@gomongemu Please snip quotes, and don't double-quote, especially if you are only saying 1 sentence. Some instances (like yours and this one right now) don't even need quotes.

Review from The Gemstone Federation
First Impression 1-5: 3 (The banner is great, but the BBCode isn't the best, although it's OK.)
Speed Rating 1-5: 5 (It was completed in 3 days.)
Staff Rating 1-5: 5 (4 staff members is pretty good. The shop seems to work well.)
Quality Rating 1-5: 5 (The song is amazing! I was just test ordering, but I might actually use it in a game sometime.)
Order Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1000320236/
Total Rating 1-20: 18
Suggestions:
I would improve the BBCode. I would also separate the long front post into 2-3 posts (announcements, banner, and description: front; forms, genres: second; staff, partners, federations: third, etc.), but that doesn't seem possible, as there are no bumps between the first post and the first order.

When ordering, since I'm not great at music stuff, I didn't understand what most of the genres were. I might just be unusually uninformed about music, or it might help to add explanations of what each genre is.

Many shops/federations, including my own, have the customer hide the codeword to prove they read the rules. This is likely to prevent people from looking at other's forms to find the codeword instead of reading the rules, but really, there isn't much reason for them to do that.

All that said, the shop is pretty good, so it is rated an 18/20.

ilovestories wrote:

I would improve the BBCode. I would also separate the long front post into 2-3 posts (announcements, banner, and description: front; forms, genres: second; staff, partners, federations: third, etc.), but that doesn't seem possible, as there are no bumps between the first post and the first order.

I knew from the start that I wanted it to be 1 page, but I kinda regret it.

Moneeman I need a progress report

forgot to activity check
RESPONDED:
@asdfperson135

NOT:
@moneeman
@IrisMerci

Username: @Aaliyah_Newlands
Nickname (will be used, optional): Aaliyah
Pronouns (if in doubt, put they/them): she/her
Music Style (from list of genres): beat/phonk
Details: your choice!
Preferred Musician (optional): n/a
Codeword: Taiko
Other Info: n/a

co0lcr34t10ns wrote:

forgot to activity check
RESPONDED:

NOT:
@asdfperson135
@moneeman
@IrisMerci

here

also how do i apply for co-owner? i would love to take that job

asdfperson135 wrote:

co0lcr34t10ns wrote:

forgot to activity check
RESPONDED:

NOT:
@asdfperson135
@moneeman
@IrisMerci

here

also how do i apply for co-owner? i would love to take that job

Marked as present.
You have other shop experience and currently have a strikeless record, so I'm fine with you being co-owner. You now can accept/reject employees and give out strikes for misbehaviour and inactivity (but please notify me if you do so I can edit the front page).

Aaliyah_Newlands wrote:

Username: @Aaliyah_Newlands
Nickname (will be used, optional): Aaliyah
Pronouns (if in doubt, put they/them): she/her
Music Style (from list of genres): beat/phonk
Details: your choice!
Preferred Musician (optional): n/a
Codeword: Taiko
Other Info: n/a

I do not know how to make that style of music lol
Anyone else know how, or are we forwarding to Piano Shop

yowch, did a silly

asdfperson135_music wrote:

co0lcr34t10ns wrote:

Aaliyah_Newlands wrote:

Username: @Aaliyah_Newlands
Nickname (will be used, optional): Aaliyah
Pronouns (if in doubt, put they/them): she/her
Music Style (from list of genres): beat/phonk
Details: your choice!
Preferred Musician (optional): n/a
Codeword: Taiko
Other Info: n/a

I do not know how to make that style of music lol
Anyone else know how, or are we forwarding to Piano Shop

it is an employee request.

Also, since I can do this now, she makes some bangers, so she has been accepted! Welcome to the shop!

Preferred musician and Details fields and the order codeword? Looks like an order form to me.

co0lcr34t10ns wrote:

asdfperson135_music wrote:

co0lcr34t10ns wrote:

Aaliyah_Newlands wrote:

Username: @Aaliyah_Newlands
Nickname (will be used, optional): Aaliyah
Pronouns (if in doubt, put they/them): she/her
Music Style (from list of genres): beat/phonk
Details: your choice!
Preferred Musician (optional): n/a
Codeword: Taiko
Other Info: n/a

I do not know how to make that style of music lol
Anyone else know how, or are we forwarding to Piano Shop

it is an employee request.

Also, since I can do this now, she makes some bangers, so she has been accepted! Welcome to the shop!

Preferred musician and Details fields and the order codeword? Looks like an order form to me.

my bad, my brain did a silly nilly. also, why would she want a song in the style of music that she already knows? kind of strange

Username: Eason_9
Nickname (will be used, optional): Eason
Pronouns (if in doubt, put they/them): He/Him
Music Style (from list of genres): Chiptune
Details: A catchy tune that fits in a game's main menu
Preferred Musician (optional): -
Codeword: Taiko
Other Info: -

Eason_9 wrote:

Username: Eason_9
Nickname (will be used, optional): Eason
Pronouns (if in doubt, put they/them): He/Him
Music Style (from list of genres): Chiptune
Details: A catchy tune that fits in a game's main menu
Preferred Musician (optional): -
Codeword: Taiko
Other Info: -

I'm on it. Give a few days.

co0lcr34t10ns wrote:

Eason_9 wrote:

Username: Eason_9
Nickname (will be used, optional): Eason
Pronouns (if in doubt, put they/them): He/Him
Music Style (from list of genres): Chiptune
Details: A catchy tune that fits in a game's main menu
Preferred Musician (optional): -
Codeword: Taiko
Other Info: -

I'm on it. Give a few days.

I had an idea. What if it's just 8-bit breakcore? It would work darn well
Edit: It did not work darn well, reworking lol

co0lcr34t10ns wrote:

co0lcr34t10ns wrote:

Eason_9 wrote:

Username: Eason_9
Nickname (will be used, optional): Eason
Pronouns (if in doubt, put they/them): He/Him
Music Style (from list of genres): Chiptune
Details: A catchy tune that fits in a game's main menu
Preferred Musician (optional): -
Codeword: Taiko
Other Info: -

I'm on it. Give a few days.

I had an idea. What if it's just 8-bit breakcore? It would work darn well
Edit: It did not work darn well, reworking lol

Newest progress, how do you like it? Tell me if you want me to go in a different direction.

co0lcr34t10ns wrote:

forgot to activity check
RESPONDED:
@asdfperson135

NOT:
@moneeman
@IrisMerci

Sorry for not being active i have spring football season rn havnt had the time.

Aaliyah_Newlands wrote:

Username: @Aaliyah_Newlands
Nickname (will be used, optional): Aaliyah
Pronouns (if in doubt, put they/them): she/her
Music Style (from list of genres): beat/phonk
Details: your choice!
Preferred Musician (optional): n/a
Codeword: Taiko
Other Info: n/a

I gotchu

moneeman wrote:

co0lcr34t10ns wrote:

forgot to activity check
RESPONDED:
@asdfperson135

NOT:
@moneeman
@IrisMerci

Sorry for not being active i have spring football season rn havnt had the time.

Whew. Got worried for a bit there. Anyways IrisMerci fired

Eason_9 wrote:

Username: Eason_9
Nickname (will be used, optional): Eason
Pronouns (if in doubt, put they/them): He/Him
Music Style (from list of genres): Chiptune
Details: A catchy tune that fits in a game's main menu
Preferred Musician (optional): -
Codeword: Taiko
Other Info: -

I did it. It's not much different from the preview I posted, but I figured for a menu tune it works better that way.

Review from The Gemstone Federation
First Impression 1-5: 4
Speed Rating 1-5: 4
Staff Rating 1-5: 5
Quality Rating 1-5: 4
Order Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1018168418/
Total Rating 1-20: 17
Suggestions: A decent shop to order music! My suggestion is to add more formatting to the post as it'll be easier to read by doing so.