HeroQueenWarrior wrote:

I have an idea: the ending can be a sort of epilogue when we have an older Heather in the Olympics.

Got any questions? A lot of the storyline has been figured out.

ShivBane wrote:

HeroQueenWarrior wrote:

I have an idea: the ending can be a sort of epilogue when we have an older Heather in the Olympics.

That was Exactly our plan. XD Me and another writer had already decided on that.

Oh lol ok

ShivBane wrote:

HeroQueenWarrior wrote:

I have an idea: the ending can be a sort of epilogue when we have an older Heather in the Olympics.

Got any questions? A lot of the storyline has been figured out.

I have a question: basically could you tell me a bit about Laura and what scenes she appears in? Because I'm thinking about auditioning for her.

HeroQueenWarrior wrote:

ShivBane wrote:

HeroQueenWarrior wrote:

I have an idea: the ending can be a sort of epilogue when we have an older Heather in the Olympics.

Got any questions? A lot of the storyline has been figured out.

I have a question: basically could you tell me a bit about Laura and what scenes she appears in? Because I'm thinking about auditioning for her.

Laura's lilys older sister. She appears in not that many scenes, but is a character who gives advice to the rest of them, and comforts them. She Isn't overprotective of lily, but she's quite caring.

ShivBane wrote:

HeroQueenWarrior wrote:

ShivBane wrote:

HeroQueenWarrior wrote:

I have an idea: the ending can be a sort of epilogue when we have an older Heather in the Olympics.

Got any questions? A lot of the storyline has been figured out.

I have a question: basically could you tell me a bit about Laura and what scenes she appears in? Because I'm thinking about auditioning for her.

Laura's lilys older sister. She appears in not that many scenes, but is a character who gives advice to the rest of them, and comforts them. She Isn't overprotective of lily, but she's quite caring.

Okay

So maybe we should storyboard the series? There are a couple of websites you can use for that.

HeroQueenWarrior wrote:

So maybe we should storyboard the series? There are a couple of websites you can use for that.

That's a brilliant idea! I hope we can find a site that'll let all of us storyboard the same thing, without giving out any personal info.

ShivBane wrote:

HeroQueenWarrior wrote:

So maybe we should storyboard the series? There are a couple of websites you can use for that.

That's a brilliant idea! I hope we can find a site that'll let all of us storyboard the same thing, without giving out any personal info.

Or we could do it on any art website or paper and post them, but either will do.

ShivBane wrote:

ShivBane wrote:

HeroQueenWarrior wrote:

So maybe we should storyboard the series? There are a couple of websites you can use for that.

That's a brilliant idea! I hope we can find a site that'll let all of us storyboard the same thing, without giving out any personal info.

Or we could do it on any art website or paper and post them, but either will do.

I think we should use a website, it will take much longer to storyboard it on paper. Here's one: https://www.storyboardthat.com/storyboard-creator

HeroQueenWarrior wrote:

ShivBane wrote:

ShivBane wrote:

HeroQueenWarrior wrote:

So maybe we should storyboard the series? There are a couple of websites you can use for that.

That's a brilliant idea! I hope we can find a site that'll let all of us storyboard the same thing, without giving out any personal info.

Or we could do it on any art website or paper and post them, but either will do.

I think we should use a website, it will take much longer to storyboard it on paper. Here's one: https://www.storyboardthat.com/storyboard-creator

Awesome! Thank you so much! We'll probably use it!

ShivBane wrote:

HeroQueenWarrior wrote:

ShivBane wrote:

ShivBane wrote:

HeroQueenWarrior wrote:

So maybe we should storyboard the series? There are a couple of websites you can use for that.

That's a brilliant idea! I hope we can find a site that'll let all of us storyboard the same thing, without giving out any personal info.

Or we could do it on any art website or paper and post them, but either will do.

I think we should use a website, it will take much longer to storyboard it on paper. Here's one: https://www.storyboardthat.com/storyboard-creator

Awesome! Thank you so much! We'll probably use it!

Np!

Hey storywriters! We'll be writing the scripts while the characters, backgrounds etc. are being made, but we will also be writing a summary of the entire story. To figure out the story. This way we only have to write 2 or the episode script before, instead of writing all 20-ish.

ShivBane wrote:

Hey storywriters! We'll be writing the scripts while the characters, backgrounds etc. are being made, but we will also be writing a summary of the entire story. To figure out the story. This way we only have to write 2 or the episode script before, instead of writing all 20-ish.

Okay! Can you share the script so far?

HeroQueenWarrior wrote:

ShivBane wrote:

Hey storywriters! We'll be writing the scripts while the characters, backgrounds etc. are being made, but we will also be writing a summary of the entire story. To figure out the story. This way we only have to write 2 or the episode script before, instead of writing all 20-ish.

Okay! Can you share the script so far?

Mmm…. sure, It's only a few paragraphs though.

Section B – Storylines and Summaries.

Information about the section – In this section you will learn about most of the storyline. Further discussion will happen in section C.

Heather starts out a normal girl, with abnormal skills, and is a ‘cool’ kid, but goes into her shell after her father’s disappearance. Once she moves to a new city, she isn’t exactly popular.
On her first day, Heather gets off to a bad start when she starts her homework right at the end of class, as she wants to go check out the basketball court in the school. The mean teacher spots her and gives the class extra homework saying something like the following – “If Heather’s almost done when she’s new here, surely my old students can do more?”
Popular athlete Rebecca turns the class against her, as she knows that Heather is destined to be the new basketball captain, as she’s played against her in an inter-state contest.

Lily sits behind her, while Evan sits next to her. They switch seats at one point.
Heather first interacts with Lily and Evan when Class is dismissed. Lily comes up to Heather with Evan and says something similar “Hey, don’t worry, she’s like that to everyone. You’re Heather, right? I’m Lily, and this is Evan. I’ll take you to the locker room.” Heather – “Thanks, but I already know where it is. I had to dump all my stuff somewhere, right?” ‘giggle’ “I miiiiight need to clean it up” She says as she opens her locker and everything falls out. They both giggle (Evan left somewhere in the beginning)
Transition to next scene

Heather opens a door, inside, you can see the basketball court. Heather walks in and looks around. The room is portrayed as very big. Heather walks into the room, and a tall girl walks up to her and says, “you new? Tryouts are tomorrow. Captain position for the under 15 team is open. Hopefully you'll be some good. ” The girl leaves the room. “Well I sure hope that isn't the captain. She's got an attitude alright” Heather leaves room.
Heather rollerblades home.
Next scene: Heather is sitting in her room after a long and confusing day. The phone rings, it's an unknown number. Heather picks it up. “Hello?” There is a lot of background noise. “Heather?” Someone says, “Heather is that you?” Heather pauses, nods, realizes the person can't see her and says yes “Heather liste-” there's a loud crash “I'm at-” another crash and lots of static. “Dad?” asks Heather tentatively. There's no response, the phone cuts off abruptly and we end at a cliffhanger (this part to be edited).

This is the gist of episode 1, we will be moving on to episode 2 now.

“Dad?” Heather looks at the phone with a confused look. The phone rings again. “Heather?” “Dad?” “I’m alright, don’t worry too much (Shaky) I’m being held somewhere on a hill, I’ll tell you more later, save the number as something inconspi-brrrrrrr. (Fast) Phone cuts.
Heather sits in bed. “Why me?” “What did I do to deserve this?” Buries head in hands. Ding-dong! Doorbell rings. “Heather! A umm…. Classmate is here?” Heather - “Ummm… who….?” says heather getting out of bed and wiping her tears. “Hi, It’s me…” Lily says softly, “Can i come in?” Lily says peeking in. Heather - “Yeah, I mean, sure!” Says Heather wiping her face to hide all signs of crying.

“So… You’re new, and I wanted to get to know you, and you seemed like an interesting person… and….” “Wait.” Heather says. “Is this about the history test we have? Do you want to tell me something?” Lily - “No! Why would you think that! Ugh…. fine, how do you know?” Heather - “Did you seriously think you could hide that giant book behind you (chuckle) That thing is huge!” “You know, you seemed like a nice person, so i thought you might agree to help me? I don’t get how knowing every bit of the hieroglyphics will ever help me” -lily. “Neither do I. Maybe taxes are paid that way?” The girls laugh. After that there’s a time lapse. Just for a second or two showing that they had a fun evening, laughing and learning.

Skip to the next scene.

Heather standing at the door waiting to close it. Lily expresses that she had a great time, and leaves. Heather shuts the door behind her, and smiles. Mom pops out and says “Well, at least you’ll do well in your first test.” Heather rolls her eyes “Yeah mom, ‘course I will, I always do.” Evil grin.

ShivBane wrote:

Section B – Storylines and Summaries.

Information about the section – In this section you will learn about most of the storyline. Further discussion will happen in section C.

Heather starts out a normal girl, with abnormal skills, and is a ‘cool’ kid, but goes into her shell after her father’s disappearance. Once she moves to a new city, she isn’t exactly popular.
On her first day, Heather gets off to a bad start when she starts her homework right at the end of class, as she wants to go check out the basketball court in the school. The mean teacher spots her and gives the class extra homework saying something like the following – “If Heather’s almost done when she’s new here, surely my old students can do more?”
Popular athlete Rebecca turns the class against her, as she knows that Heather is destined to be the new basketball captain, as she’s played against her in an inter-state contest.

Lily sits behind her, while Evan sits next to her. They switch seats at one point.
Heather first interacts with Lily and Evan when Class is dismissed. Lily comes up to Heather with Evan and says something similar “Hey, don’t worry, she’s like that to everyone. You’re Heather, right? I’m Lily, and this is Evan. I’ll take you to the locker room.” Heather – “Thanks, but I already know where it is. I had to dump all my stuff somewhere, right?” ‘giggle’ “I miiiiight need to clean it up” She says as she opens her locker and everything falls out. They both giggle (Evan left somewhere in the beginning)
Transition to next scene

Heather opens a door, inside, you can see the basketball court. Heather walks in and looks around. The room is portrayed as very big. Heather walks into the room, and a tall girl walks up to her and says, “you new? Tryouts are tomorrow. Captain position for the under 15 team is open. Hopefully you'll be some good. ” The girl leaves the room. “Well I sure hope that isn't the captain. She's got an attitude alright” Heather leaves room.
Heather rollerblades home.
Next scene: Heather is sitting in her room after a long and confusing day. The phone rings, it's an unknown number. Heather picks it up. “Hello?” There is a lot of background noise. “Heather?” Someone says, “Heather is that you?” Heather pauses, nods, realizes the person can't see her and says yes “Heather liste-” there's a loud crash “I'm at-” another crash and lots of static. “Dad?” asks Heather tentatively. There's no response, the phone cuts off abruptly and we end at a cliffhanger (this part to be edited).

This is the gist of episode 1, we will be moving on to episode 2 now.

“Dad?” Heather looks at the phone with a confused look. The phone rings again. “Heather?” “Dad?” “I’m alright, don’t worry too much (Shaky) I’m being held somewhere on a hill, I’ll tell you more later, save the number as something inconspi-brrrrrrr. (Fast) Phone cuts.
Heather sits in bed. “Why me?” “What did I do to deserve this?” Buries head in hands. Ding-dong! Doorbell rings. “Heather! A umm…. Classmate is here?” Heather - “Ummm… who….?” says heather getting out of bed and wiping her tears. “Hi, It’s me…” Lily says softly, “Can i come in?” Lily says peeking in. Heather - “Yeah, I mean, sure!” Says Heather wiping her face to hide all signs of crying.

“So… You’re new, and I wanted to get to know you, and you seemed like an interesting person… and….” “Wait.” Heather says. “Is this about the history test we have? Do you want to tell me something?” Lily - “No! Why would you think that! Ugh…. fine, how do you know?” Heather - “Did you seriously think you could hide that giant book behind you (chuckle) That thing is huge!” “You know, you seemed like a nice person, so i thought you might agree to help me? I don’t get how knowing every bit of the hieroglyphics will ever help me” -lily. “Neither do I. Maybe taxes are paid that way?” The girls laugh. After that there’s a time lapse. Just for a second or two showing that they had a fun evening, laughing and learning.

Skip to the next scene.

Heather standing at the door waiting to close it. Lily expresses that she had a great time, and leaves. Heather shuts the door behind her, and smiles. Mom pops out and says “Well, at least you’ll do well in your first test.” Heather rolls her eyes “Yeah mom, ‘course I will, I always do.” Evil grin.

Okay, nice! I'm assuming that Laura appears in a later episode?

HeroQueenWarrior wrote:

Okay, nice! I'm assuming that Laura appears in a later episode?
Yes, Laura is a smaller character.

HeroQueenWarrior wrote:

Okay, nice! I'm assuming that Laura appears in a later episode?

Yes, Laura is a smaller character.

ShivBane wrote:

HeroQueenWarrior wrote:

Okay, nice! I'm assuming that Laura appears in a later episode?

Yes, Laura is a smaller character.


Okay, are auditions for her still *?