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- Platypus_WKeyboard
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Updated version below, below.
Last edited by Platypus_WKeyboard (March 29, 2024 20:08:43)
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
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Hope you guys like what I have so far.
Who would be interested in doing the art?
Who would be interested in doing the art?
Last edited by Platypus_WKeyboard (March 26, 2024 04:50:29)
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- DerpyPig03
- Scratcher
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this looks good!ASTONISHING X-MEN #1
Issue 1: In The Wake Of Everything.
snip
notes
1. could you take out the reference to vampire jubilee for Blade lore purposes?
2. I don't think Logan would call jubilee an idiot, even if he's teasing her. Maybe something like “shortie” or “kid”
3. Where's Gambit at? Please tell me Gambit shows up lol
Last edited by DerpyPig03 (March 26, 2024 17:11:28)
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- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
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1) Ok.this looks good!ASTONISHING X-MEN #1
Issue 1: In The Wake Of Everything.
snip
notes
1. could you take out the reference to vampire jubilee for Blade lore purposes?
2. I don't think Logan would call jubilee an idiot, even if he's teasing her. Maybe something like “shortie” or “kid”
3. Where's Gambit at? Please tell me Gambit shows up lol
2) alright. I wanted to show Logan being a bit of a jerk but looking over it now yeah.
3) #2 I was saving Gambit and Doop for the Pleasant Hill two parter.
Last edited by Platypus_WKeyboard (March 26, 2024 17:18:41)
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
At Last
What did everyone else think?
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
At Last
Who wants to do the art? What did everyone else think?
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
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But, wouldn't that be pointless if they aren't using bitmap?I’ll help with the coloring because that’s the only thing I can really do at this momentWho wants to do the art? What did everyone else think?
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
At Last
20\30 pages written!
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
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Any tips on how to make Rogue's and Kurt's accents more pronounced in dialogue?
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
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Y'know, there's a the X-Men series, older shows, hack even the movies I could be watching for inspiration…
But I'm watching Buffy the Vampire Slayer instead.
But I'm watching Buffy the Vampire Slayer instead.
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- boom2ratz
- Scratcher
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I'll read the script now. I can try to do some backgrounds for itHopefully. But that it'll be up to you guys.I'm sure it'll be great. Ugh I don't know why I keep getting anxious about sending it! I'm just like worried you guys won't like it.
Also if anyone wants to do the art tell me when the script is shared.
- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
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Yes. Are we doing songs in the comics?
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
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Will do!Spell out the accents, like “vater” instead of “water” for Kurt and Rogue's do like Marv did in his comics Any tips on how to make Rogue's and Kurt's accents more pronounced in dialogue?
Thanks, any feedback? Script is great Plat!
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
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the script for Astonishing X-Men #1 is … done!
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
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Editing it a bit before I share. the script for Astonishing X-Men #1 is … done!
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
At Last
Uh noticed some issues I'll repost it soon.
Last edited by Platypus_WKeyboard (March 29, 2024 20:43:45)
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed