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- -PeachiiStxr-
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“-were…taken hostage by the Helliopes…”
You stand frozen, your face pale and eyes wide.
“I- h-how do- do you know th-this?” you ask quietly, silent tears streaming down your face.
LJ sighs. “While you were asleep, you were muttering. The Helliopes can't control you completely, but they could make you speak. You had muttered: ‘we have the girl’s siblings. No harm will come to them if the girl comes quietly. We need the information from her. We await your answer. You have 24 hours'.”
You begin breathing quickly. They had your siblings. They weren't being hurt, but it's your fault they were taken hostage. You can't let them be hurt. You must hand yourself over.
Aria stares at you sternly. “You won't hand yourself over, we'll-”
“THEY HAVE MY FAMILY!” you yell. “I can't let them die like my parents!”
“We'll form a plan,” Aria said. “but you have to calm down and not do anything rash, is that clear?”
You take deep breaths. After what seemed like ages, you nod, wiping the tears streaming down your face.
Misty was silent for a while. Then she suddenly spoke up.
“Hey, I think I have a plan.”
You stand frozen, your face pale and eyes wide.
“I- h-how do- do you know th-this?” you ask quietly, silent tears streaming down your face.
LJ sighs. “While you were asleep, you were muttering. The Helliopes can't control you completely, but they could make you speak. You had muttered: ‘we have the girl’s siblings. No harm will come to them if the girl comes quietly. We need the information from her. We await your answer. You have 24 hours'.”
You begin breathing quickly. They had your siblings. They weren't being hurt, but it's your fault they were taken hostage. You can't let them be hurt. You must hand yourself over.
Aria stares at you sternly. “You won't hand yourself over, we'll-”
“THEY HAVE MY FAMILY!” you yell. “I can't let them die like my parents!”
“We'll form a plan,” Aria said. “but you have to calm down and not do anything rash, is that clear?”
You take deep breaths. After what seemed like ages, you nod, wiping the tears streaming down your face.
Misty was silent for a while. Then she suddenly spoke up.
“Hey, I think I have a plan.”
- RLove10
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Sci-Fi Cabin's Collaborative Story - SWC November 2021
“What plan?!” you ask with intesity, you don't care if you sound too intense. Your family was in danger, and that was a risk you wouldn't take.
“Well, it's not easy. And we'll need more help, we aren't enough.” Misty said “LJ, help me contacting all our allies, we'll need all the help we can get! General Aria, am I authorized to get my plan going?”
Aria was silent for a minute, it was obvious she was thinking. She walked around the room looking everywhere, and then she looked at you. She looked at your eyes, and you knew that would be the point where she decided what to do.
“Do it.” Was all Aria said. LJ pressed a button in the screen and a big help message was send throughout the galaxy. You asked Misty what her plan was and she told you she would tell you when Banana was awake. You go to your room but when you get there you start getting dissy. You close your eyes for a bit and some flasing lights start appearing. You start hearing voices, but they aren't just any voices. You reconize this voices. You concentrate and you are able to see what's happening. You see your siblings, trapped in a cage. They look frightened. And suddenly you pass out.
“(y/n)! Can you hear us?!” LJ screams as Misty kneels close to you.
“Yeah… What happened?” You asked as you stand up and sit in your bed
“We entered the room and you were in the floor…” General Aria says “Do you remember anything of what happened?”
“No..” You say and suddenly everything comes back. “Aria.. we need to be quick..”
“Well, it's not easy. And we'll need more help, we aren't enough.” Misty said “LJ, help me contacting all our allies, we'll need all the help we can get! General Aria, am I authorized to get my plan going?”
Aria was silent for a minute, it was obvious she was thinking. She walked around the room looking everywhere, and then she looked at you. She looked at your eyes, and you knew that would be the point where she decided what to do.
“Do it.” Was all Aria said. LJ pressed a button in the screen and a big help message was send throughout the galaxy. You asked Misty what her plan was and she told you she would tell you when Banana was awake. You go to your room but when you get there you start getting dissy. You close your eyes for a bit and some flasing lights start appearing. You start hearing voices, but they aren't just any voices. You reconize this voices. You concentrate and you are able to see what's happening. You see your siblings, trapped in a cage. They look frightened. And suddenly you pass out.
“(y/n)! Can you hear us?!” LJ screams as Misty kneels close to you.
“Yeah… What happened?” You asked as you stand up and sit in your bed
“We entered the room and you were in the floor…” General Aria says “Do you remember anything of what happened?”
“No..” You say and suddenly everything comes back. “Aria.. we need to be quick..”
- AnuMaria
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Sci-Fi Cabin's Collaborative Story - SWC November 2021
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- qhostsonq
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Sci-Fi Cabin's Collaborative Story - SWC November 2021
(use this post instead of the one above. make sure the storylines are still in tune with the backstories of each character!)
After Misty tells us the plan, LJ rushes us to the control room.
“Part 1 of my plan: gather the allies,” Misty proudly explains.
“Horror, Fairy Tales, Dystopian, Historical Fiction, and Fanfiction.” LJ says, beaming with pride.
After everyone had filed into the cramped room, you could see everyone. They seemed to be from different planets and the different trios (and duos) all had matching clothes.
“Alright, troops. Let's do this.” Aria commands.
Banana Boss had finally awoken, and while Misty explained the plan to her, and you went back to your room, still feeling dizzy. Aria was in the control room explaining everything to the allies, and LJ was off, setting up Part 2 of Lieutenant Misty's plan. You had no time for rest before, and soon you fell into sleep.
A blaring siren wakes you, and you race to the main room, and there you find Banana and some others, all frantically searching for something.
“What is it?” you ask, panicked.
“The Helliopes…they've destroyed another planet.” the spy explains to you. “We're trying to contact our allies there, but they're not responding.”
After Misty tells us the plan, LJ rushes us to the control room.
“Part 1 of my plan: gather the allies,” Misty proudly explains.
“Horror, Fairy Tales, Dystopian, Historical Fiction, and Fanfiction.” LJ says, beaming with pride.
After everyone had filed into the cramped room, you could see everyone. They seemed to be from different planets and the different trios (and duos) all had matching clothes.
“Alright, troops. Let's do this.” Aria commands.
Banana Boss had finally awoken, and while Misty explained the plan to her, and you went back to your room, still feeling dizzy. Aria was in the control room explaining everything to the allies, and LJ was off, setting up Part 2 of Lieutenant Misty's plan. You had no time for rest before, and soon you fell into sleep.
A blaring siren wakes you, and you race to the main room, and there you find Banana and some others, all frantically searching for something.
“What is it?” you ask, panicked.
“The Helliopes…they've destroyed another planet.” the spy explains to you. “We're trying to contact our allies there, but they're not responding.”
Last edited by qhostsonq (Nov. 3, 2021 03:13:30)
- -PeachiiStxr-
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Sci-Fi Cabin's Collaborative Story - SWC November 2021
(Note to whoever continues this discussion: Please ignore the post @AnuMaria did and continue from @qhostsonq's post. Why? Because @AnuMaria's post did not make sense to the story, it did not relate. In an earlier post I did, I said Banana's backstory, and I said that Banana's parents had died when she was 12. Also, when the main character looked at the projection showing her family, it did not include Banana. There was just a mistake, so please continue from @qhostsonq. Thanks!)
Last edited by -PeachiiStxr- (Nov. 3, 2021 03:36:29)
- yishujia
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Sci-Fi Cabin's Collaborative Story - SWC November 2021
(Lia must admit that she's extremely confused so she apologizes if she gets something wrong, also: this poor main character :')
Now that you look closely, you can see the resemblance in Banana's relaxed features. But you've never seen her before. Nothing is making sense. Your mind is a time warp, muddled and confused. The past few days have been hectic; had it really only been Friday when you were just a dehydrated soul stalking the dusty streets?
“How do you know that she's my sister?” you ask, turning to the ethereal creatures.
“DNA tests,” Misty shrugs, “and you just have similar features, I guess.”
“Why are the Helliopes coming after my family?” I blurt out. Aria, LJ, and Misty eye each other nervously.
“Ah- well, you see-” General Aria begins in her high, musical voice, “we shouldn't be telling you this, but your family is-”
Now that you look closely, you can see the resemblance in Banana's relaxed features. But you've never seen her before. Nothing is making sense. Your mind is a time warp, muddled and confused. The past few days have been hectic; had it really only been Friday when you were just a dehydrated soul stalking the dusty streets?
“How do you know that she's my sister?” you ask, turning to the ethereal creatures.
“DNA tests,” Misty shrugs, “and you just have similar features, I guess.”
“Why are the Helliopes coming after my family?” I blurt out. Aria, LJ, and Misty eye each other nervously.
“Ah- well, you see-” General Aria begins in her high, musical voice, “we shouldn't be telling you this, but your family is-”
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- clarem12
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Sci-Fi Cabin's Collaborative Story - SWC November 2021
You tremble a little. Destroyed a planet. An entire planet. You knew the Helliopes were bad but destroying another planet was something you never expected. So many innocent lives and so many of our allies. You feel a cold shiver run down your spine.
“Is there anything we can do about it?” you ask, trying to sound as fearless as possible. “Not much About the planet being destroyed but we can try to find the survivors, or at least the ones that are our allies” Misty says calmly. “We need to leave now though or things might be too dangerous for us to intervene” someone adds through the chaos. You nod to signify that you understand.
“Is there anything we can do about it?” you ask, trying to sound as fearless as possible. “Not much About the planet being destroyed but we can try to find the survivors, or at least the ones that are our allies” Misty says calmly. “We need to leave now though or things might be too dangerous for us to intervene” someone adds through the chaos. You nod to signify that you understand.
- RLove10
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Sci-Fi Cabin's Collaborative Story - SWC November 2021
Everyone is at chaos, General Aria trying to put some order and you know that you won't be of much help unless you know what to do. So you go over to your room and find a closet with weapons. You were surprised you hadn't find that before, it was pretty visible. You go through the weapons, seeing things you knew what were and others that were completely new. You know everyone is busy so you take one of the space guns and start acting as if you were in a battle. It was pretty fun until you notice Banana is next to the door.
“Banana!” You exclaim embarrased, as you accidently drop the gun. “How much time have you been there?”
“Not long.” she answers softly, but her face says otherwise. “But, you shouldn't play with that. It's pretty dangerous.”
“Okay, thanks. By the way, why didn't I see this closet before?”
“This closests only appear when needed, and we need them now.” Misty says as she entered your room. “Banana, (y/n). Aria requests to see you in the main room.”
“Okay, thanks Misty.” you say as you head over to the main room where Aria is waiting for you.
You see her talking with the allies and when you enter she looks at you. “(y/n), we need your help”
“Banana!” You exclaim embarrased, as you accidently drop the gun. “How much time have you been there?”
“Not long.” she answers softly, but her face says otherwise. “But, you shouldn't play with that. It's pretty dangerous.”
“Okay, thanks. By the way, why didn't I see this closet before?”
“This closests only appear when needed, and we need them now.” Misty says as she entered your room. “Banana, (y/n). Aria requests to see you in the main room.”
“Okay, thanks Misty.” you say as you head over to the main room where Aria is waiting for you.
You see her talking with the allies and when you enter she looks at you. “(y/n), we need your help”
- Teeny_Tiny_Tyrant
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Sci-Fi Cabin's Collaborative Story - SWC November 2021
You look up at the Captain,
“What do you need of me?” as your eyes gleam with anticipation as you recall something Captain Aria had said before;
“The Helliopes always have bad intentions. And it's our job to stop them. They tend to be the source of all the chaos on other planets, so it would be amazing to wipe them out for good,”
She had pretty much implied genocide, and after what the Helliopes had done to that planet, you didn’t mind all that much.
“We have the location in coordinates of the Helliope’s mother ship and home planet,” Aria began “We’d need you to join a team of around a dozen soldiers who would board the mothership disguised as weapons dealers of some sort to try to get a layout of their ship. If you survive long enough to find your way to the central control panel, you can send a transmission from their ship to let us know the mission was a success,”
“Sounds risky…” Banana worried aloud,
“But if it worked we could take them out from the inside! Our decision now is whether or not we wanna risk it for the biscuit,” you stated,
“What does that even mean?” Banana asked, “There are no biscuits…” she had such a puzzled look on her face.
“It’s an earth saying,” You say, still considering Aria’s plan in the back of your mind.
“What do you need of me?” as your eyes gleam with anticipation as you recall something Captain Aria had said before;
“The Helliopes always have bad intentions. And it's our job to stop them. They tend to be the source of all the chaos on other planets, so it would be amazing to wipe them out for good,”
She had pretty much implied genocide, and after what the Helliopes had done to that planet, you didn’t mind all that much.
“We have the location in coordinates of the Helliope’s mother ship and home planet,” Aria began “We’d need you to join a team of around a dozen soldiers who would board the mothership disguised as weapons dealers of some sort to try to get a layout of their ship. If you survive long enough to find your way to the central control panel, you can send a transmission from their ship to let us know the mission was a success,”
“Sounds risky…” Banana worried aloud,
“But if it worked we could take them out from the inside! Our decision now is whether or not we wanna risk it for the biscuit,” you stated,
“What does that even mean?” Banana asked, “There are no biscuits…” she had such a puzzled look on her face.
“It’s an earth saying,” You say, still considering Aria’s plan in the back of your mind.
- -RainiiStxr-
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Sci-Fi Cabin's Collaborative Story - SWC November 2021
“Ah,” Banana says, a slight smile on her face. “I see. Earthlings can be quite adorably strange sometimes, can’t they?”
You don’t know whether or not to be offended or complimented, so you smile. “Anyways,” you say, turning back to Captain Aria. “I know the plan sounds risky, but we can’t continue to play everything safe. Look what’s happening to people!” you take a deep breath, absorbing what you’re about to say. “So… I’m in.”
Banana gives Misty and Aria looks you can’t quite read, and a silence stretches on for so long that you think they might not even respond. But finally, Misty speaks. “I… can’t believe I’m saying this, but this could be a good play.” she continues talking, even when Banana opens her mouth to object. “I know how much we could lose by doing this, but… we have to look at the greater scheme of things. This could be so much better in the long run. After all, we’ve already lost so much by trying to make safe, small plays. It’s time to go big.” she turns to you, a determined look on her face. “What I’m saying is, I approve.”
Captain Aria gives a tight smile. “When I concocted this plan, I was very hesitant—and I still am. But like Lieutenant Misty said, it’s time to go big. No more small plays. No more holding back. None of that. We need to do this now, or all of mankind could be doomed.” she turns to Banana, giving her a small smile. “I’m not going to pressure you into agreeing with this plan, Banana, but please. Consider it. Consider what it could do for everything.”
Banana bites her lip and by the look on her face you’re afraid she’ll say no. But she steps forwards and takes your shaking hands in her warm ones, giving you a kind look. “What do you want, (insert main character’s name here)?”
You don’t expect that question. Ever since you’ve gotten there, everything’d seemed so out of your control. So when Banana asks you, you suck in a breath and close your eyes. “I… don’t know. But I do know that I want to help my people like how you’re all helping me. So whatever that decision may be—whether it’s doing this plan or not—I want to make sure that it’s going to work for the better of my people.” You open your eyes, and everyone looks at you proudly.
“I think you’ve made the right decision,” Banana says softly. She nods to Aria. “Let’s do it.”
You don’t know whether or not to be offended or complimented, so you smile. “Anyways,” you say, turning back to Captain Aria. “I know the plan sounds risky, but we can’t continue to play everything safe. Look what’s happening to people!” you take a deep breath, absorbing what you’re about to say. “So… I’m in.”
Banana gives Misty and Aria looks you can’t quite read, and a silence stretches on for so long that you think they might not even respond. But finally, Misty speaks. “I… can’t believe I’m saying this, but this could be a good play.” she continues talking, even when Banana opens her mouth to object. “I know how much we could lose by doing this, but… we have to look at the greater scheme of things. This could be so much better in the long run. After all, we’ve already lost so much by trying to make safe, small plays. It’s time to go big.” she turns to you, a determined look on her face. “What I’m saying is, I approve.”
Captain Aria gives a tight smile. “When I concocted this plan, I was very hesitant—and I still am. But like Lieutenant Misty said, it’s time to go big. No more small plays. No more holding back. None of that. We need to do this now, or all of mankind could be doomed.” she turns to Banana, giving her a small smile. “I’m not going to pressure you into agreeing with this plan, Banana, but please. Consider it. Consider what it could do for everything.”
Banana bites her lip and by the look on her face you’re afraid she’ll say no. But she steps forwards and takes your shaking hands in her warm ones, giving you a kind look. “What do you want, (insert main character’s name here)?”
You don’t expect that question. Ever since you’ve gotten there, everything’d seemed so out of your control. So when Banana asks you, you suck in a breath and close your eyes. “I… don’t know. But I do know that I want to help my people like how you’re all helping me. So whatever that decision may be—whether it’s doing this plan or not—I want to make sure that it’s going to work for the better of my people.” You open your eyes, and everyone looks at you proudly.
“I think you’ve made the right decision,” Banana says softly. She nods to Aria. “Let’s do it.”
- Forevernevermore
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Sci-Fi Cabin's Collaborative Story - SWC November 2021
Aria's face lights up like a lamp. She studies you top to bottom. “Hmm. Right. Let's get started. To stop the Helliopes, we'll need certain items on certain planets that only certain creatures can go to. Except, even if you're only a measly Earthling,” you blush at the word measly. “We don't need to find those creatures because you're from Earth and Earth is an exceptional planet, even if it's facing doom,” Aria said. “Follow me, (y/n), Banana. No dilly-dally. We need to stop the Helliopes as fast as possible.”
“Misty! Set the ship's course to Sozcom. LJ, stop eating that choco-mint ice-cream and explain what we need to (y/n). Banana, check if the External Tank's fuel is enough for 91108 kilometers,” Aria said. LJ leads you into the Map Room, as labled on the metal door. In the back of the room there was a electric powered… portal? You didn't know.
“So, we are now going to visit Sozcom, a planet of Crystal Forests. We'll need those crystals to power the portal at the back of this Map Room. Said Lieutenant LJ. ”Next, we'll visit Pulvish, a planet of ice. The Helliopes hate cold stuff so uh-huh. After that, to planet Cecerios. Cecerios is also a cold place but it has more inhabitants then Pulvish so there's a high chance they might be selling what Earthlings might call ‘fridge’. To keep the ice of course. Any questions?“ Your head spins with the whole lot of information. ”Umm… Let me take this all in first. So we're going to Sozcom, then uhh Pulvish and- umm Cece-something?“ You say. ”Cecerios,“ corrected Lieutenant LJ. ”To buy something what you Earthlings call ‘fridge’.“ After a few moments, you nod your head slowly. ”Okay! I'll inform General Aria that you understand everything alright? Everything.“
”Uh yes,“ you respond.
”Alright! See you at Sozcom!“ LJ walks away while muttering to herself ”I wonder if my choco-mint ice-cream is melting…"
“Misty! Set the ship's course to Sozcom. LJ, stop eating that choco-mint ice-cream and explain what we need to (y/n). Banana, check if the External Tank's fuel is enough for 91108 kilometers,” Aria said. LJ leads you into the Map Room, as labled on the metal door. In the back of the room there was a electric powered… portal? You didn't know.
“So, we are now going to visit Sozcom, a planet of Crystal Forests. We'll need those crystals to power the portal at the back of this Map Room. Said Lieutenant LJ. ”Next, we'll visit Pulvish, a planet of ice. The Helliopes hate cold stuff so uh-huh. After that, to planet Cecerios. Cecerios is also a cold place but it has more inhabitants then Pulvish so there's a high chance they might be selling what Earthlings might call ‘fridge’. To keep the ice of course. Any questions?“ Your head spins with the whole lot of information. ”Umm… Let me take this all in first. So we're going to Sozcom, then uhh Pulvish and- umm Cece-something?“ You say. ”Cecerios,“ corrected Lieutenant LJ. ”To buy something what you Earthlings call ‘fridge’.“ After a few moments, you nod your head slowly. ”Okay! I'll inform General Aria that you understand everything alright? Everything.“
”Uh yes,“ you respond.
”Alright! See you at Sozcom!“ LJ walks away while muttering to herself ”I wonder if my choco-mint ice-cream is melting…"
- qhostsonq
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Sci-Fi Cabin's Collaborative Story - SWC November 2021
(wakey wakey forum :P)
As the ship turns, a photo slips out of Banana's grip. You bend over to pick it up for her, and find a picture of a young man and woman, holding hands while carrying a baby. Who are these people? you wonder, and sadly realize that it must be her parents and her while she was very young.
“Here,” you say, holding out the small photo with a sad smile.
“Oh- thanks.” she replies, carefully folding it and putting it in a pocket.
“If you don't mind me asking, who was in that photo?” You ask, nervousness gripping my every word. What if she lashes out at me for asking? She was superhuman after all, and had powers that could most definitely hurt me.
She turns away, and you begin to get up from my chair to go to my room, when she speaks.
“My parents, they-”
As the ship turns, a photo slips out of Banana's grip. You bend over to pick it up for her, and find a picture of a young man and woman, holding hands while carrying a baby. Who are these people? you wonder, and sadly realize that it must be her parents and her while she was very young.
“Here,” you say, holding out the small photo with a sad smile.
“Oh- thanks.” she replies, carefully folding it and putting it in a pocket.
“If you don't mind me asking, who was in that photo?” You ask, nervousness gripping my every word. What if she lashes out at me for asking? She was superhuman after all, and had powers that could most definitely hurt me.
She turns away, and you begin to get up from my chair to go to my room, when she speaks.
“My parents, they-”
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- Forevernevermore
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You hold your breath. Too afraid too hear what would come out? You don't know.
"They didn't actually die- the Helliopes kidnapped them. Or parent-napped if you prefer,“ she laughed painfully at the joke. ”That's partially why I agreed to help the General in her mission."
Oh. You weren't expecting that. Then an idea popped into your mind. You decide to ask the general's backstory, hoping she wouldn't release a furnace of fury at you.
"They didn't actually die- the Helliopes kidnapped them. Or parent-napped if you prefer,“ she laughed painfully at the joke. ”That's partially why I agreed to help the General in her mission."
Oh. You weren't expecting that. Then an idea popped into your mind. You decide to ask the general's backstory, hoping she wouldn't release a furnace of fury at you.
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