since valve can only count to 2, i think we should make a sequel to portal 2, we have several jobs available,
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Artists
Programmers
Voice Actors
Story Composers
Advertisers
Animators
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I would really love your help, and lets hope we reach the goal
if you have any questions, consult @zom798 or Me,
Creeperfun

Studio - http://scratch.mit.edu/studios/826728/

Attention staff!!!
if your name isnt on the list, you havent been cast off the team!!!!

i would like to sign up for a programmer

Possibly head programmer

Tho14 wrote:

i would like to sign up for a programmer

Tho14 wrote:

Possibly head programmer

done, you are hired

Can I be the story composer?

Dang, I knew I shouldn't have broke the glass bottle on my bed. My back's just a little bloody.

+kennydoan, you are hired, begin the story

I haven't finished Portal 2, but I think I've got a storyline,(idk if you will accept it)

*After finishing (the ending of Portal 2), you have escaped Aperture Labs. Appearently, you have been sent back to begin another
mission, but this time, it will be much harder than you think it is.*

Is it OK or should I make it longer?

kennydoan wrote:

I haven't finished Portal 2, but I think I've got a storyline,(idk if you will accept it)

*After finishing (the ending of Portal 2), you have escaped Aperture Labs. Appearently, you have been sent back to begin another
mission, but this time, it will be much harder than you think it is.*

Is it OK or should I make it longer?

its good, needs to be longer and dont forget to include the core i mentioned above

Hey, this may sound strange coming from a complete newbee (also in this process), but I'd like to help develop the story, I've had some idea's myself and I'm willing to share them if you'd like…
I've played (and finished) both Portal 1+2

EltonMSO wrote:

Hey, this may sound strange coming from a complete newbee (also in this process), but I'd like to help develop the story, I've had some idea's myself and I'm willing to share them if you'd like…
I've played (and finished) both Portal 1+2

ok EltonMSO, you never say newbee, you say, in experianced, and secondly, state your job from the list at the top.

Ok, so I'm inexperienced
The story composing job seemed best, but since that was taken. Head Story Writer or Line Writer (I'm leaving that to you since you're the more experienced one and project leader so will probably know best where you can use me.)

My idea for the story (Even though I'm open for other idea's as well, and yes, I've read the one in the list as well and it seems fine too):
A few years after Chell escaped Apeture science, she has managed to regain a (reasonably) normal lives until the day a strange package arrives for her.
Once she opens it, she finds a Portal Gun with a timer on it and a small note attached to it:

“In Trouble. Need Help Quicky.
-Caroline”

At that moment the counter reaches 0 and a Portal opens beneath Chell's feet taking her back to the dreaded facility, where everything seems to have gone haywire.

After that I'm open for suggestions
As I said this was only an idea I had and I'm open for anything else…

EltonMSO wrote:

Ok, so I'm inexperienced
The story composing job seemed best, but since that was taken. Head Story Writer or Line Writer (I'm leaving that to you since you're the more experienced one and project leader so will probably know best where you can use me.)

My idea for the story (Even though I'm open for other idea's as well, and yes, I've read the one in the list as well and it seems fine too):
A few years after Chell escaped Apeture science, she has managed to regain a (reasonably) normal lives until the day a strange package arrives for her.
Once she opens it, she finds a Portal Gun with a timer on it and a small note attached to it:

“In Trouble. Need Help Quicky.
-Caroline”

At that moment the counter reaches 0 and a Portal opens beneath Chell's feet taking her back to the dreaded facility, where everything seems to have gone haywire.

After that I'm open for suggestions
As I said this was only an idea I had and I'm open for anything else…

3 things, you can be lead story composer, and secondly, that is a brilliant storyline, thirdly, have you finished Portal 2?

Creeperfun wrote:

kennydoan wrote:

I haven't finished Portal 2, but I think I've got a storyline,(idk if you will accept it)

*After finishing (the ending of Portal 2), you have escaped Aperture Labs. Appearently, you have been sent back to begin another
mission, but this time, it will be much harder than you think it is.*

Is it OK or should I make it longer?

its good, needs to be longer and dont forget to include the core i mentioned above

Ok,

*After finishing (the ending of Portal 2), you thought you are done with Aperture Labs. One day, you are eating ice cream (don't ask me why I put that)
and suddenly, you get an e-mail that tells you to come back. You are a bit confused over the e-mail, but in the meantime, you grab your Portal Gun
and go. When you get there the puzzles have become more challenging than you expected…..*

Is that ok?

kennydoan wrote:

Creeperfun wrote:

kennydoan wrote:

I haven't finished Portal 2, but I think I've got a storyline,(idk if you will accept it)

*After finishing (the ending of Portal 2), you have escaped Aperture Labs. Appearently, you have been sent back to begin another
mission, but this time, it will be much harder than you think it is.*

Is it OK or should I make it longer?

its good, needs to be longer and dont forget to include the core i mentioned above

Ok,

*After finishing (the ending of Portal 2), you thought you are done with Aperture Labs. One day, you are eating ice cream (don't ask me why I put that)
and suddenly, you get an e-mail that tells you to come back. You are a bit confused over the e-mail, but in the meantime, you grab your Portal Gun
and go. When you get there the puzzles have become more challenging than you expected…..*

Is that ok?

yes its great, now you and EltonMSO collaborate on a story, lets see what happens when you two collaborate on one

Ok….. Elton what should we do?

Firstly, yes I've finished Portal 2, why do you ask?
Secondly, Kennydoan, Is there a way to “meet” here on the site (so agreeing a time and date) because since we're living in different timezones it's going of take a long while discussing the story if we don't.
I think both our idea's can be combined with some concessions on either side. (We should change the ice cream into a cake )
Have you read mine?

PS I'd forgotten to say I'm also willing to do some voice acting if you are short on those.

EltonMSO wrote:

PS I'd forgotten to say I'm also willing to do some voice acting if you are short on those.

who would you like to be

If you've no one else in mind…Core Z956B
And otherwise just one of the other cores

EltonMSO wrote:

If you've no one else in mind…Core Z956B
And otherwise just one of the other cores

could you sent me a project of you saying something the core would say