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- silverlynx-
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Daily 8
Warning: Some people may find the descriptions mildly disturbing
(This is based of Frankenstein, written by Mary Shelley)
I gazed at the bubbling measuring cylinders in wonder. They fizzed and gurgled, with the occasional burst of liquid jumping out. I glanced down at the large beaker in my hand. It was now or never. A feeling of ecstasy flooded through me, along with a spark of apprehension. What would happen?
I closed my eyes and inhaled. I could do this. I slowly stepped forwards, each step my eyes growing gradually wider and wider. A single tear rolled down my cheek. After this I would have eternal fame. A soft smile played on my lips. I pulled on my leather gloves and picked up two of the cylinders gently. For a moment I was transfixed by the vibrant liquids. Then I poured them into the beaker. I watched in fascinated horror as the two liquids blended together: a neon bright pink and a soft sickly mauve. I then added the pale green liquid. I braced myself in excitement for what was going to happen next.
With a throaty roar, some sort of figure emerged from the beaker, about the size of my hand. It leaped onto the counter, gradually forming a larger and larger body, some sort of cloaking draping its slimy shoulders.
I had created a monster.
My jaw hung open as I watched on in terror, my heart thumping steadily faster and faster inside my chest.
What had I done?
Its eyes blinked open, a milky white covered in a slimy sheen. Drips of the cursed mixture I had created dripped off its chin, singing holes in the rickety wooden floor. As it rose to its full height, its head bumped on the ceiling, and it held up a withered hand to it, a confused expression drifting over its face.
“W-Who are you?” I asked tentatively, stepping forwards. My legs trembled as I approached the petrifying monster. My blood was like ice in my veins. All I wanted to do was run. I would burn down the house for all I cared. I would happily watch amber flames greedily consume the house and the monster. I just wanted to stay away from it.
It looked up at me, cracks forming over its lips as it opened its mouth in a silent scream. Then its eyes rolled back in its head and it tumbled to the floor with a mighty crash. I braced myself to fall through to the ground floor but nothing happened.
I crawled over to have a closer look at the monster. Its lips were dripping with mauve liquid and its face was withered and decaying. I leaned in closer, sucking in my breath. Then it snapped open its eyes and the last thing I saw was a long thin hand reaching towards me before I was knocked out cold on the floor, enveloped in darkness.
Warning: Some people may find the descriptions mildly disturbing
(This is based of Frankenstein, written by Mary Shelley)
I gazed at the bubbling measuring cylinders in wonder. They fizzed and gurgled, with the occasional burst of liquid jumping out. I glanced down at the large beaker in my hand. It was now or never. A feeling of ecstasy flooded through me, along with a spark of apprehension. What would happen?
I closed my eyes and inhaled. I could do this. I slowly stepped forwards, each step my eyes growing gradually wider and wider. A single tear rolled down my cheek. After this I would have eternal fame. A soft smile played on my lips. I pulled on my leather gloves and picked up two of the cylinders gently. For a moment I was transfixed by the vibrant liquids. Then I poured them into the beaker. I watched in fascinated horror as the two liquids blended together: a neon bright pink and a soft sickly mauve. I then added the pale green liquid. I braced myself in excitement for what was going to happen next.
With a throaty roar, some sort of figure emerged from the beaker, about the size of my hand. It leaped onto the counter, gradually forming a larger and larger body, some sort of cloaking draping its slimy shoulders.
I had created a monster.
My jaw hung open as I watched on in terror, my heart thumping steadily faster and faster inside my chest.
What had I done?
Its eyes blinked open, a milky white covered in a slimy sheen. Drips of the cursed mixture I had created dripped off its chin, singing holes in the rickety wooden floor. As it rose to its full height, its head bumped on the ceiling, and it held up a withered hand to it, a confused expression drifting over its face.
“W-Who are you?” I asked tentatively, stepping forwards. My legs trembled as I approached the petrifying monster. My blood was like ice in my veins. All I wanted to do was run. I would burn down the house for all I cared. I would happily watch amber flames greedily consume the house and the monster. I just wanted to stay away from it.
It looked up at me, cracks forming over its lips as it opened its mouth in a silent scream. Then its eyes rolled back in its head and it tumbled to the floor with a mighty crash. I braced myself to fall through to the ground floor but nothing happened.
I crawled over to have a closer look at the monster. Its lips were dripping with mauve liquid and its face was withered and decaying. I leaned in closer, sucking in my breath. Then it snapped open its eyes and the last thing I saw was a long thin hand reaching towards me before I was knocked out cold on the floor, enveloped in darkness.
- sakurakitty0212
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Scratcher
77 posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Week 1 weekly
part 1 - 473 words
part 2 - 80 words
part 3 - 321 words
part 4 - 234 words
total - 1108 words
Part 1:
I had had a long day already and everything was not going my way. First this morning I missed my alarm clock. Then I missed my bus and had to get a ride from my next door neighbor. For the cherry on top someone spilled their coffee all over my brand new converses. “Excuse me. Move out of the way.” A British accent calls out from behind me and I turn around from my locker. Ugh great it could only be one person. The exchange student Oliver Pendleton. Ridiculously hot and annoying. Wait no i'm not supposed to think that. “What do you want, run along and go drink your tea or whatever it is you British people do.” I grumble and grab my books and slam the locker door shut. He scrunches his nose and gives me a disdainful look. “I would just like to get to my locker.” He replied in a short clipped tone. Mrs.Morrow the administrator comes walking down the hall and asks “Is everything alright Oliver?” His demeanor with me immediately switches to a more formal and polite tone. “Yes, everything is quite fine. How are you today?” She falls hook, line, and sinker for his little act. He smiles at her and acts the part of a good student most likely to just irk me off. When Mrs. Morrow walks away under my breath I mutter “Yes, Mrs. Morrow! How are you today Mrs. Morrow!” And roll my eyes. Oliver turns back to look at me and with frustrated sigh runs his hand through his sandy blonde hair which honestly looks really soft and smooth. Wait no, get a grip on yourself. “Really quite mature of you Elle. Can’t you just quit sniping at me for a moment, Couldn’t we just make a deal?” This caused me to halt in place as I was getting ready to walk away. “A deal?” I asked him. “Yes, a deal. If you quit acting like you've got a snake in your pants every time you see me then I’ll be civilized with you in return. I just want to get to my classes in peace every morning without this garbage.” Oliver Pendleton being civilized. I had never thought that I would live to see the day where that happened. “Elle? Hello, are you listening to me?” I snap back to reality. “I suppose you have a deal Oliver.” I say to him and we shake on it. “Good, a snarky attitude never suited a pretty girl like you.” He says and walks away. It takes me a moment to recognize what he is saying and I blush at his words. “Hey wait up!” I call after him as he keeps on walking down the hallway. Why does he have to be so cute and infuriating at the same time.
Part 2:
Abby sighs and rolls her eyes. “Let's go speed racer.” She says to her little brother Max. “I know but why do we have to?’ He groans and slumps against the wall. “It's all do this! Do that! And no you're doing that wrong!” His voice rises an octave and he clenches his fists in frustration. “The sooner you go, the sooner we can leave.” Abby grumbles mostly to herself. She stalks out the door and slams it behind her.
Part 3:
Two girls sit at a table for two in the middle of a small cafe. Dalia is sitting relaxed in her chair and enjoying the place while Leo is tense and looks uncomfortable. “Well, we did a good job evading them back in New York. I don't think that Rosetta is going to look in this town in the middle of nowhere.” Leo takes a sip of her coffee and says “I think that I'm going to need some more caffeine if this is going to be our life now.” She rubs her eyes sleepily. Both girls hadn't had a chance at getting a good night's sleep in weeks and had dark circles under their eyes. “We barely made it out alive when she sent all of her little minions after us. I'm sure she's got some tricks up her sleeve and is just waiting for the time to strike.” Dalia gave a shrug as she flipped through the magazine she had open in front of her. ‘Leo relax, we are fine and nothing bad is going to happen.” She says as Leo nervously taps the edge of her coffee cup and glances around the cafe. “Dalia, what if they find us? We are on the run from a literal psychopath.” She says in a whisper and leans in. “We aren't safe here.” Dalia shuts the magazine and looks up at her. “What's the worst thing that could happen? They come bursting through the door armed and ready to take us down?” Suddenly the door flies open with an ear splitting crash and three heavily armed men come running through the door. The two girls shoot up immediately. “Okay time to go.” Dalia says and drops a few bucks on the table. They sprint towards the back through the kitchen as the men shout after them and shoot. They duck and dodge, narrowly missing getting hit. So much for being safe.
Part 4:
Scene opens to a backyard party. It's set around nighttime and the two main characters are sitting on a swing together.
Pans in on the two of them
DJ
I'm really glad that you could come tonight. This party wouldn't have been the same without you.
ADELINE
You're honestly the only reason that I came.
Blushes slightly and averts her gaze
DJ
Oh come on now, don't look away. There was something that I wanted to talk to you about.
Places his hand on top of hers and takes a deep breath
Cuts to DJ
DJ
I like you a lot. I have for a long time and I just haven't known how to tell you. Every single time I look at you feels like my heart might explode out of my chest and I don't know how to breathe. You're kind, smart, incredibly beautiful, and have an amazing personality. I'm tired of trying to pretend that I don't have feelings for you and I just want to know if you feel the same.
Back to showing the two of them
She looks back up at him, her gaze softens and she wraps her fingers around his. Their faces are only inches away from each other now.
ADELINE
I really like you too, DJ. I'm glad that you finally told me.
He places his hand on her cheek and smiles at her.
End scene
part 1 - 473 words
part 2 - 80 words
part 3 - 321 words
part 4 - 234 words
total - 1108 words
Part 1:
I had had a long day already and everything was not going my way. First this morning I missed my alarm clock. Then I missed my bus and had to get a ride from my next door neighbor. For the cherry on top someone spilled their coffee all over my brand new converses. “Excuse me. Move out of the way.” A British accent calls out from behind me and I turn around from my locker. Ugh great it could only be one person. The exchange student Oliver Pendleton. Ridiculously hot and annoying. Wait no i'm not supposed to think that. “What do you want, run along and go drink your tea or whatever it is you British people do.” I grumble and grab my books and slam the locker door shut. He scrunches his nose and gives me a disdainful look. “I would just like to get to my locker.” He replied in a short clipped tone. Mrs.Morrow the administrator comes walking down the hall and asks “Is everything alright Oliver?” His demeanor with me immediately switches to a more formal and polite tone. “Yes, everything is quite fine. How are you today?” She falls hook, line, and sinker for his little act. He smiles at her and acts the part of a good student most likely to just irk me off. When Mrs. Morrow walks away under my breath I mutter “Yes, Mrs. Morrow! How are you today Mrs. Morrow!” And roll my eyes. Oliver turns back to look at me and with frustrated sigh runs his hand through his sandy blonde hair which honestly looks really soft and smooth. Wait no, get a grip on yourself. “Really quite mature of you Elle. Can’t you just quit sniping at me for a moment, Couldn’t we just make a deal?” This caused me to halt in place as I was getting ready to walk away. “A deal?” I asked him. “Yes, a deal. If you quit acting like you've got a snake in your pants every time you see me then I’ll be civilized with you in return. I just want to get to my classes in peace every morning without this garbage.” Oliver Pendleton being civilized. I had never thought that I would live to see the day where that happened. “Elle? Hello, are you listening to me?” I snap back to reality. “I suppose you have a deal Oliver.” I say to him and we shake on it. “Good, a snarky attitude never suited a pretty girl like you.” He says and walks away. It takes me a moment to recognize what he is saying and I blush at his words. “Hey wait up!” I call after him as he keeps on walking down the hallway. Why does he have to be so cute and infuriating at the same time.
Part 2:
Abby sighs and rolls her eyes. “Let's go speed racer.” She says to her little brother Max. “I know but why do we have to?’ He groans and slumps against the wall. “It's all do this! Do that! And no you're doing that wrong!” His voice rises an octave and he clenches his fists in frustration. “The sooner you go, the sooner we can leave.” Abby grumbles mostly to herself. She stalks out the door and slams it behind her.
Part 3:
Two girls sit at a table for two in the middle of a small cafe. Dalia is sitting relaxed in her chair and enjoying the place while Leo is tense and looks uncomfortable. “Well, we did a good job evading them back in New York. I don't think that Rosetta is going to look in this town in the middle of nowhere.” Leo takes a sip of her coffee and says “I think that I'm going to need some more caffeine if this is going to be our life now.” She rubs her eyes sleepily. Both girls hadn't had a chance at getting a good night's sleep in weeks and had dark circles under their eyes. “We barely made it out alive when she sent all of her little minions after us. I'm sure she's got some tricks up her sleeve and is just waiting for the time to strike.” Dalia gave a shrug as she flipped through the magazine she had open in front of her. ‘Leo relax, we are fine and nothing bad is going to happen.” She says as Leo nervously taps the edge of her coffee cup and glances around the cafe. “Dalia, what if they find us? We are on the run from a literal psychopath.” She says in a whisper and leans in. “We aren't safe here.” Dalia shuts the magazine and looks up at her. “What's the worst thing that could happen? They come bursting through the door armed and ready to take us down?” Suddenly the door flies open with an ear splitting crash and three heavily armed men come running through the door. The two girls shoot up immediately. “Okay time to go.” Dalia says and drops a few bucks on the table. They sprint towards the back through the kitchen as the men shout after them and shoot. They duck and dodge, narrowly missing getting hit. So much for being safe.
Part 4:
Scene opens to a backyard party. It's set around nighttime and the two main characters are sitting on a swing together.
Pans in on the two of them
DJ
I'm really glad that you could come tonight. This party wouldn't have been the same without you.
ADELINE
You're honestly the only reason that I came.
Blushes slightly and averts her gaze
DJ
Oh come on now, don't look away. There was something that I wanted to talk to you about.
Places his hand on top of hers and takes a deep breath
Cuts to DJ
DJ
I like you a lot. I have for a long time and I just haven't known how to tell you. Every single time I look at you feels like my heart might explode out of my chest and I don't know how to breathe. You're kind, smart, incredibly beautiful, and have an amazing personality. I'm tired of trying to pretend that I don't have feelings for you and I just want to know if you feel the same.
Back to showing the two of them
She looks back up at him, her gaze softens and she wraps her fingers around his. Their faces are only inches away from each other now.
ADELINE
I really like you too, DJ. I'm glad that you finally told me.
He places his hand on her cheek and smiles at her.
End scene
- Le_lake
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Scratcher
63 posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
❝ Toffee nosed wet weekend as far as I can see ❞
11/8 - 510 words
The thing about reviving the dead is that it often did not go to plan. Hours ago, Martin was near certain that he could reanimate a creature. He had followed the proper mad-scientist procedures, he yelled a lot, quoted Young Frankenstein, and tried to sound a little poetic and crazy at the same time. But no matter how many times he yelled “give my creation life!” the creature would not rise.
“You told me this would work, Martin”
He turned to face his new lab assistant (he’d had to replace the old one after an unfortunate incident with the lemon batteries), “I know, Bea.”
“You said it would work this time, Martin. You told me ‘I will revive this animal, I am confident’ and yet here we are.”
Maybe it was time to try a new tactic, “you don’t know it’s not alive.”
“When I poke it, it doesn’t move. I’m pretty sure that means it’s not alive.”
“Worms never move much anyways, you can’t tell.”
“Martin, if it’s alive tell me why the heart monitor is not beeping.”
“It’s a worm, maybe they have different kinds of hearts that monitors can’t pick up.”
Bea heaved a long, exasperated sigh and buried her head in her hands. “Pathetic,” she mumbled under her breath.
“Mm?” Martin inquired.
“I said you were pathetic.”
“Oh! Thank you very much!”
She threw her hands up, “not a compliment, Martin! Not a compliment!”
“All words are subjective, it’s up to the individual to decide the connotation.”
“I decide the connotation is negative.”
“And I decide it’s positive. So we’re even. It’s a neutral statement. Just as neutral as when I say I wish the world would end.”
Bea groaned, putting her hands back in their rightful place. Martin felt that was an appropriate place for them, given that her head often rested there. Really she should have known better than to reason with a mad scientist.
He prodded at the worm, perhaps if he poked it more then it would come to life. He’d already tampered with the laws of reality enough (see: lemon battery incident), maybe this would work. It did not work, a fact that surprised no one. But that would not stop the man from prodding at the creature for hours on end. Dawn turned into dusk and even the ceaselessly chirping birds went to bed. Or Bea killed them. He could never be sure with her. When morning came again, and he was still poking a dead worm, he decided that this experiment was a failure. But he couldn’t admit that to Bea. So he decided to do something he thought he’d never resort to, bold-faced lying. With no shame whatsoever. He went outside to get an alive worm, put it where the dead one was, and waited for his assistant to show up.
When she did show up, he stared at her triumphantly, gesturing to the worm and waiting for her reaction. To Martin’s surprise, she still looked exasperated.
“Martin. You left the dead worm next to the new one.”
11/8 - 510 words
The thing about reviving the dead is that it often did not go to plan. Hours ago, Martin was near certain that he could reanimate a creature. He had followed the proper mad-scientist procedures, he yelled a lot, quoted Young Frankenstein, and tried to sound a little poetic and crazy at the same time. But no matter how many times he yelled “give my creation life!” the creature would not rise.
“You told me this would work, Martin”
He turned to face his new lab assistant (he’d had to replace the old one after an unfortunate incident with the lemon batteries), “I know, Bea.”
“You said it would work this time, Martin. You told me ‘I will revive this animal, I am confident’ and yet here we are.”
Maybe it was time to try a new tactic, “you don’t know it’s not alive.”
“When I poke it, it doesn’t move. I’m pretty sure that means it’s not alive.”
“Worms never move much anyways, you can’t tell.”
“Martin, if it’s alive tell me why the heart monitor is not beeping.”
“It’s a worm, maybe they have different kinds of hearts that monitors can’t pick up.”
Bea heaved a long, exasperated sigh and buried her head in her hands. “Pathetic,” she mumbled under her breath.
“Mm?” Martin inquired.
“I said you were pathetic.”
“Oh! Thank you very much!”
She threw her hands up, “not a compliment, Martin! Not a compliment!”
“All words are subjective, it’s up to the individual to decide the connotation.”
“I decide the connotation is negative.”
“And I decide it’s positive. So we’re even. It’s a neutral statement. Just as neutral as when I say I wish the world would end.”
Bea groaned, putting her hands back in their rightful place. Martin felt that was an appropriate place for them, given that her head often rested there. Really she should have known better than to reason with a mad scientist.
He prodded at the worm, perhaps if he poked it more then it would come to life. He’d already tampered with the laws of reality enough (see: lemon battery incident), maybe this would work. It did not work, a fact that surprised no one. But that would not stop the man from prodding at the creature for hours on end. Dawn turned into dusk and even the ceaselessly chirping birds went to bed. Or Bea killed them. He could never be sure with her. When morning came again, and he was still poking a dead worm, he decided that this experiment was a failure. But he couldn’t admit that to Bea. So he decided to do something he thought he’d never resort to, bold-faced lying. With no shame whatsoever. He went outside to get an alive worm, put it where the dead one was, and waited for his assistant to show up.
When she did show up, he stared at her triumphantly, gesturing to the worm and waiting for her reaction. To Martin’s surprise, she still looked exasperated.
“Martin. You left the dead worm next to the new one.”
- booklover883322
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
-Weekly For Bangsian!-
Part One: 500/450
Part Two: 378 (dialogue 98/100)
Part Three: 349/300
Part Four: 213/200
Total Word Count: 1440/950
Completed: 11/8/24 at 11:23 UTC
Part One: 500/450
Part Two: 378 (dialogue 98/100)
Part Three: 349/300
Part Four: 213/200
Total Word Count: 1440/950
Completed: 11/8/24 at 11:23 UTC
Part One: 500/450
(this is G!Rose)
Rose floated around the cosmos, glancing at the various bits of stars and planets that orbited around her body. She heard a little giggle from behind her and turned slowly. She spotted Chronos to her left and smiled at them. “What is so funny?”
Chronos shrugged, twirling their hair in between their fingers, “I find all things funny, yet not funny at the same time. How might I know?”
Rose shrugged back, crossing her legs delicately, “You clearly came for a purpose.”
They scrunched up their face, “What truly is purpose? What truly is it? Purpose is very subjective. I’d argue that purpose is not even real!”
“Purpose is very real.” Rose said, sighing. The deity of time always found a way to be more confusing with every sentence. “Did you come to talk to me for a reason or not?”
“Well, well, well, it’s not that simple, my dear-” They gnawed on their lip for a second before speaking, “I just… noticed some things. Some concerning things, some things I find alarming.”
Rose perked up. Huh! Some semblance of sense! She pursed her lips, her tail swishing a few meteorites out of her way. “And what are they? I’d love to know.”
“Oh! Oh! They, they are quite intriguing! So very concerning! The events are very, very interesting, dear! You should really see it! But alas,” they mimed fainting dramatically, “you cannot see them.”
Rose made a face, “You can show me, very easily. Just use your golden string- You do it all the time. Also, what did you say about love?”
“Oh! Time! I love time!”
Rose made a face at them, displeased. Chronos giggled, “Oh, um, of course, I shall just show you. Thank you, dear, for the reminder-”
Their mouth opened and swirls of gold flowed out, floating out into the vacuum of space. They extended their hands and wove the strands together, quickly and expertly constructing them into a mat of gold. They tapped it, making it glow. They showed the mat to Rose, “Ta DA!”
Rose clapped, smiling, “Well done. Now, go ahead and show me what was so important to you.”
“Oh yes! Importance! This, yes, is quite important-” They turned the mat and proudly showed the glowing thing to her as Rose’s eyes widened.
Her face then fell, “Chronos, dear. There’s nothing on it.”
They made a face, glancing at that mat again, “Oh, um- um- So sorry! I don’t understand what is going on, dearie- give your dear Chronos a moment!”
They scrunched up into a fetal position and stared at the mat, going quiet. Rose floated there, waiting impatiently.
They looked up at her, “Dearie- I do not know how to say this… There is nothing.”
Rose narrowed her eyes, “What does that mean?”
They became rigid and moved to leave, “I need to go-”
Rose blinked, watching them start to move away, “Hey, wait, why-?”
They looked back at her, “No time, dearie- No time-”
Part Two: 378 (dialogue 98/100)
Rose’s heels clicked on the floor as she turned left into the dark corridor. Her head snapped back and forth as she kept herself alert. The air got colder, and it felt like the AC had turned on overdrive as her hair billowed around her face. She scrunched up her face and she instantly knew something was wrong. The shadows curled around her legs and arms as she asked a few to come to her aid.
She heard a menacing giggle, “Hi Rosie-”
“Please don’t call me that,” Rose hissed, “Also, what’s with the theatrics?”
Gaia shrugged, although Rose didn’t see that, “Just… felt like it? Makes all this a lot more fun.”
“If you’re going to try and murder me again, then you’re not going to have a lot of fun this time.”
Gaia stepped out, grinning as the air swirled around her, “I bet that I will.” The lockers on both sides of the hall creaked, and she stepped a safe distance away as the doors came off their hinges and shot toward Rose.
Her eyes widened as she ducked under the projectiles and attempted to launch herself toward Gaia, but she didn’t get far. The doors crashed down in front of her, blocking her way. She cursed and backed up, before leaping above the doors. She brought shadows crashing down, slamming into Gaia.
Gaia shrieked, “What is wrong with you??”
Rose shrugged, before lunging forward and kneeing her in the ribs. She took a breath, grinning, “You should be asking yourself that.” She delivered a swift punch to Gaia’s face, and her rival fell to the floor.
Gaia clutched her face, attempting to get up. Her nose ran red and she sped off to deal with it. Rose chose not to follow, returning to her friends. Her ankles throbbed, but thankfully, her heels had stayed on during the short fight, which was surprising. She heard Katie’s voice from behind her, “Rose, please don’t tell me that you had another near-death experience.”
Rose shrugged, catching her breath, “It’s not that uncommon, so you might as well get used to it.”
Katie crossed her arms, raising an eyebrow, “Sure. Also, you should probably get back, Layla wants to tell you something.”
Rose made a face, “Alright…”
Part Three: 349/300
Zara glanced out of the window and sighed when she realized that the rain hadn’t stopped. She watched the rain collect on her window and slowly slide down into oblivion. She heard her phone buzz and she picked it up. Oh, huh, it was Cora.
She picked up the call and smiled when she heard her friend’s voice on the other end, “Hi Zara! How are you doing?”
Zara got up from her seat and started to pace in her tiny apartment, “I’m alright, how about you?”
“I’m good, just thought that I’d check in on you! How’s life? How are you adjusting?”
Zara coughed, grimacing, “I’m… fine? I guess? I mean, this is all so new…”
“I get what you mean! Don’t worry though, you’ll get used to it eventually.”
“I mean, I guess? But it’s affecting every part of my life!”
“How so?”
Zara huffed, brushing her fingers through her wavy brown hair, “It’s hard to say, but everyone acts weird around me now. I mean, except for my parents, but they live across the globe-”
“Yeah… yeah… I bet that’s tough.”
Zara nodded, “Yeah, incredibly! All my co-workers know what happened, and GOSH, it’s embarrassing!”
“Oh for sure…”
Zara’s pacing picked up speed, “I don’t know, it’s like I feel almost unlikable, unlovable even! This stupid growth stuff shouldn’t be that alienating, but here we are!”
“Oh yeah, for sure. Are you indoors right now?”
Zara glanced at her surroundings, “Yeah?”
“Do you remember what triggers your growth?”
Zara slapped her forehead, “Ugh, yeah, you’re right, sorry.” She took a breath to calm herself down.
“I just…” She sighed, trying to collect her words as she slowed down, “I just don’t know if I’ll ever find people to spend life with. I want friends that won’t think I’m weird. I want a family that doesn’t live across the globe so they can comfort me. Is that too much to ask?”
Cora tried to reassure her, “I’m sure that there’ll be people out there who will embrace you for who you are. Only time will tell though.”
Part Four: 213/200 (not my favoritebut oh well!)
Ander: So… what you’re trying to say is that you… /lost them/?
Gaia: Um… yes?
Ander: How do you /lose/ vestiges? Do you have any idea just how valuable those are?
Gaia: I’m quite aware! I just… I just dropped them.
Ander: You /dropped/ them?! How stupid do you have to be to /drop/ them??
Gaia: I tripped! It’s not a big deal though! I can get them back!
Ander: What if you broke them? Don’t you think that that would be a big deal??
Gaia: Well… how would they break? Aren’t they pretty resilient, like you said?
Ander: Not always, idiot.
Gaia: What do you mean “not always”?
Ander: Do you not remember the story I told you about how the previous water host split his vestige in two? It wasn’t intentional, yet it happened.
Gaia: Well…
Ander: Do you see your mistake now?
Gaia: Yes…
Ander: So what are you going to now?
Gaia: Find them. Is there a way to repair them?
Ander: I might be able. But I won’t know till I try.
Gaia:
Ander: Alright. Go ahead and search. I’d prefer if you didn’t come back till you’ve found what I need.
Gaia: Well…
Ander: I said what I said. You’ll be fine.
Gaia: Alright…
- chrisluk002
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Scratcher
23 posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Daily 11/8 (413 words)
THIS DOCUMENT IS MARKED FOR INCINERATION.
Addendum 6897.2.13
SCP-6897 showed abnormal behavior preceding the incident. The creature ate very little of its morning meal and was observed laying around with disinterest throughout the morning. The crystal core of SCP-6897 was also behaving abnormally, pulsing in bizarre patterns and fluctuating in terms of brightness. This lead to many concerns regarding its health. On-site personnel decided to sedate SCP-6897 to perform a medical examination to identify if the creature was sick or experiencing psychological effects from changes to containment procedures. However, once the sedative was administered, SCP-6897 began to make pained noises. The pulsation of the crystal escalated and the anomaly's tail began to glow brightly. At this point, an EMP from SCP-6897 shorted out the camera system, so the following information is sourced exclusively from on-site witnesses.
Report: SCP-6897's tail appeared to form a magnetic pull after the initial shock wave. Loose pieces of metal and other small items such as wrappers, loose leaf paper, and crayons that were in the room were pulled into an orbit around the crystal tip. Personnel were unsure of what to do, standing back. Within the orbit, a phenomena was observed, described as a “warping of reality.” Further details are classified. Finally, SCP-6897 showed signs of drowsiness, and fell unconscious on the ground. The strange circumstances faded slowly. It took approximately three hours before electricity was returned to the compound. After the event, SCP-6897 recovered and began acting normally.
After long examinations by SCP scientists, it was concluded that whatever had occurred did not effect the entity long term. However, SCP-6897 is to begin a long series of tests to determine the cause and specifics of the event. Personnel are to exercise greater caution around SCP-6897 for routine feeding, cleaning, and lights out protocols. All visiting hours are currently postponed. An announcement will be made on the facility bulletin when visits to SCP-6897's containment will again be granted, though do not expect times to become available for some time. Until then, all staff are encouraged to disregard the current sign up sheet, as being on the visiting list will no longer be a viable reason to visit SCP-6897 until this event can properly be researched.
Reason for Termination of Document: Addendum 6897.2.13 contains reports that suggest relation to incidents that are heavily classified to lower SCP employees. This document has been _____ __ _ ____ ______ ___ inaccessible to workers without proper clearance. Please destroy this document as soon as the incinerator is available.
THIS DOCUMENT IS MARKED FOR INCINERATION.
Addendum 6897.2.13
SCP-6897 showed abnormal behavior preceding the incident. The creature ate very little of its morning meal and was observed laying around with disinterest throughout the morning. The crystal core of SCP-6897 was also behaving abnormally, pulsing in bizarre patterns and fluctuating in terms of brightness. This lead to many concerns regarding its health. On-site personnel decided to sedate SCP-6897 to perform a medical examination to identify if the creature was sick or experiencing psychological effects from changes to containment procedures. However, once the sedative was administered, SCP-6897 began to make pained noises. The pulsation of the crystal escalated and the anomaly's tail began to glow brightly. At this point, an EMP from SCP-6897 shorted out the camera system, so the following information is sourced exclusively from on-site witnesses.
Report: SCP-6897's tail appeared to form a magnetic pull after the initial shock wave. Loose pieces of metal and other small items such as wrappers, loose leaf paper, and crayons that were in the room were pulled into an orbit around the crystal tip. Personnel were unsure of what to do, standing back. Within the orbit, a phenomena was observed, described as a “warping of reality.” Further details are classified. Finally, SCP-6897 showed signs of drowsiness, and fell unconscious on the ground. The strange circumstances faded slowly. It took approximately three hours before electricity was returned to the compound. After the event, SCP-6897 recovered and began acting normally.
After long examinations by SCP scientists, it was concluded that whatever had occurred did not effect the entity long term. However, SCP-6897 is to begin a long series of tests to determine the cause and specifics of the event. Personnel are to exercise greater caution around SCP-6897 for routine feeding, cleaning, and lights out protocols. All visiting hours are currently postponed. An announcement will be made on the facility bulletin when visits to SCP-6897's containment will again be granted, though do not expect times to become available for some time. Until then, all staff are encouraged to disregard the current sign up sheet, as being on the visiting list will no longer be a viable reason to visit SCP-6897 until this event can properly be researched.
Reason for Termination of Document: Addendum 6897.2.13 contains reports that suggest relation to incidents that are heavily classified to lower SCP employees. This document has been _____ __ _ ____ ______ ___ inaccessible to workers without proper clearance. Please destroy this document as soon as the incinerator is available.
- booklover883322
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Prompt: Science shenanigans
Word Count: 435/400
Points: 450
Completed: 11/8/24 at 11:47 UTC
Lucy stared at the tube in front of her. There was no way… She reached out and tried her best to look through the fluid. However, it was too cloudy to see anything beyond a small little silhouette. It was curled up and appeared a bit spiky, furry even. Oh, what a glorious achievement.
A year earlier…
Lucy pushed up her glasses and glared at her subordinate, “Are you serious?”
They coughed, “Yes?”
“This is ridiculous, and you know it.” She looked back down at the clipboard in her hands and tried not to make a nasty face. Failing, she read through the information again, “This is absurd. You seriously think that you can get away with this horrid work? You’re clearly stupid.” She paused, “Why did I hire you again?”
They grimaced, “Umm, because of my merit? That’s what you said, anyways.”
“Well, clearly you have demonstrated that you have none of that.” She looked down into the holding cell below her, where a raging beast hammered away at the strongest walls known to man.
“Please clean up your mess, and get rid of any signs of it. Alice never existed, if you are asked.”
“Yes ma’am-” They ran out of the room a moment later.
As the door closed, Lucy took off her glasses and pinched the bridge of her nose, as if she had a headache. Another experiment gone wrong… Another attempt at the perfect life form being perfectly messed up by another incompetent idiot.
She looked at her data and hissed when she realized just how easily this could’ve been resolved. At least, so she thought. The abilities she wanted this life form to have were hard to magically spawn into thin air. This required expert knowledge of genetics and the supernatural. She sighed, setting down the clipboard. Back to square one, it seemed.
Lucy wiped off her glasses, snickering as she looked back at the small child in front of her, “Don’t you worry, it won’t hurt.”
He sniffled, “Are you sure?”
She smiled, “I’m very sure.”
He nodded a bit, wiping a tear from his eye. “Okay…”
Lucy grinned, “There we go, wonderful job.” She grabbed a syringe and quickly drew bIood from the boy’s arm. He winced a bit, but the only noticeable reaction aside from that was a blue spark. Lucy smiled, “Good job. You have helped me tremendously.”
The boy mustered a weak smile, suddenly turning a bit pale. “Wait… what were you going to use my powers for again?”
Lucy snickered, “You don’t need to know that. Just know that you have contributed to greatness.”
Word Count: 435/400
Points: 450
Completed: 11/8/24 at 11:47 UTC
Lucy stared at the tube in front of her. There was no way… She reached out and tried her best to look through the fluid. However, it was too cloudy to see anything beyond a small little silhouette. It was curled up and appeared a bit spiky, furry even. Oh, what a glorious achievement.
A year earlier…
Lucy pushed up her glasses and glared at her subordinate, “Are you serious?”
They coughed, “Yes?”
“This is ridiculous, and you know it.” She looked back down at the clipboard in her hands and tried not to make a nasty face. Failing, she read through the information again, “This is absurd. You seriously think that you can get away with this horrid work? You’re clearly stupid.” She paused, “Why did I hire you again?”
They grimaced, “Umm, because of my merit? That’s what you said, anyways.”
“Well, clearly you have demonstrated that you have none of that.” She looked down into the holding cell below her, where a raging beast hammered away at the strongest walls known to man.
“Please clean up your mess, and get rid of any signs of it. Alice never existed, if you are asked.”
“Yes ma’am-” They ran out of the room a moment later.
As the door closed, Lucy took off her glasses and pinched the bridge of her nose, as if she had a headache. Another experiment gone wrong… Another attempt at the perfect life form being perfectly messed up by another incompetent idiot.
She looked at her data and hissed when she realized just how easily this could’ve been resolved. At least, so she thought. The abilities she wanted this life form to have were hard to magically spawn into thin air. This required expert knowledge of genetics and the supernatural. She sighed, setting down the clipboard. Back to square one, it seemed.
Lucy wiped off her glasses, snickering as she looked back at the small child in front of her, “Don’t you worry, it won’t hurt.”
He sniffled, “Are you sure?”
She smiled, “I’m very sure.”
He nodded a bit, wiping a tear from his eye. “Okay…”
Lucy grinned, “There we go, wonderful job.” She grabbed a syringe and quickly drew bIood from the boy’s arm. He winced a bit, but the only noticeable reaction aside from that was a blue spark. Lucy smiled, “Good job. You have helped me tremendously.”
The boy mustered a weak smile, suddenly turning a bit pale. “Wait… what were you going to use my powers for again?”
Lucy snickered, “You don’t need to know that. Just know that you have contributed to greatness.”
- AmazaEevee
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Scratcher
500+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Daily #8
11/8/2024
422 words
Tony glances over at Clint. “You want me to do what?!”
“Make me an arrow that can electrocute the water. It'll be super handy when like the criminals try to swim after me! Easier than trying to knock them out one by one after I’ve swam.”
He sighs, pinching his forehead. “Back up, Legolas. Arrow, electrocute, water. What about this sounds good to you?”
Clint shrugs. “Just thought it was a good idea- What! It'll effectively get them off me!”
“And you're going to offer me…?” Tony raises an eyebrow.
“3 blackmail worthy things about Steve. But don't mention me, I never told you,” Clint says with a grin.
Tony waves his hand. “Fine, I'm in. Let's get to designing this thing.”
~~
“…So this does what again?” Clint asks, pointing skeptically at the silver stick Tony brought out.
Tony rolls his eyes. “It's the arrow, you idiot.”
Clint tilts his head, staring at the arrow. He jerks back up and turns to Tony. “Yeah, no, I don't see how this would work? When we were in here two days ago, I thought we had a cylinder with a sensitive end that would spark electricity when coming in contact with wet substances. And this-” he flails his arms at the arrow “-does not look like an arrow! How do you think this is going to fly? The fletching looks all messed up! It's not exactly light either!”
“Relax, Everdeen. I'm the engineer here, not you.” Tony hands him the arrow. “Just try it out…”
“I'm the engineer here, not youuouuu,” Clint mumbles, grabbing his bow off the table and fiddling with nocking the arrow. “So just into that tub of water, right?”
“Yep,” Tony confirms, putting on a pair of safety glasses. “My calculations should be correct and I'll be able to track the electricity voltage on that thing. I did make it higher, just to test what it'll do.”
“Okay.” Clint pulls back, aims, and releases.
The arrow spirals, flying over the tub and crackling with sparks before it hits the wall with a thud.
“So, that wasn't me, that was-” Clint starts, before the lights flicker and shut off.
Tony curses under his breath. “I just replaced some of the new electrical equipment! Uh, Barton, you stay here. Do NOT touch that arrow and just- Don't do anything stupid.”
Clint waves his arms in the air. "Yeah, I won't make more of a problem, because the whole electricity lights-out thing was totally my fault!" he shouts as Tony leaves the room.
11/8/2024
422 words
A/N: Not sure how I captured the character voices, but this is v much comic!Clint, so don't expect MCU!Clint TT I've never written Tony either and I did not plan this out before hand, but I do quite like it.
Tony glances over at Clint. “You want me to do what?!”
“Make me an arrow that can electrocute the water. It'll be super handy when like the criminals try to swim after me! Easier than trying to knock them out one by one after I’ve swam.”
He sighs, pinching his forehead. “Back up, Legolas. Arrow, electrocute, water. What about this sounds good to you?”
Clint shrugs. “Just thought it was a good idea- What! It'll effectively get them off me!”
“And you're going to offer me…?” Tony raises an eyebrow.
“3 blackmail worthy things about Steve. But don't mention me, I never told you,” Clint says with a grin.
Tony waves his hand. “Fine, I'm in. Let's get to designing this thing.”
~~
“…So this does what again?” Clint asks, pointing skeptically at the silver stick Tony brought out.
Tony rolls his eyes. “It's the arrow, you idiot.”
Clint tilts his head, staring at the arrow. He jerks back up and turns to Tony. “Yeah, no, I don't see how this would work? When we were in here two days ago, I thought we had a cylinder with a sensitive end that would spark electricity when coming in contact with wet substances. And this-” he flails his arms at the arrow “-does not look like an arrow! How do you think this is going to fly? The fletching looks all messed up! It's not exactly light either!”
“Relax, Everdeen. I'm the engineer here, not you.” Tony hands him the arrow. “Just try it out…”
“I'm the engineer here, not youuouuu,” Clint mumbles, grabbing his bow off the table and fiddling with nocking the arrow. “So just into that tub of water, right?”
“Yep,” Tony confirms, putting on a pair of safety glasses. “My calculations should be correct and I'll be able to track the electricity voltage on that thing. I did make it higher, just to test what it'll do.”
“Okay.” Clint pulls back, aims, and releases.
The arrow spirals, flying over the tub and crackling with sparks before it hits the wall with a thud.
“So, that wasn't me, that was-” Clint starts, before the lights flicker and shut off.
Tony curses under his breath. “I just replaced some of the new electrical equipment! Uh, Barton, you stay here. Do NOT touch that arrow and just- Don't do anything stupid.”
Clint waves his arms in the air. "Yeah, I won't make more of a problem, because the whole electricity lights-out thing was totally my fault!" he shouts as Tony leaves the room.
Last edited by AmazaEevee (Nov. 12, 2024 00:13:09)
- -WildClan-
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
When I first told Comet my brother was dead, he just nodded and said, “That can be fixed.”
It was quite a shock to me at the time. Like, WHAT? Some people don’t know how to respond to sensitive stuff, sure, but “THAT CAN BE FIXED” is a whole other level of reaction. Death, the one solemn truth we can never escape from, nonchalantly shrugged away as merely another minor issue to be dealt with? Really? I’m pretty sure I responded with disbelief, even scorn. It wasn’t until I realized he was serious that I truly understood what kind of shazarxa I was dealing with.
Friends, let me assure you, Comet is a maniac. Utterly ridiculous levels of confidence, no ability to moderate his creative impulses. Nowadays, we all know and love him for that. But, let me tell you, it sure wasn’t always that way! Those of you who are still fresh from the egg might not know the story yet, so listen carefully as I tell the tale of how my long-time friend and colleague… INVENTED IMMORTALITY.
The idea was stupid from the start. Sure, we knew ghosts were real. We’ve known that for a long time, if not always. Some of us had seen them before. Some, like Silver, could sense them nearly all the time. But they were always just out of reach, hidden behind the veil of the afterlife, a veil that had gone unbroken for ages. No one thought the veil could be broken. No one would have dared.
And then Comet came around and thought, “Hey, might be worth a try. Could be fun!”
Because piercing the sacred heart of nature with the steel claws of science? Don’t mind if we do! This is, after all, the core tenet of our predecessors, the only reason they created us shazarxi in the first place. Maybe they passed on those delusions to us, or at least to a lucky few. Yippee, am I right?
Comet wasn’t the first to attempt to study ghosts. Many a shazarxa had wondered what ghosts were made of, what energy source they use, how long they existed, why people turned into them when they died. Actually, shazarxi hasn’t even been the only species to address these questions. Just about any sentient race with sufficient knowledge of life’s workings has pondered such things at some point in their history.
We just happened to be the ones uniquely situated to solve these age-old inquiries.
It was quite a shock to me at the time. Like, WHAT? Some people don’t know how to respond to sensitive stuff, sure, but “THAT CAN BE FIXED” is a whole other level of reaction. Death, the one solemn truth we can never escape from, nonchalantly shrugged away as merely another minor issue to be dealt with? Really? I’m pretty sure I responded with disbelief, even scorn. It wasn’t until I realized he was serious that I truly understood what kind of shazarxa I was dealing with.
Friends, let me assure you, Comet is a maniac. Utterly ridiculous levels of confidence, no ability to moderate his creative impulses. Nowadays, we all know and love him for that. But, let me tell you, it sure wasn’t always that way! Those of you who are still fresh from the egg might not know the story yet, so listen carefully as I tell the tale of how my long-time friend and colleague… INVENTED IMMORTALITY.
The idea was stupid from the start. Sure, we knew ghosts were real. We’ve known that for a long time, if not always. Some of us had seen them before. Some, like Silver, could sense them nearly all the time. But they were always just out of reach, hidden behind the veil of the afterlife, a veil that had gone unbroken for ages. No one thought the veil could be broken. No one would have dared.
And then Comet came around and thought, “Hey, might be worth a try. Could be fun!”
Because piercing the sacred heart of nature with the steel claws of science? Don’t mind if we do! This is, after all, the core tenet of our predecessors, the only reason they created us shazarxi in the first place. Maybe they passed on those delusions to us, or at least to a lucky few. Yippee, am I right?
Comet wasn’t the first to attempt to study ghosts. Many a shazarxa had wondered what ghosts were made of, what energy source they use, how long they existed, why people turned into them when they died. Actually, shazarxi hasn’t even been the only species to address these questions. Just about any sentient race with sufficient knowledge of life’s workings has pondered such things at some point in their history.
We just happened to be the ones uniquely situated to solve these age-old inquiries.
- Whimsy_lux
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Scratcher
73 posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Okay, okay, this is a really stupid idea. Like really stupid, but I’m doing it, I don’t care. Psychology has always been interesting to me, despite not being in any classes or researching it more than the small tidbits I find on the internet or those crappy “20 Psychology facts to brainwash your friends! (NOT CLICKBAIT!!)”. But I do know some things, for instance, Pavlov’s dog.
Let me explain, this one scientist had this dog and for some reason he’d ring a bell whenever he fed him. Now whenever he rang the bell, the dog would salivate expecting food. Literally brainwashing!
Another thing is that there’s this one term that describes how the more you are exposed to someone the more you start to subconsciously like them. Like you don’t even have to talk to them, they’ll just expect to see and eventually they’ll just vibe with you. Of course this doesn’t work in all circumstances, but it's cool, right?
So, I wanted to try it out, not just with dogs, with people. I have a teensy weensy little tiny crush on a guy in my class, so for the last two or so weeks, whenever I’d see him in class, I’d say hi, and offer him some gum. I didn’t talk to him much before, so of course I would take one myself at the same time so it wouldn’t be suspicious. Just a casual gesture of kindness, you know?
He was a bit confused at first, but always took it, so I kept doing it. Eventually, I guess we became sort of friends, he’d wave to me in the hallway, greet me before I did, things like that. Now whenever I walk into the class he perks up like a puppy, and to be honest I’m not sure if it's the gum or me.
This is going great! Because of my totally-not-brainwashing, I think he might actually like me! Even as just a friend is okay for now, it’s just nice that he seems to enjoy being around me. Here’s where it got all wack.
People began to notice, not us hanging out, but that I always offered gum. At first some of his friends would ask for a piece too, and I’d offer because why not? I’ve stocked up just for this! But then, it was more than just his or my friends, other classmates I never talked to would ask. My own teacher would ask. Heck, one time an administrator came in and asked for one too! It’s like they’ve made me the school’s gum girl or something!
And I don’t want to say no, especially since I’ve given to a bunch of people, it would seem rude to leave someone out, but it’s getting tiring. And worse, I’m running out of gum. It’s okay, it’s whatever, the only one I’ve really pavlov-ed is my crush, and I think he likes me for real, not just my pseudo-brainwashing. I’ll just walk into school and say I ran out, simple as that!
I take a step inside, and all heads turn, I swear one person’s head goes 180 degrees. “GUM?” They all ask in unison.
*.
I laugh awkwardly, rubbing my neck and shake my head. The crowd goes silent. A second passes. Another. I take a hesitant step back. The school becomes a stampede.
*.
Let me explain, this one scientist had this dog and for some reason he’d ring a bell whenever he fed him. Now whenever he rang the bell, the dog would salivate expecting food. Literally brainwashing!
Another thing is that there’s this one term that describes how the more you are exposed to someone the more you start to subconsciously like them. Like you don’t even have to talk to them, they’ll just expect to see and eventually they’ll just vibe with you. Of course this doesn’t work in all circumstances, but it's cool, right?
So, I wanted to try it out, not just with dogs, with people. I have a teensy weensy little tiny crush on a guy in my class, so for the last two or so weeks, whenever I’d see him in class, I’d say hi, and offer him some gum. I didn’t talk to him much before, so of course I would take one myself at the same time so it wouldn’t be suspicious. Just a casual gesture of kindness, you know?
He was a bit confused at first, but always took it, so I kept doing it. Eventually, I guess we became sort of friends, he’d wave to me in the hallway, greet me before I did, things like that. Now whenever I walk into the class he perks up like a puppy, and to be honest I’m not sure if it's the gum or me.
This is going great! Because of my totally-not-brainwashing, I think he might actually like me! Even as just a friend is okay for now, it’s just nice that he seems to enjoy being around me. Here’s where it got all wack.
People began to notice, not us hanging out, but that I always offered gum. At first some of his friends would ask for a piece too, and I’d offer because why not? I’ve stocked up just for this! But then, it was more than just his or my friends, other classmates I never talked to would ask. My own teacher would ask. Heck, one time an administrator came in and asked for one too! It’s like they’ve made me the school’s gum girl or something!
And I don’t want to say no, especially since I’ve given to a bunch of people, it would seem rude to leave someone out, but it’s getting tiring. And worse, I’m running out of gum. It’s okay, it’s whatever, the only one I’ve really pavlov-ed is my crush, and I think he likes me for real, not just my pseudo-brainwashing. I’ll just walk into school and say I ran out, simple as that!
I take a step inside, and all heads turn, I swear one person’s head goes 180 degrees. “GUM?” They all ask in unison.
*.
I laugh awkwardly, rubbing my neck and shake my head. The crowd goes silent. A second passes. Another. I take a hesitant step back. The school becomes a stampede.
*.
- PixelDucko
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Weekly #1: Dialogue
Author's Notes:
▸ My first weekly in a while! Woohoo!
▸ A lot of this was kinda rushed and not proofread but I hope it's somewhat decent.
▸ I'm not exactly sure if the foreshadowing part could be considered foreshadowing but I hope it works?
▸ I use proper grammar in author's notes because my perfectionism would get annoyed if I didn't.
Part One: 506 words
“Evan?” Dewey said.
The boy swung around to face him. “What?” he asked.
“Have you got the flowers for the party?”
Evan froze. He scratched his neck. “Uh, well, uh, so you see-” he started. “Yeah no, I forgot. Sorry buddy. No but genuinely, I am so so sorry. I was going to get them then I got distracted.”
Dewey stared at him. He burst out his frustrated energy into three jumping jacks then halted immediately. Evan didn’t mean to forget, after all. He should still show him compassion.
“I-” He took a deep breath. “It’s okay. No, really! It’s okay,” he added after Evan raised an eyebrow. “Yes, the flowers were really important for the party, yeah, but we can handle without them.”
“I can get them right now!” Evan said. “I know where the shop is, I’ll just run off right now-”
“No!” Dewey exclaimed. “No, it’s fine, really. I have some spares at home, I think. I’ll just go get them.”
But Evan was already running.
Dewey watched him dash away. He sighed. He really can’t persuade that guy, can he?
He rushed after him.
“Hey, flower seller person!” Evan yelled once he got within earshot distance of the flower seller.
She glanced at Evan. “Yes?”
“Can I have some flowers?” he asked, panting as he stopped right in front of the stall.
She blinked. “Well, yes, of course! Of course!” She gestured towards all the flowers. “Pick one that you’d like, dear. They’re all half price today.”
Evan rubbed his hands together. “Nice! Okay, can I have… uh…” He paused, scanning his eyes over the selection of flora. They all looked great, but which one would be the greatest for Charlotte’s party?
“Say, have you ever had a customer named Charlotte?” he asked, going for a different plan. “Long ginger hair in two braids? Always wearing a green bucket hat and a ribbon? Freckles, kind smile?”
The flower seller stared at him. Okay, that’s the second time someone stared at him today. This was getting kinda weird.
“Yes, I do know someone who fits that description,” she started slowly. “Why?”
“Great! Okay, so what did she buy?” Evan inquired.
“Pardon?”
“Like, what flowers did she get?”
“Oh, she got the sunflowers. Dear Charlotte loves those. Taken it after her mother, I reckon!” the flower seller chuckled.
It was Evan’s turn to stare at someone. Okay, so this person knew Charlotte and her mother? He guessed that they were regulars here.
In the distance, he heard footsteps and the sound of someone panting. Evan turned around to see who it was.
“Evan, wait up!” Dewey called, rushing towards him.
“Oh, hey,” Evan said.
Dewey reached Evan and panted. He coughed and regained his composure.
“Hi,” he said. He looked at the flower seller. “Oh, good afternoon Mrs. Starikov!”
“Good afternoon, Dewey,” she beamed.
Evan glanced between the two. “…What?” he asked. “You both are on first-name basis?”
“Why, yes, of course,” the flower seller replied with a smile. “I’m Charlotte’s mother, after all.”
Part Two: 98 words
“Come on. We’ll continue the search another day,” the officer stated.
Evan stared at his shoes, his back turned to the officer. “No.”
The officer frowned. “I know you’re upset, but it’s time to head home, buddy.”
“No!” Evan yelled, whipping around. “You don’t know anything of me! You don’t know how much it hurts!” His voice cracked.
“And I may not know that, but I do know that it’s getting late and your parents will be waiting,” the officer replied.
Evan sniffed. “…No.” He wiped his tears. “I’ll keep on searching ‘till I find him!” he croaked.
Part Three: 441 words
Charlotte hummed, moving around in the kitchen. Morning light streamed through the windows.
“Thanks for having us over, Charlotte,” Derek thanked.
Charlotte smiled. “Of couse, anytime.” She paused. “Unless I’m busy. But mostly anytime.” She searched through the fridge. “What do you guys want for breakfast?”
“I could really go for some pancakes right now,” Evan chattered mindlessly as he scrolled through his phone.
“I’m fine with pancakes.” Derek shrugged.
Charlotte glanced at Piper, who was staring dreamily at the ceiling.
“Piper?” she asked.
Piper snapped out of it. “Oh, hi, uh, sorry, what are we talking about?” She chuckled nervously. “I was just admiring your decorations around here, thank you, sorry.”
“It’s all good!” Charlotte smiled again. “What do you want for breakfast?”
“Oh, I don’t mind,” Piper replied. “Maybe strawberries. Or blueberries. Or blackberries. Maybe even bananas. A fruit of some sort?”
Charlotte looked through her fridge again. “We have strawberries!” She pulled the container out and handed them to Piper, who thanked her. Then Charlotte frowned. “I don’t have any butter. I can’t make pancakes.” She glanced at the boys. “I’m sorry.”
“Eh, all good,” Evan said, still not looking away from his phone.
“Evan, get off your phone,” Derek whispered.
Evan hesitated then put it down. “Fine,” he grumbled. “You’re boring.”
“You’re hungry,” Derek replied, jabbing a finger at Evan.
“Fair.” Evan said with a shrug. He looked at Charlotte. “Sorry. Yeah, I’m fine with basically anything you have.”
Derek nodded in agreement.
Charlotte rubbed her chin. “Could you help me think of something?” she asked to nobody in particular.
Evan got off his seat and strode towards the kitchen. “Sure, I’ll even help you cook. I’m bored now that boring Derek told me to get off my not-boring phone.”
Derek pouted and put his hand to his forehead. “Wow, getting called boring once was already hurtful, but now you’re doing it again!” he sighed melodramatically. “Woe is I. I have been insulted by my best friend.”
Evan rolled his eyes but smiled. He opened the kitchen cupboards (surprisingly not containing cups) and searched for ingredients.
Later in the day, Charlotte piped up.
“Oh! Evan! I just remembered!” she exclaimed. “Do you still want pancakes? ‘Cause I bought some chocolate pancakes the other day and put the leftovers in my cupboard,” she explained.
“Why in the cupboard?” Piper asked. “Wouldn’t it like, expire?” She paused. “I’m not an expert at cooking though. I don’t know. And the author doesn’t know too.”
“Don’t break the forth wall, please,” Derek murmured. Piper grinned sadly in reply.
“…Those chocolate pancakes were yours?” Evan inquired, wiping off crumbs from his chin.
Part Four: 855 words
HANSEL sits on grass. He looks up at stars. CHARLOTTE enters.
CHARLOTTE
Hey, Hansel.
HANSEL jumps.
CHARLOTTE
Sorry, I didn’t mean to scare you! …Are you good?
HANSEL
Yes, I’m fine.
CHARLOTTE
Mind if I sit here?
HANSEL
I don’t mind.
CHARLOTTE sits down next to HANSEL. She hums.
HANSEL
Charlotte?
CHARLOTTE
Yeah?
HANSEL
We’re not… enemies, anymore, are we?
CHARLOTTE
Definitely not. We never were, really. Kinda just people who disliked each other. But not enemies.
HANSEL
Good, then.
HANSEL pauses.
HANSEL
Do you like Terra Z?
CHARLOTTE
Of course! I love it here. It’s so interesting! Hester and Wayne are really kind.
HANSEL
Yes, I agree.
HANSEL pauses again.
HANSEL
Which planet do you prefer… Earth or Terra Z?
CHARLOTTE
Huh? What do you mean, sorry?
HANSEL
Where would you prefer to live? Earth or Terra Z?
CHARLOTTE
Well, I do really love it here, but not enough to live here permanently. Earth is my home, and my mother and all my other friends live there too.
CHARLOTTE
So I’d pick Earth without a doubt.
HANSEL nods and looks up at the sky again. He hums.
CHARLOTTE, warily
…Are you doubting your return to Earth?
HANSEL
No.
HANSEL
…Yes, actually.
CHARLOTTE
I see.
CHARLOTTE pauses.
CHARLOTTE
What’s holding you back?
HANSEL
What?
CHARLOTTE
What’s holding you back from, like, going back to Earth? What do you like so much about Terra Z or dislike so much about Earth?
HANSEL
I guess…
HANSEL hesitates.
HANSEL
I don’t know if I’m ready to share. Or if I even know the answer to that question yet.
CHARLOTTE nods.
CHARLOTTE
It’s okay. When you’re ready, you can tell me.
HANSEL nods. The two sit in silence for a while.
HANSEL, suddenly
…I think it’s the fact that… I never really felt at home in Earth?
HANSEL
My adoptive parents are fine, but ever since I lost my old home, everything felt out of place.
HANSEL
I hid my true self, in short.
HANSEL
But this planet helped me get that self back.
HANSEL
And it’s wonderful. There are so many wonderful inventions and sites here that simply are not found on Earth.
HANSEL
This past year has possibly been the second-best of my life.
CHARLOTTE
What was the first best?
HANSEL
It’s a tie for all seven years until… that all happened.
CHARLOTTE
Oh. Right.
CHARLOTTE
Well… if you don’t want to return home, you don’t need to.
CHARLOTTE
But we’re not sure if Hester’s machine can easily teleport you from here and there at any time. Are you sure you really want to be classified as forever missing on Earth? Your adoptive family might worry.
HANSEL
That’s the thing. I still have unfinished business on Earth.
HANSEL
This whole thing has felt like a daydream. An escape from my real problems. Being here in the first place is an even bigger problem, but I have been feeling at ease.
HANSEL
So I don’t know… what to choose.
CHARLOTTE sighs.
CHARLOTTE
That really is a huge decision. I’m sorry you have to go through that.
CHARLOTTE
It sounds like you prefer Terra Z more. That’s great. So you should stay here.
CHARLOTTE
What about this? You tell me the name and location of your adoptive family, and I’ll fly there. I doesn’t matter how far it is, I’ll go there. Or I’ll just message them somehow. Actually, yeah, that might be better, but if you want me to fly I can. Don’t worry! Anyway, I’ll tell them about what happened, pull out some old long-lost documents about Terra Z and I’ll tell them that you won’t be coming back but you’re safe and sound. I’ll comfort them and send them flowers and chocolates and help them with whatever they need.
HANSEL pauses.
HANSEL
…Don’t you want to return to your mother, though?
CHARLOTTE
Yes, but don’t worry about that.
HANSEL
I… I don’t want to burden them with the fact that I’m not coming back. I do not wish for them to feel that pain.
CHARLOTTE nods.
HANSEL
It’s just…
HANSEL
You and Evan have so much to return to. Evan has his best friends. You have your mother. You all have mutual bonds. People who care about you, and you care about them in return.
HANSEL
And it isn’t like I don’t care about my adoptive parents. I do care about them and I sincerely thank them for all that they have done. But… I don’t know.
HANSEL sniffs.
HANSEL
You all are so set on going back. You have a life to return to. But if I leave here? I… wouldn’t be sure on what to do anymore.
HANSEL wipes his eyes.
HANSEL
Sorry.
CHARLOTTE
No, no, don’t apologise! Don’t apologise for tears.
CHARLOTTE
I can’t say that I feel your pain. I can’t say that I completely understand. But I do recognise your struggles. Whatever decision you make in the end, I’ll be completely here to support you and help you through it all.
HANSEL sniffs.
HANSEL
Thank you, Charlotte. I can’t believe I ever disliked you.
CHARLOTTE
It’s all good, Hansel. I’m here now.
Total Word Count: 1,930
- TheDisney_Writer
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Scratcher
14 posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
November 8th Daily:
Words: 446 words
Invention gone wrong: Steel balloon
Autumn Page has tried to build a new invention for a while year. She tried her best to get the supplies and money to finally build it. On August 13, 2003, Autumn Page would try to succeed with her invention. That was the problem for that day was the day everything went wrong. Autumn grabbed a camera and started recording. “Ladies and Gentlemen, I have finally done it! I have finally built the new amazing: Steel Balloon! It has everything you named to protect yourself on your journey in the sky. It includes a steel frame for the balloon and a platform for a sturdy foundation. See, the reason I made this invention was because my father Micheal Page passed on after a balloon race accident. I have studied for a year to try to fix the problem and grieve for my father. Now, today is there dayI will help the world fly high in the sky!” Autumn Page grabbed the knob for the heat and turned it high. The heat started to grow hotter and hotter by the minute. Eventually after 10 full minutes, Autumn’s balloon grew to a higher altitude. The balloon moved forward while swaying back and forth. The balloon moved toward to a higher pace until it moved incredibly fast. The speed was exhilarating especially with the steel and firm foundation. Autumn felt like she just got gold in the Olympics. That is until it went downhill. A hydraulic pipe meaning to keep the platform level had burst. Autumn had no choice but to hold all the pipes together for it to work. It didn’t so she had to take a different route. She grabbed some of the stone pillars made for emergencies and placed it evenly on the platform. The steel frame started to rip away, piece by piece, panel by panel until the only thing left was the loose fabric of the balloon. Autumn was especially surprised by this for she thought her calculations were correct. The platform descended on tremendous speed and Autumn kept screaming, “Oh no! I thought I did it right?! What went wrong?” As the platform flew down, Autumn held on for dear life. The platform fell which caused a large impact on the sea below. Waves grew as tall as 49 feet tall swept through the empty sea. The only things left of the failed steel balloon was some debris and a necklace with a star. Nobody knows the sad fate of Autumn Page but news spread of the fallen child inventor lost at sea at 15 years old. She is now with her dad in the skies above. This was the tragedy of 2003.
Words: 446 words
Invention gone wrong: Steel balloon
Autumn Page has tried to build a new invention for a while year. She tried her best to get the supplies and money to finally build it. On August 13, 2003, Autumn Page would try to succeed with her invention. That was the problem for that day was the day everything went wrong. Autumn grabbed a camera and started recording. “Ladies and Gentlemen, I have finally done it! I have finally built the new amazing: Steel Balloon! It has everything you named to protect yourself on your journey in the sky. It includes a steel frame for the balloon and a platform for a sturdy foundation. See, the reason I made this invention was because my father Micheal Page passed on after a balloon race accident. I have studied for a year to try to fix the problem and grieve for my father. Now, today is there dayI will help the world fly high in the sky!” Autumn Page grabbed the knob for the heat and turned it high. The heat started to grow hotter and hotter by the minute. Eventually after 10 full minutes, Autumn’s balloon grew to a higher altitude. The balloon moved forward while swaying back and forth. The balloon moved toward to a higher pace until it moved incredibly fast. The speed was exhilarating especially with the steel and firm foundation. Autumn felt like she just got gold in the Olympics. That is until it went downhill. A hydraulic pipe meaning to keep the platform level had burst. Autumn had no choice but to hold all the pipes together for it to work. It didn’t so she had to take a different route. She grabbed some of the stone pillars made for emergencies and placed it evenly on the platform. The steel frame started to rip away, piece by piece, panel by panel until the only thing left was the loose fabric of the balloon. Autumn was especially surprised by this for she thought her calculations were correct. The platform descended on tremendous speed and Autumn kept screaming, “Oh no! I thought I did it right?! What went wrong?” As the platform flew down, Autumn held on for dear life. The platform fell which caused a large impact on the sea below. Waves grew as tall as 49 feet tall swept through the empty sea. The only things left of the failed steel balloon was some debris and a necklace with a star. Nobody knows the sad fate of Autumn Page but news spread of the fallen child inventor lost at sea at 15 years old. She is now with her dad in the skies above. This was the tragedy of 2003.
- Runaway--
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Scratcher
30 posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Welcome to Via is too hyped that she finished this and we're in the middle of a word was so I'm not even going to properly format this (I'm so sorry)
(501 words) PART ONE :
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(311 words) PART TWO:
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(388 words) PART THREE:
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(348 words) PART FOUR:
(501 words) PART ONE :
Snapdragon glanced down at her fingers, inspecting them for any imperfection. The entire office was so boring, it was a pity they hadn’t brought anything with them. Even something simple, like some paper, or a-
“Uh- hi- snapdragon, sir?”
A voice cut through their thoughts, and the villain looked up. Standing in the doorway was an office worker, plainly clothed and wielding a clipboard as if it might protect her from the small figure sitting by the window.
“Are you the journalist I asked for?”
A shaky nod.
“Excellent! Don’t worry, I’m not here to hurt you. Just get my story told to the masses!”
They frowned, the movement barely visible through the mess of sprouts and flowers that acted as their mask. They supposed that technically what they were doing /could/ be defined as the kidnapping of various office workers. But hey, kidnappers didn’t care what happened to their kidnappees! Snapdragon had a very personal investment with these people. They wanted them alive, so they could have some fun making up stories for the media. It was almost comedic, the extent they were willing to believe, and they wanted to push this as much as they could.
The journalist turned and scampered out of the room, and Snapdragon followed, taking their time.
“So…. Do you have any questions for me?”
“Q-Questions?”
“This is an interview, or did they not brief you on that even though I /specifically/ said that was my one demand when I took ov- uhm, borrowed this building.”
Snapdragon sighed, and the flowers covering their body turned a deep red. Why was everyone in the news industry so… cowardice? There was a perfect story sitting right in front of them, and they were going to… what, ignore it? They stared blankly at the journalist- Tara, from the pin on her front- awaiting a question.
“Alright i’ll- Snapdragon. Why did you choose that name?”
“Because I like snapdragons. Next Question.”
“Why do you keep everything you do so hidden to the public?”
“Because if I don’t I’d be arrested, and on the off chance the public were given, I don’t know, a one on one interview with me, they ask stupid questions.”
She wiggled her eyebrows, leaning forward.
“Who are you, tara? Why did you become a journalist? How did you end up right here, sitting in this musty old office owned by low-lifes who didn’t even have the funds to install a basic security system? Not that it would matter, i’ve broken into far harder buildings than this.” She sniffed, looking around. “That being said, the wallpaper in their never reminded me quite so much of home.”
“…Home?” The journalist asked, speaking up unprompted for the first time. “Tell me about that.”
“You know what? Screw this.” Snapdragon picked up her chair, tossing it through the window and relishing the sharp sound against her ears as it /shattered/. “I’m going to find a better journalist who knows how to ask good questions. Have a nice life, loser.”
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(311 words) PART TWO:
Arrow swayed back and forth in his seat, trying to ignore the sweat clinging to his back. Funerals were a cruel kind of torture, he thought. There’s nothing like losing someone you love, only to be forced in a suit and tie like dressing up in the sweltering heat of summer would somehow make everything ok again. But it didn’t. It never did. It hadn’t last time he had to go to a funeral at 4, and it didn’t now he was onto his second, just shy of two years later.
“Ma- can we go yet?” He begged, tugging at her sleeve. She raised her eyebrows, shifting so her back was to him. He sighed, looking back up at the man droning on about his brother on the stage. He sighed. Couldn’t anyone see that his brother was right next to him, not in that coffin? Sure, he looked a little different now, but it was still him! Amid… with scorch marks that climbed up the side of his body like a vicious plant, and a slight pale tinge to his entire being that made him seem… different. It didn’t matter. Aaron should be out celebrating his 16th birthday today, not stuck at some stinky made up funeral where everyone was acting like he didn’t exist.
“Psst.” He hissed, sliding over so his shoulder…. Should have been touching his brother. The emptiness was harrowing. “Arron! Let’s go… Can we get ice cream, or something?”
His brother shook his head, lifting a finger to where his mother sat, before drawing it to his lips. A gesture for silence. Boring.
“Aaron!” He wailed, standing up in his seat. “Stop being so boring!”
A hush fell over the entire gathering, and the young boy turned to see the eyes of the entire congregation turned on him.
“Can’t you see? He’s not gone! He’s not!”
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(388 words) PART THREE:
“I’m going home.” Tessa laughed, grasping one of the handles on the outside of the train, and swinging outward, letting the wind that rushed past the vehicle dance between her fingertips and over her wings, almost like she was flying again. She would take off right now, The idea was so tantalising- but she had told her siblings she was going to be arriving on the train. She didn’t want them to think she had left them, not again.
She turned to the nearest passenger, and upon recognising their face pulled them into a hug. It was the girl she had shared a room with on this journey- Emma. “You’re going to love the city, I just know it.” She grinned, letting her go. “But me? I’m a country girl, through and through. I’ll be glad to get out of that place, for good.”
Emma laughed, pulling her into another hug. “I’ll miss you, either way. Thanks for being my- almost replacement sister- while you were on the train. I would have gone mad here by myself.”
“Same here, same here. I would have gone mad without someone to talk to about those letters…”
“You didn’t get one last minute, saying she was ok?”
“No, it’s like Allie’s suddenly turned into a ghost. Forest and Tara write so much, but her? I’d have expected her to write the most- but the others don’t even mention her, and when I asked they just said they’d ‘Explain when I got home.” She sighed, rubbing her glasses. “I just worry. I want them to all be safe.”
The train started wailing, and Tessa couldn’t stop herself from bouncing on her toes where she stood. The only thing that put a damper on her good mood was the flag, sitting at half mast= a tradition her hometown held for mourning the lost. She wondered who had died. She hoped it wasn’t someone she knew.
“I’ll write every day. If I don’t, assume i’m dead, or something,” Emma joked. The words were met with silence, and Tessa's face had gone white. Standing on the platform were her two siblings, a noticeable space to their side where Allie would usually stand. Around each of their necks hung pink necklaces, glowing in a gentle hue. Tessa knew what those meant. They meant Allie was dead.
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(348 words) PART FOUR:
The sun sets over the city, framing a window. We hear muffled whispers, and the sound of someone tripping over.
Will: “Aaron! You’d think being dead would mean you’d stop being so clumsy.”
Aaron: “Like you didn’t just trip over /flat ground./”
A human figure appears, and seems to almost float through the window- looking uncannily like a normal human.
Aaron: “Are you coming?”
Will: “Give me a minute.”
A second, much shorter person, appears. He seems to be a couple of years younger than the first, at 13, and has obviously gone to a lot of trouble to prepare for this excapade. He has a mask, and tight-fitting black gloves, alongside an oversized hoodie.
Aaron: “Are you wearing my hoodie?”
Will: “… no.”
Aaron laughs, and the two climb down the side of the building.
Will: “Is there an actual reason we’re not just using the front door?”
Aaron: “We’re going to rob a bank!”
Will, excitedly: “Really?!”
Aaron: “No, idiot. I just didn’t want our sister asking questions.”
Will: “She’s not too bad! Jus-”
Aaron, cutting in: “Self absorbed? A bully? Not worth your time?”
Will grimaced. “How about grieving? She can’t see you, like I can.”
The older boy shook his head, leading them through the twisting alleyways.
Aaron: “Neither can ma, or dad, or june! And they’ve been nice to you. It’s been…”
He paused, counting on his fingers.
Aaron: “Five years. That’s more than enough time to come to terms with a death. Hell, it took me less than that, and it was /my/ death!”
The ghost settled down, signaling they had reached their final location. It was the top of a roof, lit but a dim yellow lamp that looked like it had seen far too many nights unsheltered to the elements. Will sat down next to him.
Will: “Does it matter? We’re brothers. The two of us against the world.”
Aaron: “Even if I’m dead and you’re a clothing theif.”
Will laughed, turning from his brother to gaze at the few stars that snuck through the smog of the city. “Even then.”
Last edited by Runaway-- (Nov. 9, 2024 04:33:15)
- prishaJuni
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Total of 1389 words for the entire weekly
I did this out of order, but all the parts are there. Just saying.
Weekly Part Two: 100 words
“Alex!”
“ALEX!”
A pause, then a grumpy “What is it now?”
Lia grinned in the dark.
“Are you going to the ball?”
“WHAT? N-No! Why would I go?
There was a beat of silence before Alex murmured, “No one wants to go with me.”
“Oh.”
More silence. They both tried to figure out what to say.
“You could go with me!” Lia blurted.
“You’re my sister!”
“Not everyone’s partner is dating them.”
“You-That’s a paradox!” Alex spluttered.
“Why are you so flustered?”
“I am not flustered!” Alex snapped. “I’m not going to the ball. Neither are you.”
“Rude,” Lia muttered.
Weekly Part Three - 382 words
“I love you,” Abel whispered.
Seraphai grinned. “Is the great god-prince admitting to his feelings?”
Abel sighed. “Yes, Seraphai, if that is how you wish to put it.”
“You’re so formal. Loosen up a bit. Go to a few parties.”
Abel wrinkled his nose. “Parties are formal gatherings for celebration, not a dance floor for the incompetent.”
Seraphai laughed. “See? This is what I’m talking about. Stop tensing up so much and say what you want to say. It’s not as if I’m a spy or anything.”
“I-I’m scared of losing you.”
Seraphai’s eyes softened, and she wrapped her arms around him.
“I will never leave you,” she whispered. “There will never be anyone else.”
Ten years later Abel laughs. Laughs at himself, laughs at the world for being played such a fool.
Seraphai had turned out to be a spy for the other side, dating him as an excuse to collect information.
She had also been married. Married to a tall, brooding lieutenant in the other side’s army.
Abel let a tear fall down his cheek. He had been played, played by a woman with the heart of a panther.
Serephai thought about the prince, the prince from the other side. He had seemed so sweet, as if… there wasn’t any evil inside him. As if he wasn’t like his father.
Seraphai knew she’d been played, knew that the man she’d known was fake. She knew that his father must have told him to charm her out of spying on them.
Seraphai was ashamed to say it had almost worked. If it hadn’t been for her husband, Zaydinis, she would have fallen into their trap.
Abel was a cruel deceiver.
Then why did Seraphai still love him? Why did Seraphai still dream about his honey brown eyes staring at hers, deep in love?
Sometimes Seraphai wondered if she was wrong, if Abel could be turned to their side.
But that was stupid. His side couldn’t “love” anyone—they were too busy slaughtering people.
But… Abel had never liked killing things.
Maybe…
“Seraphai!” Zaydinis called.
Seraphai felt a wave of guilt flood her as she walked down the stairs.
She’d been played, played by a man with the heart of a wolf.
And she would never love her husband like she loved him.
Weekly Part One - 670 words
I smiled and adjusted my costume. It was Halloween, and I had surprised everyone by coming to school in the best costume ever.
“Your costume looks great, by the way,” Lily had said as we walked together. “I didn’t expect you to put together such a cool last minute costume.”
At that, I had smiled and thanked her, glad that I had decided to dress up at all. For the two years before this one, I had dressed up as Harry Potter because I had no idea what to be. This year, I had been determined to find something new, no matter how hard it was.
“What about this one?” Mom asked, holding up a vampire dress. It was three days before Halloween, and I still hadn’t found a costume. Mom and I had decided to go to a nearby store to see if we could find anything.
I frowned and curled my lip.
“It’s too…red.”
The said vampire dress looked more like a ball gown, the kind that girls wear to attract boys. I hated how unrealistic most of the girl’s costumes were: they were either too kiddish or too… high school style.
“Come on Prisha,” Mom urged. “Just try it on.”
When I scowled at her, she scowled back.
“Ridhu is sick. Hurry up, or I won’t even buy you a costume.”
I scowled harder.
Mom sighed.
“Just try it on, no?”
“Fine.”
I grab the horrid dress and change as quickly as I can into it.
“Prisha!”
“What?”
“Hurry up! Ridhu is alone in the cart.”
I roll my eyes, searching for the sleeves in the dress.
Why was it so poofy?
I finally find the sleeves and manage to get the dress on. I stare at myself in the mirror.
As I suspected, it looks terrible. The skirt poofs out even more at the back, making it look as if I am arching my back.
There is a knock on the door, and then a “Hurry up!”
I frown at the corset-like design and open the door, scowling at Mom.
“It looks terrible,” I state flatly.
“It’s not like we have any other options, okay? Just pick a costume and be done with it!”
When I refuse, she sighs.
“Fine, go change.”
I change out of the costume and back into my normal clothes. We leave the store, and I sit in the car silently as Mom drives.
I’m never going to find a costume, not in time.
I guess I won’t dress up this year.
***
“PRISHA! COME DOWNSTAIRS.”
I sigh and put my tablet down, trudging down the stairs to see what my mother wants.
“What is it?”
Mom pulls out her phone and shows me a picture of a costume on Amazon. Although the girl wearing the costume looks not a day older than five, the costume itself looks… amazing.
“Wow,” I whisper.
It is a costume of a huntress, with a green tunic, black velvet gloves and cape, and a sash, all embroidered in silver lining. The girl holds a bow and arrow and wears combat boots.
“The bow and arrow don’t come with it, but-“
“That’s a good thing,” I interrupt. “There are no weapons or weapon-resembling items allowed at school.”
“So… should I order it?”
“Of course!” I shout with a smile on my face.
It looks like I will have a costume after all.
“Prisha.”
A snotty voice jolts me out of my thoughts, and I turn to see my ex-friend glowering down at me.
“What are you.”
Her voice is so flat and monotonous that if I didn’t know her I’d think she barely cared about my costume. But I did know her, and something about that boring voice gave me the impression that she was jealous of me.
Of course, that might just be me hoping for the best, but oh well.
“I’m a huntress,” I reply at the same time Lily says, “She’s a huntress” with a much more pleasant expression on her face than I.
Weekly Part Four: 237 words
Parci : *starts singing and dancing to an Olivia Rodrigo song*
Asha: “What are you doing?”
Parci: *continues singing*
Asha: “Um, hello? Earth to Parci?”
Parci: *stops singing and starts blushing*
Parci: “Sorry… I got a bit carried away.”
Asha: “You know, I hate Olivia Rodrigo. I used to be obsessed with her songs until I realized that she only sang breakup songs. Now she just sounds like she’s a whining ungrateful brat.”
Parci: “…Oh.”
*Silence as Asha realizes she said something wrong*
Zara: “ASHA I’M SO HUNGRY PLEASE GIVE ME YOUR FOOD!”
Asha: *grins*
Asha: “Nope.”
Zara: “You always give Parci your food.”
Asha: “Fine.”
Zara: *frowns at the small amount of food Asha gives her*
Zara: *reaches for more*
Asha: *gives up and pushes her lunch box towards Zara with a resigned sigh*
Asha: “I’m not hungry, anyways.”
Parci: *stifles a giggle*
Asha: *glad she changed the subject*
Ansh: “Hey! Fanum tax! I want some food too!”
Asha: “See Zara? Look at what you’ve unleashed upon me!”
Zara: *snorts*
Zara: “If you give me more-“
Asha: “Nope.”
Zara: “But Aaasha…”
Asha: *grins*
Asha: “I was thinking about giving you some, until you started asking for it again.”
Zara: “What the- That literally makes no sense.”
Parci: “You can have some of mine.”
Zara: “But you don’t have Indian food!”
Parci: *face falls*
Asha: *tries to ignore it*
Asha: “Fine. Here’s some more.”
Zara: *cackles gleefully*
I did this out of order, but all the parts are there. Just saying.
Weekly Part Two: 100 words
“Alex!”
“ALEX!”
A pause, then a grumpy “What is it now?”
Lia grinned in the dark.
“Are you going to the ball?”
“WHAT? N-No! Why would I go?
There was a beat of silence before Alex murmured, “No one wants to go with me.”
“Oh.”
More silence. They both tried to figure out what to say.
“You could go with me!” Lia blurted.
“You’re my sister!”
“Not everyone’s partner is dating them.”
“You-That’s a paradox!” Alex spluttered.
“Why are you so flustered?”
“I am not flustered!” Alex snapped. “I’m not going to the ball. Neither are you.”
“Rude,” Lia muttered.
Weekly Part Three - 382 words
“I love you,” Abel whispered.
Seraphai grinned. “Is the great god-prince admitting to his feelings?”
Abel sighed. “Yes, Seraphai, if that is how you wish to put it.”
“You’re so formal. Loosen up a bit. Go to a few parties.”
Abel wrinkled his nose. “Parties are formal gatherings for celebration, not a dance floor for the incompetent.”
Seraphai laughed. “See? This is what I’m talking about. Stop tensing up so much and say what you want to say. It’s not as if I’m a spy or anything.”
“I-I’m scared of losing you.”
Seraphai’s eyes softened, and she wrapped her arms around him.
“I will never leave you,” she whispered. “There will never be anyone else.”
Ten years later Abel laughs. Laughs at himself, laughs at the world for being played such a fool.
Seraphai had turned out to be a spy for the other side, dating him as an excuse to collect information.
She had also been married. Married to a tall, brooding lieutenant in the other side’s army.
Abel let a tear fall down his cheek. He had been played, played by a woman with the heart of a panther.
Serephai thought about the prince, the prince from the other side. He had seemed so sweet, as if… there wasn’t any evil inside him. As if he wasn’t like his father.
Seraphai knew she’d been played, knew that the man she’d known was fake. She knew that his father must have told him to charm her out of spying on them.
Seraphai was ashamed to say it had almost worked. If it hadn’t been for her husband, Zaydinis, she would have fallen into their trap.
Abel was a cruel deceiver.
Then why did Seraphai still love him? Why did Seraphai still dream about his honey brown eyes staring at hers, deep in love?
Sometimes Seraphai wondered if she was wrong, if Abel could be turned to their side.
But that was stupid. His side couldn’t “love” anyone—they were too busy slaughtering people.
But… Abel had never liked killing things.
Maybe…
“Seraphai!” Zaydinis called.
Seraphai felt a wave of guilt flood her as she walked down the stairs.
She’d been played, played by a man with the heart of a wolf.
And she would never love her husband like she loved him.
Weekly Part One - 670 words
I smiled and adjusted my costume. It was Halloween, and I had surprised everyone by coming to school in the best costume ever.
“Your costume looks great, by the way,” Lily had said as we walked together. “I didn’t expect you to put together such a cool last minute costume.”
At that, I had smiled and thanked her, glad that I had decided to dress up at all. For the two years before this one, I had dressed up as Harry Potter because I had no idea what to be. This year, I had been determined to find something new, no matter how hard it was.
“What about this one?” Mom asked, holding up a vampire dress. It was three days before Halloween, and I still hadn’t found a costume. Mom and I had decided to go to a nearby store to see if we could find anything.
I frowned and curled my lip.
“It’s too…red.”
The said vampire dress looked more like a ball gown, the kind that girls wear to attract boys. I hated how unrealistic most of the girl’s costumes were: they were either too kiddish or too… high school style.
“Come on Prisha,” Mom urged. “Just try it on.”
When I scowled at her, she scowled back.
“Ridhu is sick. Hurry up, or I won’t even buy you a costume.”
I scowled harder.
Mom sighed.
“Just try it on, no?”
“Fine.”
I grab the horrid dress and change as quickly as I can into it.
“Prisha!”
“What?”
“Hurry up! Ridhu is alone in the cart.”
I roll my eyes, searching for the sleeves in the dress.
Why was it so poofy?
I finally find the sleeves and manage to get the dress on. I stare at myself in the mirror.
As I suspected, it looks terrible. The skirt poofs out even more at the back, making it look as if I am arching my back.
There is a knock on the door, and then a “Hurry up!”
I frown at the corset-like design and open the door, scowling at Mom.
“It looks terrible,” I state flatly.
“It’s not like we have any other options, okay? Just pick a costume and be done with it!”
When I refuse, she sighs.
“Fine, go change.”
I change out of the costume and back into my normal clothes. We leave the store, and I sit in the car silently as Mom drives.
I’m never going to find a costume, not in time.
I guess I won’t dress up this year.
***
“PRISHA! COME DOWNSTAIRS.”
I sigh and put my tablet down, trudging down the stairs to see what my mother wants.
“What is it?”
Mom pulls out her phone and shows me a picture of a costume on Amazon. Although the girl wearing the costume looks not a day older than five, the costume itself looks… amazing.
“Wow,” I whisper.
It is a costume of a huntress, with a green tunic, black velvet gloves and cape, and a sash, all embroidered in silver lining. The girl holds a bow and arrow and wears combat boots.
“The bow and arrow don’t come with it, but-“
“That’s a good thing,” I interrupt. “There are no weapons or weapon-resembling items allowed at school.”
“So… should I order it?”
“Of course!” I shout with a smile on my face.
It looks like I will have a costume after all.
“Prisha.”
A snotty voice jolts me out of my thoughts, and I turn to see my ex-friend glowering down at me.
“What are you.”
Her voice is so flat and monotonous that if I didn’t know her I’d think she barely cared about my costume. But I did know her, and something about that boring voice gave me the impression that she was jealous of me.
Of course, that might just be me hoping for the best, but oh well.
“I’m a huntress,” I reply at the same time Lily says, “She’s a huntress” with a much more pleasant expression on her face than I.
Weekly Part Four: 237 words
Parci : *starts singing and dancing to an Olivia Rodrigo song*
Asha: “What are you doing?”
Parci: *continues singing*
Asha: “Um, hello? Earth to Parci?”
Parci: *stops singing and starts blushing*
Parci: “Sorry… I got a bit carried away.”
Asha: “You know, I hate Olivia Rodrigo. I used to be obsessed with her songs until I realized that she only sang breakup songs. Now she just sounds like she’s a whining ungrateful brat.”
Parci: “…Oh.”
*Silence as Asha realizes she said something wrong*
Zara: “ASHA I’M SO HUNGRY PLEASE GIVE ME YOUR FOOD!”
Asha: *grins*
Asha: “Nope.”
Zara: “You always give Parci your food.”
Asha: “Fine.”
Zara: *frowns at the small amount of food Asha gives her*
Zara: *reaches for more*
Asha: *gives up and pushes her lunch box towards Zara with a resigned sigh*
Asha: “I’m not hungry, anyways.”
Parci: *stifles a giggle*
Asha: *glad she changed the subject*
Ansh: “Hey! Fanum tax! I want some food too!”
Asha: “See Zara? Look at what you’ve unleashed upon me!”
Zara: *snorts*
Zara: “If you give me more-“
Asha: “Nope.”
Zara: “But Aaasha…”
Asha: *grins*
Asha: “I was thinking about giving you some, until you started asking for it again.”
Zara: “What the- That literally makes no sense.”
Parci: “You can have some of mine.”
Zara: “But you don’t have Indian food!”
Parci: *face falls*
Asha: *tries to ignore it*
Asha: “Fine. Here’s some more.”
Zara: *cackles gleefully*
- smalltoe
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Weekly #1
1740 words total
Part 1 - Consistent Character Voices
1014 words
“I must remember to replace that chandelier,” Valensia muttered under her breath.
The crystals had grown dull and faded after many years, and the sun did not glint off them the way it used to—there was only so much constant re-polishing could do, after all. Valensia had not found the time to look for a replacement yet—and the household staff hardly seemed to care, too busy scurrying about with dusters and poison, preoccupied with the mold gathering on the ground floor and the rats gathering on the roof. No matter, Valensia would sort it herself. Besides, staff could hardly be trusted to make tasteful decorative decisions.
Her heels clicked on the marble flooring as she swept through the entrance hall. She did not bother to lift her skirts—it would only draw attention to the frayed edges—so she stepped carefully, to avoid catching a shoe on any fabric. She could not possibly afford to tumble or trip without anyone to catch her.
“Pardon me, ma’am?”
Valensia flinched at the sudden voice, jerking her gaze to the side of the entrance hall. A manservant hovered near the doors, fresh tablecloths piled in his arms.
“Oh,” Valensia paused, attempting to still her rapid breathing and racing heartbeat. “Oh, it was nothing important.”
I must remember not to talk to myself, she reminded herself as she slowly regained her composure. It is not proper.
“My apologies. Where are you going, ma’am?” the manservant asked as Valensia began to walk towards the door. His fingers twitched in the direction of the handle, as if unsure whether to open it.
“Out,” Valensia declared. She reached the door before she did, and gestured for him to open it for her.
“Out where?” The manservant struggled with the heavy handle. “Ma’am,” he added, hastily.
I must remember to replace that door handle, Valensia thought to herself. The gold was tarnished after many decades, and it did not shine under the light of the chandelier like it used to.
“I am going for a stroll,” Valensia specified, as the door finally swung open.
“Of course.” The manservant stood aside to let her pass, readjusting his bundle of tablecloths. “Are you sure you don’t want to take your coat, ma’am? It looks like it’s going to rain outside.” He eyed the grey sky warily.
Valensia shrugged him off, daintily. “I will be quite alright without.”
She strode into the fog, head held high, without a backward glance.
Perched on the roof, Bella nodded the signal.
The others, waiting in a boat tied at the back of the canalside house, rose their arms in acknowledgement and rose from their hiding places.
Bella waited until her target had rounded the corner, then jumped from balcony to balcony until she was close enough to slide the rest of the way down the side of the house and onto the street, boots clattering on the cobblestones as she landed.
She launched into a hurried walk, slowing when her target was in sight once again. Sticking to the shadows, shrouded in the fog at the edge of the alley, Bella followed her.
Valensia twisted her rings around her shaking fingers, the hair raised on the back of her neck.
She had the most unsettling feeling that somebody was watching her. That somebody was trailing her, staying just out of sight.
She threw a glance over her shoulder. A flicker of shadow darted away into the fog.
Dread coiled in the pit of her stomach. She knew who this was.
She spun around, quickening her pace. Her breath came in short gasps that she struggled to keep measured, her heels clacking on the cobblestones as she hurried back to the house. Her fists clenched, perfectly manicured nails digging into the soft skin of her palms.
As she rounded the corner, a figure stalked out of the shadows.
“Well, look what the canal washed up.” Valensia’s voice was cold. She tipped her head upwards, glaring down at Bella, as if she was the picture of elegance and confidence.
But Bella knew her too well. She saw the way Valensia’s hands were clenched to stop them from trembling. Saw the way her eyes darted to the alley behind her as if mapping out escape routes.
“Well,” Bella mocked, “I s’pose the canal washed up revolution today.”
“And I suppose you must always speak dramatics,” Valensia spat. Her face was flushing red underneath her powder—she had never learned to hide her anger.
“You’re one to talk,” Bella retorted right back at her. “‘Least I’m honest.”
“You know nothing of honesty.” Valensia took a step back.
Bella stepped forward, baring her teeth in a silent snarl. Her sist—target wasn’t going anywhere.
Valensia’s eyes widened. Her hands shot forward, palms out, as if to ease a wild animal. “Enough of these antics, Belladonna.”
“Antics?” Bella raised an eyebrow. “I’m fighting for the city’s freedom. Doesn’t sound like antics to me.”
“This has been going too far,” Valensia protested. “I know what you did, I know that you—”
“Don’t talk to me about that!” Bella snapped. She jolted another step forward, driving Valensia into the wall.
“You…” Valensia whispered, the venom in her words permeated with fear. “You mvrdearer.”
“Don’t call me that!” Bella lurched forward, grabbed her sister’s shoulders and threw her against the hard stone of the wall.
Valensia gasped as the breath was knocked out of her. Her quivering lips formed soundlessly around words, and Bella knew her sister too well, knew what she was trying to say.
“You monster.”
Bella stilled.
“Maybe you’re right,” she whispered, a smirk playing at the edges of her lips. “Maybe I am the monster underneath the city. I am the serpent in the canals. Either way, revolution is coming and I will bring your empire crumbling down.”
“Your fearmongering will not work,” Valensia said weakly. She squared her shoulders and stood up straighter. “This empire has prevailed for centuries. Why would your rioting demolish it now?”
Bella only grinned, chucking to herself.
Beneath their feet, the ground began to tremble.
Part 2 - Dialogue
162 words total
79 words of dialogue
“I know it’s you.” My voice is cold. “I don’t know why you’re doing this. But you have to call them off.”
Emmeline shrank back against the wall, trembling. Her mouth moved silently, trying to form words.
I take a step forward. “Emmeline. Call them off.”
She doesn’t meet my eyes. When she finally speaks, her words come in a hoarse whisper. “I didn’t mean it to turn out like this.”
“Sure you didn’t,” I scoff. I step forward again, and she flinches away.
“You… you don’t understand,” she stammers.
“I understand * well,” I spit. “You messed with what you shouldn’t’ve been messing in. Now we’re all paying the price.”
Emmeline slumps against the wall, head clutched in her hands. “I’m sorry. It’s my fault. I’m sorry.”
“‘Course it’s your fault,” I say, darkly. “If you’re sorry, call off your monsters.”
“I can’t,” she sobs. “I can’t.”
When she finally looks up, something else stares back from behind her blank eyes.
Part 3 - Foreshadowing
332 words
I found him at the edge of the canal.
He sat with his feet dangling over the edge. Water had soaked through his shoes, and the faint outline of splashes—thrown up every time a boat passed too close—darkened his trousers.
“What the hell, Evan?” I snapped, striding over to him. “I’ve been looking for you all bloody day.”
“Sorry,” he muttered. He fiddled with the hem of his shirt.
“Doesn’t matter,” I grumble, although I fully intend to bring this up later. “D’you have any leads?”
“Leads?” He squints up at me, despite the lack of sun. “I… No. No leads.”
“Have you even been looking?” I fold my arms, glaring at him. He looks away.
“I…”
“What is wrong with you today?” I shake his shoulders, roughly. “Wake up.”
“Sorry,” he repeats.
“You’re never like this,” I protest. “Did something happen? Are you okay?”
He shakes his head, then nods. “I just… don’t feel too good, is all.”
I raise my eyebrow.
“There’s this itching in my head. Behind my eyes. And I don’t feel like myself, I… I don’t know how to describe it. I’m probably just sick. I’ll be back to normal tomorrow.”
I nod.
A pause.
“Did you find any leads?” he asks, eventually.
“Yeah, but it might not be something you wanna hear.” I sigh, sitting beside him.
I wait. He doesn’t prompt me to continue. I continue anyway.
“I found evidence that…” I reconsider mid-sentence. “Y’know what, nevermind.”
“M’kay,” he mumbles.
“Did you…” I don’t know how to phrase this. “Did you do anything last night? Like, go for a walk or something where you wouldn’t usually?”
“No.” He shakes his head, limply.
“Okay. Where were you last night?”
“I dunno,” he mumbles.
Dread tightens in the pit of my stomach. “What did you do last night, then? Where did you go?”
“I dunno,” he mumbles again. “Nowhere.”
“I think you’re lying.”
“I told you, I don’t feel too good. Just leave me alone.”
Part 4 - Script
232 words
DISTRESSED WOMAN: I-I’m calling to report a mvrdear.
POLICE OFFICER: Can you tell me your exact location, please?
WOMAN: On the bridge by the station. There’s a body in the canal.
OFFICER: Right. We’ll send officers over right away. And… can you be sure that it wasn’t… you know…
WOMAN: He didn’t jump.
OFFICER: Can you be sure?
WOMAN: It’s… it’s one of them poison cases, sir. He’s got them red marks. And those white eyes.
OFFICER: *swears* You get to safety, okay? Stay inside until it’s all cleared up.
WOMAN: And you can clear it up, right?
OFFICER: Of course. We’re working on it right now.
WOMAN: You’ll figure all this out, won’t you?
OFFICER: Of course, ma’am.
OFFICER: Sergeant Red, this is urgent. It’s happened again.
SERGEANT: Same symptoms?
OFFICER: The woman on the phone said so.
SERGEANT: …All right. Get it cleaned up, stop it spreading.
OFFICER: Already on it, Sergeant.
SERGEANT: Thank you. We should consider locking down the city.
OFFICER: Locking down the city?
SERGEANT: From what we know, it’s contagious and it’s fatal. Don’t want the rest of the world getting infected, too.
OFFICER: I… I suppose not.
SERGEANT: Constable, I think we’re dealing with something we’ve never seen before.
OFFICER: I thought you said this was the work of a cerial kspiller?
SERGEANT: That’s what I used to think. Now, I think it’s worse.
OFFICER: Worse, how?
SERGEANT: I no longer think what we’re dealing with is human at all.
1740 words total
Part 1 - Consistent Character Voices
1014 words
“I must remember to replace that chandelier,” Valensia muttered under her breath.
The crystals had grown dull and faded after many years, and the sun did not glint off them the way it used to—there was only so much constant re-polishing could do, after all. Valensia had not found the time to look for a replacement yet—and the household staff hardly seemed to care, too busy scurrying about with dusters and poison, preoccupied with the mold gathering on the ground floor and the rats gathering on the roof. No matter, Valensia would sort it herself. Besides, staff could hardly be trusted to make tasteful decorative decisions.
Her heels clicked on the marble flooring as she swept through the entrance hall. She did not bother to lift her skirts—it would only draw attention to the frayed edges—so she stepped carefully, to avoid catching a shoe on any fabric. She could not possibly afford to tumble or trip without anyone to catch her.
“Pardon me, ma’am?”
Valensia flinched at the sudden voice, jerking her gaze to the side of the entrance hall. A manservant hovered near the doors, fresh tablecloths piled in his arms.
“Oh,” Valensia paused, attempting to still her rapid breathing and racing heartbeat. “Oh, it was nothing important.”
I must remember not to talk to myself, she reminded herself as she slowly regained her composure. It is not proper.
“My apologies. Where are you going, ma’am?” the manservant asked as Valensia began to walk towards the door. His fingers twitched in the direction of the handle, as if unsure whether to open it.
“Out,” Valensia declared. She reached the door before she did, and gestured for him to open it for her.
“Out where?” The manservant struggled with the heavy handle. “Ma’am,” he added, hastily.
I must remember to replace that door handle, Valensia thought to herself. The gold was tarnished after many decades, and it did not shine under the light of the chandelier like it used to.
“I am going for a stroll,” Valensia specified, as the door finally swung open.
“Of course.” The manservant stood aside to let her pass, readjusting his bundle of tablecloths. “Are you sure you don’t want to take your coat, ma’am? It looks like it’s going to rain outside.” He eyed the grey sky warily.
Valensia shrugged him off, daintily. “I will be quite alright without.”
She strode into the fog, head held high, without a backward glance.
Perched on the roof, Bella nodded the signal.
The others, waiting in a boat tied at the back of the canalside house, rose their arms in acknowledgement and rose from their hiding places.
Bella waited until her target had rounded the corner, then jumped from balcony to balcony until she was close enough to slide the rest of the way down the side of the house and onto the street, boots clattering on the cobblestones as she landed.
She launched into a hurried walk, slowing when her target was in sight once again. Sticking to the shadows, shrouded in the fog at the edge of the alley, Bella followed her.
Valensia twisted her rings around her shaking fingers, the hair raised on the back of her neck.
She had the most unsettling feeling that somebody was watching her. That somebody was trailing her, staying just out of sight.
She threw a glance over her shoulder. A flicker of shadow darted away into the fog.
Dread coiled in the pit of her stomach. She knew who this was.
She spun around, quickening her pace. Her breath came in short gasps that she struggled to keep measured, her heels clacking on the cobblestones as she hurried back to the house. Her fists clenched, perfectly manicured nails digging into the soft skin of her palms.
As she rounded the corner, a figure stalked out of the shadows.
“Well, look what the canal washed up.” Valensia’s voice was cold. She tipped her head upwards, glaring down at Bella, as if she was the picture of elegance and confidence.
But Bella knew her too well. She saw the way Valensia’s hands were clenched to stop them from trembling. Saw the way her eyes darted to the alley behind her as if mapping out escape routes.
“Well,” Bella mocked, “I s’pose the canal washed up revolution today.”
“And I suppose you must always speak dramatics,” Valensia spat. Her face was flushing red underneath her powder—she had never learned to hide her anger.
“You’re one to talk,” Bella retorted right back at her. “‘Least I’m honest.”
“You know nothing of honesty.” Valensia took a step back.
Bella stepped forward, baring her teeth in a silent snarl. Her sist—target wasn’t going anywhere.
Valensia’s eyes widened. Her hands shot forward, palms out, as if to ease a wild animal. “Enough of these antics, Belladonna.”
“Antics?” Bella raised an eyebrow. “I’m fighting for the city’s freedom. Doesn’t sound like antics to me.”
“This has been going too far,” Valensia protested. “I know what you did, I know that you—”
“Don’t talk to me about that!” Bella snapped. She jolted another step forward, driving Valensia into the wall.
“You…” Valensia whispered, the venom in her words permeated with fear. “You mvrdearer.”
“Don’t call me that!” Bella lurched forward, grabbed her sister’s shoulders and threw her against the hard stone of the wall.
Valensia gasped as the breath was knocked out of her. Her quivering lips formed soundlessly around words, and Bella knew her sister too well, knew what she was trying to say.
“You monster.”
Bella stilled.
“Maybe you’re right,” she whispered, a smirk playing at the edges of her lips. “Maybe I am the monster underneath the city. I am the serpent in the canals. Either way, revolution is coming and I will bring your empire crumbling down.”
“Your fearmongering will not work,” Valensia said weakly. She squared her shoulders and stood up straighter. “This empire has prevailed for centuries. Why would your rioting demolish it now?”
Bella only grinned, chucking to herself.
Beneath their feet, the ground began to tremble.
Part 2 - Dialogue
162 words total
79 words of dialogue
“I know it’s you.” My voice is cold. “I don’t know why you’re doing this. But you have to call them off.”
Emmeline shrank back against the wall, trembling. Her mouth moved silently, trying to form words.
I take a step forward. “Emmeline. Call them off.”
She doesn’t meet my eyes. When she finally speaks, her words come in a hoarse whisper. “I didn’t mean it to turn out like this.”
“Sure you didn’t,” I scoff. I step forward again, and she flinches away.
“You… you don’t understand,” she stammers.
“I understand * well,” I spit. “You messed with what you shouldn’t’ve been messing in. Now we’re all paying the price.”
Emmeline slumps against the wall, head clutched in her hands. “I’m sorry. It’s my fault. I’m sorry.”
“‘Course it’s your fault,” I say, darkly. “If you’re sorry, call off your monsters.”
“I can’t,” she sobs. “I can’t.”
When she finally looks up, something else stares back from behind her blank eyes.
Part 3 - Foreshadowing
332 words
I found him at the edge of the canal.
He sat with his feet dangling over the edge. Water had soaked through his shoes, and the faint outline of splashes—thrown up every time a boat passed too close—darkened his trousers.
“What the hell, Evan?” I snapped, striding over to him. “I’ve been looking for you all bloody day.”
“Sorry,” he muttered. He fiddled with the hem of his shirt.
“Doesn’t matter,” I grumble, although I fully intend to bring this up later. “D’you have any leads?”
“Leads?” He squints up at me, despite the lack of sun. “I… No. No leads.”
“Have you even been looking?” I fold my arms, glaring at him. He looks away.
“I…”
“What is wrong with you today?” I shake his shoulders, roughly. “Wake up.”
“Sorry,” he repeats.
“You’re never like this,” I protest. “Did something happen? Are you okay?”
He shakes his head, then nods. “I just… don’t feel too good, is all.”
I raise my eyebrow.
“There’s this itching in my head. Behind my eyes. And I don’t feel like myself, I… I don’t know how to describe it. I’m probably just sick. I’ll be back to normal tomorrow.”
I nod.
A pause.
“Did you find any leads?” he asks, eventually.
“Yeah, but it might not be something you wanna hear.” I sigh, sitting beside him.
I wait. He doesn’t prompt me to continue. I continue anyway.
“I found evidence that…” I reconsider mid-sentence. “Y’know what, nevermind.”
“M’kay,” he mumbles.
“Did you…” I don’t know how to phrase this. “Did you do anything last night? Like, go for a walk or something where you wouldn’t usually?”
“No.” He shakes his head, limply.
“Okay. Where were you last night?”
“I dunno,” he mumbles.
Dread tightens in the pit of my stomach. “What did you do last night, then? Where did you go?”
“I dunno,” he mumbles again. “Nowhere.”
“I think you’re lying.”
“I told you, I don’t feel too good. Just leave me alone.”
Part 4 - Script
232 words
DISTRESSED WOMAN: I-I’m calling to report a mvrdear.
POLICE OFFICER: Can you tell me your exact location, please?
WOMAN: On the bridge by the station. There’s a body in the canal.
OFFICER: Right. We’ll send officers over right away. And… can you be sure that it wasn’t… you know…
WOMAN: He didn’t jump.
OFFICER: Can you be sure?
WOMAN: It’s… it’s one of them poison cases, sir. He’s got them red marks. And those white eyes.
OFFICER: *swears* You get to safety, okay? Stay inside until it’s all cleared up.
WOMAN: And you can clear it up, right?
OFFICER: Of course. We’re working on it right now.
WOMAN: You’ll figure all this out, won’t you?
OFFICER: Of course, ma’am.
OFFICER: Sergeant Red, this is urgent. It’s happened again.
SERGEANT: Same symptoms?
OFFICER: The woman on the phone said so.
SERGEANT: …All right. Get it cleaned up, stop it spreading.
OFFICER: Already on it, Sergeant.
SERGEANT: Thank you. We should consider locking down the city.
OFFICER: Locking down the city?
SERGEANT: From what we know, it’s contagious and it’s fatal. Don’t want the rest of the world getting infected, too.
OFFICER: I… I suppose not.
SERGEANT: Constable, I think we’re dealing with something we’ve never seen before.
OFFICER: I thought you said this was the work of a cerial kspiller?
SERGEANT: That’s what I used to think. Now, I think it’s worse.
OFFICER: Worse, how?
SERGEANT: I no longer think what we’re dealing with is human at all.
- 1lMaM
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
she glowed orange in the dark
golden shine of kings and queens
simple beauty, perfect mark
like i seek, a waking dream
orange hair to keep aloft
my vision blurred, only her
was night ever quite this soft?
sudden light in darkness spurred
her brilliant beauty, stunning mind
grounding rock in stifling night
shattered heart, the parts aligned
orange fills my every sight
golden shine of kings and queens
simple beauty, perfect mark
like i seek, a waking dream
orange hair to keep aloft
my vision blurred, only her
was night ever quite this soft?
sudden light in darkness spurred
her brilliant beauty, stunning mind
grounding rock in stifling night
shattered heart, the parts aligned
orange fills my every sight
- Milkysplash
-
Scratcher
1000+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
Non-Stop SWC Parody (1,164 words)
After School I went back to my desk
A-after school I went back to my desk
I finished up my studies and I wrote some more
I wrote some more, now I’m on the floor
Even though we started at the very same time,
Another cabin began to climb
How to account for their rise to the top?
Man, they’re just non-stop!
Members of the community, are you aware that we’re making history?
This is the first daily of our brand new session, the writing prompt behind our writing
We intend to prove beyond a shadow of a doubt, with our assistant campers-
Cabinmates, leaders sit down.
We’re gonna write more than we did before
That’s all you had to say
Okay, one more thing-
Why do we procrastinate as we're running out of time?
Why do we procrastinate as we're running out of time?
Why do we procrastinate as we're running out of time?
Soon that attitude may be our doom
Aww!
Why do we write like we're running out of time?
Write day and night like we're running out of time?
Every day we write like we're running out of time
Keep on fighting in the mean time
(Non-stop!)
Competitions such an old song that we can write along in harmony
And nowhere is it better than in SWC
The sessions wars are increasingly chaotic
And that’s why (they’re just)
Writing seems to be calling me (non-stop!)
I wrote my stories, I’ve practically perfected them
I’ve seen writing prompts and I’ve written them
Now, for a strong cabin spirit
If not then I’ll be last on the leaderboard
Panicking as I try to gain more points for my cabin
(Awww)
My cabin’s at the top of the leaderboard
We’re top of the main cabin leaderboard!
Here I’m outwardly screaming
Now what I’m bout to say may sound indelicate (Awww!)
Goes and proposes that their cabin should be warred (what?)
Their own plan to rig the leaderboard (what?)
Writes for six hours, their cabins still top
A competitive cabin
Yo, who the heck is this?
Why do we always write what we want?
Why do we always write what we want?
Every word written guarantees
A higher position on the leaderboard
(Awww!)
Why do we write like it's going out of style? (Hey!)
Why do we write like it's going out of style? (Hey!)
Every day we write like we're running out of time
Do what you do
Hey, Leader
Camper, sir?
Well it's the middle of the night
Go to sleep, sir.
Is it that important?
Yes, you should sleep
What do you want?
Go to sleep, please
Okay?
I know I write too much, I'm insane
But our cabin's at the bottom of the leaderboard
Our cabin needs some strong motivation, you're the solution
What is it?
A new list of cabin expectations?
No
Hear me out!
No way
A list of responsibilities
Written in the cabin description
No-one will write more
I disagree!
And when it fails?
We'll be bottom of the leaderboard
Leader, that's why we need it
We all need to sleep!
But we need to write
We all need to rest
We have to gain points
We're at the bottom of the leaderboard
No, no way
You're making a mistake
Go to sleep.
Hey! What are you waiting for?
What do you stall for?
What?
If we're bottom of the leaderboard, what was it all for?
Do you want us to win?
Of course!
Then write!
And what if you need to sleep?
Listen, we did dailies, weeklies, and we wrote
For a position on the leaderboard that isn't even good
For one in this session, take a stand with pride
I don't understand how you sleep through the night.
I'd like to sleep as much as I can
(Go to bed now, go to bed now, go to bed now)
I'd rather my grades be top of my list
I'm taking my time, priotitising my life but still writing as much as I can
Watching the tension grow
I am going off to bed now
I'm so tired of writing all day long
I'll be awake in the morning
Ready to help out as much as I can
It is not a lot of fun but
I'd rather sleep than write all night
Go to bed now
Stay awake
Don't forget to sleep now
Look at where you are now
Look at where we started
The fact that we're this high is a miracle
Just go to bed,
That would be enough
And if you could
Listen to the advice of our leader
That would be enough
The campers and leaders of each cabin join forces to write as much as they can
To gain as much points to end up at the top of the leaderboard
The plan was to do as many dailies as possible
In the end, cabin wars came
One cabin lost some wars
Another cabin won some wars
Bangsian won all of them and remained top
How do we write like we're running out of time
Write day and night like we're running out of time
Every day we write like we're running out of time
Are we running out of time?
How do we write like tomorrow won't arrive?
How do we write like we need it to survive?
How do we write every second we're alive,
Every second we're alive
Every second we're alive
They're asking me to write
I'm doing the best I can
To get our cabin to the top
I'm asking you to help me out (Words or sleep?)
I know it's a lot to ask (Words or sleep?)
To write as much as you possibly can
Leader, do you want we to write, or go to bed?
Write the words.
Let's go.
Camper-
I have to write
Camper-
I have to write
Look around, look around at how low we are right now
Helpless
They are asking me to write
Look around, haven't you written enough?
We will never be satisfied
What would be enough
We will never be satisfied (To be satisfied)
Satisfied, satisfied
The leaderboard has it's eyes
Look around, look around
Why do we write like we're running out of time
On you
Isn't this enough
Why do we write like we're running out of time? (Non-stop!)
What would be enough?
We will never be satisfied
Why do we write like we're running out of time? (Non-stop)
Satisfied, satisfied
The leaderboard has its eyes
Soon that attitude will be our doom (Non-stop)
On you
Why do we write like we're running out of time? (Non-stop)
Why do we write like
The leaderboard has its eyes on you?
I am not gonna stop writing my words (Just you wait)
I am not gonna stop writing my words (Just you wait)
My cabin will be top of the leaderboard
Top of the leaderboard, just you wait
I am not gonna stop writing my words!
After School I went back to my desk
A-after school I went back to my desk
I finished up my studies and I wrote some more
I wrote some more, now I’m on the floor
Even though we started at the very same time,
Another cabin began to climb
How to account for their rise to the top?
Man, they’re just non-stop!
Members of the community, are you aware that we’re making history?
This is the first daily of our brand new session, the writing prompt behind our writing
We intend to prove beyond a shadow of a doubt, with our assistant campers-
Cabinmates, leaders sit down.
We’re gonna write more than we did before
That’s all you had to say
Okay, one more thing-
Why do we procrastinate as we're running out of time?
Why do we procrastinate as we're running out of time?
Why do we procrastinate as we're running out of time?
Soon that attitude may be our doom
Aww!
Why do we write like we're running out of time?
Write day and night like we're running out of time?
Every day we write like we're running out of time
Keep on fighting in the mean time
(Non-stop!)
Competitions such an old song that we can write along in harmony
And nowhere is it better than in SWC
The sessions wars are increasingly chaotic
And that’s why (they’re just)
Writing seems to be calling me (non-stop!)
I wrote my stories, I’ve practically perfected them
I’ve seen writing prompts and I’ve written them
Now, for a strong cabin spirit
If not then I’ll be last on the leaderboard
Panicking as I try to gain more points for my cabin
(Awww)
My cabin’s at the top of the leaderboard
We’re top of the main cabin leaderboard!
Here I’m outwardly screaming
Now what I’m bout to say may sound indelicate (Awww!)
Goes and proposes that their cabin should be warred (what?)
Their own plan to rig the leaderboard (what?)
Writes for six hours, their cabins still top
A competitive cabin
Yo, who the heck is this?
Why do we always write what we want?
Why do we always write what we want?
Every word written guarantees
A higher position on the leaderboard
(Awww!)
Why do we write like it's going out of style? (Hey!)
Why do we write like it's going out of style? (Hey!)
Every day we write like we're running out of time
Do what you do
Hey, Leader
Camper, sir?
Well it's the middle of the night
Go to sleep, sir.
Is it that important?
Yes, you should sleep
What do you want?
Go to sleep, please
Okay?
I know I write too much, I'm insane
But our cabin's at the bottom of the leaderboard
Our cabin needs some strong motivation, you're the solution
What is it?
A new list of cabin expectations?
No
Hear me out!
No way
A list of responsibilities
Written in the cabin description
No-one will write more
I disagree!
And when it fails?
We'll be bottom of the leaderboard
Leader, that's why we need it
We all need to sleep!
But we need to write
We all need to rest
We have to gain points
We're at the bottom of the leaderboard
No, no way
You're making a mistake
Go to sleep.
Hey! What are you waiting for?
What do you stall for?
What?
If we're bottom of the leaderboard, what was it all for?
Do you want us to win?
Of course!
Then write!
And what if you need to sleep?
Listen, we did dailies, weeklies, and we wrote
For a position on the leaderboard that isn't even good
For one in this session, take a stand with pride
I don't understand how you sleep through the night.
I'd like to sleep as much as I can
(Go to bed now, go to bed now, go to bed now)
I'd rather my grades be top of my list
I'm taking my time, priotitising my life but still writing as much as I can
Watching the tension grow
I am going off to bed now
I'm so tired of writing all day long
I'll be awake in the morning
Ready to help out as much as I can
It is not a lot of fun but
I'd rather sleep than write all night
Go to bed now
Stay awake
Don't forget to sleep now
Look at where you are now
Look at where we started
The fact that we're this high is a miracle
Just go to bed,
That would be enough
And if you could
Listen to the advice of our leader
That would be enough
The campers and leaders of each cabin join forces to write as much as they can
To gain as much points to end up at the top of the leaderboard
The plan was to do as many dailies as possible
In the end, cabin wars came
One cabin lost some wars
Another cabin won some wars
Bangsian won all of them and remained top
How do we write like we're running out of time
Write day and night like we're running out of time
Every day we write like we're running out of time
Are we running out of time?
How do we write like tomorrow won't arrive?
How do we write like we need it to survive?
How do we write every second we're alive,
Every second we're alive
Every second we're alive
They're asking me to write
I'm doing the best I can
To get our cabin to the top
I'm asking you to help me out (Words or sleep?)
I know it's a lot to ask (Words or sleep?)
To write as much as you possibly can
Leader, do you want we to write, or go to bed?
Write the words.
Let's go.
Camper-
I have to write
Camper-
I have to write
Look around, look around at how low we are right now
Helpless
They are asking me to write
Look around, haven't you written enough?
We will never be satisfied
What would be enough
We will never be satisfied (To be satisfied)
Satisfied, satisfied
The leaderboard has it's eyes
Look around, look around
Why do we write like we're running out of time
On you
Isn't this enough
Why do we write like we're running out of time? (Non-stop!)
What would be enough?
We will never be satisfied
Why do we write like we're running out of time? (Non-stop)
Satisfied, satisfied
The leaderboard has its eyes
Soon that attitude will be our doom (Non-stop)
On you
Why do we write like we're running out of time? (Non-stop)
Why do we write like
The leaderboard has its eyes on you?
I am not gonna stop writing my words (Just you wait)
I am not gonna stop writing my words (Just you wait)
My cabin will be top of the leaderboard
Top of the leaderboard, just you wait
I am not gonna stop writing my words!
- Milkysplash
-
Scratcher
1000+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
My Shot Parody - 1094 Words
I am not gonna stop writing my words
I am not gonna stop writing my words
Hey, I'm just like my cabin
I'm young, creative, and competitive
And I am not gonna stop writing my words
I'll write until I hit my word goal
I probably should go to sleep, but dang, we're so close to the top
The problem is I need to write a lot of words, but need to work
I gotta write just for my cabin to be top
With every word, I gain points
I'm writing as much as I can to gain the points
Tryna help my cabin reach the top of the leaderboard
Only fourteen, but my mind is older
The competition gets tougher, I write more
Every word, every point I gain
I have learnt to write until my cabin's at the top
I write these words famished
The plan is to turn this idea into a story
But dang, we've fallen to the bottom so let me say the day
I am part of the C-A B-I N-W-A-R, we are mean to write
A cabin that works competitiveley
Meanwhile, Bangsian keep maintaining their top lead
Esenssially, we write relentlessley
No-one turns around, they keep on writing more
We ain't gonna get to the top of the leaderboard
So there will be a war between cabins this session
Enter me (we say in parentheses)
Don't be shocked when the results mentions me
I will write until midnight if it gets us top
Eventually, you'll see my cabin in the lead
And I am not gonna stop writing my words
I am not gonna stop writing my words
Hey, I'm just like my cabin
I'm young, creative, and competitive
And I'm not gonna stop writing my words
It's time to write our words!
I dream of a life with our cabin on top
The unrest during cabin wars will lead to chaos?
Chaos, you say, how much chaos?
When I write, I make the other side panicky
With my, shot
Hey, I'm just a camper
And I got my words written down on paper
I'm joining the war because I know its our chance
To advance the ranks instead of staying at bottom
I'm gonna take a shot
But we'll never be truly top
Until Bangsian are at the bottom of the leaderboard
You and I
Write or lose
Wait till I finish the weekly in a day
With two thousand points for my cabin
Have another shot
Cabinmates, stop procrastinating
You keep writing and our cabin will be top
I'm with you, but the situation is fraught
You've got to speedily write
If you procrastinate, we're gonna loose
Leader, check what we got
A mercenary, ready to write for us
I think you'll write a lot
Leader, I like you a lot
Let's write as much as we can
Before Bangsian reclaims the top spot
Running out of inspiration, like it or not
You have to write as much as you can
So give me a war, show me where we can add the words
Oh, and I writing too much?
I need to write so much to ensure we're up top
I don't want us to be at bottom
I promise that I'll make ya'll proud
Let's write before we all go down
I am not gonna stop writing my words
I am not gonna stop writing my words
Hey, I'm just like my cabin
I'm young, creative, and compeititve
And I am not gonna stop writing my words
I am not gonna stop writing my words
I am not gonna stop writing my words
Hey, I'm just like my cabin
I'm young, creative, and compeittive
And I'm not gonna stop writing my words
Everybody write
Woah, woah, woah
Woah, woah
Should let you write more
Let's go
Woah, woah, woah
I said write as much as you can
Woah, woah, woah
As much as you can
Woah, woah, woah
Come on
Come on, let's go
Rise up
When you're at the bottom of the ranks you rise up
Tell your cabin that you gotta write more
Tell your leaders that you gotta write more
When is our cabin gonna rise up?
When is our cabin gonna rise up?
When is our cabin gonna rise up?
When is our cabin gonna rise up?
Rise up
I imagine writing so much it feels like I'm gonna die
When is it gonna get to me?
In my sleep, choking on a glass of water
Will I write more, do I get us top or do I let it be?
Is it like a beat without a melody?
See, I'd never thought we'd rise past tenth
Where I come from, some are half as low
Ask anybody why we're writing fast and we laugh, ready for more
I have to write as much as I can, that's plenty
Scratch that this is not a moment, its the movement
Where all the enthusiastic campers write as much as they can
Cabins oppose us, we take a strong stand
We write as much as we can, claiming the top spot
And, if we win the top stop?
Is that a guarantee of bragging rights for the next three sessions?
Or will the word we write begin and endless cycle of competition and jokes with no end?
I know writing words is exciting
But, dang, between all the panick and writing
I've been procratsinating so much
We need to handle our leaderboard sitation
Are we a cabin of competition? What's the state of our cabin?
I'm past patiently waiting, I'm passionatley writing beyond every expectation
Every word is an act of imagination
I'm laughing in the face of losing now
For the first time, I'm thinking about sleeping
And I am not gonna sto writing my words
I am not gonna stop writing my words
I'm just like my cabin,
I'm young, creative and competitive
And I am not gonna stop writing my words
We're gonna rise up
I am not gonna stop writing my words (Time to write my words!)
We're gonna rise up
I am not gonna stop writing my words (Time to write my words!)
We're gonna rise up, rise up
It's time to write some words
Rise up, rise up
It's time to write some words
Rise up, it's time to write some words
Rise up, it's time to write some words
It's time to write some words, time to write some words
And I am not gonna stop writing my
Not gonna stop writing my words!
I am not gonna stop writing my words
I am not gonna stop writing my words
Hey, I'm just like my cabin
I'm young, creative, and competitive
And I am not gonna stop writing my words
I'll write until I hit my word goal
I probably should go to sleep, but dang, we're so close to the top
The problem is I need to write a lot of words, but need to work
I gotta write just for my cabin to be top
With every word, I gain points
I'm writing as much as I can to gain the points
Tryna help my cabin reach the top of the leaderboard
Only fourteen, but my mind is older
The competition gets tougher, I write more
Every word, every point I gain
I have learnt to write until my cabin's at the top
I write these words famished
The plan is to turn this idea into a story
But dang, we've fallen to the bottom so let me say the day
I am part of the C-A B-I N-W-A-R, we are mean to write
A cabin that works competitiveley
Meanwhile, Bangsian keep maintaining their top lead
Esenssially, we write relentlessley
No-one turns around, they keep on writing more
We ain't gonna get to the top of the leaderboard
So there will be a war between cabins this session
Enter me (we say in parentheses)
Don't be shocked when the results mentions me
I will write until midnight if it gets us top
Eventually, you'll see my cabin in the lead
And I am not gonna stop writing my words
I am not gonna stop writing my words
Hey, I'm just like my cabin
I'm young, creative, and competitive
And I'm not gonna stop writing my words
It's time to write our words!
I dream of a life with our cabin on top
The unrest during cabin wars will lead to chaos?
Chaos, you say, how much chaos?
When I write, I make the other side panicky
With my, shot
Hey, I'm just a camper
And I got my words written down on paper
I'm joining the war because I know its our chance
To advance the ranks instead of staying at bottom
I'm gonna take a shot
But we'll never be truly top
Until Bangsian are at the bottom of the leaderboard
You and I
Write or lose
Wait till I finish the weekly in a day
With two thousand points for my cabin
Have another shot
Cabinmates, stop procrastinating
You keep writing and our cabin will be top
I'm with you, but the situation is fraught
You've got to speedily write
If you procrastinate, we're gonna loose
Leader, check what we got
A mercenary, ready to write for us
I think you'll write a lot
Leader, I like you a lot
Let's write as much as we can
Before Bangsian reclaims the top spot
Running out of inspiration, like it or not
You have to write as much as you can
So give me a war, show me where we can add the words
Oh, and I writing too much?
I need to write so much to ensure we're up top
I don't want us to be at bottom
I promise that I'll make ya'll proud
Let's write before we all go down
I am not gonna stop writing my words
I am not gonna stop writing my words
Hey, I'm just like my cabin
I'm young, creative, and compeititve
And I am not gonna stop writing my words
I am not gonna stop writing my words
I am not gonna stop writing my words
Hey, I'm just like my cabin
I'm young, creative, and compeittive
And I'm not gonna stop writing my words
Everybody write
Woah, woah, woah
Woah, woah
Should let you write more
Let's go
Woah, woah, woah
I said write as much as you can
Woah, woah, woah
As much as you can
Woah, woah, woah
Come on
Come on, let's go
Rise up
When you're at the bottom of the ranks you rise up
Tell your cabin that you gotta write more
Tell your leaders that you gotta write more
When is our cabin gonna rise up?
When is our cabin gonna rise up?
When is our cabin gonna rise up?
When is our cabin gonna rise up?
Rise up
I imagine writing so much it feels like I'm gonna die
When is it gonna get to me?
In my sleep, choking on a glass of water
Will I write more, do I get us top or do I let it be?
Is it like a beat without a melody?
See, I'd never thought we'd rise past tenth
Where I come from, some are half as low
Ask anybody why we're writing fast and we laugh, ready for more
I have to write as much as I can, that's plenty
Scratch that this is not a moment, its the movement
Where all the enthusiastic campers write as much as they can
Cabins oppose us, we take a strong stand
We write as much as we can, claiming the top spot
And, if we win the top stop?
Is that a guarantee of bragging rights for the next three sessions?
Or will the word we write begin and endless cycle of competition and jokes with no end?
I know writing words is exciting
But, dang, between all the panick and writing
I've been procratsinating so much
We need to handle our leaderboard sitation
Are we a cabin of competition? What's the state of our cabin?
I'm past patiently waiting, I'm passionatley writing beyond every expectation
Every word is an act of imagination
I'm laughing in the face of losing now
For the first time, I'm thinking about sleeping
And I am not gonna sto writing my words
I am not gonna stop writing my words
I'm just like my cabin,
I'm young, creative and competitive
And I am not gonna stop writing my words
We're gonna rise up
I am not gonna stop writing my words (Time to write my words!)
We're gonna rise up
I am not gonna stop writing my words (Time to write my words!)
We're gonna rise up, rise up
It's time to write some words
Rise up, rise up
It's time to write some words
Rise up, it's time to write some words
Rise up, it's time to write some words
It's time to write some words, time to write some words
And I am not gonna stop writing my
Not gonna stop writing my words!
- Milkysplash
-
Scratcher
1000+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
The Schuyler Sisters Parody - 532 words
There's nothing authours love more
Than going online and writing as much as they can
They pull up their word documents and write
As much as they can before the night
Just to ensure their cabin's on top
Take the hosts: their responsibilities are loaded
Uh-oh, but little do they know that
The three top cabins on the leaderboard
Are vying for the top as much so they can-
Write, write!
Bangsian~
Write, write!
Mystery~
Write, write!
And Fantasy
Write, write!
The top place competitiors
Bangsian!
Fantasy!
Mystery!
Write!
The hosts said to go to bed
The hosts don't need to know
The hosts said to do your work
Like we said, you're free to go
But- look around, look around, the
Compeition's happening this session!
This session!
Bangsian!
Write!
It's bad enough Fantasy's in third
Writing for the words
It's bad enough Bangsian can't lose points
Maintaining our top position for us all
Bangsian, remind me what we're looking for
She is looking for me!
Mystery, I'm looking for some cabin wars (Write, write)
I'm looking for some points to gain (write, write)
I'm looking for some words to write (write, write)
Woah
Woah
Work!
Woah! There's nothing like cabin wars day
Everyone's in a panick tryna get to the top
Excuse me, miss, I know it's not funnny
But your points look like you'd be winning the session
Why are you not taking a break
You searching for a reason to reach the bottom?
Paranormal, you disgust me
Ah, so you've discussed me
I'm the bottom of the leaderboard, I'm no compeition
I've been writing as much as I can
Some cabins say we're intense, or we're insane
You want us to be bottom? I want us to be top
So listen to our delcaration:
We hold these truthes to be self-evident
That all cabins need to write
And when we're first in the results (uh!)
I'm gonna brag to you as much as I can
Write!
Look around, look aorund
At how high up the leaderboard we are
Look around, look around
At how high up the leaderboard we are
History is happening in this session and we just happen to be
The top three cabins on the leaderboard
In the bestest session so far
Cause we've been writing as much as we can (Look around, look around)
Some cabins say we're intense, or we're insane (The competiton's happening in-)
You want us in bottom? I want us in top
(this session!)
So listen to my declaration!
We hold these truths to be self evidient
That all cabins need to write
(Look around, look around)
(At how high up the leaderboard we are)
Look around, look around
At how high up the leaderboard we are
History is happening this session and we just happen to be
In the most competiitve session yet
In the most competitive session yet
Write, write
Bangsian
Write, write
Eliza
And Fantasy
Write, write,
The Competitive sisters
Write, write
We're looking for a cabin that's writng
Write, write (hey)
Write, write (hey)
Write, write
Write, write
Woah
Write, write
In the greatest session ever
In the greatest session ever
In the greatest session ever!
Write!
There's nothing authours love more
Than going online and writing as much as they can
They pull up their word documents and write
As much as they can before the night
Just to ensure their cabin's on top
Take the hosts: their responsibilities are loaded
Uh-oh, but little do they know that
The three top cabins on the leaderboard
Are vying for the top as much so they can-
Write, write!
Bangsian~
Write, write!
Mystery~
Write, write!
And Fantasy
Write, write!
The top place competitiors
Bangsian!
Fantasy!
Mystery!
Write!
The hosts said to go to bed
The hosts don't need to know
The hosts said to do your work
Like we said, you're free to go
But- look around, look around, the
Compeition's happening this session!
This session!
Bangsian!
Write!
It's bad enough Fantasy's in third
Writing for the words
It's bad enough Bangsian can't lose points
Maintaining our top position for us all
Bangsian, remind me what we're looking for
She is looking for me!
Mystery, I'm looking for some cabin wars (Write, write)
I'm looking for some points to gain (write, write)
I'm looking for some words to write (write, write)
Woah
Woah
Work!
Woah! There's nothing like cabin wars day
Everyone's in a panick tryna get to the top
Excuse me, miss, I know it's not funnny
But your points look like you'd be winning the session
Why are you not taking a break
You searching for a reason to reach the bottom?
Paranormal, you disgust me
Ah, so you've discussed me
I'm the bottom of the leaderboard, I'm no compeition
I've been writing as much as I can
Some cabins say we're intense, or we're insane
You want us to be bottom? I want us to be top
So listen to our delcaration:
We hold these truthes to be self-evident
That all cabins need to write
And when we're first in the results (uh!)
I'm gonna brag to you as much as I can
Write!
Look around, look aorund
At how high up the leaderboard we are
Look around, look around
At how high up the leaderboard we are
History is happening in this session and we just happen to be
The top three cabins on the leaderboard
In the bestest session so far
Cause we've been writing as much as we can (Look around, look around)
Some cabins say we're intense, or we're insane (The competiton's happening in-)
You want us in bottom? I want us in top
(this session!)
So listen to my declaration!
We hold these truths to be self evidient
That all cabins need to write
(Look around, look around)
(At how high up the leaderboard we are)
Look around, look around
At how high up the leaderboard we are
History is happening this session and we just happen to be
In the most competiitve session yet
In the most competitive session yet
Write, write
Bangsian
Write, write
Eliza
And Fantasy
Write, write,
The Competitive sisters
Write, write
We're looking for a cabin that's writng
Write, write (hey)
Write, write (hey)
Write, write
Write, write
Woah
Write, write
In the greatest session ever
In the greatest session ever
In the greatest session ever!
Write!
- Milkysplash
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
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Cabin Wars Proof - 9/11/2024
“Morning Kal,” Alaina greeted as she pushed the door open to the break room, seeing Kallie already sitting on the sofa.
“Laina, you sound like you haven’t had a cup of tea yet. At all.” Kallie replied, looking up from her phone.
“Yeah, well guess who thought it would be a good idea to spend all night helping Adelaide plan her wedding while on the night shift.” Alaina replied. “And then I bumped into Renée this morning with Ally so of course I had to do some cute child time.”
Alaina saw Kallie’s eyes soften. “Did you take any photos? Ally’s so cute!”
Alaina shook her head. “No, sorry. I was too tired.”
“Well, there’s a coffee machine there, go get your tea,” Kallie suggested. “Also, I’m driving first.”
Alaina nodded as she sleepily stumbled over to the coffee machine, grabbed her cup and started brewing her tea.
“How’s life now that Alfie’s not living in with you anymore?” Kallie asked.
Alaina looked back at Kallie. “He moved out two years ago. Things have been… normal, although I find I’m going to see Lauren more and more often.”
“Lauren?” Kallie asked.
“The eighteen year old who’s done with her family restaurant? The one we have work dinners at all the time?” Alaina raised an eyebrow as she fished out her teabag and put it in the bin, looking for the milk.
“Oh- her?” Kallie looked surprised. “Yeah, I remember her.”
Alaina finally found the milk and slowly poured it in, before taking a sip. “Oh- that’s hot. That’s hot.” She muttered, feeling her tongue burn.
“Alaina. It is common sense to not drink steaming hot tea.” Kallie deadpanned.
“Yeah? Well I’m kinda in a rush to get out to the ambulance, considering we need do sign on in about fifteen minutes.” Alaina shot back.
“You know what, I’ll just go and do the checks right now, so you can drink your tea in peace.” Kallie offered.
“Thank you. That would be really helpful.” Alaina replied, grateful that she’d been rostered with Kallie for pretty much most of her time on the job.
“Aaaaaaargh!”
Mira could clearly hear Lauren’s shout of frustration coming from the room next to hers. It was a Saturday, and Lauren was meant to be helping but she got excused for homework. Mira, who was sitting her GCSEs this year, got no such reprieve to work on her schoolwork. And she was definitely not supposed to be hiding in her room.
“Lauren, be grateful.” Mira called, a little salty that Yima didn’t think her grades were important enough. “I still have to work today and it’s really not fun.”
Lauren’s reply was an annoyed groan.
“Alright, have it your way,” Mira muttered, before heading out of her room and into the main restaurant. Yima was so going to kill her.
“Mira, hey!” Makayla greeted as she entered the restaurant to see Mira standing at the host stand.
“Hey, Makayla,” came Mira’s grumbled reply.
“I was wondering if you wanted to come down to my office at some point today? I’ve talked with the rest of the state prosecutors’ office, and they’re happy for you to come and see what it’s like working with me on a case,” Makayla said. “I know you’re considering law as a possible option, so the opportunity is there if you want.”
Mira thought about it for a moment. “Okay, sure. I mean, if I can get Yima to drag Lauren down here for any reason, that’s a win in my book.”
Makayla laughed. “For legal reasons, I have to say you shouldn’t do it, but just between us, I do approve of sibling bullying.”
Mira smiled. “Okay. I’ll go find Yima and come back as soon as I can.” She paused. “Wait, you can come too.”
“Sure,” Makayla replied, following Mira ash they walked into the back office.
“Yima!” Mira called. “Makayla’s here.”
Makayla watched as June finished what she was doing and came up to meet her. “Liuliu, how are you?” June asked.
“I’m fine, thank you,” Makayla replied. “I have a few interesting cases that I’m dealing with, and I thought Mira might want to tag along to see what it’s like being a lawyer.”
“When would she be going?” June asked.
“Uh-“ Makayla checked her watch. “Now.”
“Dr. Zheng!” Chenay heard the call from the charge nurse. “Incoming - Bay 28.”
“Thank you, Carina-” Chenay responded, before running from the empty resus room she was in over to the ambulance entrance of the ED.
Chenay watched as Alaina and Kallie wheeled through a patient, who was clearly in pain. “Laina, Kallie-”
“Thirty-two year old female, injured while on the beach. She cut her leg on a surfboard fin, but the bleeding didn’t seem to be too bad. We’ve administered some pain relief on the way in.” Alaina said.
“Alright,” Chenay responded, wheeling the stretcher to Bay 28, where there was a waiting bed and nurse - Adelaide Waters.
“Ready?” She asked, ensuring everyone was ready before they began to transfer the patient.
Seeing nods, or replies of “yep!” Chenay proceeded. “On my count… one, two, three, lift!” she called.
Working together, the four of them transferred the patient from the stretcher to the bed.
“We’ll take it from here,” Chenay said, signalling to Alaina and Kallie they could return to their ambulance.
Character Swap Extra Challenge - I wrote about Recca's character, Cpt. Trace Leftver! - 357 words
Captain Trace Leftver grumbled as he saw another pigeon waddle across the park. “Stupid pigeon,” he muttered. “Stupid, stupid pigeon, scum of the city,”
Trace reached into his bag for the bottle of pigeon poison pills he kept on him - after all, having seen a pigeon, he had a compulsion to kill it. Pigeons were, undoubtedly, the scum of the city and the scum of the earth. He almost wished he never took an early retirement and instead was still out fighting for the military, where he wouldn’t have to deal with these stupid, stupid, pigeons. Every. Single. Day.
“Come here, pigeon,” he muttered, leaning down over his park bench. “I’ve got some good food for you.”
The pigeon refused to respond, instead walking away from the park bench.
Groaning as he actually had to stand up, Trace began a lumbering chase towards the pigeon. “Come back here, you slimy piece of scum,” he muttered.
Finally, the pigeon seemed to stop, and look Trace in the eye. Trace bent down, held out the pill, hoping the pigeon would peck at it and eat it.
It did not move.
“Come on, eat it!” he yelled with his rather powerful Military Captain voice.
Instead of eating it, the pigeon seemed to just walk away. Trace grumbled as he tried his best to coo the pigeon into being interested in his hand so he could eat the poisoned pill.
Just then, the pigeon seemed to finally take notice of the poisoned pill Trace was holding in his hand, and the pigeon ate it.
“That’s a good boy,” he said, glad that there would be one less pigeon in the park. “Go on, fly away now,” Trace shooed the pigeon away.
The genius behind the poisoned pigeon pills is that they wouldn’t kill the pigeon until three or four hours later, where he could leave the park and claim no responsibility, and that the pigeon died of “natural causes.”
Seeing no more pigeons in the immediate vicinity of the park, Trace groaned as he got up from his bent position into a standing one. He was definitely getting old now.
“Evening Lay,” Kallie greeted as Alaina climbed into the passenger seat of the ambulance.
“Evening Kal!” Alaina replied. “You ready for the night shift?”
“Not in the slightest,” Kallie replied, sipping her drink. “I’m drinking coffee.”
“You won’t need that coffee soon enough, regardless of how the night goes,” Alaina replied, doing her best not to jinx them. It was a rather calm night, but things could always change at an instant - especially if someone says the “q” word.
“But I need it now,” Kallie objected.
“Come on, let’s get going before you fall asleep,” Alaina teased, radioing ambulance control to let them know she and Kallie were signing on for the 7-7 night shift.
Kallie nodded, placing down her coffee and driving them out of the ambulance station.
Just then, a call came through.
“Hmm?” Kallie wondered. “Is that dispatch?”
“I’ll get it,” Alaina said, reaching for the radio. “Dispatch this is Alpha Seven Two Nine, what do you have for us?”
“Two vehicle RTC, on Marina Bay Road. The report just came through, so we don’t know how many patients there are. You’ll be first on scene.” Came the response.
“Dang,” Kallie muttered, moving to turn the blue lights and sirens on.
“Alpha Seven Two One!” Alaina called as she answered the call from dispatch. It was the start of the 7-7 morning shift, and Alaina was wide awake. She couldn’t say the same thing about Kallie, on the other hand.
“Alpha Seven Two One, we have a bit of an interesting one for you,” the dispatcher called over the radio.
Oh no, Alaina thought. ‘An interesting one’ could be anything - and Alaina thought she’d gotten to the point on the job where she couldn’t be surprised any more.
“We’ve got reports of an out-of-control bushfire in Pine Hill North,” the dispatcher said. “However, from the fire department who are on scene, it seems to be a barbeque fire that spread to some bushes that someone’s burned themself in.”
“Well, that’s something… interesting, certainly,” Alaina laughed as she picked up the radio again. “Alpha Seven Two One, we copy. We’re heading there now.”
Kallie laughed as well, flicking the lights and sirens on as they began speeding down Sunshine Bay Road, headed for Pine Hill North, a community in part of the large Hollybush Heights council housing area. “Yeah, but it’s not the worst we’ve been sent to,” she replied.
“Fair,” Alaina responded, thinking back to the time where they were forced to assist the lifeguards in trying to keep someone who clearly wasn’t in their right mind from jumping in the water, thinking they were a shark. “I mean, that time, I don’t even know what was going on with the patient.”
Kallie put the ambulance in a left turn, speeding up Hollybush Road. “Are you talking about the shark guy?” Kallie asked.
“Yeah, Shark Guy.” Alaina replied.
“I mean, most of the time, these people just seem to have lost their common sense, or just don’t have any to begin with,” Kallie added. “Honestly, the things they get up to.”
Kallie made a right turn, arriving at the scene, clearly marked by fire engines, left, right, and centre.
Alaina flicked off the lights and sirens, before radioing dispatch. “Alpha Seven Two One, we’re on scene now.” she informed the controller, before jumping out the cab.
Alaina and Kallie opened the back of the ambulance, Alaina grabbing the burn pack, medication bag, and the mobile heart monitors, while Kallie grabbed the stretcher and pulled it out of the ambulance.
As they walked over to the house, a fireman walked over.
“Hey,” Alaina greeted. “Alaina.”
“Kallie.”
“Rhys,” the fireman greeted in a thick Welsh accent. “We’ve got a nineteen-year-old patient for. you guys. He’s burnt his arms, that’s for sure. Everything else, I’m not so sure about.”
“Alright,” Kallie said. “We’ll take a look. Where is he?”
“He’s over here,” Rhys said, bringing the two paramedics over to where the patient was lying on the ground, clearly struggling to breathe.
“Thank you so much,” Kallie said, before leaning down to talk to the boy.
“My name’s Kallie, I’m with the ambulance service. I’m here to help you.” Kallie spoke gently to the boy, who was clearly in pain. “Are you in any pain?”
The boy coughed. “Yeah, a bit,” he answered.
“On a scale of one to ten, with one being no pain at all and ten being the worst pain you’ve ever had in your life, how would you rate your pain?” Kallie asked.
“Uh, maybe a seven?” The boy replied. “It hurts.”
“Have you been hosed down with water?” Kallie asked.
The boy shook his head. “No.”
Alaina saw that Kallie glanced back at her. “I think it’s probably best we start dressing the wounds,”
Alaina nodded. “Yeah, I think that would be a good course of action.”
Alaina saw Kallie turn back to the boy, while Alaina came in with some dressings. “Hey, my name’s Alaina,” she said. “I’m going to be dressing your arms. It might hurt, but I’ll try to make it as painless as possible.”
The boy nodded, as Alaina began gently dressing his right arm, first with clingfilm, then with foil, to ensure the burns were properly protected.
Kallie came up beside Alaina, dressing his left arm. Luckily, it didn’t look like his core had been burned too much.
Once the dressing was done, Kallie glanced at Alaina. “Get the spinal board, it’ll probably be easiest to evac him that way.”
Alaina nodded, before walking over to the ambulance to grab the yellow spinal board. It was used for spinal protection, but also for transferring patients and evacuating them.
She returned, holding the yellow board in her hand and passing it to Kallie.
“We’re going to move you onto this board, alright?” Kallie explained. “It’ll be uncomfortable for a bit, but then you’ll be on the bed, where it’s a little more comfortable.”
The boy nodded.
Alaina log rolled the boy onto his side, before Kallie moved the board over, and they pushed him back over onto his back.
“Ready?” Kallie asked Alaina.
“On your count,” Alaina responded.
“Three, two, one, lift.” Kallie called. The two of them lifted the board with the boy on it, and brought him onto the stretcher, before rolling him onto his side, removing the spinal board, and allowing him to rest.
“Alright, we’re going to get you into the ambulance now,” Kallie explained, pushing the stretcher towards the ambulance, with Alaina grabbing the packs from the ground.
“Kal, you going back?” Alaina asked, as she stored the bags away where they usually would be in the back of the vehicle.
“Yep,” Kallie responded, before Alaina shut the doors on the back.
Alaina clambered into the driver's seat, shutting the door, turning the key and flicking on the lights and sirens. She backed out of the road, before hitting the accelerator and speeding as fast as she safely could towards the hospital.
“Adelaide!” Alfie shouted, wanting to catch up with her about one of his patients. Adelaide was charge nurse of the entire Sunshine Bay ED, so there was a lot of administrative work she needed to do.
“Hey, Alfie,” Adelaide replied, clearly down.
“You know I hate to make your workload higher,” Alfie began, “but I need you to call Carina and see if there’s space for a patient transfer.”
Adelaide sighed. “I wouldn’t put your request first, but…”
“Yes, I know,” Alfie replied. “I won’t tell anyone.”
Adelaide smiled. “Alright then.” She picked up the phone, and Alfie smiled, before leaving the Nurse’s station to check on his patient.
Last edited by Milkysplash (Nov. 9, 2024 21:09:04)
- unercornshine
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ⌕ nov 2024
rambling:
ok, so i need to write 1,700 words in an hour. Should be easy right? not. Not if u're me anyways.I mean there r so many reasins y this isnt going to be easy for me:
1) I've been waffling so much today, idk if i can even waffle anymore man. Like, so much waffling abt absolutely nothing. idk how ive even survived this long.
2) IM SUCH A SLOW TYPER LIKE~ one of my previous waffles were literally about this, like, y am i such a slow typer?!?!?!?! Despite how much i tyoped on a day to day basis, gaming, writing, rambling, texting, my wpm is STILL like 35. CAN U BELIEVE THAT?!?!?! It's so INFURIATING. ARGH!!!
3) My stupid brothers won't shut their fat gobs up man. They're like, ‘yap this yap that’ Its so annoying when im trying to concentrate! That's litrally why i stopped trying to do the weekly, bcs the weekly has to be good, but that piece was so DRY like.. it's so hard to write dialogue when the only things u can here are ur brothers fruitless talk abt football, youtube and other random things that make like, -1000000 sense like~
4) My aura is fading bro… Like my aura is literally trickling away before my very eyes. I'm drained man. I have nothing to waffle about bcs my waffling is not waffling, and i can't write good pieces over a small amount of time. so yeh. i even get minus aura just from admitting it rn… :sigh:
5) I have so much stuff to do rn as well as finish this war, and im so annoyed bcs none of the rest of my cabin mates r here to help me, like, ik, no biggie, ill finsh a wars on my own any day, just… NOT TODAY. I have somuch stuff to do and it's not helping that i have to complete this war by myslef cuz it means that i have to drop everything for the next 1 hour any just fruitlessly write. and it's not helping that i cant write on my novel, or the weekly… just fruitless rambling
anyways idkl wt to write abt now so im gonna go check if there's anyone online in my cabin.
OMG OMG LILI IS ONLINE, LILI IF U'RE READING THIS U'RE A LIFESAVER IL U SO MUCH!!!! Yeh, that just gave me loads of motivation andextra waffling skillz. +1000000000 aura to lili. +10 aura to meeeeee.
anyways, imma just go waffle abt something else rn, like attempt the weekly again cuz like… i rlly need to do that weekly.
BUY GUYS!!!!
441 words
ok, so i need to write 1,700 words in an hour. Should be easy right? not. Not if u're me anyways.I mean there r so many reasins y this isnt going to be easy for me:
1) I've been waffling so much today, idk if i can even waffle anymore man. Like, so much waffling abt absolutely nothing. idk how ive even survived this long.
2) IM SUCH A SLOW TYPER LIKE~ one of my previous waffles were literally about this, like, y am i such a slow typer?!?!?!?! Despite how much i tyoped on a day to day basis, gaming, writing, rambling, texting, my wpm is STILL like 35. CAN U BELIEVE THAT?!?!?! It's so INFURIATING. ARGH!!!
3) My stupid brothers won't shut their fat gobs up man. They're like, ‘yap this yap that’ Its so annoying when im trying to concentrate! That's litrally why i stopped trying to do the weekly, bcs the weekly has to be good, but that piece was so DRY like.. it's so hard to write dialogue when the only things u can here are ur brothers fruitless talk abt football, youtube and other random things that make like, -1000000 sense like~
4) My aura is fading bro… Like my aura is literally trickling away before my very eyes. I'm drained man. I have nothing to waffle about bcs my waffling is not waffling, and i can't write good pieces over a small amount of time. so yeh. i even get minus aura just from admitting it rn… :sigh:
5) I have so much stuff to do rn as well as finish this war, and im so annoyed bcs none of the rest of my cabin mates r here to help me, like, ik, no biggie, ill finsh a wars on my own any day, just… NOT TODAY. I have somuch stuff to do and it's not helping that i have to complete this war by myslef cuz it means that i have to drop everything for the next 1 hour any just fruitlessly write. and it's not helping that i cant write on my novel, or the weekly… just fruitless rambling
anyways idkl wt to write abt now so im gonna go check if there's anyone online in my cabin.
OMG OMG LILI IS ONLINE, LILI IF U'RE READING THIS U'RE A LIFESAVER IL U SO MUCH!!!! Yeh, that just gave me loads of motivation andextra waffling skillz. +1000000000 aura to lili. +10 aura to meeeeee.
anyways, imma just go waffle abt something else rn, like attempt the weekly again cuz like… i rlly need to do that weekly.
BUY GUYS!!!!
441 words




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