corners of your vision, ignore the rustling sounds it makes when it drags over the leaves in pursuit of you. You clamp down on the gibbering wave of panic which crests its wave when you feel a cold flick on your ankle, clinging on to the hope of a brighter, more alive forest.
Last edited by euphoriafall (Nov. 20, 2024 22:04:10)
- FairyAyla
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Weekly 3 short story:
Waza walked into a bank, and checked the time. 4:58. Two minutes till the bank closed. She dropped a piece of paper and walked out of the bank. She stood outside the bank, waiting. While she wait, she bought a hotdog from a hotdog cart, took out the sausage, turned the sausage into a live pig, and ate the bun. By the time she’d done this, it was 5:01 (the bank’s closing time was 5:00). She finished eating her hotdog bun, and summoned herself some water to wash it down. Then she flew up to the roof of the bank, and using her magic, she made a magic laser to break a hole in the bank. She flew down through the hole, and looked around. No one was there. Good! Early she had put a piece of paper on the ground that said: Free ice cream at Parky Park at 5:05 PM! (She had summoned a bunch of freezers, and a bunch of ice cream, and summoned a park and magically placed it on all of the maps.) She walked over to the vault. There was one guard. Dang it! She hadn’t thought of the fact that there might be some people who are lactose intolerant. Well, it would be okay. Readying her magic, and her septores that are actually bad trolls, she summoned a piece of paper, and a pen and pencil and art supplies, scribbled something down onto the paper. Using her magic, she folded the paper into a paper airplane, and threw it at the security guard. “Huh?” Said the guard, unfolding the paper. “Free sorbet at the Parky park… isn’t that where everyone else is? Cool!” The guard ran out the door. Phew. Waza told one of her trolls to go put some sorbet at the park, and it ran off. “Okay, let’s do this.” She walked over to the vault, and using her laser magic, she broke a hole in the vaults, letting lots and lots of money fall out. Using her magic, she picked up all the money, and put it into her magic purse of holding. “Okay, lets clear out!” She said to Bert, her remaining troll septore. She flew off, out of the bank. And went to pay her rent. “It’s so annoying how i have to pay rent” Waza complained to Bert “Like, if i want to spend all of my money on candy corn and peanut butter cups and milkshakes and cabbages and chocolate bananas, i should be aloud to, right? Oh i better go swing by the Parky park and pick up Bill” Bill was her other bad troll septore.
She flew down to the park, where all the bank people and guards where eating ice cream and sorbet. Bill was hiding behind a tree, linking a cone of strawberry ice cream. “Good job, Bill and Bert.” Waza said “I think you all deserve some ice cream. Come on. Let’s go home, i’ll summon you all whatever flavor you want, okay?” The trolls smiled. “Great, let’s go.” The trolls hopped onto Waza’s back, and they flew off to Waza’s apartment, and all ate ice cream, a good end to a normal Friday evening. The end.
540 words
Waza walked into a bank, and checked the time. 4:58. Two minutes till the bank closed. She dropped a piece of paper and walked out of the bank. She stood outside the bank, waiting. While she wait, she bought a hotdog from a hotdog cart, took out the sausage, turned the sausage into a live pig, and ate the bun. By the time she’d done this, it was 5:01 (the bank’s closing time was 5:00). She finished eating her hotdog bun, and summoned herself some water to wash it down. Then she flew up to the roof of the bank, and using her magic, she made a magic laser to break a hole in the bank. She flew down through the hole, and looked around. No one was there. Good! Early she had put a piece of paper on the ground that said: Free ice cream at Parky Park at 5:05 PM! (She had summoned a bunch of freezers, and a bunch of ice cream, and summoned a park and magically placed it on all of the maps.) She walked over to the vault. There was one guard. Dang it! She hadn’t thought of the fact that there might be some people who are lactose intolerant. Well, it would be okay. Readying her magic, and her septores that are actually bad trolls, she summoned a piece of paper, and a pen and pencil and art supplies, scribbled something down onto the paper. Using her magic, she folded the paper into a paper airplane, and threw it at the security guard. “Huh?” Said the guard, unfolding the paper. “Free sorbet at the Parky park… isn’t that where everyone else is? Cool!” The guard ran out the door. Phew. Waza told one of her trolls to go put some sorbet at the park, and it ran off. “Okay, let’s do this.” She walked over to the vault, and using her laser magic, she broke a hole in the vaults, letting lots and lots of money fall out. Using her magic, she picked up all the money, and put it into her magic purse of holding. “Okay, lets clear out!” She said to Bert, her remaining troll septore. She flew off, out of the bank. And went to pay her rent. “It’s so annoying how i have to pay rent” Waza complained to Bert “Like, if i want to spend all of my money on candy corn and peanut butter cups and milkshakes and cabbages and chocolate bananas, i should be aloud to, right? Oh i better go swing by the Parky park and pick up Bill” Bill was her other bad troll septore.
She flew down to the park, where all the bank people and guards where eating ice cream and sorbet. Bill was hiding behind a tree, linking a cone of strawberry ice cream. “Good job, Bill and Bert.” Waza said “I think you all deserve some ice cream. Come on. Let’s go home, i’ll summon you all whatever flavor you want, okay?” The trolls smiled. “Great, let’s go.” The trolls hopped onto Waza’s back, and they flew off to Waza’s apartment, and all ate ice cream, a good end to a normal Friday evening. The end.
540 words
- prishaJuni
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
First Part of the Weekly - 604 words
Yesterday was a horrifying day. I saw something supernatural—something involving chickens, the alphabet, and a clueless five-year-old.
What is it, you ask?
Let me tell you.
* * *
The day had started normally. I was working my shift at IKEA, anything to get money. I had recently dropped out of high school (the teachers were mean) and my parents had disowned me. I was broke and the only place that would give me a job was IKEA.
Wow, that’s pretty traumatizing, Rey.
I know.
Don’t mind me talking to myself. I’ve been doing it since I was a child without any friends, sitting in the shadows of the playground.
I know. Traumatizing.
Anyways, enough about me. Let’s talk about what happened.
I was organizing a bunch of boxes that a lazy customer had dropped and hadn’t bothered to pick up, when I saw Larry.
Larry was another employee. He had been here as long as I could remember, and he always brought his five-year-old, Samantha, to work with him. I don’t know if that kid goes to preschool—probably not.
Anyways, she was singing the ABC song and walking along the halls. Larry waved to me—a weird wave that middle-aged men do when they have a lot of authority. My principal used to do it.
I stared at him. The wave always freaked me out a bit—especially when someone who earns the same amount as I do does it.
I was so disconcerted that I didn’t notice the chicken sneaking up behind me. So when it pecked my ankles, I shrieked and jumped in the air.
I have had a deadly fear of chickens, ever since… Oh god.
It was your average day in kindergarten—singing, coloring pages, and hands covered in paint. But no kindergartner knew that we. Had. A. Visitor.
The chicken-lady came in an hour before the end of school, dressed in a yellow the color of vomit with chicken droppings all over her. She was here to “show us the importance of chickens”, my teacher said later.
Apparently the chicken liked to be on the loose more than in the chicken-lady’s arms. It squawked and pooped on her, making everyone laugh.
The chicken lady put the chicken down.
And the chicken took a menacing step towards me.
Everything happened so fast. One second I was looking the chicken in the eye and the other it was on me, pecking at me furiously.
I screamed for help, and everyone laughed. The chicken-lady picked up the chicken and had the audacity to say “He’s just a little riled up today”.
Ever since that moment, I had despised chickens.
I screamed for a few seconds before I realized that the chicken wasn’t after me—it was after Samantha! It would probably peck her eyes out…
I decided to do the heroic thing. I took off running.
Hey, don’t judge me! Every man for themselves!
It’s not as if I made it far, though, because I crashed right into my boss—Cornelius Horkensquawk. I stammered for a bit before explaining the problem to him. My boss wasn’t mad, just asking me for more details here and there. Then he left, probably to save Samantha from the chicken.
If curiosity kills the cat, I’m a pretty dead cat. I followed my boss back to the aisle where the chicken had attacked Samantha.
We saw a very curious sight. Samantha appeared to have…hypnotized the chicken? She was chanting something, and I realized it was the ABC song. The chicken stared at her with love in its beady eyes, murmuring the alphabet with her.
That was my supernatural experience. I’m surprised I survived.
Yesterday was a horrifying day. I saw something supernatural—something involving chickens, the alphabet, and a clueless five-year-old.
What is it, you ask?
Let me tell you.
* * *
The day had started normally. I was working my shift at IKEA, anything to get money. I had recently dropped out of high school (the teachers were mean) and my parents had disowned me. I was broke and the only place that would give me a job was IKEA.
Wow, that’s pretty traumatizing, Rey.
I know.
Don’t mind me talking to myself. I’ve been doing it since I was a child without any friends, sitting in the shadows of the playground.
I know. Traumatizing.
Anyways, enough about me. Let’s talk about what happened.
I was organizing a bunch of boxes that a lazy customer had dropped and hadn’t bothered to pick up, when I saw Larry.
Larry was another employee. He had been here as long as I could remember, and he always brought his five-year-old, Samantha, to work with him. I don’t know if that kid goes to preschool—probably not.
Anyways, she was singing the ABC song and walking along the halls. Larry waved to me—a weird wave that middle-aged men do when they have a lot of authority. My principal used to do it.
I stared at him. The wave always freaked me out a bit—especially when someone who earns the same amount as I do does it.
I was so disconcerted that I didn’t notice the chicken sneaking up behind me. So when it pecked my ankles, I shrieked and jumped in the air.
I have had a deadly fear of chickens, ever since… Oh god.
It was your average day in kindergarten—singing, coloring pages, and hands covered in paint. But no kindergartner knew that we. Had. A. Visitor.
The chicken-lady came in an hour before the end of school, dressed in a yellow the color of vomit with chicken droppings all over her. She was here to “show us the importance of chickens”, my teacher said later.
Apparently the chicken liked to be on the loose more than in the chicken-lady’s arms. It squawked and pooped on her, making everyone laugh.
The chicken lady put the chicken down.
And the chicken took a menacing step towards me.
Everything happened so fast. One second I was looking the chicken in the eye and the other it was on me, pecking at me furiously.
I screamed for help, and everyone laughed. The chicken-lady picked up the chicken and had the audacity to say “He’s just a little riled up today”.
Ever since that moment, I had despised chickens.
I screamed for a few seconds before I realized that the chicken wasn’t after me—it was after Samantha! It would probably peck her eyes out…
I decided to do the heroic thing. I took off running.
Hey, don’t judge me! Every man for themselves!
It’s not as if I made it far, though, because I crashed right into my boss—Cornelius Horkensquawk. I stammered for a bit before explaining the problem to him. My boss wasn’t mad, just asking me for more details here and there. Then he left, probably to save Samantha from the chicken.
If curiosity kills the cat, I’m a pretty dead cat. I followed my boss back to the aisle where the chicken had attacked Samantha.
We saw a very curious sight. Samantha appeared to have…hypnotized the chicken? She was chanting something, and I realized it was the ABC song. The chicken stared at her with love in its beady eyes, murmuring the alphabet with her.
That was my supernatural experience. I’m surprised I survived.
- ChueyTheCat
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Scratcher
500+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
daily for fantasy 350 words
New day, new victim.
At least, that’s how I liked to see it.
Fairies are supposed to be good. Nice. Pretty, sparkly, wings and glitter.
I, on the other hand, have a badness quota, and woe is me if I go over it. The Fairy Queen devises the absolute worst punishments. She’s restricted me to one major curse a day and two minor ones, which isn’t nearly as many as I’d like. I have to get creative sometimes.
The clock had just struck midnight; now it’s game on.
I slipped into the streets gleefully.
I didn’t always have a quota, but I was always different. When other fairy kids my age were practicing their first blessings or kissing babies, I was off pulling pranks or souring milk. Eventually, those around me discovered that I wasn’t like them. Fairies can be a bit slow sometimes, and they’re definitely gullible. Always willing to believe the best of everyone and all that baloney.
“You’ve got to reform. You’re a fairy,” they said, as though that was it. I was a fairy. Therefore, I had to be good.
I tried. I really did. But it was only a matter of days before I was back to my old tricks, and this time, nobody sat me down for a heartwarming lecture. They booted me straight to the Queen.
I had my victim spotted almost instantly. A man standing in the middle of a street, holding a briefcase. He looked vaguely familiar.
If I’d been thinking, I would have stopped myself.
But fairies don’t exactly stop and think. They barge right in.
So that’s what I did.
“May green slime fill your shoes, and your ears grow to the proportions of an elephant’s, and may your food always have an unidentifiable hair in it.”
I liked to save the big curse until last. It made more of a sensation that way.
He turned and looked at me. It wasn’t until then that I realized why he looked like someone I’d seen before.
Oopsies.
“Hi, Death,” I squeaked. “What’s…dying?”
I hoped it wasn’t about to be me.
New day, new victim.
At least, that’s how I liked to see it.
Fairies are supposed to be good. Nice. Pretty, sparkly, wings and glitter.
I, on the other hand, have a badness quota, and woe is me if I go over it. The Fairy Queen devises the absolute worst punishments. She’s restricted me to one major curse a day and two minor ones, which isn’t nearly as many as I’d like. I have to get creative sometimes.
The clock had just struck midnight; now it’s game on.
I slipped into the streets gleefully.
I didn’t always have a quota, but I was always different. When other fairy kids my age were practicing their first blessings or kissing babies, I was off pulling pranks or souring milk. Eventually, those around me discovered that I wasn’t like them. Fairies can be a bit slow sometimes, and they’re definitely gullible. Always willing to believe the best of everyone and all that baloney.
“You’ve got to reform. You’re a fairy,” they said, as though that was it. I was a fairy. Therefore, I had to be good.
I tried. I really did. But it was only a matter of days before I was back to my old tricks, and this time, nobody sat me down for a heartwarming lecture. They booted me straight to the Queen.
I had my victim spotted almost instantly. A man standing in the middle of a street, holding a briefcase. He looked vaguely familiar.
If I’d been thinking, I would have stopped myself.
But fairies don’t exactly stop and think. They barge right in.
So that’s what I did.
“May green slime fill your shoes, and your ears grow to the proportions of an elephant’s, and may your food always have an unidentifiable hair in it.”
I liked to save the big curse until last. It made more of a sensation that way.
He turned and looked at me. It wasn’t until then that I realized why he looked like someone I’d seen before.
Oopsies.
“Hi, Death,” I squeaked. “What’s…dying?”
I hoped it wasn’t about to be me.
- axalea
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Scratcher
12 posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
20.11.24 daily!!
Your character is a magical being. They love causing chaos in other people’s lives, although it often comes back to haunt them later. They have three new targets that they want to bother. A) Their sibling, an eldritch being. B) A random stranger that looks suspiciously like the grim reaper. C) That one floating angel in the sky who keeps making annoying trumpet noises. Whose anger will they incur next? And what will happen to them? by @booklover883322!! thanks
I chose B!! and A… kind of!
Elora wandered into the clandestine market; she was searching to find her fuming sister, Claire, who had stormed out into the wilderness after Elora had teased her relentlessly. Claire was an easy victim for the wretched feeling of envy. Her pessimistic personality was unbearable sometimes. Claire had a case of Sofia the First syndrome; being adopted into the family. Elora, being a wealthy noble and next-in-line queen, she was always the favoured one. This didn't mean that Elora was disciplined; she was quite the opposite. So was Claire: inheriting her late father's chaotic traits and what people have inferred, his strong dark magic.
“Trials start in one hour! Prepare, everyone!” Said the smiling angel, soaring through the skies, his cliché trumpet cacophony straight from a rom-com.
It was almost time for the sorcery trials. They were mandatory for every 16-year-old juvenile, proving if you had dark magic, or “good” magic. Elora, of course, was not amused by these. Just the thought of it screamed, “boring!”. Elora knew her fate. Royals were promised good magic, a sign for reining peace and prosperity to their kingdom.
Elora was still keeping a keen eye for an eldritch girl with jet-black waves and chartreuse eyes. She was getting bored, scanning the peasants' faces. Looking for a sign of entertainment. She could always find her sister and torture her, (respectively!!!) even more, or find an ill-tempered peasant worthy of toying with. Although, that annoying angel was buzzing around above her head, like a fly..
Lost in her peculiar reverie, she bumped into an eerie looking man. No, woman. Elora couldn't tell; their face was covered with a piece of ebony cloth, revealing only their eyes. Her necklace fell, and in a daze, she hurried to pick it up. It was a family heirloom she couldn't lose.
“Hey!” Elora shouted.
“Watch where you're going, princess. How long did it take your servants this morning to make you look so horrid?” the voice intervened, revealing a feminine sound. So, Elora assumed that this grim-reaper creature was a female, of some sort.
“Buzz off, street urchin. And don't touch me! This necklace costs more than your life,” Elora snapped. The two exchanged eye contact for a split second, before the figure backed away and just.. disappeared.
“What the stars?” Elora exclaimed, before recalling her motive for this journey to the village in the first place. Desperate to find her sister in time, she raced towards the forest.
“Claire! I won't admit I'm wrong, nor am I sorry, but you need to come! Trials are in less than thirty minutes,” Elora yelled, her echo sounding through the trees like a siren's call. Her head pounded, her throat felt dry. Everything felt so surreal; but she guessed it was just the kelospia feel of trial day. Suddenly, she heard a river nearby. Amidst all the events that had happened, she had forgotten about her needs. She ran towards the stream to quickly quench her thirst. Elora thought that this would be the end of it: she'd find Claire somewhere in the wilderness, attend the trials, and go to her salon back in the palace. But soon, she would realize, that it wouldn't be so simple…
When Elora finally reached the water, she saw the black-clothed personage, sitting criss-crossed, reciting a spell that sounded familiar. Elora froze. She was all alone in the daunting forest. When they had finished with their eerie ritual, they turned around.
“Elora..” they whispered.
“How do you know my name?” Elora gasped. The figure chuckled. “It's funny seeing you scared.” then they ever-so-slowly took off their robe, divulging their unbeknownst appearance..
“Claire!?”
Your character is a magical being. They love causing chaos in other people’s lives, although it often comes back to haunt them later. They have three new targets that they want to bother. A) Their sibling, an eldritch being. B) A random stranger that looks suspiciously like the grim reaper. C) That one floating angel in the sky who keeps making annoying trumpet noises. Whose anger will they incur next? And what will happen to them? by @booklover883322!! thanks

I chose B!! and A… kind of!
Elora wandered into the clandestine market; she was searching to find her fuming sister, Claire, who had stormed out into the wilderness after Elora had teased her relentlessly. Claire was an easy victim for the wretched feeling of envy. Her pessimistic personality was unbearable sometimes. Claire had a case of Sofia the First syndrome; being adopted into the family. Elora, being a wealthy noble and next-in-line queen, she was always the favoured one. This didn't mean that Elora was disciplined; she was quite the opposite. So was Claire: inheriting her late father's chaotic traits and what people have inferred, his strong dark magic.
“Trials start in one hour! Prepare, everyone!” Said the smiling angel, soaring through the skies, his cliché trumpet cacophony straight from a rom-com.
It was almost time for the sorcery trials. They were mandatory for every 16-year-old juvenile, proving if you had dark magic, or “good” magic. Elora, of course, was not amused by these. Just the thought of it screamed, “boring!”. Elora knew her fate. Royals were promised good magic, a sign for reining peace and prosperity to their kingdom.
Elora was still keeping a keen eye for an eldritch girl with jet-black waves and chartreuse eyes. She was getting bored, scanning the peasants' faces. Looking for a sign of entertainment. She could always find her sister and torture her, (respectively!!!) even more, or find an ill-tempered peasant worthy of toying with. Although, that annoying angel was buzzing around above her head, like a fly..
Lost in her peculiar reverie, she bumped into an eerie looking man. No, woman. Elora couldn't tell; their face was covered with a piece of ebony cloth, revealing only their eyes. Her necklace fell, and in a daze, she hurried to pick it up. It was a family heirloom she couldn't lose.
“Hey!” Elora shouted.
“Watch where you're going, princess. How long did it take your servants this morning to make you look so horrid?” the voice intervened, revealing a feminine sound. So, Elora assumed that this grim-reaper creature was a female, of some sort.
“Buzz off, street urchin. And don't touch me! This necklace costs more than your life,” Elora snapped. The two exchanged eye contact for a split second, before the figure backed away and just.. disappeared.
“What the stars?” Elora exclaimed, before recalling her motive for this journey to the village in the first place. Desperate to find her sister in time, she raced towards the forest.
“Claire! I won't admit I'm wrong, nor am I sorry, but you need to come! Trials are in less than thirty minutes,” Elora yelled, her echo sounding through the trees like a siren's call. Her head pounded, her throat felt dry. Everything felt so surreal; but she guessed it was just the kelospia feel of trial day. Suddenly, she heard a river nearby. Amidst all the events that had happened, she had forgotten about her needs. She ran towards the stream to quickly quench her thirst. Elora thought that this would be the end of it: she'd find Claire somewhere in the wilderness, attend the trials, and go to her salon back in the palace. But soon, she would realize, that it wouldn't be so simple…
When Elora finally reached the water, she saw the black-clothed personage, sitting criss-crossed, reciting a spell that sounded familiar. Elora froze. She was all alone in the daunting forest. When they had finished with their eerie ritual, they turned around.
“Elora..” they whispered.
“How do you know my name?” Elora gasped. The figure chuckled. “It's funny seeing you scared.” then they ever-so-slowly took off their robe, divulging their unbeknownst appearance..
“Claire!?”
Last edited by axalea (Nov. 20, 2024 23:58:31)
- Zyzeryko
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
The criminal stared into your eyes. “What brings you to this place?” she asks.
“I’m afraid this place is mine,” you respond. “I inherited it from a relative after her passing.”
The criminal nodded, silence echoing off the walls. You stare into her face. She is ever-shifting and changing, her eyes fading from the sunset to the colors of the night–once a black, eerie tone, now so alive in her irises. Her features change too, her skin tone shifting between dark and light, her eyes widening and then shifting again to a different hue. A criminal?
No. She couldn’t be. No crime could’ve been committed by someone of such beauty.
“A witch.” Her tone shocks you from your thought.
“What?”
“I am a witch, and though you see me as a strange beauty, i can assure you I have committed a great number of atrocities in the name of myself.”
“Your own name?” you ask.
“Of course. For whom else would I risk such a feat?”
Confusion shines through your face. “But why? And what crmes must you’ve committed?”
She smiles. “You will see, one day. One day, hopefully not a day soon, but a day that will always come. It is not a day you should wish for, but it is not a day to be afraid of either. Enjoy the time you have left before it arrives.”
“But how can I, knowing it is coming?”
Her smile only broadens. “You cannot. But you must try, if only for yourself, and if only once. Please.”
You can do nothing but nod.
“I’m afraid this place is mine,” you respond. “I inherited it from a relative after her passing.”
The criminal nodded, silence echoing off the walls. You stare into her face. She is ever-shifting and changing, her eyes fading from the sunset to the colors of the night–once a black, eerie tone, now so alive in her irises. Her features change too, her skin tone shifting between dark and light, her eyes widening and then shifting again to a different hue. A criminal?
No. She couldn’t be. No crime could’ve been committed by someone of such beauty.
“A witch.” Her tone shocks you from your thought.
“What?”
“I am a witch, and though you see me as a strange beauty, i can assure you I have committed a great number of atrocities in the name of myself.”
“Your own name?” you ask.
“Of course. For whom else would I risk such a feat?”
Confusion shines through your face. “But why? And what crmes must you’ve committed?”
She smiles. “You will see, one day. One day, hopefully not a day soon, but a day that will always come. It is not a day you should wish for, but it is not a day to be afraid of either. Enjoy the time you have left before it arrives.”
“But how can I, knowing it is coming?”
Her smile only broadens. “You cannot. But you must try, if only for yourself, and if only once. Please.”
You can do nothing but nod.
- -WildClan-
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
(I chose a prompt by @tgfanatic: “you find yourself looking out a window in a mysterious cabin when you wake up. you are in the tallest tower, roses climbing it, all the works. do you…. A: try to figure out where you are B: try and climb down or C: try and sneak out.”)
You look out the window, trying to figure out where you are. You peer downwards and see that the ground is just a blur far below—you’re way too high up. Your breath catches and your hands grip the windowsill tightly. Taking a step back, you attempt to remain calm. There has to be some other way out of here.
You try again to analyze the view outside the window, this time being careful to not look at the gaping drop below you. There are the other towers, and the cabin they attach to. Beyond that is a forest, blanketing a sea of foothills in the bright green of springtime. The foothills give way to a mountain range, the peaks obscured by clouds.
You come from a valley. How far had you been taken that you’re now overlooking mountains? Why can’t you remember how you got here? Who brought you?
There’s no evidence of any other human activity other than the building you are currently in. You watch the sky for a while, but even as it gets dark, no airplanes or satellites blink against the clear sky.
The thought occurs to you that this must be a very remote location. Or… was this even Earth?
You study the stars, hoping to find a familiar constellation. It turns out that you don’t really know what you’re looking for, though. You wish you had studied astronomy. Or studied how to break out of towers.
The night grows darker, and the view outside your window fades to black, save for the pale sheen of moonlight.
You look out the window, trying to figure out where you are. You peer downwards and see that the ground is just a blur far below—you’re way too high up. Your breath catches and your hands grip the windowsill tightly. Taking a step back, you attempt to remain calm. There has to be some other way out of here.
You try again to analyze the view outside the window, this time being careful to not look at the gaping drop below you. There are the other towers, and the cabin they attach to. Beyond that is a forest, blanketing a sea of foothills in the bright green of springtime. The foothills give way to a mountain range, the peaks obscured by clouds.
You come from a valley. How far had you been taken that you’re now overlooking mountains? Why can’t you remember how you got here? Who brought you?
There’s no evidence of any other human activity other than the building you are currently in. You watch the sky for a while, but even as it gets dark, no airplanes or satellites blink against the clear sky.
The thought occurs to you that this must be a very remote location. Or… was this even Earth?
You study the stars, hoping to find a familiar constellation. It turns out that you don’t really know what you’re looking for, though. You wish you had studied astronomy. Or studied how to break out of towers.
The night grows darker, and the view outside your window fades to black, save for the pale sheen of moonlight.
- AmazaEevee
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Scratcher
500+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Critique for Crim
11/20/2024
490 words
Hey Crim!! So sorry for getting this critique to you *checks watch* uh more than a week late, but hopefully the wait was worth it. This was an interesting piece with an internal monologue that I enjoyed reading! And with that being said, let’s not keep you waiting any longer and actually get to the critique akjdfas-
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Overall, I enjoyed the POV, but I was confused about what story you’re trying to tell. Well, you did say that that wouldn’t fully make sense so- But more on the POV. I think that the use of description is clearly portrayed and you did a great job with it!
I think another thing that threw me off was all of the eye descriptions. Maybe it’s me and my instant mental connection between eyes and romantic relationships *cough* clintasha *cough* but I wasn’t exactly sure what you were trying to convey about Aleksander’s eyes? It wasn’t clear to me what the subtext to that was, but it could also just be me,,,
But yeah! Thanks for having me critique this and I loved the way this was written
11/20/2024
490 words
Hey Crim!! So sorry for getting this critique to you *checks watch* uh more than a week late, but hopefully the wait was worth it. This was an interesting piece with an internal monologue that I enjoyed reading! And with that being said, let’s not keep you waiting any longer and actually get to the critique akjdfas-
When Iris stepped into the coffee shop, she was instantly assaulted by the silence.Right off the bat, I don’t think that assaulted would be the best word to use here? I get what you’re trying to convey, but the negative connotation attached to it doesn’t quite set up the scene as well as I think you’re going for. Perhaps overwhelmed would be a better word? I think it has the same effect, but not as strong as assaulted. I really like the rest of the paragraph though; it helps to reinforce how the silence cuts away all the other sounds.
She had never seen the man before, but he rose at her approach, hand extended for her to shake.Kinda nitpicky, but did she shake his hand?? It isn’t mentioned and it could be assumed, butttt yeah. I think adding in the handshake would add a little bit of some action going on here.
“Dr. Zaman,” she introduced herself.
Their voices didn’t echo at all in this corner, a trick of acoustic engineering to provide them with privacy for the meeting. The noiselessness made it feel as though they were in a very small room, rather than the large open space.I love this paragraph describing the setting and the environment!! It’s a nice touch and it sets the scene well.
Alexsander didn’t speak more immediately, instead opening a leather bag that he’d set on the unnaturally white floor. That bag must have been expensive, the leather certainly looked real. Iris didn’t know if she’d ever owned anything that expensive. From inside, he retrieved a dossier. It was rare to see paper at all these days, much less paper this high quality. Though leather was still rarer.Oooh, this has me intrigued on the worldbuilding and leaves many questions to be answered.
The door behind the counter—leading into the kitchen, Iris guessed—swung open, the buzz of machinery filleding the room for a moment before being abruptly cut off as the barista shut the door behind him.I think that changing the tense of filled to filling makes more sense? Reading it as filled didn’t quite make sense to me and I think that it makes more sense this way.
He carried a coffee cup, steaming to the counter.Not sure about the structure of this sentence… Maybe switch the placing of steaming to before ‘coffee cup’, so it’s a ‘steaming coffee cup’, because the placement of it now is confusing me. Or a comma after streaming to separate it from ‘to the counter’, but I think that moving the adjective to before would help things make the most sense.
Iris hadn’t realized how sterile the room smelled until the coffee was brought out. The room transformed by its rich, sharp scent. It still felt strangely empty, though, like the smell wasn’t quite enough to fill the space.I love what this paragraph is describing, but I’m not sure about the second sentence? I think that the tense isn’t fitting in with the rest of the sentences. The room was transformed, perhaps?
Aleksander made no move to rise, and the man stood there awkwardly. A, arms stiff at his sides as he stared at Aleksander, as if willing him to come get his drink.Is this meant to be two sentences, because I think this makes more sense if the two are connected lol.
Clap, clap, clap, all the way to the register.
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Overall, I enjoyed the POV, but I was confused about what story you’re trying to tell. Well, you did say that that wouldn’t fully make sense so- But more on the POV. I think that the use of description is clearly portrayed and you did a great job with it!
I think another thing that threw me off was all of the eye descriptions. Maybe it’s me and my instant mental connection between eyes and romantic relationships *cough* clintasha *cough* but I wasn’t exactly sure what you were trying to convey about Aleksander’s eyes? It wasn’t clear to me what the subtext to that was, but it could also just be me,,,
But yeah! Thanks for having me critique this and I loved the way this was written

Last edited by AmazaEevee (Nov. 21, 2024 02:54:51)
- YorkiesAreAmazing123
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
“When did it go from being so sure to questioning what my purpose in life is?
Why do I feel so unsure.
Why can I not have a clear mental image of who I want to be. Maybe I'm focusing too much on my future. Maybe I should think more in the now..?
Am I confused?
I feel confused?
Why can I not stop crying.
Why are there so many whys?
Is this new? This feeling isn't new. Who am I?”
Scientific studies show that at one point or another, everybody that lives over the age of 18 thinks this way for some span of time. Or forever.
This is because as people, we long for a purpose. We long to be known, to be loved, to feel complete, by something, or someone.
The thing is, a lot of times, we will never know _where_ we're going because.
Life changes! That's the fun of it.
Circumstances change.
For example, a girl plans on moving to another state for medical school.
As time progresses she turns 18. She comes to the realization that she doesn't want to move because it would
a) take her away from family
b) she has never lived alone before
and
c) it would tear her from her scholarships that she got in her state already
Leaving her 10x as much college debt compared to the amount she would have to pay if she just stayed.
So you know what happened? She stayed in her state.
However her state didn't have a medical school…
And she wasn't sure about her major as a med student to much.
So she switched from wanting to be a med student to wanting to be what she wanted to be since a very young age:
An astronaut.
She then went on the be yet another one of the great female astronauts out there.
Plans change.
Situations change.
Actions are what make a life..
So your story will inevitably change quite a bit.
Things that are very expected to come true. Change. And sometimes don't.
So don't be so focused on WHERE you're going. Focus on your morals, your values, and what you're doing right now. And the where will figure itself out.
Why do I feel so unsure.
Why can I not have a clear mental image of who I want to be. Maybe I'm focusing too much on my future. Maybe I should think more in the now..?
Am I confused?
I feel confused?
Why can I not stop crying.
Why are there so many whys?
Is this new? This feeling isn't new. Who am I?”
Scientific studies show that at one point or another, everybody that lives over the age of 18 thinks this way for some span of time. Or forever.
This is because as people, we long for a purpose. We long to be known, to be loved, to feel complete, by something, or someone.
The thing is, a lot of times, we will never know _where_ we're going because.
Life changes! That's the fun of it.
Circumstances change.
For example, a girl plans on moving to another state for medical school.
As time progresses she turns 18. She comes to the realization that she doesn't want to move because it would
a) take her away from family
b) she has never lived alone before
and
c) it would tear her from her scholarships that she got in her state already
Leaving her 10x as much college debt compared to the amount she would have to pay if she just stayed.
So you know what happened? She stayed in her state.
However her state didn't have a medical school…
And she wasn't sure about her major as a med student to much.
So she switched from wanting to be a med student to wanting to be what she wanted to be since a very young age:
An astronaut.
She then went on the be yet another one of the great female astronauts out there.
Plans change.
Situations change.
Actions are what make a life..
So your story will inevitably change quite a bit.
Things that are very expected to come true. Change. And sometimes don't.
So don't be so focused on WHERE you're going. Focus on your morals, your values, and what you're doing right now. And the where will figure itself out.
- ChueyTheCat
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Scratcher
500+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
critique for @violent-measures | 415 words
this is a critique for vi!! it was VERY LATE in coming I'm so sorry sobbing :') but hopefully it was at least partially worth the wait.
let's jump right in yay
Jumping right in here, I noticed that the third sentence was a bit awkwardly worded; I'd rewrite it something along these lines: “her own legs were safely tucked under her.” I'd also restructure the fourth sentence or combine it with the third somehow - it jars the flow, although it does tell you something about her character (which is why I wouldn't delete it entirely). She's afraid of the edge, he isn't. Nice contrast here. As a small note, I'd also be careful how often you use the word “edge” in the same paragraph.
Lastly, it's a rather small thing but I'd change “that's” in the sixth sentence to “that was” so it matches the tense of the rest of the paragraph better.
The fact that you can fit so much into so few words astounds me; we're not even past the first paragraph and their personalities are already beginning to take shape for the reader. I love reading through your pieces aaa <3
Okey dokey moving on!
I'M SCREAMING LIKE SCREAMING THIS. IS. SO. GOOD.
Even though I haven't ever watched Ninjago, this might be one my favorite things you've ever written. The themes, the characters, and the writing itself left me breathless, and the dialogue is gorgeous. I'm running out of good synonyms for all the adjectives I've used but this is amazing.
Thank you so much for letting me critique this, and my deepest apologies for taking so long. This has been one of the most satisfying pieces I've ever critiqued, and I can't wait for next time. <3
this is a critique for vi!! it was VERY LATE in coming I'm so sorry sobbing :') but hopefully it was at least partially worth the wait.
let's jump right in yay
For critique!YAY sibling trauma I love sibling trauma.
nya didn’t look up as kai sat down next to her.
he let his legs hang over the side of the dock, so close she wanted to claw him back from the edge. her own legs were tucked under her, away. she would not let them carry her to the edge. he noticed, she knew. that’s one of the things she was relearning: how well he knew her. even after all this.
Jumping right in here, I noticed that the third sentence was a bit awkwardly worded; I'd rewrite it something along these lines: “her own legs were safely tucked under her.” I'd also restructure the fourth sentence or combine it with the third somehow - it jars the flow, although it does tell you something about her character (which is why I wouldn't delete it entirely). She's afraid of the edge, he isn't. Nice contrast here. As a small note, I'd also be careful how often you use the word “edge” in the same paragraph.
Lastly, it's a rather small thing but I'd change “that's” in the sixth sentence to “that was” so it matches the tense of the rest of the paragraph better.
The fact that you can fit so much into so few words astounds me; we're not even past the first paragraph and their personalities are already beginning to take shape for the reader. I love reading through your pieces aaa <3
Okey dokey moving on!
‘i don’t like it, either.’ a non-sequitur if it had been anyone else (but he knew her too well). ‘i guess you know that,’ he laughed. the sound was empty.Small thing again lol, I'd stick the word “but” in front of “i guess you know that” to help it flow better.
silence, for a moment. he took a deep breath, not looking at her but out over the sea, where moonlight danced on the waves. beautiful and cold.All I can say is: wow. You've really captured the immense, chilly beauty of the sea here, interwoven with Nya and Kai's relationship. I can see the dock and the waves and the two of them sitting there as clearly as though you drew it.
he looked down at his hands. one of his fingers worried at his thumb. ‘but . . . as much as i’m afraid of it . . . as much as i hated it for taking you away from me. i couldn’t help but love it, too.’ he met her gaze, then. ‘it was the last thing i had left.’
nya nodded. they were both afraid of the sea, she knew. but he did not understand. he could not. she was afraid, yes—but mostly she was afraid of herself. because the ocean was beautiful and endless and it promised her power and safety and surety and she had never doubted before she remembered, had she?
‘sometimes,’ she whispered, so low she half-hoped he could not hear, ‘i’m afraid i’m going to lose myself again. that i cannot hold on. that…however much i love you…i will forget it…and then does it mean anything? does it mean anything if it’s wiped clean, in the end? does who i am even matter if i stop being myself?’ she hated herself for asking that more than anything; wasn’t she better than that? at one point, she’d known who she was with certainty. she’d refused to let anyone take it from her. but now—now, now, now. (she was chiding herself like a child. in some ways she felt like one. she’d been born two weeks ago when she’d left the sea behind.)
she’d died a year ago when she’d given herself up. the worst of it, or maybe the best of it, was she knew she’d do it again. she’d save her family, if she could. what was she worth, anyway, if she had all but forgotten already?One last thing here! In the first sentence of the above paragraph, I'd delete the “too” as it doesn't really add anything to the sentence. Other than that, this is absolutely gorgeous. Her internal struggle with herself and the waves is stunning in the way it unfolds throughout the story.
he looked at her, eyes blazing like they did in battle. like she was the enemy. she couldn’t quite figure out what he was going to say, and maybe he didn’t know either, because he just stared at her for a long moment without opening his mouth. then, finally, hoarsely, but with conviction, he spoke. (kai had a way of speaking where it seemed he was absolutely certain what he was saying was true. nya thought maybe she used to speak like that, too. she couldn’t remember.)
‘you’re the strongest person i know, nya,’ he said.
no vague, unfounded assurance that she would not forget. not an ‘i love you’ that meant please don’t forget it.
oh, how she wanted to believe him.
she blinked away tears, too afraid to let them fall. she hated the wetness, the memory of it. water was supposed to forget. to forgive. wash away sand and stone and pain. why did she remember all the things she did not want to and forget all the things she most needed to keep?
nya gripped his arm like it was an anchor. like she was drowning. she could remember a time when drowning had not felt a threat. she could remember it. she memorized the set of his jaw, the blaze in his eyes, the warmth of him beside her. she memorized the way her heart felt when it beat inside her chest. she did not think it possible to forget this.
I'M SCREAMING LIKE SCREAMING THIS. IS. SO. GOOD.
Even though I haven't ever watched Ninjago, this might be one my favorite things you've ever written. The themes, the characters, and the writing itself left me breathless, and the dialogue is gorgeous. I'm running out of good synonyms for all the adjectives I've used but this is amazing.
Thank you so much for letting me critique this, and my deepest apologies for taking so long. This has been one of the most satisfying pieces I've ever critiqued, and I can't wait for next time. <3
- IvyCreations
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Scratcher
500+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Daily Nov. 22
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I had initially thought about just being super chaotic and silly with this request, but then I realized how much SWC means to me. I first joined this camp when I was 13, in 2022. My first session was March 2022, and I was in the dystopian cabin–one of the leaders was Zane, and man, if he didn’t inspire me, nobody ever has. I was a little bit socially awkward (I’m lying, I was totally inept) but I was so fascinated by the concept. It was a place that felt so welcoming, where I met other people who loved to do exactly what I did: tell stories!
Through my nine sessions, and wow, I can’t believe it’s been both already and only nine, I’ve made so many friends! Most of my closest Scratch friends came from SWC, and they mean everything to me. SWC means everything to me. In real life, I am constantly talking about it. All my friends know what it is solely because I can never shut up about it. I love being here, in a community so welcoming, so engaging, so laid-back and also chaotic, all at the same time. Being able to introduce new campers to SWC, seeing people help each other out, encourage, collaborate, jokingly bicker, it’s so beautiful. Honestly, this is one of my favourite things in the world. This camp is my home.
So, if I had to say one thing, like a Too Long; Didn’t Read, for the polar bear team, it would probably be this: SWC has felt like the best aspects of my life all rolled up into one thing. The dailies have always been encouraging to me, giving me opportunities to improve, to write for fun, to get critiques and collaborate. Though I haven’t been as active as I’d like to due to some challenges in my daily life, this camp means, and has meant for years, everything to me. And it’s all thanks to you, you guys who write amazing, beautiful, hyper-creative dailies. So don’t stop! Come back!
Regards,
Jasper
- KitVMH
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Journalism weeky part 3
(For the critiquitaire)
616 words
Thanks to Chuey and Zy for being interviewed
(For the critiquitaire)
616 words
Thanks to Chuey and Zy for being interviewed
On November 3, Chuey (@ChueyTheCat) attempted to eat Zy’s (@Zyzeryko’s) toes. This led to a battle surrounding toes, fingernails, and small businesses.
The November 3 daily instructed campers to strike up a conversation with a cabinmate they didn’t know, and then use a line from the cabinmate’s bio as a prompt for a story. Chuey saw people talking about changing their bios to include song lyrics, which inspired her to change her own bio to “something super ridiculous.” “I changed the bio to ‘i eat toes’ and the wiwo to ‘om nom nom’,” said Chuey, a fantasy co-leader, “and then commented in the main cabin telling people to go look at my shiny new bio.”
Not everyone wanted to let Chuey have their toes. Mystery leader Zy refused to give his up, and he and Chuey struck a deal: instead of giving her his own toes, Zy could give Chuey 10 toes from anyone (and they didn’t all have to match).
Zy asked in the main cabin for toe donations, and received many more than he’d expected—67 and 1/58 in total.
Zy’s Toe Business wasn’t the only new business in the main cabin. Finley (@essayist), also known as Fini, soon set up shop with the Fingernail Seasoning Business, also known as Finley’s Fingernail Factory (FFF). Finley, co-leader of Paranormal, asked people to donate their fingernails in exchange for money and mangoes.
Finley also kidnapped Zy, and forced him to work for her. Zy accused her of kidnapping and child labor.
A few smaller businesses also sprung up. Ayla’s Cat Hair sells hair gently harvested from the four pet cats of Ayla (@FairyAyla), while Maia (@wolfiebear-) and Alex (@hamilchaos) started a company selling “illicit brainrot merch.” Many people also chose neutrality, choosing not to pick a side between Zy’s Toe Business and Finley’s Fingernail Factory.
“I personally did not like that FFF ended up with more supporters than me,” Zy told the press in an interview. “I found it very insulting that my close friends would give up all morality just to support Finley and her child labor. Yes, some people helped me (shoutout to Ayla and Luna!) but most chose to support Fini, even making her a website where Lora publicly disses the toe business.”
The website, swcfingernailseasoningbusiness.wordpress.com, was created by Lora (@Coco_animator), a camper in Apocalyptic. The website describes Zy’s Toe Business as “The Tainted and Worthless Revolution.” “The revolution- also known as Zy’s Toe Business- involves taking toes from people,” says the website. “Unlike fingernails, toes will never heal if they are cut off- ever. Do you really want to sentence your legs to this fate? Hear this, YOU WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO WALK AGAIN!”
“Lora has picked her side very firmly, and as the judge assigned to my case (i broke the law by speaking out against child labor), who sentenced me to child labor,” said Zy, adding that Lora “continues to support Finley to this day.” “People even made up lies about me, saying I was stealing toes when in reality they were all donations.”
Zy is no longer trapped working for FFF. “At the end of our drama she agreed to free me because of how much I publicly shamed her for child labor,” he explained.
How did Chuey feel about causing all this? “I thought it was amazing haha - SWC wars are really funny,” she said in an interview. “Plus, I love chaos.” When asked if she was surprised by how things went, she said, “I was mildly surprised by how far the war went but not at the war itself; I've been in SWC long enough to know that campers love mayhem (and mangoes).”

















