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prishaJuni
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion

daboydodo wrote:

guys can you catch me up
Ok! Basically, the main character's twin sister (Mirelle) has disappeared, and without her, main character cannot defeat the evil King ________. He travels through the three realms, searching for people who know where she is.


BlauHourglass wrote:

MC is looking for sister, and some village folk speak of a strange, crazy man who lives in the cave systems nearby, who constantly speaks “oracles”. MC decides to see the crazy man for himself but gets attacked for some strange “energy/essence” inside of him. After battle, the crazy one regains some level of coherency and tells yet another oracle to the MC, who then moves on.

The message can be some form of poetry with Latin and old English entailing some vague things about the twin. Not enough to tell the MC where the girl is, but just enough to let him know that she exists, had been spotted by the crazy guy, and is somewhere.

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SquashDog
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wrong forum sorry

Last edited by SquashDog (March 15, 2024 09:13:05)


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daboydodo
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so

prishaJuni wrote:

daboydodo wrote:

guys can you catch me up
Ok! Basically, the main character's twin sister (Mirelle) has disappeared, and without her, main character cannot defeat the evil King ________. He travels through the three realms, searching for people who know where she is.


BlauHourglass wrote:

MC is looking for sister, and some village folk speak of a strange, crazy man who lives in the cave systems nearby, who constantly speaks “oracles”. MC decides to see the crazy man for himself but gets attacked for some strange “energy/essence” inside of him. After battle, the crazy one regains some level of coherency and tells yet another oracle to the MC, who then moves on.

The message can be some form of poetry with Latin and old English entailing some vague things about the twin. Not enough to tell the MC where the girl is, but just enough to let him know that she exists, had been spotted by the crazy guy, and is somewhere.
sorry to ignor but can you teel me what parts of the story you did already or is this it
prishaJuni
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion

daboydodo wrote:

so

prishaJuni wrote:

daboydodo wrote:

guys can you catch me up
Ok! Basically, the main character's twin sister (Mirelle) has disappeared, and without her, main character cannot defeat the evil King ________. He travels through the three realms, searching for people who know where she is.


BlauHourglass wrote:

MC is looking for sister, and some village folk speak of a strange, crazy man who lives in the cave systems nearby, who constantly speaks “oracles”. MC decides to see the crazy man for himself but gets attacked for some strange “energy/essence” inside of him. After battle, the crazy one regains some level of coherency and tells yet another oracle to the MC, who then moves on.

The message can be some form of poetry with Latin and old English entailing some vague things about the twin. Not enough to tell the MC where the girl is, but just enough to let him know that she exists, had been spotted by the crazy guy, and is somewhere.
sorry to ignor but can you teel me what parts of the story you did already or is this it
It kinda depends on your definition of “done”. We've figured out the plot so far, but I don't think we really “done” any of it.

I’m a really underrated coder/artist! I fix up people’s old games and would LOVE to hear about any underrated games.

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daboydodo
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prishaJuni wrote:

daboydodo wrote:

so

prishaJuni wrote:

daboydodo wrote:

guys can you catch me up
Ok! Basically, the main character's twin sister (Mirelle) has disappeared, and without her, main character cannot defeat the evil King ________. He travels through the three realms, searching for people who know where she is.


BlauHourglass wrote:

MC is looking for sister, and some village folk speak of a strange, crazy man who lives in the cave systems nearby, who constantly speaks “oracles”. MC decides to see the crazy man for himself but gets attacked for some strange “energy/essence” inside of him. After battle, the crazy one regains some level of coherency and tells yet another oracle to the MC, who then moves on.

The message can be some form of poetry with Latin and old English entailing some vague things about the twin. Not enough to tell the MC where the girl is, but just enough to let him know that she exists, had been spotted by the crazy guy, and is somewhere.
sorry to ignor but can you teel me what parts of the story you did already or is this it
It kinda depends on your definition of “done”. We've figured out the plot so far, but I don't think we really “done” any of it.
so your done with thinking up ideas but you need it on paper
prishaJuni
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion

daboydodo wrote:

prishaJuni wrote:

daboydodo wrote:

so

prishaJuni wrote:

daboydodo wrote:

guys can you catch me up
Ok! Basically, the main character's twin sister (Mirelle) has disappeared, and without her, main character cannot defeat the evil King ________. He travels through the three realms, searching for people who know where she is.


BlauHourglass wrote:

MC is looking for sister, and some village folk speak of a strange, crazy man who lives in the cave systems nearby, who constantly speaks “oracles”. MC decides to see the crazy man for himself but gets attacked for some strange “energy/essence” inside of him. After battle, the crazy one regains some level of coherency and tells yet another oracle to the MC, who then moves on.

The message can be some form of poetry with Latin and old English entailing some vague things about the twin. Not enough to tell the MC where the girl is, but just enough to let him know that she exists, had been spotted by the crazy guy, and is somewhere.
sorry to ignor but can you teel me what parts of the story you did already or is this it
It kinda depends on your definition of “done”. We've figured out the plot so far, but I don't think we really “done” any of it.
so your done with thinking up ideas but you need it on paper
Exactly.

I’m a really underrated coder/artist! I fix up people’s old games and would LOVE to hear about any underrated games.

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daboydodo
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prishaJuni wrote:

daboydodo wrote:

prishaJuni wrote:

daboydodo wrote:

so

prishaJuni wrote:

daboydodo wrote:

guys can you catch me up
Ok! Basically, the main character's twin sister (Mirelle) has disappeared, and without her, main character cannot defeat the evil King ________. He travels through the three realms, searching for people who know where she is.


BlauHourglass wrote:

MC is looking for sister, and some village folk speak of a strange, crazy man who lives in the cave systems nearby, who constantly speaks “oracles”. MC decides to see the crazy man for himself but gets attacked for some strange “energy/essence” inside of him. After battle, the crazy one regains some level of coherency and tells yet another oracle to the MC, who then moves on.

The message can be some form of poetry with Latin and old English entailing some vague things about the twin. Not enough to tell the MC where the girl is, but just enough to let him know that she exists, had been spotted by the crazy guy, and is somewhere.
sorry to ignor but can you teel me what parts of the story you did already or is this it
It kinda depends on your definition of “done”. We've figured out the plot so far, but I don't think we really “done” any of it.
so your done with thinking up ideas but you need it on paper
Exactly.
ok well tell me the whole story
BlauHourglass
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion

Guys- snip your quotes, please-

prishaJuni
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion

BlauHourglass wrote:

Guys- snip your quotes, please-
Ok! Sorry!

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BlauHourglass
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion

prishaJuni wrote:

BlauHourglass wrote:

Guys- snip your quotes, please-
Ok! Sorry!
No worries, just a reminder to keep the environment clean and easy to read and naviagte. ^^

5_g
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion

cmon guys we need a story before artists can work. the entire project is waiting on you
BlauHourglass
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion

5_g wrote:

cmon guys we need a story before artists can work. the entire project is waiting on you
I'm sorry. I think a real-time, collaborative mind mapping tool with greatly enhance this process. It's VERY hard to keep track of everything. I'm taking my physics exam and practice SATs tomorrow, but I think I can set up a Mural mural for us all.

5_g
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion

BlauHourglass wrote:

5_g wrote:

cmon guys we need a story before artists can work. the entire project is waiting on you
I'm sorry. I think a real-time, collaborative mind mapping tool with greatly enhance this process. It's VERY hard to keep track of everything. I'm taking my physics exam and practice SATs tomorrow, but I think I can set up a Mural mural for us all.
i wasnt saying we need to do anything immedietly, school is more important than this, thats also why i have been slow to update the main game with the inventory thing.

Focus on studying for your pSAT, its much more important than this.

I was mostly just bumping the topic to wake up the people that forgot about it.
Kittygirl4ever
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion

  • Main idea:
    Main character must go through 3 realms (Mammoth Grove, past :: Burning Badlands, present :: Deepsea Dominion, future) to reach the fourth realm, Obscuria. This is where their (evil?) twin sister is Mirelle, and they must convert her to good and destory a stone tablet that the evil King Argon has made.
  • Details:
    Meet a crazy man in a cave that gives them a strange poem of vauge clues the twin sister is alive
  • Art needed:
    King Argon
    Main character (customizable?)
    Mirelle
    Map
    Crazy Man



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BlauHourglass
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion

5_g wrote:

BlauHourglass wrote:

-snip-
i wasnt saying we need to do anything immedietly, school is more important than this, thats also why i have been slow to update the main game with the inventory thing.
Focus on studying for your pSAT, its much more important than this.
I was mostly just bumping the topic to wake up the people that forgot about it.
Oh, I see. Alright, will do; thank you. Nonetheless, I'll still get a Mural mural up for us tomorrow or in the coming week.

5_g
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Kittygirl4ever wrote:

  • Main idea:
    Main character must go through 3 realms (Mammoth Grove, past :: Burning Badlands, present :: Deepsea Dominion, future) to reach the fourth realm, Obscuria. This is where their (evil?) twin sister is Mirelle, and they must convert her to good and destory a stone tablet that the evil King Argon has made.
  • Details:
    Meet a crazy man in a cave that gives them a strange poem of vauge clues the twin sister is alive
  • Art needed:
    King Argon
    Main character (customizable?)
    Mirelle
    Map
    Crazy Man


Ill dig around scratch and see if i can find someone who can draw us a map. Also, what are the exact place names, like towns and other landmarks.
daboydodo
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion

Kittygirl4ever wrote:

  • Main idea:
    Main character must go through 3 realms (Mammoth Grove, past :: Burning Badlands, present :: Deepsea Dominion, future) to reach the fourth realm, Obscuria. This is where their (evil?) twin sister is Mirelle, and they must convert her to good and destory a stone tablet that the evil King Argon has made.
  • Details:
    Meet a crazy man in a cave that gives them a strange poem of vauge clues the twin sister is alive
  • Art needed:
    King Argon
    Main character (customizable?)
    Mirelle
    Map
    Crazy Man


i need this
prishaJuni
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion

I feel like everybody forgot about this…

I’m a really underrated coder/artist! I fix up people’s old games and would LOVE to hear about any underrated games.

OPEN DMC WITH MANY WAYS TO WIN! PLEASE JOIN! 10+ CHARACTERS TO DRAW!
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/958213540

5_g
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prishaJuni wrote:

I feel like everybody forgot about this…
No this is how fast all forum based collaborations work, theres only one other game collab on the forums and its even less active than this but its doing fine

i just dont have that much time to work on this but the next update will be done eventually
BlauHourglass
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prishaJuni wrote:

I feel like everybody forgot about this…
I will admit, I did forget about this.
As I am unable to maintain an active and productive part in this collaboration, with deepest regrets, I will take my leave.
However, 5_g, if you wish me to still set up a mind map in Mural, let me know. I'll be more than happy to.

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