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Platypus_WKeyboard

AbeHe wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
AU-Ratcatcher wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Started work on the script. It starts with a “montage” to introduce each member. I'm stuck on the one for Jubilee. Any ideas?
That honestly feels a bit cliched at this point
Yeah because it’s efficient.

It’s quick and shows each character. Also I still need help with that panel.

Should I share the script so far?
Anybody? I kinda want an answer soon since I’m going camping with very little internet access.
Sorry I got nothin.

Okay I’ll brain storm.

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

DerpyPig03

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
AbeHe wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
AU-Ratcatcher wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Started work on the script. It starts with a “montage” to introduce each member. I'm stuck on the one for Jubilee. Any ideas?
That honestly feels a bit cliched at this point
Yeah because it’s efficient.

It’s quick and shows each character. Also I still need help with that panel.

Should I share the script so far?
Anybody? I kinda want an answer soon since I’m going camping with very little internet access.
Sorry I got nothin.
Okay I’ll brain storm.

you need an intro for Jubilee? really depends on a lot of factors. What is her arc? Is she young (like most interpretations) or is she an adult? Should she be shown as a civilian or as a hero?

depending on your answers to those questions, you could do any numbers of things. My mind defaults to fighting criminals at a mall or rock concert

FAVORITE BIBLE QUOTE
"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres. Love never fails." - 1 Corinthians 13:4-8a (emphasis added)

FAVORITE MOVIE QUOTE
“One often meets his destiny on the road he takes to avoid it.” - Master Oogway

Platypus_WKeyboard

DerpyPig03 wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
AbeHe wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
AU-Ratcatcher wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Started work on the script. It starts with a “montage” to introduce each member. I'm stuck on the one for Jubilee. Any ideas?
That honestly feels a bit cliched at this point
Yeah because it’s efficient.

It’s quick and shows each character. Also I still need help with that panel.

Should I share the script so far?
Anybody? I kinda want an answer soon since I’m going camping with very little internet access.
Sorry I got nothin.
Okay I’ll brain storm.
you need an intro for Jubilee? really depends on a lot of factors. What is her arc? Is she young (like most interpretations) or is she an adult? Should she be shown as a civilian or as a hero?

depending on your answers to those questions, you could do any numbers of things. My mind defaults to fighting criminals at a mall or rock concert

Still figuring that out a bit, I have specifics for the other members but Jubilee’s is in the air right now (same goes for Hank’s) She is the youngest on the team but all the main X-Men are adults. Civilian, most of the X-Men have given up crime fighting for the time being.

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

DerpyPig03

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
DerpyPig03 wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
AbeHe wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
AU-Ratcatcher wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Started work on the script. It starts with a “montage” to introduce each member. I'm stuck on the one for Jubilee. Any ideas?
That honestly feels a bit cliched at this point
Yeah because it’s efficient.

It’s quick and shows each character. Also I still need help with that panel.

Should I share the script so far?
Anybody? I kinda want an answer soon since I’m going camping with very little internet access.
Sorry I got nothin.
Okay I’ll brain storm.
you need an intro for Jubilee? really depends on a lot of factors. What is her arc? Is she young (like most interpretations) or is she an adult? Should she be shown as a civilian or as a hero?

depending on your answers to those questions, you could do any numbers of things. My mind defaults to fighting criminals at a mall or rock concert
Still figuring that out a bit, I have specifics for the other members but Jubilee’s is in the air right now (same goes for Hank’s) She is the youngest on the team but all the main X-Men are adults. Civilian, most of the X-Men have given up crime fighting for the time being.

she's working at a store in the mall. day job as a clerk at a store and she's bored out of her mind

FAVORITE BIBLE QUOTE
"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres. Love never fails." - 1 Corinthians 13:4-8a (emphasis added)

FAVORITE MOVIE QUOTE
“One often meets his destiny on the road he takes to avoid it.” - Master Oogway

Platypus_WKeyboard

DerpyPig03 wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
DerpyPig03 wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
AbeHe wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
AU-Ratcatcher wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Started work on the script. It starts with a “montage” to introduce each member. I'm stuck on the one for Jubilee. Any ideas?
That honestly feels a bit cliched at this point
Yeah because it’s efficient.

It’s quick and shows each character. Also I still need help with that panel.

Should I share the script so far?
Anybody? I kinda want an answer soon since I’m going camping with very little internet access.
Sorry I got nothin.
Okay I’ll brain storm.
you need an intro for Jubilee? really depends on a lot of factors. What is her arc? Is she young (like most interpretations) or is she an adult? Should she be shown as a civilian or as a hero?

depending on your answers to those questions, you could do any numbers of things. My mind defaults to fighting criminals at a mall or rock concert
Still figuring that out a bit, I have specifics for the other members but Jubilee’s is in the air right now (same goes for Hank’s) She is the youngest on the team but all the main X-Men are adults. Civilian, most of the X-Men have given up crime fighting for the time being.
she's working at a store in the mall. day job as a clerk at a store and she's bored out of her mind

That works great

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

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revive

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Platypus_WKeyboard

-MarvelComics- wrote:
revive

Stayin alive!

Also working hard on X-Men #1 script.

Last edited by Platypus_WKeyboard (March 24, 2024 22:16:36)

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

Platypus_WKeyboard

Everyone! Let's revive this thing!

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

Platypus_WKeyboard

I know it's a bit early to plan ahead but some ideas popped up for Vol. 2 of X-Men in my head.

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

Platypus_WKeyboard

10 pages down! Does anyone want to seem em?

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

AbeHe

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
10 pages down! Does anyone want to seem em?

Sure

Platypus_WKeyboard

AbeHe wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
10 pages down! Does anyone want to seem em?
Sure

Lemme finish some stuff up with it first.

Oh Nightcrawler has been bumped up to a main character now (I think he's neat) I will be keeping the comic origin of his mother being Mystique and Destiny. I will not be mentioning Azazel since no one cares about Azazel.

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

Platypus_WKeyboard

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
AbeHe wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
10 pages down! Does anyone want to seem em?
Sure
Lemme finish some stuff up with it first.

Oh Nightcrawler has been bumped up to a main character now (I think he's neat) I will be keeping the comic origin of his mother being Mystique and Destiny. I will not be mentioning Azazel since no one cares about Azazel.

Alright so I have 14 out of a planned 30 pages done, but I'm worried to share it.

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

-MANDOFANCOMICS-

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
AbeHe wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
10 pages down! Does anyone want to seem em?
Sure
Lemme finish some stuff up with it first.

Oh Nightcrawler has been bumped up to a main character now (I think he's neat) I will be keeping the comic origin of his mother being Mystique and Destiny. I will not be mentioning Azazel since no one cares about Azazel.
Alright so I have 14 out of a planned 30 pages done, but I'm worried to share it.

why??

I'm working on the deadpool movie, the wiccan comic series, and some one shots.

Platypus_WKeyboard

-MANDOFANCOMICS- wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
AbeHe wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
10 pages down! Does anyone want to seem em?
Sure
Lemme finish some stuff up with it first.

Oh Nightcrawler has been bumped up to a main character now (I think he's neat) I will be keeping the comic origin of his mother being Mystique and Destiny. I will not be mentioning Azazel since no one cares about Azazel.
Alright so I have 14 out of a planned 30 pages done, but I'm worried to share it.
why??

I don't know, just a bit more self-conscious about it than usual I suppose.

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

Platypus_WKeyboard

Ugh I don't know why I keep getting anxious about sending it! I'm just like worried you guys won't like it.

Last edited by Platypus_WKeyboard (March 26, 2024 01:12:42)

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

AbeHe

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Ugh I don't know why I keep getting anxious about sending it! I'm just like worried you guys won't like it.

I'm sure it'll be great.

-MANDOFANCOMICS-

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
-MANDOFANCOMICS- wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
AbeHe wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
10 pages down! Does anyone want to seem em?
Sure
Lemme finish some stuff up with it first.

Oh Nightcrawler has been bumped up to a main character now (I think he's neat) I will be keeping the comic origin of his mother being Mystique and Destiny. I will not be mentioning Azazel since no one cares about Azazel.
Alright so I have 14 out of a planned 30 pages done, but I'm worried to share it.
why??
I don't know, just a bit more self-conscious about it than usual I suppose.

is it the script. or the actual comic??

I'm working on the deadpool movie, the wiccan comic series, and some one shots.

Platypus_WKeyboard

-MANDOFANCOMICS- wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
-MANDOFANCOMICS- wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
AbeHe wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
10 pages down! Does anyone want to seem em?
Sure
Lemme finish some stuff up with it first.

Oh Nightcrawler has been bumped up to a main character now (I think he's neat) I will be keeping the comic origin of his mother being Mystique and Destiny. I will not be mentioning Azazel since no one cares about Azazel.
Alright so I have 14 out of a planned 30 pages done, but I'm worried to share it.
why??
I don't know, just a bit more self-conscious about it than usual I suppose.
is it the script. or the actual comic??

It's the script.

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

Platypus_WKeyboard

AbeHe wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Ugh I don't know why I keep getting anxious about sending it! I'm just like worried you guys won't like it.
I'm sure it'll be great.

Hopefully. But that it'll be up to you guys.

Also if anyone wants to do the art tell me when the script is shared.

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

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