PLOT NOTES: (very scattered, working out ideas. I’d like some of your commentary so far.)

NOTE: ALL MY NOTES WILL BE IN ALL CAPS, NOT BECAUSE I’M SHOUTING BUT B/C I’M TOO LAZY TO MESS AROUND W/T THE CNTRL I IN THE DISCUSS PAGES

Sigyn comes from Twilith. *See Fairies and Olympus in Fability World Building

Sigyn is on earth and gets rescued by Locallister and taken to space.

So, In the RP we had the time piece take them back in time on an epic adventure. We should include the elements of character development from that but make the main focus something more simplified and fitting w/t our main plot.

Our main plot is probably going to be Sigyn meets Locallister (LOCALLISTER NEEDS A NEW NAME) and they go to space. Their goal is to get to Twilith where Sigyn has claim to a Raelia b/c she is the daughter of the Seelie. She had been yeeted to earth b/c of a civil war over the Raelia. Only a Fairy carrying the Original Seelie’s magical blood can unlock the vault containing Twilith’s realia and Sigyn is the last of the true line. The person who sent Sigyn to Earth was her mother, and she wanted her to be safe. Locallister had plead with her to keep her safe in Twilith, but she sent her away, which was a good call if you’re only considering the safety of the child. Locallister searched and searched for her. Eventually he finds her and lifts a genetics lock that had been placed on her by shaking her hand while he had a small needle strapped to the inside of his palm.


Sigyn grows wings. Locallister takes her to his ship and starts explaining to her about the war. We need to figure out how to use visual storytelling instead of text-based story telling. Too much dialogue in the word bubbles of a graphic novel makes it hard and not a great read. We need a way to condense their conversation and leave some things to be explained. Sigyn is experiencing this as the reader is. She does not know what beyond Gothel’s villa, so to speak. (*” Beyond Gothel’s villa is a reference to Rapunzel’s Revenge by Ryan North, a great graphic novel. Essentially Rapunzel has to learn about the outside world as we learn about the world. We learn by looking as she learns by looking.)

Locallister’s goal is to get Sigyn to use the realia to stop the war between Twilith and Reality? Kallixia? Olympus?

Anyhoo, Locallister wants Sigyn to burn out the raelia’s power by putting half of Twilith (Or All of Twilith, depending on who exactly is at war) into another world.

This plot is in the works, friends.

Loki’s goal is to get to Sigyn who can get to a Raelia. His plan is to track down a Kallixian sorcerer who escaped the invasion or was imprisoned, get Sigyn to give them the Raelia, and use it to open a portal to rescue the World Tree. The prophecy behind Twilith’s Raelia is that it essentially gives the holder the power to control the boundaries and flow of the worlds, but only for one 10-minute period of time, then it burns out and dies.
I’ll have to write a poem prophecy for it.

Loki has done research by the time the story begins. He intercepts Locallister’s ship and Sigyn is heccin done with not quite knowing what’s going on. She’s in a new world so the reader unravels it as she does.

Sigyn and Loki go on a quest to find the realia for Loki’s purposes. She’s angry at him and they have this moment of tension when he admits to his real purposes for the realia and what happened to his planet and how he was kind of lied to and tricked. Sigyn is strongly willed but kind. Loki is broken and outwardly closed off. NOTE: [We need to figure out what personalities play off each other well romantically in order to flesh out this character development. Loki is sarcastic, reclusive, and introverted. We need someone who will work well with someone like that. ( I feel like he reminds me little bit of a less violent version of Adam, the Duke of Kimberly, from the book Seeking Persephone )

Along the way they meet Hermes. Hermes (Maybe Maui or some other person) essentially has a moral compass of a gameshow wheel and spent his days spreading mythology to the humans. At first, he did this b/c Zeus wanted some of the ancient people to worship Olympians but just kept- doing to for fun. Now we’ve got magazines and comic books and movies and stuff based on the leaks Maui has given us from Fability and Olympus. Most of our legends and stories have basis in Fability and Olympus.

I’ll mix in a few other characters as I flesh up the story. But I ‘ve got part of it in the works, essentially a quest to get a magical object.
When they find the vault that has the realia, they’ll find it empty or the prophecy was a lie or smth. Either there will be nothing there and they’ll have to resort to plan B, or the Raelia will do something awful instead. I’ll have to figure it out, we need to have it all figured out before we make anything so we can lay our plot out carefully w/t small hints, as authors y’all know what I’m talking about lol. These notes are so scattered I’ll have something better soon.

(I keep having the strongest urge to make Sigyn end up w/t not Loki. Not moai, but …. Help me it just feels so obvious and I’m a sucker for FRIENDSHIP what I need to do is work on their character development and tensions better.)


Locallister = Zale Court Fee
Surnames well I think you can put together how they work for the upper class *dies*
For the lower ones they work like ours do.

Something I like to do is to look at graphic novel pages and study the layout. I’ll probably be doing that while working on the plot to make it in a way that can be told in that medium. I go by the motto, “The content dictates form.”

I was very tired when I wrote this

Fability World Building

So world building stuff, work in progress. Gimme your thoughts.

In Fability there are 4 planes of reality, 4 different worlds. The worlds are Reality, Fability, Olympus and Kallixia.
The ships:

Olympian people have ships that break through the walls of reality and allow them to travel through space and the walls. Maybe time?
Fability:

Fability is a magic, mythical reality. Wonderland, Yggdrasil and the other world trees are located in this world. The inhabitants of Fability include fairy folk. Reality used to contain magic, but the fairy folk ascended to Fability with the wizards and mages, taking the magic with them. The people of Fability do not need to be governed by a king or queen. The fairies, giants, elves, and Asgardians coexist peacefully with no reason to fear anything or each other. The world is full of happy endings, elvish princes, princesses, scientists of all creatures, and happy citizens.

Yggdrasil:

Yggdrasil is an inverted tree on top of which Asgard sits.

Fairies:

The fairies resided in the hollow middle of Yggdrasil, Fairyland. The fairies have the unique ability to move throughout the worlds. There are two colonies of fairies, the Pixies who live primarily in the middle of Yggdrasil and only occasionally visit reality, and the Fae who spend most of their time on Earth or Olympus.

The Pixies are small with pointy ears and large eyes. Their skin colors are all different colors of the rainbow. The Pixies all generally have an immense amount of magical power and share a collective sense of wonder and compassion for others. They are the embodiment of harmony, peace, and mercy. The other races that share the world tree benefit from this umbrella of warmth over their heads. It is described as an indescribable warmth that opens your eyes to the pains of other people and can soften even the hardest hearts.

The Fae are human sized and generally have little to know magic, save what gives them the ability to fly. They look like humans save for their large, feathery wings. Their wings are different colors including white, black, and varying shades of purples, reds, or blues. If a Fae exhibits magical ability beyond what it takes to fly, it will usually manifest itself as empathic abilities. The Fae do not radiate warmth and peace like the Pixies do. They are more human and have even fought wars amongst themselves. Most of the Fae are assembled in the outer Sectors of Olympus*see Olympus The Fae’s kingdom is called Twilith.

Twilith:

Population: 39.47 million (39,470,000)


World: Olympus

Twilith is ruled by a queen called a “Seelie”. The Twilith social hierarchy begins with the queen at the top. Below the queen is the Court. The Court is made up of the most noble people. The highest level of the government is in this class along with the queen’s family, friends, and people close to them. Below the court is the rest of the nobility and elected government leaders called the Fee. The Fee are usually different from the other classes because empathic abilities tend run in their families. Social status is not contingent upon whether a fae manifests as an empath, however. And there are several rich groups of families that do not carry this trait. It is physically possible for a fae from any class in Twilith to manifest empathic abilities. Many of the Fee are engineers, innovators, inventors, and programmers. The merchants, traders and high-ranking militant officers are next in the hierarchy, known as the Wisp class. The Wisp class is the middle class, and includes an array of engineers, inventors, programmers etc. Beneath them are apprentices, interns, minimum wage workers, and Farmers. This class is known as the Nymphs. The lowest class is called the Unseelie. This class includes the poor, homeless, unemployed, dangerously poor, and criminal population.


To recap, the classes go:

- The Queen
- Court
- The Fee
- Wisp
- Nymphs
- Unseelie

The Wisps make up around 55.3% of the Twilith population. The Court and Fee constitute around 0.03% of the population. The nymphs constitute around 32.7% of the population. The Unseelie make up the remaining 11.97%. The average poverty rate in Twilith as of 2020 is 7.8%.
For reference, on average slightly less that 50% of the US population is usually considered middle class.
Olympus:

Olympus sits in between Reality and Fability. There are some parts of the world based in fairy tale and wonderlust and others in technology and science fiction. Olympus is divided into the main capital, the residential areas, and the businesses. Olympus is unique because unlike in Fability or Reality there are unlimited resources. There are groves of trees called the Hesperides orchards where Ladon trees grow. These immortal trees produce fruit that once harvested can form almost any product or food. The wood from these trees can be used to carve replicators, or little boxes that can produce nearly anything.

The Capital:

The capital of Olympus is called Athens. In the middle of the capital is a large glass building called the Parthenon. It is decorated with white pillars that are speckled with gold flecks. Willow trees decorate the outer courtyard and flowering vines grow over the windows of the building.
The floors of the Parthenon: WIP

The Parthenon has infinite floors, it stops upwards at floor #12, but its basements seem to extend downward into eternity.
It is unknown how the Parthenon came into existence, ask anyone and they’ll say it’s just part of the world, like how the universe exists in Reality there is no telling how exactly it came about. No one has been able to find a bottom, and no one has ventured below the - 600th floor.
Some floors are spaces and others contain rooms. All the floors that have been explored but not furnished have no furniture or objects. The first 120 floors of the basement are currently in use.

- The top floor, the 12th floor, is where the ruler, in this case Poseidon, lives with their family.

- The 11th floor is where parliament meets. Poseidon’s study is also located on this floor.

- The 10th floor is for the Department of Magical Items
- The 9th and 8th floors are home to the Athens Law Enforcement Agency, or the A.L.E.A
- The 8th and 7th floors are the department of finances and distribution of resources
- The 6th and 5th floors and the people’s courts
- The 4th, 3rd and second floors are where more people work
- And the 2nd floor is also just general government stuff (help me)
- the first floor is reception
- Below the first floor is the library, which extends for 32 floors, containing digital and material books and stories from each of the worlds.
- The 33rd through 40th floors contain the courts and justice system.
- The 41st through 70th floors are a buffer between the rest of the building and Tartarus.
- Floors -71 through -120 make up Tartarus.

Olympian government system a WIP, uh monarchy I guess

The Outer Sectors of Olympus:

Imma think of more descriptive world building stuff hold tight this is just to prove I’m working and to beg for your input
There are additional outer sectors called the out-wilds. People don’t usually live out there, Twilith is the only country that hasn’t joined with Olympus because of their unlimited resources. Twilith society is heavily steampunk. Their culture leans heavily on the beliefs of economy. They won’t buy into Olympian golden apples haven’t joined with Athens because they believe in progressing with science fiction and stuff. Twilith believes that they must continue to progress. They’re science fiction-steam punk fairies.

The ancient Magic: (IMPORTANT!)

The Ancient magic protecting Olympus follows very strict rules that mages and scientists have been studying for years. If an Olympian is known to be committing treason, Poseidon can make the ancient magic send them to Tartarus. If the Olympian really is committing treason, then they will be transported to Tartarus and the portion of Olympian power they are using will be cut off and transferred to Poseidon.
Treason is only defined as attacking a population of civilians, committing murder, betraying the country to outside attackers, or starting a war with Twilith or any other country/world unprovoked.

Teleportation is a very tricky thing, and no matter how people try they haven’t been able to crack the puzzle of instantly being able to teleport anywhere without massive machinery that has a very limited range.

Tartarus:

Tartarus is a prison that focuses mainly on rehabilitating prisoners whenever possible. The farther down you go, the more serious the crimes that were committed by the inmates were. There aren’t very many prisoners in Tartarus, which is something Poseidon is very proud of. The lower levels are for traitors, war criminals, and murderers etc. the higher levels contain minimum security prisoners and the highest levels are a juvenile detention.

Asgard:

Before the dawn of humanity, the mages of Atlantis discovered a way to ascend to another realm called Fability. They gathered any willing volunteers and established a colony on the magic spontaneous world tree, Yggdrasil. This colony became Asgard and grew into a civilization. Atlantis eventually sunk into the sea. Most Asgardians have magic, but it’s not that important unless you want to make something of it.

Note: Maybe Loki is very poorly skilled in magic and can hardly do anything with it. It sometimes explodes???? -Mousse

Loki becomes a very gruff personality. He’s not happy he’s not lighthearted he’s not “let’s do a jig and drink a rainbow while the world burns” I think he’s rougher around the edges. He’s sarcastic and keeps to himself, a bit like Mr. Darcy. I’m bad at character building and development. What do you guys think about him? – Mousse

okay!! so Imma start by commenting on the first chunk mk?

gosh, I really like it!! that will work I think, and dw my “outlines” of anything plot-related are sooo scattered and messy yours is a lot better than mine pfft.

yeah about their personalities; not actually sure who that is for Loki haha (but as far as I know, yes that works perfectly!!), I was imagining it’d stay fairly close to the RP personalities we did, but maybe a bit more fleshed out for the new format and we can make any necessary edits to make sure we follow the choices they’d actually make. that story works out very well ack I really like it~

mhm I’ll try and study the comics/graphic novels that we have to make sure it’s laid out as well as it can be (our friend will help, she’ll be sketching with us and stuff, and we can edit her sketches tho if we need to tho) they’re all avatar ones hehe-

can you give us a list of all the different characters and their main personality traits you have planned so we can work on designs?

also I think they maybe should be at war with Kallixia if possible just to tie it into the other storylines we’ve had in mind but we ofc don’t have to ^^

okay on to the next one I’ll give you my thoughts on that one sec

oh also btw I’m fine with them being friends so long as we leave things open for their relationship to change? if that makes any sense at all haha

ooh I love all the stuff about the fairies!! all your world building so far sounds pretty great. nothing much to comment on there. :>

yeah that’d work!! we were imagining he’d be able to slightly manipulate senses? like touch and sight and such. maybe there’s only one that he’s good at or something? I think he can master his ability eventually but maybe he isn’t balanced or at peace enough at first to stem into the magic? :0 kinda like Zuko ngl so maybe not haha. but I do think it could work, depending on what you think??

yeah Loki keeps to himself, I think Mr. Darcy works as a sort of base for his personality. he really likes plants as we can all never forget. I think maybe he’s just trying to figure everything with the raelia and asgard out and that kind of blinds him to his own detachment and mental instability if that makes sense.

yep. I love our mythology based world I think we're gonna' end up w/t romance b/c if we don't my mother would kill me, she heard me talking about them and she's attached. I'll work on the characters and plot and stuff. I'll have more stuff for you on Tuesday.

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violent-measures wrote:

ooh I love all the stuff about the fairies!! all your world building so far sounds pretty great. nothing much to comment on there. :>

yeah that’d work!! we were imagining he’d be able to slightly manipulate senses? like touch and sight and such. maybe there’s only one that he’s good at or something? I think he can master his ability eventually but maybe he isn’t balanced or at peace enough at first to stem into the magic? :0 kinda like Zuko ngl so maybe not haha. but I do think it could work, depending on what you think??

yeah Loki keeps to himself, I think Mr. Darcy works as a sort of base for his personality. he really likes plants as we can all never forget. I think maybe he’s just trying to figure everything with the raelia and asgard out and that kind of blinds him to his own detachment and mental instability if that makes sense.

I like your idea of manipulating senses! I think it fits well with imagination and magic stemming from fability. What if in Fability magic governs the world, but in reality it's just a trick. Also Loki's element would probably be sight

More Story Notes, date: 4/10/21
Experimental notes:

“My ancestors were from Atlantis. Then they figured out how to ascend to the world tree.”

“???”

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Worlds:
- Reality
- Fability
- Space Between (Olympus)
- Willins (+Kallixia)

Atlantis was already found my explorers or was a big thing on earth.
A Prologue script that might be nice to use:


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Atlantis, Earth, long, long before what Reality deems to be the age of man:



Ariel tells the people, “Let it be known that I hereby bequeath the throne to my brother, Triton, as I prepare to ascend with my intrepid volunteers to the world tree of Fability, the magic realm. Out branch of Atlantis will begin a new legacy, a legacy that will be called Asgard.”



Ariel: “Do you swear to be merciful, honest, and just? Do you swear to protect this reality, this Earth safe from harm, and protect the magic and wonder to the best of your ability?”

Triton: “I do.”

Nabia: “Then it is done.”



The chant goes like this:

“Iskasme Da se Zemjata, Iskasme Da se Zemjata, Realnost I da Velzeme, Magija, magija, magija! Iskasme, Da se Zemjata, Ikasme!”

Etc.

Mousse’s Note: The mood of this prologue (or chapter one of an issue) would be yellow and gold lit. preferably it would be very powerful and majestic.
6,000 years later, Rexburg Idaho:







Sigyn: “Welcome to McHermie’s, home to the famous mcspell burger, marketed with magic every time, how may I help you?”





Some random scenes that popped into my head for brainstorming purposes:

Loki: “Your imagination is magic.”

Sigyn looks a little confused. “Thanks.”

Lok: “No, your imagination is magic. And so is mine. And magic only trickled in here from Fability.”

Sigyn: “Fability is just a fairy tale, Loki. I’ve been to space.”

Loki: “You’ve been to the space between. The buffer between reality and the other worlds.”

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Sigyn: “
“Magic only comes from the Fability Fability was the home of imagination it was the second plane of existence my ancestors transcended to. You know why I hate Reality? In Fability, in my home, things were clear everyone was nice. But then the magic enters reality.”





Sigyn: “I thought that’s just what magic does…It’s not useful unless you need a nightlight.”



Loki: “Magic is what gives us life. It’s what breathes thoughts and feelings into our minds and without Fability there’s just enough magic left in your world to leave it a twisted mess!”

Dies in I can’t figure out loki’s personality enough to figure out how he talks yet

Loki has a very distinct way of speaking; I should imagine him sounding Australian. He’s quiet. He wants his plants. He’s passionate about his plants. He’s not passionate about mischief. I just got tears in my eyes this chaos I’ve made is beautiful

At one point Loki goes to Hermes; he goes up to him into a shabby parlor above McHermies. The room is fairly large and rectangular. There is not very much natural light. There’s a lot of shabby red velvet decoration. The room contains 2 shabby armchairs and a small sofa. There is a small coffee table. Hermes sits in one of the armchairs. On the sofa sits another figure. Darian. This makes Loki and Sigyn have to sit in awkward positions around each other and makes the scene interesting

. Able to draw scenes like this? Is it even possible? Research different angles in graphic novels? Look at YT videos? Plan out each page w/t thumbnail drawings ?


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Seelie, queen, vault, realia,

Conflict: The realia can only save Twilith or Fability.
Fability is important to save because magic comes from Fability. Without magic, Reality became the twisted mess it did.
Saving Twilith is important because the Fairies don’t want to die.

Note: Hermes is like Darian? IS Hermes sitting w/t Darian? Can we add our heccin Darian? Yes. I do what I want.
DARIAN HECK I LOVE HIM

Darian spreads the legends? Darian and Hermes are friends. Darian and a Fairy?

Main peeps: World Tree (out of game), Darian (Chaotic neutral bean) . Olympus (kind of stupid. Pretty heck?. Loki goes rogue from Olympus after coming from the World tree. Olympus also contains the Egyptian heccs???.) (heccin bottomless pit location I hope they can get lost in the office building.)

The world is pretty wack.

tell 2 stories at once??? Let’s see here. Zillan visits Sigyn at Mc. Hermes and leaves. He goes back to Twilith. Twilith is in a war with Olympus. His plan is to split Olympus and Twilith and make Twilith the new Fability. Loki wants to bring back Fability the way it was, his home b/c why don’t you? You don’t b/c A) It’s a little more dangerous B) The fairies need a heccin way out.

What about Poseidon? Is he nice? What about Hecate?

Will be continued. Commentary welcome. Please see my project on Leon1neOlympus concerning my concerns w/t Fability. Mythology is fun but here it feels like an afterthought. Maybe we either need to go all in on the mythology w/t the characters and the personalities, or back out. I'm very attached to our Loki's personality thought.

I've been thinking again, and I feel like I've been straying from IRO. If you wanted, we could still make this an IRO comic based on our rp by just peeling back what I've done instead of creating an entirely new story, b/c I feel like this is what we're doing at this point. So maybe I need to go back to square 1 and quietly combine some of my lore I've made for fability and put it in a story based on our role-play with our role-play character. Unless you guys like where Fability is going, then we can just keep going with this. What do you guys think?

Fability Plot Outline wip


A) The mood of the IRO comics should be fluffy, and comical. We’re adding Darian.



I think that everyone has magic but b/c Fability is gone all they can do w/t it is make little sparkles?


Lore bit:

To get to Olympus or another world, you need to pass through some portals in space. There are toll booths and if you don't pay the toll and go through a portal anyway, the toll trolls come after you…. I made some concept sketches


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Zillain replaces locallister in this story, and he's kind of mischevious, and weird. I have some beta exchanges that we could make it like that, and some concepts for the story:

Exposition, Poppy is in a wood cabin on vacation with her family. A few panels with her playing with her niece, nephew, sibling (Klyde is one of them, of course) And parents. Then night. She is awakened by strange noises in the night. She gets up and goes down to the kitchen and find Locallister. Locallister lifts the spell on her and takes her in his rocket ship to the portal. She doesn’t want to go and takes the controls and tries to fly the ship away. They end up in the wrong portal and end up on Olympus.

I think that Zillain wouldn't be able to make Sigyn a fairy until they went to Twilith


Sigyn: What are those?!


Zillain: Toll trolls! They make sure people pay the toll for using the portal. They shouldn’t’ve gotten here so fast- someone else must’ve ticked them off too!

*Shows Loki and Apollo fighting some toll trolls*


Zillain: *sarcasm* Just what we need. an Olympian. Some of them believe themselves to be gods, the rest are-


Sigyn: wot


Apollo: Look- a fairy!



Loki: oh no. *sarcasm* Zillain, just what we need.


Zillain: (flying up whilst battling a toll troll) Don’t take that tone w/t me, I have excellent hearing!


Loki: Why are you even here? You’re not supposed to be here! *jumps up on a rock, next to Sigyn, toll trolls beneath him, accidentally gets almost to close to her*


*Sigyn releases a burst of color and light that does nothing.*


Loki: Who is this? Is this a human?


Apollo: Zillain, you can’t go to earth! You can't talk to humans and you certainly can't steal them!"


Zillain: Why would you assume I stole her?!?


Apollo: I’m sorry, I apologize for assuming the worst.


Sigyn: He stole me. -_-


Zillain: um, you came willingly!


Apollo: Zillain!


Loki: *fighting off more toll trolls*


I feel like it would simplify things if we gave Zillain a chaotic energy. He kinda' just assumed Poppy would love to go to Twilith and learn her real name is Sigyn and be queen of the fairies. Fairies can be like that sometimes.

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I think we can cut out the middleman w/t Sylvia meeting MS to simplify the story. We can just have Hecate tell MS About a time machine. I made a little outline I'm working on creating and filling out w/t plot points: (I'd like to hear all your ideas and feedback.)

Part 1:



• Exposition
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• What do we learn?
  Poppy is a redhead who lives w/t her family
  
   She is at a log cabin in a forest somewhere
  
   Humans can use magic but all it does is make little sparkles
  
   ?Humans know fairies exist? Olympians? ?

• Poppy Meets Zillain
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• What do we learn?
   Zillain is a fairy with big green light green wings
  
   chaotic Leprechaun, Irish Fae energy
  
   Zillain knocks Poppy out and carries her to his ship?
  
   He asks Poppy to come see his space ship?
  
  

• Zillain takes Poppy to his ship
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• What do we learn?
   Poppy is actually a fairy named Sigyn
  
   Fairies can’t use magic except for little bursts of light
  
   Sigyn is the daughter of Sigyn Seelie I, she is Sigyn Seelie the II
  
   Poppy doesn’t want to suddenly change her name to Sigyn
  
  

• Probably doesn’t find out about Elstone yet?

• Maybe there’s a powerful object called the Elstone only Sigyn can access that’s on Twilith, and will be important later when it comes to Hecate making the Kallixians return and the gang restoring Fability

• Elstone was used by Zeus and given to the fairies after the war.

• The fairies had a civil war over it and after it the queen yeeted Sigyn to earth to protect her

• After the queen died Sigyn remained the only key to the Elstone

• Zillain wants said Elstone


o Ight so Zillain is super chaotic and either super good and nice and a cinnamon roll or not a nice man 〈(•ˇ‿ˇ•)-→
 Zillain expected Poppy to be eager to step into her power




• Zillain: “I just kind of assumed you’d love to be queen of Twilith, step into your power, respected, undisputed, be exalted as the end to the epic quest that has been my only reason for living for 20 years”

• Zillain: “We could move your- f-f-fam-“
• Sigyn: “It’s called “Family!”
• Zillain: “Ah yes! Family up there

ahh yeah I love that!! I like the energy it has uwu tho I think we should transition to a little heavier feel in the middle just because of Loki’s story (which we’re keeping somewhat similar right?) it doesn’t fit that feel as much?? I do want to keep the more playfulness at least at the beginning tho!!

yep! yeah, we should keep it really playful until we have this serious moment when we reveal Loki back story I think that the change in mood will be really effective.