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If you are a student or a member, kindly leave.
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Hi! I put today’s prompt as “dream land”, because I thought it would be interesting if students could perceive “dream land” in their own way, like some will do candy land or a serene lake, anything of their choice
I look forward to their responses, and if you’d like me to change it, I’ll gladly do so
Cya!

I look forward to their responses, and if you’d like me to change it, I’ll gladly do so

Cya!
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Nice idea
and also, please post the students' ‘homework’ so we can figure out who deserves a merit 


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So this is @Adira77's: that night, I climbed in bed, and fell asleep within minutes. in my dream, the world was swirls of light and color. strange creatures wove in and out of the light, some had horns, others had three legs. It was like my brain was on overload
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So this is @Adira77's: that night, I climbed in bed, and fell asleep within minutes. in my dream, the world was swirls of light and color. strange creatures wove in and out of the light, some had horns, others had three legs. It was like my brain was on overload
ooh that’s pretty!


Where would you like me to post the homework? Here? Sorry for the misunderstanding Nice ideaand also, please post the students' ‘homework’ so we can figure out who deserves a merit

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So this is @Adira77's: that night, I climbed in bed, and fell asleep within minutes. in my dream, the world was swirls of light and color. strange creatures wove in and out of the light, some had horns, others had three legs. It was like my brain was on overload
ooh that’s pretty!do you hand out merits at the end of the day? Like once a few are submitted, so you can get a view on all?
Where would you like me to post the homework? Here? Sorry for the misunderstanding Nice ideaand also, please post the students' ‘homework’ so we can figure out who deserves a merit
so basically just copy and paste the student's comments exactly and then at the end of the day (well…for me, anyways) we decide who gets merits and who doesn't
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so basically just copy and paste the student's comments exactly and then at the end of the day (well…for me, anyways) we decide who gets merits and who doesn't
Okay! I’ll check soon!
It’s 8:29pm EST for me, at 10 I normally sign off, and I’ll be active during breaks at school and after 4pm EST to check!
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So this is @Adira77's: that night, I climbed in bed, and fell asleep within minutes. in my dream, the world was swirls of light and color. strange creatures wove in and out of the light, some had horns, others had three legs. It was like my brain was on overload
@Nightguard_207's: I can't sleep anymore. Every time I close my eyes, I'm haunted by the images and feelings of the day; the things I don't want to remember. I'm afraid to dream. If I'm awake, I'm hurting, and when I sleep, the pain is worse. He hurt me. He did this to me. And I can't get him out of my head. He doesn't care. And that thought keeps me awake in my dreams. (+) (+) Every time I close my eyes, I see him. With her. And I can't stop the hurt. All I want, is for everything to be okay. For him to love me the way that I love him. And sometimes, he does. But when I open my eyes, I know it was just a dream. Not reality. And it never will be. (134 words)
@Nightguard_207's: I can't sleep anymore. Every time I close my eyes, I'm haunted by the images and feelings of the day; the things I don't want to remember. I'm afraid to dream. If I'm awake, I'm hurting, and when I sleep, the pain is worse. He hurt me. He did this to me. And I can't get him out of my head. He doesn't care. And that thought keeps me awake in my dreams. (+) (+) Every time I close my eyes, I see him. With her. And I can't stop the hurt. All I want, is for everything to be okay. For him to love me the way that I love him. And sometimes, he does. But when I open my eyes, I know it was just a dream. Not reality. And it never will be. (134 words)
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This is @Nightguard_207 ‘a homework
I can't sleep anymore. Every time I close my eyes, I'm haunted by the images and feelings of the day; the things I don't want to remember. I'm afraid to dream. If I'm awake, I'm hurting, and when I sleep, the pain is worse. He hurt me. He did this to me. And I can't get him out of my head. He doesn't care. And that thought keeps me awake in my dreams. (+)
(+) Every time I close my eyes, I see him. With her. And I can't stop the hurt. All I want, is for everything to be okay. For him to love me the way that I love him. And sometimes, he does. But when I open my eyes, I know it was just a dream. Not reality. And it never will be. (134 words)
I responded with:This is beautiful; I love stories that have a touch of non-reality and mentality. And I love how you just kept the words simple, and how this paragraph wasn’t wordy at all, it’s perfect, great job!
I can't sleep anymore. Every time I close my eyes, I'm haunted by the images and feelings of the day; the things I don't want to remember. I'm afraid to dream. If I'm awake, I'm hurting, and when I sleep, the pain is worse. He hurt me. He did this to me. And I can't get him out of my head. He doesn't care. And that thought keeps me awake in my dreams. (+)
(+) Every time I close my eyes, I see him. With her. And I can't stop the hurt. All I want, is for everything to be okay. For him to love me the way that I love him. And sometimes, he does. But when I open my eyes, I know it was just a dream. Not reality. And it never will be. (134 words)
I responded with:This is beautiful; I love stories that have a touch of non-reality and mentality. And I love how you just kept the words simple, and how this paragraph wasn’t wordy at all, it’s perfect, great job!
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I really like @Nightguard_207's, just gonna check if there are any more submissions
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@-MADDIEISMAD-'s: Dreams. That's what people like to call them. When you can get in touch with your inner self. I like to call them night visions. We see what happens in other dinesions, another one of you dreaming about you right now. They'll tell people they had the weirdest dream. Nightmares are the worst. I hate them, they show me, my family, anyone, slaughtered. I don't sleep anymore, fearing that it will show me something like that. People call me crazy, but I know better. They aren't just dreams and (+) Nightmares. There reality, a reality so sick and twisted I can't even comprhend it. I should stop talking before they get me.
I love this one!
I love this one!
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@-MADDIEISMAD-'s: Dreams. That's what people like to call them. When you can get in touch with your inner self. I like to call them night visions. We see what happens in other dinesions, another one of you dreaming about you right now. They'll tell people they had the weirdest dream. Nightmares are the worst. I hate them, they show me, my family, anyone, slaughtered. I don't sleep anymore, fearing that it will show me something like that. People call me crazy, but I know better. They aren't just dreams and (+) Nightmares. There reality, a reality so sick and twisted I can't even comprhend it. I should stop talking before they get me.
I love this one!
This is beautiful! Just one spelling error; “comprehend” as “comprhend” but this story is beautiful!

I really like @Nightguard_207's, just gonna check if there are any more submissions
yep!

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Oh, yeah
Also, the writing prompt will now be up for 2 days now. Time zones and such. But then it can’t be called the ‘daily’ writing prompt, right?
Also, the writing prompt will now be up for 2 days now. Time zones and such. But then it can’t be called the ‘daily’ writing prompt, right?
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@BooClimateChange's: I tossed and turned in bed, the scary story enveloping me with fear. Why did my older brother tell it to me? Now I would never fall asleep, and I had exams the next day. Great. Now I would fail and not pass High School. Even worse, I wouldn't be in the same grade as Grady, my boyfriend. At some point, I must have fallen asleep, because the next thing I knew, I was in the hazy, green world of the Spriorites, the beings from the scary story my brother had told me. (+) (+) They tried to pounce on me, but I was too fast. I raced through the sticky undergrowth, the plants trying to stick to me. I ran as fast as I could, but they were faster. As they enveloped me, darkness swallowed me, and I found myself screaming when I woke up. I knew that I would not sleep anymore that night. (154 words)
I think this one is absolutely amazing.
I think this one is absolutely amazing.
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Oh, yeah
Also, the writing prompt will now be up for 2 days now. Time zones and such. But then it can’t be called the ‘daily’ writing prompt, right?
That makes sense!
@BooClimateChange's: I tossed and turned in bed, the scary story enveloping me with fear. Why did my older brother tell it to me? Now I would never fall asleep, and I had exams the next day. Great. Now I would fail and not pass High School. Even worse, I wouldn't be in the same grade as Grady, my boyfriend. At some point, I must have fallen asleep, because the next thing I knew, I was in the hazy, green world of the Spriorites, the beings from the scary story my brother had told me. (+) (+) They tried to pounce on me, but I was too fast. I raced through the sticky undergrowth, the plants trying to stick to me. I ran as fast as I could, but they were faster. As they enveloped me, darkness swallowed me, and I found myself screaming when I woke up. I knew that I would not sleep anymore that night. (154 words)
I think this one is absolutely amazing.
That’s amazing!


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Yeah
just have to wait till the end of the day (for me) and see if any more show up.

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Yeahjust have to wait till the end of the day (for me) and see if any more show up.
Yup! IRS currently 7:45am EST for me
