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gamesquad186
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✍ -=Pokemon Parody Project (FIRST DRAFT COMPLETE) ✅=-

I'm gonna post the Pokemon Parody Scripts here as I work on them.
(These will be very WIP)

Make sure to leave a post before you go.

Voice Acting:
Anyone who is interested in voice acting should remix the pilot episode.

Artists/Animators:
Please wait until I complete the scripts and the storyboards. The script is (obviously) below and the link to the latest storyboard will be added to this discussion as soon as it is complete.

I hope you enjoy my script. Let me know what your favourite part is. Also, reply with any ideas, theories, or feedback you might have. I will absolutely see your messages below.

gamesquad186 out! :)

Links:
The Lore Project: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1047426438/
The Pilot: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1038736436/

Last edited by gamesquad186 (Sept. 2, 2024 23:21:43)

gamesquad186
Scratcher
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✍ -=Pokemon Parody Project (FIRST DRAFT COMPLETE) ✅=-

THE POKEMON PARODY PROJECT
CHAPTER 1
DRAFT 1


Scene 1:

Narrator: This is the story of a boy named Ash Ketchum.

Ash is in his room, pretending to be a Pokemon Trainer.

Narrator: Ash is a 10 year old boy from Pallet Town.

Ash: I’m Ash Ketchum and I’m gonna be a Pokemon Master.

Narrator: When a child becomes a man, at the age of 10, they can go to Professor Oak to get a Pokemon License and end their childhood.

Ash picks up his alarm clock like its a Pokeball

Ash: And I’m gonna catch’em all!

(Simultaneous below)

Ash’s Mom: Ash!

Ash stumbles, dropping the alarm clock.

Ash: Huh?!

(Simultaneous above)

The alarm clock smashes upon the ground.

Ash’s Mom: Have you forgotten what tomorrow is?

Ash: Is it Christmas?

Ash’s Mom: It’s your birthday! Happy Birthday Ash!

Ash: Happy Birthday Mom!

Ash’s Mom: It’s not my birthday you brainless half-wit.

Ash: You’re the best Mom ever.

Ash’s Mom: Guess what I got you for your birthday?

Ash: It’s my birthday?

Ash’s Mom: Abandonment. You get to leave my house and never dip into my savings account again.

Ash: Yay!!!

Ash’s Mom: Yay!!!

Ash Mom: No seriously, start packing. I want you out by tomorrow.

Ash’s Mom leaves and shuts the door. Awkward silence.

Ash: I’ll watch some TV.

TV turns on.

Oak: Hi I’m Professor Oak and I’m here to help you begin your Pokemon journey. As the law has clearly stated. Only children at the age of 10 can receive their Starter Pokemon. Or was it at 18?

A picture of Bulbasaur appears

Oak: Oh right, the Starter Pokemon. First off there’s Bulbasaur. A grass type Pokemon that requires a steady supply of sunlight and water.

Now there’s a picture of Charmander.

Oak: Charmander, the best Starter Pokemon for Trainers in my opinion. Despite what you think, this Pokemon is not waterproof.

Lastly, a picture of Squirtle.

Oak: And Squirtle, a water type. This Pokemon on the other hand is waterproof.

Ash: I can’t wait to get my Starter Pokemon. I’m gonna pick-

Oak: Now, think long and hard on your decision young Trainers. Remember, you only get to choose one. Don’t pick the wrong Pokemon and then live the rest of your life with eternal regret.

Oak: Well goodnight!

TV turns off.

Scene 2:

Ash is now asleep in his bed, moving around.

Transition into the dream. It takes place in a dark evil dungeon.

ProfessorEvilBadPainGiver: Mwahahahaha. Everything is going according to plan.

Ash bursts in through a wooden door.

Ash: You’re going down ProfessorEvilBadPainGiver.

ProfessorEvilBadPainGiver: Not before your mother is dropped at a conveniently slow speed into my pool of lethal lava. Mwahahahaha.

Ash’s Mother is within a brass cage, suspended over a pool of lava.

Ash Mom: Ohhhhhhhh Ash, my beloved son!!!! Save me from this terrible villain. Ohhhhhhhhhh.

Ash: MOOOOOOOOOMMMMM!!! (continues)

Ash turns to ProfessorEvilBadPainGiver.

Ash: You monster.

ProfessorEvilBadPainGiver: I'm such an evil evildoer.

Ash: I’m gonna defeat you, earn my mother’s love, and then beat you!

ProfessorEvilBadPainGiver: But Ash, you’ll never beat my most powerful Pokemon…

ProfessorEvilBadPainGiver pulls out a Pokeball.

ProfessorEvilBadPainGiver: Goooooooooooooo Magikarp!

Magikarp splats onto the floor, and flops around.

Magikarp: Magikarp.

Ash: Oh no! It’s a Magikarp.

Music strongly intensifies.

ProfessorEvilBadPainGiver: It’s time to battle!

Ash: What?

ProfessorEvilBadPainGiver: *incoherent words*

Ash: I can’t hear you.

ProfessorEvilBadPainGiver: *Still incoherent*

Ash: Oh yeah? Goooooo-

Bulbasaur, Charmander, and Squirtle appear. Ash must now make a crucial decision

Ash: Uhhhhhhh…go… uhhhhh… uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

A Professor Oak flashback memory flies across the screen.

Oak (echoey): …you only get to choose once…

Ash: uhhhhh…ummmmmm…uhhhhhhh.

Magikarp approaches our hero, and Ash is now trapped between a corner and the dangerous monster.

Ash: ummmmm… (continues)

Magikarp’s shadow looms over Ash.

Ash: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

ProfessorEvilBadPainGiver: Mwhahahaha.

Ash’s Mom (but not a dream): Ash!

Ash jolts up, now awake.

Ash: Ahhhhhhhh… oh.

Ash’s Mom: Ash. Did you forget about today?

Ash: Oh yeah, today's my birthday!

Ash’s Mom stares at her son in a combination of disbelief and rage.

Ash: What?

(Add Title Intro Here.)

Scene 3:

Ash is now outside inside the middle of a crowd.

Ash: My Mommy’s the biggest meanie ever.

Gary: Well well well if it isn’t Ash Ketchum.

Ash: Really? Where?

Gary: …It’s you.

Ash: Oh. Right.

Gary: *sniff* *sniff* Hey, you kinda smell.

Gary: Hey everyone, Ash smells.

Nobody in the entire crowd acknowledges Gary.

Ash: So Gary, what are you doing here… at this place… right here… where we are doing the talking and things?

Gary: Well unlike you, I just got my Pokemon License. Too bad you don’t have one.

Ash: Stop it.

Gary: I own my Pokemon and you have none.

Ash: I know.

Gary: I’m gonna use my Pokemon License to do all the Pokemon License things I can.

Ash: I wished I had my Pokemon License.

Gary: Too bad you don’t have your own gramps that gives you Pokemon loser.

Ash: I wished I had my own gramps.

Gary: Yeah you do!

Scene 4:

Ash is now walking alone in a deep forest and in tall grass.

Ash: Hello! Old man? I’m here for my Pokemon.

Ash: It was so nice of that Gary to give me directions. He’s such a nice guy.

A rustle in some tall grass in a flat area without trees.

Ash: Old man?

Sudden cut to Ash being viciously attacked by a single Pidgey.

Ash: *yelling like he’s being attacked by a vicious bird.*

Oak: Why hello there young man. I’m Professor Oak.

Ash: *yelling like he’s still being attacked by a vicious bird.*

Oak: Did you venture into this patch of grass without any Pokemon?

Ash: *still yelling like he’s still being attacked by a vicious bird.*

Oak: I remember my first time I walked through grass.

Ash: *a little more tired yelling like you’re still being attacked by a vicious bird.*

Oak: Back then all we had were large patches of grass.

With Ash still screaming, the Pidgey finally notices Professor Oak and flies away. Ash is now covered in cuts and bruises.

Ash: Old… old man?!

Oak: Quite right. Good observation.

Ash: Then it’s time for me to get my first-

Scene 5:

Cut to Professor Oak’s Lab focused on the Professor himself.

Oak: I’m out of Pokemon.

Ash holds a Pokeball that opens, revealing nothing.

Ash: Why didn’t you tell me before?

Oak: That was pretty inconsiderate of me.

Oak reaches over.

Oak: Here take this.

Oak hands Ash another Pokeball.

Ash opens the Pokeball and it is also empty.

Ash: What the heck?!

Oak: Well you know what they say: the early worm gets the bird.

Ash: Are you sure you’re out of Pokemon?

Oak: Yeah I gave them all away.

Ash: To who?

Oak: Gary.

Ash: … but I’m Gary.

Oak: … This is true.

Oak: There is one Pokemon. but there are a lot of problems…

Ash grabs Professor Oak.

Ash: GIMME THE POKEMON!!!!

Oak: But you know what. This Pokemon would be the perfect match for you.
Professor Oak holds another Pokeball. The Pokeball opens and yellow lightning appears. A Pikachu emerges.

Pikachu: Pi-Ka-Chu… is my name.

Ash just stares at the cute Pikachu.

Pikachu: What?

Ash: Imma hug you!

Pikachu: You will not!

Ash: Imma hug you.

Pikachu: Do it and suffer my wrath.

Ash picks up and hugs Pikachu.

Pikachu: Okay, you asked for it!

A small amount of electricity radiates off Pikachu. But it's not even enough for a static shock.

Oak: Shocking isn’t it.

Pikachu: I hate my life!

Oak: Oh, Before you go Ash don’t forget your Pikachu’s-

Oak drops the Pokeball and it shatters on the floor.

Oak: -Pokeball.

Oak reaches into his lab coat’s pocket.

Oak: Here, take my life’s research instead.

Oak hands Ash a Pokedex.

Ash: What is it?

Oak: I call it a Pokedex. A Pokedex records all sorts of-

Ash holds the Pokedex up.

Ash: I got the Pokedex!

Oak: …uh who are you talking to?

Ash: I don’t know!

Pikachu electrocutes Ash.

Scene 6:

Ash is now on a dirt path leading out of Pallet Town. He is also dragging his Pikachu by a leash. Also, Ash has changed into his usual clothes.

Pikachu is being roughly dragged behind Ash.

Pikachu: Ah… oof… ow… ah.

Ash stops walking, crouches down, and turns to face Pikachu.

Ash: Hey Pikachu, wanna be best buddies?

Pikachu unleashes a death stare at Ash.

Ash: Ah! Never mind, never mind.

Nearby, some grass rustles. Ash and Pikachu investigate. It’s a Pidgey.

(Simultaneous below)

Ash: uh… uH… oh god… is that the monster from earlier…I hope it doesn’t see me.

Pokedex: Pidgey. It’s a bird. It uses the Gust move against its prey. (continued)

(Simultaneous above)

Pokedex: Otherwise it uses Hyper Beam.

Ash: Ahhh!

Ash, and dragging Pikachu, runs away.

Ash meets Misty.

Ash (thinking): Oh look. This girl-woman wants to chat. I don’t think I’ve talked to a girl other than my Mommy. I wonder if the same rules apply.

Ash (outloud): I love you. What’s for dinner?

Misty: The only dinner you’d be getting from me is a knuckle sandwich.

Ash: That hurt my feelings. I hate you so much now that I’ll never like you. Ever.

Misty (thinking): Maybe that was a bit too harsh. Wait, you don’t even know this stranger. He could be a hoodlum!

Misty (outloud): I will pummel you.

Ash runs from Misty.

Misty (offscreen): No wait, come back.

Pidgey jumpscare.

Ash runs away from the Pidgey.

Ash is now at the edge of a cliff.

Ash: Okay Pikachu. The only way to escape my problems is to jump.

Pikachu: I really suggest not jumping off-

Ash jumps. Thankfully there is a river below saving the series from an early end.

Scene 7:

Misty is fishing by the river.

Misty (thinking): I’ll show him. I’ll show everyone. I may have been out here for only a few months, but I’ll fish out the biggest Charizard the world has ever…

Ash is cast ashore, he is carrying a limp Pikachu.

Misty (thinking): Oh the kid is back.

Misty turns to Ash.

Misty: Were you just in the water?

Ash: I’m not gonna lie, I was hiding from you. And then I remembered that I am not a fish.

Misty: Are you an idiot? You drowned your Pikachu.

Ash: Hey you’re right.

Misty (thinking): Insulting him is a bit much. Maybe I should say something nicer.

Misty (outloud): You are my most favourite person in the entire universe.

Misty (thinking): Too nice. Too nice.

Ash: That might the nicest thing anyone has ever said about me-

Misty slaps Ash in the face.

Misty (thinking): Oh my god. You hit him. Apologize right now.

Misty (outloud): I’m sorry, you didn’t deserve that. In fact you don’t deserve anything bad to happen to you.

Misty (thinking): Wait, you don’t know this person. He could be a hoodlum. Hit him again!

Ash: I agree with you-

Misty slaps Ash again.

Misty (thinking): Just because he might be a hoodlum doesn’t mean he is one…

Slow change to Ash’s thoughts.

Ash (thinking): Maybe I could get a new Pikachu from the Professor Oak. You are so good at thinking of the ideas Ash. Thanks me for being me.

Awkward stare between Ash and Misty.

Ash rides away on Misty’s bike.

Scene 8:

Ash is now with Professor Oak.

Ash: This Pikachu is broken. Isn’t there a warranty on this thing.

Oak: Luckily for you, my lab is on fire.

Professor Oak’s lab/house is burning (but only the upper portion of the house).

Oak: Hurray! No heating bill.

Professor Oak is offscreen searching for a replacement Pikachu. There are Pokeballs on the ground. Ash is just waiting. Also there is a lot of smoke, but no flames.

Ash: You know they say you're not supposed to stand in a house when there’s a blazing inferno on the second floor, but it’s actually not that bad.

Oak: By the way your mother and I-

A massive electrical explosion occurs.

Scene 9:

Ash and Pikachu are laying on the ground all beaten up. They are in the middle of a pit that used to be Professor Oak’s lab. Also, a forest fire has started. The sky is stormy.

Ash: What? I thought you were dead?

Pikachu: Actually, your Pikachu is dead. I’m the Pikachu that was going to replace your Pikachu.

Ash: Oh… Hey! You killed an old man.

Pikachu: …yeah.

Suddenly the sky clears and a rainbow forms.

Ash: Pikachu look.

Ash points at the rare and radiant Pokemon Ho-Oh.

Ash: Whoa…It’s Pride bird.

Ho-Oh flies over the duo… and then departs some guano onto Ash’s face.

Ash: AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

Scene 10:

Ash, holding Pikachu, is now walking up a hill. The forest fire burning the forest.

Narrator: With his town in ruins and the few surviving residents traumatized, Ash proceeds to Viridian City. (continues)

Ash has reached the peak of the hill.

Narrator: Plenty of adventures are in store for Ash and Pikachu.

Ash rolls back down the hill, along with his new Pikachu.

Narrator: Stay tuned!

Last edited by gamesquad186 (Sept. 3, 2024 19:32:46)

gamesquad186
Scratcher
50 posts

✍ -=Pokemon Parody Project (FIRST DRAFT COMPLETE) ✅=-

Tell me what you think below. :)
Comment “big banana” if you read the entire script.

Last edited by gamesquad186 (Aug. 15, 2024 19:03:43)

zozo_zomg
Scratcher
26 posts

✍ -=Pokemon Parody Project (FIRST DRAFT COMPLETE) ✅=-

BIG BANANA XD, Anyways looking good so far! The scenes are a good length to. I do think some of the dialogue can be cut down so the first chapter doesn't go on for too long, but then again what do I know about script writing. Two questions though, who is voicing ProfessorEvilBadPainGiver, and what is the intro gonna be like, since it's a webcomic?
gamesquad186
Scratcher
50 posts

✍ -=Pokemon Parody Project (FIRST DRAFT COMPLETE) ✅=-

zozo_zomg wrote:

BIG BANANA XD, Anyways looking good so far! The scenes are a good length to. I do think some of the dialogue can be cut down so the first chapter doesn't go on for too long, but then again what do I know about script writing. Two questions though, who is voicing ProfessorEvilBadPainGiver, and what is the intro gonna be like, since it's a webcomic?
ProfessorEvilBadPainGiver is a figment of Ash's imagination. I haven't quite decided upon what they look like yet.

I think the intro will be an actual animation. I know it's a webcomic, but this is Scratch. I can switch forms of media at any time. I might make the intro though.
gamesquad186
Scratcher
50 posts

✍ -=Pokemon Parody Project (FIRST DRAFT COMPLETE) ✅=-

you lost the game
gamesquad186
Scratcher
50 posts

✍ -=Pokemon Parody Project (FIRST DRAFT COMPLETE) ✅=-

Bump. lol
gamesquad186
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50 posts

✍ -=Pokemon Parody Project (FIRST DRAFT COMPLETE) ✅=-

The first draft is finished!

I'm gonna go through it and try to get multiple sources of feedback before I create storyboards. I will use actual frames from the show and create my own (poor) drawings when creating non show related situations. (Like the nightmare sequence)

Last edited by gamesquad186 (Sept. 2, 2024 23:01:08)

zozo_zomg
Scratcher
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✍ -=Pokemon Parody Project (FIRST DRAFT COMPLETE) ✅=-

“It's a pride bird killed me” XD. I will point out that @Floppaandbingusrcool has 94 LINES which is…a lot, and a mass arson is probably violation some community guideline but other than that it's great

Last edited by zozo_zomg (Sept. 3, 2024 02:04:36)

HuxVAP
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✍ -=Pokemon Parody Project (FIRST DRAFT COMPLETE) ✅=-

gamesquad186 wrote:

you lost the game
why.

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