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Jolia_RKW
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1000+ posts

the lionesses's territory • open for business! we need orders and employees!

Review for The Lioness's Territory
This review was completed by Jolia from the тнε Wнıтε Tıɢεя Fεᴅεяαтıσп for this shop and uses their official colour/s
First Look 7/10
Your title has a few symbols, but some fancy text or emojis will help make it look more appealing! However I adore your banner it's beautiful and perfect! Your front page has your products and forms although no directory!


Also, I know it may not seem important but good grammar like capital letters makes your shop look way more professional. I strongly recommend changing that
BBCode Formatting 6/10
I personally find it hard to read and use the current layout ofof your forms, perhaps change it slightly to be eas ier to use, even if that means supplying the Code for it? Even laying it out like below would help See the difference Below.
user jolia_example design details blue with gold any words you'd like on it? the text hi what are the dimensions? banner size
However I absolutely love your use of quotes. Just be careful not to use them too much. Also be careful with whitespace because it can make the posts unnecessarily long. Also consider having more colours, like official shop colours like in your portfolio! I love the gradient
Product Quality 10/10
Speed 10/10
Customer Service 9/10
In the profile notification consider adding the link to the post in the forum? It makes it just that but easier.
Accessibility 7/10
I really think a directory would be useful for navigating your pages. You already have a portfolio which is great but a history, an about the shop would be good too!
Overall 78/100
A few things to improve and make your shop even better would be:
  • Check up one your grammar
  • Add fancy text, symbols or emojis to your title
  • Check your use of whitespace, quotes
  • Use more colours (maybe official colours)
  • Changing your form layout
  • Add a link to the profile notification
  • Add a history etc
Please leave a review on our Federation thread if this review helped!

Jolia_RKW
Scratcher
1000+ posts

the lionesses's territory • open for business! we need orders and employees!


Thanks for participating in the November Event
You have earned these awards:
Best Banner Award - 100000/10!
Wow! I loved the unique touch of the firework in your design; I've never seen it before and it won me over so congratulations
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Firework Award - BANG!
[img]https://u.cubeupload.com/scratchhoodie/FireworkAward.png[/img]
Participation Award - hard work always pays off
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Well done! Have a good day

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