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PoppyWriter
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Hmm…
The thing is that going with multiple classes could align more closely with the cabin atmosphere that we've set up, but it's a lot harder to put it together. I think it really depends on how much time we're able to commit to cabin planning, since multiple classes would definitely be an investment of time for us.
So I think that it really comes down to how busy we are during the next month or so…
So I guess I'm pretty much asking if we have a bunch of time on our hands that we want to put into this, or if we want to devote our time to another aspect of the cabin….

ALSO, I finished the *very* rough draft of the lab project thumb, and I would *love* some feedback <33
https://www.canva.com/design/DAF7HvWrDPE/I6vohEsa3ZLmfcL–BA8CQ/edit?utm_content=DAF7HvWrDPE&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

Last edited by PoppyWriter (Jan. 28, 2024 22:15:47)

cb2jkl
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thrillerance >:)

oo good points. i think i would have enough time to commit. i believe this is the main part of our storyline, so we should devote most of our time to it. also the canva link doesn't work for me for some reason ( could you try resending or something like that?
rocksalmon800
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thrillerance >:)

yeah that makes sense. I’ll probably have time to commit as well. however, what if we had the big class, and then sort of spin-offs from that with the activities? like we work on the main class part together, but then they separate into groups based on their insect? idk if that would make it easier or not though lol

and I also am unable to see the canva ((
rocksalmon800
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thrillerance >:)

hmm it still doesn’t work… how are you sharing it?
cb2jkl
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thrillerance >:)

rocksalmon800 wrote:

yeah that makes sense. I’ll probably have time to commit as well. however, what if we had the big class, and then sort of spin-offs from that with the activities? like we work on the main class part together, but then they separate into groups based on their insect? idk if that would make it easier or not though lol

and I also am unable to see the canva ((

oo that sounds interesting :00 we could have people move to different comment threads or something like that?

i also cannot see the canva thumb ( also just uploaded the thriller thumbnail to the studio :00 i did have to remove the swc icon because it made the file too big and we already had swc written on the thumb asdf

Last edited by cb2jkl (Jan. 29, 2024 05:07:44)

PoppyWriter
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thrillerance >:)

Ahh thumb looks amazing! <3

Ahh, I swear it was working 10 minutes ago. I'm using the link share thingamabob. I can also share it in a project on an alt if I need to?

Last edited by PoppyWriter (Jan. 29, 2024 05:14:32)

cb2jkl
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thrillerance >:)

that could work too
PoppyWriter
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thrillerance >:)

rocksalmon800
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thrillerance >:)

it worked! That looks great
cb2jkl
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thrillerance >:)

oo i love it!! my feedback is:

- right now you just have the background as lower transparency :00 in rockie and i's thumbs i think we both chose a color to overlay over the background, so if you did that, it could help things match ) (one of the darker colors will probably make the text stand out more!!)

- i think that you could make text and graphics a bit bigger, because there is some empty space here and there

- relating again to the space thing :0 another bug graphic could be cool

- i thinkk one of our colors is a darkish blue, and im not sure if i see that in your design?

other than that it looks stunning :00 <33
PoppyWriter
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thrillerance >:)

cb2jkl wrote:

*awesome feedback*

Thanks so much CJ! I'll get on that when I can

cb2jkl
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thrillerance >:)

woo i should have the intro and cabin desc finished by tmrw so its ready in time for camper signups!
cb2jkl
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thrillerance >:)

ohh i forgot to ask how do yall want to be described in the intro :00 like your physical appearance ahaha
rocksalmon800
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ooh awesome <33

and hmm I’m short, with medium length blonde hair and blue eyes. is that good, or would you like more detail?
PoppyWriter
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Ooh cool! I'm tall, with curly brown hair and blueish-grayish eyes
cb2jkl
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oo ok sounds good :00 how should i describe your insect traits? (like the wings, etc ahaha) have you guys decided on any specific bugs?
rocksalmon800
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hmm I was think of a blue morpho butterfly so i guess that would be bright blue butterfly wings with a black border, and maybe antennae?
PoppyWriter
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thrillerance >:)

Sorry it took me a while to respond!! My forums notifcations are weird :\

Anyway, I was thinking of just a praying mantis, since they're the most commonly known type… not a lot of ways to apply human traits to that, but maybe curled antennae??
PoppyWriter
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thrillerance >:)

Rough draft of word count studio intro

You wander toward the door labeled “Training”.
You push it open very carefully, wondering what strange thing would greet you next.
“Hey!” CJ calls from across the room. “Welcome to the Training Complex!”
You walk over to where CJ and the co-leaders are helping another camper.
“Hi,” you say nervously. You look around the room for a bit, taking in all the other campers going about their business. You spot a few people flying through the air, and you even see a few practicing their fighting skills on one another. Your head spins in anticipation as you watch them.
“Are you ready?” Rockie says to you, calling your attention away from the other students.
“For… what?” you say.
Poppy grins. “Your training, of course.”
All three of them are smiling at you now, and you muster the courage to smile back.
“It all begins right here.”
You watch as the ground pulls away from you, and you begin to soar.

Last edited by PoppyWriter (Feb. 8, 2024 00:44:32)

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