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strang3rthing
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swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

Question, but do I add my writing in here or in a new post? (Sorry for the dumb question-)
co0lcr34t10ns
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swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

strang3rthing wrote:

Question, but do I add my writing in here or in a new post? (Sorry for the dumb question-)
yes
strang3rthing
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swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

Ok ty :'].
strang3rthing
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swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

Here's a story I've been working! It's called “The Pirate with White Hair.” (I'm trying to think of a better name though :'P Also I edited this a little btw!)

Writing For Critique, 289 Words (TW:Swords or cutlasses)

Chapter 1

(Flashback) A 10 year old child with white hair ran across the beach. Her one braid bounced up and down her back as she ran up the stone steps leading to the docks. “Momma! Come on! I wanna look at the ships!” She called to a woman walking up the same steps. A lady with black hair and dark green eyes smiled gently. “I'm coming dear.” She said as her feet touched the sandy floor.

The sun shone brightly, the ocean glittered as the sun hit the surface of the water, but soon the sun was blocked out by a huge ship as it came into view. Zelia's eyes lit up as soon as they came to the docks.The girl loved hearing stories when she was six or seven years old, and she loved to learn about the history of all the different ships.

Chapter 2

(Present) A girl with golden brown hair ran down the beach, the moss-covered stairs quieting her footsteps, but that wouldn't help her much…since she was kinda being chased, as soon as she reached the sandy floor she quickly ducked behind a small group of bushes, her eyes darting around as if she was watching for something. “I’m so dead-” Was all she was able to say before her sword flew out of her hands and got somewhat buried in the sand, then a sword was at her neck. “You lose, Aria.” A voice said.

The girl groaned in annoyance. “Do you REALLY need to sneak up on me like that!?” She almost yelled as the other girl began to laugh. “Well I need to practice, if I want to become a Pirate!"

Last edited by strang3rthing (Nov. 13, 2024 20:12:42)

sakurakitty0212
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swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

Weekly for sci fi by Dalia

part 1 - 189 words
part 2 - set is on my set acc @cyberhrtz
part 3 - 1123 words
part 4 - 332 words
total - 1644 words (I wrote way more than required )

part 1 - Script Cabin Storyline:
Tonight is the night of the drama society's big production. Earlier on in the year you had tried out for the main role but alas, you were given the role of understudy. You hear a knock at the dressing room door and suddenly turn around. “Who is it?” You call out since you don't have long till its time to go out on stage and perform. “Can I come in?” A girl's voice asks and you open the door to reveal one of the girls, Dalia in the drama club. “I know that you were cast as the understudy for the lead role and we really need you to go on tonight. The main lead got sick and we have had a bunch of mishaps with the set. Can you please help?” She asks and grabs the costume and hands it to you. “Okay, I'll do it, let me pull on the costume and fix my hair.” You say and slide on the costume. “Come on, we can't be too late.” Dalia says and grabs your hand to lead you along. This is sure to be an interesting performance.

part 2 - Aesthetic Set:
@cyberhrtz (my set acc). Its the most recent set posted

part 3 - My Shot Parody:
I am not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
Hey everybody, i'm just a theater kid
I'm young, ready, and willing
And I'm not throwin' away my shot
I'mma get a lead role in the play
I probably shouldn't brag, but dang, I amaze and astonish everyone
The problem is I got a lot of talent but no luck
I gotta sing loud just to be heard
With every line, I drop promise
I'm a diamond in the rough, a rose waiting to bloom
Tryna reach my goal the main lead, unstoppable
Only thirteen but my ability is stronger
These stage floors getting warmer, I take on
Every challenge, every trial
I have learned to manage, but I don't have a leg to stand on
I walk these streets searching for a big break
The plan is to keep on trying through the performance
But dang, it's getting dark, so let me spell out why im here
I am from the S-C-R-I-P-T-C-A-B-I-N and we are meant to be
A cabin that changes the game
Meanwhile, our enemy cabin keeps putting us down endlessly
Essentially, they war us miserably
Then other cabins turns around, gaining lots of points
it seems like we will never be first
So there will be a fight to win the war
write with me (they are probably crazy)
Don't be shocked when you see our name at the top
I will write pages and pages to win for free
Eventually, you'll see it pay off
And I am not throwin' away my shot (my shot)
I am not throwin' away my shot (my shot)
Hey everybody, i'm just a theater kid
I'm young, ready, and willing
And I'm not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
Hey everybody, i'm just a theater kid
I'm young, ready and willing
And I'm not throwin' away my shot
It's time to take a shot
I dream of life where I can have the lead role and be on top
The unrest on stage will lead to chaos
Acting how you say, how you, oh, acting?
When I perform, it causes everyone to scatter
With my, shot
Hey, I'm just a theater kid
And I got the ability and I just need some help (needs some help)
I'm joining the script cabin ‘cause I know it’s my chance
To make an advance, instead of being in last (woo)
I'm gonna take a shot
And but we'll never truly shine
Until we perform they cant see our talent
You and I
now or never
Don't wait jump on the bandwagon
We are rolling their way
Have another shot
listen now friends
You keep on your toes looking for opportunities
I'm with you, I know you will shine
You've got to be vigilant
If you talk, choose your words wisely
remember you lines
Theater kids, tonight is the performance
I think your costume looks great
Tech, I love what you did
Let's hatch a plan, stay out of trouble
We need the opening night to run smoothly
When we speak the other cabins listen
A force like a hurricane to great to be ignored
Give me a position, show me what to do and Ill show the way
Oh, am I singing too loud?
Sometimes I get over excited, so pumped to be on the stage
I never met any campers like you
I promise that I'll make ya'll super proud
Let's get this kid in the spotlight
I am not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
Hey everybody, i'm just a theater kid
I'm young, ready and willing
And I'm not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
Hey everybody, im just a theater kid
I'm young, scrappy and hungry
And I'm not throwin' away my shot
Everybody sing
Whoa, whoa, whoa
Ayy, whoa (woo), whoa
let the sound ring (yeah)
Let's go go go
Whoa, whoa, whoa
I said sing it all the way to the back rows
Whoa, whoa, whoa
sing all the way to the back rows
Whoa, whoa, whoa
A-come on (yeah)
Come on, let's go
stand up, take a bow
When your in this business you know how to, you stand up
Tell the other actors to stand up
Tell the tech to stand up
When are these kids gonna rise up? (Whoa, whoa)
When are these kids gonna rise up? (Whoa)
When are these kids gonna rise up? (Whoa)
When are these kids gonna rise up?
Stand up, take a bow
I imagine that spotlight so much it feels real
When's it gonna be my time?
How much do I have to write?
One day is my time coming?
Will I be on that stage finally?
See, I never thought that script cabin would make it this far
Where I started at and where I am now
Ask anybody that we are living fast and moving quick
We have to seize the moment
Cross that out this isn't moment, it's a movement among us
Don't we all have something to prove?
enemy cabins oppose us, we take our stand
We come in like a tide, claiming our land
And when we get through the performance
the world is gonna know our name
Or will it just fall to pieces?
No, I know that we can mark our place
I've been studying scripts and writing the dalies
We need to write that weekly now to get the points
Are we a cabin united? or a cabin divided?
I'm past taking our time waiting for word wars and cabin wars
Every action we take has an equal and opposite reaction
So lets cause a scene and create a commotion
thinking like this till the end of the session
And I am not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
Hey everybody, i'm just a theater kid
I'm young, ready and willing
And I'm not throwin' away my shot
We're gonna stand up, take a bow
I am not throwin' away my shot (time to take a shot)
We're gonna stand up, take a bow
I am not throwin' away my shot (time to take a shot)
We're gonna, stand up, stand up take a bow
It's time to take a shot
stand up, stand up take a bow
It's time to take a shot
Stand up, it's time to take a shot
Rise up, take a shot, shot, shot
Ay, yo, it's time to take a shot, time to take a shot
And I am not throwin' away my
Not throwin' away my shot!

part 4 - Story Set In The Cabin:
The first thing that went wrong that night was the costumes. The freshmen had somehow managed to spill something dark that almost looked like ink from a pen all over the basketball uniforms. “This dress rehearsal better not be a train wreck.” Alana muttered from where she sat in the corner stretching. “We need this to run smoothly for opening night.” Everybody else nearby nodded their heads in agreement. In the middle of Status Quo is when the next big mishap came around. “aah!” Dalia screamed as she ran out of the way of the big East High sign as it came crashing down to the ground. Her Sharpay hat falls to the ground and she scrambles to pick it up. “Why is the set falling down?” she asks in an irritated tone and backs away from the damage. Some of the tech kids come up with tools to put it back in place and hopefully make it stay in place this time. “Chop chop children, we need to get back on schedule.” The drama club teacher Mrs. Yume says to everyone and waves them back onto stage once everything is fixed. The scene continues as normal and everyone sounds fine. Everything on set is okay for the next twenty minutes until Mildred who was playing Taylor tripped while they were doing a scene with the mathletes. “Ow! Ow! I think I twisted my ankle.” She says with a grimace of pain and Chocolate comes over to help take her to the nurse to get it checked. Leo walks over to one of the stables and stands on top of it. “Hey everybody!” She shouts and looks around and waits till she has all of their attention. “So everything has gone wrong today? We just need to keep going! It’s only a dress rehearsal. We will get better with each run through.” Everybody cheers and shouts at her words and she smiles. Maybe the dress rehearsal won’t be too bad after all.
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swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

Daily 13th november - story based on a song
Hotel for clowns – chloe moriondo
tw : creepy , ketchup
The lights flickered, and the echo of footsteps sounded in the hallway, though Ella was sitting.

She glanced at the ceiling, and a green substance fell from the ceiling. They jumped up, repulsed, and their heart beat fast, quickening with each step.
The sardonic laughter echoed in the white hospital - looking corridor.
The room began to spin, with a bloody faced smile appeared from behind the corner. Ella ran the corner opposite, shoes squeaking on the shiny floor.
' sweetie~ ‘ a sing-song voice uttered. ’ don't run now, i'll catch you. ‘. Ella shut her eyes, but she didn’t, the light just flickered off. They ran, ran and ran, but however far she ran, the corridor stretched out ahead, seconds past, minutes, hours? it felt like a never-ending nightmare, like they'd never be rid. Noticing the same smile glowing out of the pitch black corridor, they knew the end was coming already. They dropped to their knees, and red splatters shone on the floor. The Light turned on again, its last sputter for help, and a radio sound, like the dying television sputtered out of teh darkness, then the figure turned, and disappeared. Ella, weak with relief, fell to the ground, and when she stood again, she was standing at teh edge of a murky still-water pool. A splash, the splash of her back hitting the water.
Black.
strang3rthing
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swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

sakurakitty0212 wrote:

Weekly for sci fi by Dalia

part 1 - 189 words
part 2 - set is on my set acc @cyberhrtz
part 3 - 1123 words
part 4 - 332 words
total - 1644 words (I wrote way more than required )

part 1 - Script Cabin Storyline:
Tonight is the night of the drama society's big production. Earlier on in the year you had tried out for the main role but alas, you were given the role of understudy. You hear a knock at the dressing room door and suddenly turn around. “Who is it?” You call out since you don't have long till its time to go out on stage and perform. “Can I come in?” A girl's voice asks and you open the door to reveal one of the girls, Dalia in the drama club. “I know that you were cast as the understudy for the lead role and we really need you to go on tonight. The main lead got sick and we have had a bunch of mishaps with the set. Can you please help?” She asks and grabs the costume and hands it to you. “Okay, I'll do it, let me pull on the costume and fix my hair.” You say and slide on the costume. “Come on, we can't be too late.” Dalia says and grabs your hand to lead you along. This is sure to be an interesting performance.

part 2 - Aesthetic Set:
@cyberhrtz (my set acc). Its the most recent set posted

part 3 - My Shot Parody:
I am not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
Hey everybody, i'm just a theater kid
I'm young, ready, and willing
And I'm not throwin' away my shot
I'mma get a lead role in the play
I probably shouldn't brag, but dang, I amaze and astonish everyone
The problem is I got a lot of talent but no luck
I gotta sing loud just to be heard
With every line, I drop promise
I'm a diamond in the rough, a rose waiting to bloom
Tryna reach my goal the main lead, unstoppable
Only thirteen but my ability is stronger
These stage floors getting warmer, I take on
Every challenge, every trial
I have learned to manage, but I don't have a leg to stand on
I walk these streets searching for a big break
The plan is to keep on trying through the performance
But dang, it's getting dark, so let me spell out why im here
I am from the S-C-R-I-P-T-C-A-B-I-N and we are meant to be
A cabin that changes the game
Meanwhile, our enemy cabin keeps putting us down endlessly
Essentially, they war us miserably
Then other cabins turns around, gaining lots of points
it seems like we will never be first
So there will be a fight to win the war
write with me (they are probably crazy)
Don't be shocked when you see our name at the top
I will write pages and pages to win for free
Eventually, you'll see it pay off
And I am not throwin' away my shot (my shot)
I am not throwin' away my shot (my shot)
Hey everybody, i'm just a theater kid
I'm young, ready, and willing
And I'm not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
Hey everybody, i'm just a theater kid
I'm young, ready and willing
And I'm not throwin' away my shot
It's time to take a shot
I dream of life where I can have the lead role and be on top
The unrest on stage will lead to chaos
Acting how you say, how you, oh, acting?
When I perform, it causes everyone to scatter
With my, shot
Hey, I'm just a theater kid
And I got the ability and I just need some help (needs some help)
I'm joining the script cabin ‘cause I know it’s my chance
To make an advance, instead of being in last (woo)
I'm gonna take a shot
And but we'll never truly shine
Until we perform they cant see our talent
You and I
now or never
Don't wait jump on the bandwagon
We are rolling their way
Have another shot
listen now friends
You keep on your toes looking for opportunities
I'm with you, I know you will shine
You've got to be vigilant
If you talk, choose your words wisely
remember you lines
Theater kids, tonight is the performance
I think your costume looks great
Tech, I love what you did
Let's hatch a plan, stay out of trouble
We need the opening night to run smoothly
When we speak the other cabins listen
A force like a hurricane to great to be ignored
Give me a position, show me what to do and Ill show the way
Oh, am I singing too loud?
Sometimes I get over excited, so pumped to be on the stage
I never met any campers like you
I promise that I'll make ya'll super proud
Let's get this kid in the spotlight
I am not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
Hey everybody, i'm just a theater kid
I'm young, ready and willing
And I'm not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
Hey everybody, im just a theater kid
I'm young, scrappy and hungry
And I'm not throwin' away my shot
Everybody sing
Whoa, whoa, whoa
Ayy, whoa (woo), whoa
let the sound ring (yeah)
Let's go go go
Whoa, whoa, whoa
I said sing it all the way to the back rows
Whoa, whoa, whoa
sing all the way to the back rows
Whoa, whoa, whoa
A-come on (yeah)
Come on, let's go
stand up, take a bow
When your in this business you know how to, you stand up
Tell the other actors to stand up
Tell the tech to stand up
When are these kids gonna rise up? (Whoa, whoa)
When are these kids gonna rise up? (Whoa)
When are these kids gonna rise up? (Whoa)
When are these kids gonna rise up?
Stand up, take a bow
I imagine that spotlight so much it feels real
When's it gonna be my time?
How much do I have to write?
One day is my time coming?
Will I be on that stage finally?
See, I never thought that script cabin would make it this far
Where I started at and where I am now
Ask anybody that we are living fast and moving quick
We have to seize the moment
Cross that out this isn't moment, it's a movement among us
Don't we all have something to prove?
enemy cabins oppose us, we take our stand
We come in like a tide, claiming our land
And when we get through the performance
the world is gonna know our name
Or will it just fall to pieces?
No, I know that we can mark our place
I've been studying scripts and writing the dalies
We need to write that weekly now to get the points
Are we a cabin united? or a cabin divided?
I'm past taking our time waiting for word wars and cabin wars
Every action we take has an equal and opposite reaction
So lets cause a scene and create a commotion
thinking like this till the end of the session
And I am not throwin' away my shot
I am not throwin' away my shot
Hey everybody, i'm just a theater kid
I'm young, ready and willing
And I'm not throwin' away my shot
We're gonna stand up, take a bow
I am not throwin' away my shot (time to take a shot)
We're gonna stand up, take a bow
I am not throwin' away my shot (time to take a shot)
We're gonna, stand up, stand up take a bow
It's time to take a shot
stand up, stand up take a bow
It's time to take a shot
Stand up, it's time to take a shot
Rise up, take a shot, shot, shot
Ay, yo, it's time to take a shot, time to take a shot
And I am not throwin' away my
Not throwin' away my shot!

part 4 - Story Set In The Cabin:
The first thing that went wrong that night was the costumes. The freshmen had somehow managed to spill something dark that almost looked like ink from a pen all over the basketball uniforms. “This dress rehearsal better not be a train wreck.” Alana muttered from where she sat in the corner stretching. “We need this to run smoothly for opening night.” Everybody else nearby nodded their heads in agreement. In the middle of Status Quo is when the next big mishap came around. “aah!” Dalia screamed as she ran out of the way of the big East High sign as it came crashing down to the ground. Her Sharpay hat falls to the ground and she scrambles to pick it up. “Why is the set falling down?” she asks in an irritated tone and backs away from the damage. Some of the tech kids come up with tools to put it back in place and hopefully make it stay in place this time. “Chop chop children, we need to get back on schedule.” The drama club teacher Mrs. Yume says to everyone and waves them back onto stage once everything is fixed. The scene continues as normal and everyone sounds fine. Everything on set is okay for the next twenty minutes until Mildred who was playing Taylor tripped while they were doing a scene with the mathletes. “Ow! Ow! I think I twisted my ankle.” She says with a grimace of pain and Chocolate comes over to help take her to the nurse to get it checked. Leo walks over to one of the stables and stands on top of it. “Hey everybody!” She shouts and looks around and waits till she has all of their attention. “So everything has gone wrong today? We just need to keep going! It’s only a dress rehearsal. We will get better with each run through.” Everybody cheers and shouts at her words and she smiles. Maybe the dress rehearsal won’t be too bad after all.
Bootiful
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swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

Words: 123 (excluding quotes <3)

Hey! You did a great job on your lipogram! I’m impressed, you didn’t use B at all! Great work! Here are some notes I had, and I understand that since it’s a lipogram, you couldn’t use a certain letter, so Bear with me! XD

The sailor, his face grimy and weary
I think that you mean “grimey”.

The man hurriedly slicked forward (imagine in the opposite direction) his hair with a whale-tooth hair separating thing, squinting at his stained reflection in the stained and cracked glass plate on the wall.
I would try to reword this, while still keeping B out of the sentence. Here’s what I would do! “The man hurriedly worked his hair toward the rear of his head, using a small row of whale-teeth to do the task as he squinted…”

Overall, this was a pretty great job at a lipogram! I enjoyed reading it, and it left me wanting more. I’m so sorry for not getting to this sooner!
TheDisney_Writer
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swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

November 13th Daily: Song based paragraph
Song Chosen: This is what heartbreak feels like by JVKE (pronounced Jake)
Words: 212 words total

You said you loved me forever. We saw where that went you lying snake. You slither around hurting people with your venomous words. You cheated on me just to hurt me. You are no lover, you are a lying, cheating traitor. Every time, I see you; I get anxious and scared. The scars you put on me open and my wounded heart starts to heart. The day you left, I cried in the bathroom, sad with all we had and all you left. I looked back at what you did, the signs of turning into a snake. The hidden phone, late nights out, the losing love. I didn’t want to know but you still broke my heart. I try to stop the thoughts but it’s coming back at me, nagging at me, hurting my head. I can barely sleep at night without knowing or thinking about what you did. You hurt me, you lied to me, you cheated on me. What would you say if I confronted you? What would you do if you knew that I know what you did? These thoughts come back at me every second. I can’t stop without remembering the pain you gave me. I thought you loved me, but you were just a pretty little liar.
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swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

Daily 13
240 words

Song: The Moon Will Sing by the Crane Wives

We were like the sun and the moon.

You were the sun, gazing down over me with your dazzling brilliance, blinding me with your beauty. Your blazing brightness blocked out everything else, leaving only you in my sight.
I was the moon, shy and peaceful. I cowered behind you, only seen in darkness, when you hid, terrified that your stunning vision would be swallowed. However, when I escaped from your golden glow, I was like a proud mighty queen, a halo of light shimmering around me. Yet you were the cloud that blotted out the rare moment of harmony in the world. You tried to steal the spotlight. And you stole the only thing I had left. My light.

At moments I looked up at you and could think of nothing but your loveliness, yet sometimes I stood terrified, frozen, bathed in your overwhelming power. You seemed like the light of my life, yet you turned out to be the shadow, making me seem weak. I felt like there was nothing left to be lived for. But then I realised there was. I had to live to make you stop feeling that sickly pride when you knew that you had destroyed me. I knew I had to live happily and force myself to live. And one word keeps repeating itself to me. Over and over. Again and again. Revenge.
strang3rthing
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swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

Alfalfa78 wrote:

Daily!
I used Tidal Wave by Owl City <3


Beatrix stared blankly at the mirror, her golden eyes having lost their normal sheen. She was thinking of Liam, as much as she didn't want to admit it. She missed him when she thought of him.

Her heart ached faintly - a dull throb if she bothered to pay attention to it.

She missed his smile, and his inability to understand sarcasm.

She missed his laugh, and his dumb jokes.

But most of all she missed him.

She desperately wished she knew where he was now, what he was doing. But the galaxy was so big. She wished she could just click a button and hear him again.

Her reflection was blurry.

She let out a choked wet gasp and wiped at her eyes, getting the bandages on her hand wet. She wasn't crying. That was stupid. She was supposed to be calm and collected. The perfect Jedi.

Crying was for the weak. The ones who whined “life's not fair!”

She wasn't one of those people. She was strong - a survivor. She had lived by herself on the streets for years. Life wasn't fair, it never was. And it never seemed to give her a good hand.

-


Bea wished the stupid doors weren't the automatic sliding kind, that way she could slam the dumb thing. Her hands were shaking.

She had found him.

She had finally found him.

After five long, lonely years.

She had found him.

She had tried to reignite their friendship. So that they could have what they had once, all those years ago.

But he had thrown it to the side, like an old broken toy, something he didn't want anymore.

He had replaced her with someone new, someone “better.”

She slid down to the floor.

She had made the mistake of trusting someone.

She had offered her heart out to him, on a silver gleaming platter.

He had taken it - inspected it with a bored expression. And torn it in two.

That was why she never trusted anyone.

Her trust had ended up being broken.

Every.

Single.

Time.
Critque for @Alfalfa78

I love this! It's looks amazing, but maybe you could replace “he” in “But he had thrown it to the side.” With Leo's name again because It sounds like it would make a little sense if you repeat it a couple times. I might edit this later to see if I can add anything else! But overall it's amazing!! .

Last edited by strang3rthing (Nov. 13, 2024 20:34:13)

TheDisney_Writer
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swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

10th-November 16th: Cabin Creation Weekly

Part 1- Storyline Description:

You and your friends come across this path while hiking. Your friends convinced you to go so you went. There is a weird symbol on the only two oak trees in the cherry wood forest. You trace the lines with your finger and the symbol glows blue. There is a faint blue light in between the two trees. Inside your mind, you think to go through to see what is out there. You friends are thinking the same thing. You all walk through to reveal an ancient oak tree forest full of mushrooms and flowers. You realize the trees were portals to this beautiful, hidden forest. A strange shadow of a figure comes across the floor and you look around to find a small gnome in front of you. The gnome speaks, “Welcome to the Poetry Forest! Where gnomes of all sizes roam free. I see that you are intrigued by our forest. Come and we shall show you our town in style.” The gnome waves his carved stick to reveal magic dust all around. “Come along, children! The town is waiting for you all.”

Part 2-Aesthetic Set:

The aesthetic set can be found on my profile and this project link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1096135146

Part 3- Song Parody(Song: Dear Reader by Peggy) :

This must be what the authors write about.
All the vanished greed has gone away in the wind.
This is different, I can tell.
This must be what Homer dreamed about.
The forest is full of mushrooms and flowers.
All around the town.
So just imagine that I can help you to protect this town.
Let me use your magic of the ancient land.
Please let me aid you with the poems.
Promise that you’ll choose me
Choose me to stay.
This must be what the writers write about.
The fantasy of the forest
Can’t you see that I’ll try to help guard the ancient trees?
So just imagine that I can help you rule this land.
Let me know your culture and your opinions
Please let me help write some pieces
Promise that you’ll choose me.
Choose me again.
Stories end and pages fall.
Overtime this land gets filled,
With magic, ancient art and writing.
Gnomes of all sizes live in harmony, harmony, harmony.
I’ll help you protect this magic town.
Swear my life to use my magic for you
I will write the pieces that I promised you I would.
I promise you I’m worth choosing again.
I’m worth choosing again.

Part 4-Short Story:

Mackenzie held her walking stick firmly on her hand. Her friends insisted that she go on a hike with them. She didn’t think it would be so long. “I wish I was at home.” Mackenzie thought. That is until everything changed. Something in the corner of her eye caught her attention. It was two oak trees leaning to make an arch. “How is this possible?” Mackenzie said. Two oak trees in a cherrywood forest doesn’t make a lot of sense. Mackenzie walked towards the ark, curiosity getting the best of her. She looked closely at the trees. You could tell how old they were by all the lines. “They must be at least 500 years old. That’s impossible.” Mackenzie noticed something carved in the tree. It looked like an oval but wasn’t finished. It had two lines going vertically and one horizontally. She traced the shape with her finger. Suddenly, it glowed dark blue. Mackenzie, startled, jumped back, and saw a faint blue dust coming from the middle of the ark. Her friends noticed her and walked behind her. “Hey…what are you doing?” Sasha asked. Mackenzie too focused on the ark, walked in between and disappeared with her friends following. There was a cold wind blowing around them until the movement stopped. A beautiful oak tree forest with a lake as big as a park in the middle. The trees were covered with red and blue mushrooms and flowers covered every sight of green. Pinecones laid on the ground, silent but important. Mackenzie stepped forward, taking in her surroundings. There was a rustle in the distance, and everyone stopped. Dozens of shadowy figures as high as the pinecones on the ground surrounded them. They had unique weapons in hand. Some had ink spear and others had pen swords ready to swish at any given time. An old creature came out, holding a walking stick. He had a white beard and white hair. He had a blue robe with designs of magic swirling around. He spoke in a strong, firm voice. “Reveal yourselves mysterious one or you shall feel the wrath of Homer’s gnomes.” “What? Gnomes?” Mackenzie spoke. The old gnome stopped, took a look, and straightened himself. “I am terribly sorry Mackenzie. You might have been startled. My name is Betroth. I am the leader of the ancient gnome civilization.” Makenzie stood there, starstruck. She had millions of questions. Before Mackenzie could ask those questions, Betroth spoke again. “You may ask how I know your name. Come with me and I will explain all it is you need to know! Come along now.” Mackenzie and her friends followed, oblivious to what they might walk into.

Words:

Part 1- 185 words
Part 2-…….
Part 3- 201 words
Part 4- 445 words
Total: 831 words


Last edited by TheDisney_Writer (Nov. 15, 2024 21:10:16)

Runaway--
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swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

Daily!! - Story based on a song
Harpy hare - 356 words

Out of the city, where the edge of the land shrinks away from the sea and the landscape is full of towering pine trees and matching hills, there rests the sleepy village of Eldrdel. The children of Eldrdel stay within the walls of the town- the forest is not safe for the young.

Perhaps it’s a myth, or a result of fear- but any children who make it into the trees come back changed. Different. Blabbering about a bird with wings larger than the whole town, and a hare that sits on a treestump. Watching, waiting- while wings spread behind it in a halo of feathers.

Did I say those who come back? They are boring. The true story lies in those who don’t, and are instead taken down, down, deep into the earth where the rabbit’s warren stretches in an endless twisting maze of tunnels.

Harpy, Hare, where have you buried all your children?

Deep beneath your very feet, stranger.

Perhaps it is a blessing, for those taken. After all, who wouldn’t want eternal youth- years to play and chase and run as if it’s just been moments?

But good things don’t last for ever, and slowly, surely, the children change.

The fastest grow shorter, quicker. Their ears grow and their feet snap against the earth, and soon they too are hares, ready to emerge to the surface once more. The town is not their own, anymore. Their home is the warren.

But not all of the children become hares. Others find themselves waking covered in feathers, with beaks sharp as blades. And they throw back their heads in a laughing caw, because isn’t it every child’s wish to fly?

Harpy, hare, where have you buried all your children?

We are right before you, dear stranger.

So when you hear the pounds of a million tiny feet against the dirt in the depth of night, or the swoop of unseen wings above your heads, take a moment to remember. Remember the whispers of the fearful in the night. Remember the words of those stolen. And remember them- the harpies, and the hares.
opheliio
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100+ posts

swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

based on “hot to go!” by chappell roan

“jessie, we’re going to be late!”
“coming!”
“now, jay! we’ve got to leave fifteen minutes ago!”
still staring herself down in the mirror, jessie widened her eyes and puffed up her cheeks. nearly two hours she had been hunched over at her desk, trying to perfect the look. it was halloween, which meant the hollyville rink was hosting its haunted house and annual midnight derby tournament. not actually at midnight, heavens knew, but sundown derby didn’t sound nearly as cool.
it was halloween, and dell was going as a pirate, so jessie was surprising her as a siren. with only a cursory understanding of makeup and facepaint, she’d managed the green-and-blue scaled look. the magazine advising her suggested blood red lips, and jessie thought it really completed the look. she had covered her helmet in netting and shells, and her costume was flowy, torn, and deliciously hot.
“jessica may thomas, get down here now!”
right. she jumped up, enjoying the clacking the beads in her hair made with such quick movement, and shot the mirror a final toothy grin. dell would love the costume, she just knew.
jessie raced down the stairs, jumping the final two and landing right at the front door where her mother looked down, unamused. then, shaking her head, she cracked a grin and tossed jessie the pickup’s keys.
“remember we’re picking up your grandfather,” she said as she walked out the front door. “and you better not have forgotten the takeout.”
FairyAyla
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100+ posts

swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

Daily 13:
I used the song Trouble by Shampoo

“We’re stuck!” Shelley screamed, “Shut up! We’ll get home fine!” Mary snapped at her “Okay, let’s calm down please” I said, as always being the voice of reason. “Well, how are we going to get home?” Shelley asked, looking like she might cry “Does anyone have their broom maybe?” I asked “I left mine at home” Shelley said.
“I, uh, don’t have mine either.” Mary said.
“Well, what do we do then?” I asked, my hands on my hips “Anyone have any ideas?”
“We could steal a car.” Mary suggested
“Any good ideas?"
“Hey! Stealing a car is a good idea!”
“Can any of us even drive?”
“That doesn’t matter, Banca!”
“There isn’t any cars here anyway!”
“There’s a car there” Shelley said, pointing a car.
“Shelley!” I whispered, glaring at her
“Sorry!”
“Come on, no time to argue!” Mary snapped
We sat in the car, Shelley in the back seat, me in the passengers seat, and Mary in the driver’s seat. “…Are you sure about this?” I asked, hoping we could turn back. I don’t know why i thought it would work though “Nope.” Mary said. “Everyone ready?” Mary asked “Um, yeah.” Shelley said
“No.” I said.
“Too bad.” Mary said, gripping the steering wheel and pressing the gas petal. We all braced our selfs. Nothing happened. “Oh. There aren’t any keys.” I said. “Well, time to go!” I said, getting ready to unbuckle myself. “Not so fast, Banca.” Oh no, I thought. Mary pulled out her wand, and whispered a spell. The car didn’t move. We all looked around. Then the car shot forward and we all screamed.

270 words.
unercornshine
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100+ posts

swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

Daily 13: get him back
(rushed, per usually xP) (omg, at the end I just start to waffle 4 words lol)
I ran my hand through my tangled hair, mustering the scraps of my dignity. I started at the mess of myself in the mirror.
“you're my only girl” he used to say. and I laughed maniacally at the lie, then peered at myself in the mirror.
“you're a wreck” the mirror whispered. and I smashed it to oblivion.
“I WANNA GET HIM BACK!” I screamed at no one “I WANNA GET HIM BACK SO BAD!” and I was sobbing now. “I want revenge!” whispering “but I miss him and it makes me real sad, oh”
reduced to sobbing in a pile of broken glass. this has what has become of me, this is what he made me, a pitiful, love-wrecked mad ol' lady.
and i'll rip his soul out for that, i'll hurt him so much, he won't know what hit him.
And i'll rip his heart, then be the one to stitch it right back up. I'll get him so good, hell be hatin' and lovin' me at the same time. yeh. hell be regretting all his life decissions.

203 words.
ChueyTheCat
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500+ posts

swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

Yay another daily im too lazy to make pretty, 600 words
the song is dont know how to stop by halestorm btw

She hadn’t said a word for five minutes. He wasn’t sure whether to be concerned or not.
“Thanks for coming,” he said finally, because it felt like the right thing to say.
She yanked on the wheel, and for a good few seconds he thought she’d just killed them both. But no, she was only turning a corner.
“Shut up, I’m driving,” was all she’d say in reply.
“Do you- OOF- have a license…?” he squeaked, sliding around in the backseat.
She turned around, snapping her gum angrily. In hindsight, talking to her was probably a really bad idea, for two reasons (both of which involved his safety being impaired). The first was that Vixen was obviously in a bad mood. The second was that she did things like turn around to glare at him while driving far faster than the speed limit, which he knew because they had just passed an extremely neon sign with comically large numbers on it. It practically had her name sprayed across it in white paint.
He wondered how much trouble he would get in for doing just that.
Mercifully, she turned back around in time to make another scream-worthy turn. He could hear the tires squealing.
“I came and got you, yeah? I don’t have a choice now. We’re getting out of this mess. Outta this place.”
Even from the back, he could see her feral grin. Vixen had always been a rebel. A scary one who knew how to wear pretty dresses and mascara just as well as she knew how to wear a leather jacket and combat boots.
Also, kind of a pretty and smart one. But that was way, way beside the point.
“I’m not sure I want to do this,” he admitted.
She slung an arm around the back of her chair, turning around again. She wasn’t glaring now, but her eyes were still full of fire.
“It’s too late now, kid. It’s been too late for years.”
“I’m not a kid,” he said, offended. “Aren’t we the same age? And if you don’t want me, then stop and I’ll go. I don’t know if I want to do this anyway.”
Miraculously, she slowed the car, almost within the speed limits.
“If you don’t want this, get out,” she said, but her back was to him once more and he couldn’t see her face.
He stopped, uncertain.
“You’re going to have to get out anyway, because we’re at your apartment. Grab your stuff and scoot back here if you’re coming.”
Grateful for an excuse to tumble out of the rattling hunk of junk that Vixen called a car, he scraped his belongings together as quickly as he could.
Vixen looked up when he reappeared, and for once her expression wasn’t snarky. Her customary smirk was gone.
“You don’t have to,” she said, staring fixedly at the dash.
“I don’t know,” he said, in what might have been one of the most honest moments of his life.
Vixen tightened her grip on the steering wheel. He hadn’t thought she cared so much.
“Do you trust me?”
He opened his mouth, not sure what answer was going to tumble out.
But the instant he said “Yes” he knew it was absolutely true. Vixen wasn’t a lot of things. But she was all the things that counted.
Slowly, the smirk returned to Vixen’s face.
“Then get in, kid. We’ve got a long way to go.”
“I told you, we’re the same age,” he protested.
But he was smiling too as he got back in the car.
He wasn’t going to regret this.

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-vanillamochabear-
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swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

daily nov 13th - story based off a song
sailor song - gigi perez
thunder rolled distantly off of the coast. all around her, there’s gray - the skies, which were ready to unleash their pain (but not quite yet), and the seas, which reflected the state of the sky. rolling waves that crashed onto pale sand and seaweed, the waters stirring up stark white seafoam. it looked soft, like she could sink her body into that vastness, never to be seen again and finally able to breathe. and then there’s the gray that’s lodged itself deep into her mind. the eyes of her lover, sparkling like moonlight in the dark, the crystals that met her own when they had a secret to share. (they’re kind, above all. ready to catch her when she freefalls.)
here, in this moment, she remembered. a laugh sweet as windchimes, a personality like that of a running river. she frowned, bringing her legs closer to her body on this shore. the wind swept around her like a gentle caress, and she could almost feel the ghost of another timeline. right there, corners of paper overlapping, but so far away. that cave in her heart ached, a spot void of any sun, and her soul knew it would never (truly) be warmed. not with the soft summer rains or all the violence of a wintry sea storm.
electricity arced across the sky, bringing first light and then shadow. here, in this gray, she played with the notes on her guitar.
Le_lake
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63 posts

swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

11/13/24 - 234 words
❝ Striking at a wall, not waiting, not waiting, one moment more ❞

The clash of swords sounds like music to Rowan, only sweetened by the familiar tune of grunts and distress. He takes a step back, a manic grin on his face, and twirls his sword before lunging into the fray again. A giggle escapes from his mouth as he dodges and weaves. God, he loves this.
“Freak”, someone spits at Rowan.
It takes him a moment to realize they’re talking to him. And, though the label makes sense, given his obvious enjoyment of this total carnage, he has a reputation to maintain. He flicks a wrist and manages to pin the man to a wall, eyes sparkling all the while.
“Say it again and I’ll cut your tongue out.”
The man has the gall to begin to open his mouth, and he covers it. “It’s generally not advised to talk back to noted sociopaths.” Rowan flashes him a winning smile and skips away, slashing at anyone who is foolish enough to come within a foot of him. He loves his job. Well, technically total all out war isn’t his job, but making a change in the world is! And war certainly changes things. No one ever told him the change had to be positive! (He’s near certain that someone has actually told him that, but he certainly didn’t listen.) He twirls once more, killing several people with his needless flamboyance. Truly music to his ears.
KrisAsInHemsworth
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2 posts

swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024

Daily 11/14 for Paranormal <3

God, she’s so pretty. I sit next to her, writing nothings on my page. When she looks over at Halley, smiling, my pen speeds up. My left hand draws away from the paper, resting absently by the side of my chair. My dialogue’s never been forced with her, but I just can’t think of any words to say when I walk behind her in the halls, when she and Halley are hand in hand. Why do I pay so much attention to her, we’re just friends. She won’t even like me. At least she likes girls, but that’s not much comfort when she walks by. I see the little details of her face; we’re face to face as she leans over to get something from her bag. Oh, who cares what the teacher’s saying, this is a once-in-a-lifetime experience I’ve had so many times, so many times never appreciated. Everything has changed. But it’s all the same, the same as Katie and Justina, nothing’s really changed. I see my paper, covered in nothings, your name over and over, Allie and Allie and Allie and Allie. Absently her hand drifts towards mine, and I’m hyper aware, at least more than I have been, but you don’t notice what you’re doing to me. You look at Halley and you smile but I am dying inside, I am not the same, we’re not the same, Allie and Halley and I. Why do you like her, I’m just like you and I can’t take her, maybe I’m not like you. And you hold her hand and rest your head on hers, how is that comfortable? And I love you Allie I don’t care, I don’t care, Allie, no one will replace you but I ask, what can she do I cannot, could she write a better song?

And I know that you don’t like me, and what you choose will be okay with me. And I’ll forget about those days, where I looked at you like that, but.
It’ll take a long time to go back to being friends.

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