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Platypus_WKeyboard

HexagonWorld wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later
2 Days Later

and a couple minutes later

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

HexagonWorld

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later
2 Days Later
and a couple minutes later

Boom. It's been 4 days.

The only good live action Disney remake.

boom2ratz

HexagonWorld wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later
2 Days Later
and a couple minutes later
Boom. It's been 4 days.

Aight aight aight.

For two days I was lazy, the other two I was stayin' at a friends (I watched the amazing DC LEAGUE OF SUPERPETS!). I'll do it soon.

“That has to it”
- Matjam02

Platypus_WKeyboard

boom2ratz wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later
2 Days Later
and a couple minutes later
Boom. It's been 4 days.
Aight aight aight.

For two days I was lazy, the other two I was stayin' at a friends (I watched the amazing DC LEAGUE OF SUPERPETS!). I'll do it soon.

Was it good

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

HexagonWorld

boom2ratz wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later
2 Days Later
and a couple minutes later
Boom. It's been 4 days.
Aight aight aight.

For two days I was lazy, the other two I was stayin' at a friends (I watched the amazing DC LEAGUE OF SUPERPETS!). I'll do it soon.

Is it really that good? WONDER WOMAN HAS A KANGAROO NOT A PIG

The only good live action Disney remake.

boom2ratz

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later
2 Days Later
and a couple minutes later
Boom. It's been 4 days.
Aight aight aight.

For two days I was lazy, the other two I was stayin' at a friends (I watched the amazing DC LEAGUE OF SUPERPETS!). I'll do it soon.
Was it good

It was great, but I wish they had given Aquaman and Cyborg actual pets. They just got some magic redeemed guinea pigs at the end. I think Aquaman should've gotten a goldfish (throughout the movie his bowl would be strapped to the turtle's back), and Cyborg, a rabbit. Also, Bane should've been in the movie, and he should've had a CANARY!

“That has to it”
- Matjam02

HexagonWorld

boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later
2 Days Later
and a couple minutes later
Boom. It's been 4 days.
Aight aight aight.

For two days I was lazy, the other two I was stayin' at a friends (I watched the amazing DC LEAGUE OF SUPERPETS!). I'll do it soon.
Was it good
It was great, but I wish they had given Aquaman and Cyborg actual pets. They just got some magic redeemed guinea pigs at the end. I think Aquaman should've gotten a goldfish (throughout the movie his bowl would be strapped to the turtle's back), and Cyborg, a rabbit. Also, Bane should've been in the movie, and he should've had a CANARY!

I've seen the JL designs for the movie and what is going on with Cyborg's haircut?

The only good live action Disney remake.

Platypus_WKeyboard

HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later
2 Days Later
and a couple minutes later
Boom. It's been 4 days.
Aight aight aight.

For two days I was lazy, the other two I was stayin' at a friends (I watched the amazing DC LEAGUE OF SUPERPETS!). I'll do it soon.
Was it good
It was great, but I wish they had given Aquaman and Cyborg actual pets. They just got some magic redeemed guinea pigs at the end. I think Aquaman should've gotten a goldfish (throughout the movie his bowl would be strapped to the turtle's back), and Cyborg, a rabbit. Also, Bane should've been in the movie, and he should've had a CANARY!
I've seen the JL designs for the movie and what is going on with Cyborg's haircut?

Flash skipped leg day

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

Platypus_WKeyboard

HexagonWorld wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
What are the ideas?
I'll write them tomorrow after school, I'mma go to bed soon.
2 Days Later
2 Days Later

Over a week later

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

Platypus_WKeyboard

Should we remove the JSA?

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

boom2ratz

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Should we remove the JSA?

Maybe… Probably.

“That has to it”
- Matjam02

Platypus_WKeyboard

boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Should we remove the JSA?
Maybe… Probably.

Maybe an old version of Constantine runs the time masters

“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
- Evil Abed

boom2ratz

Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
Platypus_WKeyboard wrote:
Should we remove the JSA?
Maybe… Probably.
Maybe an old version of Constantine runs the time masters

Wait… I have some ideas for it. I'll write 'em down now.

“That has to it”
- Matjam02

boom2ratz

I think the problem we're not getting anywhere is the villain. The Batman Who Laughs isn't that shapable.

“That has to it”
- Matjam02

boom2ratz

boom2ratz wrote:
I think the problem we're not getting anywhere is the villain. The Batman Who Laughs isn't that shapable.

I have a new idea for a villain. Some person that's trying to summon a devil to destroy the multiverse (the person thinks all worlds are flawed). They need the blood of two magical beings.

“That has to it”
- Matjam02

HexagonWorld

boom2ratz wrote:
I think the problem we're not getting anywhere is the villain. The Batman Who Laughs isn't that shapable.

Batman Who Laughs doesn't work because we've only seen Joker once at this point.

The only good live action Disney remake.

boom2ratz

NEW PLOT IDEA

Prologue: John as a child.

Act One

Backstory: John Constantine is an occult detective, working in (city). Zatanna is a teenage girl who struggles with her magical abilities.

Catalyst: Constantine investigates some weird, paranormal murders. Zatanna is attacked by magic demon hyenas (or something), Constantine saves her.

Big Event: Constantine and Zatanna are attacked by Time Masters, who tell them they caused a crisis.

Act Two

Midpoint: The Time Masters take the duo to see the Time Keepers (JSA, whoever). The villain attacks and kills the Time Keepers. He wants to get Zatanna's blood to summon a devil to destroy the multiverse. Zatanna is kidnapped by the villain and taken to some weird realm so he can summon the devil thing.

Crisis: Constantine is tired and beaten down, he wants to go back to PDCU Earth. He talks to someone / something and gets inspiration to help Zatanna. His arc is concluded (be less of a selfish person). He decides to save Zatanna, but first, he travels the multiverse, summoning some people (maybe all variants of him, maybe other multiverse DC characters, maybe some members of the JLD) to help.

Act Three

Climax: The Zatanna Rescue crew (I'll call them the Justice League Dark here just for the sake of being easy to write) arrives in the realm, and battles the summoner. Zatanna helps in the battle, as the devil is being summoned. They stop the devil, and all is saved.

Realization: Payoffs and such, arcs concluded, happy ending, end with a cool 60s song.

“That has to it”
- Matjam02

HexagonWorld

boom2ratz wrote:
NEW PLOT IDEA

Prologue: John as a child.

Act One

Backstory: John Constantine is an occult detective, working in (city). Zatanna is a teenage girl who struggles with her magical abilities.

Catalyst: Constantine investigates some weird, paranormal murders. Zatanna is attacked by magic demon hyenas (or something), Constantine saves her.

Big Event: Constantine and Zatanna are attacked by Time Masters, who tell them they caused a crisis.

Act Two

Midpoint: The Time Masters take the duo to see the Time Keepers (JSA, whoever). The villain attacks and kills the Time Keepers. He wants to get Zatanna's blood to summon a devil to destroy the multiverse. Zatanna is kidnapped by the villain and taken to some weird realm so he can summon the devil thing.

Crisis: Constantine is tired and beaten down, he wants to go back to PDCU Earth. He talks to someone / something and gets inspiration to help Zatanna. His arc is concluded (be less of a selfish person). He decides to save Zatanna, but first, he travels the multiverse, summoning some people (maybe all variants of him, maybe other multiverse DC characters, maybe some members of the JLD) to help.

Act Three

Climax: The Zatanna Rescue crew (I'll call them the Justice League Dark here just for the sake of being easy to write) arrives in the realm, and battles the summoner. Zatanna helps in the battle, as the devil is being summoned. They stop the devil, and all is saved.

Realization: Payoffs and such, arcs concluded, happy ending, end with a cool 60s song.

This still seems really similar to MOM. You need to entirely restructure so it's more original. Explore the Multiverse more and ACTUALLY MAKE IT ABOUT THE DARK MULTIVERSE.

The only good live action Disney remake.

boom2ratz

HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
NEW PLOT IDEA

Prologue: John as a child.

Act One

Backstory: John Constantine is an occult detective, working in (city). Zatanna is a teenage girl who struggles with her magical abilities.

Catalyst: Constantine investigates some weird, paranormal murders. Zatanna is attacked by magic demon hyenas (or something), Constantine saves her.

Big Event: Constantine and Zatanna are attacked by Time Masters, who tell them they caused a crisis.

Act Two

Midpoint: The Time Masters take the duo to see the Time Keepers (JSA, whoever). The villain attacks and kills the Time Keepers. He wants to get Zatanna's blood to summon a devil to destroy the multiverse. Zatanna is kidnapped by the villain and taken to some weird realm so he can summon the devil thing.

Crisis: Constantine is tired and beaten down, he wants to go back to PDCU Earth. He talks to someone / something and gets inspiration to help Zatanna. His arc is concluded (be less of a selfish person). He decides to save Zatanna, but first, he travels the multiverse, summoning some people (maybe all variants of him, maybe other multiverse DC characters, maybe some members of the JLD) to help.

Act Three

Climax: The Zatanna Rescue crew (I'll call them the Justice League Dark here just for the sake of being easy to write) arrives in the realm, and battles the summoner. Zatanna helps in the battle, as the devil is being summoned. They stop the devil, and all is saved.

Realization: Payoffs and such, arcs concluded, happy ending, end with a cool 60s song.
This still seems really similar to MOM. You need to entirely restructure so it's more original. Explore the Multiverse more and ACTUALLY MAKE IT ABOUT THE DARK MULTIVERSE.

Nah, it's more different now. The villain could be from the Dark Multiverse, or the devil or something.

“That has to it”
- Matjam02

HexagonWorld

boom2ratz wrote:
HexagonWorld wrote:
boom2ratz wrote:
NEW PLOT IDEA

Prologue: John as a child.

Act One

Backstory: John Constantine is an occult detective, working in (city). Zatanna is a teenage girl who struggles with her magical abilities.

Catalyst: Constantine investigates some weird, paranormal murders. Zatanna is attacked by magic demon hyenas (or something), Constantine saves her.

Big Event: Constantine and Zatanna are attacked by Time Masters, who tell them they caused a crisis.

Act Two

Midpoint: The Time Masters take the duo to see the Time Keepers (JSA, whoever). The villain attacks and kills the Time Keepers. He wants to get Zatanna's blood to summon a devil to destroy the multiverse. Zatanna is kidnapped by the villain and taken to some weird realm so he can summon the devil thing.

Crisis: Constantine is tired and beaten down, he wants to go back to PDCU Earth. He talks to someone / something and gets inspiration to help Zatanna. His arc is concluded (be less of a selfish person). He decides to save Zatanna, but first, he travels the multiverse, summoning some people (maybe all variants of him, maybe other multiverse DC characters, maybe some members of the JLD) to help.

Act Three

Climax: The Zatanna Rescue crew (I'll call them the Justice League Dark here just for the sake of being easy to write) arrives in the realm, and battles the summoner. Zatanna helps in the battle, as the devil is being summoned. They stop the devil, and all is saved.

Realization: Payoffs and such, arcs concluded, happy ending, end with a cool 60s song.
This still seems really similar to MOM. You need to entirely restructure so it's more original. Explore the Multiverse more and ACTUALLY MAKE IT ABOUT THE DARK MULTIVERSE.
Nah, it's more different now. The villain could be from the Dark Multiverse, or the devil or something.

Act 1 and the Midpoint are just ripped from MOM and the rest is similar just because of the stuff you set up.

The only good live action Disney remake.

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