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and a couple minutes laterI'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon. What are the ideas?2 Days Later2 Days Later
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
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“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- HexagonWorld
- Scratcher
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Boom. It's been 4 days.and a couple minutes laterI'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon. What are the ideas?2 Days Later2 Days Later
- boom2ratz
- Scratcher
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Aight aight aight.Boom. It's been 4 days.and a couple minutes laterI'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon. What are the ideas?2 Days Later2 Days Later
For two days I was lazy, the other two I was stayin' at a friends (I watched the amazing DC LEAGUE OF SUPERPETS!). I'll do it soon.
“That has to it”
- Matjam02
- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
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Was it goodAight aight aight.Boom. It's been 4 days.and a couple minutes laterI'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon. What are the ideas?2 Days Later2 Days Later
For two days I was lazy, the other two I was stayin' at a friends (I watched the amazing DC LEAGUE OF SUPERPETS!). I'll do it soon.
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- HexagonWorld
- Scratcher
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The Best Doctor in DW
Is it really that good? WONDER WOMAN HAS A KANGAROO NOT A PIGAight aight aight.Boom. It's been 4 days.and a couple minutes laterI'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon. What are the ideas?2 Days Later2 Days Later
For two days I was lazy, the other two I was stayin' at a friends (I watched the amazing DC LEAGUE OF SUPERPETS!). I'll do it soon.
- boom2ratz
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
The Best Doctor in DW
It was great, but I wish they had given Aquaman and Cyborg actual pets. They just got some magic redeemed guinea pigs at the end. I think Aquaman should've gotten a goldfish (throughout the movie his bowl would be strapped to the turtle's back), and Cyborg, a rabbit. Also, Bane should've been in the movie, and he should've had a CANARY!Was it goodAight aight aight.Boom. It's been 4 days.and a couple minutes laterI'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon. What are the ideas?2 Days Later2 Days Later
For two days I was lazy, the other two I was stayin' at a friends (I watched the amazing DC LEAGUE OF SUPERPETS!). I'll do it soon.
“That has to it”
- Matjam02
- HexagonWorld
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
The Best Doctor in DW
I've seen the JL designs for the movie and what is going on with Cyborg's haircut?It was great, but I wish they had given Aquaman and Cyborg actual pets. They just got some magic redeemed guinea pigs at the end. I think Aquaman should've gotten a goldfish (throughout the movie his bowl would be strapped to the turtle's back), and Cyborg, a rabbit. Also, Bane should've been in the movie, and he should've had a CANARY!Was it goodAight aight aight.Boom. It's been 4 days.and a couple minutes laterI'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon. What are the ideas?2 Days Later2 Days Later
For two days I was lazy, the other two I was stayin' at a friends (I watched the amazing DC LEAGUE OF SUPERPETS!). I'll do it soon.
- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
The Best Doctor in DW
Flash skipped leg dayI've seen the JL designs for the movie and what is going on with Cyborg's haircut?It was great, but I wish they had given Aquaman and Cyborg actual pets. They just got some magic redeemed guinea pigs at the end. I think Aquaman should've gotten a goldfish (throughout the movie his bowl would be strapped to the turtle's back), and Cyborg, a rabbit. Also, Bane should've been in the movie, and he should've had a CANARY!Was it goodAight aight aight.Boom. It's been 4 days.and a couple minutes laterI'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon. What are the ideas?2 Days Later2 Days Later
For two days I was lazy, the other two I was stayin' at a friends (I watched the amazing DC LEAGUE OF SUPERPETS!). I'll do it soon.
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
The Best Doctor in DW
Over a week laterI'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon. What are the ideas?2 Days Later2 Days Later
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
The Best Doctor in DW
Should we remove the JSA?
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- boom2ratz
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
The Best Doctor in DW
Maybe… Probably. Should we remove the JSA?
“That has to it”
- Matjam02
- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
The Best Doctor in DW
Maybe an old version of Constantine runs the time mastersMaybe… Probably. Should we remove the JSA?
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
About Me.
| he/him | Jewish | Writer | Comic Fan | Movie and TV fanatic | Marvel, DC, Darkhorse, Image, comics are comics! | Music is cool, I like music | Doctor Who! | Animation is tight | Also new signature!
“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed
- boom2ratz
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
The Best Doctor in DW
Wait… I have some ideas for it. I'll write 'em down now.Maybe an old version of Constantine runs the time mastersMaybe… Probably. Should we remove the JSA?
“That has to it”
- Matjam02
- boom2ratz
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
The Best Doctor in DW
I think the problem we're not getting anywhere is the villain. The Batman Who Laughs isn't that shapable.
“That has to it”
- Matjam02
- boom2ratz
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
The Best Doctor in DW
I have a new idea for a villain. Some person that's trying to summon a devil to destroy the multiverse (the person thinks all worlds are flawed). They need the blood of two magical beings. I think the problem we're not getting anywhere is the villain. The Batman Who Laughs isn't that shapable.
“That has to it”
- Matjam02
- HexagonWorld
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
The Best Doctor in DW
Batman Who Laughs doesn't work because we've only seen Joker once at this point. I think the problem we're not getting anywhere is the villain. The Batman Who Laughs isn't that shapable.
- boom2ratz
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
The Best Doctor in DW
NEW PLOT IDEA
Prologue: John as a child.
Act One
Backstory: John Constantine is an occult detective, working in (city). Zatanna is a teenage girl who struggles with her magical abilities.
Catalyst: Constantine investigates some weird, paranormal murders. Zatanna is attacked by magic demon hyenas (or something), Constantine saves her.
Big Event: Constantine and Zatanna are attacked by Time Masters, who tell them they caused a crisis.
Act Two
Midpoint: The Time Masters take the duo to see the Time Keepers (JSA, whoever). The villain attacks and kills the Time Keepers. He wants to get Zatanna's blood to summon a devil to destroy the multiverse. Zatanna is kidnapped by the villain and taken to some weird realm so he can summon the devil thing.
Crisis: Constantine is tired and beaten down, he wants to go back to PDCU Earth. He talks to someone / something and gets inspiration to help Zatanna. His arc is concluded (be less of a selfish person). He decides to save Zatanna, but first, he travels the multiverse, summoning some people (maybe all variants of him, maybe other multiverse DC characters, maybe some members of the JLD) to help.
Act Three
Climax: The Zatanna Rescue crew (I'll call them the Justice League Dark here just for the sake of being easy to write) arrives in the realm, and battles the summoner. Zatanna helps in the battle, as the devil is being summoned. They stop the devil, and all is saved.
Realization: Payoffs and such, arcs concluded, happy ending, end with a cool 60s song.
Prologue: John as a child.
Act One
Backstory: John Constantine is an occult detective, working in (city). Zatanna is a teenage girl who struggles with her magical abilities.
Catalyst: Constantine investigates some weird, paranormal murders. Zatanna is attacked by magic demon hyenas (or something), Constantine saves her.
Big Event: Constantine and Zatanna are attacked by Time Masters, who tell them they caused a crisis.
Act Two
Midpoint: The Time Masters take the duo to see the Time Keepers (JSA, whoever). The villain attacks and kills the Time Keepers. He wants to get Zatanna's blood to summon a devil to destroy the multiverse. Zatanna is kidnapped by the villain and taken to some weird realm so he can summon the devil thing.
Crisis: Constantine is tired and beaten down, he wants to go back to PDCU Earth. He talks to someone / something and gets inspiration to help Zatanna. His arc is concluded (be less of a selfish person). He decides to save Zatanna, but first, he travels the multiverse, summoning some people (maybe all variants of him, maybe other multiverse DC characters, maybe some members of the JLD) to help.
Act Three
Climax: The Zatanna Rescue crew (I'll call them the Justice League Dark here just for the sake of being easy to write) arrives in the realm, and battles the summoner. Zatanna helps in the battle, as the devil is being summoned. They stop the devil, and all is saved.
Realization: Payoffs and such, arcs concluded, happy ending, end with a cool 60s song.
“That has to it”
- Matjam02
- HexagonWorld
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
The Best Doctor in DW
NEW PLOT IDEAThis still seems really similar to MOM. You need to entirely restructure so it's more original. Explore the Multiverse more and ACTUALLY MAKE IT ABOUT THE DARK MULTIVERSE.
Prologue: John as a child.
Act One
Backstory: John Constantine is an occult detective, working in (city). Zatanna is a teenage girl who struggles with her magical abilities.
Catalyst: Constantine investigates some weird, paranormal murders. Zatanna is attacked by magic demon hyenas (or something), Constantine saves her.
Big Event: Constantine and Zatanna are attacked by Time Masters, who tell them they caused a crisis.
Act Two
Midpoint: The Time Masters take the duo to see the Time Keepers (JSA, whoever). The villain attacks and kills the Time Keepers. He wants to get Zatanna's blood to summon a devil to destroy the multiverse. Zatanna is kidnapped by the villain and taken to some weird realm so he can summon the devil thing.
Crisis: Constantine is tired and beaten down, he wants to go back to PDCU Earth. He talks to someone / something and gets inspiration to help Zatanna. His arc is concluded (be less of a selfish person). He decides to save Zatanna, but first, he travels the multiverse, summoning some people (maybe all variants of him, maybe other multiverse DC characters, maybe some members of the JLD) to help.
Act Three
Climax: The Zatanna Rescue crew (I'll call them the Justice League Dark here just for the sake of being easy to write) arrives in the realm, and battles the summoner. Zatanna helps in the battle, as the devil is being summoned. They stop the devil, and all is saved.
Realization: Payoffs and such, arcs concluded, happy ending, end with a cool 60s song.
- boom2ratz
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
The Best Doctor in DW
Nah, it's more different now. The villain could be from the Dark Multiverse, or the devil or something.NEW PLOT IDEAThis still seems really similar to MOM. You need to entirely restructure so it's more original. Explore the Multiverse more and ACTUALLY MAKE IT ABOUT THE DARK MULTIVERSE.
Prologue: John as a child.
Act One
Backstory: John Constantine is an occult detective, working in (city). Zatanna is a teenage girl who struggles with her magical abilities.
Catalyst: Constantine investigates some weird, paranormal murders. Zatanna is attacked by magic demon hyenas (or something), Constantine saves her.
Big Event: Constantine and Zatanna are attacked by Time Masters, who tell them they caused a crisis.
Act Two
Midpoint: The Time Masters take the duo to see the Time Keepers (JSA, whoever). The villain attacks and kills the Time Keepers. He wants to get Zatanna's blood to summon a devil to destroy the multiverse. Zatanna is kidnapped by the villain and taken to some weird realm so he can summon the devil thing.
Crisis: Constantine is tired and beaten down, he wants to go back to PDCU Earth. He talks to someone / something and gets inspiration to help Zatanna. His arc is concluded (be less of a selfish person). He decides to save Zatanna, but first, he travels the multiverse, summoning some people (maybe all variants of him, maybe other multiverse DC characters, maybe some members of the JLD) to help.
Act Three
Climax: The Zatanna Rescue crew (I'll call them the Justice League Dark here just for the sake of being easy to write) arrives in the realm, and battles the summoner. Zatanna helps in the battle, as the devil is being summoned. They stop the devil, and all is saved.
Realization: Payoffs and such, arcs concluded, happy ending, end with a cool 60s song.
“That has to it”
- Matjam02
- HexagonWorld
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
The Best Doctor in DW
Act 1 and the Midpoint are just ripped from MOM and the rest is similar just because of the stuff you set up.Nah, it's more different now. The villain could be from the Dark Multiverse, or the devil or something.NEW PLOT IDEAThis still seems really similar to MOM. You need to entirely restructure so it's more original. Explore the Multiverse more and ACTUALLY MAKE IT ABOUT THE DARK MULTIVERSE.
Prologue: John as a child.
Act One
Backstory: John Constantine is an occult detective, working in (city). Zatanna is a teenage girl who struggles with her magical abilities.
Catalyst: Constantine investigates some weird, paranormal murders. Zatanna is attacked by magic demon hyenas (or something), Constantine saves her.
Big Event: Constantine and Zatanna are attacked by Time Masters, who tell them they caused a crisis.
Act Two
Midpoint: The Time Masters take the duo to see the Time Keepers (JSA, whoever). The villain attacks and kills the Time Keepers. He wants to get Zatanna's blood to summon a devil to destroy the multiverse. Zatanna is kidnapped by the villain and taken to some weird realm so he can summon the devil thing.
Crisis: Constantine is tired and beaten down, he wants to go back to PDCU Earth. He talks to someone / something and gets inspiration to help Zatanna. His arc is concluded (be less of a selfish person). He decides to save Zatanna, but first, he travels the multiverse, summoning some people (maybe all variants of him, maybe other multiverse DC characters, maybe some members of the JLD) to help.
Act Three
Climax: The Zatanna Rescue crew (I'll call them the Justice League Dark here just for the sake of being easy to write) arrives in the realm, and battles the summoner. Zatanna helps in the battle, as the devil is being summoned. They stop the devil, and all is saved.
Realization: Payoffs and such, arcs concluded, happy ending, end with a cool 60s song.
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