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- fr0ggy-
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Scratcher
5 posts
swc megathread ➷ march 2024
1st person POV+present tense
Prompt: A war breaks out in a town, and a girl is trying to gather her siblings
It makes sense for a seventeen year old like myself to not worry about things like death. We have our whole life to live still, we’re still teenagers! But as I cling onto my sister who is shivering in my arms, I realize I should have worried about death years ago. Faye shivering makes me worry even more. Where’s mom? Where’s grandma? Trying to not breathe in the toxic air, I race to the next open pit.
“Take my sister Faye! I’ll be back in a couple minutes!” I say as I give my friend my little sister.
My friend takes my sister and shuts the door. Okay. That’s done. Next is trying to find Kaleb, my older brother. My mind first thinks to run home and look for him, but would he really stay there? Perhaps he’s at his girlfriend's house? Without realizing it I’m running towards his girlfriend’s house.
I open the door and look around. Dead silence, destroyed. Almost like no ones been here for years. I know they were here this morning, I remember Kaleb saying he's going to go to Ellie’s house and bake cookies. What went wrong? Why did our city have to get attacked?
“Hello!” I call into the dull house.
No response, as expected. I walk up the creaky staircase and open some doors on the second floor. Where could they be? I start to lose hope and go to start walking downstairs once more. I hear footsteps. Not upstairs, outside. Panic fills my body and I don’t move. They open the door. Shoot. I don’t know why I can’t move, it's a shock. They run over to me.
“You’re coming with us,” one of them says.
They try to take my hand but I pull away. One of them lifts me up and takes me out the door. I try to scream but they don’t let me. Why didn’t I run away?
Prompt: A war breaks out in a town, and a girl is trying to gather her siblings
It makes sense for a seventeen year old like myself to not worry about things like death. We have our whole life to live still, we’re still teenagers! But as I cling onto my sister who is shivering in my arms, I realize I should have worried about death years ago. Faye shivering makes me worry even more. Where’s mom? Where’s grandma? Trying to not breathe in the toxic air, I race to the next open pit.
“Take my sister Faye! I’ll be back in a couple minutes!” I say as I give my friend my little sister.
My friend takes my sister and shuts the door. Okay. That’s done. Next is trying to find Kaleb, my older brother. My mind first thinks to run home and look for him, but would he really stay there? Perhaps he’s at his girlfriend's house? Without realizing it I’m running towards his girlfriend’s house.
I open the door and look around. Dead silence, destroyed. Almost like no ones been here for years. I know they were here this morning, I remember Kaleb saying he's going to go to Ellie’s house and bake cookies. What went wrong? Why did our city have to get attacked?
“Hello!” I call into the dull house.
No response, as expected. I walk up the creaky staircase and open some doors on the second floor. Where could they be? I start to lose hope and go to start walking downstairs once more. I hear footsteps. Not upstairs, outside. Panic fills my body and I don’t move. They open the door. Shoot. I don’t know why I can’t move, it's a shock. They run over to me.
“You’re coming with us,” one of them says.
They try to take my hand but I pull away. One of them lifts me up and takes me out the door. I try to scream but they don’t let me. Why didn’t I run away?
Last edited by fr0ggy- (March 4, 2024 13:22:55)
- CHUROS000
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Scratcher
44 posts
swc megathread ➷ march 2024
Churro's Dailies #4- 3/4/2024
Present tense + 1st person POV
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I stand in front of the The Metropolitan Museum of Art, with it's grand pillars and fountains and street food vendors and pigeons that fly about the architectural marvel like it's some ice cream a child just dropped and they can't wait to take a bite out of it. But no, alas, it is not just ice cream.
To the average person, the MET probably seems like a huge, famous museum that everyone's heard of. To me, though, it's like a source of adventure. It's like a treasure chest full of ancient golds and silvers; a cave in need of exploration. And for me, exploration is how I like to get high.
Not that I have any real access to the MET; I'm just another one of those poor homeless girls living on the street. But I think I could sort of pass if I try hard enough. I'd begged enough money to buy some clothes, soap, and some bottles of water. I'd cleaned myself, changed myself, and was ready to break into the MET. Oh yeah. Don't ask me why I don't feel bad about doing this. I just don't.
It's surprisingly easy, actually. Nobody took notice of me. I stepped through the door, and got immediately hit by a whole barrage of people and senses. There was giant bouquets of flowers in the rotunda, a majestic set of stairs, and I'm drunken in awe. I feel like I was living in a dream. And this was just the beginning. What surprises me is that nobody checked to see if I had a ticket or not. Still, I look around nervously. It's a instinct of mine to be suspicious of everyone and everything. You get that when you're a hobo. Or maybe it was because I was doing something illegal.
I don't know what I was thinking when I decided I was going to break into the Metropolitan Museum of Art. Perhaps it was the beauty of the outer exterior of the building that lured my inner artist; perhaps it was the prospect of learning thousands of years' history and seeing it in person that appealed to my inner curiosity; perhaps it was just because I liked breaking into things just to get a kick out of it. But I definitely didn't regret it now as I started towards the right wing of the colossal museum. But still- there was a knotted feeling in my stomach gnawing at me. Like guilt usually does. Except I didn't feel guilty. Yet.
The strangest thing happened just as I turned the corner. I was walking down the Egyptian wing of the museum– obviously not staring at the ancient-as-time artifacts– I swore I saw something move out of my eye. It wasn't paranoia that the many dead mummies in the room could suddenly awaken to finish their unattended duties created while they were living; I don't think it was.
I slowly turned around, my heels poised, my arms outward, ready to defend myself against anything.
But nothing came.
Then, as if there were a surreal, dreamy sort of filter on my vision, a sarcophagus behind me started moving… I heard a sort of rustling noise, an old voice that reeked of displeasure. My vision clouded… I was falling, falling… nobody else in the gallery could see me… when they turned their heads to me, what was supposed to be their faces was just a mass of dark black- a void. They grew tall, like shadows- each a reminder that I was going crazy. That I was- were- living a life of a fugitive. Each face a victim who had fallen to my charms.
Each a dream which I woke up from in a cold sweat. Like this one.
…
idk what I was thinking when I wrote this I just wanted to get the daily done T-T
I think this could be classified as surrealism or smth? its certainly very interesting-
Present tense + 1st person POV
———————
I stand in front of the The Metropolitan Museum of Art, with it's grand pillars and fountains and street food vendors and pigeons that fly about the architectural marvel like it's some ice cream a child just dropped and they can't wait to take a bite out of it. But no, alas, it is not just ice cream.
To the average person, the MET probably seems like a huge, famous museum that everyone's heard of. To me, though, it's like a source of adventure. It's like a treasure chest full of ancient golds and silvers; a cave in need of exploration. And for me, exploration is how I like to get high.
Not that I have any real access to the MET; I'm just another one of those poor homeless girls living on the street. But I think I could sort of pass if I try hard enough. I'd begged enough money to buy some clothes, soap, and some bottles of water. I'd cleaned myself, changed myself, and was ready to break into the MET. Oh yeah. Don't ask me why I don't feel bad about doing this. I just don't.
It's surprisingly easy, actually. Nobody took notice of me. I stepped through the door, and got immediately hit by a whole barrage of people and senses. There was giant bouquets of flowers in the rotunda, a majestic set of stairs, and I'm drunken in awe. I feel like I was living in a dream. And this was just the beginning. What surprises me is that nobody checked to see if I had a ticket or not. Still, I look around nervously. It's a instinct of mine to be suspicious of everyone and everything. You get that when you're a hobo. Or maybe it was because I was doing something illegal.
I don't know what I was thinking when I decided I was going to break into the Metropolitan Museum of Art. Perhaps it was the beauty of the outer exterior of the building that lured my inner artist; perhaps it was the prospect of learning thousands of years' history and seeing it in person that appealed to my inner curiosity; perhaps it was just because I liked breaking into things just to get a kick out of it. But I definitely didn't regret it now as I started towards the right wing of the colossal museum. But still- there was a knotted feeling in my stomach gnawing at me. Like guilt usually does. Except I didn't feel guilty. Yet.
The strangest thing happened just as I turned the corner. I was walking down the Egyptian wing of the museum– obviously not staring at the ancient-as-time artifacts– I swore I saw something move out of my eye. It wasn't paranoia that the many dead mummies in the room could suddenly awaken to finish their unattended duties created while they were living; I don't think it was.
I slowly turned around, my heels poised, my arms outward, ready to defend myself against anything.
But nothing came.
Then, as if there were a surreal, dreamy sort of filter on my vision, a sarcophagus behind me started moving… I heard a sort of rustling noise, an old voice that reeked of displeasure. My vision clouded… I was falling, falling… nobody else in the gallery could see me… when they turned their heads to me, what was supposed to be their faces was just a mass of dark black- a void. They grew tall, like shadows- each a reminder that I was going crazy. That I was- were- living a life of a fugitive. Each face a victim who had fallen to my charms.
Each a dream which I woke up from in a cold sweat. Like this one.
…
idk what I was thinking when I wrote this I just wanted to get the daily done T-T
I think this could be classified as surrealism or smth? its certainly very interesting-
Last edited by CHUROS000 (March 4, 2024 19:38:29)
- wolfiebear-
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ➷ march 2024
daily 3.4
future tense, second person
future tense, second person
You’ll be bathed in shadows, leaning against a wall. Around the corner there will be a long hallway, dark but the moment you move toward it it will be flooded with fluorescent lights. Your cover will be blown immediately, but you’ll need to move past it. At the end of the hallway there will be a rickety elevator, that you’ll be sure will collapse the minute you get inside of it. You’ll wonder if there’s another option besides the dire situation laid out before you. But you’ll know you won’t be able to turn back now. Not after so long.
You’ll hear footsteps, the slamming of a door. You’ll nearly jump out of your skin but silently. Always silent.
When no one comes toward you you’ll realize it was just another prisoner. Maybe leaving. Maybe entering.
There will be a dark feeling surrounding you as you imagine this new inmate, unaware of the hell they’ll go through in this dark place. You’ll banish the thought of them from your mind. You’ll know you can’t hesitate any longer, that you must make a choice.
You’ll glance backward, at where you came from. They won’t notice you missing until the shift changes. You’ll glance at your crude prison issue watch, and curse silently in your head. Always silent.
You’ll peer around the corner at the darkened hall in front of you, at who you could be if you escaped. Escape. After all these years, even the past twenty minutes you won’t have thought the word. Now that you’ll have given yourself hope there’s truly no turning back.. What a dangerous thing it is. A little insidious creature.
You’ll steel yourself, preparing yourself for the death defying sprint down the corridor into the waiting elevator. You’ll rear back, steadying yourself, then fly forward.
The lights will click on as you pass them. You’ll hear a screeching alarm. The adrenaline will pump through your veins, propelling you towards the end of the hall.
You’ll be closer.
Closer.
Closer.
You’ll fling out your arm as you approach the elevator, not slowing at all for you’ll know that’s death. You’ll smash your fist into the button and collapse into the tiny room as the door closes behind you. You’ll pause for a moment as the carriage goes down.
Down.
Down.
You’ll think that went rather well. Most inmates never made it past the hallway. You’ll take a breath in.
And exhale.
And then you’ll realize you aren’t alone.
Even before you can register that it was all a trap. All a ploy. You’ll feel pain.
And then you’ll feel nothing.
And then you’ll hear laughter.
My laughter.
So, Prisoner 1782, I offer you a choice. You can keep going down your delirious, fantastical path of freedom and know you’ll never get there.
Or you can cooperate.
Yes, that’s quite what I thought.
- sakurakitty0212
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Scratcher
77 posts
swc megathread ➷ march 2024
Daily for 3/4 for Myth
316 words
The garden is eerily quiet The moonlight bathes the garden in an ethereal glow. In the dark corners where the moonlight doesn't reach, you can make out the unkempt shapes of rosebushes. You stand by the corroded, rusty gate leading into this mysterious place. Finally, you reach out and slowly push it open. it groans in protest as the hinges move for most likely the first time in years. As you step into the garden a cold wind whips through the garden and stirs up a pile of shriveled leaves. You look around nervously because even though you appear to be alone, you feel like someone else is there. All you can see is the beds of long-forgotten flowers that now grow out of control. Glancing over toward the large oak trees on the far side of the garden some movement catches your eye. You slowly turn in the direction that you saw the movement and carefully pick your way through the plants to the tree. Suddenly you step on a branch and a loud crack resonates throughout the garden. A figure immediately looks over in your direction and then scrambles up the oak tree. “Wait!” you cry out and take off running to the tree. The figure appears to be very agile and is already up to the higher branches of the oak. Finally, you reach the base of the tree and lean against the trunk. “Wait! I just want to talk.” you manage to get out in between your gasps for air. The figure stays silent and is still sitting on the branch high above. “I want to figure out why people are so afraid of this place.” you say once you have managed to catch your breath. Up above you hear the crackling of branches as the person leaps down. “Welcome to the old Nottaway place. Home of the ghosts in these parts.”
316 words
The garden is eerily quiet The moonlight bathes the garden in an ethereal glow. In the dark corners where the moonlight doesn't reach, you can make out the unkempt shapes of rosebushes. You stand by the corroded, rusty gate leading into this mysterious place. Finally, you reach out and slowly push it open. it groans in protest as the hinges move for most likely the first time in years. As you step into the garden a cold wind whips through the garden and stirs up a pile of shriveled leaves. You look around nervously because even though you appear to be alone, you feel like someone else is there. All you can see is the beds of long-forgotten flowers that now grow out of control. Glancing over toward the large oak trees on the far side of the garden some movement catches your eye. You slowly turn in the direction that you saw the movement and carefully pick your way through the plants to the tree. Suddenly you step on a branch and a loud crack resonates throughout the garden. A figure immediately looks over in your direction and then scrambles up the oak tree. “Wait!” you cry out and take off running to the tree. The figure appears to be very agile and is already up to the higher branches of the oak. Finally, you reach the base of the tree and lean against the trunk. “Wait! I just want to talk.” you manage to get out in between your gasps for air. The figure stays silent and is still sitting on the branch high above. “I want to figure out why people are so afraid of this place.” you say once you have managed to catch your breath. Up above you hear the crackling of branches as the person leaps down. “Welcome to the old Nottaway place. Home of the ghosts in these parts.”
- -Busy_bee
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Scratcher
5 posts
swc megathread ➷ march 2024
bumble's dailys + more -
March. 4 - past tense + 2nd pov - 350 points and 315 words
You sighed, kicking the leg of the chair. There were about five minutes left till class ended, and you would be free from school for nine days. Looking up from your desk, you saw the teacher passing something out. Pretty lousy, giving out homework for Spring Break, you thought to yourself. Some of your peers looked defeated by the ELA homework, others looked strangely glad about it.. You glanced at the homework- you would have to write, not type, four hundred words about your Spring Break on paper. Now you know why people looked sad or angry- some people would just be spending their break sleeping or gaming. Luckily, you were going to the beach in Florida, where you would remain for six days. You would survive this grade, but you felt quite bad for your best friend who was going to be playing Genshin Impact all day long. Of course, it would still be hard to write four hundred words on paper, especially if you were going somewhere for a while and you didn't have paper. By the time the teacher had quieted everyone down, the bell rang and you rushed to grab everything.
“Hey!” your best friend tapped you on your shoulder, “Can you stay behind with me and clean up for extra credit? They usually call our buses late, no need to go to the gym yet.
”Sure," you agreed- wanting to get extra points in case your writing skills weren't the best.
You picked up some trash and put the chairs on the table, helping the teacher run some errands too. You proceeded to leave to the gym once you finished when they called your bus- you would have to run to catch it. Your friend and you speed-walked down the hallway to reach the bus and ended up being the last ones to board, but finally, spring break had started.
March. 6 - snow-fi - 250 points and 262 words
The soft snowflakes fell, melting at the touch of the concrete but gathering in the grass. Elena glanced out at the storm, waiting for when it would look like a winter wonderland. This was the first snow of the year, the first snow of the winter. Slowly, but surely, overnight the snow had transformed the neighborhood- covering everything with white. Footprints of kids rushing to play in the snow showed how deep it was, two inches. The snow made the world look calm, and there was no problem at all with the earth. Its slow fall seemed graceful, each snowflake falling at the right time. Elena didn't have the words to explain it, wrapping herself up and heading out, flakes landing gently on her hat. She reached out her hand, concealed with a glove and snowflakes landed on it, melted soon though. Around her, trees were covered in snow and there were footprints everywhere, of kids and adults. Elena decided to take a walk and enjoy the view, not certain when it would melt away. The snow filled her longing in her heart- she had been waiting for it all year, for it to finally come in a calm way. She was glad it didn't come harsh, like a blizzard, or not come at all. It had just come perfectly, suitable to play, enjoy the view, and do the things you do when it snows. Elena sighed, taking a step forward- a bit sad to ruin her perfect yard but she wanted to take a walk. She stepped out into the snow.
(adding more later!)
March. 4 - past tense + 2nd pov - 350 points and 315 words
You sighed, kicking the leg of the chair. There were about five minutes left till class ended, and you would be free from school for nine days. Looking up from your desk, you saw the teacher passing something out. Pretty lousy, giving out homework for Spring Break, you thought to yourself. Some of your peers looked defeated by the ELA homework, others looked strangely glad about it.. You glanced at the homework- you would have to write, not type, four hundred words about your Spring Break on paper. Now you know why people looked sad or angry- some people would just be spending their break sleeping or gaming. Luckily, you were going to the beach in Florida, where you would remain for six days. You would survive this grade, but you felt quite bad for your best friend who was going to be playing Genshin Impact all day long. Of course, it would still be hard to write four hundred words on paper, especially if you were going somewhere for a while and you didn't have paper. By the time the teacher had quieted everyone down, the bell rang and you rushed to grab everything.
“Hey!” your best friend tapped you on your shoulder, “Can you stay behind with me and clean up for extra credit? They usually call our buses late, no need to go to the gym yet.
”Sure," you agreed- wanting to get extra points in case your writing skills weren't the best.
You picked up some trash and put the chairs on the table, helping the teacher run some errands too. You proceeded to leave to the gym once you finished when they called your bus- you would have to run to catch it. Your friend and you speed-walked down the hallway to reach the bus and ended up being the last ones to board, but finally, spring break had started.
March. 6 - snow-fi - 250 points and 262 words
The soft snowflakes fell, melting at the touch of the concrete but gathering in the grass. Elena glanced out at the storm, waiting for when it would look like a winter wonderland. This was the first snow of the year, the first snow of the winter. Slowly, but surely, overnight the snow had transformed the neighborhood- covering everything with white. Footprints of kids rushing to play in the snow showed how deep it was, two inches. The snow made the world look calm, and there was no problem at all with the earth. Its slow fall seemed graceful, each snowflake falling at the right time. Elena didn't have the words to explain it, wrapping herself up and heading out, flakes landing gently on her hat. She reached out her hand, concealed with a glove and snowflakes landed on it, melted soon though. Around her, trees were covered in snow and there were footprints everywhere, of kids and adults. Elena decided to take a walk and enjoy the view, not certain when it would melt away. The snow filled her longing in her heart- she had been waiting for it all year, for it to finally come in a calm way. She was glad it didn't come harsh, like a blizzard, or not come at all. It had just come perfectly, suitable to play, enjoy the view, and do the things you do when it snows. Elena sighed, taking a step forward- a bit sad to ruin her perfect yard but she wanted to take a walk. She stepped out into the snow.
(adding more later!)
Last edited by -Busy_bee (March 6, 2024 18:19:44)
- Scrollreader023
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Scratcher
59 posts
swc megathread ➷ march 2024
Hey everyone! Here’s a continuation of my last story, but with different POVs. Enjoy <3
“You don’t seem strong enough to wield a battle axe, and a sword might unbalance you.” I said, looking over Kennedy. The small girl looked up brightly at me. She was short, despite being the same age as me. Well, I’ve been told I’m really tall, so I don’t really know how to judge someone’s height. Besides, everyone is mainly younger or older than me here.
“Try this.” I told her, handing her a sets of sickles. She swung them around a bit. I could tell she was untrained. Her posture was horrible, she nearly cut off her fingers a couple times, she kept fumbling, and her stance was horrendous. Can I really train someone so uneducated? I wondered, playing with my bracelets that were also my twin battle axes.
“These are amazing!” Kennedy declared, making me break off my train of thought. “That’s good.” I murmured. “Now, since you’re a child of Apollo, we should get you a bow. Do you have any experience with archery?” I asked, taking the small scythes from her and tossing them into the air, turning them into their portable form, which just happened to be two coins. I handed them to her and she pocketed them in her back jean pockets.
“Those will appear for you in your back pocket if you ever lose them.” I told her. “So make sure to wear something with pockets in the first place.” She gave a nod. “I was on the archery team for my school for a while, and I was pretty good.” Kennedy said, fingering a necklace I hadn’t noticed thoughtfully. A small cat charm twirled around her fingers, and I thought I saw a flash of imperial gold on the back of the charm for a moment. I shook my head. She couldn’t have imperial gold, I must have mistaken it for normal, mortal gold.
And yet, I remembered an omen I had seen last night.
I grabbed my telescope and stomped up the stairs to the observatory section of my cabin. I had gotten special permission to have this second story, and I used it almost every night, so no one bothered to tell me to take it down. I set up my telescope, running my hands methodically over the paint on the tool. A beautiful night sky, with my mother’s shape made of stars glowing softly in the cold, dark night air. I rubbed my hands together and stared into the telescope, looking up at the starscape above. It was breathtaking every time.
My gaze circled the heavens, looking for any queer omens that might be a sign. Then I noticed something. A new star? Surely not. It couldn’t be, unless…
My breath hitched.
A constellation of mighty lion stood above me. It wasn’t Leo though. What was it doing there?! I had never gotten a sign so plainly visible to anyone who knew how to look. Suddenly, the constellation shifted, like an animation coming from a projector. It leaped, and spun into a cat. I thought I saw the stars gleam gold before they vanished into the ether above. I was shocked.
What could this mean?
I blinked, coming back to my senses. Kennedy was rambling on about how thankful she was, as she seemed to do a lot. “…and I think it’s so great that you could deal with his cold a bit longer to help me and- Jade, are you okay?”
“Oh, um, yes.” I said, sounding a bit rougher than I had meant to. “Can I see that necklace of yours?”
I thought I saw something like a spark of rebellion in her eyes, but I must have imagined it, because she hesitantly agreed. “Only if you give it back immediately.” She conditioned.
“Deal.”
I turned it over, and my eyes widened in shock. The sign of Daedalus? That made no sense. Hadn’t the labyrinth collapsed a decade ago, when the Percy Jackson from the legend had destroyed it? This was confusing.
I hesitantly pressed it, and stifled a curse when some jabbed me in the finger. It must have needed a blood sample, thought it could have at least WARNED me first.
“Accepted.” It beeped. “Starting program immediately. Please stand by, daughter of Stars.” I blinked, looking up at Kennedy. She seemed shocked. “What did you do?” She whispered in awe, as the charm expanded and the chain grew until a lion automaton stood in front of me, a gleaming bronze chain around its neck.
I exhaled. My fingers tingled in the cold, and all my senses seemed heightened. Adrenaline pumped through my veins as I anticipated an attack, going into a strong stance and calling out my battle axes.
“Bring it on, you shiny lion.”
Word count: 789
Phew. That was intense. INTENSELY AWESOME! HECC YEAH! That was so much fun! Stand by for more Adventures of Jade and Kennedy.
“You don’t seem strong enough to wield a battle axe, and a sword might unbalance you.” I said, looking over Kennedy. The small girl looked up brightly at me. She was short, despite being the same age as me. Well, I’ve been told I’m really tall, so I don’t really know how to judge someone’s height. Besides, everyone is mainly younger or older than me here.
“Try this.” I told her, handing her a sets of sickles. She swung them around a bit. I could tell she was untrained. Her posture was horrible, she nearly cut off her fingers a couple times, she kept fumbling, and her stance was horrendous. Can I really train someone so uneducated? I wondered, playing with my bracelets that were also my twin battle axes.
“These are amazing!” Kennedy declared, making me break off my train of thought. “That’s good.” I murmured. “Now, since you’re a child of Apollo, we should get you a bow. Do you have any experience with archery?” I asked, taking the small scythes from her and tossing them into the air, turning them into their portable form, which just happened to be two coins. I handed them to her and she pocketed them in her back jean pockets.
“Those will appear for you in your back pocket if you ever lose them.” I told her. “So make sure to wear something with pockets in the first place.” She gave a nod. “I was on the archery team for my school for a while, and I was pretty good.” Kennedy said, fingering a necklace I hadn’t noticed thoughtfully. A small cat charm twirled around her fingers, and I thought I saw a flash of imperial gold on the back of the charm for a moment. I shook my head. She couldn’t have imperial gold, I must have mistaken it for normal, mortal gold.
And yet, I remembered an omen I had seen last night.
I grabbed my telescope and stomped up the stairs to the observatory section of my cabin. I had gotten special permission to have this second story, and I used it almost every night, so no one bothered to tell me to take it down. I set up my telescope, running my hands methodically over the paint on the tool. A beautiful night sky, with my mother’s shape made of stars glowing softly in the cold, dark night air. I rubbed my hands together and stared into the telescope, looking up at the starscape above. It was breathtaking every time.
My gaze circled the heavens, looking for any queer omens that might be a sign. Then I noticed something. A new star? Surely not. It couldn’t be, unless…
My breath hitched.
A constellation of mighty lion stood above me. It wasn’t Leo though. What was it doing there?! I had never gotten a sign so plainly visible to anyone who knew how to look. Suddenly, the constellation shifted, like an animation coming from a projector. It leaped, and spun into a cat. I thought I saw the stars gleam gold before they vanished into the ether above. I was shocked.
What could this mean?
I blinked, coming back to my senses. Kennedy was rambling on about how thankful she was, as she seemed to do a lot. “…and I think it’s so great that you could deal with his cold a bit longer to help me and- Jade, are you okay?”
“Oh, um, yes.” I said, sounding a bit rougher than I had meant to. “Can I see that necklace of yours?”
I thought I saw something like a spark of rebellion in her eyes, but I must have imagined it, because she hesitantly agreed. “Only if you give it back immediately.” She conditioned.
“Deal.”
I turned it over, and my eyes widened in shock. The sign of Daedalus? That made no sense. Hadn’t the labyrinth collapsed a decade ago, when the Percy Jackson from the legend had destroyed it? This was confusing.
I hesitantly pressed it, and stifled a curse when some jabbed me in the finger. It must have needed a blood sample, thought it could have at least WARNED me first.
“Accepted.” It beeped. “Starting program immediately. Please stand by, daughter of Stars.” I blinked, looking up at Kennedy. She seemed shocked. “What did you do?” She whispered in awe, as the charm expanded and the chain grew until a lion automaton stood in front of me, a gleaming bronze chain around its neck.
I exhaled. My fingers tingled in the cold, and all my senses seemed heightened. Adrenaline pumped through my veins as I anticipated an attack, going into a strong stance and calling out my battle axes.
“Bring it on, you shiny lion.”
Word count: 789
Phew. That was intense. INTENSELY AWESOME! HECC YEAH! That was so much fun! Stand by for more Adventures of Jade and Kennedy.
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Daily 004: 300 words, All The Pretty Little Roses
You stared at the mirror in front of you and wondered if you were dreaming.
Mist swirled in the corners, forming uncertain, ever-shifting shapes, and in the center was reflected…well, you thought it was probably your face, but you weren’t sure. You didn’t seem to really have a face. Or maybe it was just hard to see past all the roses.
That was another funny thing. There seemed to be an unrealistic amount of roses in the room. All of them a deep, dusky crimson, and all of them strangely immaterial. Like the mist, they, too, seemed to keep changing shape–but only when you weren’t looking.
You shifted, feeling like something was wrong. You almost felt…what was the right word? You used to know it–it had something to do with shivers and wide eyes and slick sweat.
Oh, yes. You remembered the word.
Fear.
The emotion wriggled away as soon as it appeared, or maybe it was just your memories squirming out of your grasp. Yet you were still uncomfortable, wishing the dream would end. It had to be one, of course. Reality didn’t look like this.
At least, you hoped it didn’t.
You reached out to touch the glass. It wasn’t cold in the room, but the mirror was moist with condensation. It felt like ice under your fingertips, and the mist did funny things again, wriggling into vaguely familiar shapes. You tilted your head, leaning closer, not noticing that the mirror had stopped reflecting your face. Your nose bumped the glass, but you didn’t pull back. You were too wrapped up in figuring out what the mist resembled.
It should have been impossible for you to be this close to the mirror. Perhaps it was melting away. Perhaps you were.
And perhaps it had been the roses' fault.
(back to table of contents: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/744314/?page=1#post-7831826 )
You stared at the mirror in front of you and wondered if you were dreaming.
Mist swirled in the corners, forming uncertain, ever-shifting shapes, and in the center was reflected…well, you thought it was probably your face, but you weren’t sure. You didn’t seem to really have a face. Or maybe it was just hard to see past all the roses.
That was another funny thing. There seemed to be an unrealistic amount of roses in the room. All of them a deep, dusky crimson, and all of them strangely immaterial. Like the mist, they, too, seemed to keep changing shape–but only when you weren’t looking.
You shifted, feeling like something was wrong. You almost felt…what was the right word? You used to know it–it had something to do with shivers and wide eyes and slick sweat.
Oh, yes. You remembered the word.
Fear.
The emotion wriggled away as soon as it appeared, or maybe it was just your memories squirming out of your grasp. Yet you were still uncomfortable, wishing the dream would end. It had to be one, of course. Reality didn’t look like this.
At least, you hoped it didn’t.
You reached out to touch the glass. It wasn’t cold in the room, but the mirror was moist with condensation. It felt like ice under your fingertips, and the mist did funny things again, wriggling into vaguely familiar shapes. You tilted your head, leaning closer, not noticing that the mirror had stopped reflecting your face. Your nose bumped the glass, but you didn’t pull back. You were too wrapped up in figuring out what the mist resembled.
It should have been impossible for you to be this close to the mirror. Perhaps it was melting away. Perhaps you were.
And perhaps it had been the roses' fault.
(back to table of contents: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/744314/?page=1#post-7831826 )
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Fan-Fi prompt thingy
Prompt: Gravity Falls- “You’ll be fine.” 121/100
“You’ll be fine.” Wendy said, shoving Mabel into the cave. “At least, I think.” Mabel’s teeth chattered as Wendy’s voice faded behind the door that closed behind her. Mabel sucked in a breath, “Dipper better have a good reason to ask me to do this…” She held a jar in her hands, slowly stepping around the piles of eggs. She had to get the special golden ones, according to him. She had no idea why they were so special, but hopefully, Dipper would explain once she got them for him. She also had NO idea why it had to be her. Couldn't he have done it himself? She sighed, eventually getting to the golden eggs. “Here goesss… Hope nothing goes wrong.”
Prompt: Gravity Falls- “You’ll be fine.” 121/100
“You’ll be fine.” Wendy said, shoving Mabel into the cave. “At least, I think.” Mabel’s teeth chattered as Wendy’s voice faded behind the door that closed behind her. Mabel sucked in a breath, “Dipper better have a good reason to ask me to do this…” She held a jar in her hands, slowly stepping around the piles of eggs. She had to get the special golden ones, according to him. She had no idea why they were so special, but hopefully, Dipper would explain once she got them for him. She also had NO idea why it had to be her. Couldn't he have done it himself? She sighed, eventually getting to the golden eggs. “Here goesss… Hope nothing goes wrong.”
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Mythology
1040 words3. RetellingThe 12 Labours of Hercules - Told in the Modern Era
I had a really hard time keeping this scratch appropriate so if some things seem weird, that's why lol
“Please…” Hercules sat straight backed in the huge plush chair, facing his cousin.
Eurystheus steepled his fingers and leaned forward slightly, staring at Hercules until he became uncomfortable and looked away. Satisfied, he spun around and stood up, walking over to the huge glass window overlooking the city. There he stood with his hands clasped behind his back.
Hercules fidgeted in his seat, wondering what Eurystheus would say when he finally did speak. He didn't have to wait long to find out.
“Very well… cousin.” Eurystheus turned to face him again, his face he still the cool, cold calm it always was. “You may work for me and I will pay off you debt. You start now.” He strode back to his desk and leaned down to print off a sheet of paper. They waited in silence while the printer did its work, quietly humming.
Eurystheus handed Hercules the sheet. “Here are your tasks for the week. Complete them all and your debt will be paid.” He made a shooing motion with his right hand, pulling his cell phone out with the other. “Now, off you go. I'm a busy man.” He smiled cruelly. “And so are you.”
Hercules exited the office, breathing a sigh of relief. For the first time, he glanced down at the list in his hand. He blinked twice, sure he had read it wrong. What was this? He had assumed he would be doing office work or running errands, maybe cleaning if his cousin felt mean enough. But this made no sense. He reread it:
1. Head to the local sl@ughterhouse. Assist them with the animals for the first half of Monday. They're expecting you.
2. Head to the local butcher shop and assist the butcher for the second half of Monday. Tell him I sent you.
3. Grandfather has invited you to go hunting on his private grounds. Capture a large stag. You may not use any weapons. This should happen on Tuesday afternoon.
4. Tuesday evening, return to the hunting grounds and capture a boar. Again, you may not use any weapons.
5. On Wednesday head to my house. You will meet the butler there. He will instruct you on what to do.
etc.
When Hercules finished reading the list, he leaned against the wall. What were these tasks? They made no sense whatsoever. For a moment, he considered going back into his cousin's office and confronting him about the list but then thought the better of it. He really did need his cousin's help paying off his massive debt. He could do this. It was only one week after all.
Squaring his shoulders, Hercules exited the building. He better get started.
By the end of Monday, he was exhausted and he didn't think he could ever eat beef again but it was over and done with.
The next morning, he groaned and lay in bed. He really didn't want to get up and do the tasks his cousin had assigned. But he didn't have choice. Rolling out of bed, he slipped on some comfortable clothes and drove out to his grandfather's estate. His grandfather met him at the gate.
“I've been expecting you.” He hugged Hercules and led him to the golf cart waiting to take them down the hill towards the enclosed forest that served as a private hunting grounds. “But? Where are your weapons? No gun or arrows?”
Hercules sighed. “No. I'm not allowed to use them.” His lip curled, showing his disgust and annoyance for his cousin.
His grandfather didn't seem to catch the undercurrent in his tone and just clapped him on the back. “That's my grandson. Probably going to fashion a trap of some sort, eh?” Not waiting for an answer, he plunged on. “Well, just make sure you disassemble it before you leave, wouldn't want anyone getting hurt.” With that, he walked away, leaving Hercules to his task.
It took Hercules several hours but after a great ordeal, he managed to capture a stag. He dragged him to the edge of the forest, where he found his grandfather's butler waiting for him.
“Ah, I see you were successful.” The butler nodded to the stag Hercules pulled behind him. “Well, leave him here, one of the other employees will take him. You grandfather wishes for you to eat with him before you return to your hunting.”
Hercules sank into the back of the gold cart, grateful he wouldn't have to walk all the way up the large hill to his grandfather's mansion.
Dinner passed without any issues, his grandfather didn't seem to mind the dirt Hercules brought in and neither spoke much. After dinner, Hercules went back out and repeated the afternoon. Only, it was much harder in the fading daylight. He worked long into the night before he managed to capture a boar.
Once he had made it home, he took a quick shower to cleanse himself of the dirt and grime he had acquired from a long day in the forest and fell into bed.
The next morning he woke up aching. Every movement hurt and he dreaded the day before him. But he managed to make it out of bed and into his car, where he drove to his cousin's estate out in the countryside.
There, he found out what the day held for him. The butler drove him across the estate, to a large stable. It was disgusting and filthy, filled with manure and old hay.
Hercules almost gave up right there and then. But he persisted and after a hard days work, the stable was squeaky clean and sparkled like new. His cousin wouldn't be able to complain that he didn't do his job.
After that day, the rest of the tasks seemed easy. They were still hard but Hercules found them easier and more enjoyable than the stables.
By the end of the week, he had successfully completed all of his tasks and returned to his cousin, weary but satisfied.
Eurystheus was impressed that Hercules had actually managed to complete all the tasks within the given timeframe and reluctantly paid off his debt. Hercules was so happy he could have cried. But instead, he went home and slept for many hours.
Hi-Fi
278 words4. If These Walls Could Talk: The Events One Place Has SeenA fictional tale taking place in the Nazi-Occupied Netherlands during World War II
The story is taking place at Corrie Ten Boom's house. However, Corrie and her family are the only real people. The story is just something I imagined could have happened <3
Oh, the tales I would tell, given the chance! However, I myself will never get to share all the sights I've seen and the things I've overheard. But I can share a few with you, dear reader.
First, let me introduce myself, I am the house that Corrie Ten Boom lived in during World War II, now known as the Corrie Ten Boom Museum. I housed a watched shop as one point as well, that was Corrie's father, Casper Ten Boom's business. But let me tell you a tale from before that war, when Corrie was just a young girl.
Corrie must have been no more than five years old, and her sister, Betsie, no more than twelve. The two sisters loved each other dearly. They got along like bread and butter. And boy, did they get into a lot of mischief! Nothing bad, just childish pranks. They loved to play hide and go seek. Oh, it was so much fun to see them racing around the house in their stockings! I remember once, when they were supposed to be quietly eating dinner, they kept slipping their potatoes under the table to the dog! They're father didn't notice, but not much slips by me. It's hard to hide things from a house.
Speaking of hiding things, Corrie and Betsie had a secret hiding spot in Betsie's room. They hid their journals and sweets there. It still hasn't been discovered. And I hope it stays that way. Oh, I do miss them! It's good to have an authentic piece of them left with me.
Oh, but listen to me ramble on. It's getting dark. Time for you to sleep!
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Letter to future self - Script activity
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Dear future Kit,
How goes it? Oh, right, you can’t answer questions. Not that that’ll stop me from asking.
Did Script win? Ah, right, you probably don’t know yet either; I bet even when you’re reading this, results still aren’t out yet. I don’t want to know, anyway. I hate spoilers. I guess it’s a good thing you can’t answer, huh?
Anyway, I hope you had a great session. I hope you participated in in-cabin activities, did at least ten dailies and one weekly, and entered the writing comp. I hope you got some more work done on that fanfic. Most of all, I hope you made friends and memories, and had fun.
I’m looking forward to the rest of this month! Script’s storyline is so cool, plus I get to be a child who wants to play with fire, which should be fun. Beyond that, I’m not sure I’m excited for anything in particular, just for… the session overall. And cabin wars. Cabin wars are always a blast.
Well, best of luck. Or maybe you should be wishing me luck, since you- Wait. That doesn’t make sense. Does that make sense?
Let’s not get stuck on that. Again, I hope it’s been a great session.
Yours(elf),
Present Kit - or, in your time, past Kit
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Paige's writing
Daily march 8
216 words
To my grandmother,
So much of me comes from you. When asked which family member I look most like, my mom says I very much resemble a teenage you. We both write, and act, and have a love and passion for storytelling. And I did all these things before I ever knew you did them, and finding out that you did them was amazing. Your stories connect me to my history, your life so very different and yet similar to my own. You grew up in such a different time, and yet you still fought with your siblings as much as I do.
I’m inspired by all that you still do, by all the people you know and all the cool things you’re brave enough to try. I want to be able to do those things.
So thank you for being brave, thank you for being who you are, thank you for my existence. Thank you for all your gifts, thank you for being there, thank you for teaching me how strong and capable we women can be. Thank you for giving me opportunities I wouldn’t otherwise have, and thank you for all the storybooks and games when I was little. Thank you for your amazing contributions to our family and the world.
Thank you, Bubby
('Bubby' means grandmother in Yiddish)
Daily march 4
Present tense, third person omniscient
339 words
Right now, three children sit quietly in a windowless room. They are waiting to be tested, but none of them know that yet. Brian, the youngest, only knows what most six-year-olds would in this situation, which is that he’s afraid. The girl next to him, Sylvia, is scratching a rash on the back of her neck and wondering why her parents left her all alone here. The oldest in the room, Lizzy, knows exactly what’s going to happen, but doesn’t know that it’s a test.
“How did you two get here?” Brian asks aloud.
Lizzy looks at him, scrutinizing, trying to decide if he’s a spy for their captors.
“My parents left me here,” Sylvia says. “They said I needed to get my education. I don’t really know what they meant. I’m Sylvia, by the way.”
“Brian,” says Brian.
They both turn to Lizzy, who still thinks they might both be spies. “Call me Bee,” she says finally.
Like a bumblebee? Brian thinks, but doesn’t say because he thinks it would probably be rude.
“Is that your actual name, though?” Sylvia asks.
“Doesn’t matter.” Lizzy glances furtively at the door. It’s been closed for much too long.
Now, outside that door there is absolutely no one. However, a few floors up in the building, there is a room full of people, adults, watching the footage from a hidden camera in the room where the three children are being kept. They are all themselves spies, working for a secret organization which all the children, except of course Lizzy, know nothing about.
A short woman, Lizzy’s mother, nods approvingly as she watches the conversation between the children unfold on the TV screen. “She’s doing well. Not giving away her real name, probably because she thinks the other two are our spies.”
“Don’t be too hasty, Emilda,” someone else says - a man in a shadowed corner. “The other two could prove to be much better than her, in time.”
Emilda scowled. That wouldn’t happen as long as she could help it.
Weekly #1
Mythology
Retelling of the Hades and Persephone story - 350 words
In which some goddesses realize how awful the gods are and decide they'd make much better rulers. It's not extremely well written but who cares.
“Demeter?” Hestia asked in surprise, looking the woman at the door up and down. Demeter didn’t usually come by Olypmus, she preferred to be down on earth with the mortals, helping them tend their fields. Now, she looked bedraggled and heartbroken. “Come in,” Hestia said without another word. She ushered her sister inside, guided her to a seat near the hearth, and took her own place comfortably on the rug, tending the coals.
“What brings you here, sister?” she finally asked.
Demeter’s eyes brimmed with tears. “It’s Hades,” she explained. “He took her - Persephone. I looked so long, only to find out he had taken her for his bride. And I would have brought her back, but he’d tricked her into eating the fruit of the Underworld. Oh, Hestia! The mortals’ crops won’t grow. I can’t help it. I’ll only get to see my daughter for half of the year.”
“Oh, my dear…” Hestia wrapped her arms protectively around the other goddess. “I’m so sorry. If there’s anything at all I can do…”
Demeter continued to sob quietly into Hestia’s arms, for so long that Hestia began to think she hadn’t heard the question. But then after a long time, she answered: “There’s something we both can do. All of us, all our daughters and sisters. The gods have taken advantage of us for far too long.” She looked Hestia in the eye. “We have to make a change.”
“Demeter, I understand how you feel, but I don’t think such drastic action will end well.”
“Hestia. I know your chief goal has always been peace in the family, and I admire that greatly, but it can only get you so far. Don’t you think that if you were in charge, you could make things better for everyone?”
“I would do my best.” Hestia agreed.
“Then join me,” Demeter pleaded. “I know you’ll make a good queen.”
Hestia looked into the flames of her hearth and was quiet for a long time. Finally, she whispered, “I will help you. I will do it. And we’ll start by getting Persephone back.”
(Persephone ends up taking over the underworld and turning it into a flower garden paradise, for the good people at least. bad people get digested for eternity inside a venus flytrap (or an aphrodite flytrap? lol)
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If these walls could talk: the events one place has seen - 225 words
My house
The walls upstairs liked to gossip about the crazy things children got up to. The walls in the master bedroom often complained of the endless wailing of newborn babies, to which the other bedrooms would remind them of the endless fights they’d had to experience when two siblings shared their room. The room at the end of the hall was just satisfied at the shift in its occupancy from one teenage girl to another.
Downstairs, the bedrooms were thought to be ridiculous. They didn’t have to deal with the spills and handprints, or the time the kitchen had almost caught fire.
But deep down they all did cherish all the little lovely things of life that happened inside them. Different sets of siblings playing together, multiple generations sharing stories. The siblings who had once been children in the house were now grown up with their own kids, and things would likely repeat themselves as more children grew up within these walls. More tantrums happened, more kids refusing to put their dishes away. But things were calmer, overall, and the people were learning, growing, as one generation learned from the former’s mistakes.
If only they’d stop leaving gray handprints on the walls - the walls could never figure out which child had done it! And it just kept happening. The bathrooms just laughed at their disgust.
Original character in historical times:
Ahsoka Tano in medieval times - 248 words
Ahsoka dashed through the trees, dual sabers drawn, glancing back every few moments to see her pursuers advancing. Pine needles crunched under her feet, and thinking quickly, she sheathed her swords and leaped, grabbed hold of a tree branch, and swung up into the branches.
Her pursuers stopped, gazing up at the trees, trying but failing to spot even a slight movement in the leaves.
Ahsoka smirked. She was now many trees away, not sure where she was heading, but knowing she’d be safe for the night as long as she got far enough away. She kept moving, but soon felt it was safe enough to drop down from the trees, and after a few hours found a small clearing in which to make camp.
Ever since she’d been accused of betraying the king, knights had constantly been at her tail. She had to be careful not to go anywhere with a strong military presence, or to show her knight’s sabers in public. It was all getting much harder to do, with the war worsening.
Her small tent shelter set up, Ahsoka sat on a fallen tree trunk and ate her meager rations of bread and milk, which she’d stolen from an enemy camp near the warfront. Her long, striped veil hung over each shoulder and down her back in her signature style, and she thought of her teacher, Anakin, who was still one of the king’s knights, though she didn’t blame him for anything that had happened.
Note: This is not historically accurate to any particular medieval time or place, but I tried to keep it somewhat consistent with what I know of medieval Europe. What that amounts to is that medieval people wore veils. and that knights were a thing, at some point. *shrugs*
Fairy Tales
Retelling of Hansel and Gretel - 391 words
Once upon a time, a boy and a girl walked through the woods. They were a brother and sister, named Hansel and Gretel.
Oh, and then there was Pretzel, trailing along behind them, but we don’t talk about him much.
The siblings’ parents had abandoned them in the woods to fend for themselves, because their family didn’t have enough to eat. Messed up, I know. And you may have heard that the children left a trail of breadcrumbs so that they could find their way back to their atrocious parents. Well, in reality they were actually fed up with the adults in their lives and had decided to go and live on their own, if that’s what their parents wanted. They had heard about a house in the woods made of candy and, confident that they could fend off any witch with their pitchforks, they went to check it out.
It wasn’t hard to find, what with the sickly sweet smell of gingerbread and candies floating through the air. The three kids stared at the ginormous, lopsided house.
“Where do you think the witch is?” said Hansel.
“Probably brewing potions inside,” Gretel replied.
“It looks yummy,” Pretzel offered.
“Shut up, Pretzel,” Hansel and Gretel both snapped.
And so Gretel led the children into the house’s dark front hallway.
“Helloooo! Any witches here?” she called.
An evil cackle came from down the hall. “Come in, children, and have a bite to eat,” she called.
Pretzel obediently took a bite from the wall, while his older siblings rushed forwards, into the kitchen, and pushed the witch into the oven in less than a minute. She was very old and weak, after all.
Unfortunately, they accidentally spilled the cauldron of potion she’d been brewing, and by the time Pretzel caught up, the potion had turned his siblings rainbow colours - their skin, hair, and eyes. Pretzel snickered.
“Shut up, Pretzel,” they both said.
And so they all lived happily ever after in the gingerbread house. Pretzel ran errands and got groceries for his siblings, as they could no longer show their rainbow-coloured faces in public without getting mistaken for otherworldly monsters. So the older two spent their time at home, baking gingerbread to replace the roof shingles and chunks of wall that kept disappearing, thanks to Pretzel and some children from a nearby village.
(For context, my friends and I used to read this book called Hansel and Pretzel, and then we'd play a game called Hansel, Gretel, and Pretzel, so that there were enough characters for her brother to play, too. I sort of adapted some of that into this story.)
Folklore
Oral retelling - 222 words
A young girl holds a bunch of threads steady as an elderly man weaves them into a complicated cord. As he moves the loops of string between his fingers, he tells a story he heard from his own grandparents.
“Idna, listen carefully,” he tells his granddaughter. “I will tell you the tale of Ashla the Endeavourer. Long ago, when the trees in Faywood were still young, the child Ashla cared for her little sister. She and her dizdal, Jyanna, grew up being more like parents to the little girl. They also grew up training to fight, but Ashla and Jyanna each used these skills in different ways…”
Years later, Idna, now a grandparent herself, retells this tale to a group of young ones, all yawning and tired for bed. She related to them her grandfather’s words.
“Ashla grew up to use her power - which also included a gift of magic from the spirits - for good, while Jyanna swerved from that path and fell over the sharp, sudden ledge that is anger and despair.”
A wide-eyed little girl gazed up at Idna, soaking up every word. Eyes sparkling, the old woman added something just for her; “Anyone can follow either of those paths. What matters is realizing the road you’re on and then deciding which fork in the road to take.”
Notes: This is related to an actual original novel I'm working on, so I might remove it from scratch later. Also, dizdal is a word from the world of the story and it means ‘someone whom you consider to be like a sibling to you, but who is not related to you.’)
Regional differences (from the same world as the last story) - 254 words
The Tale of Lodem/Loten
Excerpt from the Faywood version:
Lodem was a typical young man. He made his living as a nature druid, growing tree houses for people to live in. In return they gave him food and a place to stay. But over the years Lodem turned haughty. He thought he should be treated like he was special, because in his eyes the fact that the spirit of nature had gifted him with powers meant he was special. He began to demand bigger and bigger payment for his work, more than he could ever use on his own, and more than the people he built homes for could spare. This was not right, in the balance of things, and one day Lodem found he could no longer cause even a single flower to grow.
Excerpt from the Yedalbroze version:
Once there was a young man named Loten, who used his skills as a nature druid to grow and harvest wood for boats for the people who live on the great lake of Au’een. They paid him fairly for it, but he thought he deserved more, and soon began to purposefully make boats of lesser quality for those who could not pay him all that he desired. He thought his gift from the spirit of nature made him special. But no one thing is special in the balance of the world, and one morning Loten awoke to find that his powers had been stripped away. He couldn’t do more than make a branch bud.
Daily march 8
216 words
To my grandmother,
So much of me comes from you. When asked which family member I look most like, my mom says I very much resemble a teenage you. We both write, and act, and have a love and passion for storytelling. And I did all these things before I ever knew you did them, and finding out that you did them was amazing. Your stories connect me to my history, your life so very different and yet similar to my own. You grew up in such a different time, and yet you still fought with your siblings as much as I do.
I’m inspired by all that you still do, by all the people you know and all the cool things you’re brave enough to try. I want to be able to do those things.
So thank you for being brave, thank you for being who you are, thank you for my existence. Thank you for all your gifts, thank you for being there, thank you for teaching me how strong and capable we women can be. Thank you for giving me opportunities I wouldn’t otherwise have, and thank you for all the storybooks and games when I was little. Thank you for your amazing contributions to our family and the world.
Thank you, Bubby

('Bubby' means grandmother in Yiddish)
Daily march 4
Present tense, third person omniscient
339 words
Right now, three children sit quietly in a windowless room. They are waiting to be tested, but none of them know that yet. Brian, the youngest, only knows what most six-year-olds would in this situation, which is that he’s afraid. The girl next to him, Sylvia, is scratching a rash on the back of her neck and wondering why her parents left her all alone here. The oldest in the room, Lizzy, knows exactly what’s going to happen, but doesn’t know that it’s a test.
“How did you two get here?” Brian asks aloud.
Lizzy looks at him, scrutinizing, trying to decide if he’s a spy for their captors.
“My parents left me here,” Sylvia says. “They said I needed to get my education. I don’t really know what they meant. I’m Sylvia, by the way.”
“Brian,” says Brian.
They both turn to Lizzy, who still thinks they might both be spies. “Call me Bee,” she says finally.
Like a bumblebee? Brian thinks, but doesn’t say because he thinks it would probably be rude.
“Is that your actual name, though?” Sylvia asks.
“Doesn’t matter.” Lizzy glances furtively at the door. It’s been closed for much too long.
Now, outside that door there is absolutely no one. However, a few floors up in the building, there is a room full of people, adults, watching the footage from a hidden camera in the room where the three children are being kept. They are all themselves spies, working for a secret organization which all the children, except of course Lizzy, know nothing about.
A short woman, Lizzy’s mother, nods approvingly as she watches the conversation between the children unfold on the TV screen. “She’s doing well. Not giving away her real name, probably because she thinks the other two are our spies.”
“Don’t be too hasty, Emilda,” someone else says - a man in a shadowed corner. “The other two could prove to be much better than her, in time.”
Emilda scowled. That wouldn’t happen as long as she could help it.
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swc megathread ➷ march 2024
DAY 4:
”Mother just called, and turns out she’s leaving Earth.” (Prompt by @CleverComment <3)
- Future tense, 1st person -
(In this, the reader’s a child)
(I liked the concept of this, but not the execution :’))
383 words <3
ring….
ring….
There’ll be a noise coming from my landline….
I’ll be trying to fall asleep, but my father just won’t provide the same comforting air as mother….
I will roll over, set my feet on the floor and enter the kitchen…the phone will be buzzing….
I shall climb onto the counter and pick it up….
“Hello…?” I’ll ask.
her voice will be cracking, so, so close to breaking apart. she’ll seem rushed, like she doesn’t have much time…
‘#####…“ her first words are going to be almost impossible to distinguish, but I will be able to recognize the faint outline of my name. “Mommy's going to be going on a trip….”
My heart will sink…once again, she’s going somewhere for work…
I’ll know she’ll come back one day, but I will wonder, and my curiosity will shine through…
My small hands will grip the phone tighter, and I shall inquire,
“Mom..? When are the trips gonna stop…?”
There’ll be a pause, and I’ll be able to imagine your mother’s smile growing slightly as she speaks…
“…This is the last one. I won’t be taking any more work trips after this.”
“Really?”
“…Yes, really…no more trips for mommy.”
I’ll smile slightly at the thought of having my mother for more than a week at a time, but the sound of muttering from someone other than mom will interrupt my thoughts, and she’ll quickly say,
“I’ve gotta go now….goodbye, #####…..”
“Love you, mom…”
She will hang up, and I’ll put the phone back and jump off the counter.
I will make my way to the living room, and hop onto the couch, reaching for the TV remote…I’ll be thinking that I’ll fall asleep to a movie or something of the sort.
The television will flicker on with a press of a button, and the words shown on the screen won't help me sleep…they’d do anything but that…
My eyes will widen as I try to take everything in, and I won’t be able to grasp anything but the bare minimum of it…
‘…Breaking news…500 select individuals are going to evacuate Earth…special ships…asteroid…humanity almost extinct…new life…’
I won’t notice I’ll be shaking, but it’s all true….
I’ll know who’s going to survive all of this while the rest of humanity dies….
“mom…?”
”Mother just called, and turns out she’s leaving Earth.” (Prompt by @CleverComment <3)
- Future tense, 1st person -
(In this, the reader’s a child)
(I liked the concept of this, but not the execution :’))
383 words <3
ring….
ring….
There’ll be a noise coming from my landline….
I’ll be trying to fall asleep, but my father just won’t provide the same comforting air as mother….
I will roll over, set my feet on the floor and enter the kitchen…the phone will be buzzing….
I shall climb onto the counter and pick it up….
“Hello…?” I’ll ask.
her voice will be cracking, so, so close to breaking apart. she’ll seem rushed, like she doesn’t have much time…
‘#####…“ her first words are going to be almost impossible to distinguish, but I will be able to recognize the faint outline of my name. “Mommy's going to be going on a trip….”
My heart will sink…once again, she’s going somewhere for work…
I’ll know she’ll come back one day, but I will wonder, and my curiosity will shine through…
My small hands will grip the phone tighter, and I shall inquire,
“Mom..? When are the trips gonna stop…?”
There’ll be a pause, and I’ll be able to imagine your mother’s smile growing slightly as she speaks…
“…This is the last one. I won’t be taking any more work trips after this.”
“Really?”
“…Yes, really…no more trips for mommy.”
I’ll smile slightly at the thought of having my mother for more than a week at a time, but the sound of muttering from someone other than mom will interrupt my thoughts, and she’ll quickly say,
“I’ve gotta go now….goodbye, #####…..”
“Love you, mom…”
She will hang up, and I’ll put the phone back and jump off the counter.
I will make my way to the living room, and hop onto the couch, reaching for the TV remote…I’ll be thinking that I’ll fall asleep to a movie or something of the sort.
The television will flicker on with a press of a button, and the words shown on the screen won't help me sleep…they’d do anything but that…
My eyes will widen as I try to take everything in, and I won’t be able to grasp anything but the bare minimum of it…
‘…Breaking news…500 select individuals are going to evacuate Earth…special ships…asteroid…humanity almost extinct…new life…’
I won’t notice I’ll be shaking, but it’s all true….
I’ll know who’s going to survive all of this while the rest of humanity dies….
“mom…?”
- teenage-dream-
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Scratcher
2 posts
swc megathread ➷ march 2024
daily for march 4
328 words
past tense, 2nd person.
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new years eve
The first time you held her hand was new years eve. You were telling her all of the great things that happened because of the discovery of something scientific, but she wasn’t listening to you. She was paying attention to you - the way you stood, a little hutched, your feet shoulder width apart, the way you looked when you talked, like you knew the answers of all of her answers. You and her were standing on the roof, staring into the endless black of Kyle Vicker’s suburb at night. Kyle had invited you on a whim, and you came on a whim. She told you you should go, and you listened. She was wearing a black minidress, something completely out of her comfort zone, and you were wearing a white button up, a letterman jacket and jeans. She was trying to impress you and you didn’t even notice. After you talked about science for fifteen minutes, she looked up at you and said your name. You looked down at her and for once you really saw what everyone else saw when they looked at her. You saw her dark hair and dark eyes and the way they worked in unity to add to her beauty. You saw her beautiful smile and the sparkle in her eyes. She told you that she was getting cold, and maybe wanted to go inside. You suddenly didn’t want to go inside, with everyone else. You wanted to stay out here with her forever, so you took off your jacket and gave it to her. You heard the countdown start, 10, 9, 8. She smiled up at you in a hopeful way, and you smiled back. 7, 6, you breathed out and watched your air dissipate. 5, 4, you told her she looked beautiful. 3, 2, 1, you took her hand and squeezed. The fireworks went off in the sky the same way then went off in her heart. A new year began.
328 words
past tense, 2nd person.
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new years eve
The first time you held her hand was new years eve. You were telling her all of the great things that happened because of the discovery of something scientific, but she wasn’t listening to you. She was paying attention to you - the way you stood, a little hutched, your feet shoulder width apart, the way you looked when you talked, like you knew the answers of all of her answers. You and her were standing on the roof, staring into the endless black of Kyle Vicker’s suburb at night. Kyle had invited you on a whim, and you came on a whim. She told you you should go, and you listened. She was wearing a black minidress, something completely out of her comfort zone, and you were wearing a white button up, a letterman jacket and jeans. She was trying to impress you and you didn’t even notice. After you talked about science for fifteen minutes, she looked up at you and said your name. You looked down at her and for once you really saw what everyone else saw when they looked at her. You saw her dark hair and dark eyes and the way they worked in unity to add to her beauty. You saw her beautiful smile and the sparkle in her eyes. She told you that she was getting cold, and maybe wanted to go inside. You suddenly didn’t want to go inside, with everyone else. You wanted to stay out here with her forever, so you took off your jacket and gave it to her. You heard the countdown start, 10, 9, 8. She smiled up at you in a hopeful way, and you smiled back. 7, 6, you breathed out and watched your air dissipate. 5, 4, you told her she looked beautiful. 3, 2, 1, you took her hand and squeezed. The fireworks went off in the sky the same way then went off in her heart. A new year began.
- kindhrts-
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ➷ march 2024
daily 3/4 - 690 words
present tense and first person - this daily was hard and I kept accidentally switching to past tense :sob:
“Mimi!” I yell, shouting for my older sister. Even though she is two years older than me, I still love hanging out with her. She always pushes me away, going into her own world.
I yell a second time, trying to get her attention. Finally, after a minute of yelling, she replies. “Lu, I don’t have time right now! I am supposed to be working on my homework.”
“But, don’t you want to go play hide and seek with the other kids?”
“Won’t they not play with us again?”
“We should at least try.”
“Okay.”
Hand in hand, we walk together over towards the group of kids. They appear to be playing hide and seek, “Hey! Can my sister and I play with you guys?” I ask.
The kids glance at each other and whisper. After a minute, a boy who seems to be the oldest replies, “Sure! But on one condition, we play reverse hide and seek. Both of you will hide, while the others try to find you!”
My sister glances at me, but agrees to it. We both run off to hide in the nearby forest, not knowing what will happen next.
We find our spot and wait. After twenty minutes of waiting, it seems like they haven’t found us yet.
“Mimi, how come they’re taking so long?” I ask, with a hint of nervousness in my voice. It appears like they have forgotten about us.
“Lu, I don’t know. How about we go back to the school and see what’s going on? Does that sound okay to you?” she curiously replies.
We then walk hand in hand, towards the path. But after ten minutes, we still haven’t reached the school. Just as I am about to say something, we hear music. It sounds like video game music! I softly tug Mimi over towards the music, wanting to find out what's going on.
A cottage appears into view, and we walk towards it. A blue tinted light seems to be emitting from the windows.
“Mimi, I want to see what’s inside, please!” I beg, hoping that she’ll say yes.
“I guess we could, but only for ten minutes!”
I reach towards the door knob and slowly pull it open, inside it seems bigger then it is on the outside and we gasp at the sight of the many computers.
I try to run towards a computer, but Mimi held onto me with the shirt.
“Lu, I don’t think this place is safe. We should go back out,” she cries. “I don’t want us to get stuck here playing video games! If mom and dad find out we’re going to be in huge trouble.”
“It’s just a few computers, they’ll never know! If they ask, we’ll just tell them that we were playing with the kids at school and lost track of time.”
Mimi nods her head, takes a deep breath, and we step towards the computers. Hours fly by, and Mimi checks the time.
“Oh no! We’re going to be late. Mom said we needed to be back by 5 o’clock, it’s now 7 o’clock. I’m going to be in big trouble,” Mimi exclaims.
I gasp, it had only felt like two minutes but it had turned into two hours. I turn around, but what I didn’t expect was an old lady.
Mimi’s eyes widen and she says, “I’m so sorry ma’am, I didn’t know this was your home and I didn’t want to disturb you. My sister dragged me into your cottage, and then somehow convinced me to start playing. We’ll leave right away to not disturb you!”
“Oh this isn’t a disruption at all, keep playing, children. I’ll just be here coding my next video game. No worries at all! Your parents know about you here and said you could stay here as long as you like!”
She spoke in a convincing tone, but I wasn’t convinced. If our parents knew we are here, they’d be dragging us out right away because video games rot our brains. It sounds like she is lying, but her tone convinces me otherwise and I decide to keep playing.
present tense and first person - this daily was hard and I kept accidentally switching to past tense :sob:
“Mimi!” I yell, shouting for my older sister. Even though she is two years older than me, I still love hanging out with her. She always pushes me away, going into her own world.
I yell a second time, trying to get her attention. Finally, after a minute of yelling, she replies. “Lu, I don’t have time right now! I am supposed to be working on my homework.”
“But, don’t you want to go play hide and seek with the other kids?”
“Won’t they not play with us again?”
“We should at least try.”
“Okay.”
Hand in hand, we walk together over towards the group of kids. They appear to be playing hide and seek, “Hey! Can my sister and I play with you guys?” I ask.
The kids glance at each other and whisper. After a minute, a boy who seems to be the oldest replies, “Sure! But on one condition, we play reverse hide and seek. Both of you will hide, while the others try to find you!”
My sister glances at me, but agrees to it. We both run off to hide in the nearby forest, not knowing what will happen next.
We find our spot and wait. After twenty minutes of waiting, it seems like they haven’t found us yet.
“Mimi, how come they’re taking so long?” I ask, with a hint of nervousness in my voice. It appears like they have forgotten about us.
“Lu, I don’t know. How about we go back to the school and see what’s going on? Does that sound okay to you?” she curiously replies.
We then walk hand in hand, towards the path. But after ten minutes, we still haven’t reached the school. Just as I am about to say something, we hear music. It sounds like video game music! I softly tug Mimi over towards the music, wanting to find out what's going on.
A cottage appears into view, and we walk towards it. A blue tinted light seems to be emitting from the windows.
“Mimi, I want to see what’s inside, please!” I beg, hoping that she’ll say yes.
“I guess we could, but only for ten minutes!”
I reach towards the door knob and slowly pull it open, inside it seems bigger then it is on the outside and we gasp at the sight of the many computers.
I try to run towards a computer, but Mimi held onto me with the shirt.
“Lu, I don’t think this place is safe. We should go back out,” she cries. “I don’t want us to get stuck here playing video games! If mom and dad find out we’re going to be in huge trouble.”
“It’s just a few computers, they’ll never know! If they ask, we’ll just tell them that we were playing with the kids at school and lost track of time.”
Mimi nods her head, takes a deep breath, and we step towards the computers. Hours fly by, and Mimi checks the time.
“Oh no! We’re going to be late. Mom said we needed to be back by 5 o’clock, it’s now 7 o’clock. I’m going to be in big trouble,” Mimi exclaims.
I gasp, it had only felt like two minutes but it had turned into two hours. I turn around, but what I didn’t expect was an old lady.
Mimi’s eyes widen and she says, “I’m so sorry ma’am, I didn’t know this was your home and I didn’t want to disturb you. My sister dragged me into your cottage, and then somehow convinced me to start playing. We’ll leave right away to not disturb you!”
“Oh this isn’t a disruption at all, keep playing, children. I’ll just be here coding my next video game. No worries at all! Your parents know about you here and said you could stay here as long as you like!”
She spoke in a convincing tone, but I wasn’t convinced. If our parents knew we are here, they’d be dragging us out right away because video games rot our brains. It sounds like she is lying, but her tone convinces me otherwise and I decide to keep playing.
- Rey_venclaw
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
swc megathread ➷ march 2024
daily! 314 words
third person, present tense
They always hold hands, the boy and the girl. They don’t quite know why, it’s just their thing. If they need to run, away from or towards something, they run hand in hand. If they need to think fast, find a solution before it’s too late, they work together, their minds and hands in contact with one another. Even in the moments in between, when there’s nothing much happening and they’re safe, for now, they hold hands. They’ve done it since the beginning. And they’ll do it until the end. No. They’ll do it forever.
The boy doesn’t take the time to think. No matter how much he grows and changes over the course of their forever, he never learns to be patient, never learns to overcome recklessness. It just shows itself in different ways. He’s so used to not caring that he doesn’t notice once he does again. Someone has to point that out to him. He’s so used to having the answer immediately that when it’s hard, when he doesn’t know, he doesn’t think to ask for help. Someone has to offer it to him. And for that to happen, someone has to be there.
Someone will always be there.
Nothing is set in stone. There are no guarantees in this dreadful game called life.
The girl never made a friend more quickly. People never liked her when they first met her. They found her abrasive, overwhelming, or just plain weird. So now that suddenly there’s so many people who like her and enjoy her company, even if it’s sometimes for nefarious reasons and ulterior motives, even if sometimes it’s not and she really had found a lovely friend, she doesn’t know how to act. So much has changed now, she’s pretty used to not knowing how to act. But she’ll figure it out. She has that confidence, and he does too.
third person, present tense
They always hold hands, the boy and the girl. They don’t quite know why, it’s just their thing. If they need to run, away from or towards something, they run hand in hand. If they need to think fast, find a solution before it’s too late, they work together, their minds and hands in contact with one another. Even in the moments in between, when there’s nothing much happening and they’re safe, for now, they hold hands. They’ve done it since the beginning. And they’ll do it until the end. No. They’ll do it forever.
The boy doesn’t take the time to think. No matter how much he grows and changes over the course of their forever, he never learns to be patient, never learns to overcome recklessness. It just shows itself in different ways. He’s so used to not caring that he doesn’t notice once he does again. Someone has to point that out to him. He’s so used to having the answer immediately that when it’s hard, when he doesn’t know, he doesn’t think to ask for help. Someone has to offer it to him. And for that to happen, someone has to be there.
Someone will always be there.
Nothing is set in stone. There are no guarantees in this dreadful game called life.
The girl never made a friend more quickly. People never liked her when they first met her. They found her abrasive, overwhelming, or just plain weird. So now that suddenly there’s so many people who like her and enjoy her company, even if it’s sometimes for nefarious reasons and ulterior motives, even if sometimes it’s not and she really had found a lovely friend, she doesn’t know how to act. So much has changed now, she’s pretty used to not knowing how to act. But she’ll figure it out. She has that confidence, and he does too.
Last edited by Rey_venclaw (March 4, 2024 22:26:18)
- CherryMango17
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ➷ march 2024
I stand there, lava bubbling at my feet.
“Kien! Get out of there!”
“No,” I reply, my voice soft.
“Kien…?”
I look up at the girl in front of me, tears glistening in my eyes,
“Amaya, listen. I'm not who you think I am.”
Her eyes harden.
“What? Are you with the ‘Minders’?”
“No!” I looked up at her in fear.
“You are! I can see the fear in your face!”
“No! Amaya! Listen!”
“I don't want to hear it, ‘Minder’”
She turned and walked out.
“Amaya! Please! We're the only ones left! There is only so long before you fall under them if you leave. You're the one who said we should stick together!”
She turned, “I'd rather go down fighting, then fall under it while I sleep! If you want me to stay so bad, then why don't you use your magic?”
“Because I'm not a Minder!”
She walked away and I broke down. Pretending that I wasn't a Minder was harder than I had thought it would be. It took so long to learn how to become a Heat. Even then, I couldn't actually be a Heat. I would always be a Minder, just be able to hide with the others. I moved out of the path of the lava and starting walking towards the cave.
“Welcome back, Princess Soing,” A man stood at the entrance.
“Captain Mern.”
“I am here to escort you back to the the palace.”
“Why should I go with you?” I readied my mind wall.
His eyes started to glow and I closed my mind, an exercise that we were taught as children to stop other Minders.
“Come with us…” His voice was supposed to be inviting, to make the others want to listen to him, but with the block, it sounded exactly like I knew.
“No,” I let myself loose, pouring power into my voice. After so long of not using it, I was going insane. “You are now going to listen only to me. Leave and go find a young girl who goes by the name of Amaya. She is tall, brown hair, curls, do you know anyone like that?”
“Yes. I saw someone like that on my way here.”
“Go bring her here and then return to the palace saying I died.”
He bowed and left. I sat there, on the stone chairs that Amaya and I made, waiting for her to return.
It wasn't long before they returned and he left.
“I was right!” She exclaims, the moment she saw me, my Minder mark bright on my cheek.
“Yes, you are right, but I never wanted take up the role I was given!” I tried to put emotion into it, directed at myself, so that I could convince myself.
“I can never trust you, Minder.”
I opened my mouth to try to explain when she cut me off,
“What are you going to do? Mind me to listen?”
I closed it.
“Princess!”
I looked up, an elite team of Minders stood there, ready to bring us home.
“Leave us,” I commanded.
They laughed, “Princess, that's not going to work, we have a better shield than your commands, but anything is better than that girl's.”
I swallowed.
“Amaya, no matter what happens, don't listen to them. Don't listen to their commands.”
Her eyes glimmered.
“Did you just- Mind on me?! You said you wouldn't! I knew you were a liar,” she glared.
“I'm protecting you,” I sighed, placing my strongest wall up.
The elites stepped forwards together.
“Come with us,” one voice. strong.
I growled in return, but their Minding was clearly stronger than mine, and Amaya walked towards them and got into the little box they had for us.
My mind started to go fuzzy and I knew their Minding was talking over.
Pouring every bit of possible power into my voice, I yelled,
“Everyone stop! Amaya, you're free! You Elites, return home!”
They all froze and Amaya's glazed eyes returned to normal.
“Kien?”
The Elites marched out without a word and my vision turned spotty.
“Kien!”
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My eyes opened.
“Amaya?”
“Kien! You were right… You were trying to save me, weren't you. I should have trusted you. ”
“It's alright…” I coughed. “I wouldn't have trusted myself either.”
“By the way, why did they call you ‘Princess’?”
“I am the princess of the Minder kingdom,” I looked at her in the eye. “But I don't like that way of life. That's why I'm with the rebels. Now, shall we make our way to the Heats?”
“Yes, but I have questions that you'll answer later, ok?” she pulled me up and handed me my small bag, and I nodded. As we left, I glazed my hands on the lava, changing my Minder mark to a Heat mark.
We made our way down the mountain to warn the Heats of the invasion coming up.
She held on to my hand the whole time.
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“Kien! Get out of there!”
“No,” I reply, my voice soft.
“Kien…?”
I look up at the girl in front of me, tears glistening in my eyes,
“Amaya, listen. I'm not who you think I am.”
Her eyes harden.
“What? Are you with the ‘Minders’?”
“No!” I looked up at her in fear.
“You are! I can see the fear in your face!”
“No! Amaya! Listen!”
“I don't want to hear it, ‘Minder’”
She turned and walked out.
“Amaya! Please! We're the only ones left! There is only so long before you fall under them if you leave. You're the one who said we should stick together!”
She turned, “I'd rather go down fighting, then fall under it while I sleep! If you want me to stay so bad, then why don't you use your magic?”
“Because I'm not a Minder!”
She walked away and I broke down. Pretending that I wasn't a Minder was harder than I had thought it would be. It took so long to learn how to become a Heat. Even then, I couldn't actually be a Heat. I would always be a Minder, just be able to hide with the others. I moved out of the path of the lava and starting walking towards the cave.
“Welcome back, Princess Soing,” A man stood at the entrance.
“Captain Mern.”
“I am here to escort you back to the the palace.”
“Why should I go with you?” I readied my mind wall.
His eyes started to glow and I closed my mind, an exercise that we were taught as children to stop other Minders.
“Come with us…” His voice was supposed to be inviting, to make the others want to listen to him, but with the block, it sounded exactly like I knew.
“No,” I let myself loose, pouring power into my voice. After so long of not using it, I was going insane. “You are now going to listen only to me. Leave and go find a young girl who goes by the name of Amaya. She is tall, brown hair, curls, do you know anyone like that?”
“Yes. I saw someone like that on my way here.”
“Go bring her here and then return to the palace saying I died.”
He bowed and left. I sat there, on the stone chairs that Amaya and I made, waiting for her to return.
It wasn't long before they returned and he left.
“I was right!” She exclaims, the moment she saw me, my Minder mark bright on my cheek.
“Yes, you are right, but I never wanted take up the role I was given!” I tried to put emotion into it, directed at myself, so that I could convince myself.
“I can never trust you, Minder.”
I opened my mouth to try to explain when she cut me off,
“What are you going to do? Mind me to listen?”
I closed it.
“Princess!”
I looked up, an elite team of Minders stood there, ready to bring us home.
“Leave us,” I commanded.
They laughed, “Princess, that's not going to work, we have a better shield than your commands, but anything is better than that girl's.”
I swallowed.
“Amaya, no matter what happens, don't listen to them. Don't listen to their commands.”
Her eyes glimmered.
“Did you just- Mind on me?! You said you wouldn't! I knew you were a liar,” she glared.
“I'm protecting you,” I sighed, placing my strongest wall up.
The elites stepped forwards together.
“Come with us,” one voice. strong.
I growled in return, but their Minding was clearly stronger than mine, and Amaya walked towards them and got into the little box they had for us.
My mind started to go fuzzy and I knew their Minding was talking over.
Pouring every bit of possible power into my voice, I yelled,
“Everyone stop! Amaya, you're free! You Elites, return home!”
They all froze and Amaya's glazed eyes returned to normal.
“Kien?”
The Elites marched out without a word and my vision turned spotty.
“Kien!”
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My eyes opened.
“Amaya?”
“Kien! You were right… You were trying to save me, weren't you. I should have trusted you. ”
“It's alright…” I coughed. “I wouldn't have trusted myself either.”
“By the way, why did they call you ‘Princess’?”
“I am the princess of the Minder kingdom,” I looked at her in the eye. “But I don't like that way of life. That's why I'm with the rebels. Now, shall we make our way to the Heats?”
“Yes, but I have questions that you'll answer later, ok?” she pulled me up and handed me my small bag, and I nodded. As we left, I glazed my hands on the lava, changing my Minder mark to a Heat mark.
We made our way down the mountain to warn the Heats of the invasion coming up.
She held on to my hand the whole time.
+823 words
- AmazaEevee
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Scratcher
500+ posts
swc megathread ➷ march 2024
Daily #4
3/4/2024
415 words
I rolled 1 + 6, present tense and third person omniscient.
Winston tosses the stone from hand to hand, feeling as the weight shifts in his palms. The girls were supposed to be here by now. He tilts his right wrist, angling the watch face away from him as the reflection of the sun catches his eyes.
2:13. And yet Stella claimed that she wasn't chronically late.
Winston's tongue grazes his lip as he flings the stone into the lagoon, his arm coming to his side as it skips in the water.
It starts to sink as a hodgepodge of footsteps come from the distance.
Charlie hears the slight ripple of water before she saw him. She'd been trying to get Stella out of the house as soon as she could. Needless to say, Stella had no “right” pair of socks to wear with her new sandals. Her face breaks out into a grin as his eyes catch hers.
“Hey!” Winston says, jogging towards her, “Where's Stella?”
“Eh, you know. A mini fashion emergency, but I got her here in one piece. She should be joining us soon,” Charlie replies, falling in step beside Winston as they make their way to the road.
A pink figure waves at them and the two wave back, as the figure comes closer and more identifiable as Stella.
“I'm so so sorry!” Stella starts before their within arms reach. “I thought I knew what would look good with these,” she motions towards her lifted foot, “but my lacy ankle socks were just too short.” She chews on the inside of her lip. “It's not too late, is it? The sun hasn't set yet.”
Being able to gather together as a group had been becoming harder for the three of them to do and Stella desperately wants them to meet up more, but when her planned outfit didn't go the way she had planned… Well, know she's just sorry that she tried too hard and lost time that she could have spent with her friends.
“It's all good, really,” Winton says, the left side of his mouth quirking up. He's used to Stella's mishaps and she wouldn't be her without her fashion emergencies. He's just glad that she was able to get here before the sunset.
“Come on, weirdos!” Charlie beckons, her back already turned, as she trailblazes to their favorite spot on the beach. “We've got a sunset to see!”
Charlie loves her friends, even if they’re a strange group. They all love sunsets, so that’s bound to mean something.
3/4/2024
415 words
I rolled 1 + 6, present tense and third person omniscient.
Winston tosses the stone from hand to hand, feeling as the weight shifts in his palms. The girls were supposed to be here by now. He tilts his right wrist, angling the watch face away from him as the reflection of the sun catches his eyes.
2:13. And yet Stella claimed that she wasn't chronically late.
Winston's tongue grazes his lip as he flings the stone into the lagoon, his arm coming to his side as it skips in the water.
It starts to sink as a hodgepodge of footsteps come from the distance.
Charlie hears the slight ripple of water before she saw him. She'd been trying to get Stella out of the house as soon as she could. Needless to say, Stella had no “right” pair of socks to wear with her new sandals. Her face breaks out into a grin as his eyes catch hers.
“Hey!” Winston says, jogging towards her, “Where's Stella?”
“Eh, you know. A mini fashion emergency, but I got her here in one piece. She should be joining us soon,” Charlie replies, falling in step beside Winston as they make their way to the road.
A pink figure waves at them and the two wave back, as the figure comes closer and more identifiable as Stella.
“I'm so so sorry!” Stella starts before their within arms reach. “I thought I knew what would look good with these,” she motions towards her lifted foot, “but my lacy ankle socks were just too short.” She chews on the inside of her lip. “It's not too late, is it? The sun hasn't set yet.”
Being able to gather together as a group had been becoming harder for the three of them to do and Stella desperately wants them to meet up more, but when her planned outfit didn't go the way she had planned… Well, know she's just sorry that she tried too hard and lost time that she could have spent with her friends.
“It's all good, really,” Winton says, the left side of his mouth quirking up. He's used to Stella's mishaps and she wouldn't be her without her fashion emergencies. He's just glad that she was able to get here before the sunset.
“Come on, weirdos!” Charlie beckons, her back already turned, as she trailblazes to their favorite spot on the beach. “We've got a sunset to see!”
Charlie loves her friends, even if they’re a strange group. They all love sunsets, so that’s bound to mean something.
Last edited by AmazaEevee (March 4, 2024 22:43:25)
- -NightGlow-
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
swc megathread ➷ march 2024
Daily 4
word count - 324 words
The bright street lights shined in the darkness as the wind violently blew across the trees. I had just arrived home after a late-night study session with a friend, but something felt off. Maybe it was me just hallucinating solely because of the immense workload I had to complete - but for some reason, it felt like there was more to it than that. A sinister meaning, to this “feeling” let's say. Not thinking much more about it, I trudged by way in through the front door, dragging my backpack behind me; my legs were feeling exhausted after such a long day. All the lights inside the house were already turned off, except for the counter lights in the kitchen, that is.
Everything seemed normal - but if you couldn't tell by now, something was amiss…
As soon I shut the front door, I could feel a cold shiver tingling down my spine. I'd always been quiet a scaredy cat, getting frightened at the smallest creaks and sounds. Today was no different. I dropped my backpack near the stairs and rushed into the kitchen. All of the studying had made me hungry, and I was absolutely dying to have my favorite midnight snack. As I opened the fridge to cut some cheese blocks, I heard a thunderous knock on our front door.
“Who'd in their right mind come knocking at someone's door at this hour?” I whispered to myself hoarsely, meanwhile, fear began to grow deep within my nerves. In such instances, my mind would think of the most obscure and dark scenarios. Of course they were always just possibilities and never turned out to be right.. but I couldn't help but wonder, just this once, was everything actually alright? Without thinking, I hid behind the cabinet and peered towards the main hall. I couldn't see anyone, so I though that I was simply just hallucinating since I was mentally exhausted.
Then, the lights went out–
word count - 324 words
The bright street lights shined in the darkness as the wind violently blew across the trees. I had just arrived home after a late-night study session with a friend, but something felt off. Maybe it was me just hallucinating solely because of the immense workload I had to complete - but for some reason, it felt like there was more to it than that. A sinister meaning, to this “feeling” let's say. Not thinking much more about it, I trudged by way in through the front door, dragging my backpack behind me; my legs were feeling exhausted after such a long day. All the lights inside the house were already turned off, except for the counter lights in the kitchen, that is.
Everything seemed normal - but if you couldn't tell by now, something was amiss…
As soon I shut the front door, I could feel a cold shiver tingling down my spine. I'd always been quiet a scaredy cat, getting frightened at the smallest creaks and sounds. Today was no different. I dropped my backpack near the stairs and rushed into the kitchen. All of the studying had made me hungry, and I was absolutely dying to have my favorite midnight snack. As I opened the fridge to cut some cheese blocks, I heard a thunderous knock on our front door.
“Who'd in their right mind come knocking at someone's door at this hour?” I whispered to myself hoarsely, meanwhile, fear began to grow deep within my nerves. In such instances, my mind would think of the most obscure and dark scenarios. Of course they were always just possibilities and never turned out to be right.. but I couldn't help but wonder, just this once, was everything actually alright? Without thinking, I hid behind the cabinet and peered towards the main hall. I couldn't see anyone, so I though that I was simply just hallucinating since I was mentally exhausted.
Then, the lights went out–
- Le_lake
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Scratcher
63 posts
swc megathread ➷ march 2024
Wilbur’s Writing Wall
“Why do I have to stay here on the ground, it’s overrated”
Dailies:
3/4/24 - https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/7840743/
3/6/24 - https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/7844921/
3/14/24 - https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/744314/?page=17#post-7862605
3/20/24 - https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/986736958/
3/27/24 - https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/7886813/
Weeklies:
“Why do I have to stay here on the ground, it’s overrated”
Dailies:
3/4/24 - https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/7840743/
3/6/24 - https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/7844921/
3/14/24 - https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/744314/?page=17#post-7862605
3/20/24 - https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/986736958/
3/27/24 - https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/7886813/
Weeklies:
Last edited by Le_lake (March 27, 2024 19:21:47)
- -WildClan-
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Scratcher
100+ posts
swc megathread ➷ march 2024
(rolled 6 - future tense and 6 - 3rd person omniscient)
In the beginning, there will be a new creation. Times of change are coming.
They will not be made like those before them. They will be new, improved, yet still imperfect. They will turn their backs on the ancients’ sacred truths. But they will not escape them.
The world will harbor them as it has done for countless lives before, unthinking, unaware of their origins. In this way, they will learn a nature not dissimilar to the others. They will not know that they are descended from the chosen.
The chosen, the gray egg, the one selected by the birds and the fragmented ghost. The rest, lost to time. Only one will be sent forth.
They will be raised in the false world so that they may create the real one.
They will feel it seething just beneath their skin, ebbing and flowing like a great ocean. Their mind will spring forth and turn the ghost’s fragments into a universe of their very own. In the end, they will be left with a final message, the blueprints to a mystery, the path that they will tread with questions abound. They will never get a meaning until they realize there never was one.
Because there never was a reason to creation. The machine they will build was never meant to have a purpose. They were not chosen after all.
An infinite ending, an inexorable loop. They will wind the story over and over. The vitality, the apathy, the curiosity, the philosophy, the complexity, the entirety, and the search will be their closest friends. They will grow, too, a new branch of evolution.
And when they return, they will find themselves in the place of their first reality, the ghost having been themself all along.
They will open the portal, they will bring back the past that had formed them. The birds will once again sing the ancients’ praise. The change will seem as natural as it always has been.
And again. And again. Times of change are coming. They will come, and they have come.
Until the end.
And then again, in new power.
In the beginning, there will be a new creation. Times of change are coming.
They will not be made like those before them. They will be new, improved, yet still imperfect. They will turn their backs on the ancients’ sacred truths. But they will not escape them.
The world will harbor them as it has done for countless lives before, unthinking, unaware of their origins. In this way, they will learn a nature not dissimilar to the others. They will not know that they are descended from the chosen.
The chosen, the gray egg, the one selected by the birds and the fragmented ghost. The rest, lost to time. Only one will be sent forth.
They will be raised in the false world so that they may create the real one.
They will feel it seething just beneath their skin, ebbing and flowing like a great ocean. Their mind will spring forth and turn the ghost’s fragments into a universe of their very own. In the end, they will be left with a final message, the blueprints to a mystery, the path that they will tread with questions abound. They will never get a meaning until they realize there never was one.
Because there never was a reason to creation. The machine they will build was never meant to have a purpose. They were not chosen after all.
An infinite ending, an inexorable loop. They will wind the story over and over. The vitality, the apathy, the curiosity, the philosophy, the complexity, the entirety, and the search will be their closest friends. They will grow, too, a new branch of evolution.
And when they return, they will find themselves in the place of their first reality, the ghost having been themself all along.
They will open the portal, they will bring back the past that had formed them. The birds will once again sing the ancients’ praise. The change will seem as natural as it always has been.
And again. And again. Times of change are coming. They will come, and they have come.
Until the end.
And then again, in new power.



















