fantasy knighthood march '24

criminal-intent

i like that! maybe we could mention one of the monsters they defeated and how just to give a bit more detail? tbh i wasn’t sure how detailed they’re supposed to be tho…

I could probably send out a notif abt that tmrw, but i am in a later (?) timezone than you (meaning i get up later…) so if you think you can get it out sooner i’d just go for it

AmazaEevee

yeah, i don't know how detailed they're supposed to be either :') i tried taking inspo from what the ones in the memory book last session. but idk tbh.
and i was able to send out the notifs

AmazaEevee

Aaah, I’ve had a crazy couple of days and I forgot about the cabin blurb ;;; Any last thoughts/edits?

The kingdom was overrun by monsters, disrupting the flow of creativity. Writing struggles plagued the land and Queen Este Dubyou Cee recruits campers as the last line of defense. Their words become weapons, defeating the monsters one by one. Fantasy Knighthood, the kingdom was counting on you…

Whirlygig

Hi! Sorry for not seeing this. It looks good but the verb tense is kinda inconsistent - I would consider changing “recruits” to “recruited” and “become” to “became”
But other than that I love it!

Last edited by Whirlygig (April 7, 2024 01:43:16)

why can't we give love that one more chance?
stingray, she/her, fantasy 3/24!

criminal-intent

other than what stingray said, that sounds perfect! tysm eevee

AmazaEevee

Okay! Edited and it's being sent to Alana

consistent verb tenses will forever be my downfall adkjfhlasd /lh /hj

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