Overview
All review applications still must be submitted through Melodia main thread. This is where our members will post the official review of the game.

Template

@username–Review for (title of game)

Summary

• Graphics: ☆☆☆☆☆

• Audio: ☆☆☆☆☆

• Code Fluency: ☆☆☆☆☆

• Control: ☆☆☆☆☆

• Entertainment: ☆☆☆☆☆

• Value: ☆☆☆☆☆

Overall: ☆☆☆☆☆


Member Comments
Positives
A short, bullet point list of the positives of the program.

Improvements
A short, bullet point list of the negatives of the program.

Professional Opinion
Reviewer opinion of the program.

BTW, does anyone else notice that after you post something, the thread doesnt become light blue anymore?

It still does for me…

Haiming wrote:

BTW, does anyone else notice that after you post something, the thread doesnt become light blue anymore?

I don't think we should have the payment thing. It's just I don't want melodia to slyly getting followers off that kind of stuff.

Well, Melodia needs to be more well known, and personally, if this was real life, I would charge for creating music, reviewing games, and drawing art for others. A follow is free.

Haiming wrote:

Well, Melodia needs to be more well known, and personally, if this was real life, I would charge for creating music, reviewing games, and drawing art for others. A follow is free.

^

Haiming wrote:

Well, Melodia needs to be more well known, and personally, if this was real life, I would charge for creating music, reviewing games, and drawing art for others. A follow is free.

Maybe, but what if they're following all of those 4?

sunnypiano wrote:

Haiming wrote:

Well, Melodia needs to be more well known, and personally, if this was real life, I would charge for creating music, reviewing games, and drawing art for others. A follow is free.

Maybe, but what if they're following all of those 4?

Theres many people in Melodia who they can follow…

@Haiming
Is the Summary just for high-ranked members; or all round?~Toffee

Toffee2468 wrote:

@Haiming
Is the Summary just for high-ranked members; or all round?~Toffee

Whats “The Summary” ?

Just found this.

Toffee2468 wrote:

@Haiming
Is the Summary just for high-ranked members; or all round?~Toffee

On what?

Haiming wrote:

Toffee2468 wrote:

@Haiming
Is the Summary just for high-ranked members; or all round?~Toffee

On what?

For the Reviews (Sorry, i'm a confusing person )

@sunnypiano Baking Crepes

Summary
•Graphics: 3
•Audio: 7
•Code Fluency: 4.5
•Control: 4
•Entertainment: 5
•Value: 5

Overall: 4.3


Member Comments
Positives:
Fun Bouncy Active Music
Creative Project Idea

Improvements
Graphics
Major Lags and Errors
Water doesn't work (I coudn't get farther x3 and had to stop)

Professional Opinion
I wouldn't look at it twice but I do see lots of room for improvement and its a great opportunity to improve your skills, and I would definitly Keep the Music, thats the best part

Scratchnerd - review for Grandstaff Journalist Intro

Summary
Graphics: 4
Audio: N/A
Code Fluency: 3
Control: N/A
Entertainment: 1
Value: 4

Overall: 3


Member Comments
Positives

The pixelate effect was good nearing the end as it really displayed the freshness of the intro.
It showed the logo and the name.
You perfectly set up the user to show his game with the ‘presents’ part.

Improvements

The lack of music is really annoying as it doesn't completely catch the player's attention which is extremely important in an intro.
There was no background so it didn't catch my eye and I struggled to pay attention.
The bouncing was unrealistic and it was a bit too slow to ‘wow’ you.
At the start, you saw the logo, pixelated and not moving, for a second and this spoils the start for me.

Professional Opinion

I wouldn't use it as my introduction but with a few tweaks, it would be much better.

makethebrainhappy wrote:

@sunnypiano Baking Crepes

Summary
•Graphics: 3
•Audio: 7
•Code Fluency: 4.5
•Control: 4
•Entertainment: 5
•Value: 5

Overall: 4.3


Member Comments
Positives:
Fun Bouncy Active Music
Creative Project Idea

Improvements
Graphics
Major Lags and Errors
Water doesn't work (I coudn't get farther x3 and had to stop)

Professional Opinion
I wouldn't look at it twice but I do see lots of room for improvement and its a great opportunity to improve your skills, and I would definitly Keep the Music, thats the best part

Thanks!

Crimson19 wrote:

Scratchnerd - review for Grandstaff Journalist Intro

Summary
Graphics: 4
Audio: N/A
Code Fluency: 3
Control: N/A
Entertainment: 1
Value: 4

Overall: 3


Member Comments
Positives

The pixelate effect was good nearing the end as it really displayed the freshness of the intro.
It showed the logo and the name.
You perfectly set up the user to show his game with the ‘presents’ part.

Improvements

The lack of music is really annoying as it doesn't completely catch the player's attention which is extremely important in an intro.
There was no background so it didn't catch my eye and I struggled to pay attention.
The bouncing was unrealistic and it was a bit too slow to ‘wow’ you.
At the start, you saw the logo, pixelated and not moving, for a second and this spoils the start for me.

Professional Opinion

I wouldn't use it as my introduction but with a few tweaks, it would be much better.

Thank you! Yea….I'm starting back into programming, so it's not…good yet…but thank you! I'll start on the new improvements

@Toffee2468

Summary
•Graphics: 7
•Audio: 2
•Code Fluency: 6
•Control: 6
•Entertainment: 4
•Value: 5

Overall: 5/10


Member Comments
Many People like it
Its unique and creative and
Graphics are fine
Improvements
Audio doesn't fit at all…
Improvements Need to be made with the arrow key and toppings (should tell you the topping) because I had no idea if it was working!

Professional Opinion
Wouldn't look at it twice unless I was incorparating it into a Project. If it were more realistic and you could do something w/ your ice cream, like sell it it may be a more entertaining Project. You could use the Basic cloud engine to save peoples Progress.

@makethebrainhappy
Thank you SO much for the feedback-very honest and i accept your negativity!~Toffee

Toffee2468 wrote:

@makethebrainhappy
Thank you SO much for the feedback-very honest and i accept your negativity!~Toffee

Ehhh thats my job